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Alterra Histories #1
The Fire King
The first in the Alterra Histories series of NOVELLAS from the author of the Elfhunter trilogy:
Invincible. Unconquerable. Fearless.
It’s no longer enough…
...not for Aincor Fire-heart, the first High Elven King of Alterra.
For Aincor’s reign, his power, his life itself – is about to change.
After charging headlong into a conflict that plunges all of Alterra into war, Aincor must face a force of such power and terror that none may stand against it. Despite unrivaled skill, pride, and valor, no one is truly invincible...or fearless. As the Flame struggles against the Shadow, Aincor’s secret, hidden dread rises up to torment him. Will it stand in the way of victory?
If the King falls – what of the Kingdom?
From the creator of the beloved ELFHUNTER Series comes a tale of fate and faith, of the eternal but never certain struggle of Light against Darkness, of the power of love itself – as a King is forced to confront that which is in himself, that which is in us all.
WHAT WOULD YOU BE WILLING TO LOSE TO GAIN ALL?
Invincible. Unconquerable. Fearless.
It’s no longer enough…
...not for Aincor Fire-heart, the first High Elven King of Alterra.
For Aincor’s reign, his power, his life itself – is about to change.
After charging headlong into a conflict that plunges all of Alterra into war, Aincor must face a force of such power and terror that none may stand against it. Despite unrivaled skill, pride, and valor, no one is truly invincible...or fearless. As the Flame struggles against the Shadow, Aincor’s secret, hidden dread rises up to torment him. Will it stand in the way of victory?
If the King falls – what of the Kingdom?
From the creator of the beloved ELFHUNTER Series comes a tale of fate and faith, of the eternal but never certain struggle of Light against Darkness, of the power of love itself – as a King is forced to confront that which is in himself, that which is in us all.
WHAT WOULD YOU BE WILLING TO LOSE TO GAIN ALL?
75 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 1, 2012
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About the author
C.S. Marks
21 books123 followersC.S. Marks has often been described as a ‘Renaissance woman’. The child of an English professor, Chris has always loved classic literature as well as epic fantasy, and decided to try her hand at writing and illustrating an epic series. The result: The very successful Elfhunter trilogy, which has sold over 40,000 copies both in print and e-book form. This epic trilogy has garnered awards (Reviewer’s Choice Best Fantasy, Best Series) and nearly 200 reviews. She is now hard at work on an exciting new Alterran series, the Undiscovered Realms.
A former field biologist and avid horsewoman, Chris holds a PhD in Biology, and has competed both nationally and internationally in the sport of endurance riding. She is a full professor of equine science at a small liberal arts college in the midwest. She is in demand as a lecturer and presenter at conventions, academic fairs, and publishing workshops.
While Chris has enjoyed an ample measure of success as an independent author, she is now looking forward to a long and productive relationship with Parthian Press, bringing her wonderful Tales of Alterra to an ever-widening group of appreciative readers of all ages.
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A former field biologist and avid horsewoman, Chris holds a PhD in Biology, and has competed both nationally and internationally in the sport of endurance riding. She is a full professor of equine science at a small liberal arts college in the midwest. She is in demand as a lecturer and presenter at conventions, academic fairs, and publishing workshops.
While Chris has enjoyed an ample measure of success as an independent author, she is now looking forward to a long and productive relationship with Parthian Press, bringing her wonderful Tales of Alterra to an ever-widening group of appreciative readers of all ages.
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April 4, 2016
This was nicely written. A great welcome to a new fantasy world!
The characters were very unique and individualistic. I wish I could have got a bit more of Faelani especially. Being this is a short novella, I cannot say too much about the story itself. What I can say is there are a vast array of characters, creatures, and more. Alterra is a very detailed word, shown briefly to us. I want to read more from these lands.
While part of me loved the details here, part of me also said it was too much for a novella. Too much info, too many places, people, etc for so few words.At times, it is overwhelming. Yet C.S Marks is kind to us, giving us a glossary at the end to help us know what is what.
Overall, a very enjoyable fantasy that is a great intro into a whole new realm! I look forward to reading more by C.S. Marks!
The characters were very unique and individualistic. I wish I could have got a bit more of Faelani especially. Being this is a short novella, I cannot say too much about the story itself. What I can say is there are a vast array of characters, creatures, and more. Alterra is a very detailed word, shown briefly to us. I want to read more from these lands.
While part of me loved the details here, part of me also said it was too much for a novella. Too much info, too many places, people, etc for so few words.At times, it is overwhelming. Yet C.S Marks is kind to us, giving us a glossary at the end to help us know what is what.
