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Light & Shadow #1
Shadowborn
It has been only two generations since Arthur Warden seized the throne of Heddred from the Conradines, and now the crown rests on the head of Garad, sickly and weak. Shadows gather: legacies of the centuries-long rivalries for power, old betrayals, the endless plots of the courtiers, and the murmur of rebellion in the southern provinces ...
Catwin, plucked from her life at the edge of the Kingdom, is thrust abruptly into the world of the Court when she is chosen by the Duke of Voltur to be a Shadow-spy, shield, and blade-to his niece, the Lady Miriel DeVere. The Duke's ruthlessness is legendary, and he will stop at nothing to become the power behind the throne, using Miriel as a pawn to catch Garad's heart.
But the Duke's carefully-laid plans are only a piece of the intrigue of the court, and greater forces than Catwin can imagine are massed against her, determined to eliminate Miriel and impose a new order of their own. If Catwin and Miriel are to survive, they must learn quickly who to trust, and when to turn their skills against the very people who have trained them ...
Catwin, plucked from her life at the edge of the Kingdom, is thrust abruptly into the world of the Court when she is chosen by the Duke of Voltur to be a Shadow-spy, shield, and blade-to his niece, the Lady Miriel DeVere. The Duke's ruthlessness is legendary, and he will stop at nothing to become the power behind the throne, using Miriel as a pawn to catch Garad's heart.
But the Duke's carefully-laid plans are only a piece of the intrigue of the court, and greater forces than Catwin can imagine are massed against her, determined to eliminate Miriel and impose a new order of their own. If Catwin and Miriel are to survive, they must learn quickly who to trust, and when to turn their skills against the very people who have trained them ...
266 pages, Paperback
First published April 8, 2013
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Moira Katson
34 books96 followersI am a transplant to the frozen wastes of the midwest, learning to love fried food on a stick, hot dish, and the winters. Having recently bought a house, I am also learning everything from how to wire chandeliers to how best to paint a room. (Also, I spend too much time at Menard's.)
I have been writing since I was old enough to read, and I write on every scrap of paper I can get my hands on. In the meantime, I read - oh, I read so much! I like to read articles about science, about economics, about psychology and neuroscience and sociology... Some of my greatest character inspiration has come from true-life tales of people at the center of historical events, and some of it has come from the "what-ifs" that academic inquiry produces.
I encourage you to stop past my website for the latest news on my work! You can find print copies of my work on Amazon and CreateSpace, and my books are available for Kindle, Nook, and through all channels served by Smashwords!
I have been writing since I was old enough to read, and I write on every scrap of paper I can get my hands on. In the meantime, I read - oh, I read so much! I like to read articles about science, about economics, about psychology and neuroscience and sociology... Some of my greatest character inspiration has come from true-life tales of people at the center of historical events, and some of it has come from the "what-ifs" that academic inquiry produces.
I encourage you to stop past my website for the latest news on my work! You can find print copies of my work on Amazon and CreateSpace, and my books are available for Kindle, Nook, and through all channels served by Smashwords!
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August 2, 2016Why it has 'Vampire Academy' kind of feeling?
July 17, 2013
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14-year-old Catwin was only minutes old when her mother spoke a prophecy that one day she would be betrayed, and sent her to the castle to be raised by the wet nurse there. Now at the age of 14, Catwin has been selected by the Duke’s assassin Temar to become like him – a shadow.
Now Catwin stands to play a part in what will soon come to pass. She must become to the Duke’s niece and heir (Miriel –also 14), what the Temar is to the duke – his shadow, his protector, his assassin. Catwin must learn to know everybody whilst escaping notice herself, to blend into the shadows where no one can see her, and to eavesdrop at all times.
Can Catwin keep Miriel safe? What are the Duke’s plans for Miriel? And is Miriel really destined to marry the King?
This was a really good fantasy story about two quite different girls, and their differing positions in life.
Catwin was a strong character who learned quickly, and knew how to trust her instincts. I felt quite sorry for her that her mother had basically abandoned her, and that she really had very few people who even knew her, never mind loved her, but Catwin wasn’t the sort of girl who wallowed in self-pity, she knew what she needed to do, and she did it, even when it meant putting her own life in danger.
Miriel started off as a very spoiled child. She came across as quite snooty, and it wasn’t ‘til quite a way into the story that we began to see her true colours, and learned exactly what it was that she was dealing with. I thought that her uncle the duke was quite harsh on her, although I suppose he was that way with everyone. He did seem to impose really strict rules on both Miriel and Catwin though, and was happy to dish out punishments when he felt he had been disobeyed.
I liked the storyline in this book, and I managed to keep up with it most of the way. I did get a little confused over talks of different monarchs, and different strategies in the upcoming war, but mainly the story was straightforward, and I knew what was going on most of the time.
The ending of this was quite enlightening, although the ending was a bit of a cliff-hanger too unfortunately, it seems that we will have to read the next book if we want to find out what happens to Miriel and Catwin next, and who the king will marry.
Overall; a good YA fantasy story.
7.5 out of 10.
14-year-old Catwin was only minutes old when her mother spoke a prophecy that one day she would be betrayed, and sent her to the castle to be raised by the wet nurse there. Now at the age of 14, Catwin has been selected by the Duke’s assassin Temar to become like him – a shadow.
Now Catwin stands to play a part in what will soon come to pass. She must become to the Duke’s niece and heir (Miriel –also 14), what the Temar is to the duke – his shadow, his protector, his assassin. Catwin must learn to know everybody whilst escaping notice herself, to blend into the shadows where no one can see her, and to eavesdrop at all times.
Can Catwin keep Miriel safe? What are the Duke’s plans for Miriel? And is Miriel really destined to marry the King?
This was a really good fantasy story about two quite different girls, and their differing positions in life.
Catwin was a strong character who learned quickly, and knew how to trust her instincts. I felt quite sorry for her that her mother had basically abandoned her, and that she really had very few people who even knew her, never mind loved her, but Catwin wasn’t the sort of girl who wallowed in self-pity, she knew what she needed to do, and she did it, even when it meant putting her own life in danger.
Miriel started off as a very spoiled child. She came across as quite snooty, and it wasn’t ‘til quite a way into the story that we began to see her true colours, and learned exactly what it was that she was dealing with. I thought that her uncle the duke was quite harsh on her, although I suppose he was that way with everyone. He did seem to impose really strict rules on both Miriel and Catwin though, and was happy to dish out punishments when he felt he had been disobeyed.
I liked the storyline in this book, and I managed to keep up with it most of the way. I did get a little confused over talks of different monarchs, and different strategies in the upcoming war, but mainly the story was straightforward, and I knew what was going on most of the time.
The ending of this was quite enlightening, although the ending was a bit of a cliff-hanger too unfortunately, it seems that we will have to read the next book if we want to find out what happens to Miriel and Catwin next, and who the king will marry.
Overall; a good YA fantasy story.
