The only compliment I can give this book is that it was better than the first book. But to be honest, that's not that impressive, since the first book was such a mess that literally anything could be better than it.
So, spoilers for the last book and this one below.
I don't even know what to say for a book as bad as that one.
So the main problem that our amazing heroine Hollis has now is that her husband is dead (after being married to him for, like, a day??) and now she doesn't know where to go. She goes to the neighboring enemy country or whatever (I forgot the name. But honestly, i blame it on Keira Cass, since the world building in this book -- like the last book -- is literally non existent) with the members of Silas's family who are alive. Oh, and Etan. (if you didn't catch on from the last book that they're going to end up together, then I don't know what to tell you.)
Anyway, the first seventy percent of the book is filled with nonsensical fluff. There are parties, banquets, meals, and a JOUST?? I'm sorry, that whole scene just came out of no where. What even was the point of that?? Moving on, Hollis and Etan have some *moments* together after somehow learning that they shouldn't hate each other, because they need to end up together. But seriously, Keira Cass's books go from 0 to 100 in the span of a few seconds. Hollis and Etan can't even stand to look at each other, and then suddenly they're 'desperately in love' ? I'm getting deja vu from the first book. One thing I have to say, though, is that Etan is a better love interest than Silas. At least him and Hollis have some sort of development, and even though none of it is that meaningful, it's better than in the first book, where Silas and Hollis ultimately knew nothing about each other.
Moving on, there's some more meaningless palace stuff -- Hollis suspects that the king murdered Silas and his 100 brothers, Hollis cries (I SWEAR TO GOD SHE CRIES EVERY FIVE SECONDS IN THIS BOOK), and cries some more, Hollis says that poor people smell, and Hollis is treated like a goddess when all she did is cause more problems.
I'M NOT JOKING. HOW ARE WE SUPPOSED TO ROOT FOR HER???
So then, everyone suddenly decides that they need to dethrone the king or whatever, and then they do so, with ZERO BLOODSHED AND CONSEQUENCE, MAY I ADD, and then Etan is crowned the king.
Also, somewhere in the middle of all this, Hollis realizes that Jameson, the king, actually murdered Silas (and his 100000 brothers), her parents and all. His motivation? Because he wanted to kill everyone Hollis cared about so she'd have no choice but to run back to him and beg for forgiveness. (Can you believe that his thinking might be flawed???) Anyway, this was so confusing, because WHY WOULD JAMESON DO THIS. His character was not like this AT ALL in the first book. He literally did a 180 flip.
So in her *rage* Hollis just grabs a horse from the stable and races across the country? State? City? I don't know, the world building, as I mentioned before, is non existent. Anyway, she races across whatever kingdom, WHILE CRYING, I'D LIKE TO ADD, FOR ABSOLUTELY NO REASON, and then we get a bunch of random details about scenery and *feelings* and all that.
Anyway, halfway through her little tantrum, Etan finds her and is all like "You'll never be alone," and some other garbage that's supposed to sound romantic, but sounds more creepy than anything. And then he proceeds to follow her (WITH 100 OTHER MEN????) across the land.
So they finally reach the palace, right? And somehow, the 100 men that came with Etan are all forgotten about and it's just Hollis and Etan. Anyway, even if we ignore this, what happens next made me burst out laughing.
So apparently, Hollis and Jameson were already married because of some stupid legal document that her parents signed or something. Which wasn't the most shocking thing, because of the EXTREMELY SUBLTE hints of this scattered throughout the book. (Keira Cass is so not the queen of plot twists, I cannot even begin to tell you.) So anyway, everyone is SHOCKED by this news. And honestly, this whole thing is just so stupid, because if Hollis and Jameson were bound by a contract (and if Hollis left him, that is pretty much breaking the law) then instead of killing everyone she cared about, why couldn't Jameson just BRING HER BACK USING THE STUPID CONTRACT. THIS MAKES ZERO SENSE.
So it gets stupider, if that's possible.
Jameson is, for some reason, upset by seeing Etan there. So he draws his sword, STOMPS ACROSS THE FREAKING TABLE, SLIPS, DROPS HIS SWORD, AND FALLS ON TOP OF IT???
I KID YOU NOT.
WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING.
So that was convenient for everyone, I guess. Except Delia Grace, who is pretty much forgotten about after that one scene (no, but seriously, what even happened to her?? Hollis claims to care so much about her feelings, but she ultimately doesn't care at all).
