Great book that encourages me to read more Mac Davis thrillers
This is my first Mac Davis thriller and I will certainly be watching for more. The story line was powerful, the characters well defined, the pace was good and the ending done well. Some of the activities described caused people to die, both good and bad people. That’s realistic and I like realistic. When all the good guys live and the bad guys die, it doesn’t ring true to real life. This story does ring true. I did take one star off for editing. I’m not one to usually pick on editing. My brain usually reads past typos and normal editing issues. They simply don’t bother me. However, this book had a number of editing errors that pulled me out of the story and made me reread a sentence to get its meaning. I don’t like that. In addition, the flow is a little choppy. I’m reading along and suddenly I’m reading from a different viewpoint. Again, that’s ok, but there’s no warning. At least add spacing, a chapter break or even a squiggly line. Just give me something to say we’re now reading in a new location from a different character. Overall, though, this is a great thriller and I will be looking for more Mac Davis books.