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The Soldier of Raetia
Rome, 10BC. Manilus Dardanus, a new soldier from the provinces, applies for a military sponsorship with Cassius Valerian, the general of a small legion patrolling the northern frontier. Idealistic and naive, Dardanus has a lot to learn about the life he has chosen, and at first the brusque and reticent general seems the least willing candidate to teach him; but gradually a bond begins to form between this unlikely pair, one that neither could ever have imagined.
Over the course of a blood-soaked summer in the wild, as Dardanus struggles with coming of age and Valerian wrestles the ghosts of his past, battles and betrayals on every side threaten to end that fragile bond—and possibly their lives.
Over the course of a blood-soaked summer in the wild, as Dardanus struggles with coming of age and Valerian wrestles the ghosts of his past, battles and betrayals on every side threaten to end that fragile bond—and possibly their lives.
348 pages, Paperback
First published July 23, 2009
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June 13, 2018
Hot studs in loincloths and red cloaks. That's what m/m set in Ancient Rome is about, right?
When I look for m/m stories in this time period, I am usually ready to let lots of historical inconsistencies pass, because I expect them to be pretty sexually explicit by nature. And if you're lucky, there's a well developed plot somewhere in there too.
I am saying this lovingly, as I've enjoyed many novels set in Ancient Rome.
*The Soldier of Raetia*, however, is very unique in the m/m niche of Roman historicals.
First of all, it rings absolutely true to the time period. And unlike many Roman m/m novels, it doesn't feel like two contemporary gay guys falling in love wearing togas. It is two men actually living in Ancient Rome, living by Roman rules of society and suffering through their lives as soldiers.
This is the story of Dardanus, a 20 year old Roman citizen who grew up with his procurator father in a Roman province that is nowadays known as Switzerland. His father already has a first born son who will follow in his political footsteps, so Dardanus is sent off to Rome to become the ward of famous General Cassius Valerian - a hardened and unmarried military man without any heirs of his own.
Cassius gives the son of his former friend a pretty cold welcome in his home, having had enough of the many young bootlickers who try to become his heir. To Cassius, Dardanus is just one of many, but the boy quickly earns the General's trust by proving that he isn't an ambitious schemer like is father. Cassius promises to watch over him during the summer.
Living with the general, Dardanus enjoys a full military training in the barracks and makes friends among his squad, some of whom are sons of wealthy Roman nobles like himself, while others are half-breeds who worked themselves up in the military ranks in a way that wouldn't be possible for them in civilian life.
His friends spend their free time whoring and drinking, which isn't what Dardanus is looking for in life. He isn't really sure *what* he wants exactly, as he his a virgin in the true sense of the word, but he knows it is his Roman duty to become a husband and father at some point. His loyalty, his endearing innocence and his readiness to give away his heart way too quickly make him one of my favorite characters in an Ancient Roman setting.
The concept of homosexuality in Ancient Rome is very unusual in comparison with modern gay men, as it was socially acceptable to have sexual relations with persons of any gender, as long as a Roman citizen wasn't the passive partner in the relationship.
Therefore, it was not uncommon that an older man (General Cassius is 40 years old in this story, so he's not *old* in my book, LOL) had a sponsor/protégé or student/teacher relationship that also involved sexual contact. It wasn't as common as it used to be in Greece, but it was definitely a well known and socially accepted concept.
With this in mind, it is fascinating to see how General Cassius' best friend Pertinax (who is happily and straightly married) is enouraging him to finally start a sexual relationship with Dardanus, as it is obvious that the General clearly favors his protégé, but Cassius has no plans to follow that path, his pent-up frustrations even prompting him to treat Dardanus more coldly than necessary.
Dardanus, on the other hand, is unconditionally loyal to his general, but at the same time cannot cope with the brutality of war in the same way as his friends and fellow soldiers.
His coming of age through battle and his accepting his place as a soldier who needs to kill people in a fight is amazing to watch - albeit heartbreaking as well.
General Cassius doesn't want to spoil his ward or single him out in front of his fellow soldiers, so it takes a long time for both guys to actually grow closer, as Dardanus spends most of his time with his squad.
When a gruesome battle against northern invaders turns bad, General Cassius finally drops his reserves and openly cares for his wounded ward.
All in all, this story is a perfect example of well-done character development.
The attraction between these guys is not a simple reaction to good looks or a muscled body. General Cassius is a battle hardened man with scars all over his body, but it is his sharp strategic mind, his fairness towards his subordinates and his fearlessness in battle that fascinate young Dardanus who grew up with wars only existing in books and sword play being a simple part of his education.
His fascination with his general starts out as mere loyalty and the need to look up to somebody who seems bigger than life to a 20 year old youth. It takes some time for Dardanus to realize that the general is in fact only a human being and a man who is deeply torn inside.
Cassius, however, thinks of Dardanus as a boy when he takes him in, only offering him a military education. It takes months of training and gruesome battles for him to see the man Dardanus has become. Dardanus' quick and strategic mind despite his youth proves to Cassius that the boy is more than a handsome distraction that he needs to avoid at all costs in order to keep his integrity as general intact.
The more Dardanus proves himself as a soldier, the more the general becomes protective of him and starts working through his emotions instead of closing himself off.
The story is simply amazing - and probably the ultimate slow-burn romance.
However, if you're expecting a quick "You. Me. Bed. Now" trope as you often find them with stories set in that period, you'll be disappointed, as this story sure does take its time to develop and revolves mostly around the grueling details of warfare and the raunchy camaradery among soldiers.
I enjoyed the silent moments between Cassius and Dardanus very much, even at the beginning. Their dinners together are priceless. There's only so much you can exchange by staring at each other over venison.
And Dardanus fastening the general's breast plate right before battle becomes a truly intimate moment that touched my heart.
I also need to mention the side characters, which are truly outstanding in this story.
In any case, this story is truly outstanding!!
It is one of my top 10 reads in this year and definitely my number one favorite m/m story set in Ancient Rome. Not to mention, it is my main reason to seek more novels set in this period.
It also reminds me strongly of the historical fantasy novels written by Marion Zimmer Bradley (i.e. The Forest House), just without the supernatural aspects, of course. The world-building, the conflict and the plot building are absolutely spot on.
Don't miss out on this gem!!
5 stars!
When I look for m/m stories in this time period, I am usually ready to let lots of historical inconsistencies pass, because I expect them to be pretty sexually explicit by nature. And if you're lucky, there's a well developed plot somewhere in there too.
I am saying this lovingly, as I've enjoyed many novels set in Ancient Rome.
*The Soldier of Raetia*, however, is very unique in the m/m niche of Roman historicals.
First of all, it rings absolutely true to the time period. And unlike many Roman m/m novels, it doesn't feel like two contemporary gay guys falling in love wearing togas. It is two men actually living in Ancient Rome, living by Roman rules of society and suffering through their lives as soldiers.
This is the story of Dardanus, a 20 year old Roman citizen who grew up with his procurator father in a Roman province that is nowadays known as Switzerland. His father already has a first born son who will follow in his political footsteps, so Dardanus is sent off to Rome to become the ward of famous General Cassius Valerian - a hardened and unmarried military man without any heirs of his own.
Cassius gives the son of his former friend a pretty cold welcome in his home, having had enough of the many young bootlickers who try to become his heir. To Cassius, Dardanus is just one of many, but the boy quickly earns the General's trust by proving that he isn't an ambitious schemer like is father. Cassius promises to watch over him during the summer.
Living with the general, Dardanus enjoys a full military training in the barracks and makes friends among his squad, some of whom are sons of wealthy Roman nobles like himself, while others are half-breeds who worked themselves up in the military ranks in a way that wouldn't be possible for them in civilian life.
