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When a boy is faced with a choice between two tracks for his future, an unlikely source sends him on an expedition across a meadow...as a bug. Forced to trust his instincts and follow his heart, he must complete his quest before it is too late to return to the land of humans.

Marcel is at a crossroads. He has been offered an apprenticeship at Villeneuve, the neighboring country manor, which would allow him to follow in his late father's footsteps. At the same time, he has won a scholarship at a renowned technical college in Paris, a move that would require him to face the unknown with no guarantee of success. His friend Julia, a city girl through and through, is encouraging him to take a chance and go to Paris. Unknown to Marcel, she has her own reasons to recommend this as well. As the machinations of Marcel's world and that of Villeneuve unfold, Marcel finds help in the most unlikely source imaginable: an ancient oak tree.

Progressively turned into a bug, Marcel must go on a quest across the meadow to feast on the royal jelly in order to return to his human form. Forced to carve his own path and follow his heart, he sets off and quickly finds himself teaming up with a wonderful group of insects, each of which has their own agenda. And with time running out and his existence in peril, Marcel must fight to the finish, or die a bug.

274 pages, Paperback

First published March 15, 2013

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934 reviews482 followers
December 21, 2019
How I read this: got it as a freebie somewhere

3.5 stars
This was a fairly traditional, but also kind of unusual tale about a teenage boy learning about what he truly wants and who he is. It was traditional in the sense of it being somewhat fairytale-like - a boy being turned into an insect and going though a 'metamorphosis' - learning many things and emerging as a man on the other end. It had a lot of traditional fairytale-style elements in that regard. But at the same time, it was unusual because it's way more detailed than fairytales, and also the human side of it was pretty strongly fleshed out.

What I specifically liked was the detail on bug life! The author clearly knows his stuff and must love the world of insects. I could say I learned a lot about them from the way the characters act in the story.

So while it is a little simplified like a fairytale would be, it's also longer and more fleshed out, and definitely interesting to read.

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Author 44 books209 followers
June 19, 2013
This was a very unusual book, mostly in a good way, though I will discuss some issues with it first that deprived it of a fourth star from me.

I'm no expert on the (often fairly artificial) marketing and demographic divisions of books, but I couldn't decide what age group it was targeting. The talking insects make it seem more of a children's story, the theme of a boy becoming a man suggests YA, and the vocabulary (and the large number of character deaths) suggest an older readership again.

Let's talk some more about vocabulary. I generally don't recommend authors go for a "high" style or use uncommon vocabulary, for three main reasons. The first is that it can distance the reader from the characters if they talk in a very formal way. This book avoids that problem; the characters talk in various dialects, about which I'll say more in a moment, and only the narrative tries to be "high" and formal. However, it does have the other two problems.

The second problem is that most people don't have as big a vocabulary as they think they do, and when they try to write a "high" style they use words that aren't quite the right words for what they mean. I spotted a number of instances of this, and so will other readers, thanks to the fact that on a Kindle you can get a definition of the word very easily. Readers, especially young readers, will look up words they don't know, and they'll often find that they don't mean what the author is using them to mean. (I should note that since my review I've heard from the author that he has corrected these and other line-level issues of punctuation, etc.)

The third problem is that most people can't sustain a "high" style consistently, and will drop what I call "clanging colloquialisms" at intervals. This book has that problem too.

While I'm on language, there are a number of very tired cliches in the book as well, especially at moments when someone is giving life advice. This doesn't help to make the life advice sound profound. Rather the opposite.

The dialects serve to distinguish characters from each other, and each character does have a distinctive voice, which is a good thing, but there's not a lot of logic to the dialects, and one of them is broad Californian surfer/stoner, mixed in with (reasonably credible) attempts at British dialects.

There are other, mainly minor, editing issues as well. It's the usual stuff, commas and homonyms and apostrophes, and I won't bore you by detailing it. It's at a level most people would find tolerable if they noticed it at all, and easily fixed (which, as I say, it now has been).

So much for language, which is where most of the book's problems lie. Now, characters. The characters, as I mentioned, have distinct voices, not only because they speak different dialects from each other but because they have different personalities which show through clearly. This isn't easy to do, and congratulations to the author for achieving it. As I also mentioned, there's a bit of a Game of Thrones situation with the characters: you shouldn't get too attached, especially to minor characters encountered in passing, because the body count is brutal.

As far as plot is concerned, this is a straightforward tale of a boy going out and having the adventure that helps him transition into being a man. The physical metamorphosis that accompanies his maturation is a sustained metaphor for his inner transformation. While somewhat obvious and rather literalistic, I think it works. There's certainly always something happening, always fit opposition for the hero and his companions, always danger, and a clear goal with a number of sub-goals and a deadline. It's not groundbreaking, of course; it's been done thousands of times, but I think it's well done here.

