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The day Jackson Kern walks into Taylor Andrews’s classroom is a momentous day in Taylor's life. He's had crushes before, sure, but as time goes on, this is starting to look a whole lot more serious. Still, Jackson doesn’t return Taylor’s feelings.
Taylor has his own admirers, though. Kevin Richards is used to getting what he wants, and what he wants right now is Taylor, so when Taylor rejects him, Kevin retaliates. At first Taylor’s entourage rallies around him, but then Kevin takes his deception one step further and Taylor sees his support dwindle, teaching him the valuable lesson about who he can truly consider a friend.
Taylor has his own admirers, though. Kevin Richards is used to getting what he wants, and what he wants right now is Taylor, so when Taylor rejects him, Kevin retaliates. At first Taylor’s entourage rallies around him, but then Kevin takes his deception one step further and Taylor sees his support dwindle, teaching him the valuable lesson about who he can truly consider a friend.
180 pages, Paperback
First published August 7, 2013
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About the author
Will Parkinson
3 books101 followersI began a love affair with m/m books when I first found "The Telling" by Eden Winters. I absolutely loved it. I wrote to her, letting her know what I thought of the story and that began a correspondence that has lasted since. At one time Eden asked me, "Do you have stories to tell?" I explained to her that I wrote when I was younger, but no longer. She asked why. I told her the tale of my father who told me I was wasting my time with writing and I stopped. Eden informed me that a writer never stops.
From that conversation I began to write again. First came Pitch, a young adult novel of Taylor and Jax. Surprisingly it got picked up by Harmony Ink and will be published in August or September, 2013.
From that conversation I began to write again. First came Pitch, a young adult novel of Taylor and Jax. Surprisingly it got picked up by Harmony Ink and will be published in August or September, 2013.
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August 8, 2013
2.5 stars
Hmmmm…I think reviewing this book will be a bit difficult for me. I am a fan of the author and enjoyed his other work “500 Miles”. However, this one…well for me personally, just didn’t connect.
0 – 70%: I can see someone who really is a YA “traditionalist” liking this. But, though I am a YA fan, this portion was just a little too…simplistic, unrealistic, and felt more like a book appropriate for a pre-teen or even younger audience. Juniors and Seniors in high school that I know don’t talk like or behave like the characters in this book (granted, I live in NY and that could partially explain the difference). And though I felt like there were some truly important issues being raised and dealt with throughout the story, the lack of realism made it read more like a storybook/”Don’t Talk To Strangers”-type PSA for kids.
70 – 100%: Well…sh*t just hit the fan and the story turned into a total over-the-top danger zone, I’m still confused what happened. A deranged, delusional, violent teen enters the mix and all the sudden Pleasantville turns into Crazytown filled w/ abuse, attacks, hospitals, cops…and me, with my jaw on the ground thinking “wait…what?”
I think what the author does well is lays out a very clear path for where the story will go. It’s the classic YA tale. There’s infatuation, there’s a closeted(‘ish) jock, there’s (assumed) unrequited affections, there’s the bitchy cheerleader girlfriend, there’s the awesome best friend. I’m a sucker for these stories.
But, the struggle for me was the characters felt more like caricatures of what teenagers should be and honestly, if the setting was junior high then this book might have worked. Behavior was either over-simplified (Jackson) or so over-the-top (Kevin) that I couldn’t take it seriously, despite, as mentioned, some very serious topics addressed.
I wanted so much to like this book more. But again, it just wasn’t for me. If you are a TRUE YA enthusiast (including very tame romance bits), then you might enjoy this one. If not, I’d say this isn’t for you…
May 13, 2018
Well, that was NOT at all what I'd expected going in, but in an unexpectedly good way.
You'd think I'd absolute hate a story where the MC's don't even really speak to one another until 56% into the story.
And normally? Oh, hell yeah! I'd be flaming the book to the ground in this review.
Yet, it somehow worked in this story.
Even though the MC's weren't together (yet), the story had tons of longing and feels, just not quite what I'd categorize as UST.
I loved how neither MC ever really gave up on the hopes of them finding their way to one another, in spite of a whole goddamn lot of interference by a bitchy, jealous cheerleader and a certifiably bat-shit crazy stalker/suitor.
My only real niggle about the book was when ASSHOLE KEVIN (I refuse to refer to him by any other name) made a reappearance and put Jackson's life in danger, all while blackmailing Taylor.
That last bit of drama felt pretty manufactured and I personally didn't need the story to be taken in that direction.
But at least the conflict in this story was entirely external, as both MC's knew in their hearts what they wanted right from the start. Everyone else's bullshit just needed to go fuck off.
This probably makes me a bad person, but I have to admit that when Taylor "got his choke on", I was rooting for him so hard.
Also of note, Benny, Taylor's best friend, was freaking amazing and I'm dying to read his book next. He was the type of best friend that anyone would be lucky to have by their side.
3.75 stars.
August 8, 2013
Well, I really enjoyed reading this one, but not as much as I thought I would. Lots of YA cliches, BFF's, complete cowpat of a 'girlfriend', the super jock who was in the closet...sorry Will, but 3.5 rounded up to 4
Jackson Kern walks into his new school one day, and Taylor Andrews is immediately smitten. Bitchy Becca (yes, another one) is asked by the teacher to look after Jackson and show him around. He's good for her ego being a jock, clever and hot, and I hated her from the start...these cheerleader types, brainless bimbos!! Taylor tells his BFF Benny about Jackson, and for the next few weeks, all Benny hears is 'Jackson this, and Jackson that'. Of course, Benny tries to persuade Taylor to actually talk to the guy, but Becca has convinced him (Taylor) that Jackson hates gays and will not take kindly to being spoken to by one, so Taylor continues to worship from afar, even attending the baseball practices which he hates but can't stay away from because of Jackson. At this point, I was getting a vibe which said yes, Jackson was interested in Taylor as he seemed to play better when Taylor was around...but I digress....
Taylor is still coming to terms with the fact that he likes guys and not girls, and Benny, his BFF, is totally cool with it. Benny is the super cool kid of the school, clever, kind, friendly...he's a lovely kid, and one any mum would be proud to call her own...including me. At one of the dances organised by the student committee of which Jackson is the chairman, a guy called Kevin shows up and starts chatting Taylor up, Taylor agrees to meet him the following weekend. Practically as soon as they get to Kevin's bedroom (what were you thinking Taylor..well, I know the answer to that, but come on!!), Kevin jumps on him and when Taylor protests, gets beaten up for his trouble by the psychopathic little git!!
I'll leave this review here, there are lots of twists and turns, I cried happy sappy tears and got so angry I wanted to kill someone, and then wanted to kick someone's backside cos he was such a wuss, but that was probably me being a little too harsh. So yes, I did really like the book, but I'm still debating whether it will be a keeper...it won't however stop me from reading more of Will's work.
August 9, 2013
Review posted at The Armchair Reader.
I'm always eager to pick up a baseball book and even though I've been interested in several and still plan to review a few of them, it has been a while since I've picked up a book from DSP's young adult imprint. From what I gather in the acknowledgements, this is Will Parkinson's debut novel. Sometimes it's a gamble picking books to read by a new author or an author I've never read, but that's another part of reviewing that I like. Reviewing gives me the opportunity to read new authors and it feels like I get to enjoy more of the perks, like finding a surprise that's worth it. Often, it's different though and while I like some of those books I also don't like some of them. I'm afraid to say that this book fell into the latter camp for me. While it wasn't a total disappointment, I just didn't connect with the book.
Taylor is a gay sophomore in a Milwaukee, Wisconsin high school. His best friend Benny is straight and the only person alive who knows his secret. They're best friends and always have been and Benny is a rather special guy that is wise beyond his years, intelligent and loyal. Pitch opens on the day that a new student starts at Taylor's school. Jackson walks into Taylor's homeroom, looking nervous and totally sexy and Taylor immediately wants to draw him. What follows over the next year is an intense unrequited love that just doesn't seem to go away, no matter how hard Taylor tries and Benny cautions. No matter how much Taylor is told that Jackson is disgusted by his little boy crush from Jackson's cheerleader girlfriend, Taylor just can't seem to stay away.
It isn't until he and Benny gain some perspective on their problems during the next summer, camp counseling for abused kids, that Taylor starts to grow up. He still has feelings for Jackson, but he's less likely now to follow him around like a lost puppy. So when a kid from a neighboring school asks him out during their Halloween dance, Taylor decides to take him up on it. He really starts to like Kevin, but he is prey unknowingly walking into Kevin's trap. It takes some extremely tough decisions and way too much heartbreak and drama to realize that much of what he thought before wasn't true, about most of the people he knew.
