Re Winter Destiny - Grace Green brings us another great HPlandia h overcome by her inner meltiness for the H and once again an epic fail on the H with this one - unless you like the ruthless, revenge/lust conflicted verbally abusive and manipulative Alpha H type.
The h is 28 and has a nine and half year old daughter that is the result of an unwitting affair with the H's brother. She is rather poor, but getting by and for once used the appropriate social services for help when her baby was young, as her disinterested father totally abandoned her to her shame.
The h is tracked down by the H and blackmailed into returning to his house with her daughter to help his depressed mother, who recently lost her younger son, the h's ex and his wife. He buys the company the h works for and gets her fired to start. Then he tries to buy the h's daughter and threatens the h with bankruptcy because without her job she won't be able to pay her bank loan or her rent.
The H believes that the h seduced his brother and that she is a sleazy tart of massive proportions and treats her accordingly, including threatening her custody of her daughter. However in a rare shining h moment, the h tells the H where to jump, even if she winds up destitute and homeless.
In an un-rare moment of pure HP H slimehood, the H threatens to tell the little girl that the h really despises the girl's father. ( Thus shattering the illusion that the h worked hard to foster so her daughter would not be ashamed of her origins, but also to ruin the daughter's trust in her mother in the process.) Unless the h agrees to let the H claim to his mother that the h is a massive gold digger tart who seduced his pure and virtuous brother away from his wife and tried to trap him with a child.
The daughter is excited over meeting her grandmother, so the h reluctantly and under coercion agrees to let the H lie, and agrees to take her daughter to see the old woman for two weeks, the old lady who is so depressed she can't even arrange for the painting of the front hall of the H's majestic manor home.
Roofie kisses, the H's girlfriend's conniving and slut shaming of the h ensue. The H is clearly interested in a lurve club moment with the h and resenting that she is such a tarty tartlett at the same time. Completely disregarding that technically he is involved with a woman himself.
As apparently in this family, apples really don't fall far from the tree.
Eventually the h manages to get a word in edgewise and explain that the the real story is the married brother saw her when she was 17, tried to seduce her, she said no and so he set up a fake marriage ceremony and pretended to marry her and then dumped her later. She found out she was preggers and never said anything, cause really what is there TO say to a man who would do something like that?
The H naturally says the h is lying, but really the h is a very nice person and even kind to the H's mother, who raised not one but TWO lying, cheating specimens of outstanding sub-par humanity and now wants a shot at ruining another in the form of the h's daughter while either snubbing or just plain ignoring the h. (After delivering her snide, condescending the h-is-a-tart-soiling-the pristine-purity-of-her-house speech to the h, in their first conversation.)
Through the sheer proximity of the living in the same house and with the h being such a caring and empathetic person, the h starts to believe that she and the H can have a peaceful co-existence. The H even seems willing to believe that there might be more to the situation than what his brother claimed.
His brother claimed he met the h as a cheap little blonde in a bar, the h supposedly got clingy and he only continued with the h to keep her from telling his wife. Until the H stepped in and made him stop or he would cut him out of the family business, as the H was very concerned about his brother's wife. Then the brother's wife started drinking and she was unknowingly preggers and miscarried. This was a terrible blow as she had been trying to get preggers for years. (The H cried about it too, which made me wonder if the miscarried baby was really his brother's or if he 'consoled' his brother's wife in her distress and that doubled his obvious devastation until he saw a picture of the h.)
The h's daughter gets sick with a virus, forcing the h to continue to stay in the H's home and her temptation to melt into the H becomes almost unbearable, there is lot of angst and yearning. Then the H's girlfriend stops by to un-invite the h to her party for the girlfriend's returning from the Amazon brother - the girlfriend tries to tell the h that the H only had her invite the h to be polite. The h, who can't resist throwing some gas on the fire, explains that she will be delighted to attend the girlfriend's party with such a handsome and virile man as the H.
Then a thought hits her that the fake minister who married her might show up there too and the h can prove her story to the H. However the H has another scheme in mind for taking the h to the party and the h is unsure she really should go. But the H gets a nurse for the h's daughter and with reluctance but a smidgen of hope, the h agrees to wear the dress the H bought for her and pay him back for it. Even tho she will probably only wear it once and then spend years working to reimburse him for it. There is a little H seduction attempt when he walks in on the h trying to get dressed, but eventually we all set off for the party where the H's sneaky little plan unfolds.
We get to the party and the H's plan is ready to be sprung, with a small interruption as the h starts searching for the fake celebrant who married her to the H's brother. The H starts snapping at her cause he thinks she is on the pull for another married man to have a tawdry affair with. He makes the usual nasty tart remarks and the h explains that she is trying to see if the brother's friend is present as she plans to make him explain what he did all those years ago in setting the h up. The H tells her to ask for more Perrier water when she sees the fake celebrant, but the h looks for quite a while in vain, the man is not there.
