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A group of zealots from a distant island is making a move on Jaria, where a group of Kriites with animal bond-mates live. It will soon be up to Talon to find a way to fight back. With a newly awakened icetiger for his companion, Talon is finally learning the magic of his people, including telepathy and shape-changing.
Talon is a nineteen-year-old Kriite man who follows the wolf-god, Sy-tre. For this, he and his people are hunted by slavers who worship the jealous fire-god, Zeidarb. After Jaria is attacked by the Zeikas, Talon embarks on a mission to seek help. Before Talon even understands the power within him, there are demon summoners after him. He is horrified to learn that the Zeika leader plans use Talon’s body and mind to further his ambition for power.
Due to his bloodline and abilities, Talon is both the greatest threat and the greatest boon to the Zeika’s god-given mission to enslave or kill all Kriites. Talon’s actions and faith will make all the difference between the two.
Talon is a nineteen-year-old Kriite man who follows the wolf-god, Sy-tre. For this, he and his people are hunted by slavers who worship the jealous fire-god, Zeidarb. After Jaria is attacked by the Zeikas, Talon embarks on a mission to seek help. Before Talon even understands the power within him, there are demon summoners after him. He is horrified to learn that the Zeika leader plans use Talon’s body and mind to further his ambition for power.
Due to his bloodline and abilities, Talon is both the greatest threat and the greatest boon to the Zeika’s god-given mission to enslave or kill all Kriites. Talon’s actions and faith will make all the difference between the two.
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Amanda Greenslade
9 books8 followersAustralian writer of adult fantasy and children’s books. She aims to make every book she writes entertaining and thought-provoking.
Amanda completed a Bachelor of Communication majoring in writing and screen production at Griffith University in 2003. The Managing Director of Australian eBook Publisher, a self-publishing service, Amanda is a multi-skilled communicator and designer. She has knowledge and experience in writing, editing, publishing, graphic design, book layout, web design and marketing.
She also uses her small business marketing expertise to assist other businesses and organisations through her business Greenslade Creations.
Amanda completed a Bachelor of Communication majoring in writing and screen production at Griffith University in 2003. The Managing Director of Australian eBook Publisher, a self-publishing service, Amanda is a multi-skilled communicator and designer. She has knowledge and experience in writing, editing, publishing, graphic design, book layout, web design and marketing.
She also uses her small business marketing expertise to assist other businesses and organisations through her business Greenslade Creations.
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September 2, 2016
This book was not for me...
And I am so sad about that cause books with animal spirits is of my favourite things....
But the story was way too fast....
I couldn't really appreciate the bonding between the Rada and the Rada-kin because things were just happening from the begging. I just needed time to feel sympathetic and it wasn't given to me...
That spoiled the whole book for me and I am so sad because the world building and system have so much potential.
My thanks to Netgalley for the e-arc
And I am so sad about that cause books with animal spirits is of my favourite things....
But the story was way too fast....
I couldn't really appreciate the bonding between the Rada and the Rada-kin because things were just happening from the begging. I just needed time to feel sympathetic and it wasn't given to me...
That spoiled the whole book for me and I am so sad because the world building and system have so much potential.
My thanks to Netgalley for the e-arc
May 25, 2016
Talon is an in-depth fantasy set in a land where numerous different people groups exist side by side, sometimes peacefully, sometimes not. Chief amongst these groups are the Jarians, who along with some of their close neighbours, follow a religion that is under threat from the demonic power of the Zeikas, a race that is trying to take over this world.
The story follows the adventures of Talon, who is a Jarian and has recently found a Rada-kin (that is, an animal with whom he can have a sentient friendship and whose thoughts he can read). She is an icetiger named Rekala. This development means Talon has become a Rada, and he quickly also become an Anzaii, which gives him additional powers and responsibilities, including becoming the ambassador of the Jarian people. Teaming up with Sarlice, the ambassador from Lyth, and her firetiger Rada-kin, they journey to Telby to try and get the king's help in their fight with the Zeikas.
Talon is a book with lots of detail and world-building. If you like that sort of thing, I recommend it. However, if you prefer your stories to move at a rapid pace, this might not be the book for you. It does keep moving, though. Sometimes I found it difficult to follow, especially when Talon is communicating with his kin in his head, which means he can also communicate with a lot of other people and animals. This could easily be confusing for some, and has the potential to be a difficulty in future novels, as Talon's ability looks likely to increase. However, to Amanda Greenslade's credit, I managed to keep up with it, so hopefully she will be skilled enough to make it work in the future.
So if you like your books with loads of world-building and intricate, and at times, conflicting relationships between races, you'll probably enjoy this one!
The story follows the adventures of Talon, who is a Jarian and has recently found a Rada-kin (that is, an animal with whom he can have a sentient friendship and whose thoughts he can read). She is an icetiger named Rekala. This development means Talon has become a Rada, and he quickly also become an Anzaii, which gives him additional powers and responsibilities, including becoming the ambassador of the Jarian people. Teaming up with Sarlice, the ambassador from Lyth, and her firetiger Rada-kin, they journey to Telby to try and get the king's help in their fight with the Zeikas.
