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Bluebells in the Mourning
Is it true that. . . ...nothing can be lost that love cannot find? Jane Austen's beloved "Pride and Prejudice" is readapted in this Regency tale of love in the face of tragedy. Mr. Darcy is thwarted in his attempt to propose to Elizabeth Bennet at Hunsford when he encounters her minutes after she receives the sad news from Longbourn of her sister's death. His gallantry and compassion as he escorts her back to Hertfordshire begins to unravel the many threads of her discontent with him. While her family heals from their loss, Darcy must search London for answers --- answers that might bring justice but also might just mark the end of his own hopes with Elizabeth.
238 pages, Paperback
First published May 1, 2013
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KaraLynne Mackrory
15 books225 followersKaraLynne is an amazing mother who never makes mistakes, never gets upset with her children and never ever has a dirty house. Ever. She always has her dishes done and the floors spotless and dinner is always prepared and ready on time. Her kids are always clean, polite, respectful and loving, especially to each other. She never gets irritated with her husband when he doesn’t turn his socks right side out for the laundry and they always agree on everything. She delights in nothing else but to serve her family and never wants or needs time for herself. She takes great care to shower every day and put make up on so that she is always beautiful and presentable. She never wears her pajamas all day or for days in a row and she is the epitome of womanhood. Most of all, she has a great sense of humor and loves to write.
Although, admittedly a Darcy addict, she enjoys many things, such as: Mr. Knightly, Edmund Bertram, Captain Wentworth, Mr. Tilney and John Thornton. She is happily married to her own Mr. Darcy and together they share the insanity inducing responsibility of raising 4 children.
Although, admittedly a Darcy addict, she enjoys many things, such as: Mr. Knightly, Edmund Bertram, Captain Wentworth, Mr. Tilney and John Thornton. She is happily married to her own Mr. Darcy and together they share the insanity inducing responsibility of raising 4 children.
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February 6, 2017
I have been meaning to read this one for some time so I was glad that this one was a voter's choice from our reading challenge group. I have read one other book and a short story from this author and enjoyed her light, heartwarming style of telling a story. Even when her story allows for high angst, she balances the emotions with other elements which suit my tastes well.
While this is a variation of Jane Austen's Pride & Prejudice, it is written in such a way that those only vaguely or not familiar at all will still have the opportunity for optimum enjoyment because it begins in the historical present and then offers a few brief 'memory' moments for the principle characters.
Bluebells in the Mourning begins with a tragic death. Young Lydia Bennet has died and her older sister, Elizabeth needs to get home. Elizabeth was visiting with friends in Kent and tolerating the arrogant Mr. Darcy and his relations when she got Jane's letter to come home. Unfortunately, Mr. Darcy is the one to come to her aid and she is forced to accept his kindness. Only, this act and his other solicitous kindnesses along the way are stacking up to show that he isn't quite the cold-hearted, selfish monster she made him out to be. To be sure, he interfered with her sister and Bingley, then there are the tales poor Wickham told of this man, but his care for her and Maria Lucas, his ready sympathy, and the way everyone around him including family, particularly his sister, and servants warmly respect and esteem him throw her into confusion.
Darcy nearly proposed to Elizabeth the day he found her grieving the loss of her sister. He learned through little hints that his proposal would not have been welcome. She discovered his work to separate his friend from her sister and she made clear that Jane Bennet was shy and reserved not uncaring for Bingley like Darcy thought. And then there are her accusations about his treatment of 'poor (cough)' Wickham. Darcy is determined to be there as the strength she can lean on through this dreadful period and show her his love for her through his actions. Then Mr. Bennet requests for him to discover if Lydia's death was an accident sending Darcy on a quest that might very well take him from Elizabeth's side forever if his suspicions are true.
This story is told from a variety of viewpoints with Elizabeth and Darcy getting the most page time. Even though this is a variation and there are alternate paths, the main pair still have some growing to do. Elizabeth is on a private mental journey of knowledge of the man she started out by detesting to finding he was nothing like she imagined while Darcy must work to deal with his past mistakes and the character flaws that caused them.
The tone of the story is not dreary due to death, but a renewal and reset for all those who survived Lydia. I thought the changes within the Bennet household were particularly interesting. I love what the author did with a backstory for Mr. and Mrs. Bennet.
I had a few minor niggles. There were a few slow spots, but also I recognized the exact same device used to cause a late inning break up between the lovers as was used in another of the author's stories. Succinctly, Darcy jumps to conclusions and runs rather than clarify what Elizabeth's words and action meant. Elizabeth does the same to a certain extent. Lack of communication and late in the story at that. Sigh...
That said, I love the author's writing and the warmth and light in her storytelling. There is good banter and a story broader than just the romance. I would definitely recommend this to other sweet historical romance and Austenesque Lovers.
While this is a variation of Jane Austen's Pride & Prejudice, it is written in such a way that those only vaguely or not familiar at all will still have the opportunity for optimum enjoyment because it begins in the historical present and then offers a few brief 'memory' moments for the principle characters.
Bluebells in the Mourning begins with a tragic death. Young Lydia Bennet has died and her older sister, Elizabeth needs to get home. Elizabeth was visiting with friends in Kent and tolerating the arrogant Mr. Darcy and his relations when she got Jane's letter to come home. Unfortunately, Mr. Darcy is the one to come to her aid and she is forced to accept his kindness. Only, this act and his other solicitous kindnesses along the way are stacking up to show that he isn't quite the cold-hearted, selfish monster she made him out to be. To be sure, he interfered with her sister and Bingley, then there are the tales poor Wickham told of this man, but his care for her and Maria Lucas, his ready sympathy, and the way everyone around him including family, particularly his sister, and servants warmly respect and esteem him throw her into confusion.
Darcy nearly proposed to Elizabeth the day he found her grieving the loss of her sister. He learned through little hints that his proposal would not have been welcome. She discovered his work to separate his friend from her sister and she made clear that Jane Bennet was shy and reserved not uncaring for Bingley like Darcy thought. And then there are her accusations about his treatment of 'poor (cough)' Wickham. Darcy is determined to be there as the strength she can lean on through this dreadful period and show her his love for her through his actions. Then Mr. Bennet requests for him to discover if Lydia's death was an accident sending Darcy on a quest that might very well take him from Elizabeth's side forever if his suspicions are true.
This story is told from a variety of viewpoints with Elizabeth and Darcy getting the most page time. Even though this is a variation and there are alternate paths, the main pair still have some growing to do. Elizabeth is on a private mental journey of knowledge of the man she started out by detesting to finding he was nothing like she imagined while Darcy must work to deal with his past mistakes and the character flaws that caused them.
The tone of the story is not dreary due to death, but a renewal and reset for all those who survived Lydia. I thought the changes within the Bennet household were particularly interesting. I love what the author did with a backstory for Mr. and Mrs. Bennet.
I had a few minor niggles. There were a few slow spots, but also I recognized the exact same device used to cause a late inning break up between the lovers as was used in another of the author's stories. Succinctly, Darcy jumps to conclusions and runs rather than clarify what Elizabeth's words and action meant. Elizabeth does the same to a certain extent. Lack of communication and late in the story at that. Sigh...
That said, I love the author's writing and the warmth and light in her storytelling. There is good banter and a story broader than just the romance. I would definitely recommend this to other sweet historical romance and Austenesque Lovers.
January 5, 2018
I read this again in paperback which I won as part of the raffle grand prize for The Darcy Monologues.
I laughed, I cried, I smiled so hard my cheeks hurt and I sighed many times...so this is how a romance reads?!
Sometimes I had to cry with sorrow - any parent, any family that loses a child, whether small or grown loses a part of their heart. Then to later learn...no, can't say...would reveal part of the tragedy...but learning that additional fact made it even that much more sorrowful. Wickham truly got what he deserved, even if some secrets are not revealed.
As in so many of the stories about ODC, Elizabeth and Darcy just can't seem to communicate; they have the biggest knack for misunderstanding, I believe, of any couple about whom I read. In this tale our dear Georgiana takes the lead in attempting to unravel the mess. And she has to make the effort more than once. There are surprises in other's relating what they perceive about just what a person feels.
And then there is Anne. She certainly grew a backbone. Enjoyed reading how she manipulated her own household and that of the Hunsford Parsonage to help ODC achieve their HEA without any interference. She made sure she had it all covered and was rewarded in unexpected ways.
This book has more than one surprise - endearing and totally catching one off guard near the end. As others have said it was so sweet to read of the determination on Mr. Bennet's part to revamp his relationship with his wife and then to read of her change in character. Will wonders never cease?
The Epilogue was everything you could wish, bringing together loose ends and unwed dear ones as well as letting us know about the Darcy succession. I even liked that Col. Fitzwilliam's army pals came into play at the end.
I could not put this down and finished it in half a day. I am sure I will re-read it as I was rushing to get to the "good" parts this first time through. Loved, loved, loved how Darcy was taking off his cravat and coat as he was entering his study - oh, to imagine that thin material left covering his chest (This is almost as good as the wet shirt in the 1995 movie.) and his uncovered neckline. "The library/his study" a memory for years to come.
I laughed, I cried, I smiled so hard my cheeks hurt and I sighed many times...so this is how a romance reads?!
Sometimes I had to cry with sorrow - any parent, any family that loses a child, whether small or grown loses a part of their heart. Then to later learn...no, can't say...would reveal part of the tragedy...but learning that additional fact made it even that much more sorrowful. Wickham truly got what he deserved, even if some secrets are not revealed.
As in so many of the stories about ODC, Elizabeth and Darcy just can't seem to communicate; they have the biggest knack for misunderstanding, I believe, of any couple about whom I read. In this tale our dear Georgiana takes the lead in attempting to unravel the mess. And she has to make the effort more than once. There are surprises in other's relating what they perceive about just what a person feels.
And then there is Anne. She certainly grew a backbone. Enjoyed reading how she manipulated her own household and that of the Hunsford Parsonage to help ODC achieve their HEA without any interference. She made sure she had it all covered and was rewarded in unexpected ways.
This book has more than one surprise - endearing and totally catching one off guard near the end. As others have said it was so sweet to read of the determination on Mr. Bennet's part to revamp his relationship with his wife and then to read of her change in character. Will wonders never cease?
The Epilogue was everything you could wish, bringing together loose ends and unwed dear ones as well as letting us know about the Darcy succession. I even liked that Col. Fitzwilliam's army pals came into play at the end.
I could not put this down and finished it in half a day. I am sure I will re-read it as I was rushing to get to the "good" parts this first time through. Loved, loved, loved how Darcy was taking off his cravat and coat as he was entering his study - oh, to imagine that thin material left covering his chest (This is almost as good as the wet shirt in the 1995 movie.) and his uncovered neckline. "The library/his study" a memory for years to come.
October 17, 2016
Heart wrenching, mind blowing reveal[s], intrigue, tearful grief as death comes to the Bennet household
I loved this touching, heart wrenching book. I was immediately engaged as Elizabeth received the express and learned of the death of a Bennet family member. While Elizabeth struggled with her grief, she also struggled with rioting emotions and feelings regarding Mr. Darcy. Mr. Darcy had his own bout with grief as his proposal was interrupted by the arrival of that express. From that point on, he was thwarted at every turn in his attempts to secure the affections of his beloved Elizabeth.