His friends spend their free time whoring and drinking, which isn't what Dardanus is looking for in life. He isn't really sure *what* he wants exactly, as he his a virgin in the true sense of the word, but he knows it is his Roman duty to become a husband and father at some point. His loyalty, his endearing innocence and his readiness to give away his heart way too quickly make him one of my favorite characters in an Ancient Roman setting.
The concept of homosexuality in Ancient Rome is very unusual in comparison with modern gay men, as it was socially acceptable to have sexual relations with persons of any gender, as long as a Roman citizen wasn't the passive partner in the relationship.
Therefore, it was not uncommon that an older man (General Cassius is 40 years old in this story, so he's not *old* in my book, LOL) had a sponsor/protégé or student/teacher relationship that also involved sexual contact. It wasn't as common as it used to be in Greece, but it was definitely a well known and socially accepted concept.
With this in mind, it is fascinating to see how General Cassius' best friend Pertinax (who is happily and straightly married) is enouraging him to finally start a sexual relationship with Dardanus, as it is obvious that the General clearly favors his protégé, but Cassius has no plans to follow that path, his pent-up frustrations even prompting him to treat Dardanus more coldly than necessary.
Dardanus, on the other hand, is unconditionally loyal to his general, but at the same time cannot cope with the brutality of war in the same way as his friends and fellow soldiers.
His coming of age through battle and his accepting his place as a soldier who needs to kill people in a fight is amazing to watch - albeit heartbreaking as well.
General Cassius doesn't want to spoil his ward or single him out in front of his fellow soldiers, so it takes a long time for both guys to actually grow closer, as Dardanus spends most of his time with his squad.
When a gruesome battle against northern invaders turns bad, General Cassius finally drops his reserves and openly cares for his wounded ward.
All in all, this story is a perfect example of well-done character development.
The attraction between these guys is not a simple reaction to good looks or a muscled body. General Cassius is a battle hardened man with scars all over his body, but it is his sharp strategic mind, his fairness towards his subordinates and his fearlessness in battle that fascinate young Dardanus who grew up with wars only existing in books and sword play being a simple part of his education.
His fascination with his general starts out as mere loyalty and the need to look up to somebody who seems bigger than life to a 20 year old youth. It takes some time for Dardanus to realize that the general is in fact only a human being and a man who is deeply torn inside.
Cassius, however, thinks of Dardanus as a boy when he takes him in, only offering him a military education. It takes months of training and gruesome battles for him to see the man Dardanus has become. Dardanus' quick and strategic mind despite his youth proves to Cassius that the boy is more than a handsome distraction that he needs to avoid at all costs in order to keep his integrity as general intact.
The more Dardanus proves himself as a soldier, the more the general becomes protective of him and starts working through his emotions instead of closing himself off.
The story is simply amazing - and probably the ultimate slow-burn romance.
However, if you're expecting a quick "You. Me. Bed. Now" trope as you often find them with stories set in that period, you'll be disappointed, as this story sure does take its time to develop and revolves mostly around the grueling details of warfare and the raunchy camaradery among soldiers.
I enjoyed the silent moments between Cassius and Dardanus very much, even at the beginning. Their dinners together are priceless. There's only so much you can exchange by staring at each other over venison.
And Dardanus fastening the general's breast plate right before battle becomes a truly intimate moment that touched my heart.
I also need to mention the side characters, which are truly outstanding in this story.
In any case, this story is truly outstanding!!
It is one of my top 10 reads in this year and definitely my number one favorite m/m story set in Ancient Rome. Not to mention, it is my main reason to seek more novels set in this period.
It also reminds me strongly of the historical fantasy novels written by Marion Zimmer Bradley (i.e. The Forest House), just without the supernatural aspects, of course. The world-building, the conflict and the plot building are absolutely spot on.
Don't miss out on this gem!!
5 stars!
June 22, 2018
"I think there's beauty in not knowing how things will end. If we knew our fate, we might try to change it".
Thank you, Martin, for bringing this jewel of a book to my notice.
Can't wait to read the sequel!
Thank you, Martin, for bringing this jewel of a book to my notice.
Can't wait to read the sequel!
January 30, 2012
I finished this book in two days. Am I overly fond of historical fiction; no. Do I pine for Roman tales; not really. Am I keen on war stories; not exactly. Do I appreciate well written, unconventional love stories? You bet. But that doesn’t begin to say why I couldn’t tear myself away from The Soldier of Raetia.
Heather Domin sets a reader right in a Roman landscape, the smells, sounds and sights fleshed out as if I was reading in the houses, at the campsites, on the battlefields. What Domin does for vistas is expounded further in her plot and characters; not a single voice rang untrue and I had to know how the novel ended. I read a sample via Smashwords, then ordered the print version; I was not disappointed in the remainder of the story, nor the presentation of Domin’s work in paperback. Looking forward to more from this author.
Heather Domin sets a reader right in a Roman landscape, the smells, sounds and sights fleshed out as if I was reading in the houses, at the campsites, on the battlefields. What Domin does for vistas is expounded further in her plot and characters; not a single voice rang untrue and I had to know how the novel ended. I read a sample via Smashwords, then ordered the print version; I was not disappointed in the remainder of the story, nor the presentation of Domin’s work in paperback. Looking forward to more from this author.
June 12, 2018
I was always a big fan of Roman history, especially the Roman army and how they managed to build such an empire and especially how to maintain it.
So I read quite a few books about Rome and I didn't need a lot of convincing when this book popped up on Martin's reading list, to follow suit...
And I can definitely say I did not regret it.
The writing and the story reminded me of those beautiful Paul Waters books, who describes Roman everyday life (including gay love interests) like nobody else (well maybe now like Heather Domin).
Add to that a beautiful and very slow burning attraction between Dardanus a young inexperienced soldier and Valerius a famous general of a Roman legion and you get a great story with a historic background and a nice love interest.
However, do not expect a fluffy gay romance, be prepared for a realistic description of life in Roman times, especially in the army and with that knowledge you might enjoy this tremendously. It is probably more a novel about Roman soldiers and everyday life where the main characters are gay, than a gay story about Roman soldiers.
I certainly didn't mind, I enjoyed this a lot and it was hard for me to put the book down, it had me hooked to the end.
Easily 4 stars, maybe even 4.5 and recommended.
So I read quite a few books about Rome and I didn't need a lot of convincing when this book popped up on Martin's reading list, to follow suit...
And I can definitely say I did not regret it.
The writing and the story reminded me of those beautiful Paul Waters books, who describes Roman everyday life (including gay love interests) like nobody else (well maybe now like Heather Domin).
Add to that a beautiful and very slow burning attraction between Dardanus a young inexperienced soldier and Valerius a famous general of a Roman legion and you get a great story with a historic background and a nice love interest.
However, do not expect a fluffy gay romance, be prepared for a realistic description of life in Roman times, especially in the army and with that knowledge you might enjoy this tremendously. It is probably more a novel about Roman soldiers and everyday life where the main characters are gay, than a gay story about Roman soldiers.
I certainly didn't mind, I enjoyed this a lot and it was hard for me to put the book down, it had me hooked to the end.
Easily 4 stars, maybe even 4.5 and recommended.
January 1, 2025
This book was deliciously Roman — everything down from the political scheming and battle tactics to the slow burn of Valerian and Dardanus’ relationship. I’m not usually a fan of slow burn but occasionally a book comes along that briefly changes my mind and this one definitely did. I’m also not a stickler for accurate historical depictions but they’re nice to read and the author clearly put tons of research into this.
