We were alone, the way the ocean was alone/ and briefly we understood why it couldn't find the right words/ for what it wanted to say and why it kept trying. (6)
This poetry book mythologizes the settlement of Halifax, human interaction with the ocean, natural landscapes, and development of a community. Goyette plays with the concept of discovery and invention, with lines like:
We discovered death under the bridge, and someone insisted we take it home (4)
On bees: when we tasted their honey,/ we realized they weren't miniature flying lions at all/but small winged gospels sent to sweeten our tongues (11)
We had found/ love like a box of candles beneath our beds/ and lit each other with the flames of our tongues (15)
The trees were giddy, all those hands/ on their knees (26)
Our girls taught us the right way/ to spoon the spilled stars (32)
She brewed a drop of his laughter/ with a handful of mint (36)
we learned that words also have souls,/ and when the souls of our words escaped, there was a glitter/ frosting the ocean (38).
There's a path through the book, from beginning to many layers of a middle, through losses and learning to the end. Much of it is poignant, and reframes thinking about a town, about the personality of physical setting (the prairie, where I live, is so different from the sea's shore), about how culture and people develop in relation to the space they lives in. Much of it is lyrical language and inventive images; often they're striking, but just as often, what they describe is unimaginable or clunky, and the poems become weighed down by these half-creations that struggle to reveal what they're meant to symbolize. I found myself disappointed at the end of quite a few poems because I couldn't grasp anything Goyette spoke of, it veered too much into abstraction and the land or people she began with either were contrived or disappeared.
I would recommend this book to readers who enjoy playful, spirited poetry. Goyette has fun with the project, even when it gets away from her just a little bit. I enjoyed her writing on trees, lifeguards, snow, "the poets," enigmatic teenage girls, ferries, and the soul of Halifax.
The poems I liked best were: 4-6, 11, 15, 18, 23, 24, 26, 29, 32, 35, 36, 38, 42-44, 48, 52, 54, 56