There are many awesome reviews that give a detailed outline or evaluation of this book. I am not going to repeat what they have already said. Read them and decide if you want to read this work or not. I suggest you do because it is an awesome read. There were minimal errors, you can’t catch them all.
When two people [from completely different backgrounds] approach a problem, they each utilize the tools available to them. Even though Darcy was a gentleman and Elizabeth was a gentleman’s daughter, their approach to problem solving was very different. This was the foundation to many of the problems between ODC. These differing approaches clashed on more than one occasion and had our dear couple at cross purposes. If not for the assistance [interference] of loved ones [Georgiana and our dear Colonel], ODC [our dear couple] would still be at odds and or separated.
I held my breath as Elizabeth and Darcy struggled with self-imposed feelings of responsibility for circumstances leading up to the death of Elizabeth’s family member. Each maintained thoughts that the other blamed them for what had happened and therefore could not love them. The grief that Darcy felt as he realized [or thought that] he had lost Elizabeth’s love was overwhelming. I grieved with him as he went through what his life would be like without her in his world.
I loved Colonel Fitzwilliam and his military buddies Major Leigh Masters and Colonel Whitman. These guys and others were awesome in their hunt for truth, a possible killer and then bringing him to justice. I certainly would not want these guys on my trail. They made fine agents. No one was who they seemed.
No SPOILER: The big reveal on the events of the death was mind blowing. I suspected something as I began to piece together the clues left by the author. Then, when it was revealed… I was so shocked as it was worse than even I imagined. How much evil can one person possibly possess?
I liked how Georgiana had grown up in this version. She had really come a long way. She was quiet the little manipulator/ matchmaker [same thing] and had such a romantic heart.
I loved how Anne de Bourgh and Mrs. Collins worked together with the servants to circumvent Lady Catherine… such machinations… awesome.
The changes that occurred within the Bennet household, after the death of one of its members, was overwhelming. Then there was another reveal that was simply too AWESOME. I am happy it occurred and I give kudos to the author for including it. How nice.
****SPOILER**** **** End Spoiler ****
The Epilogue was the most fun and wrapped everything up so very neatly. I loved it. This book was so much fun even with the intrigue and mystery surrounding the death, the search for truth, and the men working with Colonel Fitzwilliam and Darcy in order to find that truth. The search for love and acceptance was so worth the read.
I loved this touching, heart wrenching book. I was immediately engaged as Elizabeth received the express and learned of the death of a Bennet family member. While Elizabeth struggled with her grief, she also struggled with rioting emotions and feelings regarding Mr. Darcy. Mr. Darcy had his own bout with grief as his proposal was interrupted by the arrival of that express. From that point on, he was thwarted at every turn in his attempts to secure the affections of his beloved Elizabeth.
There are many awesome reviews that give a detailed outline or evaluation of this book. I am not going to repeat what they have already said. Read them and decide if you want to read this work or not. I suggest you do because it is an awesome read. There were minimal errors, you can’t catch them all.
When two people [from completely different backgrounds] approach a problem, they each utilize the tools available to them. Even though Darcy was a gentleman and Elizabeth was a gentleman’s daughter, their approach to problem solving was very different. This was the foundation to many of the problems between ODC. These differing approaches clashed on more than one occasion and had our dear couple at cross purposes. If not for the assistance [interference] of loved ones [Georgiana and our dear Colonel], ODC [our dear couple] would still be at odds and or separated.
I held my breath as Elizabeth and Darcy struggled with self-imposed feelings of responsibility for circumstances leading up to the death of Elizabeth’s family member. Each maintained thoughts that the other blamed them for what had happened and therefore could not love them. The grief that Darcy felt as he realized [or thought that] he had lost Elizabeth’s love was overwhelming. I grieved with him as he went through what his life would be like without her in his world.
I loved Colonel Fitzwilliam and his military buddies Major Leigh Masters and Colonel Whitman. These guys and others were awesome in their hunt for truth, a possible killer and then bringing him to justice. I certainly would not want these guys on my trail. They made fine agents. No one was who they seemed.
No SPOILER: The big reveal on the events of the death was mind blowing. I suspected something as I began to piece together the clues left by the author. Then, when it was revealed… I was so shocked as it was worse than even I imagined. How much evil can one person possibly possess?
I liked how Georgiana had grown up in this version. She had really come a long way. She was quiet the little manipulator/ matchmaker [same thing] and had such a romantic heart.
I loved how Anne de Bourgh and Mrs. Collins worked together with the servants to circumvent Lady Catherine… such machinations… awesome.
The changes that occurred within the Bennet household, after the death of one of its members, was overwhelming. Then there was another reveal that was simply too AWESOME. I am happy it occurred and I give kudos to the author for including it. How nice.
****SPOILER**** **** End Spoiler ****
The Epilogue was the most fun and wrapped everything up so very neatly. I loved it. This book was so much fun even with the intrigue and mystery surrounding the death, the search for truth, and the men working with Colonel Fitzwilliam and Darcy in order to find that truth. The search for love and acceptance was so worth the read.
September 23, 2014
Okay, so I admit that I never really saw myself as entering the world of Jane Austen fan fiction, let alone starting reading novel variations and 'what ifs'. But lately I discovered Amanda Grange's series of Jane Austen hero diaries and started to develop a liking for re-tellings through another character's perspective. I still wasn't too keen on trying a variation of one of Jane Austen's novels though, as in my opinion her books are already wonderful as they are and I didn't especially want to hear about a different plot with the same characters. I thought that it would feel too much like a totally different story with well-known character names.
Then, my wonderful friend Soph, who loooves JA fan-fiction, suggested that I try one and buddy read it with her. We agreed on this one, Bluebells in the Mourning, as it had a lot of positive reviews and the plot didn't seem to be too farfetched. Although I was left wanting more of Darcy and Elizabeth after I read Pride and Prejudice over a year and a half ago, I had never felt the urge to remedy to that by indulging in fan-ficition. I thought it wouldn't do. Well, all I can say after reading this book is that I am so glad I was wrong!
Bluebells in the Mourning is a perfect variation to the original, that will make you heave a long sigh of contentment and satisfaction after you put it down. It was sweet, romantic, had its sad and its heart-warming moments that blended together beautifully. We get to see a very passionate side of Darcy, and a more forgiving one of Elizabeth. When the former arrives in Kent with the hopes of asking Elizabeth to be his wife, his plans get interrupted by the news of Lydia's death, which prevents his from proposing, a fortunate circumstance since Lizzie was in no way ready to accept him at that point. Thus ensues a series of kindnesses and sweet attentions from Darcy, offering to convey her back to Longbourn immediately and (literally) giving her a shoulder to cry on. Much to her confusion and disbelief, Elizabeth's prejudices against Darcy slowly melt away as she finds herself enjoying discovering his hidden depths. Darcy's every action and thought revolve around Lizzie, and there isn't anything he wouldn't do for her. I loved watching how much in love with her he was, and how hard it was for him to watch her grieve.
Just like in the original story, Darcy goes further than his role of kind acquaintance concerned for the welfare of the woman he loves. He goes to great lengths to find Wickham when it is suggested that he may have had something to do with Lydia's death, and though that task proves very demanding, he doesn't back away and keeps giving more of his time and energy, when he could have easily decided that it was not his job to find out if Wickham was guilty or not.
As Elizabeth becomes increasingly aware of her own attraction for him, she also realizes that he may be well on the way of returning her feelings (little does she know he is already ready to die for her!), and she finally understands that his "dark stares" don't mean he disapproves of her ;)
The romance between Darcy and Lizzie was so well portrayed! They had so many cute scenes together. One of my favourites is the one at the beginning when Elizabeth mistakes Darcy's study for the library, and he comes in coatless and cravat-less, not knowing she is in there. She sees him first and is embarrassed to find him so attractive in his casual attire, and then he has a sweet breathtaking moment as he sees her sitting in his chair with a book. That scene was extremely well-done and clever, and I love the fact that the author used it again in the epilogue!
I also really enjoyed all the recurring patterns used throughout the story, such as the bluebells and the handkerchiefs. The former symbolized joy and happiness, and the latter was more used as a symbolism for hope, assurance and comfort. Darcy kept giving his handkerchief to Lizzie when she cried, thereby letting her know that he cared for her, and that by using it to dry her tears, it would help to ease her chagrin. The author furthermore joined the two symbols at an important point in the novel, which created a lovely effect!
Some of the characters from Pride and Prejudice that I really loved, especially Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam, had wonderful appearances and added a lot of fun to the book. Their relationship with Darcy was very well illustrated. The Bennet family is there of course, but the author gave a totally new direction to Mr. and Mrs. Bennet's relationship. It seemed that Lydia's death has brought them a lot closer, inciting them to talk to each other, and eventually to fall in love again. Mrs. Bennet is not the loud annoying, matchmaking harpy we all know, but a broken and insecure woman who needs the support and comfort of her husband. Mr. Bennet demonstrates his caring and loving nature by putting down his book, stepping outside his library, and showing his wife that she isn't a failure. That aspect of the book was very beautiful, and I loved watching it's development. They were not the only ones smelling of April and May, as Bingley also re-makes an appearance at Netherfield and doesn't waste time showing Jane that he still loves her. :) There were a lot of sad moments in this novel, but in the end, so much love!
Honestly, I do not hesitate to recommend Bluebells in the Mourning to any Jane Austen fan. Whether you love JAFF, are just starting to read it or is a bit sceptical about trying 'what if' variation, this one is a great one to start with, and enjoyable from beginning to end. It is beautifully written, with just the right amount of heartache, love, romance, humour and perfect quotations from the original along the way. Give Bluebells a try, you won't regret it! I look forward to reading more from this author, as I saw she has other Austen-related novels.
Then, my wonderful friend Soph, who loooves JA fan-fiction, suggested that I try one and buddy read it with her. We agreed on this one, Bluebells in the Mourning, as it had a lot of positive reviews and the plot didn't seem to be too farfetched. Although I was left wanting more of Darcy and Elizabeth after I read Pride and Prejudice over a year and a half ago, I had never felt the urge to remedy to that by indulging in fan-ficition. I thought it wouldn't do. Well, all I can say after reading this book is that I am so glad I was wrong!
Bluebells in the Mourning is a perfect variation to the original, that will make you heave a long sigh of contentment and satisfaction after you put it down. It was sweet, romantic, had its sad and its heart-warming moments that blended together beautifully. We get to see a very passionate side of Darcy, and a more forgiving one of Elizabeth. When the former arrives in Kent with the hopes of asking Elizabeth to be his wife, his plans get interrupted by the news of Lydia's death, which prevents his from proposing, a fortunate circumstance since Lizzie was in no way ready to accept him at that point. Thus ensues a series of kindnesses and sweet attentions from Darcy, offering to convey her back to Longbourn immediately and (literally) giving her a shoulder to cry on. Much to her confusion and disbelief, Elizabeth's prejudices against Darcy slowly melt away as she finds herself enjoying discovering his hidden depths. Darcy's every action and thought revolve around Lizzie, and there isn't anything he wouldn't do for her. I loved watching how much in love with her he was, and how hard it was for him to watch her grieve.
Just like in the original story, Darcy goes further than his role of kind acquaintance concerned for the welfare of the woman he loves. He goes to great lengths to find Wickham when it is suggested that he may have had something to do with Lydia's death, and though that task proves very demanding, he doesn't back away and keeps giving more of his time and energy, when he could have easily decided that it was not his job to find out if Wickham was guilty or not.
