Melting Sand is a highly enjoyable thriller with a bit of time travel in it. It was a lot of fun to read. At times, it felt like a log journal of surveillance duties ticked off, but for the most part the book stayed nicely on the path of scandalous and exciting.
Having said that, there were some plot points that made me groan:
1. The main villain telegraphing his intentions on the last day where everything happens. Who would do that, especially a trained agent?
2. Terri the young girl wasn’t identified consistently in the chapter about her. I would have said, “Young Terri” until her turn was finished. I spun my head around thinking it was adult Terri.
3. Miles not conveying the incredible news about the “save” to Terri right away was unforgiveable, as was Terri’s momentary amnesia about the taut, breaking news that affects her so personally.
4. How the heck can people communicate back and forth, although in sporadic and limited ways, twenty-three years apart? How do the guys in the future know what’s happening day by day twenty-three years ago, if it’s altering the timeline and therefore not recorded in their version of history? Similarly, how do Miles and Terri get messages from the future, since messages can’t time travel, but can only be transmitted live?
5. What, if anything, does the title have to do with the plot? Also, maybe a better cover? An explosion is so... cliche.
6. Wouldn’t there be a paradox? A major event such as a localized nuclear war would have resulted in different leadership in the CIA, thus if this nuclear war is removed from history, wouldn’t the absence of a world-altering event result in different leadership, hence not sending Miles and Terri back into the past? Also, if this nuclear war is averted there would be no reason for them to go back to the past. That’s what makes time travel such a headache!
Nonetheless, for a delightful, fun, thrilling read, I highly recommend this book. It’s rare that two principal characters can be described and fleshed out equally so well.