She is depressed and the H is making noises that she is a liar, when she wanders into the solarium and has a little nap. The h is awoken by the sound of the H and his girlfriend breaking up. The H's girlfriend was engaged to him at one time and he really loved the girlfriend. But the H was relatively poor and the girlfriend married a rich older man who gave her big diamonds instead. Now she is a merry widow and wants to reinstate her betrothal to the now wildly rich H. He doesn't want to tho and when the girlfriend blames the h for the H's attitude and calls the h a whore, the h loses her temper and stands up, surprising the H and girlfriend both.
The h tersely states that she was tricked and used, she is NOT a whore. But the girlfriend certainly falls into that category cause the H loved her, yet the girlfriend sold herself out for a handful of diamonds. The H suddenly get all handsy and loverly with the h in front of the now ex-girlfriend as they walk out. On the way to the car, the ex-girlfriend's brother shows up and the h recognizes him as the fake marriage celebrant. She tells the H she would like some Perrier when the man asks the H who the hot chick is and the H sends the h home while he and the man talk.
The H returns to see the h later, he now realizes that his entire family has pretty much used, abused and debased the h and that they are all nematode slime swillers. To the h's credit, she tries to dissuade the H from explaining things to his supposedly fragile mother and the H is in awe of the h's willingness to martyr herself.
He insists that the h be vindicated and we find out that the h met the H's brother when he snapped her picture in the park when she was just seventeen and then proceeded along the fake marriage route. The H gets a funny look when the h mentions the picture, but she quickly forgets when the H admits that he made the h go to his ex-girlfriend's party to flaunt her in his ex's face and cause a breakup.
(It is debatable that the H and ex were partners, but really if they were not, why drag the h to a place she really did not want to be and tried several times to refuse to go to? I would think a simple, "You dumped me for flash and cash, you lose and I don't want you" would be enough of a statement to get rid of his girlfriend. Unless of course he had been leading her on and enjoying some piking poky revenge. Then to compound the situation and humiliate his ex even more, he flaunted a woman that he and the ex both called a whore and worse, right in front of the woman and all her friends.)
When the H makes his big confession of using her, just like his brother, the h finally loses some of her martyrdom complex and tells the H off, he and his brother treated her abominably - par for the family course. The next morning, the H's mother makes her apology and sadly the h doesn't take the opportunity to expose just what a hypocrite the deceptively fragile snot is, but graciously allows that she wants her daughter to continue to have a relationship with the woman. The H's mother declares that the h is in love with the H and the h, instead of denouncing her for raising a plethora of sub sewer slime swillers, starts crying cause she just realized she loves the H.
Later on the H shows up as the h is walking along the beach and he asks to court and visit the h, cause he thought and TELLS the h - just EXACTLY like his brother- that the h's picture at seventeen was the sexiest thing he had ever seen. The H has been carrying around the h's picture that the brother took in his wallet for years.
He hired detectives to track her down, (but strangely couldn't read the part where she had been celibate for yonks and not involved with any men, except maybe as a replacement daughter for her elderly boss,) because he wanted a shot at that pop tart of sexy fun and didn't mind paying for it. Then he found out about his niece and decided he wanted the girl for therapy for his mother and in the meantime he could sate himself in the h. Now he tries to humble himself for ten seconds to plead his case for marriage after courtship with the h.
The h thinks for about half a second and agrees to let the H visit, it is pretty clear they are in love - or at least she is and he is out of mind with yearning lust, so the book ends with the intention but the not the actuality of a happily wedded HEA - which to my mind was a good thing cause the h still has time to recover from her brain virus and get a restraining order against these people.
This is one of the few HP's that doesn't end in a bona fide HP certified married HEA - tho the implication is there and strangely enough, it works really well for this one. The H isn't totally a slime slurper for the latter half of the book, until his ploy with the girlfriend comes to light, but even that is almost excusable.
What ruins it for me and knocks it down to well done and angsty but not great, is the deliberate use of same wording the brother used about the picture to the h. It also gives me great concern, because the underlying implication is that the H had a thing for his brother's sloppy seconds - first he is consoling the wife and then he is pursuing the h- after admitting that his brother never got over leaving the h and that everyone knew it and after the H himself saw the h's picture and figured his brother had one-upped him in the lady lurve department once again.
I got a creepy feeling and the mother's continual manipulative blindness over her sons and the spoiling of the h's daughter while trying to estrange the h was just another straw on the tinderbox really. A child is not therapy for depression - period.
These were really not nice people, I wanted the h to allow for a very distant relationship with very infrequent supervised visits -- as who wants their child exposed to the moral bankruptcy these people are all about and continue to practice.
Still the angst in this one is immense and the h is really a nice person who gets some solid stand up moments for herself. I was just entirely regretting the spine dissolution and melting innards every time the H was in proximity - cause she really deserved better and that lack of a quality H made this a sorta unsatisfactory, but not really terrible angst ladden HPlandia outing.