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The Captive #2
Renegade
Librarian Note: Alternate cover edition for ASIN# B00885Z13U
Edited & re-released 3/14/13
Though she is free of the palace, rescued from her position as a blood slave, Aria is haunted by the memories of her time spent within the fortress, tormented by memories of Braith, the prince that betrayed her and shattered her heart.
Every day is a struggle to get through, and the only solace she is able to find is with Max, her best friend, and fellow captive. Though Max does not understand her bond to Braith, he knows some of what she endured, and helps to ease some of the tattered pieces of her soul. Aria slowly begins to salvage the broken parts of her wounded spirit by throwing herself into the wonder of the woods she had so greatly missed, and the secure and reassuring love that Max freely gives her. Her world is thrown into a tailspin again though when a marauding group of vampires destroy the caves she had found temporary shelter in.
Scattered about the forest, seeking to stay hidden and find her family, Aria is stunned when Braith, the monster that savaged her heart, reappears. Stunned by his sudden arrival in her world, Arianna is uncertain if he has come to recapture her, or to kill her for daring to escape.
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Young Adult/New Adult
This book contains some language, violence, and sexual situations. Recommended for ages sixteen and up.
Edited & re-released 3/14/13
Though she is free of the palace, rescued from her position as a blood slave, Aria is haunted by the memories of her time spent within the fortress, tormented by memories of Braith, the prince that betrayed her and shattered her heart.
Every day is a struggle to get through, and the only solace she is able to find is with Max, her best friend, and fellow captive. Though Max does not understand her bond to Braith, he knows some of what she endured, and helps to ease some of the tattered pieces of her soul. Aria slowly begins to salvage the broken parts of her wounded spirit by throwing herself into the wonder of the woods she had so greatly missed, and the secure and reassuring love that Max freely gives her. Her world is thrown into a tailspin again though when a marauding group of vampires destroy the caves she had found temporary shelter in.
Scattered about the forest, seeking to stay hidden and find her family, Aria is stunned when Braith, the monster that savaged her heart, reappears. Stunned by his sudden arrival in her world, Arianna is uncertain if he has come to recapture her, or to kill her for daring to escape.
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Young Adult/New Adult
This book contains some language, violence, and sexual situations. Recommended for ages sixteen and up.
180 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 31, 2012
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Erica Stevens
44 books2,281 followersErica Stevens is the author of the Captive Series, Coven Series, Kindred Series, Fire & Ice Series, Ravening Series, and the Survivor Chronicles. She enjoys writing young adult, new adult, romance, horror, and science fiction. She also writes adult paranormal romance and historical romance under the pen name, Brenda K. Davies. When not out with friends and family, she is at home with her husband, son, dogs, cat, and horse.
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February 27, 2019
and it got worse...
July 10, 2016
“She was not the girl that had offered him her vein. She was the woman that was going to fire that arrow at any moment.”
This book picks up right where the last one ended, Aria ran away from Braith after his brother told her about his upcoming arranged marriage. Aria was pissed,she felt betrayed not even her love of nature can heal her wounded heart.
“He had always enjoyed baiting her, watching her response, but this was different, this was not the girl that had stayed in his apartment at the palace. No, this girl was stronger, more callous; colder. This girl fairly vibrated with anger and hostility. She looked like a warrior, she was a warrior, he realized. She had always been a fighter, but now she was so much more than that.”
“She engulfed him, filled him, she eased every awful thing inside of him. He trusted that he did the same for her.”
i couldn't get through "Renegade" without shedding a tear, you will feel their pain, hapiness, frausration and protectiveness, they love each other but their families will never approve of their relationship.
March 22, 2015
"His touch made everything better; it was the salve to the ragged lesion that had been festering since their separation. For just this moment, in this time, she needed to feel better."-Arianna
Renegade is the second book in the Captive series. It begins only two months since Arianna has escaped from her captivity. Without Braith, she is broken.
"In the end he had left her shattered and broken. She was barely able to breathe through the grief that continuously clawed at her insides. The prince had ruined her."-Arianna
Arianna is facing both the hurt of loosing Braith and the discomfort of no longer fitting in with her family. Because of her experience at the castle, she is a different person. Even her good friend Max cannot comfort her. She continues to try and convince her father, brother, and Max that she loved the Prince and he was good to her. However, they are convinced that she is a victim of Stockholm syndrome.
Meanwhile, at the castle, Braith is going through a blood crazed frenzy. He is using blood slaves left and right. He feels betrayed by Arianna's departure and cannot seem to forget her. He feels betrayed. Because she has his blood flowing through her veins, he can track her. That is exactly what he does.
"He had finally come for her. Though she hated to admit it, there had been a part of her that had craved this . A part that had pined for him to come for her, to take her away from all of this desolation and pain, and keep her safe and love her."-Arianna
Their reunion is not a romantic one at first. They fight before Arianna breaks down.
"It wasn't until he tasted the saltiness of her tears upon his lips that he realized she was crying. It wasn't until he pulled away to wipe the tears from her silken cheeks that he realized he cared for her far more than he had been willing to admit to himself. It wasn't until she rested her forehead against his chest and began to sob heavily that he realized they were both doomed."
Braith takes her to a secluded cabin. He has to know why she left. As the secrets are brought into the light, Braith realizes his love for Arianna is still very real. Even though they love each other they know they cannot be together.
"She wanted to cry again, for everything they'd almost had, for everything that they had lost. For everything that they would lose, and could never have. But it was impossible to feel sad when he was holding her."-Arianna
How can a Vampire Prince and a rebel girl find a way to be together.
As the story progresses, Arianna tries to go back to her family. Braith tries to return to the palace. They physically cannot stay away from each other. Braith takes Arianna deep into the woods. Ergo giving up his rights to the throne and turning his back from his father the King.
