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Sonata
At thirty-six Ian feels done with the world. When a night at a bar goes as poorly as expected, he wants only to return home to be miserable in peace. Instead, he encounters Jordan. Hot, young and interested, Jordan is everything Ian's ever wanted and nothing he believes himself capable of actually obtaining.
Jordan has enough going on in his life trying to scrape together a living for himself and his autistic son. When he meets Ian, all he wants is a brief, erotic moment and nothing else.
But fate throws them together again and again, and Ian finds himself determined to do whatever it takes to give their story a happy ending – no matter what secrets Jordan's past has waiting for him.
Jordan has enough going on in his life trying to scrape together a living for himself and his autistic son. When he meets Ian, all he wants is a brief, erotic moment and nothing else.
But fate throws them together again and again, and Ian finds himself determined to do whatever it takes to give their story a happy ending – no matter what secrets Jordan's past has waiting for him.
156 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 16, 2013
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A.F. Henley
39 books215 followersHenley was born with a full-blown passion for run-on sentences, a zealous indulgence in all words descriptive, and the endearing tendency to overuse punctuation. Since the early years Henley has been an enthusiastic writer, from the first few I-love-my-dog stories to the current leap into erotica.
A self-professed Google genius, Henley lives for the hours spent digging through the Internet for ‘research purposes’ which, more often than not, lead seven thousand miles away from first intentions but bring Henley to new discoveries and ideas that, once seeded, grow like weeds.
A self-professed Google genius, Henley lives for the hours spent digging through the Internet for ‘research purposes’ which, more often than not, lead seven thousand miles away from first intentions but bring Henley to new discoveries and ideas that, once seeded, grow like weeds.
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July 17, 2013
3.5 stars
I’ve been stewing for days over this review, back and forth, forth and back.
I’ll start off by saying that there is a lot to like in this book, some moments that pulled at my heart. I’ll try to explain just why I didn’t love this. I really, really wanted to…
For starts, Ian is a desperate man, he’s wants a meaningful relationship with someone, anyone. He’s thirty-six, attractive, has a great career, except… he can’t seem to find that just-right someone. (why, oh why? He certainly seems eligible, no big skels in the closet). So, what does he do? He goes hunting at a gay bar. Where everyone knows you find meaningful interaction— and he finds it in a bathroom stall. Sarcasm aside— Ian feels out of place and out of time— maybe because he is
“His clothes screamed out the warning of too-old-to-be-cool and yet still too young to be the daddy replacement the rest were looking for… Twenty-five or fifty-five, anything in between is simply viral.”
Ian does manage a hook-up with gorgeous Jordan in said bathroom stall, and he thinks he’s found The One. Jordan (let’s call him J), who is so young, so twenty-two, and so marvelously, sexually uninhibited and responsive, but seems to have some issues of his own.
Ian: “Do I know you?”
Jordan: “Nope… perfect, right?”
I: “I… I’m Ian… what’s your name?”
J: “Nobody.”
. . .
I: “Tell me your name…”
J: “Jordan… are we done bonding now? Let’s fuck…”
… and afterwards…
I: “Can I buy you a drink?”
J: “Nope… now you can piss off.”
I: “Maybe your number? I could call you sometime?”
J: “Nope.”
Yeah, that “and afterwards” is a cut-away from the sex scene. The very first one between Ian and J, and then we jump to post-coitus. Say, whhhaahttt?
Despite J’s less than fuzzy response to him, Ian is smitten. The story bounces around from the bar scene to a series of chance meetings between the two where J continues to play cold but Ian insinuates himself into J’s life (and tries really, really hard NOT to come off as stalker-ish and creepy). He discovers that J has an eight-year-old son (you do the math), Cole, who is autistic (Asperger’s syndrome). There is so much mystery that surrounds J and Cole that you know Ian (a whizz-brilliant analytical mind) should very quickly figure out that Something. Does Not. Add UP.
But love is blind and J is so hot and a slut for it, and there is a need there, and Ian wants him so bad.
“Sometimes you just know right away. There’s this...connection. You don’ know why, hell, you don’t even care. You just know that somehow, someway, you were supposed to know this person. That they’re important to you. And if it doesn’t happen, if something gets in the way, you’ll have missed more than you’ll ever know.”
This is what grabs me… Ian’s systematic breaking down of J’s barriers until he gets his relationship (mostly based on sex, they are smoking hot together), and his desire to take care of J and Cole. I eventually got into Ian’s determination, his fixation…
“I’ll believe you, Ian thought, when your eyes don’t watch every move my mouth makes. When your face doesn’t soften every time I kiss your skin. When you stop avoiding my eyes just so I won’t see the need in yours.”
And, meanwhile, Ian discovers a strong response to classical music in little Cole. It’s the one thing that breaks through to him, soothes the hysterics. J appreciates Ian’s interaction with Cole and Ian becomes more endearing for his selfless caring, for this important bond— it’s psychological as well as visceral.
There are some wonderful bits and pieces— well done moments of intimacy and intensity. (It even reminded me a little of Giselle Ellis’ wonderful Take my Picture, another quirky story about two guys who are all rough around the edges and have to fight to fit together.) But, I have an issue with the stitching together of all the pieces. It was a frustrating journey. It felt like reading in fits and starts with abrupt scene changes and odd character actions. There were splashes of intensity that drifted to WTF-ery. Ian’s discovery of the mystery behind J and Cole forces an important decision on him with a resolution that seemed a bit too pat towards the inevitable HEA.
This was an ambitious story with a lot of things going on in it; while the execution was less than fluid, there were those memorable moments. I will be checking out more of this author’s stuff.
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July 17, 2013Sonata Excerpt:
"Get up," the whisper came again and Ian threw his arm over his face and turned away from the voice.
"Get. Up!"
Ian groaned and stretched his shoulder before lifting his arm to peer at the wavering light on his wrist that, in most cases, identified the time of day. But as it read an unbelievable three-twelve a.m., there had to be some kind of mistake. He turned to face the voice feeling disoriented and displaced, more so when he realized he didn't recognize the layout of the room or the feel of the bed.
"Wh—"
"You need to leave."
Jordan. Oh, shit! Jordan!
Ian blinked hard, trying to reseat thought and design. Had he really let himself fall asleep? Had Jordan let him fall asleep? "What's wrong?"
"Nothing's wrong." Jordan hushed him with a finger and then repeated, "You just have to go."
"Why?"
"Because I say so."
Ian struggled to sit up. He locked eyes with Jordan. It was hard to read expression in the dark. He tried for humor. "Was I snoring? Taking up too much of the bed?"