7.5 out of 10.
May 23, 2013
This is a medieval fantasy tale that does a great job of building a story that keeps the pages turning. The story builds relatively slowly with the introduction of the main characters, their various attributes, flaws, histories and choices. As the pace of the story builds, the layers of the plot become apparent and the intrigue plays out like a complex chess game.
The story is essential told from the perspective of Catwin and therefore we see the world and understand the choices through the eyes of the growing child. The characterizations are relatable and one can feel empathy and enmity towards the players in the game and sometimes a little of both.
Overall the plot is very well developed and the story keeps going at a high enough pace with a few good surprises along the way making this a delightful book to read and enjoy.
The story is essential told from the perspective of Catwin and therefore we see the world and understand the choices through the eyes of the growing child. The characterizations are relatable and one can feel empathy and enmity towards the players in the game and sometimes a little of both.
Overall the plot is very well developed and the story keeps going at a high enough pace with a few good surprises along the way making this a delightful book to read and enjoy.
May 14, 2015
Despite the fact that Catwin was rejected by her family as a baby, and lives in a cold castle in an inhospitable place, she has led a life of freedom and kindness. She only answers to Roine, the castle healer and her mother-figure; and spends the rest of the time causing mischief. Unfortunately, her ability to sneak into places she shouldn't, brings her to the attention of the Duke, a man keen to exploit the skills of those around him. He ties Catwin's fate to that of his niece, Lady Miriel Devere. Soon Catwin and Miriel are thrust into a world of politics and danger, all to win the hand of a sickly king.
I thought this was a fantastic little book. It's a reasonably short read at 270 pages, but Katson manages to fit so much into it, without ever letting the book get bogged down, the story just flows and carries you along.
I always love a little political intrigue (as evidenced by my absolute love of books like The Other Boleyn Girl and Tales Of The Otori) and this has plenty. A young unmarried king, with courtiers vying for his attention (some with more lethal methods than others); never knowing who to trust.
Catwin is a fun character, she is a simple peasant girl who has been lucky to escape all notice. Because of her inauspicious birth, nobody wants anything to do with her, so she is free to take whatever path she will.
But when she comes to the attention of the Duke, she has to sacrifice that freedom. She is to become the shadow to Miriel's light, to be invisible and unnoticed for the rest of her life. To be Miriel's most unobtrusive line of defence; and the Duke's spy.
At first, the lessons she must learn from Temar are simply games, challenges that she revels in. But soon, Catwin starts to realise how demanding (and painful) her role will be.
Lady Miriel Devere has been raised like a princess from the moment her uncle realised that she was useful. She has purposefully been kept away from the capital, living her whole life in seclusion, with her (somewhat disgraced) mother. Miriel is the spoilt little madam, who soon makes Catwin's life hell, when the Duke forces them to work together. As Catwin is posing as Miriel's servant; Miriel knows exactly how to apply a constant level of misery on the peasant girl.
That being said, I think Miriel was one of my favourite characters. The interactions between her and Catwin were always entertaining; and as you go on through the book, you really start to admire her strength.
The plot... gah, this is the hard part about writing reviews about this kind of book. Especially when I love the story. I don't want to share anything, because each tiny revelation builds up to make this book awesome.
So, you know what, the book is permanently free to download, so go get it and tell me what you think!
I thought this was a fantastic little book. It's a reasonably short read at 270 pages, but Katson manages to fit so much into it, without ever letting the book get bogged down, the story just flows and carries you along.
I always love a little political intrigue (as evidenced by my absolute love of books like The Other Boleyn Girl and Tales Of The Otori) and this has plenty. A young unmarried king, with courtiers vying for his attention (some with more lethal methods than others); never knowing who to trust.
Catwin is a fun character, she is a simple peasant girl who has been lucky to escape all notice. Because of her inauspicious birth, nobody wants anything to do with her, so she is free to take whatever path she will.
But when she comes to the attention of the Duke, she has to sacrifice that freedom. She is to become the shadow to Miriel's light, to be invisible and unnoticed for the rest of her life. To be Miriel's most unobtrusive line of defence; and the Duke's spy.
At first, the lessons she must learn from Temar are simply games, challenges that she revels in. But soon, Catwin starts to realise how demanding (and painful) her role will be.
Lady Miriel Devere has been raised like a princess from the moment her uncle realised that she was useful. She has purposefully been kept away from the capital, living her whole life in seclusion, with her (somewhat disgraced) mother. Miriel is the spoilt little madam, who soon makes Catwin's life hell, when the Duke forces them to work together. As Catwin is posing as Miriel's servant; Miriel knows exactly how to apply a constant level of misery on the peasant girl.
That being said, I think Miriel was one of my favourite characters. The interactions between her and Catwin were always entertaining; and as you go on through the book, you really start to admire her strength.
The plot... gah, this is the hard part about writing reviews about this kind of book. Especially when I love the story. I don't want to share anything, because each tiny revelation builds up to make this book awesome.
So, you know what, the book is permanently free to download, so go get it and tell me what you think!
August 5, 2013
I picked up Shadowborn during the Smashwords Summer Sale, but I had neglected to pick up the next two books...which I bitterly regretted late the other night when I didn't have the ability to connect to Amazon to order them.
To get the bad out of the way, Shadowborn had some very obvious gaffes in editing that would send me out of the story pretty quickly. There weren't a lot, but it was the sort of things that made reading the line awkward and made you pause (wayward "to" when it should be "the" for instance). Edited 8/5: The author has re-issued a corrected version of the Trilogy on Smashwords, Amazon and Kobo. My review is from the previous version before the upload of the revised versions.
Also the book takes a long while to get to where it wants the reader to be at in terms of the relationship between Miriel and Catwin.
As for the good! Mysterious prophecy, sneaky girls, sneakier assassins and learning that you can't expect life to be fair make for an engaging fantasy.
Told from Catwin's POV, but in the past tense (its almost as if she's narrating her life story to someone), we see her go from a mischievous and curious child to a wary, young woman. She wants something more from her life, but when she's given that something more she balks at what that really means. Several times Catwin makes mention of 'If only I had known...well things could have been different.' as she talks about important turning points in her young life. Would she have taken that dare if she knew the pain she'd later endure? Would she have trusted Temar if she knew what lurked behind his questions?
Because Catwin only knows what she remembers and suspects happened, much of Miriel is a mystery at first that we puzzle out as Catwin does. Neither girl is given an easy task, though they both think the other lucky for theirs. The Duke's sledgehammer approach to getting what he wants puts the girls at odds with each other when it would have been a benefit for them to be friends. A lesson learned late and at great cost I might add.
So what's in store for these two? Well Catwin's prophecy hangs over their heads (who betrays her? or does she betray someone? what will end?) as well as Miriel's own need for independence and disillusionment with the world. So in other words FUN TIMES KIDDIES.