"She lost herself to his incredible touch, scent, and feel. His presence was overwhelming, and yet so blissfully soothing . His hands were caressing as they slid over her, pushing aside her clothes to brush over her skin."-Arianna
While on the run, they run into some surprising characters. No one is exactly who they seem to be. Arianna and Braith find out why their connection is so strong. Secrets from the past are revealed. Braith is obsessed with keeping Arianna safe. He won't allow anyone to touch her. (Think KA Alpha mixed with a Black Dagger Brother on steroids)! Even Arianna's family and friends must keep a safe distance.
"You hurt her, you talk to her, you so much as look at her again and you'll be dead before you even know what happened. Do you understand me?"-Braithe
They become resolute of their connection and decide to join the war. Their future is uncertain and yet at least they will be uncertain together.
Overall, I am thoroughly enjoying this series. The writing style is textured with inner monologues and yet I find the feelings that they are both going through are better expressed through their thoughts. I am very intrigued by the family connections between both Braith and his family and Arianna and her family. The vampire/human love story has been done a million times. However, the binding tie between these two makes this story different. It is unknown if they will make it out together and alive. The physical connection between the two is strong and yet the lack of sexual intimacy only builds the anticipation. What will happen when they finally do connect?
Since I have already downloaded the next book, I won't have to wait to find out.
"No matter what, Arianna, I am going to keep you safe."-Braith
Renegade is the second book in the Captive series. It begins only two months since Arianna has escaped from her captivity. Without Braith, she is broken.
"In the end he had left her shattered and broken. She was barely able to breathe through the grief that continuously clawed at her insides. The prince had ruined her."-Arianna
Arianna is facing both the hurt of loosing Braith and the discomfort of no longer fitting in with her family. Because of her experience at the castle, she is a different person. Even her good friend Max cannot comfort her. She continues to try and convince her father, brother, and Max that she loved the Prince and he was good to her. However, they are convinced that she is a victim of Stockholm syndrome.
Meanwhile, at the castle, Braith is going through a blood crazed frenzy. He is using blood slaves left and right. He feels betrayed by Arianna's departure and cannot seem to forget her. He feels betrayed. Because she has his blood flowing through her veins, he can track her. That is exactly what he does.
"He had finally come for her. Though she hated to admit it, there had been a part of her that had craved this . A part that had pined for him to come for her, to take her away from all of this desolation and pain, and keep her safe and love her."-Arianna
Their reunion is not a romantic one at first. They fight before Arianna breaks down.
"It wasn't until he tasted the saltiness of her tears upon his lips that he realized she was crying. It wasn't until he pulled away to wipe the tears from her silken cheeks that he realized he cared for her far more than he had been willing to admit to himself. It wasn't until she rested her forehead against his chest and began to sob heavily that he realized they were both doomed."
Braith takes her to a secluded cabin. He has to know why she left. As the secrets are brought into the light, Braith realizes his love for Arianna is still very real. Even though they love each other they know they cannot be together.
"She wanted to cry again, for everything they'd almost had, for everything that they had lost. For everything that they would lose, and could never have. But it was impossible to feel sad when he was holding her."-Arianna
How can a Vampire Prince and a rebel girl find a way to be together.
As the story progresses, Arianna tries to go back to her family. Braith tries to return to the palace. They physically cannot stay away from each other. Braith takes Arianna deep into the woods. Ergo giving up his rights to the throne and turning his back from his father the King.
"She lost herself to his incredible touch, scent, and feel. His presence was overwhelming, and yet so blissfully soothing . His hands were caressing as they slid over her, pushing aside her clothes to brush over her skin."-Arianna
While on the run, they run into some surprising characters. No one is exactly who they seem to be. Arianna and Braith find out why their connection is so strong. Secrets from the past are revealed. Braith is obsessed with keeping Arianna safe. He won't allow anyone to touch her. (Think KA Alpha mixed with a Black Dagger Brother on steroids)! Even Arianna's family and friends must keep a safe distance.
"You hurt her, you talk to her, you so much as look at her again and you'll be dead before you even know what happened. Do you understand me?"-Braithe
They become resolute of their connection and decide to join the war. Their future is uncertain and yet at least they will be uncertain together.
Overall, I am thoroughly enjoying this series. The writing style is textured with inner monologues and yet I find the feelings that they are both going through are better expressed through their thoughts. I am very intrigued by the family connections between both Braith and his family and Arianna and her family. The vampire/human love story has been done a million times. However, the binding tie between these two makes this story different. It is unknown if they will make it out together and alive. The physical connection between the two is strong and yet the lack of sexual intimacy only builds the anticipation. What will happen when they finally do connect?
Since I have already downloaded the next book, I won't have to wait to find out.
"No matter what, Arianna, I am going to keep you safe."-Braith
August 9, 2016
A wholly entertaining series which transcends the YA genre... Most accurately described as Dystopian Vampire Romance...
The second book in this series lays out a seemingly insurmountable obstacle standing between Braith & Aria's Happily Ever After...
In the process Braith becomes a bit whiny and helpless (in my opinion) Which is strange to say about a powerful immortal on a killing spree...
Some of My Favorite Moments:
My Other Reviews in the Captive Series:
1 - Captured - You can read my full review HERE
2 - Renegade - You can read my full review HERE
3 - Refugee - You can read my full review HERE
4 - Salvation - You can read my full review HERE
The second book in this series lays out a seemingly insurmountable obstacle standing between Braith & Aria's Happily Ever After...
In the process Braith becomes a bit whiny and helpless (in my opinion) Which is strange to say about a powerful immortal on a killing spree...
Some of My Favorite Moments:
My Other Reviews in the Captive Series:
1 - Captured - You can read my full review HERE
2 - Renegade - You can read my full review HERE
3 - Refugee - You can read my full review HERE
4 - Salvation - You can read my full review HERE
June 24, 2015
This was almost comical... In a bad way.
Braith, our guy, spends nearly the whole book trembling in rage. I'm not kidding, that would happen twice every page. By the end, of course, it had gotten old and boring. As for Aria, she spent nearly all the time she had with Braith crying, for different reasons. As a couple, those two were just terrible. One trembling in rage and the other melting in a puddle of tears all the time. Oh, and there was also Max, suffering from a serious case of PTSD. He was also extremely annoying.