"Ian ..." Jordan sighed. "Fuck. You just gotta go, okay?"
Ian smirked without mirth. "Your wife about to come home?"
"Firstly, no. Secondly, I don't want to talk to you about my life. Please, Ian. Just get up and go."
"Seriously?"
Jordan's voice dropped. "Seriously."
Ian tried not to be pissed off as he stood and found his clothing. "I did well," he kept thinking. He'd had Jordan ecstatic to the point of combustion, begging to be finished off. Twisting underneath him, for fuck sake. Jordan had been moaning his damn name.
So why ... the fuck ... was he still getting kicked out of the apartment?
Jordan was already standing in the kitchen, the bright lights ungodly at the hour, the dark circles Ian had noticed under Jordan's eyes that much darker. "You need sleep."
"I'm fine." Jordan poured a glass of juice and shook the can at Ian until Ian declined with a headshake. "So, thanks. For, you know, the blowjob and everything."
Ian watched silently as Jordan drained the glass and set it in the sink, not speaking until the lack of sound became awkward. "You really want me to go?"
"Yeah, really."
Fucking ridiculous, Ian thought. It was just getting ridiculous. He sounded desperate. It made him furious with himself. And furious with Jordan for continuing to deny him.
Regardless, Ian's conscience kept poking at him. "Come on," it told him. "Just one more try."
He dug into his jacket and pulled out his wallet. "Here," he said, without looking up at Jordan, setting a card down on the counter with a snap. "This is my business card. My cell number is on it in case you change your mind."
He tucked the wallet away, straightened his jacket and moved towards the entrance. He paused, he waited, he spoke, "Change your mind."
August 17, 2013
Mr. Henley has a knack for writing fiction akin to a cold beer after a day of long, hot work: surprisingly tasty, exactly what you need, and makes you want more when the beer's gone, as the first drink was not enough to satisfy the thirst.
It took me a while to read Henley's third novel because, I confess, I was not in a mindset to read about love. And make no mistake, Henley always writes about love. Whether it's finding love in the small things, (Inflori), or making love work when it's well beyond hard and into deadly games territory, (Honour), Henley writes of the pain, the exaltation, and shocking amazement of relationships.
Sonata is no different, and its message is clear in the first few pages:
Sometimes in life, if one is exceedingly lucky, one runs smack into another soul that fits one's own so completely and so well, that it defies logic, reason, common sense, and personal history. Such fortune, such kismet, can seem crazy to the outsider who has never experienced such a phenomenon, or seem outright insane to the outsider who has come face to face with such love, but he or she was too afraid to do whatever it took to continue experiencing it.
And I choose my phrasing there carefully, oh delightful review readers: "experiencing it." Because love is not always about being together or living happily ever after. It's not always about sex that ends in fireworks, having everything in common, enjoying the same sleep schedule, or obsessing over the same reality TV show (though, to be fair, some of those things really do help).
Sometimes love is about conquering obstacles that would be impossible to overcome alone, but that become infinitely easier when you have somebody by your side, standing with you and holding your hand.
What's really interesting about Sonata, is that overcoming such odds is not the task of the main characters nor of the blooming relationship between them. Jordan and Ian? They've got the love thing down. Oh, sure, there are issues and fears and worries, but in the end? They've got this. They go together so well and so easily that their relationship is one long, sweet sigh woven through the pages.
No, the obstacles are actually in healing the family ties (that complicate, bind, and gag) and in disengaging from the nominal friendships that are supposed to come from a place of compassion and caring, but really come from a place of domination and fear.
So, I wanted more, which is, I think, the mark of a good book. I had that first beer, Mr. Henley, and I'm buzzed, but I would have liked to be well and truly knackered.
Also, the editing could have been tighter, but I have nothing but praise for the layout of the book. I love the chapter titles, the images, and the theme of music, for Ian and Jordan truly are the chords that unite and conquer the entire orchestra.
I saw no issue with the presentation of Aspergers, as it is my, possibly limited, understanding that such an affliction is very personal to the individual who suffers from it. I thought it was handled with thought and care and nods to research.
And the sex, if I can take a moment to mention THAT aspect (as well one should when dealing with erotica), was smoking emotionally hot. It showed the chemistry between the two men, which was not only physical but emotional and mental. The banter, the conversation, the sheer hope in their dialogue, especially at the end, sealed the deal for me.
But then, I was rooting for them from page one.
So thank you, Mr. Henley, for reminding me that on occasion the crazy risks one takes in the course of life and in the name of all kinds of love sometimes, just sometimes, mend worlds and the people who live in them.
It took me a while to read Henley's third novel because, I confess, I was not in a mindset to read about love. And make no mistake, Henley always writes about love. Whether it's finding love in the small things, (Inflori), or making love work when it's well beyond hard and into deadly games territory, (Honour), Henley writes of the pain, the exaltation, and shocking amazement of relationships.
Sonata is no different, and its message is clear in the first few pages:
Sometimes in life, if one is exceedingly lucky, one runs smack into another soul that fits one's own so completely and so well, that it defies logic, reason, common sense, and personal history. Such fortune, such kismet, can seem crazy to the outsider who has never experienced such a phenomenon, or seem outright insane to the outsider who has come face to face with such love, but he or she was too afraid to do whatever it took to continue experiencing it.
And I choose my phrasing there carefully, oh delightful review readers: "experiencing it." Because love is not always about being together or living happily ever after. It's not always about sex that ends in fireworks, having everything in common, enjoying the same sleep schedule, or obsessing over the same reality TV show (though, to be fair, some of those things really do help).
Sometimes love is about conquering obstacles that would be impossible to overcome alone, but that become infinitely easier when you have somebody by your side, standing with you and holding your hand.
What's really interesting about Sonata, is that overcoming such odds is not the task of the main characters nor of the blooming relationship between them. Jordan and Ian? They've got the love thing down. Oh, sure, there are issues and fears and worries, but in the end? They've got this. They go together so well and so easily that their relationship is one long, sweet sigh woven through the pages.
No, the obstacles are actually in healing the family ties (that complicate, bind, and gag) and in disengaging from the nominal friendships that are supposed to come from a place of compassion and caring, but really come from a place of domination and fear.
So, I wanted more, which is, I think, the mark of a good book. I had that first beer, Mr. Henley, and I'm buzzed, but I would have liked to be well and truly knackered.
Also, the editing could have been tighter, but I have nothing but praise for the layout of the book. I love the chapter titles, the images, and the theme of music, for Ian and Jordan truly are the chords that unite and conquer the entire orchestra.