TROPES
- Slow burn
- Age gap
- General/soldier relationship
- Protective older MC
TROPES
- Slow burn
- Age gap
- General/soldier relationship
- Protective older MC
August 21, 2013
4.5 -> Nearly everything about this book is nearly perfect: unobtrusive exposition, evocative descriptions of people and places, careful and sparing touches of research, vivid characters, high stakes and the maddeningly slow burn of the relationship between the protags. And now I feel like I've sucked the life out of it with this review, but it is very much alive, very vibrant and moving. This first book promises an awesome series. And it's $3, guys.
June 2, 2018
If you've ever looked for reading material and thought, "I want something like the Eagle of the Ninth, but actually gay", I have a recommendation for you.
July 31, 2012
You all know that I love historical fiction and I read a ton of it. I was very excited about this book as I've read very little historical fiction about Rome even with all of the HF that I read. I was most definitely not disappointed. This is a well researched story about the everyday lives of Roman soldiers. I'd like to point out that I really, really enjoyed the historical note at the end of the book that discussed what the author made up and what research went into the book. I think that in historical fiction books, it's definitely interesting to see what the sources the author looked at while writing the book. I think that it really helps put things into context.
I really liked how vivid the writing was. You really feel like you're witnessing the things that the characters are doing. There is most definitely a good sense of setting, which I felt really helped to pull me into the book. Also, I'm not huge on war books and technically this book covers a war; however, the story itself really covers more of the human story behind the soldiers. The focus is really more on the inside scoop on the things that went on when the soldiers were not fighting. It was a unique perspective and really allowed you to get to know the characters more than you do in a "normal" war story.
I really like the characters in the book. You have a very powerful general, someone who would know of the high life of the highest class of Romans. Then you have the soldiers that come from a variety of backgrounds. I liked that you sort of got a taste of some of the different Roman classes, a very important feature of Roman society.
One thing I will mention is that there is a homosexual relationship between two of the male characters in the book. This should not bother you. Why, you might ask? Homosexual relationships were a completely normal part of Roman life. As the author explains at the end of the book, the Romans thought that the male body was the most beautiful form in the world and thus, if you were a man and you took a male lover, not another thought would be given.
Bottom line: This is a great historical fiction read!
I really liked how vivid the writing was. You really feel like you're witnessing the things that the characters are doing. There is most definitely a good sense of setting, which I felt really helped to pull me into the book. Also, I'm not huge on war books and technically this book covers a war; however, the story itself really covers more of the human story behind the soldiers. The focus is really more on the inside scoop on the things that went on when the soldiers were not fighting. It was a unique perspective and really allowed you to get to know the characters more than you do in a "normal" war story.
I really like the characters in the book. You have a very powerful general, someone who would know of the high life of the highest class of Romans. Then you have the soldiers that come from a variety of backgrounds. I liked that you sort of got a taste of some of the different Roman classes, a very important feature of Roman society.
One thing I will mention is that there is a homosexual relationship between two of the male characters in the book. This should not bother you. Why, you might ask? Homosexual relationships were a completely normal part of Roman life. As the author explains at the end of the book, the Romans thought that the male body was the most beautiful form in the world and thus, if you were a man and you took a male lover, not another thought would be given.
Bottom line: This is a great historical fiction read!
October 24, 2023
This was basically a Bildungsroman. The strong points were sympathetic characters and excellent character development. A young man, Dardanus, enlists in the Roman Army, 10BC, and is posted to Raetia [parts of modern-day Germany; Liechtenstein; Switzerland; Austria]. We are given a detailed depiction of his "basic training", of members of his contubernium [i.e., tentmates/messmates] and General [The equivalent term probably would have been Legate] Valerian of the Legion, his sponsor and mentor. Dardanus bonds with them all, including a deeper bond with the General. There are vivid battle scenes, heroism, and treachery. Some parts of the story are poignant. Though simple, the language seemed very modern, but there was no swearing--a good thing, in my view.
In the author's historical note, she gave a skeleton history of that historical period. She separated fact from her fictions for the novel and told us why she invented what she did. I loved her descriptions of nature and of the characters. I could visualize each person and felt that I was standing right in the middle of the action all through. This was an easy read of only a few hours. As this is the first novel in a projected series, I certainly would like to read any further adventures [and will reread this novel.]
In the author's historical note, she gave a skeleton history of that historical period. She separated fact from her fictions for the novel and told us why she invented what she did. I loved her descriptions of nature and of the characters. I could visualize each person and felt that I was standing right in the middle of the action all through. This was an easy read of only a few hours. As this is the first novel in a projected series, I certainly would like to read any further adventures [and will reread this novel.]
January 12, 2021
*2021 reread*
I read this book almost 10 (ten!) years ago and was blown away at that time, and it holds up. Rather than being a good M/M book, it's just a good book. It's not heavy on plot, more a slice of life period piece set in Roman times and following a group of young legionaries and a legendary general. The romance is between a green soldier and his sponsor (who is also his general) and it is a very slow burn, very restrained kind of romance. What I enjoyed most was the vividness of the world Domin writes about. Blame on one too many History Channel shows, but it was so easy to picture. I cannot, for the life of me, understand why I didn't hop on the sequel the first time around.
I read this book almost 10 (ten!) years ago and was blown away at that time, and it holds up. Rather than being a good M/M book, it's just a good book. It's not heavy on plot, more a slice of life period piece set in Roman times and following a group of young legionaries and a legendary general. The romance is between a green soldier and his sponsor (who is also his general) and it is a very slow burn, very restrained kind of romance. What I enjoyed most was the vividness of the world Domin writes about. Blame on one too many History Channel shows, but it was so easy to picture. I cannot, for the life of me, understand why I didn't hop on the sequel the first time around.
May 27, 2011
Have you ever read a book which you kept coming back to no matter how many books you have read after, and wanted to read and reread and savor every word and reread again? Have you ever read a book where you wonder how the writer could transport you to another time so flawlessly and make you want to get to know the characters in person because they felt so amazingly real? I am sure we all have such books which we can gush about endlessly, and this is one of those books for me.
This is a historical fiction novel with the touch of m/m romance of the kind which I personally do not see nearly enough in the genre, and of the kind which I crave the most. I have read historicals which, as far as I am concerned, really should not classify as such since the settings were badly researched and/or the characters were contemporary-minded (just placed elsewhere in time). Recently, however, I have read several historicals in a row where the settings were well-researched and the characters felt for me…well, let’s just say I felt as if I was reading about aliens from space, so unrelatable the characters felt in the best possible way. And this prompted another reread of this book, where I could not help but hold my breath so badly I wanted my beloved characters to succeed against all odds, survive, and find all the things they are looking for in life.
These characters did not feel as if they have contemporary mentality and were just dressed in Roman costumes. Quite the contrary, in fact. One of the most likeable characters in this story wants to buy his mother ten slaves when he becomes a successful soldier, and no, there is absolutely no chance I could like somebody from my own time wanting to do that. But this author seems to remember that there are at least some character traits that a lot of people could relate to no matter which time we live in, and good guys in this book, while not running to free their slaves or do other anachronistic things, seem to have those traits in abundance — traits like honor, patriotism, courage, and willingness to help their comrades on the battle field.
This is a story which, as blurb tells us, takes place in Rome and one of its provinces. As I said above, this is first and foremost historical fiction about the life in the army of Rome at the time of its glory as much if not more than a m/m romance. The love story between Valerius and Dardanus is definitely there, but it takes a back seat to the rest of the story. This is also a coming of age story for Dardanus, who comes to the home of General Cassius Valerian because his father wants Valerius to take Dardanus under his wing as his ward and maybe later heir.
