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Paranormal Public #3
Elemental Shining
Sophomore year at Paranormal Public is anything but relaxing for Charlotte and her friends as they return from the summer break to face new challenges.
Battles come from every direction, and as the demons swarm Public it becomes clear that they want more than just the last elemental dead: they want to wipe out every paranormal, and they are within reach of a way of doing it.
Charlotte is the only thing that stands between the paranormals and destruction.
Battles come from every direction, and as the demons swarm Public it becomes clear that they want more than just the last elemental dead: they want to wipe out every paranormal, and they are within reach of a way of doing it.
Charlotte is the only thing that stands between the paranormals and destruction.
235 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 1, 2012
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Maddy Edwards
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January 16, 2016
Just to let you know in advance, I read all of the books in the series.
It's true that the English is not the best and that there are parts where she skips ahead and you get mixed with the time line, but overall, the idea behind the writing is good, and although sometimes I felt the characters where kind of plastic and psychologically boxed, the background story leads you to find out the rest.
Yes, I spent most of the time correcting the English used and yes, even I though I could write it better.
Yes, I got frustrated that such a good concept could be so inconsistent and so irregular..but I felt better after reading them all.
If you go past the small things (like why suddenly it's night after only a few sentences or how come the everyday life is completely omitted and you just skip a few months ahead without any warning) the story is actually interesting.
I just think it should be rewritten.
It's true that the English is not the best and that there are parts where she skips ahead and you get mixed with the time line, but overall, the idea behind the writing is good, and although sometimes I felt the characters where kind of plastic and psychologically boxed, the background story leads you to find out the rest.
Yes, I spent most of the time correcting the English used and yes, even I though I could write it better.
Yes, I got frustrated that such a good concept could be so inconsistent and so irregular..but I felt better after reading them all.
If you go past the small things (like why suddenly it's night after only a few sentences or how come the everyday life is completely omitted and you just skip a few months ahead without any warning) the story is actually interesting.
I just think it should be rewritten.
July 10, 2025
I would really like to get in touch with the author of these books. The author has stopped writing for years now leaving many stories unfinished. I believe she could rewrite these books and do much better now than originally. It’s like all existence of everything she’s written has been wiped as much as she could. I think the bones of this story in particular are very good and she could have a real great new version run.
July 10, 2022
couldn’t put it down!
With her friends continued support and her acceptance of her paranormal status, Charlotte fights prejudice and finally recognizes her strength. This is a great series well developed and captivating.
With her friends continued support and her acceptance of her paranormal status, Charlotte fights prejudice and finally recognizes her strength. This is a great series well developed and captivating.
October 4, 2019
Good
This book was really and crazy never know what's going to happens the bad every time I thought it was some one I was wrong
This book was really and crazy never know what's going to happens the bad every time I thought it was some one I was wrong
July 23, 2022
This books has a lot of twists and turns. It also has none stop action or drama. I can't wait to see what happens next.
March 23, 2018
Why tf did I keep reading these?
August 18, 2022
A smattering of plot holes and typos on top of repetitive narration. The story is just fun enough to keep me reading, but this series is barely worth a 3 star rating.
August 2, 2014
I can't decide between 3 stars and 4. The book is still spilling out plots and twists that keep me attached, but I've also noticed some inconsistencies. For one, in the 2nd book her dark-mage friend Lis had fed her power to C so that she could deal with the flames and save their little dream-giver at the top of the Tower. HOWEVER, in this book, it is stated, "...tried to remember what I had done with Lisabelle last semester. She had needed power and I had taken her hand and given it to her." It might have been a miss statement, but it definitely stuck out like a sore thumb.
Despite that, though, I think the characters are starting to become more strongly developed then before, I finally got to see at least a little bit of the elemental magic come into play, still hoping to see more. It seems all of her friends are SO far ahead of her magically, while C is still as inexperienced as a teen learning their way around.
