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Stubborn Heart
After breaking up with his cheating boyfriend, Mark Smith keeps life his nursing career and a place of his own, but no dating. He’s steering clear of romance and the heartbreak that goes with it. After losing both parents and having all his relationships fail, he figures happily ever after is a myth.
When Dr. Trevor Hayes crosses Mark’s path at the hospital, he falls hard for Mark. The attraction is clearly mutual, and Trevor is determined to parlay that attraction into a relationship. Mark is just as determined to avoid exactly that.
But Trevor chips away at Mark’s resistance, and facing hardship and sorrow together brings them closer. Still, Mark can’t shake his belief that their romance is temporary—until he’s unexpectedly faced with the danger that he might lose Trevor for good. Mark must choose between guarding his heart and giving it completely, the risk he swore never to take again.
When Dr. Trevor Hayes crosses Mark’s path at the hospital, he falls hard for Mark. The attraction is clearly mutual, and Trevor is determined to parlay that attraction into a relationship. Mark is just as determined to avoid exactly that.
But Trevor chips away at Mark’s resistance, and facing hardship and sorrow together brings them closer. Still, Mark can’t shake his belief that their romance is temporary—until he’s unexpectedly faced with the danger that he might lose Trevor for good. Mark must choose between guarding his heart and giving it completely, the risk he swore never to take again.
224 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 28, 2013
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Ken Murphy
3 books32 followersKen Murphy grew up in South Georgia, and boasts the first thing he ever had in his name was a library card. He credits his mother and her never-ending encouragement as the seed that started his lifelong passion for the printed word. He is a hopeless romantic who loves nothing better than a good happily ever after.
Ken lives in Atlanta, Georgia, the ninth gayest city in America. He shares a home with Andy, his partner of twenty years, and their slightly neurotic Dalmatian, Lucy. Ken is a nurse who loves working with people. He likens writing to childbirth, as page after page gives life to the characters in his head.
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March 8, 2014
A Hearts On Fire Review
2.75 STARS--Ken Murphy's debut novel "Stubborn Heart" is a story about a thirty-something SICU nurse who has been cheated on one too many times and a 28 year old surgeon, Trevor, falling for one another.
My expectations before reading: Mark has been cheated on in the past, making him one emotionally screwed individual. He'd be internally angsty, (sometimes the best there is) emotionally closed off, turning down other men when he is asked out because under the ice veneer is a world of hurt.
Were they met?: Not exactly.
What was delivered: A simple story that was drawn out too long (there were paragraphs on picking a Christmas tree or medical procedures - pages of those) with little to no angst, heavy on the sweetness, peaked at 33% (imagine the other 67%) and overall just an okay read. I neither liked nor disliked any of the characters including Trevor and Mark . The secondary characters were a 3 out of 5 - Derrick - I agreed with him calling his friends morons who needed to talk to one another instead of trying to avoid hurting each other's feelings and Carla - she was blunt but she wasn't cruel. Sometimes you need friends like this. but her delivery might have come across as brash for some.
MAN TEARS - Sometimes the crying was valid (grieving for a parent who passed) and other times, it was a bit much. Trevor and Mark had silly little arguments over the smallest things, to the point that I had to stop reading, get a drink (of coffee - naughty) and try to pick it back up again.
Mark and Trevor could have cut a lot of this story down if there quit beating around the bush and talked with one another. I'm at the point in my life where giving up one's career for love is foolhardy and Mark's reasoning on trying to avoid this with Trevor was valid. But I wished he would have talked to the man a lot sooner instead of the 88% when an unfateful event happened. We could have skipped over the medical jargon, back story for tertiary characters, etc. if they had.
But they didn't. *sigh*
The ending was romantic and expected. It reminded me of Andrew Grey-esque or Étienne-ish tones. So there's a market for this story. I'd recommend for readers who enjoy those aforementioned authors works, if you're in the mood for a contemporary simple, sweet, gay novel.
Not a bad read.
2.75 STARS--Ken Murphy's debut novel "Stubborn Heart" is a story about a thirty-something SICU nurse who has been cheated on one too many times and a 28 year old surgeon, Trevor, falling for one another.
My expectations before reading: Mark has been cheated on in the past, making him one emotionally screwed individual. He'd be internally angsty, (sometimes the best there is) emotionally closed off, turning down other men when he is asked out because under the ice veneer is a world of hurt.
Were they met?: Not exactly.
What was delivered: A simple story that was drawn out too long (there were paragraphs on picking a Christmas tree or medical procedures - pages of those) with little to no angst, heavy on the sweetness, peaked at 33% (imagine the other 67%) and overall just an okay read. I neither liked nor disliked any of the characters including Trevor and Mark . The secondary characters were a 3 out of 5 - Derrick - I agreed with him calling his friends morons who needed to talk to one another instead of trying to avoid hurting each other's feelings and Carla - she was blunt but she wasn't cruel. Sometimes you need friends like this. but her delivery might have come across as brash for some.
MAN TEARS - Sometimes the crying was valid (grieving for a parent who passed) and other times, it was a bit much. Trevor and Mark had silly little arguments over the smallest things, to the point that I had to stop reading, get a drink (of coffee - naughty) and try to pick it back up again.
Mark and Trevor could have cut a lot of this story down if there quit beating around the bush and talked with one another. I'm at the point in my life where giving up one's career for love is foolhardy and Mark's reasoning on trying to avoid this with Trevor was valid. But I wished he would have talked to the man a lot sooner instead of the 88% when an unfateful event happened. We could have skipped over the medical jargon, back story for tertiary characters, etc. if they had.
But they didn't. *sigh*
The ending was romantic and expected. It reminded me of Andrew Grey-esque or Étienne-ish tones. So there's a market for this story. I'd recommend for readers who enjoy those aforementioned authors works, if you're in the mood for a contemporary simple, sweet, gay novel.
Not a bad read.
May 16, 2013
I really liked this book. It was a nice enough read with a decent story and two fitting MC's. I had some niggles with it and mostly with the prologue. It would have been nicer if Mark was not as stubborn as he was, but the title had me expecting it. The book is not the sappiest in the world, but Trevor was one of those characters I loved. He was so gentle and I loved him.
