Liar Liar
As the story starts, we find out Ross has a double. He’s already lied about his eyes. He says they are blue but their gray. Gray does not look remotely like blue. Ross is at school and Cindy is demanding to know where he’s been. He was supposed to meet her at Urban Outfitters. So he starts telling lie after lie. First, he says his tennis instructor hurt his hand. S Then he says his dog got sick and he had to take him to the vet. Cindy sees through all this bs and reminds him that he’s supposed to go with her to Max’s pool party. Another girl Sherma asks if she should meet him there or does he want to meet her there. He says he’ll meet her there (He forgot he asked her to). He’s late and has to lie to the teacher about helping another teacher return some books to the library. The teacher asks him to share his essay but he got distracted by wrestling on TV. He tells her he wrote it but there was an electrical blowout and his printer blew up. He’ll have a new one tomorrow tho. She tells him if he keeps it up he’ll fail the course.
Some guys ask Ross if he wants to hang but he has an acting class. Cindy’ asks Ross where he’s going and he lies and says he has to help him mom do some charity work. He doesn’t even know why he tells so many lies. (It should be noted that Ross’s dad is a movie executive and works at a studio). He asks if Ross mailed the envelope he gave him. Earlier we find out it's in his locker, but he plans to mail it the next day. His dad says it’s important and can’t be late or it’s his butt. Ross’s dad goes to the studio to talk to someone (Mort) and leaves Ross in his office. He clearly instructs him not to touch anything. Mort goes berserk if there’s so much as a fingerprint on his stuff. After a while tho, Ross gets bored and sees an Oscar statue. He’s fooling around with it and drops it. The head comes off. Then he hears the footsteps of someone about to enter the room.
When his dad comes in he asks what he’s doing on the floor. He says he dropped his chewing gum but he got it. Then he says he swallowed it. His dad says he heard a crash. Ross says he didn’t hear it. (The Oscar is shoved under the coach). Later that night Ross and his brother Jake have a fight over Ross borrowing Jake’s comic books. Ross says he doesn’t have them but they’re in his bottom desk drawer. His dad tells him to come down and says Mort doesn’t want to work with him anymore. He found the Oscar. Ross lies and says two cleaning ladies came in, but his dad knows he’s lying. He says he has to be punished. He just cost him millions of dollars. Jake says they should cut off his hand. His dad says they are going to do something much worse. Then he grounds him, That means no pool party at Max’s. He tries to talk his way out of it but it doesn’t work. Jake says cutting off his lips.
On party night, Ross is stuck at home playing a video game with his brother. He hasn’t told the two girls he’s not coming. He tells his brother he’s going to let him watch a DVD in his room. Jake doesn’t have a DVD player. He’ll just be out for a short while. Jake says he’ll tell but Ross heads to the party anyway. Ross lies to Max about being grounded. He lies to Cindy about why he’s late. (He says his brother wasn’t feeling well and he had to stay home and make his brother feel better). He tells the other girl the same thing (Sherma). She asks what he was talking to Cindy about. He weasels his way out of it by telling her he’ll meet her in the pool. Cindy asks what he’s talking to Sherma about. He says a school assignment. They both find out about the other and toss him in the pool. Then they hold him underwater and they keep doing it. They do it for a second to long and Ross feels himself drowning. When he resurfaces, everything is too bright so he jumps back in the pool and starts to swim. There’s someone underwater that looks just like Ross. He has the same eyes, hair, and face. The boy is saying what looks like “Go away!” Ross surfaces. The other boy doesn’t. He even swims back to the bottom floor but the boy is gone. Ross tries to tell the girls but they ignore him. He then tells Max he has to get home to watch Jake. On the way, he sees the lights on and his mom’s car in the drive. So, he tries to sneak in through his window. It’s Jake.