As Elizabeth becomes increasingly aware of her own attraction for him, she also realizes that he may be well on the way of returning her feelings (little does she know he is already ready to die for her!), and she finally understands that his "dark stares" don't mean he disapproves of her ;)
The romance between Darcy and Lizzie was so well portrayed! They had so many cute scenes together. One of my favourites is the one at the beginning when Elizabeth mistakes Darcy's study for the library, and he comes in coatless and cravat-less, not knowing she is in there. She sees him first and is embarrassed to find him so attractive in his casual attire, and then he has a sweet breathtaking moment as he sees her sitting in his chair with a book. That scene was extremely well-done and clever, and I love the fact that the author used it again in the epilogue!
I also really enjoyed all the recurring patterns used throughout the story, such as the bluebells and the handkerchiefs. The former symbolized joy and happiness, and the latter was more used as a symbolism for hope, assurance and comfort. Darcy kept giving his handkerchief to Lizzie when she cried, thereby letting her know that he cared for her, and that by using it to dry her tears, it would help to ease her chagrin. The author furthermore joined the two symbols at an important point in the novel, which created a lovely effect!
Some of the characters from Pride and Prejudice that I really loved, especially Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam, had wonderful appearances and added a lot of fun to the book. Their relationship with Darcy was very well illustrated. The Bennet family is there of course, but the author gave a totally new direction to Mr. and Mrs. Bennet's relationship. It seemed that Lydia's death has brought them a lot closer, inciting them to talk to each other, and eventually to fall in love again. Mrs. Bennet is not the loud annoying, matchmaking harpy we all know, but a broken and insecure woman who needs the support and comfort of her husband. Mr. Bennet demonstrates his caring and loving nature by putting down his book, stepping outside his library, and showing his wife that she isn't a failure. That aspect of the book was very beautiful, and I loved watching it's development. They were not the only ones smelling of April and May, as Bingley also re-makes an appearance at Netherfield and doesn't waste time showing Jane that he still loves her. :) There were a lot of sad moments in this novel, but in the end, so much love!
Honestly, I do not hesitate to recommend Bluebells in the Mourning to any Jane Austen fan. Whether you love JAFF, are just starting to read it or is a bit sceptical about trying 'what if' variation, this one is a great one to start with, and enjoyable from beginning to end. It is beautifully written, with just the right amount of heartache, love, romance, humour and perfect quotations from the original along the way. Give Bluebells a try, you won't regret it! I look forward to reading more from this author, as I saw she has other Austen-related novels.
July 29, 2020
A second reading and a new rating.
What if One of Elizabeth’s Sisters Died?
Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
Instead of receiving Jane’s misdirected letter and disheartening news at the Lambton Inn, Lizzy receives a letter (where the address was written “remarkably ill”) during her stay at Hunsford Parsonage. Instead of Jane’s news containing the ill-tidings of a sister’s elopement and possible ruination, she reports the unfortunate illness and unexpected death of a beloved sister!
What will happen when Mr. Darcy arrives just a few moments later to propose?
Well…Mr. Darcy doesn’t propose – doesn’t mention his unrepressed feelings, honest scruples, or struggles to overcome Elizabeth’s inferiority. He instead offers Elizabeth his shoulder to cry on, his sympathies as she grieves for her sister, and some much needed assistance with traveling to Meryton. Between various private conversations and stolen moments Darcy soon realizes Elizabeth’s true opinion of him (he is much more perceptive!) and knows that he would have been soundly rejected if he proposed to her that night. Through kind gestures, thoughtful gifts, mastering his selfish proclivities, and restoring Bingley to Jane, Darcy sets out to repair Elizabeth’s poor opinion of him in hopes that when his is able to offer her his hand in marriage (he must wait three months), he will have a more favorable reply…
As with Falling for Mr. Darcy, one of my favorite aspects of this novel, and of KaraLynne Marckrory’s writing I general, is her portrayal of Mr. Darcy. He is simply adorable! Whether he is mentally castigating himself for his mistakes, surprising Elizabeth with his rare moments of levity and humor, or indulging is some private reflections/fantasies about Elizabeth and his future with her – this Darcy was constantly making me smile and sigh! Oh! And he is an artist – which makes him all the more attractive in my opinion! I especially enjoyed his scenes alone with Elizabeth, such as the one where he finds Elizabeth in his study, their conversation in the garden at Longbourn, and their interlude amongst the bluebells. In this novel, KaraLynne Mackrory created scenes that are emotive, sublime, and memorable. Some I know I will be rereading again and again!
Other characters I greatly enjoyed in this variation are Georgiana, Mr. Bennet, and Mrs. Bennet. I like that Georgiana meets Elizabeth a little earlier in the novel and exchanges some correspondence with her. I loved the scene between them in the music room and how Georgiana attempts some matchmaking! In addition, I took great pleasure in witnessing Ms. Mackrory’s rendition and development of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. She provides a very unique explanation for why their marriage is filled with discontent and dissension which I greatly enjoyed.
With a beautiful romance, an emotional journey, and an inspiring yet poignant tale of healing and hope, KaraLynne Mackrory has herself another winner with this latest release! A splendidly unique and clever Pride and Prejudice variation! I highly recommend!
What if One of Elizabeth’s Sisters Died?
Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
Instead of receiving Jane’s misdirected letter and disheartening news at the Lambton Inn, Lizzy receives a letter (where the address was written “remarkably ill”) during her stay at Hunsford Parsonage. Instead of Jane’s news containing the ill-tidings of a sister’s elopement and possible ruination, she reports the unfortunate illness and unexpected death of a beloved sister!
What will happen when Mr. Darcy arrives just a few moments later to propose?
Well…Mr. Darcy doesn’t propose – doesn’t mention his unrepressed feelings, honest scruples, or struggles to overcome Elizabeth’s inferiority. He instead offers Elizabeth his shoulder to cry on, his sympathies as she grieves for her sister, and some much needed assistance with traveling to Meryton. Between various private conversations and stolen moments Darcy soon realizes Elizabeth’s true opinion of him (he is much more perceptive!) and knows that he would have been soundly rejected if he proposed to her that night. Through kind gestures, thoughtful gifts, mastering his selfish proclivities, and restoring Bingley to Jane, Darcy sets out to repair Elizabeth’s poor opinion of him in hopes that when his is able to offer her his hand in marriage (he must wait three months), he will have a more favorable reply…
As with Falling for Mr. Darcy, one of my favorite aspects of this novel, and of KaraLynne Marckrory’s writing I general, is her portrayal of Mr. Darcy. He is simply adorable! Whether he is mentally castigating himself for his mistakes, surprising Elizabeth with his rare moments of levity and humor, or indulging is some private reflections/fantasies about Elizabeth and his future with her – this Darcy was constantly making me smile and sigh! Oh! And he is an artist – which makes him all the more attractive in my opinion! I especially enjoyed his scenes alone with Elizabeth, such as the one where he finds Elizabeth in his study, their conversation in the garden at Longbourn, and their interlude amongst the bluebells. In this novel, KaraLynne Mackrory created scenes that are emotive, sublime, and memorable. Some I know I will be rereading again and again!
Other characters I greatly enjoyed in this variation are Georgiana, Mr. Bennet, and Mrs. Bennet. I like that Georgiana meets Elizabeth a little earlier in the novel and exchanges some correspondence with her. I loved the scene between them in the music room and how Georgiana attempts some matchmaking! In addition, I took great pleasure in witnessing Ms. Mackrory’s rendition and development of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. She provides a very unique explanation for why their marriage is filled with discontent and dissension which I greatly enjoyed.
With a beautiful romance, an emotional journey, and an inspiring yet poignant tale of healing and hope, KaraLynne Mackrory has herself another winner with this latest release! A splendidly unique and clever Pride and Prejudice variation! I highly recommend!
January 12, 2026
Good Variation
Reviewed in Canada on June 5, 2019
I enjoyed this very much. The story was very good and relieved us from having to go through the Hunsford proposal again. I like variations that change things up. I was happy for Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam were great in this one. Good writing, but still a few proofreading errors.
April 2, 2023 - Audiobook
I stayed up until the wee hours of the morning listening to this audiobook. I love David Pickering. His performance is always excellent. Unlike the book, where I gave a four-star rating, I give the audiobook a five stars. A tragedy calling Elizabeth home ironically leads to many positive things, especially for Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. It’s refreshing to not have Mrs. B always so hateful to Elizabeth.
Reviewed in Canada on June 5, 2019
I enjoyed this very much. The story was very good and relieved us from having to go through the Hunsford proposal again. I like variations that change things up. I was happy for Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam were great in this one. Good writing, but still a few proofreading errors.
April 2, 2023 - Audiobook
I stayed up until the wee hours of the morning listening to this audiobook. I love David Pickering. His performance is always excellent. Unlike the book, where I gave a four-star rating, I give the audiobook a five stars. A tragedy calling Elizabeth home ironically leads to many positive things, especially for Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. It’s refreshing to not have Mrs. B always so hateful to Elizabeth.
July 29, 2020
Instead of receiving Jane's misdirected letter and disheartening news at the Lambton Inn, Lizzy receives a letter (where the address was written “remarkably ill”) during her stay at Hunsford Parsonage. Instead of Jane's news containing the ill-tidings of a sister's elopement and possible ruination, she reports the unfortunate illness and unexpected death of a beloved sister!
What will happen when Mr. Darcy arrives just a few moments later to propose?
Well...Mr. Darcy doesn't propose – doesn't mention his unrepressed feelings, honest scruples, or struggles to overcome Elizabeth's inferiority. He instead offers Elizabeth his shoulder to cry on, his sympathies as she grieves for her sister, and some much needed assistance with traveling to Meryton. Between various private conversations and stolen moments Darcy soon realizes Elizabeth's true opinion of him (he is much more perceptive!) and knows that he would have been soundly rejected if he proposed to her that night. Through kind gestures, thoughtful gifts, mastering his selfish proclivities, and restoring Bingley to Jane, Darcy sets out to repair Elizabeth's poor opinion of him in hopes that when his is able to offer her his hand in marriage (he must wait three months), he will have a more favorable reply...
As with Falling for Mr. Darcy, one of my favorite aspects of this novel, and of KaraLynne Marckrory's writing I general, is her portrayal of Mr. Darcy. He is simply adorable! Whether he is mentally castigating himself for his mistakes, surprising Elizabeth with his rare moments of levity and humor, or indulging is some private reflections/fantasies about Elizabeth and his future with her – this Darcy was constantly making me smile and sigh! Oh! And he is an artist – which makes him all the more attractive in my opinion! I especially enjoyed his scenes alone with Elizabeth, such as the one where he finds Elizabeth in his study, their conversation in the garden at Longbourn, and their interlude amongst the bluebells. In this novel, KaraLynne Mackrory created scenes that are emotive, sublime, and memorable. Some I know I will be rereading again and again!
Other characters I greatly enjoyed in this variation are Georgiana, Mr. Bennet, and Mrs. Bennet. I like that Georgiana meets Elizabeth a little earlier in the novel and exchanges some correspondence with her. I loved the scene between them in the music room and how Georgiana attempts some matchmaking! In addition, I took great pleasure in witnessing Ms. Mackrory's rendition and development of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. She provides a very unique explanation for why their marriage is filled with discontent and dissension which I greatly enjoyed.