I saw no issue with the presentation of Aspergers, as it is my, possibly limited, understanding that such an affliction is very personal to the individual who suffers from it. I thought it was handled with thought and care and nods to research.
And the sex, if I can take a moment to mention THAT aspect (as well one should when dealing with erotica), was smoking emotionally hot. It showed the chemistry between the two men, which was not only physical but emotional and mental. The banter, the conversation, the sheer hope in their dialogue, especially at the end, sealed the deal for me.
But then, I was rooting for them from page one.
So thank you, Mr. Henley, for reminding me that on occasion the crazy risks one takes in the course of life and in the name of all kinds of love sometimes, just sometimes, mend worlds and the people who live in them.
July 19, 2013
With Sonata, A.F. Henley is proving again that m/m romance novels can be very thoughtful, at the same time entertaining and above all of very high quality. His characters are so believable. Ian feeling depressed after quitting a long relationship with Madison and yet can’t completely let go. He wants nothing more than a true and honest relationship. But fate makes him meet Jordan who wants nothing more than offering a fuck and otherwise makes it chrystal clear that he doesn’t want to have anything to do with Ian. But since the powers beyond understanding make them cross paths again and again, Ian becomes more and more involved in Jordan’s life. But their (one can hardly call it a) relationship is overshadowed by a permanent tension. Jordan, while appearing a good and caring guy, is very defensive. He’s watching out for little Cole, a kid suffering from Asperger’s Syndrome. Caring for an autistic child would put an enormous amount of stress on any 22 year old guy but Jordan is hiding much more that puts a heavy weight on his shoulders and that keeps him fighting with Ian.
This whole situation is written in a very convincing way. A.F. Henley understands perfectly well how to create a situation where the reader has this feeling that all Jordan wishes for is a stable and secure enviroment for Cole and himself but just can’t let down his defenses because the secret he is hiding terrifies him too much. Adding Chrissy, a very young mother who also has to raise her child alone very much completes Jordan’s world and make it even more convincing.
Reading how Jordan is dedicating his life to Cole and refusing Ian’s attempts to help them without really understanding what is going on is both very moving and painful. There is a pivotal moment in the story though when Ian, Jordan and Cole spend an evening in Ian’s appartment and Jordan is letting down his walls a little. Here we can get a glimpse of how wonderful a relationship between Ian and Jordan could be. But unfortunately later by outside interferance the whole situation blows into their faces.
This incredible climax leads to another message in this story. Ian has finally to face the realities of his life. After his relationship with Jordan was brutally cut off he is ending up with a serious condition that makes him think about who his friends are and who are not. And that he has to let go to start his life all over again.
Something else that impressed me in this wonderful novel is the way Mr. Henley handled Cole. It is very easy with such a character to slip into cliches. But as one can expect from an author like A.F. Henley, who treats all his characters in every story with so much care and respect, he does the same with Cole. Without claiming to understand what is going on in the mind of an autistic child, Cole’s situation is written with so much sincerity and dignity that it leaves me grateful and very satisfied.
Another very positive aspect og the novel is how the author manages to weave together those very different characters. Both Ian and Jordan are looking for something in their life. Their situation is so similiar and yet so different. But both are wishing for nothing more than love, support and a life with someone worth sharing their lives with. But both have to learn in their own way who their true friends are. Ian by letting go and Jordan by learning to trust. What I find brilliant in this story is the notion that one can only trust a person if one knows that person is able to see and understand one’s situation and life. That understanding is true and honest when it comes without words. That is what Cole is depending on because of his inability to communicate properly with the outside world. And it is this failure of communication that causes the problems between Ian and Jordan. So in a way Cole’s situation is like an analogy of Ian’s and Jordan’s situation and at the same time the fabric that weaves all those character‘s fates together.
I love this novel. Although its general tone is a serious one there are moments of smoking hot encounters between Ian and Jordan as well as warm scenes. I really cared for the fate of the characters. And if this awesome piece of writing would be like music there would be drums and basses but there are also the violins.
I so much hope to see more novels coming from A.F. Henley because his characters and his writing style are so captivating.
This whole situation is written in a very convincing way. A.F. Henley understands perfectly well how to create a situation where the reader has this feeling that all Jordan wishes for is a stable and secure enviroment for Cole and himself but just can’t let down his defenses because the secret he is hiding terrifies him too much. Adding Chrissy, a very young mother who also has to raise her child alone very much completes Jordan’s world and make it even more convincing.
Reading how Jordan is dedicating his life to Cole and refusing Ian’s attempts to help them without really understanding what is going on is both very moving and painful. There is a pivotal moment in the story though when Ian, Jordan and Cole spend an evening in Ian’s appartment and Jordan is letting down his walls a little. Here we can get a glimpse of how wonderful a relationship between Ian and Jordan could be. But unfortunately later by outside interferance the whole situation blows into their faces.
This incredible climax leads to another message in this story. Ian has finally to face the realities of his life. After his relationship with Jordan was brutally cut off he is ending up with a serious condition that makes him think about who his friends are and who are not. And that he has to let go to start his life all over again.
Something else that impressed me in this wonderful novel is the way Mr. Henley handled Cole. It is very easy with such a character to slip into cliches. But as one can expect from an author like A.F. Henley, who treats all his characters in every story with so much care and respect, he does the same with Cole. Without claiming to understand what is going on in the mind of an autistic child, Cole’s situation is written with so much sincerity and dignity that it leaves me grateful and very satisfied.
Another very positive aspect og the novel is how the author manages to weave together those very different characters. Both Ian and Jordan are looking for something in their life. Their situation is so similiar and yet so different. But both are wishing for nothing more than love, support and a life with someone worth sharing their lives with. But both have to learn in their own way who their true friends are. Ian by letting go and Jordan by learning to trust. What I find brilliant in this story is the notion that one can only trust a person if one knows that person is able to see and understand one’s situation and life. That understanding is true and honest when it comes without words. That is what Cole is depending on because of his inability to communicate properly with the outside world. And it is this failure of communication that causes the problems between Ian and Jordan. So in a way Cole’s situation is like an analogy of Ian’s and Jordan’s situation and at the same time the fabric that weaves all those character‘s fates together.
I love this novel. Although its general tone is a serious one there are moments of smoking hot encounters between Ian and Jordan as well as warm scenes. I really cared for the fate of the characters. And if this awesome piece of writing would be like music there would be drums and basses but there are also the violins.
I so much hope to see more novels coming from A.F. Henley because his characters and his writing style are so captivating.
