Dove doesn't want to buy the perfume. The sound of its name fills her with fear and the fragrance wraps itself around her heart. But somehow she can't help herself. It's almost as if something - or someone - inside her is forcing her to try it.
And when Dove puts on the perfume, she unleashes a part of herself that has been locked away all her life...the second self that she never knew existed.
Caroline Cooney knew in sixth grade that she wanted to be a writer when "the best teacher I ever had in my life" made writing her main focus. "He used to rip off covers from The New Yorker and pass them around and make us write a short story on whichever cover we got. I started writing then and never stopped!" When her children were young, Caroline started writing books for young people -- with remarkable results. She began to sell stories to Seventeen magazine and soon after began writing books. Suspense novels are her favorites to read and write. "In a suspense novel, you can count on action." To keep her stories realistic, Caroline visits many schools outside of her area, learning more about teenagers all the time. She often organizes what she calls a "plotting game," in which students work together to create plots for stories. Caroline lives in Westbrook, Connecticut and when she's not writing she volunteers at a hospital, plays piano for the school musicals and daydreams! - Scholastic.com
This book is utterly batshit and I LOVE it. It was my favourite Point Horror book when I was 13, and re-reading it at 33 I can see why: I was an overly-dramatic, wordy, moody, Ancient Egypt-obsessed teenager, and this book is all of those things.
Just re-read this for Episode 1 of the Teenage Scream podcast (lovingly dissecting the best and worst of 90s teen horror). Listen here, or subscribe on your podcast app:
Dove couldn’t help but buy a bottle of Venom after seeing an advert for the perfume in a newspaper, but little did she know that it was about to unleash her evil twin. One of the weirder Point Horror’s, but the conflict between the two sides made for a great read. These sort of stories the range does so well.
Where should I start on this? Well I'm going to poke at that cover for having a bottle that looks NOTHING like the one in the book. Now on to the real review: Dove Daniels (What a name) is the main character. She is a 15 yr old goody-goody with some odd phobias. She checks her bed for monsters, she thinks parking lots are the end of the world, and she's just overall pessimistic, which is rather odd for her "sweet and lovely" personality. Anyway, despite her obvious symbolic name, Dove seems to be curious about getting a change in her life. So to be "cool" so to speak, she buys this really foul smelling perfume called VENOM. A no brainer there.
What comes out of this perfume is the supposed "vanished twin" of Dove, WING. Wow. WING. Obviously symbolic but it's a big "DUH" type of symbolism. Nothing deep there.
Long story short (literally), the entire plot (AND I MEAN LITERALLY) is composed of Dove's internal struggle with Wing. Now this would have been a very interesting concept but it was poorly executed. Wing is a character who is honestly so twisted and all over the place that you can't #$%^ing tell what kind of person she really is. At first I sympathized, I thought she was just troubled and angry. But no. The author switches from a "troubled unwanted twin" to a "crazy and demented Egyptian spirit monster thing of some sort who just hates everything" to "really just a dark side of Dove" character.
None of the characters have depth. They are all pretty black and white (minus Hesta who showed in the end she wasn't really EVIL but just a bitch.)
If you want to read this book read it for laughs. The metaphors and similes used are sometimes hilariously corny.
When Dove tries the new perfume, Venom, she unleashes a second personality.
So, this is a pretty bonkers story and really quite enjoyable. I liked how it stands apart from the typical Point Horror mould. Cooney's writing, as always, is excellent and unique with a coldness to it that I find so intriguing. Unfortunately, it does get somewhat repetitive and the ambiguity left me scratching my head as to what on earth actually happened. Definitely worth reading for moments like this: "The creepy tremor came over her again, but on the inside, like something crawling upside down within her skull."
I read this with my book club that I run on Instagram where we revisit Point Horror and other books from our childhood - @talespointhorrorbookclub
Tagline - The sweet smell...of EVIL
Memorable For – A vanished twin!
Blurb -
When Gentle Dove first puts on Venom, a new perfume, she unleashes a part of herself that has been locked away all her life - the second self she never knew existed, and it's evil.
Some Thoughts -
Once upon a time there were parents who told there daughter all about her vanishing twin who disappeared before she was born. One daughter would be Dove cooing with affection, the other would be Wing beating free and flying strong .... and things are about to get very very VERY wild! A new perfume is advertised in the coolest shop in the Mall, Dry Ice! Dove is drawn to it like gravity. It smells like ancient Egypt but after a good old sniff she buys a bottle. And then there were two voices – like a flute and a cello duet. The vanished twin Wing, is ready to unleash her evil on the town and Doves life……
Other highlights include the best use of a fog machine in a store ever, 5am hot air balloon rides, lots of inner thoughts, and some genius dialogue.
I would have hated this as a kid! But as an adult, I enjoyed the writing and the loopy-ness of it all. Yes, Cooney tends to over-write, and her books all seem to be a parable about the individual choosing between good and evil, but this one evoked a sinister atmosphere that hooked me in! Unfortunately, Cooney can't seem to decide what is actually behind the evil perfume and Dove's vanished twin, which lets the story down. And a climax involving an interpretive dance in a mall's water fountain? Hardly exciting!
