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England’s best mages are called to Pemberley in their youth. Elizabeth can’t understand why she’s always left behind.
Not only does her father neglect to correct what must be an oversight, he won’t allow her to use her most powerful magic at all. Each year, he further restricts Elizabeth’s movements. She can no longer wander beyond Longbourn’s boundaries, and he locks her chamber door at night with magical charms.
She allows her father to believe that his efforts are enough to keep her home. But when first her elder sister and then her youngest sister are called, Elizabeth is finished pretending. On the last day of the fifth moon, she defies his father’s edicts by following her sisters through the portal to Pemberley.
Not everyone is pleased to see her.
Since the attack five years ago that left Fitzwilliam Darcy in charge of hundreds of young mages, he and his cousin have been keeping a dangerous secret. The last thing he needs to add to his crushing number of responsibilities is training an uninvited mage—even a pretty, intelligent one—whose magic is unusual and unpredictable. The portal is closed, however, so he cannot send her back.
He is not an easy master. She is not a compliant pupil. Still, Elizabeth is determined to find her place at Pemberley, something Darcy admires. Her talents are a puzzle, though, and her strength often falters. Perhaps there was a reason she was never called.
Yet Darcy has no choice but to continue working with Elizabeth. For the secret he’s been keeping is beginning to unravel, and Elizabeth’s unique magic may be the only way to keep Pemberley from unravelling with it.
Not only does her father neglect to correct what must be an oversight, he won’t allow her to use her most powerful magic at all. Each year, he further restricts Elizabeth’s movements. She can no longer wander beyond Longbourn’s boundaries, and he locks her chamber door at night with magical charms.
She allows her father to believe that his efforts are enough to keep her home. But when first her elder sister and then her youngest sister are called, Elizabeth is finished pretending. On the last day of the fifth moon, she defies his father’s edicts by following her sisters through the portal to Pemberley.
Not everyone is pleased to see her.
Since the attack five years ago that left Fitzwilliam Darcy in charge of hundreds of young mages, he and his cousin have been keeping a dangerous secret. The last thing he needs to add to his crushing number of responsibilities is training an uninvited mage—even a pretty, intelligent one—whose magic is unusual and unpredictable. The portal is closed, however, so he cannot send her back.
He is not an easy master. She is not a compliant pupil. Still, Elizabeth is determined to find her place at Pemberley, something Darcy admires. Her talents are a puzzle, though, and her strength often falters. Perhaps there was a reason she was never called.
Yet Darcy has no choice but to continue working with Elizabeth. For the secret he’s been keeping is beginning to unravel, and Elizabeth’s unique magic may be the only way to keep Pemberley from unravelling with it.
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August 23, 2025
A gorgeous combo of JAFF and fantasy, with magic, dragons, intrigue and secrets - oh my!!
Our heroine is desperate to escape Longbourn and learn magic at Pemberley just like her sisters. She just knows her magical potential is far more than her father keeps telling her. She feels like he will keep her locked up forever.
But getting there was just one step in the struggles she comes face to face with and the easiest challenge by far. Happy to meet up with Jane and all the other amazing mages, not everyone was happy for her arrival. With a threat looming over Pemberley, coinciding with her presence, some are wondering if she is friend or foe!
Loved the AU the author creates for this story. For being a fantasy story, there is a believable aspect to the nuances of magic and how it relates to the individuals, and their different characters.
The dynamics between the 3 main young male characters is fantastic and the sisterhood development, not just with the Bennet sisters is very sweet.
LOVED seeing ODC grow, from suspicion and adversaries to friend to Mmmm…
It isn’t all serious, with a few funny scenes and some P&P characters playing their parts to perfection as canon/yet magical.
Melanie Rachel is a big favorite of mine and I enjoyed this book as much as her others.
Can’t recommend it enough to any JAFF lover who appreciates Fantasy mixed in.
I received a free copy of this book for my honest opinion.
Our heroine is desperate to escape Longbourn and learn magic at Pemberley just like her sisters. She just knows her magical potential is far more than her father keeps telling her. She feels like he will keep her locked up forever.
But getting there was just one step in the struggles she comes face to face with and the easiest challenge by far. Happy to meet up with Jane and all the other amazing mages, not everyone was happy for her arrival. With a threat looming over Pemberley, coinciding with her presence, some are wondering if she is friend or foe!
Loved the AU the author creates for this story. For being a fantasy story, there is a believable aspect to the nuances of magic and how it relates to the individuals, and their different characters.
The dynamics between the 3 main young male characters is fantastic and the sisterhood development, not just with the Bennet sisters is very sweet.
LOVED seeing ODC grow, from suspicion and adversaries to friend to Mmmm…
It isn’t all serious, with a few funny scenes and some P&P characters playing their parts to perfection as canon/yet magical.
Melanie Rachel is a big favorite of mine and I enjoyed this book as much as her others.
Can’t recommend it enough to any JAFF lover who appreciates Fantasy mixed in.
I received a free copy of this book for my honest opinion.
June 30, 2023
There be dragons, oh my.
>>Rating: could be mature as adult themes were discussed and the danger and drama might be too much for young readers.
