3.5 ⭐️’s. I wanted to see her grovel some to him.
Good fun for the most part.
Cute, sweet, lightly funny, and mostly harmless.
My biggest issue was that I got frustrated and annoyed with the FMC.
I like that the author made it about her, building her boundaries, accepting that she had a right to them, and that she needed to own them.
What I didn’t like, was that the MMC’s needs and feelings got shoved to the side in favour of her’s entirely.
Here he was, Christmas, with only her for support, her entire family disliking him, making for a fairly lonely and miserable time.
What does she do, abandons him because it’s getting too confusing and messy.
She has her whole family making her feel loved and welcome. They may be screwing up at times, and upsetting her, but she’s not alone, and she’s in charge.
She has the safe word, not him. She gets asked if she’s okay with all that’s happening, never him. It’s always about what she needs and is okay with.
For me to love her as much as him, to think she’s really the sweetie that the story sets her up to be, I needed to see more concern for him, and his Christmas.
To care if he was enjoying himself, not to make it all about her needs and hurts.
At one point she gets a txt from a girlfriend, telling her has insecurities and needs more kindness.
She turns this into about wether he’s no5 really an asshole, and might be someone she actually wants..😳😡 that’s low and selfish.
But other than that thread running through it, it actually was a really pleasant Christmas romance.
I love me some good flaws, but I need to see some growth and recognition.
This was all about her being treated better, and speaking up.
Nothing about her treatment of him, and those errors [she did stand up for him when others were unfair to him, that was good].