There are two aspects of this novella that I had a difficult time with. The first are the characters. This, especially, is subjective. Part of what oftentimes makes a young adult novel good are the bad choices of the characters. More often than not young adult stories have a moral and it can walk a fine line in the hands of the author between preachy and poignant. The style of this story went a bit over the top and that just wasn't something that I was really looking for. For high school students, who I freely admit can be some of the cruelest humans on Earth, many of the actions of these characters went beyond immature and foolhardy. I would have appreciated the characters and their decisions (even the bad ones) more if their actions had been more subtle and less ascribed to their particular archetype. Kevin's actions in particular required me to suspend disbelief a few times.
As I said before, those decisions and your own feelings about them are more subjective than usual. My other problem with this story was in the writing. I applaud this author for writing and writing and sharing their work. But like many new authors I think that there were some fundamental writing problems that this author needs to work on. Mostly it will just take continued writing, so even though this book wasn't for me, I sincerely hope that this author keeps up with it. Part of the novice prose problems were dialogue and restraint. In a way, the second has quite a bit to do with the first. This book didn't fall into too bad of a habit of telling rather than showing, but there is importance in letting the characters express themselves in their own ways instead of being a vehicle to express the author's view. I'm not talking about preaching about issues or anything like that here. I simply mean the difference between the characters' observations and personality and the author's. Almost continually there were times while reading this that I stopped and thought that a character wouldn't say or think that. The dialogue, in a similar way, oftentimes sounded familiar for all the characters and didn't seem to represent the individual characters. Restraint is important because readers don't need all the information. It's a partnership, you know? The readers picks up on the clues the author leaves and pieces them together and in that way one small action tells you more about the character than a whole page of narration.
Ultimately, this book just wasn't for me because of the more dramatic plot twists. I have seen a couple of 5-star reviews around so I'll be interested to see if any other readers/reviewers feel the way I do, or if this turns out to be a reader favorite. I've been a part of the more unpopular opinion before!
I'm always eager to pick up a baseball book and even though I've been interested in several and still plan to review a few of them, it has been a while since I've picked up a book from DSP's young adult imprint. From what I gather in the acknowledgements, this is Will Parkinson's debut novel. Sometimes it's a gamble picking books to read by a new author or an author I've never read, but that's another part of reviewing that I like. Reviewing gives me the opportunity to read new authors and it feels like I get to enjoy more of the perks, like finding a surprise that's worth it. Often, it's different though and while I like some of those books I also don't like some of them. I'm afraid to say that this book fell into the latter camp for me. While it wasn't a total disappointment, I just didn't connect with the book.
Taylor is a gay sophomore in a Milwaukee, Wisconsin high school. His best friend Benny is straight and the only person alive who knows his secret. They're best friends and always have been and Benny is a rather special guy that is wise beyond his years, intelligent and loyal. Pitch opens on the day that a new student starts at Taylor's school. Jackson walks into Taylor's homeroom, looking nervous and totally sexy and Taylor immediately wants to draw him. What follows over the next year is an intense unrequited love that just doesn't seem to go away, no matter how hard Taylor tries and Benny cautions. No matter how much Taylor is told that Jackson is disgusted by his little boy crush from Jackson's cheerleader girlfriend, Taylor just can't seem to stay away.
It isn't until he and Benny gain some perspective on their problems during the next summer, camp counseling for abused kids, that Taylor starts to grow up. He still has feelings for Jackson, but he's less likely now to follow him around like a lost puppy. So when a kid from a neighboring school asks him out during their Halloween dance, Taylor decides to take him up on it. He really starts to like Kevin, but he is prey unknowingly walking into Kevin's trap. It takes some extremely tough decisions and way too much heartbreak and drama to realize that much of what he thought before wasn't true, about most of the people he knew.
There are two aspects of this novella that I had a difficult time with. The first are the characters. This, especially, is subjective. Part of what oftentimes makes a young adult novel good are the bad choices of the characters. More often than not young adult stories have a moral and it can walk a fine line in the hands of the author between preachy and poignant. The style of this story went a bit over the top and that just wasn't something that I was really looking for. For high school students, who I freely admit can be some of the cruelest humans on Earth, many of the actions of these characters went beyond immature and foolhardy. I would have appreciated the characters and their decisions (even the bad ones) more if their actions had been more subtle and less ascribed to their particular archetype. Kevin's actions in particular required me to suspend disbelief a few times.
As I said before, those decisions and your own feelings about them are more subjective than usual. My other problem with this story was in the writing. I applaud this author for writing and writing and sharing their work. But like many new authors I think that there were some fundamental writing problems that this author needs to work on. Mostly it will just take continued writing, so even though this book wasn't for me, I sincerely hope that this author keeps up with it. Part of the novice prose problems were dialogue and restraint. In a way, the second has quite a bit to do with the first. This book didn't fall into too bad of a habit of telling rather than showing, but there is importance in letting the characters express themselves in their own ways instead of being a vehicle to express the author's view. I'm not talking about preaching about issues or anything like that here. I simply mean the difference between the characters' observations and personality and the author's. Almost continually there were times while reading this that I stopped and thought that a character wouldn't say or think that. The dialogue, in a similar way, oftentimes sounded familiar for all the characters and didn't seem to represent the individual characters. Restraint is important because readers don't need all the information. It's a partnership, you know? The readers picks up on the clues the author leaves and pieces them together and in that way one small action tells you more about the character than a whole page of narration.
Ultimately, this book just wasn't for me because of the more dramatic plot twists. I have seen a couple of 5-star reviews around so I'll be interested to see if any other readers/reviewers feel the way I do, or if this turns out to be a reader favorite. I've been a part of the more unpopular opinion before!
August 6, 2013
4 - 4.5
Let me start by saying I read this in one sitting. I was hooked, and I couldn’t put the story down. Way past midnight I finished, and I think that speaks a lot for my enjoyment of this story. This was a sweet, gentle read and who cares if I was a grumpy poobum today, it was worth it.
The things I liked:
How well this story portrays the hopes, yearnings, and starry-eyed moments of youth.
That the book explored not only romance—in fact, that was almost a side story in this book—but emotions of jealousy, self-doubt, and above all FRIENDSHIP. And that last one was a real treasure to read.
The thing I LOVED most:
Benny. Can I just swoon now? Please? He totally captured my heart. He’s the warmest, truest Best Friend ever! I wanted to be sucked into the pages, into their world, just so I could hug him and say thank you personally.
The ‘not quite my thing’:
The last twist in the book.
I’m a sensitive wee soul, and I hate to see anyone get hurt. Don’t let that put you off reading—there’s a very sweet HEA, but I was ready for Taylor and Jackson to walk off into the sunset after the first villain of the story is exposed, and the two of them come together.
I also wished there was more baseball games. I thought Jax could have been tested on the pitch in some way. I kept expecting he’d lose a game and then really figure out who his friends were.
Summing up:
This is a fun YA story that certainly brought me back to my own days at high school and my own unrequited crushes! In some ways, it was almost embarrassing thinking I had mooned and moped about just like Taylor, but that’s what I like about this story—it feels real to me. Though, I was never as rational and clear-headed as Taylor and Benny. Sometimes they were just a little too good.
I’m really anticipating Benny’s story now . . . there was one chapter in this book that was almost a set up for the next book, and I really want to read it from Benny’s point of view!
Can’t wait!
***written for mm good book reviews***
Let me start by saying I read this in one sitting. I was hooked, and I couldn’t put the story down. Way past midnight I finished, and I think that speaks a lot for my enjoyment of this story. This was a sweet, gentle read and who cares if I was a grumpy poobum today, it was worth it.
The things I liked:
How well this story portrays the hopes, yearnings, and starry-eyed moments of youth.
That the book explored not only romance—in fact, that was almost a side story in this book—but emotions of jealousy, self-doubt, and above all FRIENDSHIP. And that last one was a real treasure to read.
The thing I LOVED most:
Benny. Can I just swoon now? Please? He totally captured my heart. He’s the warmest, truest Best Friend ever! I wanted to be sucked into the pages, into their world, just so I could hug him and say thank you personally.
The ‘not quite my thing’:
The last twist in the book.
I’m a sensitive wee soul, and I hate to see anyone get hurt. Don’t let that put you off reading—there’s a very sweet HEA, but I was ready for Taylor and Jackson to walk off into the sunset after the first villain of the story is exposed, and the two of them come together.
I also wished there was more baseball games. I thought Jax could have been tested on the pitch in some way. I kept expecting he’d lose a game and then really figure out who his friends were.
Summing up:
This is a fun YA story that certainly brought me back to my own days at high school and my own unrequited crushes! In some ways, it was almost embarrassing thinking I had mooned and moped about just like Taylor, but that’s what I like about this story—it feels real to me. Though, I was never as rational and clear-headed as Taylor and Benny. Sometimes they were just a little too good.
I’m really anticipating Benny’s story now . . . there was one chapter in this book that was almost a set up for the next book, and I really want to read it from Benny’s point of view!
Can’t wait!
***written for mm good book reviews***
August 5, 2013
Pitch is a story about friendship, love, honesty, redemption, and most of all loyalty.