>>Angst: yep, there be angst… lots of angst but it was good angst.
>>Cover Art: That cover is simply splendid and so eye-catching
>>Trope: paranormal
>>Source: I received an ARC [advanced reader copy] via the author and am leaving an honest review. The views and opinions expressed are my own.
I love a paranormal Pride and Prejudice story. This one was amazing. It had everything. It was magical, suspenseful, and mysterious all in one. There were even dragons. Yeah, my heart was racing. I love dragons. Every Austen character was true to form and yet, they were more. They carry such weight in this story with powers that will amaze the reader. Man, I wanted to be called to Pemberley myself. However, Elizabeth was not and couldn’t understand why Jane and Lydia were invited and she was left at home with her father who wouldn’t tell her anything. I began to suspect something wasn’t quite right at Longbourn. Oh-My-Goodness! What was revealed will shock and surprise. Yep, this was so cool. ICNPID [I could not put it down]. This was a great story… highly recommend it.
>>Rating: could be mature as adult themes were discussed and the danger and drama might be too much for young readers.
>>Angst: yep, there be angst… lots of angst but it was good angst.
>>Cover Art: That cover is simply splendid and so eye-catching
>>Trope: paranormal
>>Source: I received an ARC [advanced reader copy] via the author and am leaving an honest review. The views and opinions expressed are my own.
I love a paranormal Pride and Prejudice story. This one was amazing. It had everything. It was magical, suspenseful, and mysterious all in one. There were even dragons. Yeah, my heart was racing. I love dragons. Every Austen character was true to form and yet, they were more. They carry such weight in this story with powers that will amaze the reader. Man, I wanted to be called to Pemberley myself. However, Elizabeth was not and couldn’t understand why Jane and Lydia were invited and she was left at home with her father who wouldn’t tell her anything. I began to suspect something wasn’t quite right at Longbourn. Oh-My-Goodness! What was revealed will shock and surprise. Yep, this was so cool. ICNPID [I could not put it down]. This was a great story… highly recommend it.
July 16, 2023
Magical…Mysterious…Masterful!
“Spells were small magic, temporary magic, and Elizabeth had grown beyond them long ago. Her magic was a part of her. She spoke to it without words.” (quote from the book)
Melanie Rachel has woven a fantasy story that transported me to the land of Pemberley where Magic was its essence! The book description gives an excellent explanation of the tale within. Her world building was cleverly done giving each of our beloved characters magical abilities that suited their personalities to a T! The interactions and dialogue amongst our characters slowly built as did the tension and mystery. What is the secret that Darcy, Fitzwilliam and Bingley are trying to contain? And how does Elizabeth Bennet’s unorthodox appearance impact it?
“You command all of Pemberley but do not know how to speak to a woman.” (quote from the book)
Do the sparks ever fly between Elizabeth and Darcy as he tries to determine her magical abilities…for they are more complicated than he first expected. Her appetite is ravenous, and she tires quickly…why? How can he help her build her stamina other than feeding her? And when he sets her a task more complicated, more questions than answers arise, which ultimately lead her back to Longbourn.
“Papa’s gaze held love and fear and desperation. He loved her. But that love had imprisoned her almost as completely as it had him.” (quote from the book)
This was a well-developed and exciting magical variation. Ms. Rachel’s imaginative descriptions came alive for me visually and held me in its thrall. I think it also helped that I saw the ‘Discovery of Witches’ television series where the ‘weaving of magic’ was conveyed through CGI. Wouldn’t it be grand to have this novel developed into a series as well!
I highly recommend this and all of Ms. Rachel’s variations! Brava!
July 13, 2023
I do enjoy JAFF stories with magic in them. The story description sets up premise very well and I cannot really add much here. However, know that the mystery hinted at involves several generations and had a surprise when things were finally untangled and revealed.
Papa Bennet has much to answer for and never gives a hint to his daughters why Elizabeth is not on the invite list to travel to Pemberley, a land of mages managed by Darcy with the help of his cousin, Fitzwilliam, and Bingley. The portal to that land is only opened once a year for mages to visit family and for the entrance of new invitees.
When Elizabeth finally meets Darcy her magic is something he has never observed or dealt with before. She bears close watching and guidance so he takes on that office himself, partly because he cannot see where exactly she fits in the world of Pemberley.
The author gives us a free additional epilogue at the end of the book, which I also read but for which there is no link here to be able to review it. That epilogue tied things up just a little more neatly and was a very short read.
Papa Bennet has much to answer for and never gives a hint to his daughters why Elizabeth is not on the invite list to travel to Pemberley, a land of mages managed by Darcy with the help of his cousin, Fitzwilliam, and Bingley. The portal to that land is only opened once a year for mages to visit family and for the entrance of new invitees.
When Elizabeth finally meets Darcy her magic is something he has never observed or dealt with before. She bears close watching and guidance so he takes on that office himself, partly because he cannot see where exactly she fits in the world of Pemberley.
The author gives us a free additional epilogue at the end of the book, which I also read but for which there is no link here to be able to review it. That epilogue tied things up just a little more neatly and was a very short read.