With a beautiful romance, an emotional journey, and an inspiring yet poignant tale of healing and hope KaraLynne Mackrory has herself another winner with this latest release! A splendidly unique and clever Pride and Prejudice variation! I highly recommend!
Austenesque Reviews
What will happen when Mr. Darcy arrives just a few moments later to propose?
Well...Mr. Darcy doesn't propose – doesn't mention his unrepressed feelings, honest scruples, or struggles to overcome Elizabeth's inferiority. He instead offers Elizabeth his shoulder to cry on, his sympathies as she grieves for her sister, and some much needed assistance with traveling to Meryton. Between various private conversations and stolen moments Darcy soon realizes Elizabeth's true opinion of him (he is much more perceptive!) and knows that he would have been soundly rejected if he proposed to her that night. Through kind gestures, thoughtful gifts, mastering his selfish proclivities, and restoring Bingley to Jane, Darcy sets out to repair Elizabeth's poor opinion of him in hopes that when his is able to offer her his hand in marriage (he must wait three months), he will have a more favorable reply...
As with Falling for Mr. Darcy, one of my favorite aspects of this novel, and of KaraLynne Marckrory's writing I general, is her portrayal of Mr. Darcy. He is simply adorable! Whether he is mentally castigating himself for his mistakes, surprising Elizabeth with his rare moments of levity and humor, or indulging is some private reflections/fantasies about Elizabeth and his future with her – this Darcy was constantly making me smile and sigh! Oh! And he is an artist – which makes him all the more attractive in my opinion! I especially enjoyed his scenes alone with Elizabeth, such as the one where he finds Elizabeth in his study, their conversation in the garden at Longbourn, and their interlude amongst the bluebells. In this novel, KaraLynne Mackrory created scenes that are emotive, sublime, and memorable. Some I know I will be rereading again and again!
Other characters I greatly enjoyed in this variation are Georgiana, Mr. Bennet, and Mrs. Bennet. I like that Georgiana meets Elizabeth a little earlier in the novel and exchanges some correspondence with her. I loved the scene between them in the music room and how Georgiana attempts some matchmaking! In addition, I took great pleasure in witnessing Ms. Mackrory's rendition and development of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. She provides a very unique explanation for why their marriage is filled with discontent and dissension which I greatly enjoyed.
With a beautiful romance, an emotional journey, and an inspiring yet poignant tale of healing and hope KaraLynne Mackrory has herself another winner with this latest release! A splendidly unique and clever Pride and Prejudice variation! I highly recommend!
Austenesque Reviews
January 26, 2023
Misunderstandings r us
Excellent story. A rerelease of the book. Not sure why it seems Amazon wants people to buy the same book again, but there you are.
Misunderstands abound and it’s not until almost the very end before some smidgeon of communication occurs. Really, at times it seemed Darcy and Lizzy would never talk openly together. But they do.
Well written, still and recommended still.
Excellent story. A rerelease of the book. Not sure why it seems Amazon wants people to buy the same book again, but there you are.
Misunderstands abound and it’s not until almost the very end before some smidgeon of communication occurs. Really, at times it seemed Darcy and Lizzy would never talk openly together. But they do.
Well written, still and recommended still.
May 4, 2020
Here is a Pride and Prejudice variation for all you romantics! I really loved this book. We pick up the story with Elizabeth at the Hunsford Parsonage. She ducks out of dinner with Lady Catherine to read 2 letters from Jane that have just arrived (one had been misdirected, the address being written very ill indeed). Darcy arrives to propose, as in canon and finds Lizzy very distraught, having just found out that one of her sisters has had a fall from Oakham Mount and has died from her injuries.
Obviously, the proposal never happens and instead Darcy escorts Lizzy and Maria Lucas to London, where they stay for a night at his house (chaperoned by Georgiana and Mrs Annesley). Spending so much time with each other leads them both to make some re-evaluations - Darcy begins to see that he can be self-absorbed and selfish, and he realises from a hint Lizzy drops that not only has he made an error in removing Bingley from Jane but also that if he had have proposed he probably would have been rejected. Lizzy begins to see that she has been wrong in being so hasty to judge Mr Darcy, and also she starts to question to herself whether Wickham's story is true.
Now Lizzy is in mourning, Darcy wouldn't be able to make her an offer of marriage for at least 3 months, but what he instead tries to do is make up some of the lost ground caused by her initial poor impression of him. In this, he is joined by Georgiana, who does her best to matchmake.
Considering this book starts with a death, especially that of somebody so young, it's not a sad book at all. Although the characters mourn there are also positive effects of the death, most notably the relationship between Mr and Mrs Bennet, the latter of whom blames herself for her daughter's demise.
One of the things I particularly liked is the number of familiar lines from Pride and Prejudice which turn up, often spoken by somebody who didn't say them in P&P. This story is really sweet (but not over-sweet) and romantic and if you don't like any sex scenes then you are safe, nothing goes further than just a few kisses and the only time you get behind the bedroom door is a birth scene in the epilogue.
The only minus points to this book are a few of the words used. There are some American words, the odd word that is too recent, and a number of instances of the wrong versions of word being used e.g. discrete instead of discreet, breech instead of breach etc, but not enough to distract from a lovely romantic story that will leave you with a smile on your face. I would certainly recommend this one!
Obviously, the proposal never happens and instead Darcy escorts Lizzy and Maria Lucas to London, where they stay for a night at his house (chaperoned by Georgiana and Mrs Annesley). Spending so much time with each other leads them both to make some re-evaluations - Darcy begins to see that he can be self-absorbed and selfish, and he realises from a hint Lizzy drops that not only has he made an error in removing Bingley from Jane but also that if he had have proposed he probably would have been rejected. Lizzy begins to see that she has been wrong in being so hasty to judge Mr Darcy, and also she starts to question to herself whether Wickham's story is true.
Now Lizzy is in mourning, Darcy wouldn't be able to make her an offer of marriage for at least 3 months, but what he instead tries to do is make up some of the lost ground caused by her initial poor impression of him. In this, he is joined by Georgiana, who does her best to matchmake.
Considering this book starts with a death, especially that of somebody so young, it's not a sad book at all. Although the characters mourn there are also positive effects of the death, most notably the relationship between Mr and Mrs Bennet, the latter of whom blames herself for her daughter's demise.
One of the things I particularly liked is the number of familiar lines from Pride and Prejudice which turn up, often spoken by somebody who didn't say them in P&P. This story is really sweet (but not over-sweet) and romantic and if you don't like any sex scenes then you are safe, nothing goes further than just a few kisses and the only time you get behind the bedroom door is a birth scene in the epilogue.
The only minus points to this book are a few of the words used. There are some American words, the odd word that is too recent, and a number of instances of the wrong versions of word being used e.g. discrete instead of discreet, breech instead of breach etc, but not enough to distract from a lovely romantic story that will leave you with a smile on your face. I would certainly recommend this one!
March 19, 2016
BLUEBELLS IN THE MOURNING by KaraLynne Mackrory
I've been wanting to read this one for such a long time as I'd heard really good things about it. Safe to say, I wasn't disappointed in the slightest now that I've dug it out of my rather substantial TBR collection.
This story starts in Kent, assuming all the details of canon up till this point. Darcy is about to to make that ill-fated proposal at Hunsford when Elizabeth receives letters telling of tragic news at home. Some of you may know what that is, but as I try not to do spoilers, I won't say what it is for anyone who doesn't. That proposal is never made and Darcy sees to Elizabeth's safe transport back to Longbourn. Coach journeys from Kent to London and London to Longbourn ensue. As there's been no proposal and Elizabeth hasn't made her less than diplomatic refusal, there's no letter from Darcy explaining about his interference with Jane and Bingley or Georgiana's near-elopement with Wickham. Other means have to be found for Elizabeth's opinion of Darcy to change and for him to realise what a pompous prig he was to plan the proposal he'd been intending to make, amongst other things. I won't say any more here though, apart from the fact Elizabeth and Georgiana meet a lot earlier and Wickham is even more of a villain than in canon!
There is an odd Americanism here and there (yes, we Brits can be very picky!), but Ms Mackrory is an excellent writer with a good feel for her subject. There'a quite a lot of angst involved before the HEA and several delicious love scenes but no sexual content so I can recommend this for all audiences.
I've been wanting to read this one for such a long time as I'd heard really good things about it. Safe to say, I wasn't disappointed in the slightest now that I've dug it out of my rather substantial TBR collection.
This story starts in Kent, assuming all the details of canon up till this point. Darcy is about to to make that ill-fated proposal at Hunsford when Elizabeth receives letters telling of tragic news at home. Some of you may know what that is, but as I try not to do spoilers, I won't say what it is for anyone who doesn't. That proposal is never made and Darcy sees to Elizabeth's safe transport back to Longbourn. Coach journeys from Kent to London and London to Longbourn ensue. As there's been no proposal and Elizabeth hasn't made her less than diplomatic refusal, there's no letter from Darcy explaining about his interference with Jane and Bingley or Georgiana's near-elopement with Wickham. Other means have to be found for Elizabeth's opinion of Darcy to change and for him to realise what a pompous prig he was to plan the proposal he'd been intending to make, amongst other things. I won't say any more here though, apart from the fact Elizabeth and Georgiana meet a lot earlier and Wickham is even more of a villain than in canon!
There is an odd Americanism here and there (yes, we Brits can be very picky!), but Ms Mackrory is an excellent writer with a good feel for her subject. There'a quite a lot of angst involved before the HEA and several delicious love scenes but no sexual content so I can recommend this for all audiences.
March 13, 2014
This story was absolutely wonderful. KaraLynne Mackrory's stories are definitely some of my absolute favourites! And on re-reading it, it was just as wonderful, if not more.
I will begin with the storyline; when I read the blurb I was intrigued. I thought it was an interesting way to take the story. In variations which include a death, the death is normally of Mr Bennet so I was interested in having the death of one of her sisters (Lydia). Lydia was out for a walk when she slips and hits her head, which eventually causes a fever and her demise. When we learn that a certain gentleman was also present on the walk (I will give you three guesses!) it sets up the basis for a bit of a mystery, which Darcy vows to Mr Bennet he will get to the bottom of. I thought it was a really good ‘what if’ variation.
One of my favourite things about Mackrory’s first variation were the parallels and similarities which she draws between her variation and the original novel. This variation was again very clever in this area. The story opens with Darcy coming upon Lizzy when she has just received the news of Lydia’s death, just like in the original when he happens upon Lizzy, after seeing her at Pemberley, when she has found out about Lydia’s elopement. There are many more examples of this throughout the novel; another of my favourites being when the explanation letter (which Darcy’s gives after the rejected proposal originally) is given and by whom (it is still a Darcy who sends it, but not MR Darcy).
As well as events like I have mentioned being shifted around and placed in different contexts, there is also the clever use of quotes and conversations from the original which appear throughout the novel in different places, spoken by different people and mostly in different contexts. Some of the best examples of this, I think, were the way in which many of the thoughts and feelings of Darcy and Lizzy were switched; Mr Darcy stating that ‘until this moment I never knew myself’ and Lizzy being asked the question of when she fell in love with Darcy. I sometimes find that important quotes from the original appearing completely out of context can be annoying, but the way in which it is treated by Mackrory is in no way annoying and is instead rather charming, causing me to smile and even laugh out loud in some cases while I was reading.