All of the characters in this book are very well fleshed out, and it was a joy to read about Valerius very reluctantly deciding to be Dardanus’ sponsor for the summer when he starts his military training and slowly, oh so very slowly, coming to realization that he may actually be attracted to young man. Dardanus was so lovely, a twenty-year-old who dreamt about being a soldier and who is blossoming into a real soldier who fights for Rome, and whose admiration of Valerian turns into love. His friends Iocundus, Ellerius, Iallis and couple others were delightful characters as well.
We get treated to very detailed descriptions of Roman army training and battles, but for me it was never boring; in fact, it was so very vivid that I found the pictures the writer painted with words. I was so engrossed, it truly felt as if I was there among the soldiers and was observing the battle field.
My only niggle with the book was the fate of the villain and the villain itself. The villain felt to me more pitiful than villainous, although I totally understand how soldiers of Rome would have felt very differently and had no pity. At the same time, while my little contemporary heart liked how the villain was dealt with, and I do get the explanation of how it would have made sense, it did feel to me a little anachronistic.
Please be warned, there is one m/f sex scene on page, which, while completely making sense in historical context, may turn some readers off.
Highly recommended.
Originally posted at jessewave reviews (my nick is Sirius there)
This is a historical fiction novel with the touch of m/m romance of the kind which I personally do not see nearly enough in the genre, and of the kind which I crave the most. I have read historicals which, as far as I am concerned, really should not classify as such since the settings were badly researched and/or the characters were contemporary-minded (just placed elsewhere in time). Recently, however, I have read several historicals in a row where the settings were well-researched and the characters felt for me…well, let’s just say I felt as if I was reading about aliens from space, so unrelatable the characters felt in the best possible way. And this prompted another reread of this book, where I could not help but hold my breath so badly I wanted my beloved characters to succeed against all odds, survive, and find all the things they are looking for in life.
These characters did not feel as if they have contemporary mentality and were just dressed in Roman costumes. Quite the contrary, in fact. One of the most likeable characters in this story wants to buy his mother ten slaves when he becomes a successful soldier, and no, there is absolutely no chance I could like somebody from my own time wanting to do that. But this author seems to remember that there are at least some character traits that a lot of people could relate to no matter which time we live in, and good guys in this book, while not running to free their slaves or do other anachronistic things, seem to have those traits in abundance — traits like honor, patriotism, courage, and willingness to help their comrades on the battle field.
This is a story which, as blurb tells us, takes place in Rome and one of its provinces. As I said above, this is first and foremost historical fiction about the life in the army of Rome at the time of its glory as much if not more than a m/m romance. The love story between Valerius and Dardanus is definitely there, but it takes a back seat to the rest of the story. This is also a coming of age story for Dardanus, who comes to the home of General Cassius Valerian because his father wants Valerius to take Dardanus under his wing as his ward and maybe later heir.
All of the characters in this book are very well fleshed out, and it was a joy to read about Valerius very reluctantly deciding to be Dardanus’ sponsor for the summer when he starts his military training and slowly, oh so very slowly, coming to realization that he may actually be attracted to young man. Dardanus was so lovely, a twenty-year-old who dreamt about being a soldier and who is blossoming into a real soldier who fights for Rome, and whose admiration of Valerian turns into love. His friends Iocundus, Ellerius, Iallis and couple others were delightful characters as well.
We get treated to very detailed descriptions of Roman army training and battles, but for me it was never boring; in fact, it was so very vivid that I found the pictures the writer painted with words. I was so engrossed, it truly felt as if I was there among the soldiers and was observing the battle field.
My only niggle with the book was the fate of the villain and the villain itself. The villain felt to me more pitiful than villainous, although I totally understand how soldiers of Rome would have felt very differently and had no pity. At the same time, while my little contemporary heart liked how the villain was dealt with, and I do get the explanation of how it would have made sense, it did feel to me a little anachronistic.
Please be warned, there is one m/f sex scene on page, which, while completely making sense in historical context, may turn some readers off.
Highly recommended.
Originally posted at jessewave reviews (my nick is Sirius there)
did-not-finish
September 13, 2022DNF @ 47%. No rating.
If anybody is looking for fantastic historical fiction that makes Ancient Rome come alive through every word, look no further. Unfortunately, the dynamic between the MCs made me uncomfortable (due to their age gap) and in addition, I wouldn't classify this as historical romance since the romance wasn't the focus.
I knew going into this that I might not like it because age gaps aren't my thing and that was definitely one of my issues here. Dardanus is 20 years old while the General is 40, but the ages weren't my main problem. Dardanus was an okay character, but he's painfully young and naïve. Not in an annoying way but this story isn't just his love story but it's his coming-of-age story. While the latter was very well done, it gave his dynamic with the General very strong father-son vibes. Dardanus hero-worships him and looks up to him as a role model and father figure while the General feels protective over the young boy and assumes a fatherly role with him, despite not really wanting to. There was zero sexual chemistry between them and the thought that they would eventually have a sexual relationship made me uncomfortable. By the halfway mark, the author started having the characters express very faint sexual feelings towards each other and having the General emphasize how he's not acting fatherly towards Dardanus but it still didn't change the very strong father-son vibes and that meant any future sexual relationship between them is a no-thanks from me.
But my feelings about the romance don't really matter anyway because I wouldn't classify this as a romance in the first place. By the halfway mark, the MCs have only had a handful of scenes together with most of their interactions being with side characters. The focus of the story is Dardanus' coming-of-age story of how he goes from naïve, quiet recruit to a career soldier. In terms of historical fiction, I think this is a fantastic example and would probably be interesting for people who enjoy reading about this time period. But it wasn't what I was looking for.
If anybody is looking for fantastic historical fiction that makes Ancient Rome come alive through every word, look no further. Unfortunately, the dynamic between the MCs made me uncomfortable (due to their age gap) and in addition, I wouldn't classify this as historical romance since the romance wasn't the focus.
I knew going into this that I might not like it because age gaps aren't my thing and that was definitely one of my issues here. Dardanus is 20 years old while the General is 40, but the ages weren't my main problem. Dardanus was an okay character, but he's painfully young and naïve. Not in an annoying way but this story isn't just his love story but it's his coming-of-age story. While the latter was very well done, it gave his dynamic with the General very strong father-son vibes. Dardanus hero-worships him and looks up to him as a role model and father figure while the General feels protective over the young boy and assumes a fatherly role with him, despite not really wanting to. There was zero sexual chemistry between them and the thought that they would eventually have a sexual relationship made me uncomfortable. By the halfway mark, the author started having the characters express very faint sexual feelings towards each other and having the General emphasize how he's not acting fatherly towards Dardanus but it still didn't change the very strong father-son vibes and that meant any future sexual relationship between them is a no-thanks from me.
But my feelings about the romance don't really matter anyway because I wouldn't classify this as a romance in the first place. By the halfway mark, the MCs have only had a handful of scenes together with most of their interactions being with side characters. The focus of the story is Dardanus' coming-of-age story of how he goes from naïve, quiet recruit to a career soldier. In terms of historical fiction, I think this is a fantastic example and would probably be interesting for people who enjoy reading about this time period. But it wasn't what I was looking for.
April 3, 2013
During the reign of Caesar Augustus, Manlius Dardanus joins the legion at age 20. He is a shy, hesitant young man, unsure of his abilities and uncertain if he will fit in.
Domin skillfully makes the reader experience the training, and the emotions, of Dardanus and his new friends as they learn what it means to be a legionary. They bond as brothers in military service and in combat.
Dardanus is the youth in all of us, wherever we begin in life, hoping we can make someone proud, hoping we can find acceptance, hoping we can find our place. We are with him, as he is torn with inner conflict, as after his first battle he finds he does not relish the bloodletting performed by his brothers-in-arms.