Also the book takes a long while to get to where it wants the reader to be at in terms of the relationship between Miriel and Catwin.
As for the good! Mysterious prophecy, sneaky girls, sneakier assassins and learning that you can't expect life to be fair make for an engaging fantasy.
Told from Catwin's POV, but in the past tense (its almost as if she's narrating her life story to someone), we see her go from a mischievous and curious child to a wary, young woman. She wants something more from her life, but when she's given that something more she balks at what that really means. Several times Catwin makes mention of 'If only I had known...well things could have been different.' as she talks about important turning points in her young life. Would she have taken that dare if she knew the pain she'd later endure? Would she have trusted Temar if she knew what lurked behind his questions?
Because Catwin only knows what she remembers and suspects happened, much of Miriel is a mystery at first that we puzzle out as Catwin does. Neither girl is given an easy task, though they both think the other lucky for theirs. The Duke's sledgehammer approach to getting what he wants puts the girls at odds with each other when it would have been a benefit for them to be friends. A lesson learned late and at great cost I might add.
So what's in store for these two? Well Catwin's prophecy hangs over their heads (who betrays her? or does she betray someone? what will end?) as well as Miriel's own need for independence and disillusionment with the world. So in other words FUN TIMES KIDDIES.
July 29, 2015
I’ve never been a big fan of the medieval genre before. No matter how much fantasy you throw in, Kings and Queens and the Court haven’t ever done it for me. So, when Moira contacted me about reviewing Shadowborn, I was pretty torn. Yes, the book has pretty good reviews… but would it be interesting enough to keep my attention?
Shadowborn moves a slow and steady pace. One thing I saw mentioned in a few reviews is that there isn’t a whole lot of action (danger, threat against Miriel) going on. Most people have counted this against the book. However, it felt right to me. I feel like Shadowborn was laying the ground work for the trilogy and it did so wonderfully. While there wasn’t a lot of action, there was a lot happening.
Moira’s writing is fantastic. I love that Shadowborn is done in first person. I think it added extra mystery to the story since we’re only able to see things as Catwin sees them. The characters are masterfully done. All of the characters had their own personality and depth. I loved watching Catwin and Miriel evolve through the story. I cannot wait to see how the story continues.
Shadowborn moves a slow and steady pace. One thing I saw mentioned in a few reviews is that there isn’t a whole lot of action (danger, threat against Miriel) going on. Most people have counted this against the book. However, it felt right to me. I feel like Shadowborn was laying the ground work for the trilogy and it did so wonderfully. While there wasn’t a lot of action, there was a lot happening.
Moira’s writing is fantastic. I love that Shadowborn is done in first person. I think it added extra mystery to the story since we’re only able to see things as Catwin sees them. The characters are masterfully done. All of the characters had their own personality and depth. I loved watching Catwin and Miriel evolve through the story. I cannot wait to see how the story continues.
May 23, 2013
What I liked:
-Catwin and Miriel. The main character of the story really connected with me. She was intelligent and resourceful—but not so smart that it was unbelievable for someone with no previous education or training. It was interesting to read about her life and her training under Temar, and how she saw the changing world around her. Catwin and Miriel both seemed like very complex characters. Just when I thought I got a read on Miriel, she did or said something that surprised me, especially when it came to her relationship with Catwin. She was a very closeted character, but there were brief moments where she opened up and you could tell there was more to her than she let on.
-Secondary characters. There really are no flat characters in this story. Even the ones that don’t get as much page time as the main ones. Temar was a complete mystery, but even though we know next to nothing about his life and his past, he still managed to be three-dimensional. The Duke was a mystery to me as well. He could go from being a fair ruler that seemed to generally care about the people in his service to being a cold-hearted, merciless man not above using his niece to his advantage.
-Writing style. I really liked the way this book was written. It was as if the main character were sitting beside me, telling me this story from start to finish. It was easy to be drawn into the story and I found myself getting to know the characters and rooting for them.
-Court. I’ve always enjoyed books about knights and kings and medieval-type lands. This book focused mainly on Catwin’s training and Miriel’s introduction to court life. I love reading about the other girls, the dresses, the dancing, the manners, and the relationships between the people in power. I thought the court in this book was very realistic and well thought out.
What I disliked:
-Action. I guess I should say the lack of it. Other than two small incidents, there didn’t seem to be much in the way of action. To add some more to the story, I would have liked a more in-depth look at Catwin’s training—perhaps a longer, more detailed fight between Temar and Catwin or maybe more weapons training. Instead I kind of felt like Catwin didn’t really have to work for her training.
-History. Some of the facts about this book were a little hard for me to keep straight in my head. It was a bit confusing at times to remember who killed who to ascend to power, or who led what army.
Overall, this was a wonderfully written book that captivated me from start to finish. I enjoyed the characters and the mystery and suspense surrounding the rebellion and the threat of war. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone, but especially to people who are fans of strong female role models and court intrigue. 4.5
-Catwin and Miriel. The main character of the story really connected with me. She was intelligent and resourceful—but not so smart that it was unbelievable for someone with no previous education or training. It was interesting to read about her life and her training under Temar, and how she saw the changing world around her. Catwin and Miriel both seemed like very complex characters. Just when I thought I got a read on Miriel, she did or said something that surprised me, especially when it came to her relationship with Catwin. She was a very closeted character, but there were brief moments where she opened up and you could tell there was more to her than she let on.
-Secondary characters. There really are no flat characters in this story. Even the ones that don’t get as much page time as the main ones. Temar was a complete mystery, but even though we know next to nothing about his life and his past, he still managed to be three-dimensional. The Duke was a mystery to me as well. He could go from being a fair ruler that seemed to generally care about the people in his service to being a cold-hearted, merciless man not above using his niece to his advantage.
-Writing style. I really liked the way this book was written. It was as if the main character were sitting beside me, telling me this story from start to finish. It was easy to be drawn into the story and I found myself getting to know the characters and rooting for them.
-Court. I’ve always enjoyed books about knights and kings and medieval-type lands. This book focused mainly on Catwin’s training and Miriel’s introduction to court life. I love reading about the other girls, the dresses, the dancing, the manners, and the relationships between the people in power. I thought the court in this book was very realistic and well thought out.
What I disliked:
-Action. I guess I should say the lack of it. Other than two small incidents, there didn’t seem to be much in the way of action. To add some more to the story, I would have liked a more in-depth look at Catwin’s training—perhaps a longer, more detailed fight between Temar and Catwin or maybe more weapons training. Instead I kind of felt like Catwin didn’t really have to work for her training.
-History. Some of the facts about this book were a little hard for me to keep straight in my head. It was a bit confusing at times to remember who killed who to ascend to power, or who led what army.