Mr. Parkinson has written a beautiful book, with some fantastic characters. You will absolutely fall in love with Benny. Taylor, too...but, Benny is beyond fabulous. One of the best, best friends I've read.
My emotions ran the gamut while reading this, I loved it so much. I laughed. I sighed. I was in shock. I swooned. And, I even shed a few tears. Will does such a great job of developing his characters, that you go through all of the stuff with them - you feel it all in your gut, too.
The friendship between Taylor and Benny is out of this world. The things that they accomplish, and help each other through, out of their mutual love, are such a joy to read. And, the romantic moments in the book, though few, are really lovely, and honest.
And, let's not forget the villian.... Ok. Lets. *shudders* Creepy stuff, folks.
I have several favorite moments, that I can't share, as I don't want to spoil anything; but, let's just say that you will love every moment of Pitch, and be so happy you read it. And, I hope that the end has you flailing like it did me!!
Mr. Parkinson has written a beautiful book, with some fantastic characters. You will absolutely fall in love with Benny. Taylor, too...but, Benny is beyond fabulous. One of the best, best friends I've read.
My emotions ran the gamut while reading this, I loved it so much. I laughed. I sighed. I was in shock. I swooned. And, I even shed a few tears. Will does such a great job of developing his characters, that you go through all of the stuff with them - you feel it all in your gut, too.
The friendship between Taylor and Benny is out of this world. The things that they accomplish, and help each other through, out of their mutual love, are such a joy to read. And, the romantic moments in the book, though few, are really lovely, and honest.
And, let's not forget the villian.... Ok. Lets. *shudders* Creepy stuff, folks.
I have several favorite moments, that I can't share, as I don't want to spoil anything; but, let's just say that you will love every moment of Pitch, and be so happy you read it. And, I hope that the end has you flailing like it did me!!
August 4, 2013
I just want to preface this review with how much I love this book. Now I know for all of my friends and family who have known me a long time, most don't necessarily agree with my genres of choice and quite frankly that doesnt really bother me too much any more. More like I feel bad that so many of my friends will never get to know how fantastic some of my favorite authors are.
BUT this book Pitch is, more than anything, the story of five kids coming of age. Yes it is young adult and yes it is MM romance but it is so much more than labels will allow.
Will Parkinson has always impressed me with his ability to write and allow us to understand and (in some cases) relive, the youth perspective. When I read his books I am in high school again, I am feeling the does he / doesn't he angst, I am excited about that first kiss, and apprehensive about if I am good enough to fit in. I am as nervous as Taylor, confused as Jax, protective as Benny, broken as Addy and jealous as Becca.
He simply has the ability to draw you into his world and want to know not just him but these people he has created and the hope that everyone deserves a happy ending.
I would recommend this book to the old and young, romance fan or not, and will also be getting my boys to read this when they are older, hopefully reinforcing what we have tried to live, that romance is romance and love is love no matter who the MC's are, gender, orientation, race, religion, etc...
Pitch is a beautiful, well written, journey back to our younger years, and a way of making some teenagers to realize that they are not alone in their feelings and instincts, and that there are people who truly understand. Please get it and read it, you will not be sorry.
BUT this book Pitch is, more than anything, the story of five kids coming of age. Yes it is young adult and yes it is MM romance but it is so much more than labels will allow.
Will Parkinson has always impressed me with his ability to write and allow us to understand and (in some cases) relive, the youth perspective. When I read his books I am in high school again, I am feeling the does he / doesn't he angst, I am excited about that first kiss, and apprehensive about if I am good enough to fit in. I am as nervous as Taylor, confused as Jax, protective as Benny, broken as Addy and jealous as Becca.
He simply has the ability to draw you into his world and want to know not just him but these people he has created and the hope that everyone deserves a happy ending.
I would recommend this book to the old and young, romance fan or not, and will also be getting my boys to read this when they are older, hopefully reinforcing what we have tried to live, that romance is romance and love is love no matter who the MC's are, gender, orientation, race, religion, etc...
Pitch is a beautiful, well written, journey back to our younger years, and a way of making some teenagers to realize that they are not alone in their feelings and instincts, and that there are people who truly understand. Please get it and read it, you will not be sorry.
June 18, 2023
2.5
so much trauma, so much drama.
so much trauma, so much drama.
August 9, 2013
The following is from the Author’s Bio at the end of “Pitch”; “He wanted his characters to have their happily ever after, but that doesn’t mean that it’s going to come easily.” That singular statement could not be more apt.
From the very beginning, Mr. Parkinson weaves a formidable and compelling story from a grand assortment of characters. This story will have you tears from the horrors beset Addy, the turmoil of Jackson’s life, to the ultimate price paid for by Taylor’s dread and obstinacy. Yes, you will be gutted, torn, and even shredded, but in the long run, Mr. Parkinson does deliver on his promise as stated in his bio. His characters will have their happily ever after.
Thank you Mr. Parkinson, for the afternoon of an emotional roller-coaster. I would not expect anything less of you. Well done and definitely praise worthy.
From the very beginning, Mr. Parkinson weaves a formidable and compelling story from a grand assortment of characters. This story will have you tears from the horrors beset Addy, the turmoil of Jackson’s life, to the ultimate price paid for by Taylor’s dread and obstinacy. Yes, you will be gutted, torn, and even shredded, but in the long run, Mr. Parkinson does deliver on his promise as stated in his bio. His characters will have their happily ever after.
Thank you Mr. Parkinson, for the afternoon of an emotional roller-coaster. I would not expect anything less of you. Well done and definitely praise worthy.
October 17, 2013
I found Pitch a wonderful story for many and varied reasons - the characters, the handling of very serious issues, the emotions, the happy ending!
Taylor and Jackson's journey was totally engaging and I enjoyed the emotional elements. The insight into Taylor's feelings was a sweet study of unrequited love and the details behind Jackson's own story came as a bit of surprise. There was something about both characters that drew me in.
The drama consists of scheming and deception to prevent Taylor and Jackson getting together, impacting both boys in an emotional way but also very serious violence caused by Kevin's retaliation against Taylor for rejecting his advances. It was so interesting to see violence portrayed in such a way and not the typical straight boy beating on the gay boy.
My only real concern was in relation to understanding how Jackson came to his conclusions about Taylor. Why did he admire him? Was it because of of his volunteering work or how he coped with all the issues around his coming out? I felt that he had never really spoken to Taylor to get to know him properly so found his comments about how he had admired him for so long a bit puzzling.
This book definitely had it's warm and fuzzy moments and the grand gestures and public proclamations which I totally love! But I think some of the secondary characters were actually highlights.
I loved Taylor's mum and dad and the subtle way his dad let Taylor know that he had nothing to worry about in coming out, that he would always be loved and nothing he could ever do would change that.
Benny is an absolutely wonderful best friend to Taylor. Every kid needs a best friend like Benny! "Tay, look...you know I love you in a completely nonsexual-keep-it-in-your-pants kind of way, but you really got to let this go, man. It's going to drive you nuts, which is going to drive me nuts in return." He has Taylor's best interests at heart and is supportive and encouraging. Some of the best lines in the book come from Benny's acceptance of his friend's sexuality. He is totally comfortable with Taylor to the point of being able to easily joke but his honesty is what I admired most - his ability to say what he felt....
"God, I swear... if you were a girl, you would be so mine," Benny said quietly.
Taylor laughed. "You could always come over the dark side, dude."
"The think is, sometimes, if I could, I think I'd do it just so I could be with you," came the whispered answer.
So please, Will, may we have some more of Benny's story next?
I publish all my m/m reviews on my blog so if you want to see all my m/m reviews in one place come visit at Because Two Men Are Better Than One!
Taylor and Jackson's journey was totally engaging and I enjoyed the emotional elements. The insight into Taylor's feelings was a sweet study of unrequited love and the details behind Jackson's own story came as a bit of surprise. There was something about both characters that drew me in.
The drama consists of scheming and deception to prevent Taylor and Jackson getting together, impacting both boys in an emotional way but also very serious violence caused by Kevin's retaliation against Taylor for rejecting his advances. It was so interesting to see violence portrayed in such a way and not the typical straight boy beating on the gay boy.
My only real concern was in relation to understanding how Jackson came to his conclusions about Taylor. Why did he admire him? Was it because of of his volunteering work or how he coped with all the issues around his coming out? I felt that he had never really spoken to Taylor to get to know him properly so found his comments about how he had admired him for so long a bit puzzling.
This book definitely had it's warm and fuzzy moments and the grand gestures and public proclamations which I totally love! But I think some of the secondary characters were actually highlights.
I loved Taylor's mum and dad and the subtle way his dad let Taylor know that he had nothing to worry about in coming out, that he would always be loved and nothing he could ever do would change that.