I also think that everyone's distrust and dislike for C is a bit over-compensated. Outside of a few select group, everyone seems to want her dead, with the very immature and under-thought-of belief that it will suddenly make the demons leave them alone, when it's obvious to anyone with an education that the Elementals were an obvious beginning and C is just the one stitch left that they have to pull before they demons are very capable of unraveling the rest of the cloth that holds the Paranormals together. The vampires, especially, should be thankful to C for her part in saving their lives, yet her teacher and the school comity vampire absolutely loath her...why? The Princess had respect for her, as does her younger sister, yet these two high-ranked vamps can't stand her. &Although it seems a customary vamp attitude towards anyone not vampire, it's a bit obnoxious. She saved their Princess, at least give her the respect of being indifferent to her.
It's also interesting to see that the PIXIES were the one's who set the evil ex-president into her demonic stage, yet all pixies absolutely hate and want the one last elemental dead because the ex-president has gone crazy and she just seems the most immaturely obvious excuse to blame, being she's the last of her kind and the biggest threat to the president at the moment. I expected that to hit C like a club, but she just looked dumbly one in class when this was explained.
Despite that, though, I think the characters are starting to become more strongly developed then before, I finally got to see at least a little bit of the elemental magic come into play, still hoping to see more. It seems all of her friends are SO far ahead of her magically, while C is still as inexperienced as a teen learning their way around.
I also think that everyone's distrust and dislike for C is a bit over-compensated. Outside of a few select group, everyone seems to want her dead, with the very immature and under-thought-of belief that it will suddenly make the demons leave them alone, when it's obvious to anyone with an education that the Elementals were an obvious beginning and C is just the one stitch left that they have to pull before they demons are very capable of unraveling the rest of the cloth that holds the Paranormals together. The vampires, especially, should be thankful to C for her part in saving their lives, yet her teacher and the school comity vampire absolutely loath her...why? The Princess had respect for her, as does her younger sister, yet these two high-ranked vamps can't stand her. &Although it seems a customary vamp attitude towards anyone not vampire, it's a bit obnoxious. She saved their Princess, at least give her the respect of being indifferent to her.
It's also interesting to see that the PIXIES were the one's who set the evil ex-president into her demonic stage, yet all pixies absolutely hate and want the one last elemental dead because the ex-president has gone crazy and she just seems the most immaturely obvious excuse to blame, being she's the last of her kind and the biggest threat to the president at the moment. I expected that to hit C like a club, but she just looked dumbly one in class when this was explained.
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December 25, 2012
Maddy Edwards has a gift. She has the ability to tell a story that will immerse the reader into the creative world she weaves. "Elemental Shining" is the latest addition to the Paranormal Public series.
Charlotte has been working all summer to clear the debris and chaos after the damage to the library at Paranormal Public. She is anxious to see her friends after the summer separation. However, their reunion is cut short when she is called into the office of the deans where she is belittled and told she cannot practice her magic other than in the classroom. She is outraged but that is only one of the many upsets she will be expected to endure. But, who do they think they are fooling? When has a teenager ever listened when an adults tells them no? It also seems that the deans have taken it upon themselves to ut the students at risk by insisting their tactical teams go outside of the proctective boundaries unaided to fight demons if necessary. Of course, they team Charlotte up on the losing team.
On a good note, Charlotte's relationship with Keller is finally public knowledge despite the fact that his Aunt disapproves. But that must take second seat when the demons get their hands on a mystical map that has the ability to locate anything and anybody. Apparently there is a master thief named Elam, who is the only criminal that has alluded Dean Risper in his long and allustrious career. Everyone believes he is responsible for the disappearance of the map; so, Risper goes off once again to locate him.
This third installment of Paranormal hits the ground running with action and excitement. However, for me, this edition seemed a little disjointed. Additionally, too many issues were left up in the air. The story lack a clear presence of the villain. What I mean by that is that there is a lot of running around and trying to find out whose on first but former Paranormal President Malle and the demons were noticeably absent from this read. Of the three books, this one was my least favorite. I just did not feel like much progress in the storyline had been made from the last book. Hopeefully, the next book in the series will put the series back on track.