Talon is a book with lots of detail and world-building. If you like that sort of thing, I recommend it. However, if you prefer your stories to move at a rapid pace, this might not be the book for you. It does keep moving, though. Sometimes I found it difficult to follow, especially when Talon is communicating with his kin in his head, which means he can also communicate with a lot of other people and animals. This could easily be confusing for some, and has the potential to be a difficulty in future novels, as Talon's ability looks likely to increase. However, to Amanda Greenslade's credit, I managed to keep up with it, so hopefully she will be skilled enough to make it work in the future.
So if you like your books with loads of world-building and intricate, and at times, conflicting relationships between races, you'll probably enjoy this one!
April 25, 2016
Talon is a young man, about 20. For his people, he is behind. He lacks his Rada-Kin. That changes, quite suddenly, and it is awesome! Talon finds his Rada-Kin, an blue icetiger. They are very rare, almost extinct. She is a magnificent creature, and being bonded to a Rada, changes everything for both of them.
I *LOVE* that right off the bat it's make clear that the humans were made in their creator's image and given dominion over the Earth and the creatures in it. Because of that Talon is even kinder and more connected to his icetiger. Both Talon and his new Rada-Kin serve The Lightmaker, Yes! This quickening of being Rada-Kin gifts the special animal the person is bonded to an extra level that other animals don't have. They become as sentient, self aware, as humans. Using the waves around them, they are able to communicate telepathically to the person they are bonded to, and they can sense each other's senses. That is fun, and while I have seen it in other books, I really liked it here.
This is the tip of the "iceberg". Talon may, or may not have a second gift, and he is also tasked with saving his people. Rekala, meaning Fury, the icetiger is kidnapped, and from here things just keep moving.
This is a well written, multi=layered super fantasy read. I really want to read the sequels. My copy came from Net Galley in exchange for my honest review and nothing more.
I *LOVE* that right off the bat it's make clear that the humans were made in their creator's image and given dominion over the Earth and the creatures in it. Because of that Talon is even kinder and more connected to his icetiger. Both Talon and his new Rada-Kin serve The Lightmaker, Yes! This quickening of being Rada-Kin gifts the special animal the person is bonded to an extra level that other animals don't have. They become as sentient, self aware, as humans. Using the waves around them, they are able to communicate telepathically to the person they are bonded to, and they can sense each other's senses. That is fun, and while I have seen it in other books, I really liked it here.
This is the tip of the "iceberg". Talon may, or may not have a second gift, and he is also tasked with saving his people. Rekala, meaning Fury, the icetiger is kidnapped, and from here things just keep moving.
This is a well written, multi=layered super fantasy read. I really want to read the sequels. My copy came from Net Galley in exchange for my honest review and nothing more.
February 6, 2017
Could not for the life of me get myself through this novel. Genuinely struggled more than I ever have before. Everything happened to quick... and I barely got that far in. I was so confused as to how things came about and why certain things were happening. In all honestly the story line showed a hell of a lot of promise... but in reality it just didn't seem to flow like it should have. Maybe it got better towards the later part of the story but as it is... I'm not all that inclined to find out.
September 24, 2017
With Talon, Amanda Greenslade has rekindled my interest in a genre long abandoned. I've not read anything even remotely fantasy in at least ten years. Maybe I should have been.
The characters are exciting and believable, the action clicks along at a nice pace and there are no lags in the story. I was particularly impressed by the relationship built between the protagonist and his ice-tiger sidekick. Amanda has a great talent for describing her imagined landscapes; they paint a wonderful picture of the setting while not detracting from the epic story she tells. Recommend to anyone interested in the animal-spirit, shape-shifter fantasy realms.
The characters are exciting and believable, the action clicks along at a nice pace and there are no lags in the story. I was particularly impressed by the relationship built between the protagonist and his ice-tiger sidekick. Amanda has a great talent for describing her imagined landscapes; they paint a wonderful picture of the setting while not detracting from the epic story she tells. Recommend to anyone interested in the animal-spirit, shape-shifter fantasy realms.
May 17, 2016
First let me say that this was a DNF.
The hardest thing about being a book reviewer is getting a book, wanting to LOVE it, and just not being able to click with it.
Such is this book.
I LOVED the premise of this book, and honestly it was very well written. However, this book and I didn't super click. I didn't ever want to pick it up. I wanted to WANT to pick it up, if you know what I mean.
Overall, this book has a great plot and characters and such an interesting storyline. But it wasn't for me. BUT it could be for you! Give it a shot!
The hardest thing about being a book reviewer is getting a book, wanting to LOVE it, and just not being able to click with it.
Such is this book.
I LOVED the premise of this book, and honestly it was very well written. However, this book and I didn't super click. I didn't ever want to pick it up. I wanted to WANT to pick it up, if you know what I mean.
Overall, this book has a great plot and characters and such an interesting storyline. But it wasn't for me. BUT it could be for you! Give it a shot!
March 27, 2018
I received a free copy from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review, and thus the opinions stated here are mine, and mine alone. Thank you for the opportunity to read Talon by Amanda Greenslade!
3/5 Stars.
Pros:
+ Interesting world building
+ Dynamic and endearing relationship between Talon and his Icetiger, Rekala.
+ Banter between Talon, Rekala, and Sarlice are fun.