He won’t tell whether he did or didn’t rat him out. He tries to lie about where he went to his mother but he’s wearing the bathing trunks. He says he was just in the backyard. But then Ross gets a call from max and he tells Ross’s mom he left his extra towel and trunks at his house. His mom tells him she’s worried about him. He doesn’t seem to know the difference anymore between the truth and lies. Then she says when his father get home they’re going to have a family meeting. He asks his mom if he has a twin and she surprises him by answering yes he does. But she’s playing. She says there’s a good twin and a bad one and he’s the bad one. He tells his mom about the boy he saw but she just thinks he’s looking in a mirror. She then again accuses him of lying.Later that night, Ross hears his mom talking to a boy (he has his voice). His mom asks the boy if he’s going crazy. He doesn’t have a twin.
When he goes to investigate, he finds his mom in the kitchen. He tells her she was in the kitchen talking to a boy but she says she wasn’t. She was in her bed sound asleep until she heard him. She told him he must have been having a nightmare. So, he just goes back to bed (even though he knows it was real). The next day, Cindy seems to forgive Ross (after stepping on his foot). But he can’t hang with her he has tennis practice (For once this is the truth). But he lies to his coach about why he’s late and says he had a nosebleed. He sees his double a couple of courts over playing against a guy named Jared. The boy sees him and recognizes him too. The boy scowls and mouths “Go away!” Ross starts to run after him but trips. When he looks up the boy is gone. Jared when he runs up thinks the boy was Ross (even when he says it wasn’t).
Ross walks home with Serma and tries to tell her about his twin, but he’s lied so much that she doesn’t believe him. She does suggest tho that this could be a ghost. But wouldn’t he have to die to have a ghost. The light turns green and then red and Sharma pulls him into the street. He trips over the curb and falls in the grass. Sharma waves at Cindy and when Ross gets up the grass where Ross was is brown and sizzling. He tries to point it out to her but she walks away to talk to Cindy. When he gets home, his mom tells him his karate teacher is coming by early. Only Ross doesn’t take karate. She says he’s taken it since he was seven. Then she asks about his tennis practice. He starts to tell her about his twin but decides she won’t believe him anyway. She says she’s made his favorite brussel sprouts. But he hates them. Ross demands to know what’s going on.
Hmm. Sounds like he’s slipping in and out of an alternate universe to me. But the phone rings. He goes in his room and in his closet is a white karate robe. He looks around his room, but nothing changes. White lights start to shoot through his head and intense pain. Mom sends him to the store to buy some milk. Theirs is sour. It's four blocks but it’ll give him time to think so he doesn’t protest. On the way out he again sees his twin. He takes off running taking advantage of his twin's distraction. Ross grabs him and turns him around. It’s not him. The boy's parts start to shrink and he grabs him. His face changes and his skin starts to peel until he has none. His hair drops off and he turns bright red. He has no nose and empty eye sockets. Then he starts howling and takes off running screaming HELP! HELP! Another sharp pain hits his head. Then another and another. It stops abruptly.
He goes to get the milk, but when he picks it up his touch melts the carton and sour milk spills out. The woman in the store kicks him out. There are two boys in the store who were buying candy bars. Ross goes up to them and the boys tell him not to touch them. At home, Jake tries to get out of the lesson by saying he’s been having headaches but no such luck. He has to go through with the lesson. He takes a hit and goes down. Mr. Lawrence wants to know why he didn’t defend himself. Ross just takes off running. In the hallway, he runs into his twin. He takes the robe and kicks himout and tells him he doesn’t belong here. He sends him upstairs to “his” room before they see him. He says they’ll come back after the lesson. Then he locks him in. He sees the window and thinks he can escape and then go back and show his mom his twin. His twin comes back and in the room and then tries to push him out the window. He says there isn’t room for both of them.
The twin says he broke the fabric of reality he lied so much. Then he tells him he’s in a parallel world I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! They then start to wrestle. He tells him he won’t survive there. He’s going to die. Their mom hears but she thinks he and Jake are just fooling around. His twin explains that the night of Max’s party he slipped into his world from a portal underwater and ever since then he’s been slipping in and out of worlds. YES, I KNEW IT! But now he’s stuck in his world. Ross thinks he’s just lying and he’s goood! He oughta know. The twin tells him he’s an intruder and whether he means to or not he’s dangerous. When he touches things it can either destroy or chane them. So, Ross then touches *him*. But the twin says *he’s* the one that’s going to die in two days. He says he should already be experiencing the pain (the headaches). Then he’ll start to fade. Ross calls him a liar and shoves him. Then he starts to look for his mom. When he can’t find her he runs out the door. Then he runs to Max’s but he isn’t there.