Charlotte has been working all summer to clear the debris and chaos after the damage to the library at Paranormal Public. She is anxious to see her friends after the summer separation. However, their reunion is cut short when she is called into the office of the deans where she is belittled and told she cannot practice her magic other than in the classroom. She is outraged but that is only one of the many upsets she will be expected to endure. But, who do they think they are fooling? When has a teenager ever listened when an adults tells them no? It also seems that the deans have taken it upon themselves to ut the students at risk by insisting their tactical teams go outside of the proctective boundaries unaided to fight demons if necessary. Of course, they team Charlotte up on the losing team.
On a good note, Charlotte's relationship with Keller is finally public knowledge despite the fact that his Aunt disapproves. But that must take second seat when the demons get their hands on a mystical map that has the ability to locate anything and anybody. Apparently there is a master thief named Elam, who is the only criminal that has alluded Dean Risper in his long and allustrious career. Everyone believes he is responsible for the disappearance of the map; so, Risper goes off once again to locate him.
This third installment of Paranormal hits the ground running with action and excitement. However, for me, this edition seemed a little disjointed. Additionally, too many issues were left up in the air. The story lack a clear presence of the villain. What I mean by that is that there is a lot of running around and trying to find out whose on first but former Paranormal President Malle and the demons were noticeably absent from this read. Of the three books, this one was my least favorite. I just did not feel like much progress in the storyline had been made from the last book. Hopeefully, the next book in the series will put the series back on track.
September 24, 2015
Sophomore year should be better for Charlotte. She knows who she is, she's getting better with her elemental magic, Dacer is helping her use the masks. She's spent the summer helping him restore the museum after someone destroyed the Tower in trying to get to Charlotte. She can't wait until her friends return for the school year. Her and Cale have even been talking and semi-friendly even though his pixie-girlfriend Camilla hates her. Sophomore year is going to be very similar if not worse than her Starter year. As usual, the higher ups are keeping stuff from her, but for a change her friends are as well. Paranormals are being targeted by demons, which is new. The demons are organized now and they have a plan. They are laying this plan clearly at Charlotte's feet. Camilla is happy to let her know it's all her fault once pixie's start dying. Charlotte is also singled out in the Paranormal paper that the demons claim that if Charlotte is turned over the deaths with stop. They just want the last elemental. Now anyone with any sense knows that this is not the case, they will keep killing off the paranormal groups, but not all group have sense. Charlotte feels more alienated than ever. She also learns about the Wheel of Power and one artifact that could locate her no matter where she was or what protections she had, and the demons are looking for it. The deans want her to not practice her magic this year. How can she defend herself if she doesn't practice her magic? She goes to the only professor in her corner, her mentor Dacer, for guidance.
December 30, 2012
Whilst Charlotte is the only elemental left and she is constantly in danger of losing her life to demons or irate pixie classmates, Lisabelle has to be my favourite character. Not only does she get the best lines, her constant snarky attitude is engaging and she reveals her undying loyalty to her friends in this book even Sip whose neon decor drives her crazy most of the time. Charlotte is exploring her magic more and trying to find a way to protect herself rather than letting her friends risk their lives. Lots of teenage angst about the definition of Charlotte's unofficial relationship with Keller and a show of strength from her friends will enable Charlotte to find a way to defend herself when it counts the most. Secrets are revealed that may change the course of the battle with the demons and a decision by the Deans will put all their lives in jeopardy but if they can work together as a team they may stand a chance of surviving.
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"NO WAY!!!" Sip squealed. She bounded up to me and wrapped her arms around my shoulders. Sip was big on hugging these days. "You have a boyfriend! Aww! You make such a cute couple. Aww."
"I just vomited in my mouth a little bit," Lisabelle groaned. "Congrats," she said to me. "Don't screw it up."