Yet, Domin does not take her protagonist in what might be an easier route--Dardanus does not flee from duty or service in the legion. He remains true to his oath, and saves the life of his immediate superior, and that of his general. Eventually, he finds he truly has a place, one he earned through loyalty, intelligence, honesty and commitment.
What makes this book stand out is that it is not simply a "legion story" as many are. The scenes of fighting are well-written, not simply in the tactics or swordplay, but in the sights, sounds, and smells of battle. But more than all that, The Soldier of Raetia is a story of how the characters deal with each other, in trust, in honor, in ambition and in survival.
Well written and highly recommended.
Domin skillfully makes the reader experience the training, and the emotions, of Dardanus and his new friends as they learn what it means to be a legionary. They bond as brothers in military service and in combat.
Dardanus is the youth in all of us, wherever we begin in life, hoping we can make someone proud, hoping we can find acceptance, hoping we can find our place. We are with him, as he is torn with inner conflict, as after his first battle he finds he does not relish the bloodletting performed by his brothers-in-arms.
Yet, Domin does not take her protagonist in what might be an easier route--Dardanus does not flee from duty or service in the legion. He remains true to his oath, and saves the life of his immediate superior, and that of his general. Eventually, he finds he truly has a place, one he earned through loyalty, intelligence, honesty and commitment.
What makes this book stand out is that it is not simply a "legion story" as many are. The scenes of fighting are well-written, not simply in the tactics or swordplay, but in the sights, sounds, and smells of battle. But more than all that, The Soldier of Raetia is a story of how the characters deal with each other, in trust, in honor, in ambition and in survival.
Well written and highly recommended.
August 17, 2009
I love this book. Since I bought it nearly 2 years ago, I think I've read it at least 4-5 times...it's one of my 'go to' books when I don't have a library book at hand. The descriptions are so rich and the amount of research Domin put into this book is astounding. Dardanus and Valerian are two of my favorite fictional characters.
April 20, 2010
What a treat...I thoroughly enjoyed this book! Heather is a terrific writer, and her highly descriptive battle scenes made me feel as if I were in the phalanx. I was a bit surprised at the detailed sex scenes, but they weren't jarring--they were in line with the overall keen eye and detailed writing throughout the book.
I'm eager to read the sequel!
I'm eager to read the sequel!
February 1, 2016
A bildungsroman set in Roman times, The Soldier of Raetia has adventure, military action, intrigue and romance amid rich historical detail. What more can you want? I’m looking forward to the next book in the series. Highly recommended.
November 15, 2014
3.5 stars but leaning towards 4. For my review please see my blog:
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April 2, 2011
In the Augustan period, a young man comes of age and learns the ways of Roman military life, in Heather Domin’s The Soldier of Raetia. At twenty years old, Manilus Dardanus has come to Rome, guided by his father’s intentions. He seeks the patronage of the illustrious general Marcus Cassius Valerian, who commands Augustus Caesar twenty-fourth legion. General Valerian, hardened by battle and tragedies of the past, at first assumes that Dardanus is like the sons of so many sycophants who have sought his favor. Despite his own misgivings, Valerian helps mold Dardanus into a warrior and re-discovers deeply buried emotions within himself. Dardanus grows and changes as well, from a reticent young man at the whim of others’ designs to become someone who chooses his own destiny. A confrontation with Germanic barbarians is his first test of all Valerian’s training. Dardanus learns to be a staunch friend, a dedicated soldier and a valiant protector of his general.
I find Roman military history and the Augustan period extremely fascinating. Ms. Domin gives the sense of a Roman legion as a unit, truly fighting as one. With myriad details of training, camp life and fighting scenes, her work blossoms as an example of an authentic historical. Ms. Domin has a skill for painting worlds where visuals unfold on the page as if the reader is standing right there within a scene. What I enjoyed the most must be the characters, even more so than the descriptions of Roman legionary life. Dardanus and Valerian are the heroes of this story, but equally evident is the bond each has formed with his comrades. Valerian treats his tribunes, particularly Pertinax, his doctor Salvio, even his slave Tacitus with respect and tolerance, even when they overstep their bounds. His love for Dardanus is unlike anything he has ever experienced. It leaves him unprepared for the magnitude of his feelings. Dardanus finds his purpose as part of the whole and makes what seem to be friendships with his units, particularly Iocundus and Elerius. Those connections make this a strong, emotional piece of writing. The companionship between brothers forged by adversity and endurance, in tests of arms and by the spilling of blood had me cheering every victory. The relationships were just as believable as Ms. Domin’s descriptions.
Two concerns I did have were about the portrayal of Dardanus and his fellow soldier Elerius. There was personal and professional risk to Dardanus throughout the story, and he warred against himself with every decision. Still, I felt he did have any significant adversity to overcome. Living beyond the last battle provided him courage and made him a man. Keeping his wits about him in his interactions with Valerian brought out an inner strength he never knew he possessed. It would have been interesting to see him thrown into a situation where other emotions bubbled to the surface, instead of his usual acceptance and sometimes, resignation. Without spoiling anything for other readers, I also found Elerius’ grasping nature and the consequences of it predictable. For me, he was a less nuanced character and compelling character than the others Ms. Domin brought to life so vividly. While some of his actions are villainous, he does not come across as anything more than misguided and ambitious, yet not dangerously so. Still, I hope Ms. Domin may revisit his final fate in the future. She has told me there is a sequel to The Soldier of Raetia and I look forward to reading it.
I find Roman military history and the Augustan period extremely fascinating. Ms. Domin gives the sense of a Roman legion as a unit, truly fighting as one. With myriad details of training, camp life and fighting scenes, her work blossoms as an example of an authentic historical. Ms. Domin has a skill for painting worlds where visuals unfold on the page as if the reader is standing right there within a scene. What I enjoyed the most must be the characters, even more so than the descriptions of Roman legionary life. Dardanus and Valerian are the heroes of this story, but equally evident is the bond each has formed with his comrades. Valerian treats his tribunes, particularly Pertinax, his doctor Salvio, even his slave Tacitus with respect and tolerance, even when they overstep their bounds. His love for Dardanus is unlike anything he has ever experienced. It leaves him unprepared for the magnitude of his feelings. Dardanus finds his purpose as part of the whole and makes what seem to be friendships with his units, particularly Iocundus and Elerius. Those connections make this a strong, emotional piece of writing. The companionship between brothers forged by adversity and endurance, in tests of arms and by the spilling of blood had me cheering every victory. The relationships were just as believable as Ms. Domin’s descriptions.
Two concerns I did have were about the portrayal of Dardanus and his fellow soldier Elerius. There was personal and professional risk to Dardanus throughout the story, and he warred against himself with every decision. Still, I felt he did have any significant adversity to overcome. Living beyond the last battle provided him courage and made him a man. Keeping his wits about him in his interactions with Valerian brought out an inner strength he never knew he possessed. It would have been interesting to see him thrown into a situation where other emotions bubbled to the surface, instead of his usual acceptance and sometimes, resignation. Without spoiling anything for other readers, I also found Elerius’ grasping nature and the consequences of it predictable. For me, he was a less nuanced character and compelling character than the others Ms. Domin brought to life so vividly. While some of his actions are villainous, he does not come across as anything more than misguided and ambitious, yet not dangerously so. Still, I hope Ms. Domin may revisit his final fate in the future. She has told me there is a sequel to The Soldier of Raetia and I look forward to reading it.
January 16, 2012
Much better than I was expecting, although not quite as good as it could have been. Same-sex romance in the Ancient Roman military is more or less guaranteed to interest me, and I was honestly surprised by how well-researched the thing was -- I have only a few accuracy-related quibbles, and for me this is rare. (Mostly I would have liked to have seen more explicit stigmatization of relationships within the chain of command, cf. M. Laetorius Mergus as well as Trebonius aka Plotinus aka the "Marian soldier.") But this will probably not bother anyone else and I'm willing to put it down to authorial leeway.