Finally, the setting. The turn-of-last-century French setting was believable. The insect part showed that the author knows a lot about insects, how their bodies work and their place in the ecology of a field. If you accept the central conceit of "boy is shrunk, talks to insects, gradually transforms into an insect" (and isn't accepting such things for the duration of a story what speculative fiction is about?), it's a convincing setting, and reminds me a little of Watership Down in a way.

I certainly enjoyed it, even though there were elements of the style that I didn't love.

I received a free copy of the book via the Kindle Book Review site, in exchange for an honest review.
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132 reviews4 followers
January 28, 2014
Like a cross between Alice in Wonderland and James and the Giant Peach this novel is clearly for young people yet is enjoyable for children and adults alike. It starts like a historical novel and the fantasy element is quite sudden. It doesn't have the cleverness of Alice nor the pathos of James.

It is based clearly on Franz Kafka's The Metamorphosis and at times tries too hard to be more than it is. Still if it inspires kids to read Kafka maybe it's a good read anyway.
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1,893 reviews57 followers
June 16, 2013
To be able to see the world from the perspective of an insect isn't exactly as easy as it may look. Marcel finds that out the hard way.
You have the moral issue of the main character being a collector of bugs/specimens now having to rely on them to survive. The hunter becomes the hunted.
During that time he learns to assert himself and realises he has the strength to make his own decisions.The more he learns about life amongst the insects the more he can relate to their problems. He has to make life or death choices in a matter of seconds.
They do say that each person goes through life phases. Each phase represents a change in thinking and the way we reflect upon our actions and life. We often emerge from the change slightly wiser than before. In a sense those life cycles are comparable to that of an insect.
It is suitable for advanced readers, YA and older readers. It is well written with beautiful prose.
I would call it a philosophical fantasy adventure that combines the fun of shrinking with the wisdom of self-reflection and a boy who learns to make his own choices.
I received a free copy of this book for my review.
2 reviews1 follower
May 29, 2013
I wouldn't usually read this type of book but the cover drew me in...and what a read, a hard book to put down....thank god had a sunny day to sit in the garden and read while the kids play, at time I had to read the pages twice as my children would ask what was so funny as laughed out loud at some of the quirky comments of the inchworm.
your endeared to all the main characters as it transforms you from now and whisks you away to a place never thought of in any book I have ever read "the insect world".
as an older 30 something year old "Marcel" the main character reminds me of decisions I had to make as a younger man, and my son will soon have to make for himself which is why I have had to order another copy for him because I will be reading this again and look forward to a holiday reading this by the pool...............
A great read very enjoyable
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5 reviews7 followers
November 13, 2013
What a great idea for a story, I see this rising up to be a classic. A great coming of age/journey story where Marcel takes form as an insect and has to navigate his way through the meadow. It really reminded me of books I read to death as a kid, like Alice and Wonderland, or James and the Giant Peach. Cleverly written, engaging characters, whimsical language. I loved all the elements.
I would recommend this to those readers that are a little outside the norm, and who appreciate wonder and fantasy, because this book is full of both.
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69 reviews2 followers
November 21, 2013
I am so glad I stepped out of my normal reading genre and stepped into an enchanted world of talking insects. I absolutely loved every minute of Strange Metamorphosis. The characters come alive and the vivid descriptions make you feel like you're part of Marcel's journey of self discovery. The story and writing brought me back to the classics I read as I child. I'll definitely be passing Strange Metamorphosis down to my own son to read and recommending to others.
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6,539 reviews47 followers
July 12, 2017
A YA fantasy adventure where a a young boy, Marcel takes on the form of an insect and has to navigate the world as an insect. His life transforms into an epic adventure that is unlike any other. He learns so much about himself as he makes new friends and takes on new adventures. The descriptions in this book are nothing short of amazing. A great tale that will stir your imagination and make you jump with delight. A wonderful read with a strong plot and captivating characters. I received an advance copy and I voluntarily chose to review it.
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Author 28 books47 followers
April 4, 2021
Strange Metamorphosis a fun story about changes.

The story was good. The characters were enjoyable, the pacing was good, and the adventure kept me turning the pages. About the only downside was that the ending seemed a little wanting with how it wrapped the story up. Still, a good book overall.
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2,629 reviews48 followers
August 6, 2017
Interesting story, excellently told. I could not figure out how this would end but I was pleasantly surprised!
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May 1, 2025
Could not get gong with this. Much prefer his histoical books.
14 reviews5 followers
October 10, 2013
'd like to describe this book as a coming-of-age type novel where the main character initially starts off as being indecisive and lost and through various hardships/adventures the character grows and develops as a person.