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"NO WAY!!!" Sip squealed. She bounded up to me and wrapped her arms around my shoulders. Sip was big on hugging these days. "You have a boyfriend! Aww! You make such a cute couple. Aww."
"I just vomited in my mouth a little bit," Lisabelle groaned. "Congrats," she said to me. "Don't screw it up."
January 8, 2013
Thank God this book is finally out!! The wait just about killed me!!
Update!! I just finished this and I absolutely loved it!! There wasn't a cliff hanger ending but there were plenty of things unresolved so I'm hoping there will be another one.
What I liked the most is the "Elemental" supernatural. I read tons of YA fantasy (actually it's all I read)but for whatever reason this is the first time I have read about a character with elemental magic. Well Done Maddy!!
I also have to mention my favorite character, a Darkness Mage ( sounds crazy huh) Lisabelle! She is the snarkiest most sarcastic character I've ever read but she is also undyingly loyal to her friends in a "I can and will kick everyone's ass" kind of way! I actually panicked during the dream sequence at the beginning of the book and if it comes to fruition I will .... Well I don't know what I'll do but I'll definite be pissed!
Update!! I just finished this and I absolutely loved it!! There wasn't a cliff hanger ending but there were plenty of things unresolved so I'm hoping there will be another one.
What I liked the most is the "Elemental" supernatural. I read tons of YA fantasy (actually it's all I read)but for whatever reason this is the first time I have read about a character with elemental magic. Well Done Maddy!!
I also have to mention my favorite character, a Darkness Mage ( sounds crazy huh) Lisabelle! She is the snarkiest most sarcastic character I've ever read but she is also undyingly loyal to her friends in a "I can and will kick everyone's ass" kind of way! I actually panicked during the dream sequence at the beginning of the book and if it comes to fruition I will .... Well I don't know what I'll do but I'll definite be pissed!
October 6, 2015
In the third book, Charlotte is starting sophomore year. She was hoping for no fighting and a pieceful semester. But no such luck. Charlotte is thrown to the wolves this semester and must learn that she has to fend for herself and stop relying on her friends to back her up. Professor Zervos continues to be Charlotte’s hated professor and proves just how much he really wants to push her. He throws her onto a team of her and Lough along with a bunch of starters and makes her fend for herself and put others at risk in the process. Will Charlotte be able to make it through another semester? Who will die next?
I do love this series. One major flaw is that the author gets a little jumbled and the readers do catch it. Charlotte and her crew make me smile and I am addicted though so I fight the need to correct things in the writing. I love how determined Charlotte is to prove she knows what she is doing and isn’t worthless. Love the scene in the long building while she trained. Great!
I do love this series. One major flaw is that the author gets a little jumbled and the readers do catch it. Charlotte and her crew make me smile and I am addicted though so I fight the need to correct things in the writing. I love how determined Charlotte is to prove she knows what she is doing and isn’t worthless. Love the scene in the long building while she trained. Great!
September 21, 2014
Elemental Shining is book three of the Paranormal Public series by Maddy Edwards.
Back at Paranormal Public for sophomore year, Charlotte, Sip, Lisabelle, and Lough have some adjustments to make. The coming of two vampire hybrid twins throws even Lisabelle for a loop. The paranormal community is starting to call for Charlotte's death, and lay the demon attacks at her feet. Oh, and then there's Keller, everyone's favorite fallen angel who just might have a thing for the last elemental left. If he can get around his family.
Be prepared for more snarky commentary between now-roommates Sip and Lisabelle. More unrequited love from Lough. More stupid yet brave moves from Charlotte. In other words, what we've come to expect from our Paranormal Public crew!
Back at Paranormal Public for sophomore year, Charlotte, Sip, Lisabelle, and Lough have some adjustments to make. The coming of two vampire hybrid twins throws even Lisabelle for a loop. The paranormal community is starting to call for Charlotte's death, and lay the demon attacks at her feet. Oh, and then there's Keller, everyone's favorite fallen angel who just might have a thing for the last elemental left. If he can get around his family.