Cons:
+ Prose felt disjointed at times.
+ Some Grammar/Spelling mistakes.
+ Plot devices used are sometimes clumsy and convoluted.
+ Trigger warning for off-page sexual assault. It isn't graphic, but it very much there.
You can tell the author really cares about this story and tried their very best to craft a unique and interesting world. There was a lot of thought put into the setting of this world. It shows. I found myself really enjoying learning about the world, the religion, and the beliefs of the Kriites. The developing companionship between Talon and Rekala was endearing-- though I do wish the story would've focused more on that rather than the (kind of?) love triangle.
There were things I appreciated about this story, but some plot points were a little strange and cliche, while others fell flat of the intimacy I was expecting from a book written in the perspective of first person, not to mention the unique emotional/mental connection between Talon, Sarlice, Rekala, and Kestric. While the story is told from the perspective of Talon, I didn't feel like I was seeing things truly through his eyes a lot of the time? I just felt like I was a disembodied spirit looking over events happening in a play, rather than truly experiencing the story as it was unfolding. This story would have flowed much better if there was more showing and less telling.
The pacing was also a little disjointed and odd at times-- I found myself confused and had to re-read paragraphs.
Overall, it was a fun little read, and I am quite eager to read the next installment in the series.
3/5 Stars.
Pros:
+ Interesting world building
+ Dynamic and endearing relationship between Talon and his Icetiger, Rekala.
+ Banter between Talon, Rekala, and Sarlice are fun.
Cons:
+ Prose felt disjointed at times.
+ Some Grammar/Spelling mistakes.
+ Plot devices used are sometimes clumsy and convoluted.
+ Trigger warning for off-page sexual assault. It isn't graphic, but it very much there.
You can tell the author really cares about this story and tried their very best to craft a unique and interesting world. There was a lot of thought put into the setting of this world. It shows. I found myself really enjoying learning about the world, the religion, and the beliefs of the Kriites. The developing companionship between Talon and Rekala was endearing-- though I do wish the story would've focused more on that rather than the (kind of?) love triangle.
There were things I appreciated about this story, but some plot points were a little strange and cliche, while others fell flat of the intimacy I was expecting from a book written in the perspective of first person, not to mention the unique emotional/mental connection between Talon, Sarlice, Rekala, and Kestric. While the story is told from the perspective of Talon, I didn't feel like I was seeing things truly through his eyes a lot of the time? I just felt like I was a disembodied spirit looking over events happening in a play, rather than truly experiencing the story as it was unfolding. This story would have flowed much better if there was more showing and less telling.
The pacing was also a little disjointed and odd at times-- I found myself confused and had to re-read paragraphs.
Overall, it was a fun little read, and I am quite eager to read the next installment in the series.
April 13, 2016
I received a copy of this book from the author, after she found me...somewhere...and emailed me. As usual, this has in no way affected my review.
Normally, I try to at least finish books sent to me for review. However, this was a strong DNF at the ten percent mark. In that ten percent, we had:
a) The protagonist receiving everything they'd ever wanted, without working for it;
b) Glorious amounts of info-dumping. That's right, glorious;
c) A bunch of characters and little to no conflict;
d) Nothing driving us to read onwards. (Evidently.)
One thing that irked me, other than the above, was that I couldn't figure out the target age for the book. It's written in a style that I could possibly see being pitched for 10-11 year olds, embarking on longer texts for the first time, but then suddenly there's a mention of sex (though dropped in gingerly, queasily, as though it's a 14-year-old broaching 'adult topics' in their writing for the first time). I'm not saying that texts for younger age groups shouldn't handle issues of gender or sexuality, but it felt off somehow.
Furthermore, there were some very, very strong religious undertones. Overtones. Tones of all kinds! The humans (?) in the book were made in the image of their creator god, and 'as it was written', therefore have dominion over all animals. Even their animal partners, with whom they share their lives and consciousness. That particular power relation made me a little ill, left-wing free-hugs sort of hippy that I am, and the Christian background was over-done and unnecessary. I definitely felt isolated from the text, and I could imagine other non-Christians or non-religious folks would feel similarly.
I'm giving this a 1-star. Had I been a child when I read that 10 percent, I might have given it 2.5-3.
Normally, I try to at least finish books sent to me for review. However, this was a strong DNF at the ten percent mark. In that ten percent, we had:
a) The protagonist receiving everything they'd ever wanted, without working for it;
b) Glorious amounts of info-dumping. That's right, glorious;
c) A bunch of characters and little to no conflict;
d) Nothing driving us to read onwards. (Evidently.)
One thing that irked me, other than the above, was that I couldn't figure out the target age for the book. It's written in a style that I could possibly see being pitched for 10-11 year olds, embarking on longer texts for the first time, but then suddenly there's a mention of sex (though dropped in gingerly, queasily, as though it's a 14-year-old broaching 'adult topics' in their writing for the first time). I'm not saying that texts for younger age groups shouldn't handle issues of gender or sexuality, but it felt off somehow.
