I am one of "us" who was captivated by Charli Blake, her chutzpah, her disarming naivete in "Saving Wishes," the first book of this trilogy. I happily read "Second Hearts," the second in the series. It wasn't as strong a story as "Saving Wishes" nor was it as well-honed: it clearly needed additional (structural) work however I was able to enjoy reading Charli mature, eventually learn to love herself as much as she loves Adam. As sad as the ending was (in terms of Charli leaving Adam after his repeated sophistry and after he broke every single promise he'd made her), I also found it tremendously uplifting to read of a young woman who, finally!, did not lose herself and her dreams in the name of Being in a Relationship. Yea for Charli!
So I was pleased when "Storm Shells" was released, only it was clearly released way too soon -- it read more as a beta than a polished and ready-for-the-masses publication. "Storm Shells," the version I purchased in November, 2013 on Amazon, came across as a rough draft both in terms of copyediting but much more importantly in terms of overall story editing and cohesion. I found it ultimately disappointing (as in how it was written) and a bit of a mess.
The author employs for the first time in this series alternating viewpoints, with every other chapter devoted to either Charli or her husband, Adam. Oddly, Adam felt much less fleshed-out and real in his first person than when described from Charli's perspective in the previous two books. Esp in "Saving Wishes" I could easily find how incandescent Adam found Charli, how enchanted he was by her, and that was merely through the dialogue the author ascribed him. In "Storm Shells," he was just ... beige, milquetoast. The young man who was captivated by Charli in "Saving Wishes" and still so in love with her that he went to the prevaricating lengths he did to keep her in "Second Hearts" was missing here. And that's too bad. Additionally, everything about his student protege, Trieste Kincaid, and her unrequited crush, Felix, should have been cut from the book. It added nothing, no illumination into Adam's life, into his thought process(-es), into his character, and it certainly didn't move the storyline *at all*. A pointless distraction.
Charli also appears to have lost a lot of her luster in this final installment. The girl I found so delightful in "Saving Wishes" is nearly completely absent here; in her place is a boring, entitled young woman who does **nothing**. She still has her fairy tales, but honest-to-goodness, she clearly sits around all day, every day, doing nothing. She doesn't work, she doesn't volunteer. She doesn't read. She doesn't explore. She doesn't create. She is happy to use Adam's credit card for her long-term rental car. I found her sadly boring and the admiration I'd had for her quickly dissipated. In all fairness, I became disappointed with her in the second book, "Second Hearts," when she was living in one of the most accessible and cosmopolitan cities in the world, Manhattan, and she again did nothing. She didn't attend New School and study photography or writing, so she could further her two passions. She didn't volunteer, other than evidently attending charity functions at the behest of Adam and his High Society parents, and really, those don't count. She waitressed for a bit and took a few photos, but that was it during her time in NYC. What a waste! And it continued as a waste in "Storm Shells." The girl with such promise really fizzled out.
The author did let us revisit many powerful secondary / tertiary characters from earlier, like The Beautifuls (mean girls from Charli's youth), Ryan (Adam's big brother and proprietor of the restaurants where Charli worked in NYC), Nicole (Charli's duplicitous best friend who, along with her no-good boyfriend, absconded with $13,000 of Charli's money), and to a lesser and disappointing extent, Alex (Charli's father) and Gabi, aka The Parisienne (Charli's HS French teacher and paramour of Alex). I'd have loved to spend much more time with them, with Gabi and Alex, and the end of "Storm Shells" leaves us with a tantalizing glimpse of their future. It would have been nice to be more involved in their getting to that point (and beyond, truthfully).
At least half of what currently exists as "Storm Shells" could (and I'd argue should) be cut; a significant portion of what remains should be expanded, esp in terms of actual dialogue. The ending, which was far too precious and clunky, should have actually continued to follow that transition because, let's face it, **that's** where the meat of the matter is.
Ultimately and because of the affection I had for "Saving Wishes" and lesser affection for "Second Hearts," this book was "okay." If I didn't feel fondness for Charli, Alex and Gabi, I doubt I would have finished this book.