November 14, 2019
Music portrays the rhythms of life with its high and low notes, fast and slow ones, and everything in between. It's not surprising that most people think of music as a universal language. Our feelings can be expressed in music even when there are no appropriate words. It engages our intelligence by compelling us to use both sides of our brains causing harmony of our minds and spirits. Cole is a little boy, lost in himself, not able to communicate with others. He's frustrated and needs intervention. Assistance comes from an unusual source, from Ian, a stranger who meets and falls in love with his father, Jordan; someone who is observant enough to realize that music just might be the key to unlocking the tremendous potential Ian sees in this child.
Ian falls fast for the man he has a brief encounter with in a bathroom stall, especially since that's not at all what he intended to do. Ian is lonely and wounded by a previous failed relationship, but is willing to try for another shot at happiness. When Jordan approaches him in the bar's bathroom, he's startled and scrambles to make more of the encounter than there actually is, at least from Jordan's point of view. Ian is almost embarrassingly needy, but I can't fault his tenacity. He sees something he wants and desperately needs and goes for it. Unfortunately he's shot down, but not quite for the reasons he believes. It's not that Jordan doesn't want to be in a relationship, he just can't afford to get close to anyone because he's hiding an enormous secret. As time goes on, Ian begins to suspect that Jordan is lying to him and starts asking him pointed questions, such as, why aren't there any baby pictures of him and Cole or other memorabilia from earlier years? My first question would have been how a twenty-two-year-old man could have an eight-year-old child, but at that point, Ian is so emotionally involved with both of them that he wants to believe what Jordan tells him, regardless of the facts.
Even though Jordan means well, emotionally and financially, he is poorly equipped to care for Cole especially since he is autistic. Jordan's perspective of life is definitely skewed. When he meets Ian, he is determined not to get involved. He doesn't want to bring anyone into his and Cole's life. He says he doesn't need help, but deep down, he knows he's in over his head. His introduction to Ian is sleazy to say the least, and his attempt at anonymity is foiled by Ian's insistence for more than a slam-bam-thank-you-man. Ian wants a lot more than Jordan can give. Jordan blows him off; but it seems that fate has more in store for them and they keep being thrown together. When Ian becomes closer and wants to know more about him and Cole, Jordan becomes volatile and his behavior even more erratic.
This is an intense, well-developed love story with lots of social issues interwoven within Ian and Jordan's love affair, i.e., good intentions don't always have the desired result; letting others rule your life is neither desirable or productive; and learning to stand up for yourself is the only way. A.F.'s use of musical terms to represent the progress of the story was not only effective, but added a special touch which I found quite pleasing. I liked the way A.F. compared and contrasted music to life. I also enjoyed the introduction of music therapy as a credible way to help autistic children combine emotion and logic. I'd like to recommend this story to those who have an interest in music, being true to yourself, autism, and happy endings. Thanks, A.F., for the delightful, thoughtful tale.
NOTE: This book was provided by the author for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
Ian falls fast for the man he has a brief encounter with in a bathroom stall, especially since that's not at all what he intended to do. Ian is lonely and wounded by a previous failed relationship, but is willing to try for another shot at happiness. When Jordan approaches him in the bar's bathroom, he's startled and scrambles to make more of the encounter than there actually is, at least from Jordan's point of view. Ian is almost embarrassingly needy, but I can't fault his tenacity. He sees something he wants and desperately needs and goes for it. Unfortunately he's shot down, but not quite for the reasons he believes. It's not that Jordan doesn't want to be in a relationship, he just can't afford to get close to anyone because he's hiding an enormous secret. As time goes on, Ian begins to suspect that Jordan is lying to him and starts asking him pointed questions, such as, why aren't there any baby pictures of him and Cole or other memorabilia from earlier years? My first question would have been how a twenty-two-year-old man could have an eight-year-old child, but at that point, Ian is so emotionally involved with both of them that he wants to believe what Jordan tells him, regardless of the facts.
Even though Jordan means well, emotionally and financially, he is poorly equipped to care for Cole especially since he is autistic. Jordan's perspective of life is definitely skewed. When he meets Ian, he is determined not to get involved. He doesn't want to bring anyone into his and Cole's life. He says he doesn't need help, but deep down, he knows he's in over his head. His introduction to Ian is sleazy to say the least, and his attempt at anonymity is foiled by Ian's insistence for more than a slam-bam-thank-you-man. Ian wants a lot more than Jordan can give. Jordan blows him off; but it seems that fate has more in store for them and they keep being thrown together. When Ian becomes closer and wants to know more about him and Cole, Jordan becomes volatile and his behavior even more erratic.
This is an intense, well-developed love story with lots of social issues interwoven within Ian and Jordan's love affair, i.e., good intentions don't always have the desired result; letting others rule your life is neither desirable or productive; and learning to stand up for yourself is the only way. A.F.'s use of musical terms to represent the progress of the story was not only effective, but added a special touch which I found quite pleasing. I liked the way A.F. compared and contrasted music to life. I also enjoyed the introduction of music therapy as a credible way to help autistic children combine emotion and logic. I'd like to recommend this story to those who have an interest in music, being true to yourself, autism, and happy endings. Thanks, A.F., for the delightful, thoughtful tale.
NOTE: This book was provided by the author for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
August 8, 2013
I'm torn about how I feel about this story.
On the one hand the idea of a set in his ways-workaholic- feeling unloveable finding a young man to brighten his life and love him to love him back is wonderful, add to that a sweet child with a disability, a Cinderfella storyline and I should love it.
But I don't, Ian is 36, left by his cheating scumbag of a boyfriend goes into a club and all of his thoughts are how wrong he is, what a loser, how no one will want him. Yes, these were put in his head by his ex, but it got a little old. Then he hooks up with a young man who was very clear that it was JUST a hook-up.
Yet, Ian can't let go, pushes for more, they run into each other and really he comes across as desperate and needy.
Even though I did not like Aubrey in any way, she was right telling him he falls completely and fast.
I felt Ian wanted Jordan, the 22 year old father of an 8 year old, but didn't treat him like an adult. He checks the cabinets of there is enough food, bit doesn't offer to get some groceries, no he threatens him with calling someone about Cole.
It's not that I begrudged him his questions and his need to know more, but the whole way he went about it. He literally forced himself on Jordan, pushed himself into his life and then tried to take over and started making demands and came across as condescending one minute and then needy the next.
