This book, while far from great literature, tells a good story based on a great premise. In very brief summary, a seemingly above-board organization, headed by an ambitious neurosurgeon, performs covert "enhancement" procedures on children who have learning disabilities. Wealthy parents of shamefully "slow" children willingly agree to these procedures so their kids can "follow in daddy's and/or mommy's footsteps". In a world where intellect is valued almost as much as money, parents feel bound to ensure their children are as intelligent as possible. Only one problem: the procedure has unexpected (and, of course, well-concealed) consequences--and the organization won't tolerate any whistle-blowing. Not from anyone.
While this author, like so many scifi authors, is better at conveying interesting ideas than telling a story, this was an enjoyable read. There are some grammatical issues and awkward structure throughout, but nothing egregious (and anyway a decent editor should have caught these). It starts slow, but give it a chance; it really picks up near the end. And be careful: there are a few unanticipated bits of horrifying plot line which may be a bit disturbing to the unsuspecting reader.