The actual book is about the growing relationship between a general, Valerian, and his aide (and possible adoptee and possible broad-striped tribune) Dardanus, set against the backdrop of scheming revolting tribes in Raetia in the time of Augustus. There's alternating POV, and in addition to the Will They Get Together plot you also get Can Valerian Learn To Love Again and Let's Watch Dardanus Grow Up And Experience The Horrors Of War. (And I am a sucker for Roman military fiction, especially ones hitting the group camaraderie aspect, as this does rather well. It makes me want to reread Frontier Wolf, actually.)
There's a whole lot of drama and injury and more drama and more injury, and also some prostitutes, and I found the entire plot actually rather entertaining to read, which I guess is a good thing, right? I also really enjoyed most of the characters, even the villain, though my particular favorite of the secondary characters was Iocundis the optio. (I like optiones. I especially like it when the second-in-command is named a happy thing. It reminds me of Frontier Wolf.) And, yes, the Valerian/Dardanus relationship is certainly compelling; the one thing that makes it a little less so is that Valerian's insistence on not succumbing to his feelings means that he occasionally comes across as a little uninteresting to read on account of the bit where he doesn't show his feelings.
Overall, I'd definitely recommend this -- I have recommended it to a bunch of my friends already -- and I find myself looking forward to the sequel. Definitely checking out the author's other work as well.
The actual book is about the growing relationship between a general, Valerian, and his aide (and possible adoptee and possible broad-striped tribune) Dardanus, set against the backdrop of scheming revolting tribes in Raetia in the time of Augustus. There's alternating POV, and in addition to the Will They Get Together plot you also get Can Valerian Learn To Love Again and Let's Watch Dardanus Grow Up And Experience The Horrors Of War. (And I am a sucker for Roman military fiction, especially ones hitting the group camaraderie aspect, as this does rather well. It makes me want to reread Frontier Wolf, actually.)
There's a whole lot of drama and injury and more drama and more injury, and also some prostitutes, and I found the entire plot actually rather entertaining to read, which I guess is a good thing, right? I also really enjoyed most of the characters, even the villain, though my particular favorite of the secondary characters was Iocundis the optio. (I like optiones. I especially like it when the second-in-command is named a happy thing. It reminds me of Frontier Wolf.) And, yes, the Valerian/Dardanus relationship is certainly compelling; the one thing that makes it a little less so is that Valerian's insistence on not succumbing to his feelings means that he occasionally comes across as a little uninteresting to read on account of the bit where he doesn't show his feelings.
Overall, I'd definitely recommend this -- I have recommended it to a bunch of my friends already -- and I find myself looking forward to the sequel. Definitely checking out the author's other work as well.
May 11, 2017
Except for the fact that Augustus Caesar preferred Raetian wine to any other, I knew close to nothing about the region and the system for dislocation of auxiliary troops in Raetia. ..
Heather Domin has done an impressive work with this book - the factual information about that place at the time is so well incorporated in the fiction , that at some point I found myself looking at maps, reading about legion formations and articles describing hierarchy of the Roman Empire.
Despite how little is known about the religious practices of Raetia,the author has used that scarce information so thoughtfully, that the picture of spiritual life in the book does not feel even for a second incomplete.
And besides all the things I learned about SPQR, I was introduced to two very intricate characters.
I wanted to know more about Valerian- the man behind the titles and military honors, and Dardanus - the young soldier, constantly inspired by his readings of Homer's works . Yes, the reference to Achilles is there, with a twist.
The action though is not driven by their relationship and throughout half the book a possible affair between them seems like a very improper thought.
I like how different those two are. The age difference between Valerian and Dardanus was serving the purpose of creating a bigger contrast between them in terms of experience and status , and at the same time it was to some extent the reason for their feelings about each other.
The first books builds a very solid foundation for development of Dardanus' character, and I really hope to see him as a strategist rather than a field legionnaire in the next book.
As fоr Valerian- the general begins to look more and more human to me as the story unfolds and i really want to know how much of his character will be revealed.
Heather Domin has done an impressive work with this book - the factual information about that place at the time is so well incorporated in the fiction , that at some point I found myself looking at maps, reading about legion formations and articles describing hierarchy of the Roman Empire.
Despite how little is known about the religious practices of Raetia,the author has used that scarce information so thoughtfully, that the picture of spiritual life in the book does not feel even for a second incomplete.
And besides all the things I learned about SPQR, I was introduced to two very intricate characters.
I wanted to know more about Valerian- the man behind the titles and military honors, and Dardanus - the young soldier, constantly inspired by his readings of Homer's works . Yes, the reference to Achilles is there, with a twist.
The action though is not driven by their relationship and throughout half the book a possible affair between them seems like a very improper thought.
I like how different those two are. The age difference between Valerian and Dardanus was serving the purpose of creating a bigger contrast between them in terms of experience and status , and at the same time it was to some extent the reason for their feelings about each other.
The first books builds a very solid foundation for development of Dardanus' character, and I really hope to see him as a strategist rather than a field legionnaire in the next book.
As fоr Valerian- the general begins to look more and more human to me as the story unfolds and i really want to know how much of his character will be revealed.
June 28, 2011
A nice story of a young man seeking his place in the Roman society and military.
To the contrary of some reviews, the book is quite concise and well written, though it starts slow. So don’t get fooled by the first chapters, they are just drawing up the setting for the rest of the book. The third part of the book is fast paced and entertaining, and it is quite sparse with sex scenes. The dialogue is slight a mixture of modern and ancient, but I believe it is understandable and even desired to ensure reading pleasure.
A recommended read for historical romance fiction.
A technical side note: I postponed the buying of this book for a long time, due to fact that I could not find it in DRM-free EPUB-format. In the end I had to buy it as a PDF file (a bargain at www.lulu.com). Even though the GoodReader application on iPad does an excellent job of displaying PDF files, the reading pleasure would have been better had I read it with my usual epub reader.
To the contrary of some reviews, the book is quite concise and well written, though it starts slow. So don’t get fooled by the first chapters, they are just drawing up the setting for the rest of the book. The third part of the book is fast paced and entertaining, and it is quite sparse with sex scenes. The dialogue is slight a mixture of modern and ancient, but I believe it is understandable and even desired to ensure reading pleasure.
A recommended read for historical romance fiction.
A technical side note: I postponed the buying of this book for a long time, due to fact that I could not find it in DRM-free EPUB-format. In the end I had to buy it as a PDF file (a bargain at www.lulu.com). Even though the GoodReader application on iPad does an excellent job of displaying PDF files, the reading pleasure would have been better had I read it with my usual epub reader.
August 20, 2018
Heather Domin’s The Soldier of Raetia is, by the author’s admission, not entirely accurate in its historical details, but the liberties she takes weren’t obvious to a plebe such as myself, and there were no misplaced anachronisms that would have led me to believe the story was fiction rather than fact. I believe a reader would have to be a scholar of, or at least have a more than passing interest in, this time period in order to pick out the historical accuracy from the author’s imagination, and I admit that reader is not me. While I do have an appreciation for Rome’s past and her influence on our modern civilization as well as her dominance on the world stage before the fall, I enjoyed reading this novel because the author has an engaging voice and tells a compelling story that passes for realism in a believable way.
Under the rule of Augustus Caesar, Rome’s reach was vast and its military skill and might was unparalleled. Domin focuses on these points—the training, commitment, precision, the coordination and ferocity— and does an impressive job of conveying how awesome a sight those legions were on the battlefield, how intimidating and dominant, without bogging down the narrative in arbitrary minutiae. But one of the things I truly loved was the way the author used dialogue to tell this story. Intelligent characters and smart dialogue worked together with the story progression to reinforce my deep appreciation for it.