This is also in dire need of a proofreading. There were so many mistakes that I was distracted (one example? The constant use of 'too' rather than 'to').
Some revelations happened, and the thing that bothers me is
There were far too many cliches here, making the story pretty predictable.
Braith, our guy, spends nearly the whole book trembling in rage. I'm not kidding, that would happen twice every page. By the end, of course, it had gotten old and boring. As for Aria, she spent nearly all the time she had with Braith crying, for different reasons. As a couple, those two were just terrible. One trembling in rage and the other melting in a puddle of tears all the time. Oh, and there was also Max, suffering from a serious case of PTSD. He was also extremely annoying.
This is also in dire need of a proofreading. There were so many mistakes that I was distracted (one example? The constant use of 'too' rather than 'to').
Some revelations happened, and the thing that bothers me is
There were far too many cliches here, making the story pretty predictable.
April 4, 2016
I am officially quitting this series. It was only 180 pages, so I toughed it out.
The story (which was getting good) was put on hold so that the two main characters could be a mushy and ridiculous mess. Here's what I got out of the story....
Braith gets mad...
Arianna touches his arm and says, "Braith".
Braith gets mad...
Arianna touches his arm and says, "Braith".
Over and over again. The characters in this book can get staked for all I care.
The story (which was getting good) was put on hold so that the two main characters could be a mushy and ridiculous mess. Here's what I got out of the story....
Braith gets mad...
Arianna touches his arm and says, "Braith".
Braith gets mad...
Arianna touches his arm and says, "Braith".
Over and over again. The characters in this book can get staked for all I care.
May 5, 2018
"You said you loved me," she whispered. He pulled her closer, enfolding her in his arms as his body melded to hers. "Yes."
Guys!!!!!!!! This books was so cute! Better then the first one for sure! (I still loved the first one) ;)
"She is my world," Braith interrupted sharply.
"You are my family now," he said forcefully. "And I will make sure you stay safe."
Man this book made me cry and made my heart expand.
I think that the characters are better developed and the story line is a bit more interesting. :)
"You humble me Arianna. I don't deserve you; I did nothing to earn your love, or the gift of sight that your presence has brought back to my life."
Can't wait for the third one! CAN'T THEY COME NOW?!?!?!?! This is what happens when I order books from a different country. :P
5 stars!!!!!! (READ IT GUYS!)
Guys!!!!!!!! This books was so cute! Better then the first one for sure! (I still loved the first one) ;)
"She is my world," Braith interrupted sharply.
"You are my family now," he said forcefully. "And I will make sure you stay safe."
Man this book made me cry and made my heart expand.
I think that the characters are better developed and the story line is a bit more interesting. :)
"You humble me Arianna. I don't deserve you; I did nothing to earn your love, or the gift of sight that your presence has brought back to my life."
Can't wait for the third one! CAN'T THEY COME NOW?!?!?!?! This is what happens when I order books from a different country. :P
5 stars!!!!!! (READ IT GUYS!)
May 6, 2024
4 Stars!
So far, so good. Liked this one more than the first book. I do think the heroine forgave him too easy especially what he had done in his separation, but then again I also didn't dwell on it for too long because being without her makes him crazy and i was living for it lol. I normally hate stuff like that in books and I know most other people do too, but I'm letting it go because I really like this series so far. He is also super protective and possessive so I'm definitely excited to see more of that. Can't wait to see what more is to come.
So far, so good. Liked this one more than the first book. I do think the heroine forgave him too easy especially what he had done in his separation, but then again I also didn't dwell on it for too long because being without her makes him crazy and i was living for it lol. I normally hate stuff like that in books and I know most other people do too, but I'm letting it go because I really like this series so far. He is also super protective and possessive so I'm definitely excited to see more of that. Can't wait to see what more is to come.
December 12, 2018
Re-read 4th December - 5th December 2018
Aria's body may have escaped the castle but part of her is still there with Braith, she misses him and finds that she no longer fits in the forest like she used to do.
Braith hasn't taken Arias departure well and he's spiralling down into darkness, he's feeding constantly and brutally and we're left to wonder if he'll come out the other side.
It's only when his evil brother Caleb decides to go after Aria that Braith has to take action because regardless of the hurt and betrayal he feels he can't let Caleb get his hands on her or can he?
This is a really good second book as good if not better than the previous one.
Aria's body may have escaped the castle but part of her is still there with Braith, she misses him and finds that she no longer fits in the forest like she used to do.
Braith hasn't taken Arias departure well and he's spiralling down into darkness, he's feeding constantly and brutally and we're left to wonder if he'll come out the other side.
It's only when his evil brother Caleb decides to go after Aria that Braith has to take action because regardless of the hurt and betrayal he feels he can't let Caleb get his hands on her or can he?
This is a really good second book as good if not better than the previous one.
August 11, 2016
The second book in The Captive series, this is a fantastic follow up to book one - Captured - and continues the story of Arianna and Braith and their battle to be together in a world where vampires rule over an enslaved human race.
Just a warning – this is going to be a bit spoilery if you haven’t read the first book. And if you haven’t read the first book – it’s free on Amazon, so DO IT NOW!!!!
The story picks up around two months after the end of the hideous cliffhanger that ended the last book. Arianna and Braith are both devastated following their separation, both under the misconception that they have been betrayed by the other. Arianna takes solace in finding quiet time (usually with Max who is still very much devoted to her), while Braith goes all feral vampire – manwhoring, killing and drinking the blood of anybody he can get his hands on. Thankfully, it doesn’t take too long for the confusion to be resolved, and the reunion between them is beautiful and heartbreaking as they come to realise exactly what they mean to each other, as well as all that stands between them.