Wild. Very dramatic, especially for a 90s YA thriller lol. Like, did the perfume make her evil or is she crazy or is she possessed by her dead evil twin, who knows
Another wonderfully insane book from Cooney, I must say the main character Dove is so insipid that a part of me was rooting for Wing to just 'win'. Dove 'I'm nice, I'm good, I'm scared of car parks' developing a second personality, due to what seems like lifelong parental neglect was truly creepy. The bit about going bonkers in mall fountain - brilliant, inspiring. If my local mall had a huge fountain I would be tempted to jump in whilst dancing and screaming at Egyptian gods for shits and giggles thanks to The Perfume. Thank you C.B Cooney! I remember this book having a much better cover image as a teen.
I would say more of a one and a half stars rounded up to two so let me explain why...
From reading the blurb on the back you would just believe that this nice girl named Dove buys a bottle of perfume called Venom and it turns her evil...
This premise seems simple enough but it is a whole lot more complex and completely crackers.
Hear me out...
Dove goes with her friends Connie and Luce to a store in the mall called Dry Ice (like a today's Spencer not a 90s Spencer...I'm old so if you know you know.) The other girls are more interested in buying the perfume than Dove but she ends up being the one to get it...a voice inside calling her to get it.
She goes home to her busy parents and her pastel room but Dove doesn't put the perfume on just yet. Asking for a story about when she was young, Dove learns that she was supposed to be a twin but the other girl named Wing just...split, as her father puts it.
Vanishing Twin Syndrome.
I know it is a real thing but as soon as Dove learns this she then decides to put on the perfume and...after fifteen years, Wing emerges.
Story goes off the rails from there. There's some sort of thread about connecting this to like Ancient Egypt and I have read other Point Horror books that just handle this a little bit better.
Possession...split personality...this is not Cooney at her best.
Just my opinion so feel free to read it and judge for yourself if you haven't. Unless you're curious I would just have a copy to make your collection complete...
The book is too wordy and has many strange turns of phrase. "A cologne of terror invaded Dove's mouth." "Luce drove fiercely, shifting gears like throwing sticks of dynamite." I found it hard to get into the story because of the callow writing although our lead's insane antics did spark my interest midway through the book. Also, the Egyptian motif doesn't mesh that well with the plot.
There are some elements of the book that are either irrational or impracticable. That Dry Ice store is one example. AFAIK prolonged exposure to its fumes in enclosed spaces is dangerous. Another thing: if a store is fogged up inside, it would be a shoplifting magnet.
At least the plot is a refreshing change from most retro horror. The evil "twin" who resides in the subconscious isn't exactly an overused trope. There were also some nice historical tidbits like Cleopatra's suicide through her asp and the Druids' fiery human sacrifices. I low-key enjoyed the evil Wing's pettiness and homicidal bent.
I was scratching my head at the ending. It was so weird and abrupt. Overall, the book is rather tame and bloodless. I'm rating it 3.5/10 or 2 confusing stars out of 5.
I occasionally dive into the pulpy teen horror books my preteen self devoured throughout the 90s, and this one just happened to be my latest pick. And WOW. Is it the worst book ever written? Probably not. Is it painfully, hilariously bad? OH YES. The dialogue sounds like it was written by space aliens who were too lazy to do much research. The plot, insofar as there is one, has the feel of those AI predictive text writings. It is baffling and just... bad. It’s a bad book, guys. Unless you’re very stoned or very drunk and looking for a laugh, I’d say leave this on the shelf.
Also... half the damn book talks about the snake-shaped perfume bottle and y’all couldn’t make the cover match that description? At least make an effort, man...
wow, this was awful :D it gets a 3 star rating and a ":D" because I had great fun reading it aloud in an overdramatic voice, reminiscent of both william shatner and laurence olivier. it irritated my 17 yo even worse than when I read aloud from popco in my cali-hipster voice. (popco review coming shortly)
What you will find in ‘The Perfume’... - An insane story (literally) - Unexpected turns of events - Some scents with secondary effects - An evil twin - Many excursions to the malls - A trip in a hot air balloon
In short, a crazy ‘Point Horror’ book that’s super fun to read!
I’be been re reading with Don’t Point That Horror at Me podcast. Wow this one was crazy! I expect most of them to be bad but I just couldn’t get into this one. My only will to finish it was so I can laugh about it with the podcast!
Some of these books I read as a teenager had such ridiculous premises... That's the only reason I remembered this one. Also, the girl's name was Dove. Like the soap.
I always remembered this as being one of the more 'out-there' Point Horror books and after this re-read can confirm it is. However, I still to this day wish Venom perfume would be released.
I don't think this book crossed generations easily. It definitely felt old, and had very little atmosphere. Honestly even the plot felt a bit outdated. Not a bad time though, thankfully very short.
Although it didn't have quite the same impact as The Cheerleader or Freeze Tag, I must confess I still rather enjoyed Caroline B. Cooney's writing style in The Perfume. Once again her flowery way of writing (mostly) works for the strange story she's spinning here. And thankfully this is a far more enjoyable read than The Return of the Vampire.