July 4, 2023
Good writing
Melanie Rachel is a good writer with a good ear for dialogue. The first half of the book was interesting, but then the story went into overdrive. Mysteries were solved, new characters were introduced, and all lovely people lived happily ever after. The ending felt both rushed and flat.
Melanie Rachel is a good writer with a good ear for dialogue. The first half of the book was interesting, but then the story went into overdrive. Mysteries were solved, new characters were introduced, and all lovely people lived happily ever after. The ending felt both rushed and flat.
July 21, 2023
Wonderful
Faeries and dragons and griffins and magic are a part of everyday life in this version of P&P. Pemberly is a place where those who have strong magic go to be trained. Jane and Lydia have already been "called". Elizabeth has powerful magic, and can't figure out why she doesn't get the call to go, and she suspects that her father is deliberately hiding her. She finally sneaks into Pemberly on her own, and Darcy discovers just how powerful she is, and why Mr Bennett was hiding her.
This author is an automatic purchase for me. She certainly knows how to craft a compelling story. I deducted a star because I feel like I've already come across this same tale, but by a different author. There are plenty of P&P variations out there involving magic, mages, and dragons. There was quite a bit of deja vu here. Fortunately, the romance is lovely, and ODC find their way to each other fairly quickly.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for an entertaining way to pass some time.
Faeries and dragons and griffins and magic are a part of everyday life in this version of P&P. Pemberly is a place where those who have strong magic go to be trained. Jane and Lydia have already been "called". Elizabeth has powerful magic, and can't figure out why she doesn't get the call to go, and she suspects that her father is deliberately hiding her. She finally sneaks into Pemberly on her own, and Darcy discovers just how powerful she is, and why Mr Bennett was hiding her.
This author is an automatic purchase for me. She certainly knows how to craft a compelling story. I deducted a star because I feel like I've already come across this same tale, but by a different author. There are plenty of P&P variations out there involving magic, mages, and dragons. There was quite a bit of deja vu here. Fortunately, the romance is lovely, and ODC find their way to each other fairly quickly.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for an entertaining way to pass some time.
July 14, 2023
Loved it.
July 4, 2023
Engaging non-canon Austenesque fantasy that will keep the reader on their toes from start to finish due to a mystery element that's revealed about 2/3 of the way through--and then the tension ramps up! Good editing. Well worth the read.
My reviews are technical so they don't have a synopsis or much in the way of subjective analysis. Instead, they explore the details that niggle the reader into dropping stars that most reviewers don't comment on.
- Plot: new, interesting, and complete. Non-canon, but using canon nods. No unnecessary side plots.
- Fast paced, particularly towards the end. Probably too fast paced in places: lack of detail in the action scenes adds confusion as to who does what and what exactly is going on.
- Dramatic tension is at the very least moderate from the start due to a mystery that's key to the plot, and the angst goes to high at periods throughout the book, with a sustained high-angst scene at the end. Not for weenies.
- Point of view is third person multiple, well achieved, with clear changes.
- The author makes a good effort to show and not tell, but a filter word was found. More showing could enhance the reader's experience.
- Language is specific to the fantasy world, yet understandable to the average reader. The author tries to use Regency British language and period technology as well. The use of non-Regency words or phrases and Americanisms was merely slightly higher than the average JAFF novel, and a couple of words were used inappropriately. A non-Regency idiom--when pigs fly--was referenced.
- Scene-setting was very complex in this book as it was almost like a character. The author had to develop magical situations and describe them well. When the scenes were docile and the angst lower, this was done better than in the action scenes where the pace was high and a lot was occurring at once because some of those scenes were less clear in the reader's eye. Yet we could still see a great deal going on. This must have been difficult to accomplish, and I admire the author for her efforts.
- Characterization was more complicated in this book because of the added dimension of the magical talent. I feel that the author chose too much of the docile and uncertain end of Austen's characterization of Elizabeth for this book when she used words to say she was strong. It was telling, not showing. Darcy, however, was more to canon, as were the Bennet sisters, Charlotte, Mr. Bennet, and Bingley.
- The romance was unusual and didn't work the way it does in most romance novels. Thus, we didn't see the usual responses and passion that's normal in a romantic novel, and the feel of the situation between the protagonists was that of a strongly bonded friendship when love was declared.
- The cover is attractive and draws one into the feel of the book. The biggest complaint I might have is that it's a bit on the dark side. However, the overall look gives a sense of magic, and the balance of the elements is just right. The size is good for an Amazon thumbnail as well.
This was a long book, yet it never slowed. The interest was maintained from the start to finish, with clarity of purpose all the way through. I suspected the answer to the mystery, but the details of the situation and the adventure that surrounded that revelation were all surprises, and I felt that I was on the tips of my toes on many occasions. I found some of the drama near the end to be less clear, as things happened that I didn't quite understand, or things didn't happen that should have happened and I felt left hanging a little, but the pace was so fast, I had to go with it. I think if I read it more slowly, I might find it was all there, or at least mostly so. At least, I hope so. I don't want to be disappointed with this book because I enjoyed the ride so much. I definitely recommend this novel to JAFF readers, especially those who enjoy a simple fantasy world with their non-canon D&E.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author, and some might suggest that this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
My reviews are technical so they don't have a synopsis or much in the way of subjective analysis. Instead, they explore the details that niggle the reader into dropping stars that most reviewers don't comment on.