Overall, this was a wonderfully written book that captivated me from start to finish. I enjoyed the characters and the mystery and suspense surrounding the rebellion and the threat of war. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone, but especially to people who are fans of strong female role models and court intrigue. 4.5
September 14, 2013
Fantasy has been my favorite genre to read for, like, forever. I go through spells where I'm not especially mentally prepared to read it, but every time I read one I get so happy and remember exactly why it's my favorite genre. Shadowborn is no exception. It promises court intrigue and assassin-y fun, and that's exactly what you get!
Catwin lives with a prophecy over her head, a prophecy that made her mother give her up the day she was born. Catwin will be betrayed, and that betrayal will change the balance. She doesn't know any more, but that prophecy haunts her, even as she rockets toward its conclusion. She begins the book as a daring and mischievous child but becomes a calculating and discerning young adult--over a relatively short period of time. Catwin really isn't sure she wants to be a part of what she's gotten herself into, especially at first, but she knows there is no way out. She has to live her decisions to their conclusion, and it's great to read.
The relationship between Catwin and Miriel is really fascinating. It's a constant give and take between them, and they're never really friends, at least in a traditional sense. They're allies, and they're growing to trust one another through trial and error. Each is young and petty and believes the other to think little of them, so it's a hard-earned balance, but it's so fun to read. In many ways, I think--as much as the book is about the state of the country and its balance--the book is really about the light and dark of Miriel and Catwin. Who is the light and who is the dark, really?
There's not a ton of traditional action here. Most of the story is court intrigue and training of the girls, but that's really interesting to read--at least to me! We're given a really great groundwork for the entire series; not only do we know the history of the country, but we're familiar with all of the major players and know their general motives. I think this will set the stage for some really action-packed sequels!
And can I mention that I loved the writing style? A lot of books adopt a general style that would work for any genre any time, but Moira writes in a style that perfectly fits this book. It's formalized and a little antiquated in structure--and I LOVED it.
Shadowborn is a standout fantasy novel and has everything I love. It's got characters that are flawed but likable, a medieval setting, a lovely sense of foreboding, drama drama drama, and a friendship that's just waiting to blossom. Moira Katson has created a world that utterly intrigues me and I can't wait to get back into it! (And, hey! There's nothing to lose in trying it; this book--the first--is free!)
You can find this review and many more fun things on my blog: Paper Cuts.
Catwin lives with a prophecy over her head, a prophecy that made her mother give her up the day she was born. Catwin will be betrayed, and that betrayal will change the balance. She doesn't know any more, but that prophecy haunts her, even as she rockets toward its conclusion. She begins the book as a daring and mischievous child but becomes a calculating and discerning young adult--over a relatively short period of time. Catwin really isn't sure she wants to be a part of what she's gotten herself into, especially at first, but she knows there is no way out. She has to live her decisions to their conclusion, and it's great to read.
The relationship between Catwin and Miriel is really fascinating. It's a constant give and take between them, and they're never really friends, at least in a traditional sense. They're allies, and they're growing to trust one another through trial and error. Each is young and petty and believes the other to think little of them, so it's a hard-earned balance, but it's so fun to read. In many ways, I think--as much as the book is about the state of the country and its balance--the book is really about the light and dark of Miriel and Catwin. Who is the light and who is the dark, really?
There's not a ton of traditional action here. Most of the story is court intrigue and training of the girls, but that's really interesting to read--at least to me! We're given a really great groundwork for the entire series; not only do we know the history of the country, but we're familiar with all of the major players and know their general motives. I think this will set the stage for some really action-packed sequels!
And can I mention that I loved the writing style? A lot of books adopt a general style that would work for any genre any time, but Moira writes in a style that perfectly fits this book. It's formalized and a little antiquated in structure--and I LOVED it.
Shadowborn is a standout fantasy novel and has everything I love. It's got characters that are flawed but likable, a medieval setting, a lovely sense of foreboding, drama drama drama, and a friendship that's just waiting to blossom. Moira Katson has created a world that utterly intrigues me and I can't wait to get back into it! (And, hey! There's nothing to lose in trying it; this book--the first--is free!)
You can find this review and many more fun things on my blog: Paper Cuts.
July 15, 2013
This is the story of a young servant girl who is forced to become a "shadow" for the Duke's niece, Miriel. As her shadow, our hero Catwin will be her bodygaurd, spy, and assassin. The Duke has plans for his niece to capture the heart of the king, and both must go to court at the age of 14 to put his plans into action. While Catwin must train physically and learn poison antidotes, observation skills, and the like, Miriel also endures constant lessons and practice related to the skill of being the perfect courtier. Neither girl asks for her role, and while both perform well, they find that they are at cross-purposes with the Duke. Naturally, trouble ensues.
This book disappointed me; I was interested in the premise, but found the execution lacking. I noted a large handful of typos and a couple of bothersome inconsistencies. I also thought the book was extremely repetitive. The story is told in Catwin's first person perspective, and she seems to make the same "revelations" again and again.
My biggest quarrel, however, is with the ending. It is a bit of a cliff hanger. Not a very interesting or climactic cliff hanger, though. The story sort of peters out, unfinished. I know, of course, that you are supposed to run out and buy the second book in the series to learn what happens next. But I, for one, am not interested in several hundred more pages of this; I just wanted to know how the story I was reading ends. I see this more and more with YA books that conceived as a series. They end with a cliff-hanger, presumably to entice the readers to buy the next book, but they have not yet earned their audience. If you ask me, books, especially early in a series, should be self contained. Let your audience enjoy a complete story while deciding if they are going to continue on. Once I have developed a bond with your characters and you have earned my respect as a story teller, I might be more forgiving of cliff hanger endings, but at this stage, it just seems like a cheap trick and leaves me with an even worse impression of the book than I already had.
This book disappointed me; I was interested in the premise, but found the execution lacking. I noted a large handful of typos and a couple of bothersome inconsistencies. I also thought the book was extremely repetitive. The story is told in Catwin's first person perspective, and she seems to make the same "revelations" again and again.
My biggest quarrel, however, is with the ending. It is a bit of a cliff hanger. Not a very interesting or climactic cliff hanger, though. The story sort of peters out, unfinished. I know, of course, that you are supposed to run out and buy the second book in the series to learn what happens next. But I, for one, am not interested in several hundred more pages of this; I just wanted to know how the story I was reading ends. I see this more and more with YA books that conceived as a series. They end with a cliff-hanger, presumably to entice the readers to buy the next book, but they have not yet earned their audience. If you ask me, books, especially early in a series, should be self contained. Let your audience enjoy a complete story while deciding if they are going to continue on. Once I have developed a bond with your characters and you have earned my respect as a story teller, I might be more forgiving of cliff hanger endings, but at this stage, it just seems like a cheap trick and leaves me with an even worse impression of the book than I already had.
September 30, 2015
A medieval fantasy that focuses on Catwin, a young shadow (that is, bodyguard, assassin and spy) in training. Catwin is a peasant who comes to the attention of her Duke after trying to steal the dagger of the Duke's shadow. She is given a task, learn to be a shadow to protect the Duke's niece and heir, Mirel, from the Duke's enemies. Catwin and Mirel become the Duke's tools in his plans to keep favour with the young king. Both girls struggle to hold onto their ideals and their lives in the king's court, where everyone is their enemy, especially the Duke.