The story begins with Mark finding out his boyfriend cheated. So after that we get to see him a few months later. He meets Trevor, who wants to start something with him.
I liked how the relationship started. But pretty soon I was left wondering how many times there would be an almost break up. Those scenes irked me and there were what 3? I think that was the number but it was more than one and all the time it ended with Trevor crying! I understood Mark had issues after his ex, but he wouldn't let Trevor
I liked most of the secondary characters and the way they were incorporated was really nice. Carla was the one I seemed to really dislike, but not enough to go against the book. Overall it was a good read, I loved Trevor, liked Mark (sort of). So my final rating if 4.
The story begins with Mark finding out his boyfriend cheated. So after that we get to see him a few months later. He meets Trevor, who wants to start something with him.
I liked how the relationship started. But pretty soon I was left wondering how many times there would be an almost break up. Those scenes irked me and there were what 3? I think that was the number but it was more than one and all the time it ended with Trevor crying! I understood Mark had issues after his ex, but he wouldn't let Trevor
I liked most of the secondary characters and the way they were incorporated was really nice. Carla was the one I seemed to really dislike, but not enough to go against the book. Overall it was a good read, I loved Trevor, liked Mark (sort of). So my final rating if 4.
May 15, 2013
I really liked this story.
I understand that this isn't for everyone, but personally I like this type of stories with a very sedate pace and it's got sort of comfy feeling in it, like you slowly get to know the characters, their friends, their life and so on. You'd want to curl up with a cup of tea and this book )))
So I enjoyed it a lot, but the readers who prefer a lot of action in their books probably won't.
I understand that this isn't for everyone, but personally I like this type of stories with a very sedate pace and it's got sort of comfy feeling in it, like you slowly get to know the characters, their friends, their life and so on. You'd want to curl up with a cup of tea and this book )))
So I enjoyed it a lot, but the readers who prefer a lot of action in their books probably won't.
September 26, 2014
A Joyfully Jay review.
4.5 stars
When I saw the blurb for this one, I knew I wanted to read it. A man reluctant to get involved, while the object of his interest pursues him anyway? One of my favorite tropes. And this story really didn’t disappoint. It was a great story of two men getting involved and finding their way, and I really enjoyed it.
One of the things I liked best about this book was the way the plot progressed. It was like watching the courtship of two real life people play out. We got to see the ups and downs as they navigated through their relationship. It was a smooth progression and I loved the steady pace, with each new scene bringing us just a little further into the relationship. I really liked the way the relationship started slowly and built up. They didn’t just jump right into bed together, but really built the beginnings of something solid before taking their relationship to that level. It was what made the HEA believable. Anything else wouldn’t have been fitting for these two characters.
Read Kris’ review in its entirety here.
4.5 stars
When I saw the blurb for this one, I knew I wanted to read it. A man reluctant to get involved, while the object of his interest pursues him anyway? One of my favorite tropes. And this story really didn’t disappoint. It was a great story of two men getting involved and finding their way, and I really enjoyed it.
One of the things I liked best about this book was the way the plot progressed. It was like watching the courtship of two real life people play out. We got to see the ups and downs as they navigated through their relationship. It was a smooth progression and I loved the steady pace, with each new scene bringing us just a little further into the relationship. I really liked the way the relationship started slowly and built up. They didn’t just jump right into bed together, but really built the beginnings of something solid before taking their relationship to that level. It was what made the HEA believable. Anything else wouldn’t have been fitting for these two characters.
Read Kris’ review in its entirety here.
April 28, 2013
A sweet story about learning to trust again.
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This book was provided by Dreamspinner Press in exchange for a fair and honest review.
Full review can be found at On Top Down Under Book Reviews.
This book was provided by Dreamspinner Press in exchange for a fair and honest review.
November 16, 2017
Mark Smith is a nurse who has had bad luck in relationships. He is nursing a broken heart from a relationship where he was cheated on. Doctor Trevor Hayes is a new Fellowship surgeon for cardiothoriac surgery. They start a relationship with Mark being wary until he almost loses Trevor when he is shot. it cause Mark to have an epiphany, that he is pushing away people because he is afraid of being hurt by them when they leave.
May 3, 2013
A doctor/nurse romance that hits just the right buttons and puts a smile on the face. This is a feel-good book with a great HEA ending.
The Blurb:
After breaking up with his cheating boyfriend, Mark Smith keeps life simple: his nursing career and a place of his own, but no dating. He’s steering clear of romance and the heartbreak that goes with it. After losing both parents and having all his relationships fail, he figures happily ever after is a myth.
When Dr. Trevor Hayes crosses Mark’s path at the hospital, he falls hard for Mark. The attraction is clearly mutual, and Trevor is determined to parlay that attraction into a relationship. Mark is just as determined to avoid exactly that.
But Trevor chips away at Mark’s resistance, and facing hardship and sorrow together brings them closer. Still, Mark can’t shake his belief that their romance is temporary—until he’s unexpectedly faced with the danger that he might lose Trevor for good. Mark must choose between guarding his heart and giving it completely, the risk he swore never to take again.
The Review....
I have always had a weakness when I read blurbs of doctor/nurse romances. I must confess that these types of plots always takes precedence over cowboys, shape-shifters, and billionaires (this last being the real last). Although this theme seems to be over fatigued as a popular plot, somehow, I still get lured into reading them. Most times I definitely regret it, especially when an author literally massacres the medical terminologies, the ethics, the hospital/clinic management, etc. Thank heavens Stubborn Heart is not a massacre in disguise.
Reading the book, it is quite obvious, at least for me, that the author, Ken Murphy, dedicated some time researching over medical procedures and terminologies that are almost never written about in romance novels simply because they can be quite complicated to the unfamiliar. I was very happy to read that he successfully integrated the difficult and made them matter-of-fact.
As for the romance developing between Mark and Trevor, again, it is the usual doctor/nurse romance. The great thing about their story is that it brings the readers a little deeper into the development of the relationship. There is a constant shift of POVs which I found different, but got used to by the third chapter as the shift made me appreciate that these two men were individuals. It also better prepared me, as a reader, to have a better grasp of what may come next.
There is also the plot and character development that unfolds gradually. There is no sudden plot development that causes a reader to wonder what in heck happened and no epiphany that comes on as an afterthought so the author can end the story.