Another one of my favourite things about her last variation was the little themes which were running through the book. Theme isn’t quite the right word... In the story, as Lizzy is in mourning, there is often the need for a handkerchief to dry her tears, a handkerchief with the letters FD embroidered on it. Also, as you may guess from the title of the story, bluebells becomes a very important part of the story (and since reading this story I am planning on going for many more walk among the bluebells!)
Now for a little about some certain characters in the story, starting with Georgiana. I always wish to have seen more of Georgiana in the original as there seems to be a lot of untapped potential in Georgiana as we only meet her late in the novel. She comes in the story a lot earlier and we really see another side to her. Seeing her relationship with her brother was very sweet as their strong bond, which we see some of in the original, is developed and explored a lot in this variation. Georgiana really comes into her own and once she realises the particular interest her brother has in a certain Miss Bennet she turns into a little matchmaker, though a lot more subtly (and successfully) than Emma Woodhouse!
Moving onto another character that I always like in the variations which I read; Colonel Fitzwilliam. I think the colonel is a character which authors can have a lot of fun with. We see a little of his teasing nature in his relationship with Darcy in the original, and Mackrory uses this to her advantage. He is such a teasing and delightful character and is all affability. I love seeing more of Colonel Fitzwilliam and his relationship with Darcy and also his relationship with Georgiana. I was always laughing when Fitzwilliam was around!
I will refrain from saying much about Wickham but be rest assured, Wickham pops up from time to time through the story...
I believe my favourite secondary story line was the one between Mr and Mrs Bennet. Mackrory delves deeper into the past between the couple and the reasons for their indifference to each for so long. Lydia’s death reignites past feelings between the two and they begin on the road to reconciliation. It is wonderful to see how their relationship changes throughout the story, ending in a very satisfactory way! (I will say no more...)
One thing I loved about her first variation was the inclusion of an epilogue, showing what happens to each of the characters in the future. And so I was very pleased to once again find an epilogue at the end, allowing us to see what happens to each of the characters in the future.
And so I reach the end of my review.... although I realise I haven’t really touched on the main two characters of the story; this will not do! Well, for anyone who wishes to read more about one of the most important couples in all of literature and to see a different route to bringing the two together, you will not be disappointed. There were enough problems that arose to keep the story interesting but not too many that it felt as if it was dragging on and on! The scenes towards the beginning of the story were a lot of fun, as Lizzy began to discover the true man behind the facade that is Mr Darcy. Any scenes between the two of them in the first half of the story brought a smile to my face. I do not want to give anything away but be assured the scenes between the two of them from the middle onwards are equally as enjoyable and are even more touching! The last thing I shall say is that the ending is perfection itself!
This is a truly wonderful variation of my favourite novel of all time and I shall be re-reading it in the near future. It satisfied my highly romantic nature as well as my need for a good laugh, and with the added extra of a bit of mystery it all made for a delightful read. I hope Mackrory has another variation on the way!
(Review originally posted here:
http://laughingwithlizzie.blogspot.co...)
I will begin with the storyline; when I read the blurb I was intrigued. I thought it was an interesting way to take the story. In variations which include a death, the death is normally of Mr Bennet so I was interested in having the death of one of her sisters (Lydia). Lydia was out for a walk when she slips and hits her head, which eventually causes a fever and her demise. When we learn that a certain gentleman was also present on the walk (I will give you three guesses!) it sets up the basis for a bit of a mystery, which Darcy vows to Mr Bennet he will get to the bottom of. I thought it was a really good ‘what if’ variation.
One of my favourite things about Mackrory’s first variation were the parallels and similarities which she draws between her variation and the original novel. This variation was again very clever in this area. The story opens with Darcy coming upon Lizzy when she has just received the news of Lydia’s death, just like in the original when he happens upon Lizzy, after seeing her at Pemberley, when she has found out about Lydia’s elopement. There are many more examples of this throughout the novel; another of my favourites being when the explanation letter (which Darcy’s gives after the rejected proposal originally) is given and by whom (it is still a Darcy who sends it, but not MR Darcy).
As well as events like I have mentioned being shifted around and placed in different contexts, there is also the clever use of quotes and conversations from the original which appear throughout the novel in different places, spoken by different people and mostly in different contexts. Some of the best examples of this, I think, were the way in which many of the thoughts and feelings of Darcy and Lizzy were switched; Mr Darcy stating that ‘until this moment I never knew myself’ and Lizzy being asked the question of when she fell in love with Darcy. I sometimes find that important quotes from the original appearing completely out of context can be annoying, but the way in which it is treated by Mackrory is in no way annoying and is instead rather charming, causing me to smile and even laugh out loud in some cases while I was reading.
Another one of my favourite things about her last variation was the little themes which were running through the book. Theme isn’t quite the right word... In the story, as Lizzy is in mourning, there is often the need for a handkerchief to dry her tears, a handkerchief with the letters FD embroidered on it. Also, as you may guess from the title of the story, bluebells becomes a very important part of the story (and since reading this story I am planning on going for many more walk among the bluebells!)
Now for a little about some certain characters in the story, starting with Georgiana. I always wish to have seen more of Georgiana in the original as there seems to be a lot of untapped potential in Georgiana as we only meet her late in the novel. She comes in the story a lot earlier and we really see another side to her. Seeing her relationship with her brother was very sweet as their strong bond, which we see some of in the original, is developed and explored a lot in this variation. Georgiana really comes into her own and once she realises the particular interest her brother has in a certain Miss Bennet she turns into a little matchmaker, though a lot more subtly (and successfully) than Emma Woodhouse!
Moving onto another character that I always like in the variations which I read; Colonel Fitzwilliam. I think the colonel is a character which authors can have a lot of fun with. We see a little of his teasing nature in his relationship with Darcy in the original, and Mackrory uses this to her advantage. He is such a teasing and delightful character and is all affability. I love seeing more of Colonel Fitzwilliam and his relationship with Darcy and also his relationship with Georgiana. I was always laughing when Fitzwilliam was around!
I will refrain from saying much about Wickham but be rest assured, Wickham pops up from time to time through the story...
I believe my favourite secondary story line was the one between Mr and Mrs Bennet. Mackrory delves deeper into the past between the couple and the reasons for their indifference to each for so long. Lydia’s death reignites past feelings between the two and they begin on the road to reconciliation. It is wonderful to see how their relationship changes throughout the story, ending in a very satisfactory way! (I will say no more...)
One thing I loved about her first variation was the inclusion of an epilogue, showing what happens to each of the characters in the future. And so I was very pleased to once again find an epilogue at the end, allowing us to see what happens to each of the characters in the future.
And so I reach the end of my review.... although I realise I haven’t really touched on the main two characters of the story; this will not do! Well, for anyone who wishes to read more about one of the most important couples in all of literature and to see a different route to bringing the two together, you will not be disappointed. There were enough problems that arose to keep the story interesting but not too many that it felt as if it was dragging on and on! The scenes towards the beginning of the story were a lot of fun, as Lizzy began to discover the true man behind the facade that is Mr Darcy. Any scenes between the two of them in the first half of the story brought a smile to my face. I do not want to give anything away but be assured the scenes between the two of them from the middle onwards are equally as enjoyable and are even more touching! The last thing I shall say is that the ending is perfection itself!
This is a truly wonderful variation of my favourite novel of all time and I shall be re-reading it in the near future. It satisfied my highly romantic nature as well as my need for a good laugh, and with the added extra of a bit of mystery it all made for a delightful read. I hope Mackrory has another variation on the way!
(Review originally posted here:
http://laughingwithlizzie.blogspot.co...)
May 26, 2015
This is the second KaraLynne Mackrory novel I have read, and for me, the other one—Haunting Mr. Darcy—worked better. The reason I prefer it, I think, is that Mackrory’s Regency-period scholarship is a little thin, and the premise of Haunting Mr. Darcy allows for violations of decorum on the part of the characters. In Bluebells in the Mourning, those violations bothered me more because they were happening in the characters’ real lives, not in dream life. There were also some distracting factual errors, not least the field of bluebells of the title—they bloom in May, not July or August. In the climactic scene, I kept picturing them all yellowed and messy, as they would have been in summer!
Mackrory’s characters always have considerable charm, and I enjoy following their alarms and divagations. It was also entertaining to see so many familiar phrases from Pride and Prejudice cropping up in expected and unexpected places; but I was concerned to see phrases from the film adaptations cropping up as well. For me, there’s a line between real Austen and Austen interpretation that I don’t like to see blurred. That may make no sense in the context of Austenesque fiction, I realize!
Various members of the Bennet family (not just Elizabeth) go through major transformations in this story, and I did not find those changes very believable, especially when it came to Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. I don’t believe Jane (or even Georgiana) would ever squeal, or that Elizabeth would laugh so hard that she would fall into a chair and hold her sides. These elements took me out of the imagined Regency world and made me enjoy the story less.
I am not really a fan of romance for romance’s sake, so an entire novel focused principally on the palpitations of the main characters tends to pall for me. Bluebells in the Mourning does make some room for other aspects of its protagonists’ lives—family affection, ethical concerns—which provided relief for me, but personally, I would have welcomed more scenes that included some of the minor figures who are so vividly portrayed in Pride and Prejudice. I did not need to be told what Elizabeth’s every reaction was to Darcy’s every word, and vice versa, which seemed to prevent any opportunity for emotional crescendo. Everything was at the same level of high emotion, and I found myself wanting more comic relief.
I would love to see the author try her hand at a modern-day novel, Austenesque or otherwise. There her characters’ charm could have free play among the looser manners of today, and her imaginative plots could really take wing.
Mackrory’s characters always have considerable charm, and I enjoy following their alarms and divagations. It was also entertaining to see so many familiar phrases from Pride and Prejudice cropping up in expected and unexpected places; but I was concerned to see phrases from the film adaptations cropping up as well. For me, there’s a line between real Austen and Austen interpretation that I don’t like to see blurred. That may make no sense in the context of Austenesque fiction, I realize!
Various members of the Bennet family (not just Elizabeth) go through major transformations in this story, and I did not find those changes very believable, especially when it came to Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. I don’t believe Jane (or even Georgiana) would ever squeal, or that Elizabeth would laugh so hard that she would fall into a chair and hold her sides. These elements took me out of the imagined Regency world and made me enjoy the story less.
I am not really a fan of romance for romance’s sake, so an entire novel focused principally on the palpitations of the main characters tends to pall for me. Bluebells in the Mourning does make some room for other aspects of its protagonists’ lives—family affection, ethical concerns—which provided relief for me, but personally, I would have welcomed more scenes that included some of the minor figures who are so vividly portrayed in Pride and Prejudice. I did not need to be told what Elizabeth’s every reaction was to Darcy’s every word, and vice versa, which seemed to prevent any opportunity for emotional crescendo. Everything was at the same level of high emotion, and I found myself wanting more comic relief.
I would love to see the author try her hand at a modern-day novel, Austenesque or otherwise. There her characters’ charm could have free play among the looser manners of today, and her imaginative plots could really take wing.
August 12, 2016
This is a very very very good book. But I followed it with an amazing book and I fear that has biased my review slightly.