Benny is an absolutely wonderful best friend to Taylor. Every kid needs a best friend like Benny! "Tay, look...you know I love you in a completely nonsexual-keep-it-in-your-pants kind of way, but you really got to let this go, man. It's going to drive you nuts, which is going to drive me nuts in return." He has Taylor's best interests at heart and is supportive and encouraging. Some of the best lines in the book come from Benny's acceptance of his friend's sexuality. He is totally comfortable with Taylor to the point of being able to easily joke but his honesty is what I admired most - his ability to say what he felt....
"God, I swear... if you were a girl, you would be so mine," Benny said quietly.
Taylor laughed. "You could always come over the dark side, dude."
"The think is, sometimes, if I could, I think I'd do it just so I could be with you," came the whispered answer.
So please, Will, may we have some more of Benny's story next?
I publish all my m/m reviews on my blog so if you want to see all my m/m reviews in one place come visit at Because Two Men Are Better Than One!
August 10, 2013
4 Stars
A "Live Your Life, Buy The Book" Review
That was pretty damn sweet. I wish I had been like these boys in High School. Very good and sure of what they wanted. Through that want they learned more about themselves and became better people. That desire to make the person you love proud and to be worthy of their admiration. Even if they don’t love you, you want them to be happy. Very romantic and pure. I really enjoyed the day-to-day growth of these guys.
Taylor falls for Jackson the minute he walks into home room. He can’t get the guy out of his mind, even though the schools social-climbing school hussy has claimed him for herself. Jackson doesn’t seem to mind, so Taylor assumes he must be straight. Doesn’t make him want him any less. Taylor actually starts going to Jackson’s baseball games and sketching Jackson on and off the field. Not something he’d ever do if he wasn’t crushing on a player. Taylor decides that since he can’t get over his crush, he’ll just be happy to spend any time he can with Jackson. Meaning he signs up for every activity possible. It’s really the only way he can be there for Jackson since they never speak to each other.
Jackson is new to another school. He should be used to it based on all the bouncing around he and his dad have done, but this time it’s different. This time he’s staying through graduation and he wants to finally belong. Do the things he’s never been able to stick around and do. He becomes the star pitcher and student council president. Making a real difference in their community. He’s popular and has friends. All things he’s always wanted.
Thanks to the help of the hussy who redeems herself, kind of, they pine for each other from afar. Until the prom! I know it sounds dramatic and it kind of was. Jackson realizes that she’d been keeping them apart with lies.
Basically this was a young adult romance. No sex but I didn’t really miss it. Very cute characters. The story is told strictly from Taylor’s POV so most of the book you’re guessing what Jackson is thinking. I loved Taylor’s best friend Benny. He was smart, funny and loyal. All around good guy who was always there for Taylor.
Now, the baddie stalker I didn’t love. Not because he was bad, but because he was a little of the top on page. He was believable off page and I despised him plenty. I think the situation with him blackmailing Taylor wasn’t terribly realistic for as smart of a kid as Taylor is. AND that he was a teenager.
Yay! Another YA book I enjoyed. Who knew? I know so many people who will love this. It’s a sweet coming of age story about two boys finding their way to each other.
A "Live Your Life, Buy The Book" Review
That was pretty damn sweet. I wish I had been like these boys in High School. Very good and sure of what they wanted. Through that want they learned more about themselves and became better people. That desire to make the person you love proud and to be worthy of their admiration. Even if they don’t love you, you want them to be happy. Very romantic and pure. I really enjoyed the day-to-day growth of these guys.
Taylor falls for Jackson the minute he walks into home room. He can’t get the guy out of his mind, even though the schools social-climbing school hussy has claimed him for herself. Jackson doesn’t seem to mind, so Taylor assumes he must be straight. Doesn’t make him want him any less. Taylor actually starts going to Jackson’s baseball games and sketching Jackson on and off the field. Not something he’d ever do if he wasn’t crushing on a player. Taylor decides that since he can’t get over his crush, he’ll just be happy to spend any time he can with Jackson. Meaning he signs up for every activity possible. It’s really the only way he can be there for Jackson since they never speak to each other.
Jackson is new to another school. He should be used to it based on all the bouncing around he and his dad have done, but this time it’s different. This time he’s staying through graduation and he wants to finally belong. Do the things he’s never been able to stick around and do. He becomes the star pitcher and student council president. Making a real difference in their community. He’s popular and has friends. All things he’s always wanted.
Thanks to the help of the hussy who redeems herself, kind of, they pine for each other from afar. Until the prom! I know it sounds dramatic and it kind of was. Jackson realizes that she’d been keeping them apart with lies.
Basically this was a young adult romance. No sex but I didn’t really miss it. Very cute characters. The story is told strictly from Taylor’s POV so most of the book you’re guessing what Jackson is thinking. I loved Taylor’s best friend Benny. He was smart, funny and loyal. All around good guy who was always there for Taylor.
Now, the baddie stalker I didn’t love. Not because he was bad, but because he was a little of the top on page. He was believable off page and I despised him plenty. I think the situation with him blackmailing Taylor wasn’t terribly realistic for as smart of a kid as Taylor is. AND that he was a teenager.
Yay! Another YA book I enjoyed. Who knew? I know so many people who will love this. It’s a sweet coming of age story about two boys finding their way to each other.
August 12, 2013
I have an Author friend to thank for introducing me to this book and the Author. This has to be one of the best YA books I have read for a while I’ve gone in melt down this story will stay with me for a while.
It’s a well written book with a storyline that will break your heart in a good way and bad way. It flows nicely I didn’t want to put this book down till I finished it and read it in one sitting.
I cried, I laughed, I smiled I even wanted to hurt some people and I just loved everything about this book. It was heart wrenching at times but oh I needed that ending so bad I really can’t put into word how good this book is.
You will take the Character’s to heart especially Taylor, Jackson, Addy and Benny well to be honest I would add Becca and Kevin to that to.
Taylor I just loved he tried to hide that he was Gay only his best friend Benny knew but when Jackson walked in the classroom that was it Taylor was head over heels. He watched Jackson play Baseball his rise in the school and Becca stake her claim. Now Becca what a bitch she is I could of slapped her hard she lied to Taylor and Jackson because she wanted Jackson to herself. Then we have Benny I can’t put it to words how much I love Benny all I can say I wish I had someone in my life like him. Then we meet Addy he totally broke my heart and I did pick up pretty quickly how things would play out for him and someone else. And then Kevin messed up obsessive Kevin what he does to Taylor and Jackson is very dark but loves wins the day and I cried at the ending.
I don’t Re-read books but this story has captured me and I will read it again in the future I highly highly recommend this book.
It’s a well written book with a storyline that will break your heart in a good way and bad way. It flows nicely I didn’t want to put this book down till I finished it and read it in one sitting.
I cried, I laughed, I smiled I even wanted to hurt some people and I just loved everything about this book. It was heart wrenching at times but oh I needed that ending so bad I really can’t put into word how good this book is.
You will take the Character’s to heart especially Taylor, Jackson, Addy and Benny well to be honest I would add Becca and Kevin to that to.
Taylor I just loved he tried to hide that he was Gay only his best friend Benny knew but when Jackson walked in the classroom that was it Taylor was head over heels. He watched Jackson play Baseball his rise in the school and Becca stake her claim. Now Becca what a bitch she is I could of slapped her hard she lied to Taylor and Jackson because she wanted Jackson to herself. Then we have Benny I can’t put it to words how much I love Benny all I can say I wish I had someone in my life like him. Then we meet Addy he totally broke my heart and I did pick up pretty quickly how things would play out for him and someone else. And then Kevin messed up obsessive Kevin what he does to Taylor and Jackson is very dark but loves wins the day and I cried at the ending.
I don’t Re-read books but this story has captured me and I will read it again in the future I highly highly recommend this book.
dnf
September 29, 2013Funny, how different opinions can be. For me this book didn't work. I'm rather proud that I made it up to 47% but that's about it now. And I don't think that I'll give it another try later, nope, sorry. It started with the evil girlfriend, moved on to the speech with recapturing the sob-story that was the love-interests life and then came the Kevin-desaster. On top of all that there were stilted dialogues and the whole book felt unbalanced.
December 20, 2014
Thank you!!
Totally got this book. As a young male I connected with the character Taylor within the first few pages. I wanted to hit him sometimes which means he is normal.
Loved Benny and knew his secret pretty early on.
I am rushing off to buy Wet Paint.
Thanks again for a great book and loss of sleep Mr Parkinson.
Totally got this book. As a young male I connected with the character Taylor within the first few pages. I wanted to hit him sometimes which means he is normal.
Loved Benny and knew his secret pretty early on.
I am rushing off to buy Wet Paint.
Thanks again for a great book and loss of sleep Mr Parkinson.
August 8, 2013
BUY IT!! So worth it!!!