There's some really interesting ideas and themes within this book, especially around the sudden mood changes that can inexplicably grip teenagers. Internal conflict and struggling to live up to self-imposed ideals and the allure of the careless. Parental neglect and attempts to break free of friendship groups. It's all incredibly teen angst, but I think Cooney weaves it well throughout this book. Then there's also a healthy dash of absolute ridiculousness, like hot air balloon rides threatening to turn deadly. It's all told with a somewhat poetic prose which mostly works.
But there's also a few elements that don't work. There's an Ancient Egypt narrative thread running throughout this book which feels undercooked, and the conclusion is very abrupt. I think The Perfume is a book which is perhaps more fun to think about and discuss than it is to actually read. The protagonist, Dove, somewhat lacks much of a personality, and her evil counterpart, Wing, is comically one-note. The touching on mental health also raises an eyebrow, but at least Cooney doesn't shy away from taking the story there, unlike most other Point Horror authors. This is ultimately a really mixed bag, but I can't deny I didn't enjoy it once I adjusted to the writing style and the nonsensical plot.
The first few chapters of this book had me sold. I've read a lot of teen horror from this era, so I went in with the understanding that there's nothing especially literary about this sort of book, and that the best I can hope for is a fun, engaging story that's well-structured. However, this surprised me early on by being exceptionally well-written. Cooney imbues the story with an effectively surrealistic, otherworldly feel, which gives the impending horror an unknowable and yet inevitable quality that I think works really well, and is a far cry from the comparative workmanlike prose of someone like R.L. Stine.
However, the problems with this book become readily apparent about a third of the way through. The main would-be conflict is completely muted because the plot never really takes off, and the stakes never feel real. Cooney also spends too much time hinting a mythology that is never explored, and her prose - which early on is such a highlight - eventually becomes tiresome and repetitive because the story its telling is so flat and predictable. The story's resolution is also a major disappointment, as I hoped that at the very least, Cooney would have been able to tie things together in a way that was meaningful and thoughtful enough to make the slog that preceded it feel at least somewhat worthwhile. And despite the fact that I could think of many simple ways in which she could have accomplished this, the book essentially just stops, which is wholly unsatisfying.
I wanted to like this book - the first few chapters are so weird and unlike anything I've read in any other teen thrillers from this era. And the premise is so bonkers with themes that have the potential to be incredibly resonant, that I hoped the book would live up to it. Of course, it doesn't, which is a shame. Granted, I'm not the target audience, but I can't even see kids in middle school having the patience for this one.
Of all the (many, many) teen horror tales I read in middle school and high school, this one has stuck in my memory more than most for some reason. Maybe it's the names "Dove" and "Wing," or the way that the fictional store Dry Ice reminded me of Hot Topic (when it was still scary and not nerdy). Or maybe it's because of the guilty feelings associated with the book: I bought it as a birthday gift for my sister and speed-read the whole thing before I wrapped it and gave it to her. :-/
Anyway, this was another instance of a "comforting" reread from my youth to enjoy during the sleepless pandemic nights. It's no classic, but I did appreciate all the symbolic messaging around teen hormones unearthing the monster within and the moping about the blandness of Dove's home and life. The horror elements were tamer than I remembered--I kind of thought someone actually died?--but the thought of having your mind taken over by an evil twin is scary enough itself.
My edition also included a fun little bio of Caroline B. Cooney (with photos!), which I thoroughly enjoyed, especially now that I know more about the inner workings of the publishing industry. I didn't know (though it makes sense) that several of her book concepts were commissioned by her editor. She really mastered a specific genre of teen writing, and boy did it work for young Hannah!
I would say 3.5 stars. I just don’t know….I liked it, but some things bugged me. I didn’t care for the writing style. It took me longer to read than other books of the same type. I would say it has potential. The main issue is that we don’t find out what Dove’s ailment was. Was it really supernatural, or was Wing part of her imagination, and she is actually schizophrenic? No answer is given. Also, the store Dry Ice? Where did it go? It suddenly disappears, yet no explanation is given on that, either. Finally, although it’s not part of the story per se, but the cover artwork on the edition I read; the perfume bottle shape doesn’t match the story? Others have pointed that out. The artist should’ve actually read the story if they get to design the cover.
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Generally, Point Horror books are always a bit crazy and haven't aged particularly well, but this book is atrociously poor! It tells the story of Dove, who buys some perfume called Venom, which makes her twin who died in the womb come back and take over her body. Absolutely batshit crazy stuff! The twin, Wing, is some sort of evil spirit who continually tries to kill Doves friends. I think this book is supposed to be some sort of commentary on mental health issues but it's just not for me 😕 With the exception of The Surfer, this is hands down the worst PH book I've read so far.
This book actually made me feel a little.. terrified. I've read point horror from a young age back in the late 90s never found any scary just fun lol Now I'm re reading them and some that are new to me. I think it made me feel a little weird because I've felt depersonalisation and derealisation. The idea that you're not yourself and separate from your body. I've felt like I wasn't myself. But then the end of the climax was a slightly funny