Cat got your tongue?
Lina is 17. Well, is getting ready to turn 17. A new town, a new school, a new part time job and some new spots on her shoulders. Wait, what? No more glasses? Cool. But then her hair goes blonde overnight? And what the heck is up with the fur? Shaving is hard enough to keep up with! Not even sure she wants to mention the crazy dreams, cute guy and the monsters that look like mutant wolves on crack...
Spoilers ahead.
Was this intended as the 1st of a series? It was wrote in 2013. It's 2020 now. There is zero resolution. Everything leads up to this giant climactic scene and then poof. I wouldn't call it a cliffhanger, but it is most definitely unresolved. This will be more than a bit spoilery here, but I'll try to keep it from being book ruining for future readers. Basically the story goes like this: girl feels strange in her totally new environment. Then things change internally, too. Weird dreams, whispered prophecies, physical changes, and a new attitude. New guy from work is mysterious. Finds out why. Finds out what she's becoming. Finds out she has enemies. Enemies start targeting her, have always gone after mystery guy and his family and friends. Big scene, kidnapping, fight scene, wake up, rallying speech out of a 17yo who's never been a leader in her life, fade to black. Are you confused? Yup? Join the club. There's a tense paternal relationship, which considering things is bull poop. Maternal unit makes a big reveal that if made earlier could have saved a lot of angst. Bunch of prophecies that never come to be. A coloration that doesn't make any sense. Visions that explain nothing. I almost have up at 30% because the plot had so many holes, the teen drama and TSTL moments were more than I could handle. But, I almost saw glimmers of intent and I kept going. There was no real training. No special knowledge imparted to Lina. A very basic 5 minute history lesson and poof. The ceremony made no sense. After her shift? Ok. Before, when no one knows her, has met her, is a 17yo girl with no idea of who/what she is? And the very fact that she's supposed to have these visions, tells people she thinks something is wrong, and is completely ignored- to their detriment, is cruddy. This court is never explained. The monsters have an endgame, but the cats don't. Other than don't die. Where were all the older soldiers? Never meet a one. Kids training kids? Barely any sympathy for the monsters, when their origin story is awful. They can't all be bad, but we only meet a scant handful. There has to be some rebellion in the ranks. There's talks about other packs, cats and monsters, but only that they exist. Are there more alphas? Are there ranks among alphas? The endgame the monsters have, how do they "know" that's how it will actually play out? Because if the point is balance, it would seem that answer is not correct. And, here's the kicker, if life is so awful form the moment of change for the monsters, why are they breeding more? And why do they have a painting of a certain someone, and sound almost done of her? See what I mean about the lack of resolution? There isn't really character growth, either. Lina remains exactly the same up to the last couple pages, pulls a 180 and sounds more like a seasoned general for the last handful of paragraphs, and then book's done. Maybe the author came to the end of this train of thought? Maybe this was intended to be left this way? Readers are encouraged to visualize their own endings? Maybe the author's life changed and this project was abandoned. Which I hope was not the case, unless it was for something good like parenthood. I know it's been 7yrs, but, as a reader, I really hope that they come back. A few tweaks here and there, a little fleshing out, tone down the teen drama a hair, a little more explanation, a wrap up in the next, and this could be a very interesting 2 part series. I liked the prophecies, the visions, the bad guys tormented by their very nature that's outside their control. The bones are there. And the editing was well done.