This Pride and Prejudice What if asks what if Darcy didn't propose at Rosings (Hunsford, Kent) because Lizzy receives bad news of the death of a family member. This is not the first book I have read that offers a similar option but I believe it handles it best.
As that Darcy & Col. Fitzwilliam were already departing Rosings they are able to offer Lizzy and Maria assistance to London. And when Lizzy realizes that the Gardiners are already at Longbourn with Jane and the other Bennets the ladies accept Darcy's offer to stay in his townhouse until they can resume their trip on Monday. This gives Elizabeth a chance to become acquainted with Georgiana as well as hear servants sing the praises of Mr. Darcy; and Darcy is forced to tell Bingley of the situation. While Darcy attempts to discourage Bingley from calling upon the Bennets Bingley arrives right on his heels and reopens Netherfield. All of these things force Lizzy to reevaluate her opinions of Darcy and through correspondence with Georgiana begins to really question Wickham's slanderous comments. Additionally Wickham's proximity to the accident and subsequent disappearance have Darcy and Mr. Bennet curious.
Lizzy's friendship with Georgiana results in the Gardiner's and their niece staying at Pemberley during their trip to Derbyshire and Lizzy and Darcy becoming closer. Georgiana's cleverness during this period are sweet and humorous.
My only complaint is that there is too much miscommunication between Lizzy and Darcy when they are both well past the point where 'seeing the look in his/ her eyes leads to the wrong conclusion'. Since this occurs long after both has admitted that they were wrong regarding what the other was thinking; Lizzy thinking Darcy was finding fault and Darcy thinking Lizzy would accept his proposal.I realize it is meant to mirror the meeting at the inn in Lambton but it feels forced and silly. There were numerous persons around them who knew of their relationship and would be able to offer council or intervention.
One further disclaimer on my rating. Based upon the book I was re-reading prior I would have given this a 5 but because I next read Consequences I can only give it a 4 1/2.
This Pride and Prejudice What if asks what if Darcy didn't propose at Rosings (Hunsford, Kent) because Lizzy receives bad news of the death of a family member. This is not the first book I have read that offers a similar option but I believe it handles it best.
As that Darcy & Col. Fitzwilliam were already departing Rosings they are able to offer Lizzy and Maria assistance to London. And when Lizzy realizes that the Gardiners are already at Longbourn with Jane and the other Bennets the ladies accept Darcy's offer to stay in his townhouse until they can resume their trip on Monday. This gives Elizabeth a chance to become acquainted with Georgiana as well as hear servants sing the praises of Mr. Darcy; and Darcy is forced to tell Bingley of the situation. While Darcy attempts to discourage Bingley from calling upon the Bennets Bingley arrives right on his heels and reopens Netherfield. All of these things force Lizzy to reevaluate her opinions of Darcy and through correspondence with Georgiana begins to really question Wickham's slanderous comments. Additionally Wickham's proximity to the accident and subsequent disappearance have Darcy and Mr. Bennet curious.
Lizzy's friendship with Georgiana results in the Gardiner's and their niece staying at Pemberley during their trip to Derbyshire and Lizzy and Darcy becoming closer. Georgiana's cleverness during this period are sweet and humorous.
My only complaint is that there is too much miscommunication between Lizzy and Darcy when they are both well past the point where 'seeing the look in his/ her eyes leads to the wrong conclusion'. Since this occurs long after both has admitted that they were wrong regarding what the other was thinking; Lizzy thinking Darcy was finding fault and Darcy thinking Lizzy would accept his proposal.I realize it is meant to mirror the meeting at the inn in Lambton but it feels forced and silly. There were numerous persons around them who knew of their relationship and would be able to offer council or intervention.
One further disclaimer on my rating. Based upon the book I was re-reading prior I would have given this a 5 but because I next read Consequences I can only give it a 4 1/2.
February 20, 2021
Loved! One of the P & P variations that got it right. Perfect.
Reread: This book is perfection. Oh, I just love this author's work. If you haven't read this, time to do so!
Reread again!: I needed to read this one again as I was mistaken as to who the "mourning" was for. Such a pleasure!
Reread: Still great!
Reread: Still great!
Reread: This book is perfection. Oh, I just love this author's work. If you haven't read this, time to do so!
Reread again!: I needed to read this one again as I was mistaken as to who the "mourning" was for. Such a pleasure!
Reread: Still great!
Reread: Still great!
October 16, 2016
Reread 10/15/16
I've read quite a bit more JAFF since the first time I read this book, and it occurs to me now that there are a ton of stories where Mr. Bennet dies, but not many where one of the sisters dies instead. It makes for a very different feel, where the family has to mourn, but they aren't in immediate danger of poverty. It's quieter with that lack of danger, but sometimes I'm really in the mood for that. The Wickham storyline is pretty satisfying, too.
Original read 10/11/15
I enjoyed this book a great deal. The writing was really good, and it probably would have been 4.5 or 5 stars if there was more new about it. A lot of material from the original was re-purposed to fit the new continuity. It was definitely used in creative ways, so bravo for that, but I would have liked it even better if the divergence explored more new territory.
Of the things that were new, though, my favorite was definitely Elizabeth's friendship with Georgiana. Georgie is consistently one of my favorite secondary characters, so anyone who can bring her into the story more and use her well is on my YES list.
I do have to admit that when Mr. and Mrs. Bennet
Recommended as an enjoyable way to pass an afternoon.
I've read quite a bit more JAFF since the first time I read this book, and it occurs to me now that there are a ton of stories where Mr. Bennet dies, but not many where one of the sisters dies instead. It makes for a very different feel, where the family has to mourn, but they aren't in immediate danger of poverty. It's quieter with that lack of danger, but sometimes I'm really in the mood for that. The Wickham storyline is pretty satisfying, too.
Original read 10/11/15
I enjoyed this book a great deal. The writing was really good, and it probably would have been 4.5 or 5 stars if there was more new about it. A lot of material from the original was re-purposed to fit the new continuity. It was definitely used in creative ways, so bravo for that, but I would have liked it even better if the divergence explored more new territory.
Of the things that were new, though, my favorite was definitely Elizabeth's friendship with Georgiana. Georgie is consistently one of my favorite secondary characters, so anyone who can bring her into the story more and use her well is on my YES list.
I do have to admit that when Mr. and Mrs. Bennet
Recommended as an enjoyable way to pass an afternoon.
September 26, 2023
One of the very best
I read or listen to this every year. You’ve got a great amount of reviews with plot points and some spoilers here but I’m not going into that because I couldn’t improve upon them.
I’m definitely willing to offer my praise though. I didn’t used to review very often in early years of reading this genre and still struggle with writing them. I adore this author’s writing. In Bluebells the story was unique, yes it was sad as others have mentioned. No matter how immature and undisciplined a younger sibling would act we would never want them to die. That is a shock far too many families have had to go through. I love this story for how the author changes characters and relationships after Lydia’s death. I loved the sweet adorable romance between our dear couple. Loved Georgiana’s role in the story.
As this is an older story and many new readers have come to the genre I hope they will give this author and this story a chance. I think many will understand why Mackrory is a favorite author of mine.
I read or listen to this every year. You’ve got a great amount of reviews with plot points and some spoilers here but I’m not going into that because I couldn’t improve upon them.
I’m definitely willing to offer my praise though. I didn’t used to review very often in early years of reading this genre and still struggle with writing them. I adore this author’s writing. In Bluebells the story was unique, yes it was sad as others have mentioned. No matter how immature and undisciplined a younger sibling would act we would never want them to die. That is a shock far too many families have had to go through. I love this story for how the author changes characters and relationships after Lydia’s death. I loved the sweet adorable romance between our dear couple. Loved Georgiana’s role in the story.
As this is an older story and many new readers have come to the genre I hope they will give this author and this story a chance. I think many will understand why Mackrory is a favorite author of mine.
March 8, 2021
This is a story that is both sad and sweet and I really enjoyed it. Darcy is prevented from proposing at Hunsford and has a chance to understand Elizabeth’s opinion of him early on and strive to be better. Their journey to a HEA was sweet. I did get a bit frustrated with excessive misunderstandings that dragged on unnecessarily because they wouldn’t have a conversation, but other than that, it is a very enjoyable read.
April 19, 2020
Comfort read
Although this book was a combination of heart-wrenching, sorrowful and amusing, I deem it a comfort read because it was utterly romantic. (Swoon) In addition, it was unputdownable...
Those traits enabled me to overlook the somewhat outstretched misunderstandings.
The epilogue was deliciously emotional, I had goosebumps all over.
Heartily recommend this book!
Rated: Chaste
Although this book was a combination of heart-wrenching, sorrowful and amusing, I deem it a comfort read because it was utterly romantic. (Swoon) In addition, it was unputdownable...
Those traits enabled me to overlook the somewhat outstretched misunderstandings.
The epilogue was deliciously emotional, I had goosebumps all over.
Heartily recommend this book!
Rated: Chaste
May 1, 2020
Another great book from this author who is definately on of my favourites in this genre. In this book we start at Rosings - Elizabeth is aware that Darcy has interfered with Jane and Bingleys relationship and does not go to Rosings for Dinner as she has a headache. Darcy arrives at the parsonage to make his proposal but finds Elizabeth distraught as she has had news from Longborn that Lydia has died. Darcy supports Elizabeth in getting back to Longborn and en route meet Georgiana.
There are so many great things about this book - Darcy soon realises that he'd have been refused if he'd proposed and is determined to win Elizabeth's heart. There is some really delightful flirting as he us braver in making his feelings known. Georgiana has the role of matchmaker which also offers some real cute moments. The relationship between Darcy and the colonel is fantastic! I also enjoyed seeing Bingley stand up to Darcy. So many great moments... Wickham also has a very unique story and gets a well deserved comeuppance! There is still some opportunity for misunderstanding and I really enjoyed reading about how this was worked out.
I usually dislike epilogues with a passion. But I really loved this one... the story wraps up nicely with Mr & Mrs Bennet and leaves the reader with a true sense of happily ever after!
There are so many great things about this book - Darcy soon realises that he'd have been refused if he'd proposed and is determined to win Elizabeth's heart. There is some really delightful flirting as he us braver in making his feelings known. Georgiana has the role of matchmaker which also offers some real cute moments. The relationship between Darcy and the colonel is fantastic! I also enjoyed seeing Bingley stand up to Darcy. So many great moments... Wickham also has a very unique story and gets a well deserved comeuppance! There is still some opportunity for misunderstanding and I really enjoyed reading about how this was worked out.
I usually dislike epilogues with a passion. But I really loved this one... the story wraps up nicely with Mr & Mrs Bennet and leaves the reader with a true sense of happily ever after!
May 1, 2016
This Pride and Prejudice variation picks up when Elizabeth receives the letter from Jane about Lydia, only instead of containing news that her youngest sister has run off with Wickham, the note informs Lizzy that Lydia has had an accidental fall while out on a walk with Wickham and died as a result of her injuries. So instead of proposing to her and being rejected, Mr. Darcy is there to help Elizabeth as she grieves and to escort her and Maria Lucas home. And then it turns out there may be foul play involved with Lydia's death -- a development that may waylay the growing romance between Elizabeth and Darcy.