Furthermore, there were some very, very strong religious undertones. Overtones. Tones of all kinds! The humans (?) in the book were made in the image of their creator god, and 'as it was written', therefore have dominion over all animals. Even their animal partners, with whom they share their lives and consciousness. That particular power relation made me a little ill, left-wing free-hugs sort of hippy that I am, and the Christian background was over-done and unnecessary. I definitely felt isolated from the text, and I could imagine other non-Christians or non-religious folks would feel similarly.
I'm giving this a 1-star. Had I been a child when I read that 10 percent, I might have given it 2.5-3.
April 3, 2016
It always amazes me how authors can create other worlds, complete with their own occupants, gods and animals, plants, landscapes that seem familiar and that are different and occupants who have abilities we can only guess at. Such a place is Chryne, created by Australian author, Amanda Greenslade. A place where magic abounds, where there exists the Kriites, a people who have animal bond-mates, the Rada-kin. Such a man Is Talon, who comes into his bond at later than normal and unexpectedly, with an icetiger. This happens just as his community is attacked by an opposing force, the Zeikas sorcerers and worshippers of the fire god Ziedarb. The Zieka want to bring the Kriites and their bond mates under their control.
Sent on a mission to ask neighbouring kingdoms for help, Talon and his companion Sarlice and their bond mates are tracked by Zeikas. They rescue a young woman, Lira, who joins them on their journey, only to betray them in startling ways.
As Talon and Sarlice race towards refuge they are pursued by a relentless group of Zeikas, who seem to want Talon for his bloodline and gifts.
A tense story of action, of magic, and of the growing battle for the Kriites to remain free from the evil espoused by the Zeikas and to continue the ways of their peoples.
Where this series will lead is an intriguing puzzle.
A NetGalley ARC
Sent on a mission to ask neighbouring kingdoms for help, Talon and his companion Sarlice and their bond mates are tracked by Zeikas. They rescue a young woman, Lira, who joins them on their journey, only to betray them in startling ways.
As Talon and Sarlice race towards refuge they are pursued by a relentless group of Zeikas, who seem to want Talon for his bloodline and gifts.
A tense story of action, of magic, and of the growing battle for the Kriites to remain free from the evil espoused by the Zeikas and to continue the ways of their peoples.
Where this series will lead is an intriguing puzzle.
A NetGalley ARC
February 18, 2016
Talon by Amanda Greenslade is a fantasy tale for teens and young adults. It has great creativity, imagination, and story line. The characters are intriguing and I enjoyed the magic, shape-shifting, telepathy, and other fantasy in this story. The difficulty was with the very many odd names of everything: places, people, religions, magic uses, level of magic users, animals, gods, and more. It made concentrating on the story difficult if the reader has to try and keep all of these peculiar names straight. The first part of the story didn't sound like true dialogue but got better shortly. It was enjoyable but I would have liked it better with easier names. I found myself wondering how much longer the book had to go at times due to this name issue. Even most of the way through the book, it was not like these names were sticking in my brain. They were too, too many of them. I received this book for a honest review from NetGalley and it in no way effected my review content or rating.
January 17, 2014
So far so good, a new world of Rada-kin, telepathic communication, magic, tree that creates power, the inevitable good and evil part and much more. But that which is different about this one is the unique way it's written and some of great sentences created in this fantasy world. One of books that will let your imagination run free, a good break from all those earth bounded ones x9
June 17, 2017
A definite wow!
I hope this is just the beginning for this series, as this is book 1 of the Astor Chronicles. It's not just a YA book, but one that even adults will enjoy, if they like swords and sorcery. It's fun and exciting, and magical. It's a good read and very entertaining. I enjoyed how this book captivated this reader and I was quick and yet slow to turn the page, enjoying every word. Will read more of the series.
I hope this is just the beginning for this series, as this is book 1 of the Astor Chronicles. It's not just a YA book, but one that even adults will enjoy, if they like swords and sorcery. It's fun and exciting, and magical. It's a good read and very entertaining. I enjoyed how this book captivated this reader and I was quick and yet slow to turn the page, enjoying every word. Will read more of the series.
November 27, 2023
In Talon, the author did a lot of world building and setting the story. She put a lot of detail into introducing the characters and the world they live in. Fortunately, that’s something I enjoy I’m a fantasy novel. I love being fully immersed in the story so I feel like I’m seeing and hearing, and experiencing everything the characters are. I had so much fun reading this highly imaginative story. The characters were strongly laid out and it was fun getting to know them.
July 2, 2024
Cliffhanger ending, but worthwhile read!
Found out I had an ARC for this when I discovered a forgotten NetGalley account. The story was enjoyable! It's an interesting story to follow Talon with his tiger, Rekala, and Sarlice with her tiger Kestric, along their journey to find allies for their respective countries. Much of the story resembles modern day religious wars. The cliffhanger ending did surprise me. I've downloaded the next book via Kindle Unlimited.
Disclosure: I received a free copy from NetGalley.
Found out I had an ARC for this when I discovered a forgotten NetGalley account. The story was enjoyable! It's an interesting story to follow Talon with his tiger, Rekala, and Sarlice with her tiger Kestric, along their journey to find allies for their respective countries. Much of the story resembles modern day religious wars. The cliffhanger ending did surprise me. I've downloaded the next book via Kindle Unlimited.
Disclosure: I received a free copy from NetGalley.