- Plot: new, interesting, and complete. Non-canon, but using canon nods. No unnecessary side plots.
- Fast paced, particularly towards the end. Probably too fast paced in places: lack of detail in the action scenes adds confusion as to who does what and what exactly is going on.
- Dramatic tension is at the very least moderate from the start due to a mystery that's key to the plot, and the angst goes to high at periods throughout the book, with a sustained high-angst scene at the end. Not for weenies.
- Point of view is third person multiple, well achieved, with clear changes.
- The author makes a good effort to show and not tell, but a filter word was found. More showing could enhance the reader's experience.
- Language is specific to the fantasy world, yet understandable to the average reader. The author tries to use Regency British language and period technology as well. The use of non-Regency words or phrases and Americanisms was merely slightly higher than the average JAFF novel, and a couple of words were used inappropriately. A non-Regency idiom--when pigs fly--was referenced.
- Scene-setting was very complex in this book as it was almost like a character. The author had to develop magical situations and describe them well. When the scenes were docile and the angst lower, this was done better than in the action scenes where the pace was high and a lot was occurring at once because some of those scenes were less clear in the reader's eye. Yet we could still see a great deal going on. This must have been difficult to accomplish, and I admire the author for her efforts.
- Characterization was more complicated in this book because of the added dimension of the magical talent. I feel that the author chose too much of the docile and uncertain end of Austen's characterization of Elizabeth for this book when she used words to say she was strong. It was telling, not showing. Darcy, however, was more to canon, as were the Bennet sisters, Charlotte, Mr. Bennet, and Bingley.
- The romance was unusual and didn't work the way it does in most romance novels. Thus, we didn't see the usual responses and passion that's normal in a romantic novel, and the feel of the situation between the protagonists was that of a strongly bonded friendship when love was declared.
- The cover is attractive and draws one into the feel of the book. The biggest complaint I might have is that it's a bit on the dark side. However, the overall look gives a sense of magic, and the balance of the elements is just right. The size is good for an Amazon thumbnail as well.
This was a long book, yet it never slowed. The interest was maintained from the start to finish, with clarity of purpose all the way through. I suspected the answer to the mystery, but the details of the situation and the adventure that surrounded that revelation were all surprises, and I felt that I was on the tips of my toes on many occasions. I found some of the drama near the end to be less clear, as things happened that I didn't quite understand, or things didn't happen that should have happened and I felt left hanging a little, but the pace was so fast, I had to go with it. I think if I read it more slowly, I might find it was all there, or at least mostly so. At least, I hope so. I don't want to be disappointed with this book because I enjoyed the ride so much. I definitely recommend this novel to JAFF readers, especially those who enjoy a simple fantasy world with their non-canon D&E.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author, and some might suggest that this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
July 6, 2023
I’m not much for magical tales - I have yet to read the Harry Potter books but I truly loved this off canon story. Melanie has such a way with dialogue that I can’t but love her books.
July 4, 2023
Wow!
Another great book from Melanie Rachel.
A complex and enthralling world, woven of magic, family, betrayal and all encompassing love.
Brilliant!
Another great book from Melanie Rachel.
A complex and enthralling world, woven of magic, family, betrayal and all encompassing love.
Brilliant!
July 11, 2023
Alternate reality where magic exists
Darcy and Lizzy are characters in a magic civil war. Read this as a very good fantasy genre book with romance added. Netflix and Amazon Prime are always looking for new good IP this universe seems like a no brained for one of them. Keira Knightley could even be the elf queen!
Darcy and Lizzy are characters in a magic civil war. Read this as a very good fantasy genre book with romance added. Netflix and Amazon Prime are always looking for new good IP this universe seems like a no brained for one of them. Keira Knightley could even be the elf queen!
August 15, 2023
Well, back to adulting….sigh
Oh my word was that wonderful. The fact that Melanie Rachel put her storytelling talents to the outstanding world building of fantasy, in itself is a great gift to JAFF and her devoted readers.
I was hooked right from the beginning when Elizabeth defied her father and sneaked into the magic world two of her sisters had been returning to after Jane’s yearly break to visit home, and Lydia’s going for the first time. Mr Bennet had been restricting Elizabeth from using her magic and even locking her in her room each night for ‘her protection.’ Elizabeth knew her magic was as strong as her oldest and her youngest sisters, why hadn’t she been called? When she arrives at Pemberley, the place of mage training and education she is treated like a dangerous invader. All efforts to restrain her short of deadly force she easily repels. After she is initially tested to determine what kind of magic she has Darcy takes over her further testing and training.
The world of Pemberley is enchanting to read about. The sense of community is realistic which enhances the magic of those remarkable abilities among the inhabitants. When Darcy pushes Elizabeth too far, accidentally, and she gets hurt, many secrets start to unravel. The slow building relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth was strong and sweet. There were enough outside issues to overcome that any angst and misunderstanding between them would have been annoying and would have taken away from the action. And this story had a great action element to it. I don’t want to say more and spoil it.
