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Jessie and Marcy have been introduced to the dark, sinister world of BDSM and fetish by Marcy's old friend 'Grace'. Having been visited 'The Club' on two occasions now, Matilda, the enigmatic owner is ready to up the ante. Marcy will see her sexuality tested and questioned as she indulges herself, exploring a bisexual relationship with lesbian encounters with the beautiful and dominant Grace.

Jessie will learn a new meaning to the word fear and pain as he is taken below the club, into the dark and sinister world of the dungeon below, where Lucy will teach him a new game and a new meaning of fear and pain, as she introduces him to the sinister and painful possibilities, that can come from being at the mercy of the Dungeon Dice.

Warning this 17,000 word novella is not suitable for under 18's, it contains very adult themes of:-

Femdom
Female Domination of Males and Female Domination of Females
Predicament Bondage
Punishment
Orgasm Denial
Chastity
Bi
Lesbian
Slavery
Fetish Torture

*** Special Warning, this novella contains a graphic description of finger nail removal. It is NOT for the squeamish. It could be considered erotic by some, but horror by others - you have been warned. ***

84 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 17, 2013

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About the author

Sabrina Jen Mountford

42 books239 followers
I enjoy writing about extreme, unrealistic scenarios... I like to write about female domination, male chastity, BDSM and forced feminization. I'm not a professional dominatrix or anything like that...

I have experimented with this sort of thing in the bedroom, don't get me wrong, I find nothing more amusing and satisfying than having my boyfriend wearing knickers, a bra and a suspender belt, his face plastered in make up, his hands hand-cuffed behind his back, over my knee recieving a good spanking... But I like to explore the unrealistic end of the scale in my writing.

Please don't read my stories expecting realistic scenario's, they are pure fantasy - products of my over-active imagination. I don't propose to be the greatest writer ever to grace paper, I do try my best though. Sometimes I accept it's perhaps not pulitzer prize material.

However, I do have a vivid and twisted imagination... And I think I understand the submissive male mind... (My boyfriend is about as submissive as they come.)

If you have enjoyed my stories, please, please write me a review - I know somebody out there likes them because they are selling briskly and people who buy one tend to buy at least two or three...

If you do write me a good, constructive review, include your email address, and I'll perhaps email you a free review copy of one of my new titles?

Lastly, thanks to everyone who's bought my work, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. I apologise for any typing errors or similar, every so often I read and re-check my titles before republishing them, but it's difficult. I do my best but I don't have a copy editor so my best is my best I'm afraid. If you spot a mistake, please email me at sjm.author@yahoo.com and I will correct it in the next re-publish.

If you have any comments, you can contact me at sjm.author@yahoo.com

~Sabrina

PS: I've had lots of email requests for paper editions of my stories for non-Kindle owners. For the benefit of those people I've used createspace to make some paper editions.

There are now several paperback editions of my work available, please search amazon paperbacks and the createspace store for 'Sabrina Jen Mountford' if you're interested.

After a heavy re-working, I've managed to get 'The Clinical Trial' approved! Please find it on the Kindle Store.

On a final note, anyone who has read all of my current catalogue and wants more of the same, I strongly suggest reading Sarah Jameson's fiction, Tatania, Monaco and Stacy's game.

If you still want more - I suggest taking a look at Anne Michelle, Sara Desmarais, Sandy Thomas and Selene St. Claire

My full catalogue - have you read them all?

The Clinical Trial (With The Receptionist
The Tormentress and the Boss
Slavery: Part 1 : Captured!
Slavery: Part 2 : Operated on : Forced Transsexual.
The Male Bridesmaid
The Hypnotist
A Sissy Story : WPC Domination
A Sissy Story : Feminized For Her ‘How he became a lesbian’
Cross Dressing : Schoolgirl Domination
Samantha’s Tale : The Deal (Prequel to ‘The Tormentress & The Boss’)
Anita’s Tale : The Sperm Donor
The Harem Slave
Femdom : The Dressmaker
Femdom : The Ex’s Revenge
Femdom: The Beautician Trap
Tickle Torture : Tickled into Submission
Tickle Torture : Tickled until she wets herself
The Male Bridesmaid 2 : The Reluctant Cuckoldress
Corporal Punishment : A Study in Caning (The BDSM Studies)
Orgasm Denial : A Study in Chastity (The BDSM Studies)
Femdom : The Game
Femdom : The Game 2 : High Stakes
Gender Swap : Anita's Transgender Pill : A Gender Bender Story