Ken Murphy successfully brings his readers into a relationship that is slowly developing and finally ends happily. I am glad to note that the sex scenes added just the right touch without stepping into the overly erotica. In the end, I had a smile on my face which left me feeling good and wishing.
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The Blurb:
After breaking up with his cheating boyfriend, Mark Smith keeps life simple: his nursing career and a place of his own, but no dating. He’s steering clear of romance and the heartbreak that goes with it. After losing both parents and having all his relationships fail, he figures happily ever after is a myth.
When Dr. Trevor Hayes crosses Mark’s path at the hospital, he falls hard for Mark. The attraction is clearly mutual, and Trevor is determined to parlay that attraction into a relationship. Mark is just as determined to avoid exactly that.
But Trevor chips away at Mark’s resistance, and facing hardship and sorrow together brings them closer. Still, Mark can’t shake his belief that their romance is temporary—until he’s unexpectedly faced with the danger that he might lose Trevor for good. Mark must choose between guarding his heart and giving it completely, the risk he swore never to take again.
The Review....
I have always had a weakness when I read blurbs of doctor/nurse romances. I must confess that these types of plots always takes precedence over cowboys, shape-shifters, and billionaires (this last being the real last). Although this theme seems to be over fatigued as a popular plot, somehow, I still get lured into reading them. Most times I definitely regret it, especially when an author literally massacres the medical terminologies, the ethics, the hospital/clinic management, etc. Thank heavens Stubborn Heart is not a massacre in disguise.
Reading the book, it is quite obvious, at least for me, that the author, Ken Murphy, dedicated some time researching over medical procedures and terminologies that are almost never written about in romance novels simply because they can be quite complicated to the unfamiliar. I was very happy to read that he successfully integrated the difficult and made them matter-of-fact.
As for the romance developing between Mark and Trevor, again, it is the usual doctor/nurse romance. The great thing about their story is that it brings the readers a little deeper into the development of the relationship. There is a constant shift of POVs which I found different, but got used to by the third chapter as the shift made me appreciate that these two men were individuals. It also better prepared me, as a reader, to have a better grasp of what may come next.
There is also the plot and character development that unfolds gradually. There is no sudden plot development that causes a reader to wonder what in heck happened and no epiphany that comes on as an afterthought so the author can end the story.
Ken Murphy successfully brings his readers into a relationship that is slowly developing and finally ends happily. I am glad to note that the sex scenes added just the right touch without stepping into the overly erotica. In the end, I had a smile on my face which left me feeling good and wishing.
Purchase Link
April 27, 2013
3 Stars
Mark Smith is a Nurse at Atlanta General.
Trevor Hayes is a Doctor in the fellowship program.
These two men meet when Mark’s giving orientation to the newcomers. Both of them are immediately attracted to each other but Mark doesn’t want to get involved with the doctor. They work together, not to mention Mark’s still guarding himself from being hurt. His last boyfriend cheated on him at every chance he could get and its effected Mark deeply. Trevor wants Mark and he’s determined to get him. He will stop at nothing to get him to go on a date. Mark finally agrees and then panics. He’s so afraid of what could go wrong that he’s not considering how right it could be.
The two men start to date and things between them slowly progress into love. Well, at least there’s love on Trevor’s part. Mark is still trying to convince himself it’s all just fun and games but you can see that’s not working all that well for him. Then Trevor’s world is turned upside down when someone close to him dies and Mark is there for him every step of the way. Mark’s guard is slowly crumbling but he still knows in the back of his mind that Trevor will be leaving him soon. Trevor’s fellowship is almost over and he’ll have to find a real job and that means leaving Mark behind. Mark doesn’t want things between them to end and without meaning to, he hurts Trevor a few times with his words. Thank goodness Trevor’s best friend Derrick is there to set things straight.
The guys get together for the night and tragedy strikes. They’re robbed at gunpoint and one of them doesn’t make it out unscathed. It’s that close call that gives Mark the guts to finally make his decision. He loves Trevor and doesn’t want to lose him.
It started off pretty slow but once it picked up, I was all in. I will give the readers a warning though. The switching of point of views was hard for me. It switches without warning and I had to reread some things to make sure I was understanding who was speaking and thinking at that moment. Once I got used to it, I didn’t notice as much.
This was a very sweet book. I enjoyed the side characters and would like to see Derrick get a story of his own someday.
Jen's review can also be found at Live Your Life, Buy The Book
Mark Smith is a Nurse at Atlanta General.
Trevor Hayes is a Doctor in the fellowship program.
These two men meet when Mark’s giving orientation to the newcomers. Both of them are immediately attracted to each other but Mark doesn’t want to get involved with the doctor. They work together, not to mention Mark’s still guarding himself from being hurt. His last boyfriend cheated on him at every chance he could get and its effected Mark deeply. Trevor wants Mark and he’s determined to get him. He will stop at nothing to get him to go on a date. Mark finally agrees and then panics. He’s so afraid of what could go wrong that he’s not considering how right it could be.
The two men start to date and things between them slowly progress into love. Well, at least there’s love on Trevor’s part. Mark is still trying to convince himself it’s all just fun and games but you can see that’s not working all that well for him. Then Trevor’s world is turned upside down when someone close to him dies and Mark is there for him every step of the way. Mark’s guard is slowly crumbling but he still knows in the back of his mind that Trevor will be leaving him soon. Trevor’s fellowship is almost over and he’ll have to find a real job and that means leaving Mark behind. Mark doesn’t want things between them to end and without meaning to, he hurts Trevor a few times with his words. Thank goodness Trevor’s best friend Derrick is there to set things straight.
The guys get together for the night and tragedy strikes. They’re robbed at gunpoint and one of them doesn’t make it out unscathed. It’s that close call that gives Mark the guts to finally make his decision. He loves Trevor and doesn’t want to lose him.
It started off pretty slow but once it picked up, I was all in. I will give the readers a warning though. The switching of point of views was hard for me. It switches without warning and I had to reread some things to make sure I was understanding who was speaking and thinking at that moment. Once I got used to it, I didn’t notice as much.
This was a very sweet book. I enjoyed the side characters and would like to see Derrick get a story of his own someday.
