Renako and Mai end up at a hotel together, not for the reason you’re expecting, although not for lack of trying on the part of Oduka freaking Mai. When the cat’s away, however, the mouse might inadvertently cause all sorts of havoc by inviting her other female friend, Ajisai, over for video games.
This series is turning out to be a lot of fun, but it comes with a big old slew of caveats. It’s definitely more ‘fun than funny’, but that’s about par for the course for a series like this. That’s not the real issue here.
Oduka (freaking) Mai is a lot to take and a predatory lesbian with a smile on her face and love in her heart is still, indeed, a predatory lesbian. You can easily argue that she knows Renako a lot better than Renako knows herself, but that doesn’t make some of her actions easier to swallow.
They make sense, mind you, in the context of the story. Mai has never had anybody be anything but fawning towards her, so she doesn’t really get the idea of being told no. And that certainly plays out in the incident that closes the volume and our dangling thread of a bad idea that will lead the next volume.
Renako, for her part, pushes back against Mai’s overtures, although less for lack of interest than her still figuring herself out (the story is pretty clear that Renako’s sexuality is already ‘of the genre’; she simply hasn’t come to terms with it). But her frankness and honesty with Mai are why the latter is so taken with her.
Like I said, it all makes sense, so when Mai is particularly forceful during the bath escapade, she’s in the wrong, but it’s not out of character (and the way that Renako defuses her is pretty cute). And later on, well…
Part of the problem is that everybody believes in the myth of Oduka Mai, well almost everybody, and that includes Mai herself. Yet beneath it all she’s just a beautiful, yet insecure, kid with mother issues and a desperate need to be loved for herself.
As a result, Mai looms large over this entire volume, including Renako’s burgeoning friendship with Ajisai, whose defining attribute might be ‘fluffy’. But Ajisai loves video games almost as much as Renako and they quickly become fast… friends. While Mai is abroad helping her mother.
And that little tete-a-tete does not sit well with Mai, who swoops in with all the power at her disposal (considerable). Except she’s running so hot that she goes way, way too far for Renako’s current situation and Renako reacts in a way that is completely justified, but Mai and a rebuke don’t always go together.
The incredible lack of self-confidence that Renako has causes all sorts of problems this time around, not in the sense of making Mai agressive since that’s a big no-no, but she has a super hard time expressing herself because she’s so scared of breaking her facade.
This is especially apparent at the end, when Renako’s apology for having to skip out on Ajisai for a follow-up meeting (because Mai is about to do something super dumb) turns out to quickly morph into something a lot like a love confession, even though it’s actually nothing of the sort.
Like I said, minus Renako’s continued panic this is not a super funny series, but it’s got a ton of interesting stuff flying all over the place. Mai is a lot and if you cannot handle her being pushy, don’t even sign up, but the story does a lot of work on why she acts like she does.
It’s complicated. Mai needs to chill out and Renako needs to be honest with herself and those two would be set. They literally realize they both want the same thing from one another but Mai’s version has a physical component that Renako is struggling with. And instead of going full harem, I kind of like this direction for the narrative, warts and all.
3 stars - I mean, it may seem like I’m trying to excuse Mai’s behaviour, but I do recognize how incredibly problematic it is and how off-putting it will be for some. Still, I absolutely got sucked into all this and it’s nice to see a yuri that isn’t afraid of showing some physicality amidst the drama. And, hey, it’s still healthier than Citrus.