1/5 Stars (DNF @ 13%)
TL;DR - Really poor execution of what started out as an interesting premise. Should have been exactly my thing, but the lackluster writing was too much of a deterrent.
Big thanks to HarperCollin’s Children’s Books, Quill Tree Books, and NetGalley for providing the ARC for this book in exchange for an honest review!
‘Book, Beast, and Crow’ by Elizabeth Byrne is a paranormal YA that promises to be a “spine-tingling, genre-bending novel” about Anna Kellogg, a high school senior whose best friend is attacked and left for dead by the town urban legend. I wish I could tell you more, because this sounded like exactly my thing, but I just could not make myself keep reading it.
The premise is very interesting - small town with its own mythology going back centuries, walking the line between conspiracy theory and actual supernatural shenanigans, cryptic old women in the middle of a swamp - but the execution is just *so* lacking.
The flow of the narrative is all over the place - paragraphs are a constant mishmash of points with little cohesion. It constantly feels like the author is bringing up something completely out of left field just to segway into something semi-relevant to the current situation so as not to be pure info-dumping, but it ends up coming across as disjointed and borderline-nonsensical, just jumping from point to point to point. And then most of it actually is straight-up info-dumping, like, characters overhearing all this worldbuilding and nefarious planning from the (assumed) antagonists, that said antagonists wouldn’t be discussing because they themselves are already aware of all of it. Just really graceless and heavy-handed, and not fun to read.
There’s also a lot going on with very little description, with so many things happening with little to no explanation or fleshing out. Maybe this was done to try to keep the pace quick to build suspense or something, but what it comes across as is minimum effort, bare-bones prose.
Overall, I just couldn’t see spending several more hours getting no explanations when needed and then gratuitous info-dumping in the cheapest possible ways.
Final Thoughts:
Really disappointed, because at first glance, this has the makings of a book right up my alley. Will not be purchasing a physical copy.