September 14, 2013
High School is a tough place to be--even tougher if you are walking around with a secret that, if discovered, could change your life forever, and not necessarily in a good way. Taylor Andrews is gay. His best friend, Benny, is the only one who knows and Taylor would like to keep it that way. His resolve was fairly strong, until Jackson Kern arrived at school. Jackson was everything Taylor was not--confident, athletic, and unfortunately, straight, or so Taylor believes. As Taylor tries to strike up a friendship with Jackson, It does not help that the class queen bee who regularly attaches herself to the popular boys has her sights fixed on Jackson as well. While that might be just fine otherwise, poor Taylor is drawn more and more to Jackson, far beyond any normal high school crush.
As time goes on, Taylor finds himself watching Jackson in baseball practice, attending games he never even cared about before, and joining committees that student council president, Jackson, had created. As Taylor falls harder than before for the seemingly unattainable team pitcher, there is someone watching him...and little does he know that Kevin Richards has much more in mind than a casual date.
Pitch delves deeply into some very murky and anxious teenage waters, all very believable and all very emotionally charged. If you are thinking that this is a "typical" YA story about a boy whose parents misunderstand him or who ants to remain firmly locked in the closet, think again. There is nothing typical about the way in which author, Will Parkinson, writes Taylor Andrew's story. This is a riveting tale that touches upon coming out, abuse, stalking and emotional blackmail. Not your typical YA novel at all--ever so much better, ever so much more compelling.
We watch with something akin to horror as Taylor's life devolves into a nightmare from which we are not certain he will survive. His dogged determination to shield both his boyfriend, Jackson, and his best friend, Benny, places Taylor in a spot where his only recourse is to keep silent and endure the abusive relationship he has been forced into by Kevin Richards. Here is where Will Parkinson's writing really shines. Up until this point the story was good, carefully laying the foundation of a sweet high school love that manages to survive despite those who are determined to keep the boys apart. Now, just when Mr. Parkinson is poised to give us the happy ever after we were hoping for, he throws in a curve and his writing goes from good to outstanding. A healthy dose of angst, a nail biting climax and a sweet little surprise ending made Pitch one of the better YA novels I have read this year.
Will Parkinson continues to evolve as an author, each of his successive works beginning with his short story, 500 Miles, has produced richer characters, more involved plot lines and a more fully developed story overall. I enjoyed Pitch for many reasons. First, the voice with which Mr. Parkinson wrote his teenagers was realistic. These were kids with problems and there were not easy fixes for them, instead, there was grit and truth. His characters were messy, at times volatile, incredibly courageous and loyal. They breathed life into this story and, in doing so, allowed us to glimpse just a bit of ourselves in a time gone by.
Pitch demanded your attention. This was no simple love story. Here was an intricate plot with twists and turns that kept the reader on the edge of their seat. A nail-biter at times, a sweet love story at others but always compelling. Finally, the true mark of an enjoyable read for me is that when the last word dropped on the page, I wanted more, the next chapter, the next story. Rumor has it, I may just get my wish.
So, once again I find myself encouraging you to watch an author, int his case, Will Parkinson, writer of a really fine YA novel that goes by the name of Pitch. I believe we will continue to see great stories from this author's pen.
As time goes on, Taylor finds himself watching Jackson in baseball practice, attending games he never even cared about before, and joining committees that student council president, Jackson, had created. As Taylor falls harder than before for the seemingly unattainable team pitcher, there is someone watching him...and little does he know that Kevin Richards has much more in mind than a casual date.
Pitch delves deeply into some very murky and anxious teenage waters, all very believable and all very emotionally charged. If you are thinking that this is a "typical" YA story about a boy whose parents misunderstand him or who ants to remain firmly locked in the closet, think again. There is nothing typical about the way in which author, Will Parkinson, writes Taylor Andrew's story. This is a riveting tale that touches upon coming out, abuse, stalking and emotional blackmail. Not your typical YA novel at all--ever so much better, ever so much more compelling.
We watch with something akin to horror as Taylor's life devolves into a nightmare from which we are not certain he will survive. His dogged determination to shield both his boyfriend, Jackson, and his best friend, Benny, places Taylor in a spot where his only recourse is to keep silent and endure the abusive relationship he has been forced into by Kevin Richards. Here is where Will Parkinson's writing really shines. Up until this point the story was good, carefully laying the foundation of a sweet high school love that manages to survive despite those who are determined to keep the boys apart. Now, just when Mr. Parkinson is poised to give us the happy ever after we were hoping for, he throws in a curve and his writing goes from good to outstanding. A healthy dose of angst, a nail biting climax and a sweet little surprise ending made Pitch one of the better YA novels I have read this year.
Will Parkinson continues to evolve as an author, each of his successive works beginning with his short story, 500 Miles, has produced richer characters, more involved plot lines and a more fully developed story overall. I enjoyed Pitch for many reasons. First, the voice with which Mr. Parkinson wrote his teenagers was realistic. These were kids with problems and there were not easy fixes for them, instead, there was grit and truth. His characters were messy, at times volatile, incredibly courageous and loyal. They breathed life into this story and, in doing so, allowed us to glimpse just a bit of ourselves in a time gone by.
Pitch demanded your attention. This was no simple love story. Here was an intricate plot with twists and turns that kept the reader on the edge of their seat. A nail-biter at times, a sweet love story at others but always compelling. Finally, the true mark of an enjoyable read for me is that when the last word dropped on the page, I wanted more, the next chapter, the next story. Rumor has it, I may just get my wish.
So, once again I find myself encouraging you to watch an author, int his case, Will Parkinson, writer of a really fine YA novel that goes by the name of Pitch. I believe we will continue to see great stories from this author's pen.
August 8, 2013
Don’t let others choose the kind of person you’re going to be.
That line right there is the theme of this book. From the moment we meet Taylor Andrews we know that he has a crush on the new boy who has walked into school. This crush turns quickly to infatuation as he sees Jackson Kern on the pitchers mound at baseball tryouts blowing the mind of the coach and everyone watching his ability. We see Taylor as he struggles with his unrequited feelings for Jackson; only telling his best friend Benny about his secret desires and his “what ifs.” You can’t help but fall for Taylor and his insecurities that endear him to the reader and Benny? Everyone, young or old deserves to have a best friend like that. Someone to not only stand up for you but to you when you need it.; the honesty and devotion Benny has for his friend is quite possibly the best part about this book. He is a fantastic character and I would love to see more of him.
What I enjoyed about Pitch was THE STORY. It was good. It took me back to being young in high school and having a crush on the one I thought I could never have; the feeling of not being good enough but just wanting to be near that person because I was drawn to them. That is Taylor with Jackson. I felt the story as pure and honest; seeing high school through the eyes of a young man dealing with being different than his pears and the fear that comes along with Taylor wanting to simply be who he is. I can only assume what it would be like today, to be a young gay man in high school wanting to simply be who he is but having that fear, the fear that the person he tells could be homophobic and violent. Unfortunately, with the purity in this book comes the ugly side as well.
There was so much that happens in this book. While I enjoyed the story, I feel as if it was written in a race like pace. I would have loved to see more of Jackson and Taylor together, as well as more of Jackson before “the talk.” I am a fan of insta love in books but there was just something missing that couldn’t let me settle in with them as fast as I needed to. I would have enjoyed a bit more of Benny and his relationship. I got that it was happening and figured it out, I just wanted to SEE it on the page. I did not get the need for the angst with Kevin nor did I find it necessary. Had there been more to the story that prompted it I would have, could have gotten behind it. There was a lack of evolution in the relationships and character development that had they been there would have taken this book to a five star for me. The story, as I said was good, a few tweaks that this reader would have loved to see, were missing where I needed them to fully connect. The writing was great, it was an easy read. I just wanted more in ways that I did not get. I can’t say exactly what they are with out spoiling it but I will say that bit at the end, the reveal we get broke my heart. I saw it coming; I just did not want it that way.
My final thoughts… Pitch is a story that did make me think, made me wonder about the young men I see as I pick up my own teenage son from High School. Are these boys being true to themselves whether it be their sexual orientation, music they listen to, clothes they wear, art that they like etc. Do they have the support from family, friends or the inner strength to be their authentic selves even if it meant not being part of the “in crowd?” I do believe that Pitch would be a wonderful story for the age group of which it was written and I look forward to future works of Mr. Parkinson.
June 5, 2018
I will preface this review by stating that I am not really a fan of young adult fiction. It's not a genre that really grabs me, probably because my own young adult days were equivalent to a horror movie where no matter how far you run, you just can't get away. However, I knew from the moment I heard that Will Parkinson was releasing his book, that I would read it. He's an incredible man and a beautiful writer so I knew that I would enjoy this story.
