When Eve first meets Luck, he is drunk outside a bar. He makes a move on her, and then he keeps referring to her as a brown mouse. Not a great first impression. Then, while he and his son are playing catch, they shatter her car's windshield. Not a great second impression. She's not too upset by this, though; she understands accidents happen. And while discussing how to get the windshield repaired, Luck doesn't recognize Eve at all. So for the next 100 pages, Eve tries to keep Luck from recognizing her. Pretty weird.
Then he does recognize her, they get engaged—way too soon, wait! they're not ready to be engaged . . . They're still in a relationship, but they don't see much of each other. They have the weirdest communication habits. Overall, it feels like a pretty unhealthy situation.
In other news: the main character's name is Luck. No, not Luke, Luck. I just can't stand it! And he's a strange dad-type. His eight-year-old son is serving him breakfast in bed—hangover cure included! And trying to set him up so he can have a mom. And walking in on Luke and Eve gettin' busy on the living room floor. When you're a dad, don't you change your behavior? Wouldn't you take the time to go to the bedroom? Anyway . . .
The writing was a weird style, there were too many typos to simply overlook, and the story was just meh.