The romantic elements in The Soldier of Raetia complement the setting, so if you do decide to give this novel a read, fair warning not to go into it expecting a soft and tender love story. While Dardanus is young and does tend to wear his heart on his sleeve, perhaps even hero worships just a bit, Valerian is the consummate Roman General. He is older, battle hardened, life weary and has suffered a loss in his past that has made him wary of allowing himself to feel a deep emotional connection—apart from the care of his soldiers—to anyone again. Much of this novel takes place in the leadup to a confrontation after the grisly massacre of a patrol party for which Valerian is determined to exact vengeance for the purpose of teaching the aggressors a lesson about the dangers of attacking Rome, so the feelings that he begins to develop for Dardanus set against this backdrop, feelings that he is determined to tamp down and deny, creates a slow burn amongst the politics and military power play, which I loved the juxtaposition of.
This period in history was no stranger to male lovers, although there was a nuance and definition to those relationships. Some men married for love, some to further their lineage, and some continued to carry on affairs with their male lovers after marriage, so it’s not surprising that the relationship in this novel evolves and is also encouraged by the brothers-in-arms who want to see Dardanus and Valerian give to each what the other needs. The longing Valerian and Dar feel for each other, and Valerian’s efforts to discourage those feelings while Dardanus tries not to make it obvious that he’s fallen for his sponsor and general, gives the story some emotional heft. There are mitigating factors involved, not the least of which is their twenty-year age difference and the fact Dar’s father hopes that Valerian will adopt Dardanus as his heir—this was a customary practice for younger sons and is how Augustus became his great-uncle Julius Caesar’s heir and successor. That their relationship evolves for Valerian in a way that made him realize what he would be losing at the point he nearly lost it is believable. The battlefield is not the place to regret missed opportunity. When Valerian is able, finally, to admit Dardanus is more to him that just a soldier in his legion, the emotional payoff is worth the wait.
I bought this book because of a 2 star review of it on Amazon. To be fair, the reviewer seemed to like it up to the point that the storyline took its romantic turn, so it’s not like there was a lot of risk involved for me, but it just goes to show how arbitrary those star ratings can be. In the end, I liked The Soldier of Raetia so much because of the way the romantic elements played out against the brutality of war and the fragile thread that separates life from death. The bonus is that Domin’s writing is engaging and so easy to sink into. The near-deadly event and then ultimate betrayal that moves the story forward for Dardanus and Valerian hit point-blank as it was meant to. The brothers in arms who featured most prominently added to the story with charm, personality and a fierce loyalty to Rome, their brethren and their general.
Reviewed by Lisa for The Novel Approach
Under the rule of Augustus Caesar, Rome’s reach was vast and its military skill and might was unparalleled. Domin focuses on these points—the training, commitment, precision, the coordination and ferocity— and does an impressive job of conveying how awesome a sight those legions were on the battlefield, how intimidating and dominant, without bogging down the narrative in arbitrary minutiae. But one of the things I truly loved was the way the author used dialogue to tell this story. Intelligent characters and smart dialogue worked together with the story progression to reinforce my deep appreciation for it.
The romantic elements in The Soldier of Raetia complement the setting, so if you do decide to give this novel a read, fair warning not to go into it expecting a soft and tender love story. While Dardanus is young and does tend to wear his heart on his sleeve, perhaps even hero worships just a bit, Valerian is the consummate Roman General. He is older, battle hardened, life weary and has suffered a loss in his past that has made him wary of allowing himself to feel a deep emotional connection—apart from the care of his soldiers—to anyone again. Much of this novel takes place in the leadup to a confrontation after the grisly massacre of a patrol party for which Valerian is determined to exact vengeance for the purpose of teaching the aggressors a lesson about the dangers of attacking Rome, so the feelings that he begins to develop for Dardanus set against this backdrop, feelings that he is determined to tamp down and deny, creates a slow burn amongst the politics and military power play, which I loved the juxtaposition of.
This period in history was no stranger to male lovers, although there was a nuance and definition to those relationships. Some men married for love, some to further their lineage, and some continued to carry on affairs with their male lovers after marriage, so it’s not surprising that the relationship in this novel evolves and is also encouraged by the brothers-in-arms who want to see Dardanus and Valerian give to each what the other needs. The longing Valerian and Dar feel for each other, and Valerian’s efforts to discourage those feelings while Dardanus tries not to make it obvious that he’s fallen for his sponsor and general, gives the story some emotional heft. There are mitigating factors involved, not the least of which is their twenty-year age difference and the fact Dar’s father hopes that Valerian will adopt Dardanus as his heir—this was a customary practice for younger sons and is how Augustus became his great-uncle Julius Caesar’s heir and successor. That their relationship evolves for Valerian in a way that made him realize what he would be losing at the point he nearly lost it is believable. The battlefield is not the place to regret missed opportunity. When Valerian is able, finally, to admit Dardanus is more to him that just a soldier in his legion, the emotional payoff is worth the wait.
I bought this book because of a 2 star review of it on Amazon. To be fair, the reviewer seemed to like it up to the point that the storyline took its romantic turn, so it’s not like there was a lot of risk involved for me, but it just goes to show how arbitrary those star ratings can be. In the end, I liked The Soldier of Raetia so much because of the way the romantic elements played out against the brutality of war and the fragile thread that separates life from death. The bonus is that Domin’s writing is engaging and so easy to sink into. The near-deadly event and then ultimate betrayal that moves the story forward for Dardanus and Valerian hit point-blank as it was meant to. The brothers in arms who featured most prominently added to the story with charm, personality and a fierce loyalty to Rome, their brethren and their general.
Reviewed by Lisa for The Novel Approach
January 8, 2023
Really enjoyed this. Domin draws a vivid picture of the life of a soldier in the legions of Rome under Augustus, combining well researched historical fiction with an equally well crafted slowly developing romance. Now, 'scuse me while I run off to get book #2...
May 24, 2011
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Although my specialty is Canadian history, I have a great appreciation for all history, and I certainly bow to Heather Domin’s knowledge of Augustinian Rome, as demonstrated in “The Soldier of Raetia: Valarian’s Legion.
I also like her writing style. She provides just the right amount of description to make both characters and settings vivid without slowing the pace. The characters are also well developed and distinctive although I did find Elurius and Pertinax somewhat similar in nature. Thi applies to their respective relationships with Dardanus and Valerian, as well. The author has also made very good use of dialogue (very credible), without being contrived. What I liked most, however was that the story built to a climax gradually—like an orgasm—and the climax was gratifying.
The synopsis of the story is that young Manilus Dardanus has come to Rome at his father’s insisstance. The father has arranged an introduction to the wealthy and illustrious general Marcus Cassius Valerian, who commands Augustus Caesar’s twenty-fourth legion. Crusty General Valerian is hardened by battle and tragedies of the past, and at first assumes that Dardanus is like the other sons of sycophants who have sought his favour—i.e. with the idea of an adoption in mind. Despite these reservations, valerian gives him a place within his household and arranges for him to be trained as a soldier. Theirs is an awkward relationship, but in spite of this they both undergo significant changes; Valarian re-discovers deeply buried emotions within himself, and Dardanus grows from a callow boy to a self-sufficient man. He also discovers friendships bonded from hard work and the heat of battle, as well as loyalty asa soldier and for his idol, Valerian.
Having said all that, I had some minor reservations. I certainly bow to Ms Domin’s knowledge of Roman history, but did they travel in carriages (I mean the four-wheel variety) is 10BC Rome? I don’t know, but it seemed at little ‘modern’ to me. Their were some other anachronisms we well, For example, the phrases “working his ass off,” and “Cut them off at the pass,” also seem a bit modern. However, these certainly didn’t detract from the overall enjoyment of the story.