Coming back to the title - Strange Metamorphosis - seems apt as Marcel does undergo a transformation but not just physically but emotionally/mentally as well.

The story starts of a bit slow and only really kicks off when Marcel transforms into a tiny person. He is then told by a oak tree that he must eat some royal jelly honey in order to get back to normal size. Along the way, Marcel picks up insect friends who help him on his mission. What I really enjoyed whilst reading the book was the different bugs that appear and their unique character. Monk has done well in creating individual personalities to each bug and my favourite has to be Miss Bea, the honeybee. The author has a clear affinity towards insects and that's shown throughout the book.

This book is definitely one to read whilst sitting in your garden on a warm, sunny day, sipping a cool drink.

'A summer book' - That is what I would label it as.

As for editing goes, I didn't find any typos or grammatical errors. It's really well written.

At 200 odd pages I would say that the author had definitely got his story length right. Any longer and it would have ran the risk of dragging but by keeping it relatively short the story flowed at the right pace.

Conclusion

I would wholeheartedly recommend Strange Metamorphosis to those who enjoyed `James And The Giant Peach' and the film, `A Bug's Life'.

Note - I received a copy of this book in return for an impartial and honest review. I am in no way affiliated with the author.
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Author 2 books8 followers
August 17, 2013
Franz Kafka or Lewis Carroll? When the hero of this charming coming-of-age story finds himself transformed into a bug, he enters a parallel reality in which he must negotiate the perilous world of insects in order to turn himself back into a young man who knows what he wants out of life. Along the way, the reader is led by P.C.R. Monk, an amateur entomologist, to consider the universe we inhabit from an insect point of view. The result is a startling and strangely gripping tale, written for the young adult audience but with resonance for grown-ups, too.

I must admit that I shed a tear at the end when Marcel finally comes to terms with who he is. In the process he has faced danger and possible death at the hands - no, mouths, appendages and stingers - of grasshoppers, dragonflies, snakes, voles, giant hornets and assorted other creatures, while making friends with an inchworm, a rhinoceros beetle and a bee who accompany him on his quest.

The only Kafkaesque element of this book is in the boy's actual metamorphosis, which provides the context for his philosophical musings about where he's going in life. But there is definitely an Alice-in-Wonderland quality as the hapless Marcel shrinks, then grows, sprouts wings and learns to fly. His tiny size allows him to observe the world of humans - especially his heartthrob, Julia - without being noticed. The insights gleaned from this bug-eyed perspective not only help him to mature, but provide the reader with a new way of thinking about our strange world - and a new respect for our insect cohabitants.

My 13-year-old daughter's comment when I told her about the book? 'Too cool!' It's next on her reading list.
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446 reviews35 followers
March 24, 2014
When P.C.R. Monk set out to write his debut novel, he did so with the flourish and finesse of an established author. His book, Strange Metamorphosis, is as rich and layered as a buttery croissant and just as gratifying to devour. Seasoned with sage tidbits of choice life lessons throughout, steeped in adventure and sprinkled with just a touch of romance, this book is perfectly balanced to provide an enticing read that is destined to become a treasured piece of literature for the young and young at heart.

Marcel Dassaud is a boy of exceptional talent who is at a stage in life where he must decide between two paths, both of which have the potential for completely divergent outcomes. Reflecting upon his options, he finds himself uttering his contemplation to an ancient oak tree which, according to legend, possesses magical powers to impart great wisdom. Moments later he finds himself shrunken to the size of the bugs he once collected for sport. It is soon revealed to him by a gallfly that in order to return to his former state, he must embark on a quest to gather some of the royal jelly which is heavily guarded by bees. He must do this within three days, or his metamorphosis into a bug will be complete and he will never return to his human state.

Along the way, Marcel discovers much about himself, his friends, and the bugs he encounters while seeking the royal jelly. Strange Metamorphosis, is an exciting and whimsical adventure, written with great aplomb and a style which many authors can only hope to achieve within their lifetime.
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Author 16 books69 followers
March 7, 2014
I like to take this opportunity to give a BIG THANK YOU to those the reviewers that have taken the time to leave comments about Strange Metamorphosis. Some people have asked me why the book is set in the south of France.

Well, in fact it is set in a place where I used to live with my French wife. A great rambling house that had been left uninhabited since her grandmother died in the seventies. That said, once you get onto the part where Marcel begins his strange metamorphosis into a bug, you will find it have been set anywhere where the summers are hot and long and where you will easily find bugs galore like the ones in the book, Brim the inchworm, the rhino beetle, the cicada, great green grasshoppers and all sorts.

