Dust cover somewhat tattered, but that's what it's for, and the book itself is fine.
Comprises Dinosaur Planet and Dinosaur Planet Survivors
In all these stories where the characters become separated from their parent societies, I always want to see more of the main society. I'd like to see a story set in a Thek academy, for example. I should point out that I find the abbreviations irritating. The term 'EV' is used throughout, and should be elucidated at least once every 25 pages or so. I don't remember what it stands for, and don't even remember where to look to find out.
There are quite a few annoying 'universal' assumptions in this book. Some are widespread. Why WOULD the expedition personnel universally prefer sunshine to rain? Or 'temperate' to 'tropical' environments?.
Also, there's a tendency to describe 'life' as if only animals were alive (this is common in British stories for some reason, and leads to such absurdities as people complaining of difficulty finding 'life' while flying over a forest canopy). This last raises an interesting question: why, if the planners included a xenoveterinary at the last minute, did they not think to include a xenobotanist? This might have made it easier to figure out why the introduced animals were supplied with alien plants as a nutritional supplement.
There's too much of a progressivist bias in these books. There's no reason to believe in a bias toward progress in evolution. Darwin struggled with this, because he recognized that natural selection in itself would not inherently trend toward progress, but he believed in progress himself. He added fudge factors as a 'correction'. The main problem was that there was no evidence for such fudge factors in the fossil record. Darwin escaped this by arguing that the fossil record was imperfect. Which it is, but the problem is you can use the gaps for a sort of circular game, in which you can add whatever you think you need to make your theory work, and nobody can disprove it. It's all a matter of what large axe you need to grind.
In the same light, the use of the word 'primitive' is a dead giveaway. Biologists in training are taught to avoid this word, with its historical connotations that 'first-come' and 'inferior' are coeval.
It seems to be a personal bias of the author to attribute malice to predators. There's no reason to believe that predators bear any animus toward their prey. If they assess new creatures for their potential food value, that's only survival. The notion that they take any pleasure in inflicting suffering is a form of anthropomorphism.
Also, among humanoid peoples, I found the bigotry against the 'heavy-worlders' disgusting. This is the author's own interpolation. There is no reason whatever to argue that heavy musculature leads inherently to insensitivity and sadism. For contrast, I might suggest James White's Hudlars, who are so sensitive that they can'd cope emotionally with the necessity of beating a Protector of The Unborn to stimulate its metabolism, and have to resort to listening to raucous music to muster up the will. As White often pointed out, physical pachydermy need not have any relationship to being emotionally thickskinned. The 'heavy-worlders' in this book are treated as if they had no personal variation at all, but are all degraded products of a destructive environment.
I find the hairy dinosaurs fairly implausible. Current research would suggest that feathers would be more likely. Of course, there are hairlike feathers, so it's possible... The mammalian characters, however, are significantly less likely. Some birds (the closest surviving relatives to dinosaurs) do feed their young with a milky substance: but it comes from the crop, and there are no mammary glands. And no birds, as far as I know, are viviparous. Ichthyosaurs were viviparous, so it's possible that some dinosaurs were, as well. But if mammalian traits were developed, it's not necessarily true that they would be placental. Monotreme types (which lay eggs, but suckle their young) would be more likely. As would marsupials. Carrying immature young in pouches has distinct advantages. Placental mammals require elaborate protections for the unborn against things like the mother's immune system.
The lack of ambush predators is also surprising. Coursing predators are actually quite rare, and mostly found in megafauna. Ambush is a less expensive technique, and much commoner, especially in solitary animals. But it could be that they're there, and just not detectable by the overfliers.
Talking of expense, it's a little surprising that homeothermy would be retained on a very warm world. The maintenance of an internal furnace comes at a very high cost. One indication of the cost is the small ratio of predators/prey. In poikilotherms, the number of predators is about equal to the number of herbivores, because they don't have to stoke the internal furnace all the time, and thus can eat a lot less.
It's not clear why the parent society (societies? There's some indication of metabolic assortment) is so energy hungry. The Theks use some form of less-destructive (and less expensive) energy source than nuclear. It's not clear what it is, but why wouldn't it be more widespread? A technology that can maintain devices for more than a million years seems worth cultivating, even if it's not suited to
high-energy rapid activities. And on-planet, there should be quite a lot of potential for geothermal energy. There's no mention of hot springs (so far), but they're likely to exist, particularly on a seismically active planet.
