A novel for the Me Too era, this is not. Besides killing off animals, Stine has the unfortunate bad habit of crafting "persistent underdog" male characters and passing them off as cute, caring, and the one who wins the girl in the end (because if you just ask long enough, you get the girl! Don't you know?).
So I know firsthand what narcissistic assholes magicians can be. And soon our protagonist, Mayra, does too. Her current boyfriend, Walker, is a magician. He is away at the beginning of the book but comes home partway through. While he's gone this leaves the door wide open for Link, Mayra's former boyfriend, to constantly harass her for dumping him.
Mayra is working for Mrs. Cottler, an old lady who lives on Fear Street, for the summer (when she's not being harassed by Link, that is). Mrs. Cottler likes for Mayra to read to her. Mayra finds her okay enough, but she's put off by Mrs. Cottler's cat, Hazel. Mayra gradually finds a bunch of witch-related stuff in Mrs. Cottler's house. She has black candles everywhere. She also seems to enjoy holding onto possessions of others (which, as you probably know, are needed to cast spells). Hazel accidentally rips off Mayra's new necklace from Walker on her first day there. Mrs. Cottler offers to restring the beads for Mayra, but she seems to be keeping the beads a little too long in Mayra's opinion.
This book is busy, because in the midst of this summer job Mayra has yet ANOTHER crazy guy following her, and she begins sleepwalking. The guy's name is Cal, and he seems angry from the first time he spots Mayra. The problem is that Mayra has never seen him before in her life. There is also Mayra's best friend, Donna, who(m?) gets run off the road by a crazy driver and ends up in the hospital. She lives, but she's pretty banged up.
Mayra can't figure out why she's sleepwalking, but she soon grows suspicious of Mrs. Cottler, especially when she finds out that her mom, Brenda, once had Mrs. Cottler as a patient. Apparently Mrs. Cottler didn't like the treatment she received from Mayra's mom or something like that. It's not long, though, before Mayra is (rightfully) suspicious of everyone around her. Link's sister, Stephanie, also comes over to reveal that she, too, does not understand the concept of no means no. She and Mayra fight, and she's deeply disappointed that Mayra will not get back together with Link. Then Mayra sees Link's truck, a red Chevy, and recognizes it as the one that drove Donna off the road. However, his truck doesn't have a scratch on it. After her first confrontation with Mayra, Stephanie takes Mayra's favorite white scarf. It's never explained why she does this, but we can assume it's because she also does not understand boundaries or asking for permission. So when Mayra finds out a link between Mrs. Cottler and Stephanie, she decides to confront her, only to find Stephanie chanting in her (Stephanie's) bedroom and wearing Mayra's scarf on her head! Stephanie is positively incensed that Mayra wants her scarf back and doesn't understand what the big deal in all of this is (Link and Stephanie: two peas in a pod). Mayra accuses Stephanie of casting a spell on her, but then she starts to doubt herself.
In what is the best scene in the book, Brenda gets help for Mayra's sleepwalking in the form of a psychiatrist. Here, Stine gets things surprisingly right. The psychiatrist is not portrayed as dismissive or in the "tell me how you feel" way of most books when handling something like this. Instead, he listens to Mayra and encourages her to discover what she might be suppressing that could be causing her to sleepwalk. In the meantime, he gives her a nonaddictive sleep aid so she can finally get rest. This was also a great move on Stine's part, because he showed medicine as not something evil at all costs, yet he also acknowledged that often those types of meds can be addictive. I really appreciated that extra acknowledgement to Mayra that what she was taking was okay.
Buttt then Stine loses all points with the ending (though he would get major points if not for the way the boys in the book are portrayed. The twist is actually a good one). So first of all, you know by now the true guilty party is not Mrs. Cottler, right? Good.
After a harrowing sleepwalking incident down to the lake in which she almost drowns, Mayra decides to confront her demons once and for all. She realizes that each time she sleepwalks she ends up at the lake. She surmises that there is clearly something important about this, so she goes to visit the lake while she's awake and see what happens. She goes at night, and who should show up but Link? He gets seriously frightening in this scene when he tries to brush off following Mayra and then grabs her forcefully and demands that she tell him why she left him. Men: THIS. IS. NOT. OKAY. Mayra manages to escape and runs away from him.