Jen's review can also be found at Live Your Life, Buy The Book
May 5, 2013
When someone has the ability to lift you to the highest plane, and completely crush you, you know its true love. It’s absolutely this kind of love between Trevor and Mark; the kind of love that lasts throughout the years. But….
Mark has been hurt by past lovers as a victim of infidelity. He considers himself “damaged” goods. Trevor comes into his life and soon Mark realizes his past hurts and fears could destroy things before they even start; the kind of love that he has craved and rejected at the same time.
“Stubborn Heart” is the incredible and amazing story of how love can liberate a nurse’s stubborn heart and clear the way for true love in its finest form.
Ken Murphy tells an astounding tale of how two men, along with their families, friends, and co-workers can all work together, sometimes in a meddlesome and annoying way, to cause lovers to face the fact of what the true meaning of trust and acceptance is as they surrender to their feelings for each other and commit to a lifetime of togetherness.
Ken writes a story that is well researched with a flowing plot line that delivers no surprises causing breaks within the story. The characters are well developed and introduced, even some that were not really likeable (Carla) but necessary.
Thank you Ken for a superb story. Definitely 5 stars!
Mark has been hurt by past lovers as a victim of infidelity. He considers himself “damaged” goods. Trevor comes into his life and soon Mark realizes his past hurts and fears could destroy things before they even start; the kind of love that he has craved and rejected at the same time.
“Stubborn Heart” is the incredible and amazing story of how love can liberate a nurse’s stubborn heart and clear the way for true love in its finest form.
Ken Murphy tells an astounding tale of how two men, along with their families, friends, and co-workers can all work together, sometimes in a meddlesome and annoying way, to cause lovers to face the fact of what the true meaning of trust and acceptance is as they surrender to their feelings for each other and commit to a lifetime of togetherness.
Ken writes a story that is well researched with a flowing plot line that delivers no surprises causing breaks within the story. The characters are well developed and introduced, even some that were not really likeable (Carla) but necessary.
Thank you Ken for a superb story. Definitely 5 stars!
March 29, 2015
Loved this book by Ken Murphy!! Filled with heartfelt emotion, strong attraction, Hot Sex, and Love. Mark Smith is an RN working at a University Hospital in the SICU who has a real problem with commitment due to past relationships filled with infidelity and heartbreak. One morning in Orientation which Mark conducts he meets Trevor Hayes, MD, a surgical fellow within the same hospital. Trevor instantly falls for Mark and proceeds to pursue him. Because of Mark's past he tries to keep Trevor at bay, but it is short lived. This is a beautiful story of two gorgeous men who struggle with their own feelings, but Mark believes their relationship is only temporary because Trevor will be moving on to another position away from Atlanta!! Due to a close life threatening event, Mark's feelings for the future change. Highly Recommend this book! Great Read!! True Love can change life for the better!!
May 6, 2013
First off, I cried, so that is always a good sign.
Simple version: This is a story about a nurse and a doctor who fall in love.
There is a decent amount of angst and trauma, so be prepared for some ups and down. We have Mark, a man who has had some bad choices in previous boyfriends that provides his character development. Trevor is our sweet doctor who gets Mark to open his heart.
I will say that the conflicts are a bit predictable, but how the author presented it was enjoyable. I am also cutting him some slack because this is his first book. I certainly could not have written such a good book right out the gate.
So, to sum up, if you like your lovable, angsty romance, then I think you will like this one. I am certainly going to keep my eye out for what this author does next.
Simple version: This is a story about a nurse and a doctor who fall in love.
There is a decent amount of angst and trauma, so be prepared for some ups and down. We have Mark, a man who has had some bad choices in previous boyfriends that provides his character development. Trevor is our sweet doctor who gets Mark to open his heart.
I will say that the conflicts are a bit predictable, but how the author presented it was enjoyable. I am also cutting him some slack because this is his first book. I certainly could not have written such a good book right out the gate.
So, to sum up, if you like your lovable, angsty romance, then I think you will like this one. I am certainly going to keep my eye out for what this author does next.
April 30, 2013
This story is well written romance between Mark, a nurse and Dr. Trevor, a fellow doctor. I liked both MC's, they were super hot together. Ken Murphy sex scenes were really detailed, thumb up. Sure the storyline is light and circles mainly around Trevor's attempts to crack into Mark's defences. I liked it!
February 2, 2016
Overall book rating: 3 stars
Audio book: Narrator - Gregory Salinas 4 stars
Book cover: 3 stars
It was nice sometimes these two guys sounded like girls but at the end it all went well.
Audio book: Narrator - Gregory Salinas 4 stars
Book cover: 3 stars
It was nice sometimes these two guys sounded like girls but at the end it all went well.
abandoned
May 23, 2013I give up. Usually I abandon a book because it offends me or horrifies me or infuriates me. This, though? I am bored to death. I can’t even start skimming because my eyes just glaze over.
This bugs me. The last book I did not finish was almost a year ago. And before that – oh, several years. So this feels like a blemish on my record somehow. But I’ve been trying since yesterday and I haven’t even gotten to the first sex scene yet (they’re apparently gearing up for it, though – and yet I cannot bring myself to care).
Will I regret giving up? Sure, in a way. Because I know I’ll never give this book another try. But to be honest, I am not all that interested in how the story progresses. So far nothing of value happened and I doubt the rest will differ.
And it makes me feel doubly bad since apparently this is a new author’s first book. I hate throwing cold water on the thrill (and hard-earned satisfaction) of that.
Okay, let me collect my notes. Negative feedback can be useful, right?
It’s the prologue and viewpoints already shift willy-nilly. Well, I am being too strict. This might as well be omniscient viewpoint. Later on we learn that, yes, this is very much omni. Within the same paragraph we learn what Trevor thinks and how he appears to Mark while he talks.
Omniscient POV is not a good idea in contemporary fiction; if you want to pull this off successfully, you’ll have to give up a certain closeness to the characters in return. Zoom out with your camera, in a way. Otherwise it feels confusing and messy to the reader. The drawback of this is a disconnect; modern readers are unlikely to be used to this kind of storytelling.
Medical procedures. They don’t always sound so boring in fiction. This reads like a textbook on the subject. Sadly, it turns out that this is the overall tone.