September 8, 2017
I enjoyed how Talon interacted with the ice tiger, and the story as a whole was very imaginative. The writing style was not my cup of tea, but that is a personal choice and should not sway others from reading these stories.
August 25, 2018
I really enjoyed this fantasy adventure with animal shifters and a battle of good and evil. My rating 4.5.
Talon is on the cusp of manhood when he finally meets his "Rada-kin”, the animal companion which allows his telepathy and shifter skills to emerge. Talon’s special animal is a powerful icetiger which brings him quick respect from most of his clan. Talon’s people are Kriites who believe in a loving God (Krii) who takes the shape of a wolf and who helps the people through ‘magic’ of nature and spirit. Although the Kriites want to live in peace, they are being enslaved and killed by the cruel Zeikas who consider those who believe in any God but theirs (Zei) as inferior infidels.
The Zeikas have powerful magic which includes demon summoning but they do not have the strength of the telepathy that the Kriites have. A ruthless Zeika leader, Bar Harrar, believes he can take over Talon’s magical skills – or he will eliminate him if his plan to control him doesn’t work.
Talon’s town is attacked as the Zeikas seek to capture him. The town elders send Talon on a quest to discover the full extent of his powers hoping he can return as a strong leader to help them. They agree that a visiting ambassador, Sarlice, who has more experience, can serve as Talon’s guide to first travel together to seek the King’s assistance and protection against the Zeikas for their respective clans. The two young adults set off with their animal companions to make the dangerous journey with enemy Zeikas abounding and hope of allies unsure.
The characters are nicely developed with relatable emotions. I enjoyed the fun interaction between Talon and his icetiger as they get to know each other and their world perspectives. The world building is creative and workable and there is plenty of fighting action to keep things interesting. It was clear early in the story that this has allegorical elements of Christian faith, love and peace having to face a world full of wicked, evil, power seeking enemies. I like the good versus evil battle aspects as well as the telepathic and animal shifter magic so it is an engaging package for me.
The book is a good start to a series and ends with the companions being chased into the next mysterious land for Talon’s quest. I will be looking to pick up the next book. This is appropriate for YA reading but I recommend this to all readers who enjoy fantasy with sword play and shape shifting.
Source: NetGalley 2017.
Talon is on the cusp of manhood when he finally meets his "Rada-kin”, the animal companion which allows his telepathy and shifter skills to emerge. Talon’s special animal is a powerful icetiger which brings him quick respect from most of his clan. Talon’s people are Kriites who believe in a loving God (Krii) who takes the shape of a wolf and who helps the people through ‘magic’ of nature and spirit. Although the Kriites want to live in peace, they are being enslaved and killed by the cruel Zeikas who consider those who believe in any God but theirs (Zei) as inferior infidels.
The Zeikas have powerful magic which includes demon summoning but they do not have the strength of the telepathy that the Kriites have. A ruthless Zeika leader, Bar Harrar, believes he can take over Talon’s magical skills – or he will eliminate him if his plan to control him doesn’t work.
Talon’s town is attacked as the Zeikas seek to capture him. The town elders send Talon on a quest to discover the full extent of his powers hoping he can return as a strong leader to help them. They agree that a visiting ambassador, Sarlice, who has more experience, can serve as Talon’s guide to first travel together to seek the King’s assistance and protection against the Zeikas for their respective clans. The two young adults set off with their animal companions to make the dangerous journey with enemy Zeikas abounding and hope of allies unsure.
The characters are nicely developed with relatable emotions. I enjoyed the fun interaction between Talon and his icetiger as they get to know each other and their world perspectives. The world building is creative and workable and there is plenty of fighting action to keep things interesting. It was clear early in the story that this has allegorical elements of Christian faith, love and peace having to face a world full of wicked, evil, power seeking enemies. I like the good versus evil battle aspects as well as the telepathic and animal shifter magic so it is an engaging package for me.
The book is a good start to a series and ends with the companions being chased into the next mysterious land for Talon’s quest. I will be looking to pick up the next book. This is appropriate for YA reading but I recommend this to all readers who enjoy fantasy with sword play and shape shifting.
Source: NetGalley 2017.
April 3, 2016
This fantasy adventure begins with a young man named Talon, he's a quartermaster's apprentice to Bessed, who is also his Foster father, and a Gatherer. He is also a follower of the Lightmaker.
He has been waiting, hoping and praying to become bonded to an animal who will in turn become a sentient begin when bonded. Being bonded allows both animal and person traits from the other and the ability to change shapes for both of the bonded. Rada-kin as they are known. When he is bonded to an Icetiger his world changes, not only is she fierce and rare but her kind are usually bonded to Warriors Not Gatherers.
While running an errand for Bessed to get fish, because fish haven too few in their section of the river lately, something terrible happens to them and his Icetiger who has named herself Rekala meaning Fury is taken by the Zeika.
With her help he manages to escape and makes it to a family members house with severe burns on his hands. Devastated that he had to leave Rekala behind but knowing he has to heal before he can rescue her he spends the time at his family’s healing and trying to come up with a plan to rescue her. While thinking about Rekala he hears a strange voice in his head trying to reassure him that they will get her back. Finding out that his was Rada was a big deal but to be Anzaii too, the Lightmaker really blessed him!