Pretty enjoyable, if you enjoy Jane Austen fanfiction or prim-and-proper Regency romance novels. I'm not sure it really added all that much to the story as it already exists, except that it gave more development to the character of Darcy's cousin Captain Fitzwilliam and his sister Georgiana, and gave an unlikely happy ending to Mr. and Mrs. Bennet, who were brought together as husband and wife after the tragic loss of Lydia.
Pretty enjoyable, if you enjoy Jane Austen fanfiction or prim-and-proper Regency romance novels. I'm not sure it really added all that much to the story as it already exists, except that it gave more development to the character of Darcy's cousin Captain Fitzwilliam and his sister Georgiana, and gave an unlikely happy ending to Mr. and Mrs. Bennet, who were brought together as husband and wife after the tragic loss of Lydia.
August 12, 2015
This is a great P&P variation. Highly recommend. Great plot twist, ample misunderstandings for D & E to suffer through. Then Darcy knocks Wickham out cold... what more could you want? They even pull one over on Lady C. (which is a nice change as I was getting tired of reading her rantings in other P&P variations). Happy endings all around with a neat little epilogue to tie up the loose ends. Makes me smile :)
Read: July 9, 2014
Read: March 25, 2015
Read: July 9, 2014
Read: March 25, 2015
June 12, 2023
Good book
I enjoyed a book that showed more of Georgiana and less of Caroline. The hea was good I love stories with an epilogue
I enjoyed a book that showed more of Georgiana and less of Caroline. The hea was good I love stories with an epilogue
January 24, 2020
Well. That was disappointing.
Haunting Mr Darcy is one of my favourite P&P variations. It is hard to believe this is written by the same author. I know this is an earlier book, but the difference in the quality of the writing, the plotting, the characterisations, is so vast I'm staggered they are written by the same lady.
Where do I start?
Mr Darcy is not canon Mr Darcy. He is a weakling, who mopes and whines and pines and stews and wallows. He's dumb as a box of frogs and constantly imagines obstacles to his relationship with Elizabeth so he can whine and mope and wallow some more and make everyone's lives miserable.
Colonel Fitzwilliam has to behave like Darcy's nanny, telling him off for upsetting his sister, telling him not to lose his temper and get violent, shouting at him to take a bath, nagging him to stop being so overdramatic and self-absorbed. I actually hated this version of Darcy. HATED him. If I were his cousin, I'd have left on some military mission abroad and never come back.
Elizabeth is not much better. All she does is moon after him and cry ALL the freaking time. Okay, when she's grieving her sister, sure. But her eyes well up when she's happy, moved, touched, sad... And for someone so prone to crying, she never seems to remember to carry her own handkerchief.
Mr and Mrs Bennet have apparently been deeply pathetic and just totally misunderstood each other for 13 years, but in one afternoon everything is fixed and they're shagging like rabbits.
Every scene is repeated about four times for no reason. For example, Darcy and Elizabeth seem to be getting along better in the scene. Next scene Darcy is telling Fitzwilliam about the previous scene when he and Elizabeth were getting along better. Next scene we cut to Elizabeth as she also relives that special moment when she and Darcy were getting along better. Next scene we cut to Georgiana and Darcy (or Fitzwilliam), who will now relate the good tidings that Elizabeth and Darcy were getting along better and this is exactly what happened...
It was enough to drive me crazy and force me to skim-read to get through the last 65% of this book.
The tortured, angsty separations were so ridiculous, it felt like these could not possibly be two grown adults attempting a relationship. "I could tell by her eyes that she did not want me" is the stupidest reason for galloping away to get drunk, especially after they've already kissed and been all lovey dovey to each other for weeks.
In P&P, Darcy's 'I fear you have long been desiring my absence' scene, is because they have no understanding yet and other than the comfort he has already offered, he can do nothing else for her in the immediate present, since they were not courting / betrothed / married and it is not his place.
In this book however, he says the same line simply because he thinks she could not possibly want him anymore now that Wickham has preyed on Lydia. It makes no sense. They were already in love, they'd already kissed, he'd already made it clear he was going to propose as soon as she was out of mourning. He had every right to lend her comfort, to propose, and then to do what he could for her family as her affianced husband.
And the epilogue.
Just when I thought I'd finally made it to the end (because it said: The End), I found there was an epilogue, which was apparently an endless recitation of how many children everyone had and how in love they all are - even to the inclusion of a scene showing the butler and his housekeeper-wife getting frisky. Why the hell do I want to read about the butler getting an erection for his wife?!
[Sidebar:] And while I'm on the subject, why does everyone have a gazillion kids so easily in these stories? I know that Darcy wants an heir for Pemberley (although Georgiana might still have provided one if Lizzy and Darcy could not), and as it is their HEA I understand showing that they got their family.
But not one person in this story seems to find getting knocked up an issue, even when they're in their forties, and I find it so annoying that having kids is seen as the only way a couple can be happy and fulfilled - especially for a time when giving birth was so horrendously risky to mother and baby.
Jane Austen wrote people like Sophia and Admiral Croft as a happy, fulfilled and very much in love childless couple. Lady Russell was widowed and childless. Not all married couples choose to - or can - have children. It doesn't make them lesser.
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Sorry, but this one was so bad. I still can't get over this being written by the same person as Haunting Mr Darcy.
Haunting Mr Darcy is one of my favourite P&P variations. It is hard to believe this is written by the same author. I know this is an earlier book, but the difference in the quality of the writing, the plotting, the characterisations, is so vast I'm staggered they are written by the same lady.
Where do I start?
Mr Darcy is not canon Mr Darcy. He is a weakling, who mopes and whines and pines and stews and wallows. He's dumb as a box of frogs and constantly imagines obstacles to his relationship with Elizabeth so he can whine and mope and wallow some more and make everyone's lives miserable.
Colonel Fitzwilliam has to behave like Darcy's nanny, telling him off for upsetting his sister, telling him not to lose his temper and get violent, shouting at him to take a bath, nagging him to stop being so overdramatic and self-absorbed. I actually hated this version of Darcy. HATED him. If I were his cousin, I'd have left on some military mission abroad and never come back.
Elizabeth is not much better. All she does is moon after him and cry ALL the freaking time. Okay, when she's grieving her sister, sure. But her eyes well up when she's happy, moved, touched, sad... And for someone so prone to crying, she never seems to remember to carry her own handkerchief.
Mr and Mrs Bennet have apparently been deeply pathetic and just totally misunderstood each other for 13 years, but in one afternoon everything is fixed and they're shagging like rabbits.
Every scene is repeated about four times for no reason. For example, Darcy and Elizabeth seem to be getting along better in the scene. Next scene Darcy is telling Fitzwilliam about the previous scene when he and Elizabeth were getting along better. Next scene we cut to Elizabeth as she also relives that special moment when she and Darcy were getting along better. Next scene we cut to Georgiana and Darcy (or Fitzwilliam), who will now relate the good tidings that Elizabeth and Darcy were getting along better and this is exactly what happened...
It was enough to drive me crazy and force me to skim-read to get through the last 65% of this book.
The tortured, angsty separations were so ridiculous, it felt like these could not possibly be two grown adults attempting a relationship. "I could tell by her eyes that she did not want me" is the stupidest reason for galloping away to get drunk, especially after they've already kissed and been all lovey dovey to each other for weeks.
In P&P, Darcy's 'I fear you have long been desiring my absence' scene, is because they have no understanding yet and other than the comfort he has already offered, he can do nothing else for her in the immediate present, since they were not courting / betrothed / married and it is not his place.
In this book however, he says the same line simply because he thinks she could not possibly want him anymore now that Wickham has preyed on Lydia. It makes no sense. They were already in love, they'd already kissed, he'd already made it clear he was going to propose as soon as she was out of mourning. He had every right to lend her comfort, to propose, and then to do what he could for her family as her affianced husband.
And the epilogue.
Just when I thought I'd finally made it to the end (because it said: The End), I found there was an epilogue, which was apparently an endless recitation of how many children everyone had and how in love they all are - even to the inclusion of a scene showing the butler and his housekeeper-wife getting frisky. Why the hell do I want to read about the butler getting an erection for his wife?!
[Sidebar:] And while I'm on the subject, why does everyone have a gazillion kids so easily in these stories? I know that Darcy wants an heir for Pemberley (although Georgiana might still have provided one if Lizzy and Darcy could not), and as it is their HEA I understand showing that they got their family.
But not one person in this story seems to find getting knocked up an issue, even when they're in their forties, and I find it so annoying that having kids is seen as the only way a couple can be happy and fulfilled - especially for a time when giving birth was so horrendously risky to mother and baby.
Jane Austen wrote people like Sophia and Admiral Croft as a happy, fulfilled and very much in love childless couple. Lady Russell was widowed and childless. Not all married couples choose to - or can - have children. It doesn't make them lesser.
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Sorry, but this one was so bad. I still can't get over this being written by the same person as Haunting Mr Darcy.
September 1, 2024
3.5 stars rounded up to 4. Bluebells in the Mourning is a Pride and Prejudice variation that is part mystery, but mostly romance.
For some reason, the first time I read this, in May of 2018, I sped through it, and I adored it. I wrote a rather gushing review of it then. But this time through, I had a much less extreme reaction to it. I don't think it's just a matter of my current mood, or any increasing cynicism on my part. I know I was working longer, harder hours then, and probably needed the reading escape, so I overlooked things I would ordinarily not be able to. Whatever the cause, I'm not as impressed on the second reading, so I'm taking it down a bit, in my star rating. The novel still has a lot to love about it, and I still recommend it, especially certain aspects of the story which I continue to find delightful.
In this variation, there's an early death of a Bennet family member, and several characters go through a lot of growth, change, and healing. Many little things make this story memorable. The delicious bits that still stand out for me on this second reading are the thing about handkerchiefs, the bluebells, the libraries, and Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. There are some things I want more of, such as about Darcy's artwork. I also want more about Kitty Bennet.
The story begins with a somber coach ride from Hunsford to London. Elizabeth Bennet has been staying with the Collinses, where she received word that her sister Lydia had died. Mr. Darcy and his cousin Colonel Fitzwilliam are escorting Elizabeth along with Maria Lucas back to London from Kent. On the drive, Elizabeth is surprised and puzzled by Darcy's seeming compassion and kindness toward her, and she's frankly a little suspicious of it. She didn't think he liked her, and she's sure he doesn't approve of her family. Between her own grief, and consoling Maria, she is torn about what to think of the man.
Mr. Darcy is in some conflict himself during that drive. He had been about to propose to Elizabeth when he visited her the evening before, but she had just received word of her sister's death, so his task changed from proposing to comforting. Now, during the coach ride, he realizes she wasn't likely to have welcomed his offer, in fact she barely tolerates his presence. He starts to ponder why this might be, reviews his past behavior, and considers something she says on the drive about her sister Jane having already suffered a recent loss, and he realizes there is little chance, at this point, that Elizabeth would ever choose to marry him.
During the next two days, while they stop over at his house in London, before continuing on to Hertfordshire (to avoid traveling on the Sabbath) and he has a chance to introduce Elizabeth to his sister and show her his London home, Darcy decides he needs to change her opinion of him. He can't make her an offer of marriage while she's in mourning anyway. It wouldn't be proper. He resolves to use that time to make a better impression, and to win her heart. During that stay in London, with his sister whom he clearly dotes on, and the servants who clearly dote on him, Elizabeth begins to realize she doesn't know Mr. Darcy well at all. Could she have misjudged him?