Ah god, the narrative is inventorying every single movement, especially when it comes to positioning the protagonists with each other. I am terrified of how that will play out once the sex starts. (Probably a good reason for me to stop reading.)
Considering that Mark claims he wants to avoid getting into something with Trevor, I find it odd that he keeps flirting and seeking Trevor out anyway. That’s kind of a jerkish thing to do.
Although there’s actually an explanation that only occurred to me a bit later: Let it be known that Mark is “the girl”. In a very old-fashioned-het-romance way, really. Even the nondescript waiter takes note of this by letting only Trevor taste the wine. ’Cause he’s “the man” and all. And, well, those romance heroines of yore, they really tended to play hot and cold with the heroes, jerking them around without ever giving it thought.
*sigh* Still, I truly was trying to give this story a chance, despite the tons of amateur moves. But then Mark had to giggle. And it wasn’t even over anything giggle-worthy. Jeez.
Minor pet peeve. People do not look incredible. Unless maybe if they have three heads and a tail. They can look incredulous; they can look incredibly handsome (although in that case it needs to be to a truly astonishing degree). Someone may use the phrase in direct speech, but anywhere else it’s just very bad writing, showing us nothing, really. And an inventory of clothing items afterwards does not actually help.
This obsession with what people are wearing? I’m a chick and even I don’t pay that much attention to clothes. (Okay, I don’t pay any at all. I just might be weird.)
The thing is, these are not special clothes in any way (or if they are, that’s not mentioned). Jeans, shirts – that sort of thing. So then… why?
I want to make it clear that I am certain some people will thoroughly enjoy this story. I am simply not one of them. If a book bores me to tears even while it makes me cringe, it’s probably lost on me.
Dear author, please don’t allow me to discourage you.
For one thing, my opinion holds little value to anyone but myself. Plus, I’m positive that you have stories to tell that I’ll love to read, because I’m a sucker for seeing couples find happiness together, and I get the feeling that might be your mindset, too.
In the end, this is more painful (for me) than a rage-quit would be, but leaves a lot more room for hope.
Addendum:
Okay, I am skimming and skipping through the rest after all, and the infuriating thing is that there are some really good instances. Half a sentence, or the idea for an interaction, a thought. I’m unhappy that I am missing out on the existent qualities here. The story’s heart’s definitely in the right spot.
And maybe I was wrong about the viewpoint in that it already is much too distant. Emotions have no zing to them here and I am not sure why, because there definitely are emotional responses going on.
These glimpses I get at times are of a book I’d really enjoy, but it’s hidden somewhere underneath the somewhat sterile writing. I wish I could just peel that top layer off and have that book I want.
This bugs me. The last book I did not finish was almost a year ago. And before that – oh, several years. So this feels like a blemish on my record somehow. But I’ve been trying since yesterday and I haven’t even gotten to the first sex scene yet (they’re apparently gearing up for it, though – and yet I cannot bring myself to care).
Will I regret giving up? Sure, in a way. Because I know I’ll never give this book another try. But to be honest, I am not all that interested in how the story progresses. So far nothing of value happened and I doubt the rest will differ.
And it makes me feel doubly bad since apparently this is a new author’s first book. I hate throwing cold water on the thrill (and hard-earned satisfaction) of that.
Okay, let me collect my notes. Negative feedback can be useful, right?
It’s the prologue and viewpoints already shift willy-nilly. Well, I am being too strict. This might as well be omniscient viewpoint. Later on we learn that, yes, this is very much omni. Within the same paragraph we learn what Trevor thinks and how he appears to Mark while he talks.
Omniscient POV is not a good idea in contemporary fiction; if you want to pull this off successfully, you’ll have to give up a certain closeness to the characters in return. Zoom out with your camera, in a way. Otherwise it feels confusing and messy to the reader. The drawback of this is a disconnect; modern readers are unlikely to be used to this kind of storytelling.
Medical procedures. They don’t always sound so boring in fiction. This reads like a textbook on the subject. Sadly, it turns out that this is the overall tone.
Ah god, the narrative is inventorying every single movement, especially when it comes to positioning the protagonists with each other. I am terrified of how that will play out once the sex starts. (Probably a good reason for me to stop reading.)
Considering that Mark claims he wants to avoid getting into something with Trevor, I find it odd that he keeps flirting and seeking Trevor out anyway. That’s kind of a jerkish thing to do.
Although there’s actually an explanation that only occurred to me a bit later: Let it be known that Mark is “the girl”. In a very old-fashioned-het-romance way, really. Even the nondescript waiter takes note of this by letting only Trevor taste the wine. ’Cause he’s “the man” and all. And, well, those romance heroines of yore, they really tended to play hot and cold with the heroes, jerking them around without ever giving it thought.
*sigh* Still, I truly was trying to give this story a chance, despite the tons of amateur moves. But then Mark had to giggle. And it wasn’t even over anything giggle-worthy. Jeez.
Minor pet peeve. People do not look incredible. Unless maybe if they have three heads and a tail. They can look incredulous; they can look incredibly handsome (although in that case it needs to be to a truly astonishing degree). Someone may use the phrase in direct speech, but anywhere else it’s just very bad writing, showing us nothing, really. And an inventory of clothing items afterwards does not actually help.
This obsession with what people are wearing? I’m a chick and even I don’t pay that much attention to clothes. (Okay, I don’t pay any at all. I just might be weird.)
The thing is, these are not special clothes in any way (or if they are, that’s not mentioned). Jeans, shirts – that sort of thing. So then… why?
I want to make it clear that I am certain some people will thoroughly enjoy this story. I am simply not one of them. If a book bores me to tears even while it makes me cringe, it’s probably lost on me.
Dear author, please don’t allow me to discourage you.
For one thing, my opinion holds little value to anyone but myself. Plus, I’m positive that you have stories to tell that I’ll love to read, because I’m a sucker for seeing couples find happiness together, and I get the feeling that might be your mindset, too.
In the end, this is more painful (for me) than a rage-quit would be, but leaves a lot more room for hope.
Addendum:
Okay, I am skimming and skipping through the rest after all, and the infuriating thing is that there are some really good instances. Half a sentence, or the idea for an interaction, a thought. I’m unhappy that I am missing out on the existent qualities here. The story’s heart’s definitely in the right spot.