2 gifts from the Lightmaker, Tiaro his Anzaii- kin is a spirt gift, and she will be guiding him spiritually.
Upon his return to his village there is a Zeika raid and they take most of his people, as one of the only people able to fight left he sets out to free them and his Rada-kin Rekala. Using his Anzaii - kin Tiaro and the help of another Rada-kin from Lilth he is able to free his people and his beloved Rekala.
After the rescue of his people he realizes that they need him so much more than he thought and in order to be what they need him to be, he has to go on a pilgrimage to Tanza and Watercrag to find out if he is Sleffion and Tolite, without that he cannot be named Wave Master.
That is the beginning of this fanciful adventure and I hope there is more to come.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and I will be watching out for the next book in the series.
He has been waiting, hoping and praying to become bonded to an animal who will in turn become a sentient begin when bonded. Being bonded allows both animal and person traits from the other and the ability to change shapes for both of the bonded. Rada-kin as they are known. When he is bonded to an Icetiger his world changes, not only is she fierce and rare but her kind are usually bonded to Warriors Not Gatherers.
While running an errand for Bessed to get fish, because fish haven too few in their section of the river lately, something terrible happens to them and his Icetiger who has named herself Rekala meaning Fury is taken by the Zeika.
With her help he manages to escape and makes it to a family members house with severe burns on his hands. Devastated that he had to leave Rekala behind but knowing he has to heal before he can rescue her he spends the time at his family’s healing and trying to come up with a plan to rescue her. While thinking about Rekala he hears a strange voice in his head trying to reassure him that they will get her back. Finding out that his was Rada was a big deal but to be Anzaii too, the Lightmaker really blessed him!
2 gifts from the Lightmaker, Tiaro his Anzaii- kin is a spirt gift, and she will be guiding him spiritually.
Upon his return to his village there is a Zeika raid and they take most of his people, as one of the only people able to fight left he sets out to free them and his Rada-kin Rekala. Using his Anzaii - kin Tiaro and the help of another Rada-kin from Lilth he is able to free his people and his beloved Rekala.
After the rescue of his people he realizes that they need him so much more than he thought and in order to be what they need him to be, he has to go on a pilgrimage to Tanza and Watercrag to find out if he is Sleffion and Tolite, without that he cannot be named Wave Master.
That is the beginning of this fanciful adventure and I hope there is more to come.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and I will be watching out for the next book in the series.
July 23, 2016
Original Review Here
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
A fantasy novel with soul-bonds and various types of magic meant Talon sounded right up my street. I was looking forward to reading it even if just because it’s rare animal-bonds are made with creatures such as tigers. While I enjoyed Talon, I felt it got stronger as it went along.
When I focus on what the plot is truly about, it’s the standard boy-becomes-man story as Talon must learn what he is capable of and accept responsibility with his new powers. This world was refreshing original though and although I have read soul-bond stories before, this had a few new twists. Mainly the fact that once bonded, both Rada and Rada-kin (man and beast) could then shape-shift into any form they desired.
The characters were standard for this type of novel. Talon was likeable but made rash decisions, giving him the chance to grow. Sarlice was a capable warrior, but felt downplayed a lot and Lira was the typical temptress who gave me a bad feeling from the beginning.
The second half of Talon was stronger than the first. There were times during the beginning when I felt overwhelmed by the way the magic was being described and what the bonds meant. It felt as if there should have been a subtler way of explaining what was happening but the pace of the plot meant there wasn’t time.
Some of the description also was misleading. Lira was described as being a “pale frightened girl” when we are first introduced to her character. Talon himself is only around nineteen years old, so is hardly a man. When Lira then announces she is seventeen, it was jolting to find there was very little difference in their ages, yet Talon is becoming a man and Lira still a frightened girl. The actions between the two of them also made little sense until the ages had been clarified.
Overall, I enjoyed this book though. It was full of adventure and magic and soul-searching (both literally and metaphorically). While there was a little confusion at times, it didn’t put me off the story and I will be happy to read the following book to see how things play out.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
A fantasy novel with soul-bonds and various types of magic meant Talon sounded right up my street. I was looking forward to reading it even if just because it’s rare animal-bonds are made with creatures such as tigers. While I enjoyed Talon, I felt it got stronger as it went along.
When I focus on what the plot is truly about, it’s the standard boy-becomes-man story as Talon must learn what he is capable of and accept responsibility with his new powers. This world was refreshing original though and although I have read soul-bond stories before, this had a few new twists. Mainly the fact that once bonded, both Rada and Rada-kin (man and beast) could then shape-shift into any form they desired.
The characters were standard for this type of novel. Talon was likeable but made rash decisions, giving him the chance to grow. Sarlice was a capable warrior, but felt downplayed a lot and Lira was the typical temptress who gave me a bad feeling from the beginning.
The second half of Talon was stronger than the first. There were times during the beginning when I felt overwhelmed by the way the magic was being described and what the bonds meant. It felt as if there should have been a subtler way of explaining what was happening but the pace of the plot meant there wasn’t time.