Jordan, well...he was immature, he was emotional and he was doing the best he could. He made a poor decision and I wish he had thought it through and although he knew what he did was wrong, he hadn't really looked for an alternative or tried to get in contact with anyone who could help him on his own. Yes, he was moving in that direction, because Ian was forcing his hand, but on his own, he admitted that it was a mistake but I didn't see him even thinking about rectifying it on his own.
Then...Jordan not contacting Ian I could understand, but Ian not even trying to find out something? He was so forceful in getting what he wanted, when it was Jordan in his bed, that he wanted, but then? Nothing? It wasn't worth a little effort?
Now to Ian's behavior at work, I liked when he stood up for himself, but he had trouble doing it in a normal way, when he did, he was rude and profane. But then gave into the demands, despite standing up and saying no...what's the point then?
The heart attack seemed like a blessing in disguise, I was so glad he seemed to be learning to calmly say what he thought and then move on. The work example was great.
I loved that he blew Aubrey and Madison off. I would have forgiven Aubrey, but all the conversations she had with Ian before the incident at Jordan's she was so arrogant and putting him down and smirking..and then to bring Madison to Ian's home like a gift? Gah..so glad he kicked their sorry asses to the curb.
The ending, again, left me wanting. I was glad they were getting a second chance, they deserved it, but again, I felt like Ian was treating Jordan like a child. If you can have sex with him, you should not be asking the parents about his curfews and rules and what boundaries they have set for him!!
So, I guess I loved the idea of this book, the writing was very good and flowed well, but the characters made me angry, I was gritting my teeth and frustrated with every single one of them, with the exception of Cole.
On the one hand the idea of a set in his ways-workaholic- feeling unloveable finding a young man to brighten his life and love him to love him back is wonderful, add to that a sweet child with a disability, a Cinderfella storyline and I should love it.
But I don't, Ian is 36, left by his cheating scumbag of a boyfriend goes into a club and all of his thoughts are how wrong he is, what a loser, how no one will want him. Yes, these were put in his head by his ex, but it got a little old. Then he hooks up with a young man who was very clear that it was JUST a hook-up.
Yet, Ian can't let go, pushes for more, they run into each other and really he comes across as desperate and needy.
Even though I did not like Aubrey in any way, she was right telling him he falls completely and fast.
I felt Ian wanted Jordan, the 22 year old father of an 8 year old, but didn't treat him like an adult. He checks the cabinets of there is enough food, bit doesn't offer to get some groceries, no he threatens him with calling someone about Cole.
It's not that I begrudged him his questions and his need to know more, but the whole way he went about it. He literally forced himself on Jordan, pushed himself into his life and then tried to take over and started making demands and came across as condescending one minute and then needy the next.
Jordan, well...he was immature, he was emotional and he was doing the best he could. He made a poor decision and I wish he had thought it through and although he knew what he did was wrong, he hadn't really looked for an alternative or tried to get in contact with anyone who could help him on his own. Yes, he was moving in that direction, because Ian was forcing his hand, but on his own, he admitted that it was a mistake but I didn't see him even thinking about rectifying it on his own.
Then...Jordan not contacting Ian I could understand, but Ian not even trying to find out something? He was so forceful in getting what he wanted, when it was Jordan in his bed, that he wanted, but then? Nothing? It wasn't worth a little effort?
Now to Ian's behavior at work, I liked when he stood up for himself, but he had trouble doing it in a normal way, when he did, he was rude and profane. But then gave into the demands, despite standing up and saying no...what's the point then?
The heart attack seemed like a blessing in disguise, I was so glad he seemed to be learning to calmly say what he thought and then move on. The work example was great.
I loved that he blew Aubrey and Madison off. I would have forgiven Aubrey, but all the conversations she had with Ian before the incident at Jordan's she was so arrogant and putting him down and smirking..and then to bring Madison to Ian's home like a gift? Gah..so glad he kicked their sorry asses to the curb.
The ending, again, left me wanting. I was glad they were getting a second chance, they deserved it, but again, I felt like Ian was treating Jordan like a child. If you can have sex with him, you should not be asking the parents about his curfews and rules and what boundaries they have set for him!!
So, I guess I loved the idea of this book, the writing was very good and flowed well, but the characters made me angry, I was gritting my teeth and frustrated with every single one of them, with the exception of Cole.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 13, 2014
4.5 stars. Rounded up because echoes of this book have stuck with me for longer than most due to the powerful story and characters.
Henley has a wonderful way with words, so it was no surprise that this book was beautifully written. I was grabbed by the story right away and had to force myself to read slowly and savor the dialogue, internal agonizing, delicious sex, and moments of happiness.
The characters were realistic, flawed and all. I was a big fan of the little boy Cole, who worked his way into heart, like he did Ian's. Jordan and Ian both won my sympathy, for different reasons, and it took longer for Ian, but I was rooting for them.
My only real critique is of the pacing of the ending of the novel. I feel the resolution came a bit quickly for my taste, but that's a personal thing - I tend to enjoy longer conclusions at times and felt that the extremity of the climax in Sonata was deserving of a more drawn out finale to resolve everything. I did really like how the book ended, though, and how the men I grew to love over the course of the novel got their happiness.
Looking forward to more from Henley.
Henley has a wonderful way with words, so it was no surprise that this book was beautifully written. I was grabbed by the story right away and had to force myself to read slowly and savor the dialogue, internal agonizing, delicious sex, and moments of happiness.
The characters were realistic, flawed and all. I was a big fan of the little boy Cole, who worked his way into heart, like he did Ian's. Jordan and Ian both won my sympathy, for different reasons, and it took longer for Ian, but I was rooting for them.
My only real critique is of the pacing of the ending of the novel. I feel the resolution came a bit quickly for my taste, but that's a personal thing - I tend to enjoy longer conclusions at times and felt that the extremity of the climax in Sonata was deserving of a more drawn out finale to resolve everything. I did really like how the book ended, though, and how the men I grew to love over the course of the novel got their happiness.
Looking forward to more from Henley.
August 1, 2013
Sonata was a very enjoyable romance that focused on trust and relationships, centered around an interwoven theme of music, wrapping up with a neatly-resolved but still plausible ending. There was a compelling undercurrent of tension in the mystery around Jordan, his youth, and his very devoted care of Cole, and it kept me reading and up later than I'd intended.
I found Ian to be very relatable, and his concerns all those that a discerning person would experience, his rationalizations the same that would tempt anyone falling head over heels for someone they don't want to let go.
Some of the things that impressed me about this story were a sensitive but not sugarcoated or idealized handling of an autistic character, strong characterizations throughout, and Ian's own growth as he went from someone who was overworked and underappreciated to someone who stood up for his own self-worth.