They refuse to allow their differences to keep them apart (yay), despite coming from completely different worlds and being on opposite sides of the struggle (the heir to the Vampire throne and the daughter of the leader of the Resistance – it doesn’t get more complicated than that!). And there is a strong focus on their relationship which only strengthens as they come to realise the depth of their feelings, and what the bond between them truly means. I loved seeing them open up to each other. The emotion is absolutely beautiful.
“He grabbed hold of her, pulling her against him. A small gasp of surprise escaped her as he fell to his knees before her. He wrapped his arms around her waist as he rested his head against her stomach. "You humble me Arianna. I don't deserve you; I did nothing to earn your love, or the gift … that your presence has brought back to my life."
Braith in love is a gorgeous thing to see! He is so beautifully protective, swoony and tender with Arianna, but to the rest of the world he is a macho Alpha who is immensely powerful, vicious and ruthless and actually a bit of an asshole, and I LOVE him!
“I swear I'll snap your neck just because you're annoying me"
(I would love to say that to somebody… just once!).
And then there’s the rest of the story. As the vampires continue to hunt out the resistance movement, and as Braith begins to spend time away from the Palace for the first time, he slowly comes to realise exactly what his father’s rule means for those living outside of his privileged part of the world, and it is truly horrifying. With the help of Jack, and the introduction of two new and important characters – Ashby and Melinda (love them) – the truth of the war, its history, and Braith’s place in it, is revealed, and it provides a fantastic lead in to the next book!
I am loving this series! I love the world, I love the characters and I love Stevens’ writing style! She brings so much emotion to the story, and not just the romance – the disgust, the hate, the longing, and the heartbreak, I could feel it all! I raced through this book, and can’t wait to see what comes next.
Loved it - 4 stars
Just a warning – this is going to be a bit spoilery if you haven’t read the first book. And if you haven’t read the first book – it’s free on Amazon, so DO IT NOW!!!!
The story picks up around two months after the end of the hideous cliffhanger that ended the last book. Arianna and Braith are both devastated following their separation, both under the misconception that they have been betrayed by the other. Arianna takes solace in finding quiet time (usually with Max who is still very much devoted to her), while Braith goes all feral vampire – manwhoring, killing and drinking the blood of anybody he can get his hands on. Thankfully, it doesn’t take too long for the confusion to be resolved, and the reunion between them is beautiful and heartbreaking as they come to realise exactly what they mean to each other, as well as all that stands between them.
They refuse to allow their differences to keep them apart (yay), despite coming from completely different worlds and being on opposite sides of the struggle (the heir to the Vampire throne and the daughter of the leader of the Resistance – it doesn’t get more complicated than that!). And there is a strong focus on their relationship which only strengthens as they come to realise the depth of their feelings, and what the bond between them truly means. I loved seeing them open up to each other. The emotion is absolutely beautiful.
“He grabbed hold of her, pulling her against him. A small gasp of surprise escaped her as he fell to his knees before her. He wrapped his arms around her waist as he rested his head against her stomach. "You humble me Arianna. I don't deserve you; I did nothing to earn your love, or the gift … that your presence has brought back to my life."
Braith in love is a gorgeous thing to see! He is so beautifully protective, swoony and tender with Arianna, but to the rest of the world he is a macho Alpha who is immensely powerful, vicious and ruthless and actually a bit of an asshole, and I LOVE him!
“I swear I'll snap your neck just because you're annoying me"
(I would love to say that to somebody… just once!).
And then there’s the rest of the story. As the vampires continue to hunt out the resistance movement, and as Braith begins to spend time away from the Palace for the first time, he slowly comes to realise exactly what his father’s rule means for those living outside of his privileged part of the world, and it is truly horrifying. With the help of Jack, and the introduction of two new and important characters – Ashby and Melinda (love them) – the truth of the war, its history, and Braith’s place in it, is revealed, and it provides a fantastic lead in to the next book!
I am loving this series! I love the world, I love the characters and I love Stevens’ writing style! She brings so much emotion to the story, and not just the romance – the disgust, the hate, the longing, and the heartbreak, I could feel it all! I raced through this book, and can’t wait to see what comes next.
Loved it - 4 stars
June 30, 2015
She would be his undoing, as he would be hers.
In this second book, we start with Aria and Braith both feeling betrayed and deeply hurt after Braith's good brother, Jack/Jericho, helped Aria to escape the palace. Aria is heartbroken and having a hard time getting back to her life as a rebel, and Braith is lashing out over losing the only person he has ever loved.
The good news about this book is that we get to learn a lot more about the world and other characters. And, we learn about why Braith can only see when Aria is around him. Also, I liked that fact that Aria's family thought she had Stockholm Syndrome because it shows that they are intelligent and protective. She keeps trying to convince them that she loved him and that he was kind to her, but they don't buy it. Even though we know this to be true, it would have been weird and wrong for her family to just say, "ok, you had a great vacation and fell in love, we are happy for you."
Obviously, Braith can't stay away for long and they end up together again - although Aria does try to kill him at first. I like that about her. Kill the two-timing a-hole! (evil laugh)
The problem is that Braith's evil brother, Caleb, is out searching for Aria too. And, when Braith leaves the palace, things get complicated because there is no way he can just walk away from being the heir to the throne. He wants to stay with Aria at any cost, though, because he is becoming more unstable whenever he is not around her. There is a reason for this, as the cause of their bond, and his eyesight returning around her, is finally revealed. Unfortunately, it throws a few more wrenches in the system because Braith could be very dangerous if anything happens to Aria - and she is only a fragile human.
I liked this book much more than the first one, even though Aria got a little mopey in the beginning, because of the world-building. I finally felt like there was more of a story than just the two of them.
In this second book, we start with Aria and Braith both feeling betrayed and deeply hurt after Braith's good brother, Jack/Jericho, helped Aria to escape the palace. Aria is heartbroken and having a hard time getting back to her life as a rebel, and Braith is lashing out over losing the only person he has ever loved.
