Late in the Day . . .
Red, White, and Blue
1. Red
What I loved about that much-snapped scarlet coat
Was the hunting-jacket look of the fitted waist
And tailored shoulder, the nifty, tricksy bounce
Of hemline hitting off your knee behind
And your knee in front.
‘She’s like a wee pony!’
Butter wouldn’t melt in that smiler’s mouth
So I smiled straight back, as who should say, ‘Good God,
You know you’re absolutely right.
I love the go and gladsomeness in her,
Something unbroken, her gift for pure dismay
At shits like you.’
And had the good fortune
To smile again into his peeky face
Later that night, as you jived with me hell for leather
In the Students Union, the cleared floor like a paddock
Where we gave each other rope and scope and snaffle,
‘Redingote!’ you’d cry.
And me, back, ‘Giddy up!’
2. White
The screaming from the pool was bad enough,
Busloads of school kids coming in on rota
To the baths next door, the banshee acoustic
Of the glass-and-iron dome upping the wildness
But in your state you thought the screaming came
From your labour ward.
At last-kiss, time-to-go time,
You were dry on the lips, hot-cheeked, already gone,
Drifting away on the high berg of the bed.
They had given you a cut-off top of sorts,
Plain as a flour-bag, orphanage-issue stuff,
White calico demure at the neckline
But unmistakably made for access
Elsewhere.
Through its laundered weave
I tried to call you back but your quarantine
Was making you touch-proof and my hand
That thought it knew its way got lost and shied.
Oh where was the thick of thickets, the hug and birl
Of pleasures wrought to anger and beyond?
Ahead of us, my love, the small-hours tournaments,
But that afternoon I left the lists and rode
From the sun-daunting keep of Castle Childbirth
And even though you knew as you lay contracting
Beyond it bastions that lilied moat
Was uncrossable, the drawbridge drawn up,
The battlements secure and audience
With the chatelaine denied, behind your eyes
Eye-tooth-tightened shut against the pangs,
What you still could not help making yourself see
Was the Knight of the White Feather turning tail.
3. Blue
‘Yes, pretty, vey pretty.’ How many times
Have you mimicked the entirely unaffected
And veh genuine touch of class she showed
In her praise of the gate-lodge and the avenue
At Castlebellingham. She was deigning
To bestow that much attention, and in the whim
Of her bestowals we felt ourselves included —
Hitchhikers who must have taken her fancy
Or her husband’s, whom I then took to be
Officer class in civvies on weekend leave
In southern Ireland, as he called it.
‘Tell me,
I mean, you know, in southern Ireland,
Houses like that, are there many of them left?
Your crowd burnt the lot down, did they not,
In the nineteen-twenties?
It then being
1963, we simply dived for cover
(‘We’re from the north’), or might surprise attack
With a quick torrent of names of towns
Burnt in reprisal. But her ‘pretty, veh pretty’,
Said with the half-interest she might display
Later that night, letting her warm silks fall
In the lamplight of some coaching inn in Wicklow,
Was like a reminder a goddess might vouchsafe
To recall a hero to his ardent purpose.
Doves or no doves, it was a Venus car
We had thumbed down after more than half an hour
On the bridge outside Dundalk. You rose before them
In a Fair Isle tank-top and blue denim skirt
And denim jacket. And much blue eye make-up.
A Botticelli dressed down for the sixties.
So their big waxed Rolls flows softly to a halt,
The running board comes level with the footpath
And we are borne — sweet diction — south and south.
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Red, White, and Blue was to me the most wonderful poem in this collection — a triptych word-painting of early days with his wife, Marie Devlin Heaney. I can’t figure out any connection to the American (or French, or British) flag. Instead, the colors shine from her youthful clothing and seem to represent her vivacious, independent spirit.
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In the collection as a whole, dedicated to Marie, some poems are marvelous, all are original and well-constructed, but only a few spoke to me — and I had difficulty discerning a theme until the short final section, where nearly every poem is dedicated to the memory of a dead poet or loved one. Then it coalesced: a collection of late-in-life, late-night memories, after the sun has gone down and only electric light remains. That light, a lamp in the dark, shines on the pages of old books of poetry, their authors long gone ahead of him. And in the final poem, entitled Electric Light, the young boy Seamus Heaney encounters electric light for the first time in the home of a hapless and "desperate" old woman who seems perhaps to be his grandmother, but the memory is not warm, but fearful, as he wept in the bedroom, with the light left on against his fear, and the woman was unable to console him.
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I feel that this collection could grow on me with time, and also that someone more familiar with the poets he “tributes” might get more from this collection than I did on my first round. Here is an excerpt from my favorite of those poignant, nostalgic poems: Clonmany to Ahascragh: in memory of Rory Kavanagh
Be at the door
I opened in the sleepwalk when a green
Hurl of flood overwhelmed me and poured out
Lithe seaweed and a tumult of immense
Green cabbage roses into the downstairs.
No feeling of drowning panicked me, no let-up
In the attic downpour happened, no
Fullness could ever equal it, so flown
And sealed I feared it would be lost
If I put it into words.
But with you there at the door
I can tell it and can weep.
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