I loved this story and had a difficult time putting it down when real life demanded my attention. I highly recommend this to clean-read fantasy fans as well as Austen variation lovers.
Oh my word was that wonderful. The fact that Melanie Rachel put her storytelling talents to the outstanding world building of fantasy, in itself is a great gift to JAFF and her devoted readers.
I was hooked right from the beginning when Elizabeth defied her father and sneaked into the magic world two of her sisters had been returning to after Jane’s yearly break to visit home, and Lydia’s going for the first time. Mr Bennet had been restricting Elizabeth from using her magic and even locking her in her room each night for ‘her protection.’ Elizabeth knew her magic was as strong as her oldest and her youngest sisters, why hadn’t she been called? When she arrives at Pemberley, the place of mage training and education she is treated like a dangerous invader. All efforts to restrain her short of deadly force she easily repels. After she is initially tested to determine what kind of magic she has Darcy takes over her further testing and training.
The world of Pemberley is enchanting to read about. The sense of community is realistic which enhances the magic of those remarkable abilities among the inhabitants. When Darcy pushes Elizabeth too far, accidentally, and she gets hurt, many secrets start to unravel. The slow building relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth was strong and sweet. There were enough outside issues to overcome that any angst and misunderstanding between them would have been annoying and would have taken away from the action. And this story had a great action element to it. I don’t want to say more and spoil it.
I loved this story and had a difficult time putting it down when real life demanded my attention. I highly recommend this to clean-read fantasy fans as well as Austen variation lovers.
July 14, 2023
Іще одна фентезійна авешка з власною світобудовою. Тут існують маги — нащадки фейрі, найсильніші з яких отримують запрошення до Пемберлі — краю, де володарі чарів можуть спокійно навчатися та приносити користь спільноті. Елізабет Беннет, володіючи сильною магією, з самого дитинства хотіла потрапити до Пемберлі, однак її батько казав, що її магії недостатньо і що вона має лишатися вдома. Одного року, знову не отримавши запрошення, Ліззі перевідкриває портал до Пемберлі, яким вже пройшли її сестри Джейн і Лідія.
Там її зустрічають з підозрою, але дозволяють лишитися. За її тренування береться Дарсі, який після страшного інциденту 5 років тому, перейняв на себе обов'язки очільника Пемберлі. Він намагається розкрити її магію і зрозуміти, що з нею не так і чи зможе її талант допомогти з величезною проблемою, з якою зіткнулася їхня спільнота.
Паралельно розкривається таємниця містера Беннета. Чому саме він намагався приховати Елізабет? І що сталося з королівством фейрі?
Там її зустрічають з підозрою, але дозволяють лишитися. За її тренування береться Дарсі, який після страшного інциденту 5 років тому, перейняв на себе обов'язки очільника Пемберлі. Він намагається розкрити її магію і зрозуміти, що з нею не так і чи зможе її талант допомогти з величезною проблемою, з якою зіткнулася їхня спільнота.
Паралельно розкривається таємниця містера Беннета. Чому саме він намагався приховати Елізабет? І що сталося з королівством фейрі?
August 31, 2023
This impressive Jaff fantasy must have been a monumental endeavor.
You will be enchanted as you go deeper into each very detailed chapter. Indeed by the end I was mesmerized.
This story is very intricate in its development and the author spins, weaves and interweaves this fascinating tale in a way that binds the reader almost magically! Enjoy!
You will be enchanted as you go deeper into each very detailed chapter. Indeed by the end I was mesmerized.
This story is very intricate in its development and the author spins, weaves and interweaves this fascinating tale in a way that binds the reader almost magically! Enjoy!
July 7, 2023
I don’t usually go for fantasy, but this variation had me hooked from the beginning. Well written with an interesting plot, though I found myself slightly underwhelmed with final section.
June 19, 2023
"Interwoven" by Melanie Rachel is a truly wonderful fantasy P&P variation. Mages with sufficient power get called to Pemberley. Jane Bennet was called first, and now Lydia has also been called. Elizabeth is sure that her magical abilities are good enough to be called, but her invitation never came. Mr. Bennet always asked Elizabeth to tone down and suppress her abilities. Elizabeth has finally had enough and decides to sneak into Pemberley anyway. She is successful, and the adventure starts there. The reader is swept along with Elizabeth into Melanie Rachel’s magical world.
I loved so much about this book, including: Elizabeth and Darcy’s developing relationship, the sisterly bond, the lovely descriptions of Pemberley, the exciting climax and the overriding theme that love (in all of its forms) wins. I highly recommend this book for all who love P&P, like fantasy, and wish to read something different in the P&P realm.
I received an ARC in expectation of an honest review.
I loved so much about this book, including: Elizabeth and Darcy’s developing relationship, the sisterly bond, the lovely descriptions of Pemberley, the exciting climax and the overriding theme that love (in all of its forms) wins. I highly recommend this book for all who love P&P, like fantasy, and wish to read something different in the P&P realm.
I received an ARC in expectation of an honest review.