So, yeah, Jameson's dead. In the most CONVENIENT WAY POSSIBLE, THAT AVOIDS ANY ACTUAL THINKING FOR THE AUTHOR TO DO.
Anyway, now, Hollis is crowned the queen because of the whole marriage thing. You would expect her to refuse, what with her literally saying THE WHOLE BOOK how she's never going near another crown ever again. I literally promise you, her whole personality in this book is I-hate-crowns, or I will never go near a crown. And now that's all forgotten??
She accepts the crown gratefully, and says a tearful goodbye to Etan.
And then, you have to plow through another FIFTEEN PERCENT OF THE BOOK, where Hollis is moping about Etan. IT LITERALLY TAKES THEM THREE MONTHS TO COME AND SAY, "Oh, let's break the border between our kingdoms and make them one! yay! we're so smart. and then we can be together since we've found *true love*"
And that's pretty much where it ends.
I guess it's hard to make a book worse than the first one, but that doesn't mean this one is a masterpiece. The character's annoyed the crap out of me, since all of them were just whiny and annoying. Really, the only reason it was better is because at least there was at least some kind of development through out the book, and oh yeah, HALF THE CAST OF CHARACTERS DIDN'T GET MURDERED AT THE END. This series just honestly should not exist.
Quotes that stood out to me
"Silas left a mark. I don't know if I want someone else to. No matter how much time passes, i don't think I'll ever forget what he did to me, for me. It probably doesn't seem like it right now, but I'll always feel like he rescued me."
Okay, if you feel this way, why are you already falling in love with Etan?? Also, do I need to remind you that you knew him for ONE WEEK. I swear, the way Hollis talks about Silas in this book is unreal. YOU BARELY KNEW HIM.
""If it would please you," I eked out."
I don't think I've EVER read the word 'eked' in fiction before?? Especially in this context. It barely makes sense. But I guess that fits with the theme of the rest of the book.
"He took a bite a rolled his eyes at how delicious it must have tasted."
Last time I checked, rolling your eyes is not a gesture to show appreciation for food. Am I missing something here?
Hollis: "Do the poor live here?"
Etan: "Some." *says other useless garbage no one cares about*
Hollis: "It smells."
Excuse me, Miss Hollis, but WHAT THE HELL. You did not just say that.
Etan's response when Hollis asks how she looks:
""Absolutely radiant. Like the moon...Sure and determined, reflecting light on everyone around you, and so desperately beautiful to those who don't even realize they're in the dark.""
What even is this answer. Nobody is EVER going to say anything like this, I can say for sure. This is the most exaggerated answer ever, and if it's meant to be romantic, it is not at all.
Honestly, I don't even know what else is left to say about this mess. The writing style in this book is especially frustrating, especially since Keira Cass writes like we're already in her head. 90% of the book is dialogue, which is fine, I guess, but we get no backstory, no history, nothing. All the jokes people made fell flat. None of the characters act like normal people, and the whole story is just ridiculous. And the lack of history would have been partially made up for if the dialogue actually made sense and sounded realistic. Which it didn't. Every single thing that came out of character's mouths made me roll my eyes or cringe.
I don't know. The whole story just seemed really juvenile to me?? Like I love some books for younger kids, but really, falling on top of your own sword?? WHILE STOMPING ACROSS A TABLE??? It's just so ridiculous at times.
Especially with pacing, since, like I said before, this book fluctuates violently between literally nothing happening, and everything just falling apart. The first 70%, in my opinion, could be skipped, since half of what happened was of little to no consequence and didn't really impact the plot. I mean, Jameson does request that Hollis returns to him, but the reason she went had NOTHING to do with that. She went because of Silas. I definitely think the plotting could use a lot of work, since I don't get the reason for 90% of the things that occurred in the book. And the moment we get some tension with Jameson, he just dies, in the stupidest way possible. I would've liked it if that scene was drawn out a little more, and maybe if Hollis or Etan (or even Delia grace, maybe??) did something influential, since Jameson dying had NOTHING to do with them.
There's so many other things wrong with this book that I'm not going to get into, because I feel like I'd just be repeating my first review. (For example, how bland everyone sounds.)
Overall, I hate this book and this series. It was a solid hate read though, so read it only for that reason.
Happy reading!!!