Be prepared for more snarky commentary between now-roommates Sip and Lisabelle. More unrequited love from Lough. More stupid yet brave moves from Charlotte. In other words, what we've come to expect from our Paranormal Public crew!
September 27, 2015
I am still enjoying this series a good deal. While Charlotte now has a boyfriend I do not see this becoming one of those sappy series where the two boys are fighting over the girl. First of all because no one else seems to want her, but because they are a very good couple. The book starts out with a sense of foreboding and does not really let up until the end. The more I read about the public's reaction to Charlotte the more I think I would just let them all hang. But that is just me and now I really want to see what happens to her. For the last three books she has been defying the professors and saving everyone's necks then getting condemned for it. Let's find out what is next.
July 15, 2014
Growth, adults messing things up and The Ghost. This book turns the narrative from a burgeoning love story to a coming of age story. It is kind of difficult to be in love when someone's aunt and a bad guy are doing everything they can to keep you apart. The overwhelmingly inappropriate guidance from the adults in the story is a little over the top. Think the worst school administrators on the planet, throw in a cup of over protective syndrome, and a dash of hate and fear and you have the atmosphere of this tale.
August 26, 2016
Difficult to read; inconsistencies everywhere. At the end of book 2, Charlotte tells Ricky she has a boyfriend, but by the beginning of book 3, Ricky doesn't know again. Zervos hates Charlotte sometimes, and is sometimes on their side. Charlotte acts like she's never experienced the power of 5, but she'd already used it last year. These are the plot holes I can recall off the top of my head, but it was silly how many times I rolled my eyes at the text. I hate paying for books and then not finishing them, so I finished book 3 but I will def not be buying the rest of the series.
July 15, 2014
I'm continuing the series because I like the story. However, the typos and grammar issues are really getting to me and usually they aren't a huge issue for me. There have been constant mistakes in all three books and it's beginning to get old. If I didn't enjoy the underlying story and need a distraction badly right now I probably would end here. Stars would be higher without the typos.
September 13, 2021
I read many mixed reviews of this book before I read it. I was not sure what to expect. The grammar and spelling leaves a lot to be desired, but the story line of the books, the growth of the characters is really good. It is keeping me addicted. I find I cannot put the books down when I start a new one.
October 18, 2018
now i am hooked. This was such a great, easy and creative book. i was hooked after the first page.
The characters were easy to fall in love with and follow, along with the story. the author made the mental visions so easy and vivid of the surroundings and the characters actions felt so real.
i would highly recommend this author and this book.
The characters were easy to fall in love with and follow, along with the story. the author made the mental visions so easy and vivid of the surroundings and the characters actions felt so real.
i would highly recommend this author and this book.
January 4, 2013
2.5 Stars
I was so excited to get into this that I skipped all the other books in my to-read queue. I could have waited. I feel as though nothing much has progressed since the last entry into the series. I am not a happy camper!
I was so excited to get into this that I skipped all the other books in my to-read queue. I could have waited. I feel as though nothing much has progressed since the last entry into the series. I am not a happy camper!
July 11, 2014
There are a lot of continuity errors in this series, but this book especially. The author writes one thing, but then changes and says something different later on. It got confusing to read. I am sadly disappointed in this one. Overall, though, I enjoy reading the series.
January 29, 2017
Elemental Shining
Excellent 2nd book! Seeing the characters grow just like they would in the real world is awesome. I couldn't put it down. Great job Maddy Edwards keep up the great work.
Excellent 2nd book! Seeing the characters grow just like they would in the real world is awesome. I couldn't put it down. Great job Maddy Edwards keep up the great work.
January 4, 2013
This would have been better as a novella. There was no real progress made in the overall story ark. However, the series has a lot of promise and is worth reading.
April 5, 2014
Not my favourite in the series. Hopefully book four is better
July 23, 2014
Loved it!
September 10, 2016
Still not as good as the first book.
September 24, 2015
omg! why hasn't this series been picked up for a movie?? I would pay to go see it.
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