Some of the description also was misleading. Lira was described as being a “pale frightened girl” when we are first introduced to her character. Talon himself is only around nineteen years old, so is hardly a man. When Lira then announces she is seventeen, it was jolting to find there was very little difference in their ages, yet Talon is becoming a man and Lira still a frightened girl. The actions between the two of them also made little sense until the ages had been clarified.
Overall, I enjoyed this book though. It was full of adventure and magic and soul-searching (both literally and metaphorically). While there was a little confusion at times, it didn’t put me off the story and I will be happy to read the following book to see how things play out.
March 29, 2016
I received Talon from Netgalley for free in exchange for an honest review so here we go.
At the beginning of the book the scene is set in a really nice way and I would have liked that first page to be a bit more descriptive. While I enjoyed the fast pace of the novel some things seemed to happen way to fast. For one, Talon met Rekala in the first two pages of the novel before we’d even had the chance to figure out what Rada and Rada-kin was.
Thus leading to the second issue I had with this book, nearly everything was left to the reader to self interpret the words. While there was a glossary at the back I don’t think that makes up for the fact that I spent most of this book thoroughly confused over some foreign words and having to reread sections of the book to interpret what was going on. Personally the writing style was a bit annoying for me. I feel that if Talon had not known all he had it might have made it easier for the reader to relate with him because they would be learning alongside him, not constantly getting dumped with words and no explanations.
While I loved Talon as a character I felt that he almost seemed to have it too good too fast. Now I know that he got separated from Rekala multiple times throughout the book but the fact that he managed to bond with an ice tiger and then also bond with Tiaro in a matter of chapters seemed a bit unbelievable and I think that that could have been handled better.
Despite these flaws I loved the characters and the idea behind the Rada-kin. Being an animal lover I really loved the connection between the Rada and their animals.
Sarlice took a bit of time for me to warm up to and I really wish that we could have seen some parts of the story from her point of view. I would have loved to learn more about her weapon bond. In the end she turned out to be one of my favorite characters!
Towards the end of the book I was really, really enjoying it and the quick paced plot and intriguing storyline made up for the complete lack of any explanation whatsoever.
Over all I enjoyed this but not to a great extent.
March 29, 2016
Talon is a young man just coming into his abilities. He happens upon an icetiger and confirms he is a Rada--one who shares a telepathic bond with an animal companion. And that means he also has a shapeshifting ability. But he also soon learns he may have more abilities than he imagined. When his homeland comes under attack by the Zeikas, a militant people who worship the fire-god, Zeidarb, Talon must rise against them. His abilities make him the best defense his people have. But the leader of the Zeikas is aware of Talon and his abilities, and he seems set on capturing Talon for his own devices.
It's a lot of pressure to put on a young man like Talon. And he's no family left to rely on. So he needs to figure out who he can trust and who he can't. And he soon learns there are plenty of people on both sides of that line.
I always enjoy writers who can create a world with a high level of complexity and present it in an easy-to-follow manner. And that's exactly what Amanda Greenslade has accomplished here. There are places and people and abilities and tribes and gods...so many names and words to keep track of. Yet I never felt like I had any real trouble doing so. And there's a good mix of action and history, allowing readers to understand the context without needing to read a whole chapter of the history of the world to understand it.
I'm intrigued by this book, to be honest. I sort of stumbled upon it without really hearing much about it. But I'm glad I did. It's an interesting start to what I'm hoping will be a great fantasy series.
[Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.]
It's a lot of pressure to put on a young man like Talon. And he's no family left to rely on. So he needs to figure out who he can trust and who he can't. And he soon learns there are plenty of people on both sides of that line.
I always enjoy writers who can create a world with a high level of complexity and present it in an easy-to-follow manner. And that's exactly what Amanda Greenslade has accomplished here. There are places and people and abilities and tribes and gods...so many names and words to keep track of. Yet I never felt like I had any real trouble doing so. And there's a good mix of action and history, allowing readers to understand the context without needing to read a whole chapter of the history of the world to understand it.
I'm intrigued by this book, to be honest. I sort of stumbled upon it without really hearing much about it. But I'm glad I did. It's an interesting start to what I'm hoping will be a great fantasy series.
[Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.]
August 10, 2016
The good: I really did like this book, and liked it well enough to dive right into the sequel. I love human/animal bonding stories, and this book absolutely revels in the concept of mental bonding to animals, spirits, and other things. Shapeshifting is also a winner. The worldbuilding is very complex, details are rich, and the characters are well-fleshed out. Magic, psychic abilities, wolf gods, and more.
The not-so-good: Info-dumping occurs with industrial-sized construction equipment. I don't actually mind a little info-dumping, but there's nothing little about it, here. Overexplaining is also present. The cultural explaining gets tedious in places, breaking immersion. Many of the commonly-used words are unpronounceable at a glance. (How the heck do you deal with that double 'i')? The MC may be a bit of a Marty Stu. His only flaw seems to be a justifiable wrath, which everyone is trying to help him overcome, so we know he'll do it.
The not-good, not-bad, but notable: This books is way more Christian than Narnia, and boy the religious overtones are driven home using a sledgehammer. The names and details of the mythos may be different, but the Christian metaphysics, beliefs, and mindsets are relentless. The division is presented as very black and white - the bad guys are all bad, the good guys are all good. This book is almost entirely ABOUT religion, which given the current issues in the world, is more than a little hard to take in a fantasy - especially since it definitely takes sides. But if that's your thing, you'll love it.