*Slavery 1 & 2 are available together and separately

Coming soon:-
Femdom : The Game 3 : The Ultimate Forfeit

Planned Titles:-
A Study in Feminization (BDSM Studies)
The Clinical Trial : Phase 2
Forced Fem : His first ‘Girls Day Out’ (Based on Fact.)
Femdom : Utopia – The Female Dominated Society

Compilations by the same author:-
Feminization Stories First Collect

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Profile Image for BookAddict  ✒ La Crimson Femme.
6,945 reviews1,440 followers
June 14, 2013
Jumping into book two instead of starting with book one doesn't really hurt a reader. This one references back to the previous book so the reader knows what happened. It did make me curious and want to read the first one. Any book which has a straight male forced into sissification and then taking it up the ass is a story I enjoy reading. Yes, I'm depraved. It's one of my many kinky reading pleasures.

This one is actually not as erotic and arousing. It's more torture and sadistic. So if you don't want to read about sadistic torturing even if it gets the guy being tortured off, stop now and don't read the book. Since dental torture is something I've read and enjoyed from a body modification kink, it was fine for me. The nail torture was kind of icky though. Totally not arousing for me.

The f/f was fine especially when used in the context of sexual torture for a third party. This book did feel like a filler. As in, it is the bridge between the first book and the third one. This one sets it up well for the big challenge in book three which has me quite intrigued. I can guess what the outcome of the challenge will be, but what really appeals is how the challenge will go down. The more graphic and humiliating, the better! One can only hope. This book is a quick read with simple characters and basic plot. It does have a tightly focused storyline on torture, deferred gratification and humiliation. If this is your kink, read on!
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594 reviews49 followers
September 11, 2019
Matilda takes Jessie, now Jessica, to a below ground level of the Club. Trading a comfortable leather collar for steel manacles and placed in predicament bondage to strengthen her calves.

Matilda, then leaves Jessica, promising to send Lucy down later. This is an incredibly dangerous practice, one never leaves someone bound, unobserved, but this is a fantasy.

We find out how Grace’s slave, James—now Jennifer, became fascinated with BDSM. Jennifer is also in a predicament that is not safe as Grace introduces Marcy to her in a way that arouses all three.

Meanwhile, Lucy offers Jessica a Hobson’s Choice of two painful options while his Kali’s Teeth Bracelet torments him.

When Jessie returns home, Marcy brings Grace home. A new game is proposed: Twelve months in strict chastity, playing fetish maid and sex slave to Matilda, Lucy, Grace and either Jessie or Marcy, depending on who wins.

A week prior to the night where the bet will be played out, Marcy is placed in female chastity.

Recommended.
Profile Image for Maia Anne.
Author 6 books90 followers
August 16, 2013
This is a darker part of the trilogy. It carries on right where part 1 left off. Jessie gets taken downstairs to the dungeon while Grace takes Marcy back to her place for some fun. Now, the dungeon scene is pretty extreme. I would say some of the tortures Jessie undergoes are more or less so extreme they are border line, not erotic, just painful. I'm not squeamish normally, but I found myself wincing at the fingernail pulling and the ensuing torture. That part really was, not nice. I found the way Lucy rounded her treatment of Jessie off very satisfying though. You kind of get the feeling reading this one, that Grace was more or less grooming Marcy from the start. She's very forward in her treatment of Marcy, and the scene where Grace and Marcy are making out in front of Grace's 'James' while he's on the rather ingenious treadmill castrator device? It's sexy, I'm 100% straight, but I found it sexy anyway.

For me this one is a 4.5, I preferred part 1, mainly simply because the torture in this one is so brutal. I really do challenge any submissive boys to volunteer to re-create the dungeon scene, then state that they enjoyed it afterwards. I challenge any sane dominant girl to subject their fella to this treatment! I can be a sadistic bitch, but I could NOT do this to someone!

Maia~
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