The author lists Tamora Pierce as one of her inspirations, and you can see it in this book.
There is very little action. The strength of this book is characterization of Catwin and Mirel, and the relationship between the two. They never quite become friends, but progress from enemies to allies as the story unfolds. Also, the layers of intrigue at court are complex and interesting.
The bad - the cliff hanger ending. This book doesn't complete so much as it simply stops, which is annoying.
5/10
The author lists Tamora Pierce as one of her inspirations, and you can see it in this book.
There is very little action. The strength of this book is characterization of Catwin and Mirel, and the relationship between the two. They never quite become friends, but progress from enemies to allies as the story unfolds. Also, the layers of intrigue at court are complex and interesting.
The bad - the cliff hanger ending. This book doesn't complete so much as it simply stops, which is annoying.
5/10
January 1, 2016
Review is coming.
So I meant to write a review after letting the story rest for a day or two in my head, but I ended up reading the rest of the trilogy.
At this point I don't think I have the emotional capacity to write anything. All I can say is that people need to read this book! Like now!
This plot, the characters, the drama, the intrigue, the love and betrayal, the desire and pain all combine together to give you a masterpiece.
This series wasn't perfect. There were quite a few spelling and grammar errors (which I've heard have been fixed since), but for those of you who read this review, I want you to look past that and read the trilogy anyway. It has changed my life in a way I can't describe in words (this may also be because I just finished reading the last book an hour ago and my emotions haven't settled yet). Whether or not you think this book will be life changing, take a gamble and try it anyway. You'll be surprised to read something so different from any other young adult fantasy book.
Please. Read.
Overall rating of trilogy: 4.5/5 stars
So I meant to write a review after letting the story rest for a day or two in my head, but I ended up reading the rest of the trilogy.
At this point I don't think I have the emotional capacity to write anything. All I can say is that people need to read this book! Like now!
This plot, the characters, the drama, the intrigue, the love and betrayal, the desire and pain all combine together to give you a masterpiece.
This series wasn't perfect. There were quite a few spelling and grammar errors (which I've heard have been fixed since), but for those of you who read this review, I want you to look past that and read the trilogy anyway. It has changed my life in a way I can't describe in words (this may also be because I just finished reading the last book an hour ago and my emotions haven't settled yet). Whether or not you think this book will be life changing, take a gamble and try it anyway. You'll be surprised to read something so different from any other young adult fantasy book.
Please. Read.
Overall rating of trilogy: 4.5/5 stars
November 15, 2013
I really liked this book! Political intrigue doesn't usually include such young characters in a believable way, but I enjoyed finding out how the two girls went from being pure pawns to having some small amount of power. I wish that they were better friends, but when push comes to shove, they did finally come to mutual terms as allies. I hope they grow closer in the following books. I can't wait to read the rest of this series!
May 18, 2014
I was fascinated by the concept of this book. Two girls are forced to spend their time together. One is well born, the other a peasant. The peasant is trained to be the bodyguard for the other who is being trained to capture the attention of the king. Lots of political intrigue and plotting takes place. The story dragged in a couple of places, but overall an enjoyable and quick read.
June 9, 2013
An enjoyable read that builds with intensity and intrigue!
In Shadowborn Katson introduces the reader to Catwin and Miriel, foils that develop together with the common goal to learn who they are up against and how to stay alive.
(cross-posted to Amazon and Barnes and Noble.)
In Shadowborn Katson introduces the reader to Catwin and Miriel, foils that develop together with the common goal to learn who they are up against and how to stay alive.
(cross-posted to Amazon and Barnes and Noble.)
December 15, 2016
Politics and Power
Catwin is a fascinating character, and I loved this story-full of depth, mystery, politics, power, and what it means to be Queen. Moira Katson is a new favorite author, and I look forward to more of her excellent books.
Catwin is a fascinating character, and I loved this story-full of depth, mystery, politics, power, and what it means to be Queen. Moira Katson is a new favorite author, and I look forward to more of her excellent books.
August 7, 2018
This is a very promising start to a series. It follows Catwin as she's elevated to serving the Duke by guarding his niece - Lady Miriel. Catwin struggles to learn her role and understand the complex machinations at play among the nobility.
The main characters in this novel (particularly women) are especially well executed. They are very human, with flaws and strengths evident to the reader. I found the male characters were less well-drawn, but this has more to do with the small amount of time Catwin spends in their company and the power differential at play, which prohibits the kind of intimacy that would allow the reader to know them well. Still, Catwin's observations are very revealing, and the reader learns a lot through her eyes.
The world-building is, likewise, excellent, especially as it pertains to the political maneuverings - both large and small. Being set amongst the nobility means that there are forever power plays taking place, and world events also cast long shadows over the goings on.
The relationships between Catwin and Miriel, Catwin and Temar, Miriel and the Duke are all carefully drawn and rather fraught. I think the author has done a stellar job of capturing the difficult nature of girls' relationships - especially where so much is at stake!
One area I felt could have been improved is that there's very little warmth and joy in this book. It's unfortunate that these elements weren't conveyed very well. (Most humans will find some moments of joy - no matter how fleeting - in prolonged difficult circumstances. The best example I can think of is the scene in The Shawshank Redemption where the inmates are tarring the roof and get to enjoy a cold drink. It's a fairly short scene where not much action takes place, and yet, it's dramatic shift in tone that stays with the audience).
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and look forward to reading more from this author.
I received a copy of this novel through Voracious Readers Only.
The main characters in this novel (particularly women) are especially well executed. They are very human, with flaws and strengths evident to the reader. I found the male characters were less well-drawn, but this has more to do with the small amount of time Catwin spends in their company and the power differential at play, which prohibits the kind of intimacy that would allow the reader to know them well. Still, Catwin's observations are very revealing, and the reader learns a lot through her eyes.
The world-building is, likewise, excellent, especially as it pertains to the political maneuverings - both large and small. Being set amongst the nobility means that there are forever power plays taking place, and world events also cast long shadows over the goings on.
The relationships between Catwin and Miriel, Catwin and Temar, Miriel and the Duke are all carefully drawn and rather fraught. I think the author has done a stellar job of capturing the difficult nature of girls' relationships - especially where so much is at stake!
One area I felt could have been improved is that there's very little warmth and joy in this book. It's unfortunate that these elements weren't conveyed very well. (Most humans will find some moments of joy - no matter how fleeting - in prolonged difficult circumstances. The best example I can think of is the scene in The Shawshank Redemption where the inmates are tarring the roof and get to enjoy a cold drink. It's a fairly short scene where not much action takes place, and yet, it's dramatic shift in tone that stays with the audience).
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and look forward to reading more from this author.