The good news about this book is that we get to learn a lot more about the world and other characters. And, we learn about why Braith can only see when Aria is around him. Also, I liked that fact that Aria's family thought she had Stockholm Syndrome because it shows that they are intelligent and protective. She keeps trying to convince them that she loved him and that he was kind to her, but they don't buy it. Even though we know this to be true, it would have been weird and wrong for her family to just say, "ok, you had a great vacation and fell in love, we are happy for you."
Obviously, Braith can't stay away for long and they end up together again - although Aria does try to kill him at first. I like that about her. Kill the two-timing a-hole! (evil laugh)
The problem is that Braith's evil brother, Caleb, is out searching for Aria too. And, when Braith leaves the palace, things get complicated because there is no way he can just walk away from being the heir to the throne. He wants to stay with Aria at any cost, though, because he is becoming more unstable whenever he is not around her. There is a reason for this, as the cause of their bond, and his eyesight returning around her, is finally revealed. Unfortunately, it throws a few more wrenches in the system because Braith could be very dangerous if anything happens to Aria - and she is only a fragile human.
I liked this book much more than the first one, even though Aria got a little mopey in the beginning, because of the world-building. I finally felt like there was more of a story than just the two of them.
August 26, 2019
Re-read for me!
The story picks up where we left off in Captured. The storyline is still strong and exciting. In Renegade Braith's character comes to the fore front for me. There are numerous revelations that are made in these few pages that rock his world. Braith finds that the future he has been working for and planning for is gone, and a new future is taking form. He biggest concern is whether or not Aria will survive long enough to be a part of it.
In Captive Aria was smart, calculating and strong...this time her character experienced vulnerability, a sense of feeling lost, and a level of surrender. Not typical characteristics I enjoy in a heroine however this tied in perfectly with the storyline making it a necessity.
Where book 1 tied me to Aria, I feel book two tied me to Braith...I am excited to see where book 3 takes us!
Happy Reading! DD
The story picks up where we left off in Captured. The storyline is still strong and exciting. In Renegade Braith's character comes to the fore front for me. There are numerous revelations that are made in these few pages that rock his world. Braith finds that the future he has been working for and planning for is gone, and a new future is taking form. He biggest concern is whether or not Aria will survive long enough to be a part of it.
In Captive Aria was smart, calculating and strong...this time her character experienced vulnerability, a sense of feeling lost, and a level of surrender. Not typical characteristics I enjoy in a heroine however this tied in perfectly with the storyline making it a necessity.
Where book 1 tied me to Aria, I feel book two tied me to Braith...I am excited to see where book 3 takes us!
Happy Reading! DD
June 5, 2020
I forgot all about Ashby and how much I love him. And where tf was Keegan?! I like that wolf 😂
July 7, 2012
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Story: GOOD
Intimacy Level: NONE
Enjoyment: GOOD
Length: 6699 kindle
THOUGHTS
Renegade, book 2 is the follow up to Captured (The Captive Series Book 1). In book 2, I found the first few chapters of the story intense as Braith's anger towards Aria fuels him. It was definitely a darker side of him compared to book 1. As the story progressed and the intensity was over, the story then focuses on the history and back story of the characters and their families. This then introduces us to new characters as well as Braith's father, the king, who is apparently on everyone's 'I Hate You List'.
I find Aria and Braith's story a bit like a twisted version of Romeo and Juliet. Their connection is so strong that if anyone breaths wrong on Aria, Braith is ready to kill. This connection is later explained as certain things starts to fall into place between Aria and Braith. When Aria and Braith first connect again in the woods, it was intense, exciting, a bit dangerous and intriguing as their love/hate relationship goes to another level. While all this is going on, I do feel sorry for Max. Max was captured along with Aria in book 1. His feelings are changing for Aria and you can't help but feel for what he is going through.
Overall, interesting story/plot and characters. With how the story ends, there will be a book 3. For me, that's a bit annoying when the same characters are continuous in a series. For me that can dwindle my interest pretty quick if there isn't any closure. Nevertheless, that's my opinion, but others may feel different.But book 1 and 2 for me was interesting and I think worth the read definitely.
Story: GOOD
Intimacy Level: NONE
Enjoyment: GOOD
Length: 6699 kindle
THOUGHTS
Renegade, book 2 is the follow up to Captured (The Captive Series Book 1). In book 2, I found the first few chapters of the story intense as Braith's anger towards Aria fuels him. It was definitely a darker side of him compared to book 1. As the story progressed and the intensity was over, the story then focuses on the history and back story of the characters and their families. This then introduces us to new characters as well as Braith's father, the king, who is apparently on everyone's 'I Hate You List'.
I find Aria and Braith's story a bit like a twisted version of Romeo and Juliet. Their connection is so strong that if anyone breaths wrong on Aria, Braith is ready to kill. This connection is later explained as certain things starts to fall into place between Aria and Braith. When Aria and Braith first connect again in the woods, it was intense, exciting, a bit dangerous and intriguing as their love/hate relationship goes to another level. While all this is going on, I do feel sorry for Max. Max was captured along with Aria in book 1. His feelings are changing for Aria and you can't help but feel for what he is going through.
Overall, interesting story/plot and characters. With how the story ends, there will be a book 3. For me, that's a bit annoying when the same characters are continuous in a series. For me that can dwindle my interest pretty quick if there isn't any closure. Nevertheless, that's my opinion, but others may feel different.But book 1 and 2 for me was interesting and I think worth the read definitely.
May 30, 2015
I looooooooooved this!
Book one is probably still my favorite, but this one was definitely amazing. I heart Braith and Aria, they are definitely something else. There is this connection, this bond between them...its hard to explain, but its just so beautiful to me.
There was a lot more going on in this book, it moves at a pretty fast pace, but it didn't feel rushed to me. The writing is definitely something to be admired. I am greatly enjoying this series and am excited to read on.
the ending of the book was insane, it definitely hints at something big happening, and I can't wait!!