I rushed through my first reading. I'll take the second one more slowly.
I found Ian to be very relatable, and his concerns all those that a discerning person would experience, his rationalizations the same that would tempt anyone falling head over heels for someone they don't want to let go.
Some of the things that impressed me about this story were a sensitive but not sugarcoated or idealized handling of an autistic character, strong characterizations throughout, and Ian's own growth as he went from someone who was overworked and underappreciated to someone who stood up for his own self-worth.
I rushed through my first reading. I'll take the second one more slowly.
August 30, 2013
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I really enjoyed reading this story. The character development was great and the writing was strong. The pacing of the story was just right for me. The first part of the story showed Ian and Jordan developing their relationship with Cole in their midst. The second part had Ian questioning Jordan's and Cole's relationship as father and son, which eventually led to Jordan revealing his past.
I really liked how the author incorporated Cole's character, wrote about Autism and used music references in the story. It brought out a lot of emotion and another level to a relationship that a lot of other stories don't have. The HEA ending was well deserved after the turmoil the characters went through.
I really enjoyed reading this story. The character development was great and the writing was strong. The pacing of the story was just right for me. The first part of the story showed Ian and Jordan developing their relationship with Cole in their midst. The second part had Ian questioning Jordan's and Cole's relationship as father and son, which eventually led to Jordan revealing his past.
I really liked how the author incorporated Cole's character, wrote about Autism and used music references in the story. It brought out a lot of emotion and another level to a relationship that a lot of other stories don't have. The HEA ending was well deserved after the turmoil the characters went through.
July 30, 2013
Sonata is a piece that begins seductively, is tempered with disharmony, and builds to a crescendo that left me more than a little shaken by its twists and revelations before it was done. A.F. Henley sets a measured pace in the telling of this story, one filled with deception and betrayal and falling in love while falling for the lies that build to a frenetic climax, then ends on a sweet note that left me wanting more.
This is a book I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend if you’re looking for a single-sitting-read filled with highs and lows and the in-betweens where love grows.
Full review can be found at The Novel Approach
This is a book I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend if you’re looking for a single-sitting-read filled with highs and lows and the in-betweens where love grows.
Full review can be found at The Novel Approach
August 3, 2013
My brain is still coming down from reading it (I, literally, just put the nook down a moment ago). But I absolutely loved this story! I wanted to punch Aubrey, loved Ian and Jordan and really appreciated Cole's portrayal. I think I saw a bit of a friend in Ian. ;)
I thought the sex was very well done and I appreciated the variety of it. I liked the situation surrounding the kissing - what it meant to both of them (even if J wouldn't admit it right away).
Very well done, overall. :D Thank you, Mr. Henley, for a wonderful read!
I thought the sex was very well done and I appreciated the variety of it. I liked the situation surrounding the kissing - what it meant to both of them (even if J wouldn't admit it right away).
Very well done, overall. :D Thank you, Mr. Henley, for a wonderful read!
August 10, 2013
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This book was provided by the author in exchange for a fair and honest review
This book was provided by the author in exchange for a fair and honest review
July 18, 2013
I cried. Twice. Another awesome story, Henley. ^^
February 25, 2014
How many ways can I say I loved Sonata? The author gave us a touching story on so many levels that it broke my heart while also mended what it broke inside of me. The characters are so well developed you embrace them and bring them into your heart and learn from them. The power of forgiveness, love and the power to stand up for your own rights in life are abundant in this book.
Ian was a middle aged gay man, who spent his time working at the office. While his associates assumed his life meant nothing since he didn’t have a wife and kids, he was the chosen one to stay late after work, finish the jobs that his bosses didn’t want to do, work on weekends. His life was nothing more than a means for others to get what they wanted. One night at a bar he met Jordan/Justin (yes we call him Jordan at the beginning of the story but we soon learn his name is Justin). What was meant to be a quick sexual event, left Jordan not wanting more but Ian falling for this younger man.
Knowing that Jordan was half his age and that he was coming off a bad break with the last boyfriend, Ian still couldn’t turn away when fate placed him and Jordan in the same locations. He saw Jordan at the mall with a young boy and the questions started to swirl as to if Jordan was actually free to have a relationship with Ian, could that be why he discarded Ian so easily and quickly?
As the story progresses we watch Ian become closer to the little boy named Cole who has Asperger’s and we see how Jordan tries to take care of Cole and slowly let the walls down. Trust was something Jordan didn’t understand and we soon became aware of why that was in a heart breaking scene that left Cole screaming, Jordan/Justin being taken away and Ian fighting for his life on the floor.
Ian takes the time to recover and realizes that he can’t keep going through life emotionally numb and allowing people to take from his soul. It is ok to stand up and say I am angry, I am hurt and I deserve the respect that should be given to me. As he finds his way in life with this new realization he still misses what he had with Justin and he wonders if anyone is taking on the role he started with Cole. Ian realized that the piano was the thing that connected Cole to life, at the age of 8 this boy could play the piano, he could create music for the world. Music was the voice that Cole had and he prayed someone would nurture that in him.
The end of the story was beautiful and I was so happy the author let us see where these characters ended up. I will let you know there are m/m sexual scenes but they are done with class and respect and you can feel the connection the two men have to each other. What impressed me more was the life lessons we watched happen with the characters. I love this book and I would highly recommend it to you readers.
Reviewed by Tbird for Crystal's Many Reviewers
*Copy provided for honest review!*
Ian was a middle aged gay man, who spent his time working at the office. While his associates assumed his life meant nothing since he didn’t have a wife and kids, he was the chosen one to stay late after work, finish the jobs that his bosses didn’t want to do, work on weekends. His life was nothing more than a means for others to get what they wanted. One night at a bar he met Jordan/Justin (yes we call him Jordan at the beginning of the story but we soon learn his name is Justin). What was meant to be a quick sexual event, left Jordan not wanting more but Ian falling for this younger man.
Knowing that Jordan was half his age and that he was coming off a bad break with the last boyfriend, Ian still couldn’t turn away when fate placed him and Jordan in the same locations. He saw Jordan at the mall with a young boy and the questions started to swirl as to if Jordan was actually free to have a relationship with Ian, could that be why he discarded Ian so easily and quickly?
As the story progresses we watch Ian become closer to the little boy named Cole who has Asperger’s and we see how Jordan tries to take care of Cole and slowly let the walls down. Trust was something Jordan didn’t understand and we soon became aware of why that was in a heart breaking scene that left Cole screaming, Jordan/Justin being taken away and Ian fighting for his life on the floor.