And maybe I was wrong about the viewpoint in that it already is much too distant. Emotions have no zing to them here and I am not sure why, because there definitely are emotional responses going on.
These glimpses I get at times are of a book I’d really enjoy, but it’s hidden somewhere underneath the somewhat sterile writing. I wish I could just peel that top layer off and have that book I want.
April 28, 2013
3 1/2 Hearts
Review written for MM Good Book Reviews
http://mmgoodbookreviews.wordpress.com/
Mark is happy to concentrate on his nursing career, after having yet another boyfriend cheat on him he has no plans to embark on a new relationship, so when he is pursued by cardiothoracic fellow Trevor Mark is wary of getting involved. Trevor falls hard for Mark from the first second he sets eyes on him, but getting Mark to go out with him is harder than he thought. Cracking through Mark’s shell has Trevor hoping that they can have something special but Mark is more stubborn, determined to only see them as temporary, until Mark has to confront his feelings when he nearly loses Trevor.
This is quite an easy flowing love story where the choice is protecting your heart or accepting love. Mark and Trevor are a very easy couple to like, even when you plainly see Mark acting like an idiot trying to deny what he is feeling. Trevor seems really cute and gentle but he goes after what he wants. Mark is nice and stubborn and believes in protecting his heart. Put the two men together and you have a slight angsty relationship where they are perfect together until they begin to think of the future.
I liked the flow of this story and the way it played out, the storyline is quite simple ‘man gets cheated on, man protects heart from future hurt’, the characters fit together well and their relationship progresses at a nice pace, they have some hot lovemaking and have some really nice dates and make some great friends. Trevor chips away slowly at Mark’s shell, Mark is there to support Trevor during a hard time and finally realises what he could be losing by protecting his heart against love.
Although this is an enjoyable easy story to read, there were one or two moments that threw me, like one moment we were seeing things from Mark’s view point and the next second it would be Trevor’s and then jump back to Mark’s after a couple of sentences, not well done at all. I was impressed with the medical knowledge and medical descriptions, I’d like to applaud Ken Murphy for making it interesting and weaving it into the storyline so it blended well into the lives of Trevor and Mark and their progressing relationship. This story is very well done for a first published work.
I have to recommend this to those who like developing love stories, a touch of angst, learning to trust your heart, grabbing onto love while you can, sweet lovemaking and a very happy ending. Oh if you like the writing style of Étienne and Tinnean then you will enjoy this story.
Review written for MM Good Book Reviews
http://mmgoodbookreviews.wordpress.com/
Mark is happy to concentrate on his nursing career, after having yet another boyfriend cheat on him he has no plans to embark on a new relationship, so when he is pursued by cardiothoracic fellow Trevor Mark is wary of getting involved. Trevor falls hard for Mark from the first second he sets eyes on him, but getting Mark to go out with him is harder than he thought. Cracking through Mark’s shell has Trevor hoping that they can have something special but Mark is more stubborn, determined to only see them as temporary, until Mark has to confront his feelings when he nearly loses Trevor.
This is quite an easy flowing love story where the choice is protecting your heart or accepting love. Mark and Trevor are a very easy couple to like, even when you plainly see Mark acting like an idiot trying to deny what he is feeling. Trevor seems really cute and gentle but he goes after what he wants. Mark is nice and stubborn and believes in protecting his heart. Put the two men together and you have a slight angsty relationship where they are perfect together until they begin to think of the future.
I liked the flow of this story and the way it played out, the storyline is quite simple ‘man gets cheated on, man protects heart from future hurt’, the characters fit together well and their relationship progresses at a nice pace, they have some hot lovemaking and have some really nice dates and make some great friends. Trevor chips away slowly at Mark’s shell, Mark is there to support Trevor during a hard time and finally realises what he could be losing by protecting his heart against love.
Although this is an enjoyable easy story to read, there were one or two moments that threw me, like one moment we were seeing things from Mark’s view point and the next second it would be Trevor’s and then jump back to Mark’s after a couple of sentences, not well done at all. I was impressed with the medical knowledge and medical descriptions, I’d like to applaud Ken Murphy for making it interesting and weaving it into the storyline so it blended well into the lives of Trevor and Mark and their progressing relationship. This story is very well done for a first published work.
I have to recommend this to those who like developing love stories, a touch of angst, learning to trust your heart, grabbing onto love while you can, sweet lovemaking and a very happy ending. Oh if you like the writing style of Étienne and Tinnean then you will enjoy this story.
September 3, 2014
Mark Smith is a nurse in the Surgical ICU unit of a large Atlanta hospital. He enjoys his single life, independent and free to do as he chooses. He’s given up any hopes of ever having a long term relationship since his last two ended when the men he cared for cheated on him. When he meets Dr. Trevor Hayes, though he’s very attracted to the young surgeon, he’s not interested in having any sort of relationship at all.
But Trevor thinks differently and pursues Mark until he gets him in his bed, then continues to pursue him until he accidentally slips and tells Mark that he loves him, and Mark is ready to call it quits. He will not even entertain the possibility of a commitment, knowing in his heart that Trevor will move on some day since he’s not finished with his residency and it’s unlikely he’ll stay in Atlanta when it ends. Trevor has to compromise and promise not to talk about love or commitment.
This story is a fairly smooth emotional ride from the point where the two men meet to the end where Mark is finally able to see the benefit of compromise and has lost his heart to Trevor. Sure, there were some incidents along the way, involving family issues and personal injury, but overall, it was not a highly-emotional story.
The narrator did a good job on the voices, yet his narration of the story segments had a bit of an overly dramatic quality to them. It’s hard to describe but it was somewhat the way I imagined an elderly governess reading a fairy tale to her young charge might sound. Not irritating, just a bit different from what I’d expect. On the positive side, the voices of the MCs and of Trevor’s best friend, Derek, were all easy to differentiate.
Considering the audiobook is over seven hours long, it’s hard to believe there wasn’t a lot of story. The author went into highly detailed descriptions of some of the medical procedures and daily job responsibilities of both MCs, as well as of other activities they enjoyed and places they visited. I suspect that if I read the story, I may have become impatient and scanned ahead, but the pace was just right for an audiobook that I wanted to entertain me for a few days while I was out walking or went about my daily household activities.