Ross says he’s neighbor’s dog “Flash” and tries to get him to come to him. He comes to him alright and sinks his teeth into his arm. Flash then rolls off him, then his skin starts to melt away, he falls over and dies. Ross is horrified and starts to run as he hears the dogs last pitiful whine. Ross then sees the cops saying they caught an intruder. Ross is able to get a look at him. He has long hair and tattoos. The guy is pleading with him that he’s not an intruder. They tell him he doesn’t have much time and to give up. The man tries to escape but they grab him. Ross sees right through the man and he has blue veins. The man starts to scream and Ross’s head starts to throb. Finally, he realizes his twin was telling the truth. The intruder is taken away.
Ross thinks of a plan. He’ll just go back through the portal in Max’s swimming pool. But on the way there a police car stops him, but there’s another call and the cop just tells him not to be walking around at night. When he gets to Max’s he finds out the pool has been drained. He goes back to his twin and the twin tells him that since his whole world turned into a lie as a result of him lying he now has to tell the truth about what happened to him in this reality. The next morning, Ross tells the other Ross’s mother and says if she comes upstairs he can prove it. She just brushes him off because her girlfriend has an emergency. So he decides to go to school. The twin says he won’t help him. He tries to tell Cindy but she doesn’t believe him and trying to destroy the grass doesn’t work apparently in this reality. Then the pain hits. Max doesn’t believe him either and thinks he’s just trying to get out helping him wash his father’s car. So he tries his teacher Mrs. Doughlas. She doesn’t believe him either. In fact, no one does. When he gets home tho, he realizes a loophole. The other Ross believes him and he only needed one person. But the other Ross says he lied. Then he feels himself starting to blow away and vanish.
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he twin tells Ross that if he can get to the attic there’s a portal there but Ross realizes he’s lied again. He shoves him in the room so he can die there. Ross is weak but he starts to wrestle with the twin. They make their way to the pool. The end of both falling in the pool. Ross tells his twin this time to “Go away”. Then everything turns dark. Then he starts to fade. Then he’s back to the present at Max’s party. Cindy and Sherma were holding him under and held him under too long and he started to choke. Ross convinces himself the parallel universe thing never happened. Max’s father was the one that saved him, Ross starts to run back home remembering Jake. When he sees Jake his face is gone. It’s gray and he has a toothless grin. But it’s a mask. Two more Jakes burst into the room. His mom tells him he needs to stay home and watch the triplets. He messed up and is in anod is in another parallel world.
My Thoughts
I was so excited because I figured out what was going on. I guess that’s because I’ll let you in on a secret. I’ve been writing a story of my own that involves an alternate universe and I’ve done some research on parallel worlds and clones. You are going to LOVE IT! I promise you! Just keep your fingers crossed for me that I can get this special story to go from just being on my screen to being on your screens one day.
The character Ross reminded me a lot of my uncle. I was told a story of how during a basketball game (he was on the basketball team) he was called out in the middle of a game by one of his girlfriends. He had given both girlfriends the same ring and she found out about it. Then she begin to curse him out *during* the game. The method my uncle used the most in these situations was to just run. SMH. So when the game ended that’s what he did. I thought about this when the two girls found out about each other at the pool party and tried to drown Ross. I guess my uncle was lucky there wasn’t any water around or *he* might have suffered the same fate as Ross.
I did wonder how he managed to get into yet another entirely different dimension, but if there are infinite ones and no logical way that you can control which one you slip in and out of then it can happen. But it skipped all over the fact that HIS TWINS FACE COULD PEEL OFF! That would have been the FIRST thing I’d want to know after who are you and how did I get here? There is NO WAY he just forgot that in his eagerness to get back home. I think the better question would have been WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU and WHAT KIND OF PLACE IS THIS? I did like the idea also of the cops and the traitos and then having translucent skin to identify them. It gave me an idea.
Rating: 7