Ian takes the time to recover and realizes that he can’t keep going through life emotionally numb and allowing people to take from his soul. It is ok to stand up and say I am angry, I am hurt and I deserve the respect that should be given to me. As he finds his way in life with this new realization he still misses what he had with Justin and he wonders if anyone is taking on the role he started with Cole. Ian realized that the piano was the thing that connected Cole to life, at the age of 8 this boy could play the piano, he could create music for the world. Music was the voice that Cole had and he prayed someone would nurture that in him.
The end of the story was beautiful and I was so happy the author let us see where these characters ended up. I will let you know there are m/m sexual scenes but they are done with class and respect and you can feel the connection the two men have to each other. What impressed me more was the life lessons we watched happen with the characters. I love this book and I would highly recommend it to you readers.
Reviewed by Tbird for Crystal's Many Reviewers
*Copy provided for honest review!*
January 15, 2015
Beautiful. Sonata is an absolutely beautiful story and I loved every page of it, including the ones that broke my heart. Ian is among the lucky few that happen to find love with a one-night stand. At least, it looks like love. Or it could be the start of love, if only Jordan would stop pushing him away. But fate or the universe seems insistent that Jordan give Ian a chance because their paths cross not once, not twice, not even three times, but over and over until Jordan finally agrees to spend more time with Ian. Because Jordan is a single father, Ian has to work around his schedule and ends up spending time with Jordan at his apartment and gets to know Jordan’s son Cole … well, he gets to know Cole as well as one can get to know a child with autism.
I loved the way that Jordan and Ian’s path kept crossing. Even though Jordan tried to keep their interactions completely sexual – and those were some freaking hot sex scenes – Ian refuses to be relegated to a booty call and takes every opportunity to worm his way into Jordan’s life. I also loved how realistic Cole’s character felt. I work with children and teens with autism and Asperger’s syndrome and was thrilled with the way that Cole was portrayed as well as the interactions between Cole and Jordan, and Cole and Ian. But the best part was the twist that the author adds to the story. I really didn’t see it coming until Ian’s suspicions began to form. However, I was appalled by Aubrey’s interferences and was glad when Ian finally called her out on them. Actually, the absolute best part of this book is the ending. It was perfect for Ian and Jordan.
Sonata was an extremely emotional read for me and I loved every up and down on the rollercoaster ride I felt like I was on. I love books that can make me laugh and cry and this one definitely meets that criteria. There was so much that I loved about this book that I am sure I’m not recalling every great scene in the book. Sonata may have been the first book by A.F. Henley that I’ve read but it won’t be the last.
I received a complimentary copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
Reviewed by Angela at Crystal's Many Reviewers!
I loved the way that Jordan and Ian’s path kept crossing. Even though Jordan tried to keep their interactions completely sexual – and those were some freaking hot sex scenes – Ian refuses to be relegated to a booty call and takes every opportunity to worm his way into Jordan’s life. I also loved how realistic Cole’s character felt. I work with children and teens with autism and Asperger’s syndrome and was thrilled with the way that Cole was portrayed as well as the interactions between Cole and Jordan, and Cole and Ian. But the best part was the twist that the author adds to the story. I really didn’t see it coming until Ian’s suspicions began to form. However, I was appalled by Aubrey’s interferences and was glad when Ian finally called her out on them. Actually, the absolute best part of this book is the ending. It was perfect for Ian and Jordan.
Sonata was an extremely emotional read for me and I loved every up and down on the rollercoaster ride I felt like I was on. I love books that can make me laugh and cry and this one definitely meets that criteria. There was so much that I loved about this book that I am sure I’m not recalling every great scene in the book. Sonata may have been the first book by A.F. Henley that I’ve read but it won’t be the last.
I received a complimentary copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
Reviewed by Angela at Crystal's Many Reviewers!
August 18, 2013
Sonata is as much a love story as it is a life story. No, we do not follow the two from childhood up, but like most of AF Henley's books we see some serious character growth an development. It is possibly my personal taste speaking, but I like to see two people grow together as they grow up. The struggles both go through, though very different, are both painful and taxing. Temporary solace found in one another turns into life-long desire to both find and stay with one's other half. The universe intervenes to bring Ian and Jordan together, showing the two what their lives could be together, if only the two weren't so stubborn.
The novel forced me to choke up for more than half of it and tears to fall for half of that. A terribly powerful message and a divinely heart wrenching tale. AF Henley's grasp of imagery and raw human emotion are more than prominent in this book. More like they grab you by the arm, sit you down, and shout in your face to the point where you can't help but see and feel what the characters are seeing and feeling.
As long time fan of Henley I have to say that, of his published works, Sonata jumped to the top. It may always just end up being personal preference but when it comes to characters I feel like the two in this felt more strongly and hurt more painfully (which led to all the more satisfaction when happily after reared its head) than any other I've seen, and I like that. Five, well deserved, stars for the masterpiece. I look forward to future books from him.
The novel forced me to choke up for more than half of it and tears to fall for half of that. A terribly powerful message and a divinely heart wrenching tale. AF Henley's grasp of imagery and raw human emotion are more than prominent in this book. More like they grab you by the arm, sit you down, and shout in your face to the point where you can't help but see and feel what the characters are seeing and feeling.
As long time fan of Henley I have to say that, of his published works, Sonata jumped to the top. It may always just end up being personal preference but when it comes to characters I feel like the two in this felt more strongly and hurt more painfully (which led to all the more satisfaction when happily after reared its head) than any other I've seen, and I like that. Five, well deserved, stars for the masterpiece. I look forward to future books from him.
September 30, 2013
***SPOILERS***
Wow! Just wow! I’ve never read a story involving two of the most dysfunctional and pathetic main characters as Ian and Jordon/Justin. The most sensible and mature action Ian ever took was throwing Madison and Aubrey out of his house and life. His second most sensible and mature action should have been to walk away from Jordan/Justin fast.
Ian and Jordon/Justin were simply weak men who had no control or grip of their own lies. Their inability to communicate only reflected their utter dysfunction. I mean really, after the piano recital and months of no contact they end up in the car having sex. That wasn’t true love to me, rather than a blatant example of codependency, poor decision making, and an obvious overload of hormones. Jordon/Justin never had the fortitude to contact Ian as evidenced by the fact that the invitation to Cole’s recital was offered my Jordan/Justin’s mother.
I never connected to Ian and Jordan/Justin as main characters and therefore the story fell completely flat to me. As a reader of m/m romance as a means for escape reading, the only thing I wanted to do was strangle both main characters. That unfortunately does not make for great escapism and I felt like I wasted 3 hours.
