So much to comment on!….
In my early teen years, I tried reading Communion. While I was fascinated by the alien abduction phenomenon, it creeped the bejesus out of me, and I could not finish the book. Seeing this book, and noting the author, grown-up me started reading this book with some trepidation. The first chapter with the young children being abducted was, as I expected, chilling. Then it went downhill….
I appreciate and enjoy alien abduction stories. I can even appreciate and accept that the author believes this has happened to him. However this story dredges up and incorporates every internet conspiracy; from Atlantis, to aliens building the pyramids, to astral projections, to evil secret societies; to the point that you need a tin-foil hat to take it seriously. The best being the end of the world happening in 2012….yeah, that didn’t age very well, did it?
Aside from the descent into nuttiness that the story takes, there are a lot of faults in the book itself. It was clearly not edited properly, as I found typos, sentences with words reversed, scene changes without any sort of breaks, poorly structured sentences that I had to read out loud, to make sure I was reading them correctly, etc. I think the publishers were hoping to cash in on the author’s name and reputation with the subject material, and only gave it a cursory look-over.
The plot, I thought, was generally okay (if you suspend your disbelief), though there were far too many useless subplots (for instance, there was no need for the Marcie affair). The dialogue, at times was cringeworthy, and I found myself pausing and asking out loud, “who talks like that?” (serious? “Schmendrick”? I have not heard that since the 80’s!). It was hard at times to believe these characters could be real, let alone empathize with them.
Then there are the titular Grays. These beings are supposed to be billions of years old. Such a civilization’s motives would be unknowable to us (imagine trying to explain why we have/do things like roller coasters, scuba diving, social media to a cave man). Their technology so advanced that they would be gods (imagine the fleet of the Roman Empire encountering one of our cruise ships or aircraft carriers). Instead we get these creatures flying around in (effectively) hot air balloons, with motivations that make perfect sense. You want them to be creepy? Don’t let us know much about them! Don’t let us get into their minds! They are supposed to be so far beyond us, so keep their motives secret. The moment the curtain is pulled too far back, the sense of menace is gone.
And speaking of menacing, let’s talk about the Three Thieves. Frankly, they should be renamed “The Three Stooges” with the way they “talk” ( “shit up!”, “no, you shut up!”) and act (your entire civilization’s survival is dependent on a decade’s long plan staying secret, so you abduct a woman, deliberately make her scream in a ship landed in a field near a dozen witnesses? You are not very good at this thing, are you?). The author made it very hard to take these aliens seriously,
Lastly there is the non-ending ending. Lots of loose threads, which suggested a sequel was planned. Seventeen years on and nothing seems to be in the works. It’s probably for the better that we leave this story where it is.
All in all, I did enjoy the story, even though I didn’t think it was particularly good. Some rewrites, and proper editing would, in my opinion, make this a fun, spooky tale. For now it falls way short.