Overall, a very enjoyable fantasy that is a great intro into a whole new realm! I look forward to reading more by C.S. Marks!
November 25, 2017
3 Stars
This novella expands on the Alterra universe nicely and gives some insight into where Gaelen got her nick name from.
This novella expands on the Alterra universe nicely and gives some insight into where Gaelen got her nick name from.
October 27, 2012
This is a wonderful novella! I very much enjoyed the characters that have been so beautifully described and was moved as the story unfolded. I don't want to spoil anything for anyone, so I'll just leave it at this: You can love this book even if you are not familiar with the world of Alterra. If you have read Elfhunter and CS Marks other books you will love it even more as it gives you insight on some of the history of the Alterra universe.
December 13, 2012
This is a very well written book. It is a complete story. I have not read C.S. Marks' other work yet, although I intend to, but this story is absolutely complete and you have a good understanding of the World of Alterra all inside this novella.
C.S. Marks brings the world to life and endears you to the characters. The twist at the end is compelling and thought provoking!
I recommend this book for all ages.
C.S. Marks brings the world to life and endears you to the characters. The twist at the end is compelling and thought provoking!
I recommend this book for all ages.
May 26, 2013
I thought this was excellent. I dropped a star because I did feel it dipped a little in Part 4, although the overall story and writing were superb. Very reminiscent of old, early Medieval tales such as those from the Mabinogion, or those of the Irish Dark Ages. Saw the 'twist' coming a mile away, but no less good for that.
Very impressed.
Very impressed.
November 27, 2013
This Novella is the first in a series of infamous characters briefly mentioned within the Alterra trilogy by C. S .Marks. This story will begin an insatiable hunger for more Alterra history; such was the impact on this reader’s soul. So sit back, relax and let this journey sweep you back into a time in history, when the Elven race were majestic, magnificent, portrayed dominion above all, and they knew it!
The tale begins with a young orphan Elfling, with a burning inner-light and a pale rune-mark on the right side of his forehead, found to be living amongst the ancestors of the Tuatha, a rather primitive northern human race. Taken into care by the Eolar of the ancient realm of Tal- Elathias, he began to be trained in all knowledge and enlightenment, as was their custom for one that had been marked by the Lord of Light. The Elfling came to be named “Caladon,” as a child he exhibited characteristics of sheer arrogance coupled with an innate regal quality, he very quickly shone out from his peers. Caladon was beauty to perfection as he grew older, he needed, No! He demanded the best of himself, ever obligingly over confident with his warrior skills and decision making abilities. He fought with savagery and bravado, learnt survival at all costs from his enemies and found there was no place for honour on the battle field. To say he was reckless, with death defying feats was beyond belief, he earnt many accolades and rose quickly up the ranks. Caladon would soon earn the name “Aincor”, meaning Fire-Heart for slaying a troublesome dragon single handed.
Aincor becomes the protagonist in this multi layered story, endearing, yet frustrating. He begins a tale that has ramifications down through Alterra history, similar to a set of spiralling dominoes set up to fall. Unpeeling the plot layers, you find many inner stories that add texture and voice to Aincors character. There is life as the King of the Eolar, insight into Elven politics and mysticisms, the wonderful descriptions of life and scenery in Tal- Elathias, fierce friendships, family battles and the finding of his one kryptonite, if found out by his enemy, could be exploited to his ruination with tragic consequences.
The clarity, originality and fluidity of the writing, brought an elegance and aesthetic quality to this tale, not often experienced by this reader. The character and plot balance enhanced the experience as word building, gramma, syntax dramatised the realistic scenes and action sequences. There were dynamic characters that through experiences within the story rounded nicely into three dimensional characters. This included his evilness, our most exalted one, ‘The Lord Wrothgar.’ As the nemesis (antagonist) of Aincor he will devise and use any apparent weakness he perceives, to win the day and take dominion over all living creatures. So, out come all the dirty tricks in his evil repertoire and one secret that lay hidden from all, for the grand finale.
Lord Wrothgar is a talented black wizard, older than time recorded, that despises the Eolar, and anything wholesome, good and especially love. His loathsome creations, the Bodvans, together with a few acid oozing dragons are his minions, only doing his bidding out of sheer terror and blind worship. The pivotal point arrives as Lord Wrothgar plans a devious and cunning plot to lure Aincor and his army to his fortress. Aincors arrogance and belief in his ability to understand his enemy will lead to many confrontations within house and with the enemy. These scenes flow faster as the story reaches a crisis point.