I received a copy of this novel through Voracious Readers Only.
February 1, 2018
I am torn on this book, but the final verdict is that I will not continue with this series. For the most part, things are well-written throughout the book, but there were a few things that I cannot get past, even to give the author the benefit of the doubt that things improve later in the series or in their writing. 1) There was a smattering of periodic, heavy-handed, 'foreshadowing' bits. Like, 'if I had only known how this might doom us all' type stuff. It was so grating at points that it made me consider DNF'ing this book-- which I never do. 2) I also felt like a certain character in this book was written to be two totally different characters, depending on the point of the book that we were at, and that irritates me because it felt so unnatural and ill-explained a progression. 2b) I felt like a second character got a similar, albeit smaller dose of the same frustrating treatment. 3) It felt like there was 'wash, rinse, repeat' style manufactured drama between our two main characters that made it feel kind of insulting as the reader to keep slogging through it. 4) This book has what is literally the most asinine 'prophecy' in it I have ever read. It isn't grand enough for the build up it has gotten (as in, it gets talked about a lot, but nothing happens), and I guess in this world literally ANYONE can give prophecy and it will be taken seriously...?
The main reason I was torn on the rating to leave for my review, is that for the most part it is a good story, with good interactions, good characters, in a pretty good world, and with good reason behind things. I feel like it is more appropriate to say that it 'just missed' for me than anything, but the things that made it 'just miss' are things that rankled me. They may not for you.
The main reason I was torn on the rating to leave for my review, is that for the most part it is a good story, with good interactions, good characters, in a pretty good world, and with good reason behind things. I feel like it is more appropriate to say that it 'just missed' for me than anything, but the things that made it 'just miss' are things that rankled me. They may not for you.
July 8, 2018
I received a complimentary copy of this book from Voracious Readers Only.
I loved this book. It has everything you want in a YA fantasy: intrigue, danger, plot, beautiful dresses and, of course, assassins.
I really liked the relationship between Miriel and Catwin - it was true to how 14-year-olds interact. Occasionally, the adult in the writer peeped through, especially with regards to Miriel and her endeveours to gain a husband (slighlty inaccurate description but I'm trying not to spoil anything here). These thoughts pulled me slightly out of the story but now I'm remembering that young adults repeat/think what they hear - so perhaps Catwin picked them up from Roine.
I liked Temar. I shared Catwin's feelings for him really.
Hated the Duke, of course.
I'm very suspicious of Roine. I do want to like her but something tells me that what you see isn't all you get.
I was a fan of the King and then I wasn't. Enough said.
All in all, the story sucked me in and I'm off to buy the next one. If you're a fan of YA fantasy, read this - it's got everything you're looking for.
I loved this book. It has everything you want in a YA fantasy: intrigue, danger, plot, beautiful dresses and, of course, assassins.
I really liked the relationship between Miriel and Catwin - it was true to how 14-year-olds interact. Occasionally, the adult in the writer peeped through, especially with regards to Miriel and her endeveours to gain a husband (slighlty inaccurate description but I'm trying not to spoil anything here). These thoughts pulled me slightly out of the story but now I'm remembering that young adults repeat/think what they hear - so perhaps Catwin picked them up from Roine.
I liked Temar. I shared Catwin's feelings for him really.
Hated the Duke, of course.
I'm very suspicious of Roine. I do want to like her but something tells me that what you see isn't all you get.
I was a fan of the King and then I wasn't. Enough said.
All in all, the story sucked me in and I'm off to buy the next one. If you're a fan of YA fantasy, read this - it's got everything you're looking for.
September 12, 2017
Thanks to her penchant for sneaking around unseen, Catwin is chosen by the ambitious Duke of Voltur to serve as a Shadow, i.e. bodyguard, assassin, spy, and whatever else is currently needed, for his niece Lady Miriel, whom the Duke intends to take to Court to ensnare the heart of the young and sickly king. Both girls are nothing but pawns used to further the Duke's plans, and neither trusts the other... but only if they can overcome their differences and work together they might survive and perhaps even take charge of their fates some day.
I've got a huge pile of YA fantasy Kindle freebies lying around that I've snatched up over the years on the off chance that they might turn out to be good - more often than, unfortunately, that's not the case. Not so with this book: Shadowborn is a beautifully written and intriguing tale that easily pulled me in and which I'm looking forward to continuing with the next book at some point.
I've got a huge pile of YA fantasy Kindle freebies lying around that I've snatched up over the years on the off chance that they might turn out to be good - more often than, unfortunately, that's not the case. Not so with this book: Shadowborn is a beautifully written and intriguing tale that easily pulled me in and which I'm looking forward to continuing with the next book at some point.
February 12, 2019
Slow but steady
If you liked the Throne of Glass series by Sarah J. Mass then you’ll like this book.
I’m not gonna lie. It was a very slow start. And I was annoyed at the constant friends and not friends and friends and not friends of the two main characters.
But at least at the end of the book they work their ish out.
There wasn’t a whole lot of action in this book. It just gets you ready for what might come. It’s sadly a very true take of what would’ve happened to young girls back then.
Our main character is pretty bad ass. I wish the author would’ve delved more into the main characters training. But I love the observation details.
These girls are just idle court ladies. They’re strong willed and I love that they’re independent and don’t need no man.
I can’t wait to get the second book.
If you liked the Throne of Glass series by Sarah J. Mass then you’ll like this book.
I’m not gonna lie. It was a very slow start. And I was annoyed at the constant friends and not friends and friends and not friends of the two main characters.
But at least at the end of the book they work their ish out.
There wasn’t a whole lot of action in this book. It just gets you ready for what might come. It’s sadly a very true take of what would’ve happened to young girls back then.
Our main character is pretty bad ass. I wish the author would’ve delved more into the main characters training. But I love the observation details.
These girls are just idle court ladies. They’re strong willed and I love that they’re independent and don’t need no man.
I can’t wait to get the second book.
April 26, 2020
I received this book from Voracious Readers for an honest review. Wow! What a fantastic start to a new series! It is the story of Catwin - a peasant girl who was born during a terrible snowstorm and was abandoned by her mother because she was "born to be betrayed". Catwin grows up in the castle with her adopted mother - the castle healer Roine. Catwin grows up running about the castle with no cares in the world and a strong dislike for the Lady. Catwin, on a dare, sneaks into the the bailey upon the arrival of the Duke. She sneaks up to steal a dagger from one of the Duke's men and her life changes forever. The story is mostly laying groundwork to establish the relationship between Catwin, Temar, Roine and Miriel. It's an intriguing story that moved at a good pace. I really enjoyed this book and look forward to finding the next book in this series!
October 5, 2013
I received this book for free through Goodreads First Reads.
And boy, was I glad that I did.
I'm a big fan of fantasy stories, especially if they have interesting female characters in the lead role. Shadowborn delivered on that and much much more.