Shortly after it all comes back to her. The lake was important in her dreams... because it's where she was involved in an accident with Walker where someone died and another person almost did. Mayra recalls a night when she was at the mall with Walker but he, for a reason not unexplained, completely changes his personality and decides he wants to joyride. He insists to Mayra that it's his mom's car, but once they are already on the road he reveals that actually he did steal a car. Why? "Because I felt like it." Mayra demands he turn around but, in keeping with the patterns of this book, Walker ignores her completely, and it ends badly. Walker accidentally runs another car off the road, and they land in the water below. Mayra is pleading for Walker to help them, but he won't listen. Mayra sees one passenger float to the surface but not the other. She screams and screams at him to do something but he does nothing.
Well, I take that back. He doesn't do nothing. What he actually does is hypnotize Mayra into not remembering the accident at all. Yes, you read that right. Gaslighting by way of hypnotism. The night of the accident, on the way home after Walker refuses to get help, Mayra apparently asked him to hypnotize her to calm her down. Walker, sweet peach that he is, obliged, but not without using that opportunity to his advantage. That very night he told a hypnotized Mayra that she would not remember the accident they had just been through. After all, he cannot have his future as a famous magician ruined (Barf. But he actually says this later in the book. It's way too close to home for me).
As she realizes this, Mayra also starts kicking ass and develops a plan to trick Walker. She gets him to come to the lake with her, and she tells him that after the stress of everything going on lately she needs him to hypnotize her. Only this time she is only pretending to be under his influence. And, sure enough, at the end of the session he also adds that she will continue to forget about the car accident. Mayra explodes spectacularly. She (hallelujah!) tells him what a horrible person he is for letting someone die and for letting her go crazy and go without sleep all this time. She's even sarcastic when he says, "You tricked me," and she immediately responds, "You catch on quickly." I had so much love for Mayra in that moment. Stine doesn't often write of women characters with any backbone.
Then, also adding to the spectacular ending, Mayra is saved by Hazel. Yes, Mrs. Cottler's cat comes down to the lake and scratches the shit out of Walker long enough for Mayra to escape. She gets to the house and calls 911. Which is fantastic... until Walker throws a stone at the window and comes inside like a regular Michael Myers. He tells Mayra the usual, how she "shouldn't have done that" and blah blah. And then the cat is back! Mayra can't figure out how in the world Hazel could have made it back to the house so quickly.
I am so, so happy to report that, for once in a Stine book, an animal does not die. We think that might be where it's headed, but then Cal comes to the door. He's the other other insane guy that's been after Mayra the whole book. But, to her shock, when he gets the door open he goes after Walker and not Mayra. Turns out that Cal is the brother of the man who died in the car accident. He thought Mayra was the killer. So he tried to run her off the road (this was Donna, but she was driving Mayra's car) and kept following her all over. But he hears the fight between Mayra and Walker at the lake, and he learns the truth: Walker was the killer, and Mayra had no idea what happened this whole time because of the hypnotism. Finally, the police show up and try and piece all of this together. You might want to sit down, fellas. It's gonna be a long night.
In the last chapter, it's one week later, and Mayra kills any of the goodwill I felt towards her (though, to be fair, it's hardly her fault she's taken in with these men). Link comes by to apologize for being a creep, but he clearly still doesn't think he's done anything wrong, especially when Mayra jokes that she must love creeps. It gets worse from there, with Link essentially brushing off what he did to her. They end up kissing and so it's like everything a lot of these romcoms have told us for years: if you just keep trying, you'll get the girl in the end. Even if she has another boyfriend. Even if she says no. Repeatedly.
It's an awful message, clearly. I hope no teenager is reading this book in 2019. The last thing we need is even more people confused about things that should be crystal clear. There are no blurred lines here. Walker was a gaslighter and Link is a stalker. Because stalking is the very definition of what he did. This book was shaping up to be great until the extremely problematic ending of the guy winning the girl because he was just pushy enough. No no no.
Please don't do this to anyone you like/love ever. Be better than Walker, Link, and even Stephanie, because I know we all can.
(Oh, and Mrs. Cottler wasn't a witch. She was an occultist professor. The mystery of Hazel saving Mayra isn't explained, however.)