The story portrayed the best and the worst in a society, where love does not conquer all, where characters of enlightenment have flaws so deep they can swallow a whole race. Where evilness using creatures from legends to force a scene so traumatic it will leave you emotionally vulnerable. Where sadness is history remembering events differently, never knowing the truth; that endearing love and self sacrifice can win the day.
This reader suggests reading at least Elf hunter first, as this will set the scene for this novella. Did someone say sit down, relax and let the story take you on a journey of discovery through Elven history. My mistake, should have said, sit down, strap yourself in and grab a strong drink. Tissues! You will need lots of tissues. A superbly thought out, quality piece of writing, which was thoroughly engrossing. The first domino has fallen.......
Kerry Hall
The tale begins with a young orphan Elfling, with a burning inner-light and a pale rune-mark on the right side of his forehead, found to be living amongst the ancestors of the Tuatha, a rather primitive northern human race. Taken into care by the Eolar of the ancient realm of Tal- Elathias, he began to be trained in all knowledge and enlightenment, as was their custom for one that had been marked by the Lord of Light. The Elfling came to be named “Caladon,” as a child he exhibited characteristics of sheer arrogance coupled with an innate regal quality, he very quickly shone out from his peers. Caladon was beauty to perfection as he grew older, he needed, No! He demanded the best of himself, ever obligingly over confident with his warrior skills and decision making abilities. He fought with savagery and bravado, learnt survival at all costs from his enemies and found there was no place for honour on the battle field. To say he was reckless, with death defying feats was beyond belief, he earnt many accolades and rose quickly up the ranks. Caladon would soon earn the name “Aincor”, meaning Fire-Heart for slaying a troublesome dragon single handed.
Aincor becomes the protagonist in this multi layered story, endearing, yet frustrating. He begins a tale that has ramifications down through Alterra history, similar to a set of spiralling dominoes set up to fall. Unpeeling the plot layers, you find many inner stories that add texture and voice to Aincors character. There is life as the King of the Eolar, insight into Elven politics and mysticisms, the wonderful descriptions of life and scenery in Tal- Elathias, fierce friendships, family battles and the finding of his one kryptonite, if found out by his enemy, could be exploited to his ruination with tragic consequences.
The clarity, originality and fluidity of the writing, brought an elegance and aesthetic quality to this tale, not often experienced by this reader. The character and plot balance enhanced the experience as word building, gramma, syntax dramatised the realistic scenes and action sequences. There were dynamic characters that through experiences within the story rounded nicely into three dimensional characters. This included his evilness, our most exalted one, ‘The Lord Wrothgar.’ As the nemesis (antagonist) of Aincor he will devise and use any apparent weakness he perceives, to win the day and take dominion over all living creatures. So, out come all the dirty tricks in his evil repertoire and one secret that lay hidden from all, for the grand finale.
Lord Wrothgar is a talented black wizard, older than time recorded, that despises the Eolar, and anything wholesome, good and especially love. His loathsome creations, the Bodvans, together with a few acid oozing dragons are his minions, only doing his bidding out of sheer terror and blind worship. The pivotal point arrives as Lord Wrothgar plans a devious and cunning plot to lure Aincor and his army to his fortress. Aincors arrogance and belief in his ability to understand his enemy will lead to many confrontations within house and with the enemy. These scenes flow faster as the story reaches a crisis point.
The story portrayed the best and the worst in a society, where love does not conquer all, where characters of enlightenment have flaws so deep they can swallow a whole race. Where evilness using creatures from legends to force a scene so traumatic it will leave you emotionally vulnerable. Where sadness is history remembering events differently, never knowing the truth; that endearing love and self sacrifice can win the day.
This reader suggests reading at least Elf hunter first, as this will set the scene for this novella. Did someone say sit down, relax and let the story take you on a journey of discovery through Elven history. My mistake, should have said, sit down, strap yourself in and grab a strong drink. Tissues! You will need lots of tissues. A superbly thought out, quality piece of writing, which was thoroughly engrossing. The first domino has fallen.......
Kerry Hall
May 3, 2015
The legend of Aincor was referenced more than once in Elfhunter and it was really interesting getting to read his story. I also really appreciated the little bit of history provided. I would almost suggest readers start here with The Fire King for just that reason.