Taylor is a typically average high school boy, or so he thinks. He's a little plump, he's so-so at schoolwork, he loves to draw and is really good at it, and he's hiding in the closet. When the new boy, Jackson, joins his sophomore homeroom, Taylor is instantly struck by how good-looking and confident the other boy is. Taylor's best friend, Benny, figures the crush will die out like they all do and is surprised when it continues, even as far as Taylor attending baseball games. In an aside, I completely fell in love with Benny. Everyone should have a best friend like that! Taylor spends the whole year falling in love with Jackson even though it seems Jackson is hooked up with a cheerleader. (GAWD images of high school nightmares)
Taylor and Benny volunteer to spend the summer as counselors at a camp for abused children. I will admit here that some of the story became a little too pat, as in the boy who never opened up at camp all of a sudden did the day he met Taylor and Benny, but it worked for this storyline and I could understand why the author wrote it this way. Both Taylor and Benny came home from camp re-evaluating themselves and what they might want to do in the future. Then it was back to school in the eleventh grade.
Unfortunately, Taylor is outed by the treacherous actions of a date he never should have gone on. Luckily, life goes along fairly well with not too many hassles at school. Benny is always by his side, supporting him and they've made plans to go to college together. Junior prom comes and, finally, a conversation with Jackson reveals a huge betrayal on both of their parts. Life is wonderful for Taylor and Jackson as they begin to date and spend time together. Unfortunately, a blast from both of their pasts shows up and it takes both of them, along with Benny, to see that love can conquer all.
This was a refreshing change for me to read. I'm sorry, Mr. Parkinson, it won't make me a huge lover of YA, but it does make me a huge lover of your work. This is a sweet story with some adult angst that is dealt with in a positive way. I look forward to reading more by this author.
NOTE: This book was provided by Harmony Ink Press for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
Taylor is a typically average high school boy, or so he thinks. He's a little plump, he's so-so at schoolwork, he loves to draw and is really good at it, and he's hiding in the closet. When the new boy, Jackson, joins his sophomore homeroom, Taylor is instantly struck by how good-looking and confident the other boy is. Taylor's best friend, Benny, figures the crush will die out like they all do and is surprised when it continues, even as far as Taylor attending baseball games. In an aside, I completely fell in love with Benny. Everyone should have a best friend like that! Taylor spends the whole year falling in love with Jackson even though it seems Jackson is hooked up with a cheerleader. (GAWD images of high school nightmares)
Taylor and Benny volunteer to spend the summer as counselors at a camp for abused children. I will admit here that some of the story became a little too pat, as in the boy who never opened up at camp all of a sudden did the day he met Taylor and Benny, but it worked for this storyline and I could understand why the author wrote it this way. Both Taylor and Benny came home from camp re-evaluating themselves and what they might want to do in the future. Then it was back to school in the eleventh grade.
Unfortunately, Taylor is outed by the treacherous actions of a date he never should have gone on. Luckily, life goes along fairly well with not too many hassles at school. Benny is always by his side, supporting him and they've made plans to go to college together. Junior prom comes and, finally, a conversation with Jackson reveals a huge betrayal on both of their parts. Life is wonderful for Taylor and Jackson as they begin to date and spend time together. Unfortunately, a blast from both of their pasts shows up and it takes both of them, along with Benny, to see that love can conquer all.
This was a refreshing change for me to read. I'm sorry, Mr. Parkinson, it won't make me a huge lover of YA, but it does make me a huge lover of your work. This is a sweet story with some adult angst that is dealt with in a positive way. I look forward to reading more by this author.
NOTE: This book was provided by Harmony Ink Press for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
July 22, 2013
Taylor Andrews has a crush. A big one. He has unrequited feelings for the star of his high school baseball team, Jackson Kern. It’s too bad Jackson is straight and dating probably the biggest mean girl in the world, Becca. A boy can dream though, right? And dream Taylor does. He moons over Jackson, attends all the baseball games, volunteers for things important to Jackson. What he doesn’t do is talk to Jackson. In a scary-happy moment, Jackson turns up at Taylor’s house and of course Taylor is too freaked out to answer the door before Jackson leaves. Enter Becca, who informs Taylor exactly why Jackson was there. Becca is just so terrible.
Taylor also has a best friend, Benny, who is amazing. At one point, Taylor hurts Benny and you want to just shake him. Benny is calm, cool, accepting and just a great person. Together, Taylor and Benny go to a camp for abused kids and it is at this point that Taylor begins to really see what is important in the world. He matures and together he and Benny make a difference. This was an interesting plotline.
Realizing (sort of) the futility of his crush on a straight boy who hates him, Taylor attempts to move on, having his first real date with Kevin. Kevin is charming, sweet and rotten underneath. It’s a difficult situation but one that quickly gets worse and here it goes into the realm of dramatic.
I really had to average the rating for this story. The first half was a solid 4 at least. I loved Taylor’s voice, everything that he feels comes across so strongly. His dedicated crush on Jackson (that he can’t bring himself to mention to the man) was very high school to me and that made him more endearing. In other words, for me this part of the story was definitely young adult at its best. Benny is integral to this part as well and he is worth a solid 4 just on his own. Where it lost some for me, however, was the angle with Kevin. While Becca was the raging terrible female character, Kevin became just too much. Originally he starts by accusations and I could see a high school student doing that. But when he goes farther, it became harder to believe in relation to the age group they are part of.
I am a fan of this author and I look forward to what comes next. Maybe Benny???
Taylor also has a best friend, Benny, who is amazing. At one point, Taylor hurts Benny and you want to just shake him. Benny is calm, cool, accepting and just a great person. Together, Taylor and Benny go to a camp for abused kids and it is at this point that Taylor begins to really see what is important in the world. He matures and together he and Benny make a difference. This was an interesting plotline.
Realizing (sort of) the futility of his crush on a straight boy who hates him, Taylor attempts to move on, having his first real date with Kevin. Kevin is charming, sweet and rotten underneath. It’s a difficult situation but one that quickly gets worse and here it goes into the realm of dramatic.
I really had to average the rating for this story. The first half was a solid 4 at least. I loved Taylor’s voice, everything that he feels comes across so strongly. His dedicated crush on Jackson (that he can’t bring himself to mention to the man) was very high school to me and that made him more endearing. In other words, for me this part of the story was definitely young adult at its best. Benny is integral to this part as well and he is worth a solid 4 just on his own. Where it lost some for me, however, was the angle with Kevin. While Becca was the raging terrible female character, Kevin became just too much. Originally he starts by accusations and I could see a high school student doing that. But when he goes farther, it became harder to believe in relation to the age group they are part of.
I am a fan of this author and I look forward to what comes next. Maybe Benny???
May 18, 2014
oh god..
I enjoyed this book up until the 50%. Taylor's unrequited love was so cute and heart breaking at the same time, Benny's straight and narrow personality was charming and likable, even the prince charming Jackson was good.
And then it started..
1. Unrealistic characters.
- MCs.. Taylor, Benny, Jackson.. They are all saint I tell you, All those teenagers worry about is making good grades, giving back to community, being a good son and student, spending time for volunteering. No raging hormone, no emotional ups and downs, always reasonable and rational, extremely manipulable, so naive one small threat from an established villain, the MC does everything the villain orders. 16-17 years old boys we are talking about.. right?
2. No romance there.
- Only handful pages of the whole of 180 pages are spent for Taylor and Jackson's more-like-friendship-than-love romance. Other than that, mostly how the villains are easily screwing and using the MCs in their disposal and how easily the MCs are fooled. There is not even one date scene, no romantic encounters.
3. WTF this story's about..?
I don't know what this story's about still.. I feel like I've just watched a badly plotted low-budget morning soap opera, featuring supposedly high school and teenagers. They are so good students, they wouldn't even kiss before meeting the parents first you know.. anyway.. There is no direction, no focal point, no grand start, no grand ending, no grand climax.. stupid and obvious villains, stupider and undeserving MCs... Have I missed something?
I don't want to be too harsh on debut authors.. but this story could have been a lot better if had the author let go of hero complex and picturing perfect and no dust characters.
I enjoyed this book up until the 50%. Taylor's unrequited love was so cute and heart breaking at the same time, Benny's straight and narrow personality was charming and likable, even the prince charming Jackson was good.
And then it started..
1. Unrealistic characters.
- MCs.. Taylor, Benny, Jackson.. They are all saint I tell you, All those teenagers worry about is making good grades, giving back to community, being a good son and student, spending time for volunteering. No raging hormone, no emotional ups and downs, always reasonable and rational, extremely manipulable, so naive one small threat from an established villain, the MC does everything the villain orders. 16-17 years old boys we are talking about.. right?
2. No romance there.
- Only handful pages of the whole of 180 pages are spent for Taylor and Jackson's more-like-friendship-than-love romance. Other than that, mostly how the villains are easily screwing and using the MCs in their disposal and how easily the MCs are fooled. There is not even one date scene, no romantic encounters.
