(75% update) Absolutely HATE Dylan. He's WAY too controlling and doesn't like to listen to reason. I don't care for Leila either... She's the epitome of women using sex to get her way... ON EVERYTHING!
The story is good though, and if the author could work on her characters a bit, the story could be really good! I like the storyline, the bad-crazy guy, and some of the second characters. I might read the other stories if they are switching character views to Blake.
(Completion update)
It started strong, and I was glued until I got to about 50%, but then it slowed down and drug along. I became annoyed at the constant jealousy games. I get the author trying to put in some conflict to fill the space, but it drug the whole thing down. I had it rated at 2 starts around this point because it was getting so aggravating. I even contemplated on giving up, but I stayed with it. Once the fighting went back up around Chapter 35, and I became engrossed once again, bringing my rating up a star.