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Mass Market Paperback
First published January 1, 1952
Apparently she, Jenny, couldn't do him justice in a letter.Over and over. What an unwieldy construction. I wonder if it was something the editor did to make ambiguous pronouns clearer or if the author herself liked that kind of phrasing? But seriously, if the pronoun isn't clear why not just go with the noun? Jenny couldn't do him justice in a letter...Dennis was in uniform too...Charles had returned from the bank... Pretty simple really.
He, Dennis, was in uniform, too, his summer grays.
He, Charles, had returned from the bank and found the family gathered in the living room.