If you like a simple and sweet romance with two very likeable MCs and secondary characters, this book would be perfect for you.
Note: This audiobook was provided to me by the publisher through Hearts on Fire Reviews in exchange for an impartial review.
But Trevor thinks differently and pursues Mark until he gets him in his bed, then continues to pursue him until he accidentally slips and tells Mark that he loves him, and Mark is ready to call it quits. He will not even entertain the possibility of a commitment, knowing in his heart that Trevor will move on some day since he’s not finished with his residency and it’s unlikely he’ll stay in Atlanta when it ends. Trevor has to compromise and promise not to talk about love or commitment.
This story is a fairly smooth emotional ride from the point where the two men meet to the end where Mark is finally able to see the benefit of compromise and has lost his heart to Trevor. Sure, there were some incidents along the way, involving family issues and personal injury, but overall, it was not a highly-emotional story.
The narrator did a good job on the voices, yet his narration of the story segments had a bit of an overly dramatic quality to them. It’s hard to describe but it was somewhat the way I imagined an elderly governess reading a fairy tale to her young charge might sound. Not irritating, just a bit different from what I’d expect. On the positive side, the voices of the MCs and of Trevor’s best friend, Derek, were all easy to differentiate.
Considering the audiobook is over seven hours long, it’s hard to believe there wasn’t a lot of story. The author went into highly detailed descriptions of some of the medical procedures and daily job responsibilities of both MCs, as well as of other activities they enjoyed and places they visited. I suspect that if I read the story, I may have become impatient and scanned ahead, but the pace was just right for an audiobook that I wanted to entertain me for a few days while I was out walking or went about my daily household activities.
If you like a simple and sweet romance with two very likeable MCs and secondary characters, this book would be perfect for you.
Note: This audiobook was provided to me by the publisher through Hearts on Fire Reviews in exchange for an impartial review.
May 27, 2013
Mark is an ICU nurse at a hospital in Atlanta. He has a bad track record with boyfriends who cheat on him. One day, Mark is doing an orientation program for new hospital staff, and he meets Trevor, a new fellow in the heart surgery unit. Trevor appears to be totally hot and totally dreamy and wants to get to know Mark better.
Mark and Trevor start seeing each other, but Mark wants to keep it very light because he doesn't want to get hurt again. But, it is clear that Trevor has fallen hard for Mark. (And truth be told, Mark has also fallen for Trevor, but he won't admit to it himself.).
There is an odd "third wheel" in this relationship -- Trevor's roommate named Derrick. Trevor and Derrick had previously dated and the author tells us that these two men had sex three times. It looks like this subplot in the story will play an important part in he story because here is so much foreshadowing, but it just dies on the vine.
There is one really dopey plot element in the book concerning a mugging and gun shot incident. There was no foreshadowing that the area where the incident occurred was a crime prone area. It was as though the author decided that there needs to be some more angst to force these two men to come together -- and it came across as a badly conceived and forced plot mechanism.
The story is simply about the everyday decisions that are made in life -- how serious is the main character's relationship? Where are they going to live? How can Mark let go of all of his insecurities when it comes down to trusting a partner? These are not monumental, earth shattering questions, but these are the questions we all face in everyday life, and sometimes reading a book about everyday life is enjoyable. In this novel, we get to see how these two main characters resolve these questions in their own lives.
It's a nice, sweet story. I liked the main characters, and most of the secondary characters (although is still think there is something fishy about the relationship with Derrick.). I would like to read more about these main characters, and their lives together.
Four stars from me.
Mark and Trevor start seeing each other, but Mark wants to keep it very light because he doesn't want to get hurt again. But, it is clear that Trevor has fallen hard for Mark. (And truth be told, Mark has also fallen for Trevor, but he won't admit to it himself.).
There is an odd "third wheel" in this relationship -- Trevor's roommate named Derrick. Trevor and Derrick had previously dated and the author tells us that these two men had sex three times. It looks like this subplot in the story will play an important part in he story because here is so much foreshadowing, but it just dies on the vine.
There is one really dopey plot element in the book concerning a mugging and gun shot incident. There was no foreshadowing that the area where the incident occurred was a crime prone area. It was as though the author decided that there needs to be some more angst to force these two men to come together -- and it came across as a badly conceived and forced plot mechanism.
The story is simply about the everyday decisions that are made in life -- how serious is the main character's relationship? Where are they going to live? How can Mark let go of all of his insecurities when it comes down to trusting a partner? These are not monumental, earth shattering questions, but these are the questions we all face in everyday life, and sometimes reading a book about everyday life is enjoyable. In this novel, we get to see how these two main characters resolve these questions in their own lives.
It's a nice, sweet story. I liked the main characters, and most of the secondary characters (although is still think there is something fishy about the relationship with Derrick.). I would like to read more about these main characters, and their lives together.
Four stars from me.
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April 30, 2013For now this one will have to be a "skimmed through/not thoroughly read." So the review below are my impressions of the book.
The POV changes suddenly, and the tenses in sentences are mixed. Carla (I think she's supposed to be the "sassy best friend") is annoying; pushing her job off on to Mark and having nick names for everyone. I think she could have been a good character, but she just rubs me the wrong way. Some of the strangest things were also expanded upon. For example:
"The chicken was perfectly roasted, with a crispy skin covering the succulent meat inside. Whipped potatoes and a medley of roasted broccoli, carrots, and cauliflower provided the perfect accompaniment to the chicken."
I could understand having a description like this if a MC was a chef or a foodie - not for a book where most of the time is spent in a hospital work environment. Then again the author might have spent too much time researching and eating hospital food that anything eaten later tasted like ambrosia! ;)
I have not rated it yet because I didn't think it would be fair, as I stated above, I merely skimmed though it after the first couple of chapters. I'll try again to read it thoroughly, but for now I'm not making any promises.
The POV changes suddenly, and the tenses in sentences are mixed. Carla (I think she's supposed to be the "sassy best friend") is annoying; pushing her job off on to Mark and having nick names for everyone. I think she could have been a good character, but she just rubs me the wrong way. Some of the strangest things were also expanded upon. For example:
"The chicken was perfectly roasted, with a crispy skin covering the succulent meat inside. Whipped potatoes and a medley of roasted broccoli, carrots, and cauliflower provided the perfect accompaniment to the chicken."