The not-so-good: Info-dumping occurs with industrial-sized construction equipment. I don't actually mind a little info-dumping, but there's nothing little about it, here. Overexplaining is also present. The cultural explaining gets tedious in places, breaking immersion. Many of the commonly-used words are unpronounceable at a glance. (How the heck do you deal with that double 'i')? The MC may be a bit of a Marty Stu. His only flaw seems to be a justifiable wrath, which everyone is trying to help him overcome, so we know he'll do it.
The not-good, not-bad, but notable: This books is way more Christian than Narnia, and boy the religious overtones are driven home using a sledgehammer. The names and details of the mythos may be different, but the Christian metaphysics, beliefs, and mindsets are relentless. The division is presented as very black and white - the bad guys are all bad, the good guys are all good. This book is almost entirely ABOUT religion, which given the current issues in the world, is more than a little hard to take in a fantasy - especially since it definitely takes sides. But if that's your thing, you'll love it.
April 19, 2016
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
The Good
Revolving around an amazing world and a brilliant magical system, this was the start of an awesome adventure series. The world was rich in its development and its history. I also liked the fact that the main characters were often around members of those they were trying to escape. The tension between the Kriites and the Zeikas in places where they were forced to accept one another without disturbing the peace was interesting and well-captured throughout the book.
The Bad
I felt like there was a lot of info-dumping, and there were several times I had to wade back through what I had just read because it went over my head in complexity thanks to similar names/ideas between various things. It was one of those books probably best read in paperback form (especially for someone like me who looks back and forth to maps while reading) rather than eBook form.
In a way, this book read like a history book rather than an fantasy adventure, which could work sometimes, but I didn't really like it for this book.
The Review
It was not a bad book by any stretch of the imagination. However, the feeling of info-dumping while on the run from Zeikas followed by strained moments while in the presence of Zeika who may or may not have been there to capture Talon drew me out of the story.
The Good
Revolving around an amazing world and a brilliant magical system, this was the start of an awesome adventure series. The world was rich in its development and its history. I also liked the fact that the main characters were often around members of those they were trying to escape. The tension between the Kriites and the Zeikas in places where they were forced to accept one another without disturbing the peace was interesting and well-captured throughout the book.
The Bad
I felt like there was a lot of info-dumping, and there were several times I had to wade back through what I had just read because it went over my head in complexity thanks to similar names/ideas between various things. It was one of those books probably best read in paperback form (especially for someone like me who looks back and forth to maps while reading) rather than eBook form.
In a way, this book read like a history book rather than an fantasy adventure, which could work sometimes, but I didn't really like it for this book.
The Review
It was not a bad book by any stretch of the imagination. However, the feeling of info-dumping while on the run from Zeikas followed by strained moments while in the presence of Zeika who may or may not have been there to capture Talon drew me out of the story.
September 2, 2016
Amanda Greenslade has done a bang up job of world building. The magic system is all based on what god you worship, different gods granting different powers. Our main character is Talon, a Rada, who is a shapeshifter with a telepathic bond to an icetiger. He's recently come into possession of some additional abilities and our protagonists, the Zeikas, are hunting for him because of it. They don't age and are granted powers over demons. Zeikas believe other faiths should be enslaved to them. Throughout the book Talon and his friend Sarlice are on the run from the Zeikas as they look to find help for their people.
Received an advance copy from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Received an advance copy from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
August 11, 2016
A coupleof exemple of truly pathetic this book is:
This is even better... SMH
Don't get me wrong, i have no problem with the MC having control over animals(it would have been better for him to gain the skill trough training), i have a problem with "God said so and so it is" explanation...
This is even better... SMH
Don't get me wrong, i have no problem with the MC having control over animals(it would have been better for him to gain the skill trough training), i have a problem with "God said so and so it is" explanation...
September 19, 2016
New world, New rules, great imagination
Think Lord of the rings, Narnia, and Pern, you will love this new world that ended much to quickly. Follow Talon, his different aspects, friends, and enemies. Learning how to change your shape and conversations with your colleagues is most profound for this 19 year old. Well-developed characterization and plot. Older YA due to violence.
Think Lord of the rings, Narnia, and Pern, you will love this new world that ended much to quickly. Follow Talon, his different aspects, friends, and enemies. Learning how to change your shape and conversations with your colleagues is most profound for this 19 year old. Well-developed characterization and plot. Older YA due to violence.
October 29, 2016
I read this book through Kindle Unlimited. I thought this book is an awesome young adult fantasy. It kept me hooked from beginning to end. The characters are well written and defined. The storyline and world building is great. The books is great from start to finish and I believe anyone who loves fantasy will like how well this books was written. Great job Amanda Greenslade, I love it and look forward to reading more of this series.
May 28, 2016
This is a very well written and enjoyable Young Adult story, the first in a projected series of eight books. It has a strong spiritual theme and well realised characters, in an action-packed adventure which finishes on a cliff-hanger - quite literally!
April 15, 2016
DNF :/
April 21, 2016
i found it an amazing read
July 1, 2016
Received for Review full Review to come on my blog
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