There's nothing worse than a book that starts so well -- to the extent that you're convinced you're reading a new favourite -- but then descends into stale mediocrity. This book completely had me for the first two thirds and I was loving every second of it.
It starts with a man in the bathroom pondering if she should shave his moustache off or not. He decides to do it and when his wife, Agnes, returns from shopping he waits to see her reaction. But there is no reaction, something which he concludes must be her playing a trick on him, pretending not to notice. They have dinner with two friends, Serge and Veronique, both of whom also fail to notice he has removed his moustache leading him to believe that they, in collusion with Agnes, have agreed to play along with this charade. But on the way home, in the car, he gets tired of the game and confronts Agnes only to discover that she insists he never had a moustache. Slowly but surely, he begins to grow paranoid and even contemplates that his wife is losing her mind, or playing a very intricate game, or worse, deliberately encouraging him to question his sanity, perhaps even have him locked up.
Then the game accelerates at a pace, and, when discussing their trip to Java, his wife sighs and informs him that they have never been to Java. This spiralling sensation of unnerving madness then increases further when she also confirms that the two friends they had dinner with (Serge and Veronique) do not exist. And that his father, who he believes is alive, died many years ago. All of this results in him running away and believing that she is trying to poison his mind with lies. But why? What is the purpose?
These first two thirds of the book are spectacular and I loved them. They brought to mind the Tenant and other eerie books about the fragile nature of reality. Just fantastic to read, gripping, odd, creepy, and fascinating. It had so much potential and was on course for becoming a book I utterly adored, exploring all those inner fears we have about the world turning against us at any moment, that we're puppets being toyed with by a reality that is capricious. So... good!! But then the book just goes off the deep end. He runs off to Hong Kong and the book simply meanders here, drowsily, repetitively, for the whole final third, with inane descriptions of him going back and forth on the ferry, walking around, changing hotels -- it's all very bland and unengaging; and it slows the book down almost to a halt. It was just so dull compared to everything that came before it. Such a letdown.
The ending was equally disappointing. It offers no meaningful interpretation of events (whether it be hallucination, a deception, or something else). It isn't even very ambiguous. Essentially we're expected to believe that this was just a man having a psychotic breakdown, one without cause or solution. But this isn't how people have breakdowns in reality, only in literature. I wanted something more concrete or (preferably) something more vague and unsure. It doesn't really accomplish either and fails to truly reach the heights one hoped for at the beginning. All that Hong Kong nonsense was for nothing, and simply slowed everything down quite badly. Such a shame. The book had such a great start. I was so close to loving it.
4.5 for the first two thirds. 2.5 for the last third.