I could understand having a description like this if a MC was a chef or a foodie - not for a book where most of the time is spent in a hospital work environment. Then again the author might have spent too much time researching and eating hospital food that anything eaten later tasted like ambrosia! ;)
I have not rated it yet because I didn't think it would be fair, as I stated above, I merely skimmed though it after the first couple of chapters. I'll try again to read it thoroughly, but for now I'm not making any promises.
May 11, 2013
I don't love it and I don't hate it. The preview was fun and engaging, just like the first couple of chapters. After that, it quickly becomes hum-drum and I've found myself nodding off a couple times. One thing stood out to me at the beginning: Mark has some very valid concerns about dating someone he works with, but his friends keep telling him he's imagining things and creating mountains out of molehills and I just don't get that at all. Then, if Mark believes that "happiness is just a myth," why does he fall into love with Trevor so quickly? Where's the drama? Where's the tension? Where's the emotions that make me want to empathize with any of the characters? There's a huge distance between the very annoying POV-shifting narrator and the reader that's hard to overcome. I felt no danger of these two not staying together. And as for Mark choosing "between guarding his heart and giving it completely, the risk he swore never to take again" ? Yeah, right. When did that happen?..
September 26, 2013
Mark wants to be loved, but his fear of commitment keeps him from really enjoying the relationship he is building with Trevor. He's been hurt and cheated on in the past by other lovers. It makes his walls deep and tall, nearly insurmountable to get through, but Trevor is determined. As Trevor allows Mark to see into his world, a world where healthy relationships exist, and where you can trust that there are people who will have your back no matter what, he begins to realize that "home" isn't a location on the map. I really enjoyed reading "Stubborn Heart" by Ken Murphy. The characters are wonderful (especially Trevor!) and I found myself sighing, swooning, and every once in a while tearing up, as they took this journey. Oh, and it didn't hurt that the sex was sexy and hot!
October 30, 2015
Having been able to meet the author of this book, I have an appreciation for the authenticity and abundance of detail included surrounding the medical profession and geography of Atlanta. There’s a very gradual build to the relationship and love that eventually unfold and it’s very fitting given the fact that Mark has been burned more than once in the romance department. The author takes time to develop the characters and make them believable – something I love to see in a story. Definitely recommended for those who love it when their boys have to work hard to earn the relationship, the story is believable, and there’s some angst but nothing over the top. Loved it!
May 16, 2013
There are miscommunications along the way. Mark is sure that he’s destined to be hurt again, but Trevor keeps plugging away. When Trevor experiences a personal loss, Trevor, Mark, and their friend Derrick, travel to be with Trevor’s family. It’s during this time that Mark starts to realize what he feels. There’s another bump on the road coming up, though. Will Mark find a way to be with Trevor, or will he let his Stubborn Heart ruin his future?
Lucky's complete 4 sweet pea review appears on May 17, 2013 at http://mrsconditreadsbooks.com/index....
Lucky's complete 4 sweet pea review appears on May 17, 2013 at http://mrsconditreadsbooks.com/index....
February 17, 2014
I really enjoyed Ken Murphy's book, Stubborn Heart. It was easy to relate to the characters and by living in Metro Atlanta, I was able to envision the landscape as this romance progressed. I would recommend this book to anyone looking for a good romance read. I am looking forward to Ken's newest book which is to be released in March of 2014.
February 21, 2014
3.5 STARS
I couldn't seem to get into the flow of this story. The concept was good, the characters were fleshed out, but the rhythm just was off for me. There was also a lot of unnecessary descriptions. Some people enjoy that so it is just a matter of preference for me. As I said, the characters were well-rounded and I enjoyed them.
I couldn't seem to get into the flow of this story. The concept was good, the characters were fleshed out, but the rhythm just was off for me. There was also a lot of unnecessary descriptions. Some people enjoy that so it is just a matter of preference for me. As I said, the characters were well-rounded and I enjoyed them.
December 3, 2014
4 Stars
Was an excellent read but kinda a same old storyline. Main MC comes homes over to find boyfriend cheating again, breaks up and hides his heart away. Meets second MC and feeling very attract but just wants to be friends. Fights to battle with just fun sex and growing feeling that he refuses to acknowledge. Tragedy happens to second MC to show how much he really means to him.
Was an excellent read but kinda a same old storyline. Main MC comes homes over to find boyfriend cheating again, breaks up and hides his heart away. Meets second MC and feeling very attract but just wants to be friends. Fights to battle with just fun sex and growing feeling that he refuses to acknowledge. Tragedy happens to second MC to show how much he really means to him.
July 28, 2014
3.5 stars of heavy sweetness and a side of angst. I really like simple stories when "in the mood"... and I was "in the mood". The sex was hot and even romantic, supporting cast was great (especially Derek - I would love to read about his story). As I said the plot was simple, but the struggles were rich. Lovely story for those who like their HEA with a dose of hunk(s).
July 26, 2014
I enjoyed this sweet story. I found the characters realistic an likable. I enjoyed following their journey to love and commitment as they struggled with day to day issues. I found Mark's difficulty in learning to trust again after being cheated on something I could empathize with. Mark and Trevor learned that communication is key!
October 2, 2014
This is a sweet little romance that allows the listener to escape to the promise of tomorrow. The story of Mark and Trevor can happen to just about everyone, which is why the sweet ending makes this a must read. I enjoyed Murphy's writing style as well as Gregory Salinas's narrative ability. I liked this book and I would recommend...
April 7, 2015
The Nurse and The Doctor...VERY ROMANTIC
I have loved the way the way they first met, going on dates to get to know each other, and...falling in love with each other. Also, the sex is very hot in here!! Will start reading Sharing Heart immediately!
I have loved the way the way they first met, going on dates to get to know each other, and...falling in love with each other. Also, the sex is very hot in here!! Will start reading Sharing Heart immediately!
May 18, 2016
A sweet and uncomplicated lovestory with a healthy sidedish of being afraid of getting hurt and trying to protect your heart.
Two very lovable men and a best friend to die for. A very enjoyable read.
Two very lovable men and a best friend to die for. A very enjoyable read.
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