3. WTF this story's about..?
I don't know what this story's about still.. I feel like I've just watched a badly plotted low-budget morning soap opera, featuring supposedly high school and teenagers. They are so good students, they wouldn't even kiss before meeting the parents first you know.. anyway.. There is no direction, no focal point, no grand start, no grand ending, no grand climax.. stupid and obvious villains, stupider and undeserving MCs... Have I missed something?
I don't want to be too harsh on debut authors.. but this story could have been a lot better if had the author let go of hero complex and picturing perfect and no dust characters.
August 9, 2013
I don't really know where to start. There are so many things that I loved about this book(BENNY!!!).
Will has a lovely writing style that really appeals to me. It flows so beautifully that I get swept away into the story and don't want to come out.
Taylor is a character that I felt so connected to that I had my high school crush in the back of my mind through the whole book. The hopeless longing, the wistful dreams and the bitterness of rejection are all there.
I could go on and on about every little thing about this book that I liked(loved,adored). But I think the best thing I could say is that when I reached the end of the book I wanted more. More Taylor. More Jackson. More Benny and Addy(I would pre-order a book about them right now!).
I hope that there will be other books with these characters. Pitch has a wonderful ending that I am happy with but I would love to read another book about Taylor and Jackson from Jacksons point of view.
Will has a lovely writing style that really appeals to me. It flows so beautifully that I get swept away into the story and don't want to come out.
Taylor is a character that I felt so connected to that I had my high school crush in the back of my mind through the whole book. The hopeless longing, the wistful dreams and the bitterness of rejection are all there.
I could go on and on about every little thing about this book that I liked(loved,adored). But I think the best thing I could say is that when I reached the end of the book I wanted more. More Taylor. More Jackson. More Benny and Addy(I would pre-order a book about them right now!).
I hope that there will be other books with these characters. Pitch has a wonderful ending that I am happy with but I would love to read another book about Taylor and Jackson from Jacksons point of view.
dnf-not-4-me
April 24, 2015MCs are too young for my interest level at this time.
August 10, 2013
I don't read a lot of YA (but because this is Will Parkinson, and I read his book 500 Miles which he wrote as Parker Williams and I absolutely loved it), I just had to read his latest release.
And I'm so glad I did. The story of Taylor Andrews and Jackson Kern is an inspirational one of youth trying to find its way into what it wants to be, it's the tale of overwhelming friendship and acceptance, the heartbreak of misunderstandings and overall, the commitment of two people to each other despite all the odds and society's perceptions with what is and isn't right.
Taylor Andrews aka 'Tay' is entranced with Jackson Kern aka 'Jax' the minute he sets foot into the classroom. He's gorgeous, polite and Taylor's fantasy come true. Becca Monroe also notices Jackson and right from the start, she too is a rival for Jackson's affections, taking him over in a way that makes Taylor think he'll never have a chance. He doesn't even know if Jackson is gay. Taylor hasn't even told his family about his sexual orientation yet. But Taylor lives in hope so he starts going to all the baseball practice sessions just to watch Jackson in action. His affection and his desire grows, and it's driving him crazy. His best friend, the loveable, understanding Benny is Taylor's rock and always there to listen to his friend.
Of course, there are the inevitable conflicts and dramas so prevalent in a story like this - misunderstandings, evil lies and manipulation (mostly from the extremely unlikeable Becca who deserves a good slapping), drama and a very unpleasant character in the form of Kevin, a senior. Taylor becomes involved with him to both his physical and emotional detriment and the scenes featuring the two of them are gut wrenching and very emotional. I won't say too much but this really shows just what a good friend the amazing and loving Benny is to Taylor and as for the rest of it and what happens to Kevin- well you'll have to read the story :)
There were several times in this book when I had a lump in my throat- when Jackson sees Taylor has been beaten up, at the Prom when certain pennies make the proverbial drop and a wonderful dancing moment ensues, and when noble, brave Taylor makes a terrible decision for himself in order to protect Jackson. And of course towards the end of the book when everything culminates in tragedy. They were beautifully emotive moments. And I blubbered. It's one thing you'll need to remember with Will's stories. Note to self- have tissues handy.
Taylor is a beautifully drawn character, rich with emotion and flaws and strengths even he didn't know he possesses. Benny is Benny -a loveable, caring and utterly captivating person with a heart as big as a lions and the strength to boot. And Jackson is the steady, tough, fair and caring man who doesn't give up and believes everyone deserves a second chance and to be loved.
There is a lovely underlying theme is this book with Addy, the emotionally and physically abused teen who needs a lot of love and support and he find that in Taylor and Benny. The couple take Addy under their wing in an attempt to enrich his life, and help him through the really bad times he's had.
This story is beautifully written, bringing the life of a teenage gay man into the spotlight with all the angst and problems that he may face amongst peers and family. It is a story of hope and joy , of people believing in each other, sometimes to a surprising extent and it had me in tears and laughter at various points in the book. I tend to be a real softie when it comes to reading emotional scenes in books and this one was no exception and there's a lot of them. Warm, tender, uplifting and overall an extremely enjoyable emotional journey through a young man's yearning to simply fit in and be who he is with the man he's fallen totally in love with. Read this book. You'll not regret it.
And I'm so glad I did. The story of Taylor Andrews and Jackson Kern is an inspirational one of youth trying to find its way into what it wants to be, it's the tale of overwhelming friendship and acceptance, the heartbreak of misunderstandings and overall, the commitment of two people to each other despite all the odds and society's perceptions with what is and isn't right.
Taylor Andrews aka 'Tay' is entranced with Jackson Kern aka 'Jax' the minute he sets foot into the classroom. He's gorgeous, polite and Taylor's fantasy come true. Becca Monroe also notices Jackson and right from the start, she too is a rival for Jackson's affections, taking him over in a way that makes Taylor think he'll never have a chance. He doesn't even know if Jackson is gay. Taylor hasn't even told his family about his sexual orientation yet. But Taylor lives in hope so he starts going to all the baseball practice sessions just to watch Jackson in action. His affection and his desire grows, and it's driving him crazy. His best friend, the loveable, understanding Benny is Taylor's rock and always there to listen to his friend.
Of course, there are the inevitable conflicts and dramas so prevalent in a story like this - misunderstandings, evil lies and manipulation (mostly from the extremely unlikeable Becca who deserves a good slapping), drama and a very unpleasant character in the form of Kevin, a senior. Taylor becomes involved with him to both his physical and emotional detriment and the scenes featuring the two of them are gut wrenching and very emotional. I won't say too much but this really shows just what a good friend the amazing and loving Benny is to Taylor and as for the rest of it and what happens to Kevin- well you'll have to read the story :)
There were several times in this book when I had a lump in my throat- when Jackson sees Taylor has been beaten up, at the Prom when certain pennies make the proverbial drop and a wonderful dancing moment ensues, and when noble, brave Taylor makes a terrible decision for himself in order to protect Jackson. And of course towards the end of the book when everything culminates in tragedy. They were beautifully emotive moments. And I blubbered. It's one thing you'll need to remember with Will's stories. Note to self- have tissues handy.
Taylor is a beautifully drawn character, rich with emotion and flaws and strengths even he didn't know he possesses. Benny is Benny -a loveable, caring and utterly captivating person with a heart as big as a lions and the strength to boot. And Jackson is the steady, tough, fair and caring man who doesn't give up and believes everyone deserves a second chance and to be loved.
There is a lovely underlying theme is this book with Addy, the emotionally and physically abused teen who needs a lot of love and support and he find that in Taylor and Benny. The couple take Addy under their wing in an attempt to enrich his life, and help him through the really bad times he's had.
This story is beautifully written, bringing the life of a teenage gay man into the spotlight with all the angst and problems that he may face amongst peers and family. It is a story of hope and joy , of people believing in each other, sometimes to a surprising extent and it had me in tears and laughter at various points in the book. I tend to be a real softie when it comes to reading emotional scenes in books and this one was no exception and there's a lot of them. Warm, tender, uplifting and overall an extremely enjoyable emotional journey through a young man's yearning to simply fit in and be who he is with the man he's fallen totally in love with. Read this book. You'll not regret it.
September 15, 2013
In full disclosure mode, let me start by saying that I didn't want to like this book. Why, you ask? Well, for the last couple of months there's been a new kid in town: Will Parkinson. Authors have been naming characters after him, praising him, long dedications have been seen and I felt like enough was enough. Who is this Will Parkinson person? Why, all of a sudden, does everyone love him?
You see, the answer to those questions is written all over Pitch.
Will Parkinson is an amazingly talented new author in our genre, and he deserves all the *winks* and nudges he's been getting.
Pitch is one of the best YA LGBT I've read, Jackson & Taylor's love story is plain and simple. Beautiful and naive. Innocent until evil comes to hunt them, first being the obstacle in the form of a mean girl and then in the form of a crazy stalker with a very unhealthy obsession.