July 13, 2023
This world building magical variation was everything I didn’t know I even needed! I don’t know where to start with this review. I am always reassured my reading Melanie’s stories that she will take me on a wonderful journey with Darcy and Lizzy and this one exceeded all expectations. I loved the Darcy was in Lizzy’s corner for the start, I loved the slow burn romance between them and then the passion and internal conversations they had. The world Melanie created was literally perfect, I like magical variations anyway but this attention to detail was just beautiful. All our favourite characters are there and very similar to their canon personalities which I appreciated. I particularly loved Charlotte and Lydia in this variation their personalities just an extended version of who they are. If you love magical variations this one will probably be your new favourite!
July 5, 2023
Amazing story!
Melanie Rachel creates a mind blowing universe full of stunning characters and wondrous beings. And still, she makes it believable. A definitively must read.
Melanie Rachel creates a mind blowing universe full of stunning characters and wondrous beings. And still, she makes it believable. A definitively must read.
September 13, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is book five of seven in the Darcy and Elizabeth’s Happily Ever Afters series. England’s best mages are called to Pemberley in their youth. Elizabeth can’t understand why she’s always left behind. Not only does her father neglect to correct what must be an oversight, he won’t allow her to use her most powerful magic at all. Each year, he further restricts Elizabeth’s movements. She can no longer wander beyond Longbourn’s boundaries, and he locks her chamber door at night with magical charms. She allows her father to believe that his efforts are enough to keep her home, but when, first her elder sister and then her youngest sister are called, Elizabeth is finished pretending. On the last day of the fifth moon, she defies her father’s edicts by following her sisters through the portal to Pemberley. Not everyone is pleased to see her. Since the attack five years ago that left Fitzwilliam Darcy in charge of hundreds of young mages, he and his cousin have been keeping a dangerous secret. The last thing he needs to add to his crushing number of responsibilities is training an uninvited mage, even a pretty, intelligent one, whose magic is unusual and unpredictable. The portal is closed, however, so he cannot send her back. He is not an easy master and she is not a compliant pupil. Still, Elizabeth is determined to find her place at Pemberley, something Darcy admires. Her talents are a puzzle, though, and her strength often falters. Perhaps there was a reason she was never called. Yet Darcy has no choice but to continue working with Elizabeth; for the secret he’s been keeping is beginning to unravel, and Elizabeth’s unique magic may be the only way to keep Pemberley from unravelling with it. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
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It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is book five of seven in the Darcy and Elizabeth’s Happily Ever Afters series. England’s best mages are called to Pemberley in their youth. Elizabeth can’t understand why she’s always left behind. Not only does her father neglect to correct what must be an oversight, he won’t allow her to use her most powerful magic at all. Each year, he further restricts Elizabeth’s movements. She can no longer wander beyond Longbourn’s boundaries, and he locks her chamber door at night with magical charms. She allows her father to believe that his efforts are enough to keep her home, but when, first her elder sister and then her youngest sister are called, Elizabeth is finished pretending. On the last day of the fifth moon, she defies her father’s edicts by following her sisters through the portal to Pemberley. Not everyone is pleased to see her. Since the attack five years ago that left Fitzwilliam Darcy in charge of hundreds of young mages, he and his cousin have been keeping a dangerous secret. The last thing he needs to add to his crushing number of responsibilities is training an uninvited mage, even a pretty, intelligent one, whose magic is unusual and unpredictable. The portal is closed, however, so he cannot send her back. He is not an easy master and she is not a compliant pupil. Still, Elizabeth is determined to find her place at Pemberley, something Darcy admires. Her talents are a puzzle, though, and her strength often falters. Perhaps there was a reason she was never called. Yet Darcy has no choice but to continue working with Elizabeth; for the secret he’s been keeping is beginning to unravel, and Elizabeth’s unique magic may be the only way to keep Pemberley from unravelling with it. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
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July 30, 2023
Have you read a magical Pride and Prejudice variation?
Well, yes, actually, I have.
But what about one with dragons?
Actually, I've read one of those too.
But what about Pride and Prejudice with fae?
This variation certainly is the most unique one I've ever read in terms of premise. It combines two of my favourite things: Pride and Prejudice, and fantasy. While this story is a bit lighter on the romantic relationship, it certainly delivers on the magic. I loved Jane (and Bingley) as healers, and Lydia (and Fitzwilliam) as warriors. I loved Charlotte and her magical ability to make delicious meals. Mary and Kitty don't feature much in this story, and Collins is completely missing (I can't see the stodgy parson as a magician). Miss Bingley is her usual jealous self, but lacks a lot of the malice she displayed in the original. Wickham is, as ever, the persuasive villain.
A fun variation for those who enjoy stories with magic, dragons, and fae.
Well, yes, actually, I have.
But what about one with dragons?
Actually, I've read one of those too.
But what about Pride and Prejudice with fae?
This variation certainly is the most unique one I've ever read in terms of premise. It combines two of my favourite things: Pride and Prejudice, and fantasy. While this story is a bit lighter on the romantic relationship, it certainly delivers on the magic. I loved Jane (and Bingley) as healers, and Lydia (and Fitzwilliam) as warriors. I loved Charlotte and her magical ability to make delicious meals. Mary and Kitty don't feature much in this story, and Collins is completely missing (I can't see the stodgy parson as a magician). Miss Bingley is her usual jealous self, but lacks a lot of the malice she displayed in the original. Wickham is, as ever, the persuasive villain.