It's a story about two girls, the low born Catwin and high born Miriel, who are thrown together against their will and become pawns in a larger game played by their Lord and Uncle the Duke. It's a story of political intrigue in a medieval fantasy setting and it's awesome.
I can write all day about how much I liked this story, but let me try and organize my thoughts a little and also focus on some of the things I didn't like that much.
First off: The Good.
Like I said, I love interesting female characters. In fact, I will hate a book that doesn't have any. But Moira Katson has written two very different but very interesting and more importantly believable girls. Catwin isn't just the chosen hero of the story, who becomes a Shadow without any hesitation. She struggles with it, with her task and her place in the world and that is what makes her real. And Miriel isn't just the ice cold bitchy heir who exists to be a foil to Catwin, or the mindless pawn who is there to war dresses and be a victim. Over the course of the book we come to realize she is just as trapped and conflicted as Catwin and just as human.
The interaction between those two, their struggles, their fights and later their alliance is the driving force of the story and also the best part. I think about how easy it could have been if Moira Katson had just written them as either enemies or best friends from the start, many a lesser author would have done so. But I love the slow build up, I love that they don't just learn to accept each other over night, because that doesn't happen in the real world. There is no magic moment that suddenly makes them understand each other, they have work for it and that was beautiful to read.
Other things I liked were the world building, there was no info dump at the start and we slowly learn more and more as Catwin learns more, which was quite an ingenious way to immerse us in the story. The story was also fast paced and it kept me wanting to finish the next chapter to see what happened next. There were also a few good 'oh shit' moments that kept me on my toes at the end of chapters, I love mini cliffhangers like that. Not to mention the cliffhanger at the end of the book that is making me want to continue reading the next book right away.
And last but not least, I loved the way the story started. The circumstances of Catwins birth have an almost fairy tale like quality about them, but they never tip over into an heavy handed cliché. The prophecy is interesting and I can't wait to find out what it means, but it never overshadows the rest of the story, it complements it.
The Mediocre:
There were a few things that were kind of meh to me. I didn't dislike them, but I also didn't like them. First up, the names. So yeah, it's a fantasy novel so there are going to be funny names, that isn't my gripe though, I like Catwin and Miriel for names. However some of the royals had similar names and sometimes they were addressed with their title instead of their name, making me guess who they were talking about. It wasn't that bad, since there was a handy list with all the cast and their titles, but it did annoy me once or twice.
Secondly, there wasn't that much 'action'. It's weird to whine about this, since I did say that the story was fast paced and it honestly was, enough stuff happened to keep everything exciting, but I just would have loved a bit more proper action happening, especially at the start. Of course by the end of the book there is plenty of action and even better, the prospect of huge events that are going to influence the story, so I am confident that I'll get my wish in the next book.
Also I kind of not like Roine? I don't know why, she just annoyed me. She's Catwins surrogate mother and she's this awesome healer who just rubs me the wrong way. And I have a theory about her that if it's true, means that I am completely justified in my hate, so yeah, I am watching you Roine.
The Bad:
I've been thinking really hard about it, trying to think up anything that I did not like. I've got some pretty nice rose tinted glasses on regarding this book, so it was pretty hard.
The only thing I can come up with is that the 'villains' of the story right now are a bit cardboard. We seem them do despicable things (especially the Lady) but there is never anything to indicate they have any other traits apart from evil and power hungry. They are not giving the same complexity that our protagonists have. Now is that really bad? Kind of, but maybe not really?
You see, we experience the story through Catwins eyes and of course she doesn't know the villains inner thoughts. Whatever game they are playing, whatever reasons they have to act like they do it isn't known to her yet. Again, I think this is a problem that might solve itself in the next books. I have a feeling Catwin is going to find out more about the intrigue at Court and about all the evil plans that are floating around.
So yeah, those are my rambly thoughts.
In short, if you are a fan of fantasy with interesting female characters who have an interesting dynamic, go and buy yourself this book now, you will not regret it. Fans of political intrigue should give it a shot as well. And if you just want to see a girl become an awesome assassin/bodyguard, who is throwing knives and kicking asses then yes, buy this book.
And boy, was I glad that I did.
I'm a big fan of fantasy stories, especially if they have interesting female characters in the lead role. Shadowborn delivered on that and much much more.
It's a story about two girls, the low born Catwin and high born Miriel, who are thrown together against their will and become pawns in a larger game played by their Lord and Uncle the Duke. It's a story of political intrigue in a medieval fantasy setting and it's awesome.
I can write all day about how much I liked this story, but let me try and organize my thoughts a little and also focus on some of the things I didn't like that much.
First off: The Good.
Like I said, I love interesting female characters. In fact, I will hate a book that doesn't have any. But Moira Katson has written two very different but very interesting and more importantly believable girls. Catwin isn't just the chosen hero of the story, who becomes a Shadow without any hesitation. She struggles with it, with her task and her place in the world and that is what makes her real. And Miriel isn't just the ice cold bitchy heir who exists to be a foil to Catwin, or the mindless pawn who is there to war dresses and be a victim. Over the course of the book we come to realize she is just as trapped and conflicted as Catwin and just as human.
The interaction between those two, their struggles, their fights and later their alliance is the driving force of the story and also the best part. I think about how easy it could have been if Moira Katson had just written them as either enemies or best friends from the start, many a lesser author would have done so. But I love the slow build up, I love that they don't just learn to accept each other over night, because that doesn't happen in the real world. There is no magic moment that suddenly makes them understand each other, they have work for it and that was beautiful to read.
Other things I liked were the world building, there was no info dump at the start and we slowly learn more and more as Catwin learns more, which was quite an ingenious way to immerse us in the story. The story was also fast paced and it kept me wanting to finish the next chapter to see what happened next. There were also a few good 'oh shit' moments that kept me on my toes at the end of chapters, I love mini cliffhangers like that. Not to mention the cliffhanger at the end of the book that is making me want to continue reading the next book right away.
And last but not least, I loved the way the story started. The circumstances of Catwins birth have an almost fairy tale like quality about them, but they never tip over into an heavy handed cliché. The prophecy is interesting and I can't wait to find out what it means, but it never overshadows the rest of the story, it complements it.
The Mediocre:
There were a few things that were kind of meh to me. I didn't dislike them, but I also didn't like them. First up, the names. So yeah, it's a fantasy novel so there are going to be funny names, that isn't my gripe though, I like Catwin and Miriel for names. However some of the royals had similar names and sometimes they were addressed with their title instead of their name, making me guess who they were talking about. It wasn't that bad, since there was a handy list with all the cast and their titles, but it did annoy me once or twice.
Secondly, there wasn't that much 'action'. It's weird to whine about this, since I did say that the story was fast paced and it honestly was, enough stuff happened to keep everything exciting, but I just would have loved a bit more proper action happening, especially at the start. Of course by the end of the book there is plenty of action and even better, the prospect of huge events that are going to influence the story, so I am confident that I'll get my wish in the next book.