Jackson is new in school, and Taylor's fixation starts from day one. The arrival of Jackson to school gives him butterflies. Taylor starts following Jackson around, to practice and games, taking part in the student committee activities to be close to the new elected President Jackson. And it all seems to be one sided, when in reality it is miscommunication and some selfish acts by the mean girl.
Crazy stalker Kevin only adds to the madness and the angst these two boys are going through.
The mistakes they make, the way they grow together, the development of their relationship... all was done with perfect timing. The lack of sex on page was another reason to love the book and Mr. Parkinson. These are teenagers, growing up, discovering, exploring, understanding, making mistakes, being silly and being responsible the next moment.
Both, Jackson and Taylor are very mature for their age, but still act like young men. And that is perfectly fine.
Before I go on and on about them, there is one very important character in this book that deserves all the stars, and that person is Benny, Taylor´s BFF.
What an amazing character we have here, so caring, so protective of Taylor and fun to be around. A mix of BFF, big brother and boyfriend without benefits kind of thing. Benny deserves his own book, please Mr. Parkinson, I'm begging you here. One, just one quote that will describe him…
“Because, you idiot, you're my best friend. I love you. You´re hurting, and that makes me hurt.”
The bond between these two brought tears to my eyes on more than one occasion. And both, Taylor and Jackson, were so lucky to have Benny by their side.
Pitch will go into my favorite reads of 2013, without a doubt. And I highly recommend you read it too. If you have teens in the house is a great read for them too, or for us, the young at heart, that enjoy reading about boys falling in love, overcoming adversity and being supported by family and friends.
Sin dudas el mejor YA del año! Vale la pena leerlo y descubrir un nuevo y talentoso autor en el género. Una voz diferente y absolutamente maravillosa.
Reviewed by Connie
You see, the answer to those questions is written all over Pitch.
Will Parkinson is an amazingly talented new author in our genre, and he deserves all the *winks* and nudges he's been getting.
Pitch is one of the best YA LGBT I've read, Jackson & Taylor's love story is plain and simple. Beautiful and naive. Innocent until evil comes to hunt them, first being the obstacle in the form of a mean girl and then in the form of a crazy stalker with a very unhealthy obsession.
Jackson is new in school, and Taylor's fixation starts from day one. The arrival of Jackson to school gives him butterflies. Taylor starts following Jackson around, to practice and games, taking part in the student committee activities to be close to the new elected President Jackson. And it all seems to be one sided, when in reality it is miscommunication and some selfish acts by the mean girl.
Crazy stalker Kevin only adds to the madness and the angst these two boys are going through.
The mistakes they make, the way they grow together, the development of their relationship... all was done with perfect timing. The lack of sex on page was another reason to love the book and Mr. Parkinson. These are teenagers, growing up, discovering, exploring, understanding, making mistakes, being silly and being responsible the next moment.
Both, Jackson and Taylor are very mature for their age, but still act like young men. And that is perfectly fine.
Before I go on and on about them, there is one very important character in this book that deserves all the stars, and that person is Benny, Taylor´s BFF.
What an amazing character we have here, so caring, so protective of Taylor and fun to be around. A mix of BFF, big brother and boyfriend without benefits kind of thing. Benny deserves his own book, please Mr. Parkinson, I'm begging you here. One, just one quote that will describe him…
“Because, you idiot, you're my best friend. I love you. You´re hurting, and that makes me hurt.”
The bond between these two brought tears to my eyes on more than one occasion. And both, Taylor and Jackson, were so lucky to have Benny by their side.
Pitch will go into my favorite reads of 2013, without a doubt. And I highly recommend you read it too. If you have teens in the house is a great read for them too, or for us, the young at heart, that enjoy reading about boys falling in love, overcoming adversity and being supported by family and friends.
Sin dudas el mejor YA del año! Vale la pena leerlo y descubrir un nuevo y talentoso autor en el género. Una voz diferente y absolutamente maravillosa.
Reviewed by Connie
August 11, 2013
Pitch was an amazing book. It flowed well and the characters didn’t just get one hurdle and then the perfect ending, they needed to work for it. It was sweet, adorable and just packed with emotions.
I read the whole book in one sitting, in the middle of my work week. Yes I had other things I should have been doing, but this was too good to put down.
Things I LOVED:
Becca, yes I know she is not meant to be loved. But she was such a teenage girl. I know these girls, I hated these girls in high school and Becca was portrayed so well. I had moments where I flashed back 15 years to listening to girls like her. So while she made me want to slap her, she was a very good character.
Taylor! He was really lovable. It takes a lot of energy to continue to love someone or something despite all the odds. I loved his witty comebacks and his determination.
Addy – all I can say is I want his story next! PLEASE
The adults all round were great. I loved the care and respect for those in their lives. Taylor’s parents were wonderful and made me smile a lot.
If you are looking for a really good Young Adult book, or just a good book in general I would recommend this one. I just loved it all. Will Parkinson, I will be looking forward to your next book!
I read the whole book in one sitting, in the middle of my work week. Yes I had other things I should have been doing, but this was too good to put down.
Things I LOVED:
Becca, yes I know she is not meant to be loved. But she was such a teenage girl. I know these girls, I hated these girls in high school and Becca was portrayed so well. I had moments where I flashed back 15 years to listening to girls like her. So while she made me want to slap her, she was a very good character.
Taylor! He was really lovable. It takes a lot of energy to continue to love someone or something despite all the odds. I loved his witty comebacks and his determination.
Addy – all I can say is I want his story next! PLEASE
The adults all round were great. I loved the care and respect for those in their lives. Taylor’s parents were wonderful and made me smile a lot.
If you are looking for a really good Young Adult book, or just a good book in general I would recommend this one. I just loved it all. Will Parkinson, I will be looking forward to your next book!
July 25, 2016
3.5 stars
I really haven't been reading much YA lately, but this one had been sitting on my Kindle. It was an overall good read that reminded me of all the things I love and hate about YA stories.
I enjoyed all the characters and I did get emotional over Taylor's struggles over not wanting to come out in HS and crushing on the presumably straight star of the school. Benny was a stellar best friend and confidant and I am definitely looking forward to his story. The mean girl was horrible and the villain was a bit over the top for my taste. After Taylor and Jackson finally talk and get together, however, the story took a darker turn and I felt a little cheated out of some more couple time. If you are looking for a YA a story with all the classic YA emotions and angst you'll probably enjoy this one.
I really haven't been reading much YA lately, but this one had been sitting on my Kindle. It was an overall good read that reminded me of all the things I love and hate about YA stories.
I enjoyed all the characters and I did get emotional over Taylor's struggles over not wanting to come out in HS and crushing on the presumably straight star of the school. Benny was a stellar best friend and confidant and I am definitely looking forward to his story. The mean girl was horrible and the villain was a bit over the top for my taste. After Taylor and Jackson finally talk and get together, however, the story took a darker turn and I felt a little cheated out of some more couple time. If you are looking for a YA a story with all the classic YA emotions and angst you'll probably enjoy this one.
August 15, 2013
Life isn't easy! Plain and simple.This book isn't a cake walk. It deals with real life and very serious issues. One in particular hit home for me and HARD! It takes a lot of guts to venture into certain subject matter and give it the respect it deserves and the seriousness it must have. Not to mention doing that in a YA book. I commend Will Parkinson for tackling them and grabbing my heart doing it. I read the summary and I read the reviews and well first off I never judge reviews before I read something I do what I want... This story was not a fairytale, it was real.Deal! Will wrote a great story here with lessons learned. I do recommend this book to people but not if you are out to read porn. You won't find that here, HERE you will get substance.
February 9, 2016
3.5 stars
It covers an array of "teen struggles", both gay and straight.
Fitting in, new kid in school, first crush, pressure to make good grades, bullying, as well as some harsher topics such as obsession, homophobia, gay bashing and abuse.
Although this wasn't quite what I was expecting, I did find it to be a very sweet YA story.
There were a couple of pretty sad moments and some that shocked the hell out of me.
HEA, but think it ended too quickly. I wanted a little more at the end.
It covers an array of "teen struggles", both gay and straight.
Fitting in, new kid in school, first crush, pressure to make good grades, bullying, as well as some harsher topics such as obsession, homophobia, gay bashing and abuse.
Although this wasn't quite what I was expecting, I did find it to be a very sweet YA story.
There were a couple of pretty sad moments and some that shocked the hell out of me.
HEA, but think it ended too quickly. I wanted a little more at the end.
May 9, 2015
For me this book read a little child-like but it's a YA book so maybe it would be perfect for a younger group. I did love that I truly got sucked into Taylor's life and could not stop reading. But while reading I kept thinking "really...OMG REALLY?!?" which I was driving myself crazy doing. Seeing as this is Will's first book and I've read a short by him that I rated 5 stars, I will definitely be reading Benny and Addy's story.
August 10, 2013
I had to push to finish this. I skimmed some of it. There was too much exposition for me. Too much over the top angst. Too many 'I'm sorry's'
Disappointed.
Disappointed.
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