A fun variation for those who enjoy stories with magic, dragons, and fae.
November 1, 2023
A powerful connection
In a world filled with a chasm between the magical and non magical Elizabeth Bennet feels out of place. Her magic feels huge but she has not received an invitation to the magical colony of Pemberley. After a final argument with her father, she sneaks her way there. When confronted union her entry the leading magic wielders - Darcy, Fitzwilliam, and Bingley are completely baffled by her abilities. Rather than let her train a other students, Darcy (the colony leader) chooses to train her himself to find out who they are dealing with. What follows is a journey of self discovery and the unfurling of old and painful secrets in the world of man, Pemberley, and the world of the faeries. Elizabeth had to find and discover all the facets of her power and her relationships in order to save the world (yes it sounds melodramatic but it is set up well).
I was actually really enthralled with this book. The world building was done extremely well and the original characters crafted into new but recognizable versions of themselves. The feud with Wickham was played a different way as was Caroline's devious ways. I was able to guess the 'surprise' fairly easily but it didn't really detract from the story. The background and final conclusion of that was more interesting than the reveal itself.
The writing was smooth and the storyline fluid. Minimal grammar errors and the pace was done well. Overall an excellent read.
In a world filled with a chasm between the magical and non magical Elizabeth Bennet feels out of place. Her magic feels huge but she has not received an invitation to the magical colony of Pemberley. After a final argument with her father, she sneaks her way there. When confronted union her entry the leading magic wielders - Darcy, Fitzwilliam, and Bingley are completely baffled by her abilities. Rather than let her train a other students, Darcy (the colony leader) chooses to train her himself to find out who they are dealing with. What follows is a journey of self discovery and the unfurling of old and painful secrets in the world of man, Pemberley, and the world of the faeries. Elizabeth had to find and discover all the facets of her power and her relationships in order to save the world (yes it sounds melodramatic but it is set up well).
I was actually really enthralled with this book. The world building was done extremely well and the original characters crafted into new but recognizable versions of themselves. The feud with Wickham was played a different way as was Caroline's devious ways. I was able to guess the 'surprise' fairly easily but it didn't really detract from the story. The background and final conclusion of that was more interesting than the reveal itself.
The writing was smooth and the storyline fluid. Minimal grammar errors and the pace was done well. Overall an excellent read.
July 8, 2023
This is a great reimagining of Pride and Prejudice. It has mystery, romance, adventure, and intrigue all wrapped up in a deliciously magical fantasy land. If you are looking to dip your toes into fantasy and magical fiction, this is a great way to get started, as the familiar plot beats of P&P will keep you grounded.
In this variation, Pemberley is not an estate but an entire land protected by magical portals where mages live and train in the magical arts. However, one must be summoned to Pemberley, and despite all her greatest wishes, Elizabeth Bennet has not been called to train with great mages of her time. One day she decides she's had enough, and manages to sneak into Pemberley behind her sisters, where she meets the great Fitzwilliam Darcy, paladin of Pemberley.
Darcy is intrigued by Elizabeth. Her magic is unique and unfamiliar to him, and despite his many duties, he takes her on as an apprentice. While working together, they feel that pull of attraction, but each feels they cannot act on it for different reasons.
This book starts off very tame, only to keep sucking you back in as the action ramps up for the third act. I could not put it down!
In this variation, Pemberley is not an estate but an entire land protected by magical portals where mages live and train in the magical arts. However, one must be summoned to Pemberley, and despite all her greatest wishes, Elizabeth Bennet has not been called to train with great mages of her time. One day she decides she's had enough, and manages to sneak into Pemberley behind her sisters, where she meets the great Fitzwilliam Darcy, paladin of Pemberley.
Darcy is intrigued by Elizabeth. Her magic is unique and unfamiliar to him, and despite his many duties, he takes her on as an apprentice. While working together, they feel that pull of attraction, but each feels they cannot act on it for different reasons.
This book starts off very tame, only to keep sucking you back in as the action ramps up for the third act. I could not put it down!
July 7, 2023
This is not anywhere near a typical Pride and Prejudice story, but the author took the characters and dropped them in an amazing world of magic and fairies. I could not put it down! Elizabeth Bennet has a strong magic, but her father prevents her from traveling to the fairy refuge as Jane and Lydia do. She takes matters into her own hands in such a way that the magically land of Pemberley sees her as a threat initially. She finds her place in their world, learning about herself, her magic, and becomes closer to Fitzwilliam Darcy who is the man in charge. Only together and through the power of love can they find their happily ever after and unite kingdoms.
I could NOT put this down. I loved it!
I could NOT put this down. I loved it!
July 8, 2023
This is a combination of Pride and Prejudice with magic. Those with high levels of magic are selected to go to a school of sorts. Elizabeth has had 2 sisters chosen. She does not understand why her father restricts her magic and her movements. She does not like being left behind. So what does she do? She literally breaks in and shows up.