I'm not a huge fan of novellas. They're just glorified short stories as far as I'm concerned. I know that might be a little condescending considering I complained about Elfhunter being too long, but there is just so little time for character development and I felt it here. The narration is almost entirely in the fashion of a storyteller. I.E. the reader is told what happens, what is felt, what is said and very little is experienced first hand. This did enable Marks to relay a lot of information in a short word count, but there is a reason such narrative styles are largely reserved for spoken tales. I knew, because I had been informed, that the king was prideful, etc but I had no sense of him as a man.
Be that as it may, it's a fun little read and worth picking up. I enjoyed Aincor's story. If you like the type of legends one might hear told around the campfire this is the book for you. It was really quite predictable. Between the tidbits given in the previous book and the basic set up of the plot it isn't hard to figure out what will happen. But I've found that sometimes knowing where a story is going lets you feel a little closer to it.
I'm not a huge fan of novellas. They're just glorified short stories as far as I'm concerned. I know that might be a little condescending considering I complained about Elfhunter being too long, but there is just so little time for character development and I felt it here. The narration is almost entirely in the fashion of a storyteller. I.E. the reader is told what happens, what is felt, what is said and very little is experienced first hand. This did enable Marks to relay a lot of information in a short word count, but there is a reason such narrative styles are largely reserved for spoken tales. I knew, because I had been informed, that the king was prideful, etc but I had no sense of him as a man.
Be that as it may, it's a fun little read and worth picking up. I enjoyed Aincor's story. If you like the type of legends one might hear told around the campfire this is the book for you. It was really quite predictable. Between the tidbits given in the previous book and the basic set up of the plot it isn't hard to figure out what will happen. But I've found that sometimes knowing where a story is going lets you feel a little closer to it.
March 30, 2013
By Momma on March 30, 2013
The Fire King C.S. Marks
Typically when faced with arrogant characters I will find myself a bit irritated with them. Momma is a lover of the underdog! The story of Aincor Fire Heart is different, although his arrogance is what gets him into trouble, he’s learns humility. That is a story I can really appreciate.
The characters are easy to like and invest in, I want to know more about Felani, and she was so incredibly bold and brave. She is a strong woman, who knows how to get the job done.
C.S. Marks is a fantastic author who draws you into the world of Alterra. You can’t stop yourself from falling in and not wanting to come back out. Her descriptions wet your imagination just enough to let you decide what it really looks and feels like there.
Momma will be watching her as I know that with quality work like this, her series and the world of Alterra will become a widespread hit.
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February 27, 2013
I have not read C.S. Marks' other work yet,about the world of Alterra. But it is a well written classic book and a complete story. I really can see myself sitting beside a fire under the sky and listen to its unfolding slowly.
Why it feel like Classic myth/Folklore?
- The main characters are usually gods, supernatural heroes and humans
- Define the fundamental worldview of a culture by explaining aspects of the natural world and delineating the psychological and social practices and ideals of a society.
- one of the foremost functions of myth is to establish models for behavior. As it is not the job of science to define human morality.
- Eliciting and supporting a sense of awe before the mystery of being
- initiate the individual into the order of realities of his own psyche, guiding him toward his own spiritual enrichment and realization
- Has a latent meaning which evoke a strong emotional response due to the widely understood themes and motifs - Hubris in our case
And this is why I recommend this book for all ages.
Why it feel like Classic myth/Folklore?
- The main characters are usually gods, supernatural heroes and humans
- Define the fundamental worldview of a culture by explaining aspects of the natural world and delineating the psychological and social practices and ideals of a society.
- one of the foremost functions of myth is to establish models for behavior. As it is not the job of science to define human morality.
- Eliciting and supporting a sense of awe before the mystery of being
- initiate the individual into the order of realities of his own psyche, guiding him toward his own spiritual enrichment and realization
- Has a latent meaning which evoke a strong emotional response due to the widely understood themes and motifs - Hubris in our case
And this is why I recommend this book for all ages.
April 2, 2013
By Momma on March 30, 2013
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The Fire King C.S. Marks
Typically when faced with arrogant characters I will find myself a bit irritated with them. Momma is a lover of the underdog! The story of Aincor Fire Heart is different, although his arrogance is what gets him into trouble, he’s learns humility. That is a story I can really appreciate.
The characters are easy to like and invest in, I want to know more about Felani, and she was so incredibly bold and brave. She is a strong woman, who knows how to get the job done.
C.S. Marks is a fantastic author who draws you into the world of Alterra. You can’t stop yourself from falling in and not wanting to come back out. Her descriptions wet your imagination just enough to let you decide what it really looks and feels like there.