On one hand I think this book would be better as a mystery for someone who's not familiar with Pride and Prejudice, but there's some mystery remaining even for those of us well familiar with the characters, and some of the character growth is better understood and appreciated by someone already familiar with the original novel. I think there could have been some actual scenes with Kitty, and a bit of input from her as to what happened to Lydia. Maybe just enough to show us how Kitty is doing without her sister, and maybe provide a clue mentioned in passing, rather than all the speculation, as to how Lydia's death came about.
Aside from some events and choices I found implausible, one of the main problems I have on this second reading is with point of view. It keeps shifting without warning. There is one scene where Elizabeth is seated in her room at Darcy House, and recalling something that happened the previous day, so one would assume the flashback would be entirely from her point of view, but instead it lapses into Mr. Darcy's, then back to hers, and then we're in the present again. That disoriented me and threw me out of the story for a moment. I don't mind changing points of view, but I dislike when they jump around so much and so unexpectedly.
But all in all this is still a deliciously romantic story.
For some reason, the first time I read this, in May of 2018, I sped through it, and I adored it. I wrote a rather gushing review of it then. But this time through, I had a much less extreme reaction to it. I don't think it's just a matter of my current mood, or any increasing cynicism on my part. I know I was working longer, harder hours then, and probably needed the reading escape, so I overlooked things I would ordinarily not be able to. Whatever the cause, I'm not as impressed on the second reading, so I'm taking it down a bit, in my star rating. The novel still has a lot to love about it, and I still recommend it, especially certain aspects of the story which I continue to find delightful.
In this variation, there's an early death of a Bennet family member, and several characters go through a lot of growth, change, and healing. Many little things make this story memorable. The delicious bits that still stand out for me on this second reading are the thing about handkerchiefs, the bluebells, the libraries, and Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. There are some things I want more of, such as about Darcy's artwork. I also want more about Kitty Bennet.
The story begins with a somber coach ride from Hunsford to London. Elizabeth Bennet has been staying with the Collinses, where she received word that her sister Lydia had died. Mr. Darcy and his cousin Colonel Fitzwilliam are escorting Elizabeth along with Maria Lucas back to London from Kent. On the drive, Elizabeth is surprised and puzzled by Darcy's seeming compassion and kindness toward her, and she's frankly a little suspicious of it. She didn't think he liked her, and she's sure he doesn't approve of her family. Between her own grief, and consoling Maria, she is torn about what to think of the man.
Mr. Darcy is in some conflict himself during that drive. He had been about to propose to Elizabeth when he visited her the evening before, but she had just received word of her sister's death, so his task changed from proposing to comforting. Now, during the coach ride, he realizes she wasn't likely to have welcomed his offer, in fact she barely tolerates his presence. He starts to ponder why this might be, reviews his past behavior, and considers something she says on the drive about her sister Jane having already suffered a recent loss, and he realizes there is little chance, at this point, that Elizabeth would ever choose to marry him.
During the next two days, while they stop over at his house in London, before continuing on to Hertfordshire (to avoid traveling on the Sabbath) and he has a chance to introduce Elizabeth to his sister and show her his London home, Darcy decides he needs to change her opinion of him. He can't make her an offer of marriage while she's in mourning anyway. It wouldn't be proper. He resolves to use that time to make a better impression, and to win her heart. During that stay in London, with his sister whom he clearly dotes on, and the servants who clearly dote on him, Elizabeth begins to realize she doesn't know Mr. Darcy well at all. Could she have misjudged him?
On one hand I think this book would be better as a mystery for someone who's not familiar with Pride and Prejudice, but there's some mystery remaining even for those of us well familiar with the characters, and some of the character growth is better understood and appreciated by someone already familiar with the original novel. I think there could have been some actual scenes with Kitty, and a bit of input from her as to what happened to Lydia. Maybe just enough to show us how Kitty is doing without her sister, and maybe provide a clue mentioned in passing, rather than all the speculation, as to how Lydia's death came about.
Aside from some events and choices I found implausible, one of the main problems I have on this second reading is with point of view. It keeps shifting without warning. There is one scene where Elizabeth is seated in her room at Darcy House, and recalling something that happened the previous day, so one would assume the flashback would be entirely from her point of view, but instead it lapses into Mr. Darcy's, then back to hers, and then we're in the present again. That disoriented me and threw me out of the story for a moment. I don't mind changing points of view, but I dislike when they jump around so much and so unexpectedly.
But all in all this is still a deliciously romantic story.
May 28, 2013
I loved this story! I was struck by how many good things came out of this tragic event. Even though, there is a death in the family and, to that end, some grieving, it wasn’t a heavy book. In fact, I found Bluebells in the Mourning a fun and enjoyable read!
Darcy arrives at the parsonage just moments after Elizabeth receives news that one of her dearly beloved sisters has been in an accident and died. Instead of the planned proposal, Darcy offers to escort Elizabeth and Maria Lucas to London. On the way to London, Elizabeth makes a few comments that make Darcy realize she holds many grievances and misconceptions against him. Recognizing what a disaster it would have been to propose to her at the parsonage, Darcy goes about the business of showing her the real gentleman he is, but will that matter as the circumstances of Lydia’s death come to light. Could Darcy have prevented it, if he had been more forthcoming of Wickham’s true character?
What I found very interesting is, what affect this tragedy had on Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. It brought them closer together. It was really beautiful to see.
I loved Colonel Fitzwilliam and Bingley in this story. With the Colonel being Darcy’s best friend and always ready to go after Wickham. And Bingley finally doing what he wants, but still being cheerful and easy going.
Georgiana catches on pretty quickly about Elizabeth, and invites her and the Gardiners to stay at Pemberley while traveling to Lambton. Only she doesn’t tell Darcy until about a week before they are due to arrive!! I love this Georgiana; a little sneaky, with a nice sense of humor.
Let me tell you, Darcy and Elizabeth’s first kiss was amazing!! Sweet and lovely.
Bluebells in the Mourning is a delightful read! One I plan to re-read many times in the future!
**I was provide a copy of the book for my honest review.**
Darcy arrives at the parsonage just moments after Elizabeth receives news that one of her dearly beloved sisters has been in an accident and died. Instead of the planned proposal, Darcy offers to escort Elizabeth and Maria Lucas to London. On the way to London, Elizabeth makes a few comments that make Darcy realize she holds many grievances and misconceptions against him. Recognizing what a disaster it would have been to propose to her at the parsonage, Darcy goes about the business of showing her the real gentleman he is, but will that matter as the circumstances of Lydia’s death come to light. Could Darcy have prevented it, if he had been more forthcoming of Wickham’s true character?
What I found very interesting is, what affect this tragedy had on Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. It brought them closer together. It was really beautiful to see.
I loved Colonel Fitzwilliam and Bingley in this story. With the Colonel being Darcy’s best friend and always ready to go after Wickham. And Bingley finally doing what he wants, but still being cheerful and easy going.
Georgiana catches on pretty quickly about Elizabeth, and invites her and the Gardiners to stay at Pemberley while traveling to Lambton. Only she doesn’t tell Darcy until about a week before they are due to arrive!! I love this Georgiana; a little sneaky, with a nice sense of humor.
Let me tell you, Darcy and Elizabeth’s first kiss was amazing!! Sweet and lovely.
Bluebells in the Mourning is a delightful read! One I plan to re-read many times in the future!
**I was provide a copy of the book for my honest review.**
August 9, 2018
This P&P variation started out great, romantic and cute. The main plot point here is Lydia's death, which jump starts a series of events that promote the main romance, the mystery and a very thorough final organization of events for everyone involved.
After the first half I was not as invested in the mystery/action point/persecution or whatever. Also, after that point Lizzy's character seemed to me to take a nose-dive and retract 5 years in character and psychological strength. This Elizabeth was more insecure, vulnerable and fragile that the canon oiginal. Darcy was very much inlove, and also made more vulnerable by it (him having a crisis towards he end confims that).
I enjoyed this read overall, I was not blown away though and would recommend other P&P variations before this one. I will check out more by this author anyway.
After the first half I was not as invested in the mystery/action point/persecution or whatever. Also, after that point Lizzy's character seemed to me to take a nose-dive and retract 5 years in character and psychological strength. This Elizabeth was more insecure, vulnerable and fragile that the canon oiginal. Darcy was very much inlove, and also made more vulnerable by it (him having a crisis towards he end confims that).
I enjoyed this read overall, I was not blown away though and would recommend other P&P variations before this one. I will check out more by this author anyway.
October 3, 2023
Sweet if sad
Elizabeth receives news that Lydia died and Darcy takes her home from Hunsford . Amidst grief and misunderstandings there are some very sweet moments. Steam level: no explicit scenes.
Elizabeth receives news that Lydia died and Darcy takes her home from Hunsford . Amidst grief and misunderstandings there are some very sweet moments. Steam level: no explicit scenes.
April 11, 2016
3.5 Stars.
September 11, 2021
4.5, really enjoyed it!
April 28, 2019
This was a Pride and Prejudice variation I picked up because of a reading challenge (it has bluebells in the title) and I normally read these quite quickly but I enjoyed it when it came down to it.
In this book, Lizzy receives a letter from Jane before Darcy addresses her at Rosings, saying Lydia has died after taking a fall. She and Maria Lucas have to travel back home in order to mourn Lydia and Darcy accompanies them. What I find the trouble with these variations sometimes is that they bring Darcy and Lizzy together in a different way but don't address their character flaws. After the first proposal in P&P, Lizzy has to confront her prejudice against Darcy and Darcy has to confront his pride before they can come together as a couple and variations sometimes miss that. Thankfully, that wasn't the case in this book.
Despite the differing circumstances, Lizzie frequently assumes the worst of Darcy and Darcy has to swallow his pride and realise he made several mistakes in Meryton and concerning Lizzy and her family. Bingley plays a part here and not just to propose to Jane and Georgiana is delightful. Not to mention there is an unforeseen development with Mr and Mrs Bennett and of course, Wickham has to be dealt with.
I would have liked to have seen more of Kitty and Mary, especially since Kitty was the one with Lydia and closest to her when she died and felt like they were left out to the detriment of the book. However, this was an enjoyable book.
3.5 stars!
In this book, Lizzy receives a letter from Jane before Darcy addresses her at Rosings, saying Lydia has died after taking a fall. She and Maria Lucas have to travel back home in order to mourn Lydia and Darcy accompanies them. What I find the trouble with these variations sometimes is that they bring Darcy and Lizzy together in a different way but don't address their character flaws. After the first proposal in P&P, Lizzy has to confront her prejudice against Darcy and Darcy has to confront his pride before they can come together as a couple and variations sometimes miss that. Thankfully, that wasn't the case in this book.
Despite the differing circumstances, Lizzie frequently assumes the worst of Darcy and Darcy has to swallow his pride and realise he made several mistakes in Meryton and concerning Lizzy and her family. Bingley plays a part here and not just to propose to Jane and Georgiana is delightful. Not to mention there is an unforeseen development with Mr and Mrs Bennett and of course, Wickham has to be dealt with.
I would have liked to have seen more of Kitty and Mary, especially since Kitty was the one with Lydia and closest to her when she died and felt like they were left out to the detriment of the book. However, this was an enjoyable book.
3.5 stars!
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