It is an enjoyable read. Our dear couple come to an understanding much sooner than in the actual story. They must face villains and family to save the world. I do appreciate a story in which Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam come together early and face crises together. They do so in this novel.
I received an advanced reader's copy in exchange for a fair review.
It is an enjoyable read. Our dear couple come to an understanding much sooner than in the actual story. They must face villains and family to save the world. I do appreciate a story in which Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam come together early and face crises together. They do so in this novel.
I received an advanced reader's copy in exchange for a fair review.
February 19, 2024
A magical story.
My second reading of this story and as usual I enjoy and understand it so much more. After first Jane is called to Pemberley and then Lydia Lizzy doesn't understand why she is passed over. Mr Bennet tells her only to use her magic about the house and grounds and won't allow her to travel far from home. There is no Mrs Bennet and Mary and Kitty don't have any magic. Against orders Lizzy follows Jane and Lydia to the portal and It closes after them but Lizzy makes her own way through but is greeted by hostility and must work to establish herself. There is no Mr Collins but everyone else makes an appearance, only one of them with evil intent. I won't say any more but urge you to read it, I found it all thoroughly entertaining.
My second reading of this story and as usual I enjoy and understand it so much more. After first Jane is called to Pemberley and then Lydia Lizzy doesn't understand why she is passed over. Mr Bennet tells her only to use her magic about the house and grounds and won't allow her to travel far from home. There is no Mrs Bennet and Mary and Kitty don't have any magic. Against orders Lizzy follows Jane and Lydia to the portal and It closes after them but Lizzy makes her own way through but is greeted by hostility and must work to establish herself. There is no Mr Collins but everyone else makes an appearance, only one of them with evil intent. I won't say any more but urge you to read it, I found it all thoroughly entertaining.
June 30, 2023
Melanie Rachel is a must buy author for me. With each new book she just keeps getting better at her craft. This alternative universe where the Regency world has magicians and elves as a part of daily life will capture you from the first moment and not let go. I eagerly devoured this in one sitting and my only complaint is I want more! How about sequels? These characters are still recognizable but expanded in wondrous ways and burrow quickly into your heart. 😉 Another 5 star addition to her shelf of satisfying stories to be read regularly.
August 6, 2023
new and riveting take
I’ve always loved magic stories, so P&P + magic is one of my guilty pleasures. This one takes a very different look at fairies and magic than other versions I have read, and in typical Melanie Rachel style it’s beautifully written and thoughtfully crafted. It is now in my top two magical variations. Definitely worth a re-read, which, with millions of worthy books to read, is something I seldom allow myself to do. If you even think you might like a magical variation, read this one. It’s a treat.
I’ve always loved magic stories, so P&P + magic is one of my guilty pleasures. This one takes a very different look at fairies and magic than other versions I have read, and in typical Melanie Rachel style it’s beautifully written and thoughtfully crafted. It is now in my top two magical variations. Definitely worth a re-read, which, with millions of worthy books to read, is something I seldom allow myself to do. If you even think you might like a magical variation, read this one. It’s a treat.
August 19, 2023
I really enjoyed this story.
For me it started out a bit slow, but Elizabeth did have a lot to learn in the beginning.
The second half of the story really picks up, and the ending was quite surprising.
Mary, Kitty and mrs Bennet were not so prominent in this story, but I really liked this Lydia.
Mr Bingley was a very wise character in this story, which I also enjoyed, as he is often pictured as weak and silly character.
The universe that was build for this story was beautiful and unique and I could definitely picture several more books in this universe.
For me it started out a bit slow, but Elizabeth did have a lot to learn in the beginning.
The second half of the story really picks up, and the ending was quite surprising.
Mary, Kitty and mrs Bennet were not so prominent in this story, but I really liked this Lydia.
Mr Bingley was a very wise character in this story, which I also enjoyed, as he is often pictured as weak and silly character.
The universe that was build for this story was beautiful and unique and I could definitely picture several more books in this universe.
dnf
October 17, 2023The magic system was interesting but the romance seemed mostly skimmed over. Darcy and Elizabeth spent months working together, but that gets summarized over. Beyond a vague sense of increased trust, we don't get a sense of their building relationship until boom--they're declaring their love. And because I wasn't interested by the romance, I just didn't care much about the confronting the fairie court. I mean, there were dragons; I should have been more invested. Instead, I dnf-ed at about 70%.
March 10, 2024
A magical delight - 5*+
I think Melanie Rachel is now officially my number one writer in the Austenesque genres. I love her work across the board; fantasy, regency, mystery, modern.
This is a very well structured and gripping read which held my attention throughout. I am not always a big fan of fantasy novels as they so often seem to depend on warfare as the only way to progress a plot. That does not happen here with the plot being carefully crafted with a perfect balance between angst, romance and humour.
So very good!
I think Melanie Rachel is now officially my number one writer in the Austenesque genres. I love her work across the board; fantasy, regency, mystery, modern.
This is a very well structured and gripping read which held my attention throughout. I am not always a big fan of fantasy novels as they so often seem to depend on warfare as the only way to progress a plot. That does not happen here with the plot being carefully crafted with a perfect balance between angst, romance and humour.
So very good!
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