Also I kind of not like Roine? I don't know why, she just annoyed me. She's Catwins surrogate mother and she's this awesome healer who just rubs me the wrong way. And I have a theory about her that if it's true, means that I am completely justified in my hate, so yeah, I am watching you Roine.
The Bad:
I've been thinking really hard about it, trying to think up anything that I did not like. I've got some pretty nice rose tinted glasses on regarding this book, so it was pretty hard.
The only thing I can come up with is that the 'villains' of the story right now are a bit cardboard. We seem them do despicable things (especially the Lady) but there is never anything to indicate they have any other traits apart from evil and power hungry. They are not giving the same complexity that our protagonists have. Now is that really bad? Kind of, but maybe not really?
You see, we experience the story through Catwins eyes and of course she doesn't know the villains inner thoughts. Whatever game they are playing, whatever reasons they have to act like they do it isn't known to her yet. Again, I think this is a problem that might solve itself in the next books. I have a feeling Catwin is going to find out more about the intrigue at Court and about all the evil plans that are floating around.
So yeah, those are my rambly thoughts.
In short, if you are a fan of fantasy with interesting female characters who have an interesting dynamic, go and buy yourself this book now, you will not regret it. Fans of political intrigue should give it a shot as well. And if you just want to see a girl become an awesome assassin/bodyguard, who is throwing knives and kicking asses then yes, buy this book.
August 23, 2020
First of 3 and exceptionally well written
I couldn’t put this book down, as well as the next 2. The masterful writing and plots upon sub plots in all 3 was such a pleasure to immerse myself in that I wholly recommend this to everyone. If I could give the series 10 stars, I would. My only takeaway, and it’s almost not worth mentioning, is there were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but they truly were so small you almost don’t notice them at all, unless like me, you’ve read more books than you could possibly count. But, they were very minor and didn’t detract from the flow of the story at all. Ms. Katson, you have quite a talent for storytelling, intrigue and suspense, and I am following you now and will likely seek you out for your new stories as well as those you have already completed. Well Done!
I couldn’t put this book down, as well as the next 2. The masterful writing and plots upon sub plots in all 3 was such a pleasure to immerse myself in that I wholly recommend this to everyone. If I could give the series 10 stars, I would. My only takeaway, and it’s almost not worth mentioning, is there were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but they truly were so small you almost don’t notice them at all, unless like me, you’ve read more books than you could possibly count. But, they were very minor and didn’t detract from the flow of the story at all. Ms. Katson, you have quite a talent for storytelling, intrigue and suspense, and I am following you now and will likely seek you out for your new stories as well as those you have already completed. Well Done!
July 21, 2018
Outstanding! I was drawn into the puzzles and intrigue of the story from the very beginning, and do not regret the time spent reading this novel in the least. This is an exceptionally well written, completely clean, and captivating fantasy. The whole story is told from Catwin's point of view with the perfect amount of realism. This is not a mediocre tale, and any readers who love a good fantasy will be instantly searching for the rest of the series!
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author via Voracious Readers Only*
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author via Voracious Readers Only*
August 3, 2018
A different type of tale
Shadowborn is a different type of tale, and one told well. The portrayal of titles, lineage, and social casts has been portrayed in detail without being boring or overwhelming.
This is a fascinating tale, in which you lose yourself to the flow,of the plot, to the characters and their trials. There is sadness, pain, unexpected kindness, intrigue, betrayal, and murder. The character development was well thought out.
Overall, I greatly enjoyed reading Shadowborn and look forward to reading Shadowforged next.
Shadowborn is a different type of tale, and one told well. The portrayal of titles, lineage, and social casts has been portrayed in detail without being boring or overwhelming.
This is a fascinating tale, in which you lose yourself to the flow,of the plot, to the characters and their trials. There is sadness, pain, unexpected kindness, intrigue, betrayal, and murder. The character development was well thought out.
Overall, I greatly enjoyed reading Shadowborn and look forward to reading Shadowforged next.
May 8, 2020
This book is quite obviously the set up for the characters going forward. Not that the arcs were not interesting, but more interesting things are likely to come. The idea of having a personal assassin body gaurd was intriguing, especially as the loyalties are sometime hard to fathom, beyond fear. Catwin and Miriel's relationship is nasty and ugly because of how their lives started and how they were forced together, but as they grow and live through several attempts on their lives, that changes and shifts.
January 25, 2022
Summary: Coming of age fantasy, very interesting characters, good plot ... still not sure where its going, very well written. Premise is interesting, not much magic, if any ... we will see. Recommended
Plotline: 2 girls forced together one light the other shadow. We don't know why. The plot moves on quickly, but not many answers
Premise: Interesting world, not much evidence of magic other than prophesy and possibly healing
Writing: Very good, easy, descriptive
Ending: Ready for the next book
Pace: Never a dull moment!
Plotline: 2 girls forced together one light the other shadow. We don't know why. The plot moves on quickly, but not many answers
Premise: Interesting world, not much evidence of magic other than prophesy and possibly healing
Writing: Very good, easy, descriptive
Ending: Ready for the next book
Pace: Never a dull moment!
August 25, 2025
Not too shabby
I'm not a fan of the breaking of the fourth wall, but it was only a couple of occurrences. The book is YA in the very best sense. You are constantly reminded that these are children and that all interactions are chaste. Is it realistic maybe yes, maybe no but at least it isn't creepy. I'm down for the entire DTA, don't trust anybody, school of political intrigue. Too often, authors will give the character trust that isn't earned. I think I figured out the arc and BBEG and, I'm cool with it.
I'm not a fan of the breaking of the fourth wall, but it was only a couple of occurrences. The book is YA in the very best sense. You are constantly reminded that these are children and that all interactions are chaste. Is it realistic maybe yes, maybe no but at least it isn't creepy. I'm down for the entire DTA, don't trust anybody, school of political intrigue. Too often, authors will give the character trust that isn't earned. I think I figured out the arc and BBEG and, I'm cool with it.
June 24, 2018
This is a solid fantasy read. I started it 4 years ago and never finished, but I went back to the beginning again a couple days ago and managed to read it relatively quickly. I like the author's writing style, and that no one character was a perfect person - either evil or good. 4 stars, and I am so happy the rest of the series is available through Kindle Unlimited :)
September 23, 2019
Riveting
Dark, brutal. The realities that likely faced many royal women in the olden days mixed with fantasy. You'll spend hours trying to work out the puzzling deeds with the main character, Catwin. The cliffhanger of an ending felt like a blow to the gut. What more is to come of our heroine and her lady? We shall find out in the next book, Shadowforged.
Dark, brutal. The realities that likely faced many royal women in the olden days mixed with fantasy. You'll spend hours trying to work out the puzzling deeds with the main character, Catwin. The cliffhanger of an ending felt like a blow to the gut. What more is to come of our heroine and her lady? We shall find out in the next book, Shadowforged.
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