Book one is probably still my favorite, but this one was definitely amazing. I heart Braith and Aria, they are definitely something else. There is this connection, this bond between them...its hard to explain, but its just so beautiful to me.
There was a lot more going on in this book, it moves at a pretty fast pace, but it didn't feel rushed to me. The writing is definitely something to be admired. I am greatly enjoying this series and am excited to read on.
the ending of the book was insane, it definitely hints at something big happening, and I can't wait!!
August 23, 2016
hmm not as good as book 1
February 2, 2013
I was so bowled over by the first book "Captured" that I couldn't wait to start with this one. "Renegade" is everything I thought it would be. Imaginative, entertaining and very satisfying. But I had issues with this book which I did not have with the previous book. The problem with writing a vampire human love story is that it is very easy for the hero who is usually the vampire to go into the alpha male category. The menacing aura always reminding the readers along with the female lead that he can snap the human with a twitch of his fingers. In order to avoid this what most writers do is turn the vampire into a possessive, quavering mess of a character who would do anything to keep his love interest at his side. Give into any whims and fancies his love interest has while leaving the crazy act for the benefit of others around him. Sad to say this but this book did go down that path more than once. There were times I even questioned the leading characters sanity for holding on to things that was surely and swiftly making them crazy.
Those who have read "Captured" will no that the story left of with both Aria and Briath feeling betrayed by each other. Aria feels betrayed because Briath has kept the existence of his fiancée a secret from her and Briath is angry because Aria has left him without even a word.The story takes place two months after their separation Aria feels like a shell of her former self because she couldn't get Briath out of her mind while everyone else around her believes he had tortured her in some way. Briath on the other hand had gone on a killing spree the past two months as a part of his attempt to forget the betrayal Aria has heaped on him. His pride and anger will not be sooth until Aria is found and made to pay for her sins. So basically in this book you have two people who are bent on killing each other while realizing the fact that they cannot exist without each other. After trying so hard to move on eventually when they face each other again they realize that they haven't moved much further from the point they left off from two months ago but this time the feelings are so much stronger. Then the story moves on to the impending war between the Vampires and the Humans, with Aria's father,best friend and brothers hell bent on teaching the Vampire who took Aria a lesson while Aria has to come to terms with the fact that who is she actually rooting for in this future, her Vampire prince or her family.
One thing I did admire about this captive series is the fact that the characters her are strong willed. They know what they want and wouldn't let anything get in their way. Take Braith for example even though I found his unwavering love for Aria creepy at times I couldn't help appreciate the fact that he was relentless in his pursuit. He was neither racked by self doubt when it came to Aria and his love for her nor was he willing to back down when it came to losing her. Though at times he was a little bit too possessive which did make me feel a little uncomfortable. Aria on the other though has her moments cannot be characterized as a TSTL heroine. She is not useless and has a strength of character and stubbornness which I found endearing. But she forgave Braith a little too fast for my liking and in the end her character became some what timid. Her role was reduced to that of Braith's property and the maximum she could do was reason with Braith and make him listen to her. When their relationship began both of them were equals but now it feels like Edward and Bella all over again. The only thing that makes this bearable is that the story not only focuses on their relationship. There is a war coming. Alliances to be forged, Secrets to be reveled and Forces to be gathered. The rich atmosphere thick with tension is enough to keep you on the edge even when the characters who you relied on turn from special to stereotypical. "Renegade" delivers everything you expect and more. Just wish the characters retained their originality. A fantastic read that will leave you wanting more.
Those who have read "Captured" will no that the story left of with both Aria and Briath feeling betrayed by each other. Aria feels betrayed because Briath has kept the existence of his fiancée a secret from her and Briath is angry because Aria has left him without even a word.The story takes place two months after their separation Aria feels like a shell of her former self because she couldn't get Briath out of her mind while everyone else around her believes he had tortured her in some way. Briath on the other hand had gone on a killing spree the past two months as a part of his attempt to forget the betrayal Aria has heaped on him. His pride and anger will not be sooth until Aria is found and made to pay for her sins. So basically in this book you have two people who are bent on killing each other while realizing the fact that they cannot exist without each other. After trying so hard to move on eventually when they face each other again they realize that they haven't moved much further from the point they left off from two months ago but this time the feelings are so much stronger. Then the story moves on to the impending war between the Vampires and the Humans, with Aria's father,best friend and brothers hell bent on teaching the Vampire who took Aria a lesson while Aria has to come to terms with the fact that who is she actually rooting for in this future, her Vampire prince or her family.
One thing I did admire about this captive series is the fact that the characters her are strong willed. They know what they want and wouldn't let anything get in their way. Take Braith for example even though I found his unwavering love for Aria creepy at times I couldn't help appreciate the fact that he was relentless in his pursuit. He was neither racked by self doubt when it came to Aria and his love for her nor was he willing to back down when it came to losing her. Though at times he was a little bit too possessive which did make me feel a little uncomfortable. Aria on the other though has her moments cannot be characterized as a TSTL heroine. She is not useless and has a strength of character and stubbornness which I found endearing. But she forgave Braith a little too fast for my liking and in the end her character became some what timid. Her role was reduced to that of Braith's property and the maximum she could do was reason with Braith and make him listen to her. When their relationship began both of them were equals but now it feels like Edward and Bella all over again. The only thing that makes this bearable is that the story not only focuses on their relationship. There is a war coming. Alliances to be forged, Secrets to be reveled and Forces to be gathered. The rich atmosphere thick with tension is enough to keep you on the edge even when the characters who you relied on turn from special to stereotypical. "Renegade" delivers everything you expect and more. Just wish the characters retained their originality. A fantastic read that will leave you wanting more.
October 28, 2012
I hate to say it, but Renegade was a disappointing follow-up to Captive. It just wasn't as charming and it had more YA cliche elements than it needed to.
I didn't love the love triangle with Max. That guy is pretty off-his-rocker crazy now and you'd think that Aria would want to distance herself from him rather than welcome his company.