Highly recommended. Four and one-half stars
Gerry Burnie
"Two Irish Lads" & Coming soon "Nor All Thy Tears"
Although my specialty is Canadian history, I have a great appreciation for all history, and I certainly bow to Heather Domin’s knowledge of Augustinian Rome, as demonstrated in “The Soldier of Raetia: Valarian’s Legion.
I also like her writing style. She provides just the right amount of description to make both characters and settings vivid without slowing the pace. The characters are also well developed and distinctive although I did find Elurius and Pertinax somewhat similar in nature. Thi applies to their respective relationships with Dardanus and Valerian, as well. The author has also made very good use of dialogue (very credible), without being contrived. What I liked most, however was that the story built to a climax gradually—like an orgasm—and the climax was gratifying.
The synopsis of the story is that young Manilus Dardanus has come to Rome at his father’s insisstance. The father has arranged an introduction to the wealthy and illustrious general Marcus Cassius Valerian, who commands Augustus Caesar’s twenty-fourth legion. Crusty General Valerian is hardened by battle and tragedies of the past, and at first assumes that Dardanus is like the other sons of sycophants who have sought his favour—i.e. with the idea of an adoption in mind. Despite these reservations, valerian gives him a place within his household and arranges for him to be trained as a soldier. Theirs is an awkward relationship, but in spite of this they both undergo significant changes; Valarian re-discovers deeply buried emotions within himself, and Dardanus grows from a callow boy to a self-sufficient man. He also discovers friendships bonded from hard work and the heat of battle, as well as loyalty asa soldier and for his idol, Valerian.
Having said all that, I had some minor reservations. I certainly bow to Ms Domin’s knowledge of Roman history, but did they travel in carriages (I mean the four-wheel variety) is 10BC Rome? I don’t know, but it seemed at little ‘modern’ to me. Their were some other anachronisms we well, For example, the phrases “working his ass off,” and “Cut them off at the pass,” also seem a bit modern. However, these certainly didn’t detract from the overall enjoyment of the story.
Highly recommended. Four and one-half stars
Gerry Burnie
"Two Irish Lads" & Coming soon "Nor All Thy Tears"
August 16, 2012
From GLBTBookshelf.com
Marsilus Dardanus is a youngest son who, in 10 BC Rome really has no other career options than to join the Roman army. His father sets him up with General Cassius Valerian who takes to the boy at once but cannot admit it Even to himself. Dardanus proves himself capable as a soldier but also as a strategist, and more and more he catches Valerian's eye. Why is the general resisting the mutual attraction? He is holding onto the memory of his wife, long dead in childbirth. When the legion confronts a barbarian tribe, one of Dardanus's supposed friends sabotages his trust in Valerian to gain advantage, not realizing that Valerian has not taken Dardanus to his bed. What events will have to take place to thwart the two-faced comrade, get Dardanus to trust the general again, and for love to blossom in both men's hearts?
This is a simple, highly readable, well researched and thoughtful novel. It is not what you might call erotic, but it definitely is a romance. The pace is slow and careful until battle, when the well reinterpreted Roman military style speeds up the excitement. This is the first of a series that I quite look forward to following. I feel I learned about Roman military history and tactics without feeling like I was being taught.
Marsilus Dardanus is a youngest son who, in 10 BC Rome really has no other career options than to join the Roman army. His father sets him up with General Cassius Valerian who takes to the boy at once but cannot admit it Even to himself. Dardanus proves himself capable as a soldier but also as a strategist, and more and more he catches Valerian's eye. Why is the general resisting the mutual attraction? He is holding onto the memory of his wife, long dead in childbirth. When the legion confronts a barbarian tribe, one of Dardanus's supposed friends sabotages his trust in Valerian to gain advantage, not realizing that Valerian has not taken Dardanus to his bed. What events will have to take place to thwart the two-faced comrade, get Dardanus to trust the general again, and for love to blossom in both men's hearts?
This is a simple, highly readable, well researched and thoughtful novel. It is not what you might call erotic, but it definitely is a romance. The pace is slow and careful until battle, when the well reinterpreted Roman military style speeds up the excitement. This is the first of a series that I quite look forward to following. I feel I learned about Roman military history and tactics without feeling like I was being taught.
March 13, 2012
"Songs of Innocence, Songs of Experience."
William Blake's seminal titles popped into my head as I watched Valerian easily pick his way through political minefields, as I soaked up the beauty of Raetian woods as seen through Dardanus's eyes. Domin does an outstanding job of presenting the environments and activities of a Roman legion as experienced by the major characters: a world-weary general and his fresh-faced recruit. It took me a hundred pages to even recognize the changing points of view, though, as her touch is so deft that it all seems completely natural.
There is tremendous emotional authenticity in this novel -- I related very strongly to the sensitive Dardanus as he came of age. From the camaraderie of the young soldiers, to the slow, believably-paced relationship that develops between the main characters, to the tender portrait of family life on the march, the many faces of love and loyalty, duty and honor, risk and rage and sacrifice all receive their due in The Soldier of Raetia.
Taut, gripping battle scenes and equally taut, passionate love scenes add spice, suspense, and savor to this satisfying read. I look forward to the sequel.
William Blake's seminal titles popped into my head as I watched Valerian easily pick his way through political minefields, as I soaked up the beauty of Raetian woods as seen through Dardanus's eyes. Domin does an outstanding job of presenting the environments and activities of a Roman legion as experienced by the major characters: a world-weary general and his fresh-faced recruit. It took me a hundred pages to even recognize the changing points of view, though, as her touch is so deft that it all seems completely natural.
There is tremendous emotional authenticity in this novel -- I related very strongly to the sensitive Dardanus as he came of age. From the camaraderie of the young soldiers, to the slow, believably-paced relationship that develops between the main characters, to the tender portrait of family life on the march, the many faces of love and loyalty, duty and honor, risk and rage and sacrifice all receive their due in The Soldier of Raetia.
Taut, gripping battle scenes and equally taut, passionate love scenes add spice, suspense, and savor to this satisfying read. I look forward to the sequel.
September 27, 2009
I loved this book. Domin has a real talent for not only setting a scene, but transporting you there - that immersion is one of the great joys of reading historical fiction. Her characters are rounded and believable, the battle scenes detailed and shocking, and the storyline involving and moving. I had never really been terribly interested in the history of Rome before this, and now I'm hooked: I think that says it all.
September 28, 2016
J'avais beaucoup aimé le précédent roman VF de l'auteur, Allégeance, alors je me suis jetée sur celui là, et je ne l'ai pas regretté. Nous voici plongé dans l'empire romain, pour suivre le parcours initiatique d'un jeune garçon qui devient homme, en se confrontant à la discipline de la Légion, à l'amitié, l'amour, la guerre et la trahison. Un roman historique qui se dévore impatiemment, et une belle romance MM.
4,5/5
4,5/5
November 14, 2020
Well-researched and well-written, this novel provides a clear eye into the Roman Republic through the eyes of Dardanus, a young soldier who finds himself moving from admiration of his general to love. I felt like I was right there in ancient Raetia, experiencing battle, betrayal, lust, and love right along with the eminently likable protagonist. Will be reading the sequel immediately.
June 16, 2018
My favorite genre will always be a slow-burn romance and this book delivered that so well! I loved the historical references, especially their accuracies. I felt so bad for Elerius, I felt like he just couldn't help himself and act like that. It broke my heart when Dardanus said "I loved you Elerius" and walked away while Elerius screamed his name. *sigh
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