Momma will be watching her as I know that with quality work like this, her series and the world of Alterra will become a widespread hit.
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Momma gives The Fire King by C.S. Marks 5 cookies
September 4, 2013
Short novella. Precursor to Elfhunter.
First paragraphs
The business of the day was just beginning, and Aincor was looking forward to dealing with his affairs of state, when a familiar figure was ushered in to stand before him. Aincor knew him at once—it was Vathan, one of his elite guards and courtiers. On this occasion he wore neither mail nor armor, which was unusual. “My lord, I would beg an audience,” said Vathan, a dark-haired Èolarin Elf who would have been comely were it not for his battle- scarred face. He turned to regard the others waiting in the King’s chambers. “I’m afraid this is a delicate matter. Is there a way that we may speak privately?”
Marks, C.S. (2012-12-04). The Fire King (The Alterra Histories) (Kindle Locations 165-170). Parthian Press. Kindle Edition.
First paragraphs
The business of the day was just beginning, and Aincor was looking forward to dealing with his affairs of state, when a familiar figure was ushered in to stand before him. Aincor knew him at once—it was Vathan, one of his elite guards and courtiers. On this occasion he wore neither mail nor armor, which was unusual. “My lord, I would beg an audience,” said Vathan, a dark-haired Èolarin Elf who would have been comely were it not for his battle- scarred face. He turned to regard the others waiting in the King’s chambers. “I’m afraid this is a delicate matter. Is there a way that we may speak privately?”
Marks, C.S. (2012-12-04). The Fire King (The Alterra Histories) (Kindle Locations 165-170). Parthian Press. Kindle Edition.
April 3, 2013
One word describes this fantasy history: Balanced. The book handles the abilities of its characters with tact and balance. It shows the Fire King as a strong warrior, an intellectual and a dynamic leader, yet weak in issues pertaining to his mate. This weakness was masterfully exploited by the author (using his enemies) to bring about his downfall
5 Stars for depicting fantasy in a realistic way.
5 Stars for depicting fantasy in a realistic way.
June 30, 2013
I am not a fan of fantasy novels at all. Unfortunately, this one was no exception. It was very difficult to motivate myself to read it, and I found it quite generic. I fear that this may be because it is not my choice of genre to read, and I am therefore being unfair. Overall it was a book that wasn't for me, but was good to kill some time with.
April 21, 2014
Ok I actually read this a while ago just never wrote my review. (please don't hit me. )
As usual C.S. Marks hit it on the head. I loved the back story and finding out who was The Fire King. The world was woven perfectly with magic and wonder. A little dark like most fantasy novel but not a turn off. I loved the characters. Each one popped out of the book felt alive.
As usual C.S. Marks hit it on the head. I loved the back story and finding out who was The Fire King. The world was woven perfectly with magic and wonder. A little dark like most fantasy novel but not a turn off. I loved the characters. Each one popped out of the book felt alive.
January 26, 2014
I was lucky enough to read The Fire King after finishing C.S.Marks Elfhunter series.And after the Elfhunter I thought how can she do anything to compare to this.Well she did I love her writing its as if she has lived it.And I can't wait till the next.
March 26, 2013
This was such a quick read that it went by almost too fast! I love C.S. Marks' books and I can't wait for the next one to come out.
I love how Aincor's arrogance isn't nearly as irritating as it should be and Felani is bold! I love her to pieces!
I love how Aincor's arrogance isn't nearly as irritating as it should be and Felani is bold! I love her to pieces!
May 17, 2013
It gives a nice background on the Fire King from the "Elfhunter" series, but if I had not read the series this would not have made much sense, and it would not have enticed me to read the "Elfhunter" series.
June 30, 2013
This was a very quick and easy read. I love fantasy novels and I was very excited about this book but the story was a bit weak and the characters weren't very imaginative. It was enjoyable but it wasn't a book that I couldn't put down. OK but not exceptional.
July 5, 2016
An excellent story about the dangers of hubris, and also a lesson about the bias of history, be it real or fantasy. I was very intrigued by the character of Faelani, and would love to see her story, but I realise that this was not that.
Excellent work from an excellent author!!
Excellent work from an excellent author!!
June 16, 2013
it's the first in the series so it's a good place to start. i do not really like novellas, they are far too short to really get into. the characters were written well enough to stay interested in.
November 20, 2016
2.5? I honestly don't know. This book was a whole other level of weird (with a heaping dash of awkward whenever romance was involved)... But 2.5 stars for sheer insane creativity!
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