There was a disappointing lack of activity in the rebel camp--plans being made, etc. I would've liked to see Aria in action. Perhaps a raid on a neighboring village to stake a few vamps and bring back some much-needed supplies to the cave.
The largest cliche element was Braith's unwavering and frankly, somewhat ridiculous need to protect Aria. It's explained, thank goodness, but it's still kind of annoying.
I also find it a little silly that they haven't done the deed yet. I think it's something that should've been done in the first book. It would've strengthened Aria's sense of betrayal at finding out Braith was engaged. Now it's being dragged out a bit too long.
The author set it up for a lot of action in the third book, and I hope it's there rather than merely referred to and talked about. It could be a great conclusion.
I didn't love the love triangle with Max. That guy is pretty off-his-rocker crazy now and you'd think that Aria would want to distance herself from him rather than welcome his company.
There was a disappointing lack of activity in the rebel camp--plans being made, etc. I would've liked to see Aria in action. Perhaps a raid on a neighboring village to stake a few vamps and bring back some much-needed supplies to the cave.
The largest cliche element was Braith's unwavering and frankly, somewhat ridiculous need to protect Aria. It's explained, thank goodness, but it's still kind of annoying.
I also find it a little silly that they haven't done the deed yet. I think it's something that should've been done in the first book. It would've strengthened Aria's sense of betrayal at finding out Braith was engaged. Now it's being dragged out a bit too long.
The author set it up for a lot of action in the third book, and I hope it's there rather than merely referred to and talked about. It could be a great conclusion.
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August 8, 2020
buddy read with my babe Macy x
better than book 1!! more fun, cuter romance, basically just an all-round better book. i'm starting to properly enjoy this series now! sure, it may be cliche and kinda ridiculous at stages, but it's so entertaining that i don't care hehe.
onto the next one!
better than book 1!! more fun, cuter romance, basically just an all-round better book. i'm starting to properly enjoy this series now! sure, it may be cliche and kinda ridiculous at stages, but it's so entertaining that i don't care hehe.
onto the next one!
August 19, 2016
I'm loving this series! There is enough character develop and twists in the story to keep me reading, even though I know what the HEA ending is going to be (at least I think I do!) But that doesn't seem to matter because now I'm onto the 3rd. I find series don't usually captivate me as much as I get to the 2nd, 3rd and usually don't make it past the 4th, but I can see myself reading this one to the latest book. What does it for me is they are relatively short reads... about 75% the size of my usual books and I think I feel like I'm accomplishing something every time I finish one.
I really enjoyed the side characters in this one -- they are well written and integrate well with Aria and Braith and don't come across as just add-ons to make the story interesting. They have a purpose.I'm not sure I trust that Max guy though... he's got to pretty warp after being a blood slave...
The love between Aria and Birth is still going strong though of course there are HUGE obstacles in their way... a kingdom for example and the fact that Aria's family is still freaked out about her being with a vamp.
I really enjoyed the side characters in this one -- they are well written and integrate well with Aria and Braith and don't come across as just add-ons to make the story interesting. They have a purpose.I'm not sure I trust that Max guy though... he's got to pretty warp after being a blood slave...
The love between Aria and Birth is still going strong though of course there are HUGE obstacles in their way... a kingdom for example and the fact that Aria's family is still freaked out about her being with a vamp.
December 30, 2012
If you liked the first one then you will LOVE this one! I can usually predict what will happen fairly easy while reading young adult books, but this one had me held captive by its words the whole time. I can't wait to get a hold of the third one when it comes out!
October 18, 2018
I loved the start of this one with all the anger & hate that both Aria & Braith held, that was interesting to see despite it being so misplaced. Then suddenly it all got really melodramatic. Aria is constantly crying & latching onto Braith like some sort of limpet & Braith is acting like a crazy man who needs Aria to calm him down like at least once a page, I found it kinda annoying. I also got to the end & questioned what really happened in this book other than a whole lot of talking. Kinda annoyed now as I bought the box set on kindle on the back of enjoying the first book so much, but I don’t think I can continue.
November 25, 2019
Okay, I am happy. My problem with the first book's ending is resolved and we are back on good terms.
I fully acknowledge this is not great literature, it's clichéd, the characters are a bit flat and the text has a few errors; BUT it's fun and it's original enough. I had a good time time with it.
I fully acknowledge this is not great literature, it's clichéd, the characters are a bit flat and the text has a few errors; BUT it's fun and it's original enough. I had a good time time with it.
April 10, 2019
Wow! Still, wow.
March 25, 2018
Hmm... Theres nothing wrong with this book. I'm not sure what it is about it, but I just don't find myself into the characters. Usually I'd be all in to a book like this one! Unfortunately this time I'm just not feeling it.
October 17, 2012
Like I said, after reading the first book, CAPTURED, I went and immediately snatched up this one. While I did like CAPTURED better, I am still enamored with this series and will continue to stalk the author for news of future releases.
RENEGADE picks up about two months after CAPTURED ends. In that time, Arianna hasn't been able to get over Braith, even though he deceived her about being engaged. Meanwhile, Braith considers himself to have been betrayed by Arianna and his heartbreak drives him into a vicious madness as he waits for the human girl to be recaptured and made to pay for what she did to him.
After two months of waiting for his brother, Caleb, to obtain Arianna, Braith decides to hunt her down himself. Since Braith let her drink his blood, the two of them are connected and finding her is easy.
But once he finds her, Braith can't bring himself to drink her veins dry as he had planned. And Arianna falls for the vampire prince all over again. But between Braith's ruthless father and brother who are determined to crush the rebels; and Arianna's family who are certain Braith hurt her while she was his blood slave, they may be forced apart just when they've found their way back together.
I LOVED this book about 70% through. Up until the end when the stuff about bloodlinks came up and that was a personal, picky thing. Aside from the stuff about bloodlinks, this story fully met the sky-high standard set by the first. I'm now eagerly awaiting the Christmastime release of the third book. ERICA STEVENS, YOU ROCK!!!