BTW, I have published a short story set around the story world of Strange Metamorphosis called Subterranean Peril. You can buy it on Amazon or you can download it for free right here on Goodreads. Just click on the book cover below :)
Strange Metamorphosis by Paul C.R. Monk Subterranean Peril (Action Adventure Short Story) by Paul C.R. Monk
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36 reviews2 followers
November 28, 2013
Paralyzed with indecision about his future, fourteen year old Marcel heads to his favorite oak tree to sit and think. Since the tree is rumored to be magic, Marcel asks the tree to help him make a decision? Should he stay or take the scholarship to school. Instead of a replying, the magic tree turns him into a bug!
The magic tree has given him a quest—Marcel must find the magic jelly to return to his normal size and his normal life. Accompanied by an inchworm for a guide, Marcel sets off on his quest through the fields. Along the way he is forced to make new friends, defeat enemies, and learn a lot about himself during the journey.
Inventive and quirky, Strange Metamorphosis is a fabulous adventure that readers of all ages can enjoy. Well written, with strong characters, vivid language, and great description. Even the cover art is amazing!
I highly recommend this book to anyone who loves fantasy novels but wants something a little bit different. All of the typical fantasy elements are absent here—which helps makes Strange Metamorphosis so distinctive and fresh.
All fans of the fantasy genre should check out this book. You won’t be disappointed.
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160 reviews55 followers
August 19, 2013
First off, I have to gush about how much I love this cover. It reminds me of my favorite children's author, Sharon Creech. The story, Strange Metamorphosis is reminiscent of her writing style as well. Needless to say I went into this tale with high hopes, and I was not disappointed. For the most part this is a strong coming of age novel. Our main character, Marcel, is transformed from boy to bug. He then embarks on a quirky journey in a parallel realm, in search of who he truly is. Along the way he meets friend and foe alike and gains a valuable new perspective on life. I truly enjoyed experiencing this story from the perspective of an insect. The author did a superb job on creating this world. I am not sure exactly what age rage I would target this book for. It can definitely be read and enjoyed by a YA audience as well as adults, although at first glace it seems it might fit better into MG. Regardless, if you are looking for somewhat of a different read, I would recommend picking this up! Strange Metamorphosis is alive and fun, quite an exciting read.
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114 reviews1 follower
November 11, 2013
Strange Metamorphosis had me hooked within the first few pages and didn't let go until I had reached the very end. I admire the author's writing style very much due to how vividly he portrays the characters and scenes and how smooth they transition into one another. P.C.R. Monk might not be as popular as some of the bigger names out there yet, but I can definitely tell he already has the skill of a seasoned, veteran writer just from this single book.

I love the fresh new spin on the genre and how he incorporates many different elements and themes into a blend that I'm sure even the most critical readers can appreciate and find value, from start to finish. Strange Metamorphosis is the first book that I have read by this author but I'm sure it definitely won't be the last; I'll be keeping an eye out for future works!
1 review1 follower
October 24, 2013
The plot is astonishingly inventive and charming. The book zips along and I found myself reading it with a huge smile.
Great book, I would say that its real power is in its tremendous characters.

The characters are wonderful with real problems and conflicts, which are solved in original and unique ways. Marcel is a boy at the crossroads who questions what he should do and how he should do it. Julia makes a wonderful contrast to him, as she examines her own dreams as well.
Readers of all ages will adore the insect characters, including an hilarious inchworm and a bee who just might betray his own kind for his own unsavory reasons.
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October 7, 2013
I read this book in a day as it was so good I could not put it down, it made me feel like I was really there with the characters, I'm hoping to see another book soon and think that this would even be good as a film. I'm definitely going to read it all over again to my daughter ; 0 ) great price too.
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662 reviews15 followers
January 13, 2017
I voluntarily reviewed this book.
This was a great YA Fantasy. I loved the talking bugs and the similarities to Alice in the Wonderland (which I love so much I've read it 10 times). I'm glad a took a chance on this book. It kept me engaged from the first page to the last.
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May 29, 2013
Fantastic story brimming with surprises. Characters are wonderful, couldn't put it down.
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October 4, 2013
What an exiting read, the book starts off a little slow but well worth persevering as young Marcel's life is a whirlwind of ups,downs,twists and turns. I hope there are more to read by this author.
31 reviews
November 1, 2013
Great story! My 12 year old son really enjoyed the characters and will add this classic to his shelf!
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December 13, 2015
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Shows how a person grows, develops and accepts life. Process in book could be child like. A book for junior high age
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