There's mention on several occasions of a creature (on another planet) which I find literally incredible. On Earth, blood feeders tend to be quite small and nonaggressive. This is because blood is not particularly nourishing, and is so watery that blood-feeders often have to excrete water even while actively feeding. Haemophages which hurt their hosts and/or cause the hosts to struggle, or inflict permanent harm, would be unable to thrive.
I wish there was more detail about the lives of the shipborn. There are no scenes set aboard ship (so far), and while it's clear the experience of growing up aboard ship has physical and psychological consequences, there's little anecdotal evidence as to how. Several times in the story there are convivial gatherings, but though there would be storytelling at such gatherings, the stories are not repeated in the text, mostly.
The second volume is really only what amounts to the second volume. The first volume leaves matters completely unresolved. But the same could be said of the second volume. There are so many loose ends that I have to suspect that there was an intention to extend it to a trilogy. But if so, I don't know what the third volume would be called, and it's not bound with the first two in this edition.
The solution to problems in the Federation in the story tends to be more legalistic than violent. The Federation is fairly stable, apparently, and the starships are self-sufficient and practically indestrucable. The temporal problems are caused by people tending to go into cold sleep for decades to avoid dangers.
Which brings me to a point about McCaffery's work that I've begun to recognize. She's not particularly concerned with technical matters. The technologies aren't very well realized, and you have to just take her word for it what their strengths and weaknesses are. She just assumes faster-than-light drives, and doesn't worry about temporal anamolies. Indeed, she might as well just describe it as magic. Who asks for wiring diagrams of magic spells?
In this duology there are many questions raised about the nature of dinosaurs. But it seems as if only two or three genera were imported to Ireta anyway. The picture on the dust cover shows a few dinosaurs, but they appear to be diplodocus, which make no appearance in the text.
One thing that struck me was that the characters argue that there's no excuse for mutiny (there doesn't seem to be much attempt to divine the motives of the mutineers, truth be known). But the incredible violence in the mutiny is really not discussed. I don't mean against humans. There's some violence against humans, and more planned that doesn't come off. But the plan to kill the humans involves mass slaughter of hadrosaurs, and this is not an accidental, but an intended consequence. Responses to this violence are oddly muted for a society that seems to have taken up vegetarianism/artificial foods at least partly for ethical reasons. Why is attempting to murder sentients by means of the mass slaughter of animals not taken more seriously?
The hyracotherium, by the way, is most emphatically NOT a dinosaur. It is an early placental mammal, from millions of years after the demise of dinosaurs on Earth. It's one of a wide variety of early perissodactyls with few descendants (including, in this case, modern horses), from a time before artiodactyls (like deer) began to predominate; it must have been collected millions of years after the other terrestrial fauna.
So what should be in the third volume? One would like to learn the dialects of the 'giffs', and have some sort of conversation with them. Furthermore, there must be more than one colony of them, surely? And there should be some discussion of the Theks from an insider. As it is, they function as what amounts to dei ex machina, quite literally descending from the heavens in space ships/suits, and resolving matters more or less casually as a side issue while working out their own concerns. So what ARE those concerns? I have some doubts about the efficacy of a memory transfer through the gestation process, despite the Theks' own insistence that it's inerrant. And what about the question of the intelligence of the 'fringes'? They certainly can learn from experience, but that's not much of a measure of intelligence: most creatures can. And how did they become blood-feeders? There don't seem to have been many creatures with blood on Ireta before the dinosaurs were imported. What did they eat before?
I should say that the argument that the 'heavy-worlders' are not (much) subject to the dangers of inbreeding is not convincing. The reasons given are just not sufficient. It's not just the phenotypic emergence of 'recessives' that's the danger of loss of genetic variation. That's a factor, but also there's the loss of genetic variation IN ITSELF. And the previous (unexplained) elimination of 'harmful recessives' can't mend that. I doubt the health and (supposed) attractiveness of the descendants of the mutineers. But we're not given much opportunity of examining it. We get to know exactly two of them, and not very well at that. And I personally find the one first contacted repellent: arrogant and shifty at once. I don't blame him for the misbehavior of his ancestors, or for his ambitions based on lies his elders told him. But that doesn't mean I have to like him, even so.