Captured is always free on Amazon! Download it here: http://www.amazon.com/Captured-Captiv...
RENEGADE picks up about two months after CAPTURED ends. In that time, Arianna hasn't been able to get over Braith, even though he deceived her about being engaged. Meanwhile, Braith considers himself to have been betrayed by Arianna and his heartbreak drives him into a vicious madness as he waits for the human girl to be recaptured and made to pay for what she did to him.
After two months of waiting for his brother, Caleb, to obtain Arianna, Braith decides to hunt her down himself. Since Braith let her drink his blood, the two of them are connected and finding her is easy.
But once he finds her, Braith can't bring himself to drink her veins dry as he had planned. And Arianna falls for the vampire prince all over again. But between Braith's ruthless father and brother who are determined to crush the rebels; and Arianna's family who are certain Braith hurt her while she was his blood slave, they may be forced apart just when they've found their way back together.
I LOVED this book about 70% through. Up until the end when the stuff about bloodlinks came up and that was a personal, picky thing. Aside from the stuff about bloodlinks, this story fully met the sky-high standard set by the first. I'm now eagerly awaiting the Christmastime release of the third book. ERICA STEVENS, YOU ROCK!!!
Captured is always free on Amazon! Download it here: http://www.amazon.com/Captured-Captiv...
September 22, 2012
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More of the same. Yep, nothing new to tell except I'm almost regretting reading it in the first place. Like I said in my review for the first book in this series, Captured, I only decided to read the second book becuase of the ending.
Same problems as before: Bare to minimal world building. Shady explanations of why the war started. Although it was mentioned no one knows why, I still believe that as an author, if you're going to make a war so central to the story, than explanations are needed!
A weak heroine yet portrayed as strong and fearless. Not so much. Arianna this time around still manages to tilt her chin in defiance for lack of any action.
I found myself wondering why Braith was so enamored by her? Yes, she's kind and empathetic. Sometimes smart, but in general not a heroine I'd pay to read about.
Vampires. The story is about a vampire/human war, yet the things that make a vampire a vampire are ignored except for how they can walk in daylight. But this ties into the world building so I won't discuss it any further.
A disappointing sequel to an okay sounding premise. I dare say I'm not reading the third book whenever that comes out. I actually sped read the last 50 pages so I could bedone with it. Not a good sign. I'm aching for a YA that's worth reading now more than ever.
More of the same. Yep, nothing new to tell except I'm almost regretting reading it in the first place. Like I said in my review for the first book in this series, Captured, I only decided to read the second book becuase of the ending.
Same problems as before: Bare to minimal world building. Shady explanations of why the war started. Although it was mentioned no one knows why, I still believe that as an author, if you're going to make a war so central to the story, than explanations are needed!
A weak heroine yet portrayed as strong and fearless. Not so much. Arianna this time around still manages to tilt her chin in defiance for lack of any action.
I found myself wondering why Braith was so enamored by her? Yes, she's kind and empathetic. Sometimes smart, but in general not a heroine I'd pay to read about.
Vampires. The story is about a vampire/human war, yet the things that make a vampire a vampire are ignored except for how they can walk in daylight. But this ties into the world building so I won't discuss it any further.
A disappointing sequel to an okay sounding premise. I dare say I'm not reading the third book whenever that comes out. I actually sped read the last 50 pages so I could bedone with it. Not a good sign. I'm aching for a YA that's worth reading now more than ever.
September 28, 2020
3.5 Stars
So once again, nothing important happened through out the entire book. 80% of it was Braith and Aria finding each other again and whining about betrayal then going back to the puppy love eyes. That’s was pissed me off. They both went from despising each other and trying to kill each other to “Oh. I just love you so much. I was just mad. I could never hurt you” Yeah ok. Then Aria just shrugged off Braith TAKING AND KILLING BLOOD SLAVES! She even said it was HER fault. What the hell. He literally tortured and killed human, for no reason, and she’s just like “Oh. It’s ok” Excuse me???
The last 10% was when something interesting was actually happening. We finally get to know why Braith can see. Some blood link thing. But we get very little explanation. Or why it worked even though Aria was a human. And we finally, finally get the set up of a plot. At the end of the SECOND book -_- At least the rest of the books are going to get more interesting now.
Max... oh how I hate him. He was good at first, but I guess he snapped when Aria chose Braith. He reminded a lot of Adam from Shatter Me. With how controlling he was and was telling Aria how she felt then completely flipped when she chose the other guy. Yeah, definitely some Adam vibes there.
P.S. I want to see more of William and Daniel!!!
So once again, nothing important happened through out the entire book. 80% of it was Braith and Aria finding each other again and whining about betrayal then going back to the puppy love eyes. That’s was pissed me off. They both went from despising each other and trying to kill each other to “Oh. I just love you so much. I was just mad. I could never hurt you” Yeah ok. Then Aria just shrugged off Braith TAKING AND KILLING BLOOD SLAVES! She even said it was HER fault. What the hell. He literally tortured and killed human, for no reason, and she’s just like “Oh. It’s ok” Excuse me???
The last 10% was when something interesting was actually happening. We finally get to know why Braith can see. Some blood link thing. But we get very little explanation. Or why it worked even though Aria was a human. And we finally, finally get the set up of a plot. At the end of the SECOND book -_- At least the rest of the books are going to get more interesting now.
Max... oh how I hate him. He was good at first, but I guess he snapped when Aria chose Braith. He reminded a lot of Adam from Shatter Me. With how controlling he was and was telling Aria how she felt then completely flipped when she chose the other guy. Yeah, definitely some Adam vibes there.
P.S. I want to see more of William and Daniel!!!
June 30, 2015
This series is really unique to me because of the way the author portrays the act of drinking blood. There is an ecstasy to it that makes it so much more intimate, just as in sex. It made me see these vampire novels from a whole new perspective, and I wish others paranormal authors would have used this element to make their characters more appealing. It just made the whole experience that much more beautiful.
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