Wow! Just wow! I’ve never read a story involving two of the most dysfunctional and pathetic main characters as Ian and Jordon/Justin. The most sensible and mature action Ian ever took was throwing Madison and Aubrey out of his house and life. His second most sensible and mature action should have been to walk away from Jordan/Justin fast.
Ian and Jordon/Justin were simply weak men who had no control or grip of their own lies. Their inability to communicate only reflected their utter dysfunction. I mean really, after the piano recital and months of no contact they end up in the car having sex. That wasn’t true love to me, rather than a blatant example of codependency, poor decision making, and an obvious overload of hormones. Jordon/Justin never had the fortitude to contact Ian as evidenced by the fact that the invitation to Cole’s recital was offered my Jordan/Justin’s mother.
I never connected to Ian and Jordan/Justin as main characters and therefore the story fell completely flat to me. As a reader of m/m romance as a means for escape reading, the only thing I wanted to do was strangle both main characters. That unfortunately does not make for great escapism and I felt like I wasted 3 hours.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 30, 2013
4.5 Stars
In the interest of transparency, I won my paperback copy of Sonata in a giveaway. The excerpt I read had definitely intrigued me, so when I found my copy in my mailbox I promptly tore open the package and settled in to read. Well actually, I think I devoured the book!
I was drawn quickly into this story about Ian and Jordan whose initial meeting seemed not to be the harbinger of a HEA. Even the second meeting, introducing Jordan’s son Cole to Ian, developed in a less-than-stellar fashion. But fate or the energy of the universe conspired to put them in each other’s path over and over and eventually Ian and Jordan gave in to their attraction for each other.
While Ian and Jordan’s relationship seemed more based on the physical aspects (not a bad thing at all), it was Ian’s interaction with and observances of Cole that stole my heart. Ian’s journey from solitary loner to a man open to loving a complicated child made this book for me.
A.F. Henley’s writing style was a pleasure. The pacing was varied and appropriate to the storyline’s events, illustrated most uniquely by the musical notations used as chapter titles.
A definite recommended read!
In the interest of transparency, I won my paperback copy of Sonata in a giveaway. The excerpt I read had definitely intrigued me, so when I found my copy in my mailbox I promptly tore open the package and settled in to read. Well actually, I think I devoured the book!
I was drawn quickly into this story about Ian and Jordan whose initial meeting seemed not to be the harbinger of a HEA. Even the second meeting, introducing Jordan’s son Cole to Ian, developed in a less-than-stellar fashion. But fate or the energy of the universe conspired to put them in each other’s path over and over and eventually Ian and Jordan gave in to their attraction for each other.
While Ian and Jordan’s relationship seemed more based on the physical aspects (not a bad thing at all), it was Ian’s interaction with and observances of Cole that stole my heart. Ian’s journey from solitary loner to a man open to loving a complicated child made this book for me.
A.F. Henley’s writing style was a pleasure. The pacing was varied and appropriate to the storyline’s events, illustrated most uniquely by the musical notations used as chapter titles.
A definite recommended read!
September 29, 2013
Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5
Don't pass up this marvelous book. Henley has created a story and characters that will resonate with every reader, those looking for romance and those with a special connection with children with special needs. I loved this and highly recommend it.
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October 16, 2013
Wonderfully tender love story with elements that will grab your heart an not let go. Very good read.
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September 1, 2020
So I was scouting around for a book to use for a GR challenge based on places I want to visit and wandered through the MM romance group bookshelf and just randomly chose Canada. I looked at this book and liked the cover and decided to read it. Have never read anything by this author, though, as is usual with me, I did have a few of this author's books on my tbr. I have said, ad nauseam, thank goodness for GR challenges because I never would have read this book! I have to say that this book blew me away! Ian and Jordan meet in what is one of my favorite tropes - one night stand and oops, we meet again under very different circumstances. All Jordan wants to do is get off and get out and the universe keeps throwing Ian in his path. The chemistry between them leaps off of the page. Loved Ian and his connection with Cole. Brilliantly written characters with emotional depth that is conveyed immediately which I found surprising in such a short book. Aubrey was a bit tiresome but portrayed as a good friend. What she did, though, was unforgivable. Now I find that this author has LOTS of other books so yay!! Off to one click more of them.
October 14, 2019
3.5
This is another hard one to review. I really adored some aspects of it. I mean Ian's openness and heartfelt desire to care for someone was super touching. I really liked him. I felt Jordan's desperation, even before we knew why (though I guessed his circumstances fairly early on). They were a compelling pairing.
However, even as I appreciated Henley's inclusion of an autistic child, I also felt like he was simply a plot device. He had no real discernible personality and conveniently disappeared when the plot needed him to. Plus, the happy ending wrapped up so easily that I felt Cole had simply been shunted off into the wings.
Speaking of endings, I felt like Henley just fixed everything off screen and I found it difficult to make the transition along with the story. Plus, I felt like there were a lot of things I wanted the men to talk about (to see the men talk about) that didn't happen.
For the most part however, I thought this was a sweet little romance.
This is another hard one to review. I really adored some aspects of it. I mean Ian's openness and heartfelt desire to care for someone was super touching. I really liked him. I felt Jordan's desperation, even before we knew why (though I guessed his circumstances fairly early on). They were a compelling pairing.
However, even as I appreciated Henley's inclusion of an autistic child, I also felt like he was simply a plot device. He had no real discernible personality and conveniently disappeared when the plot needed him to. Plus, the happy ending wrapped up so easily that I felt Cole had simply been shunted off into the wings.
Speaking of endings, I felt like Henley just fixed everything off screen and I found it difficult to make the transition along with the story. Plus, I felt like there were a lot of things I wanted the men to talk about (to see the men talk about) that didn't happen.
For the most part however, I thought this was a sweet little romance.
July 2, 2022
I liked it. It was a nice book to read. I was having a hard time figuring out Jordan, that made me little ambivalent towards him, but in the end, he end up being my favorite. I did enjoy the book most of the time. It does address important issues in a lighter way than I expected and the way some of this were solved were a bit underwhelming, but the overall experience of the book was a good one.
October 4, 2013
3.5 stars
I REALLY wanted to like this one and I actually enjoyed the story. It was a nice story, there were just some things I think should have been caught by some good beta readers and/or editing. I had some issues, the first being that I felt Ian jumped character a few times. There needed to be more interaction with Cole, other than Ian always swooping in to save the day. Also, at the end of the book, Cole/Coles mother specifically sent Ian a letter to visit him at the recital, then we hear NOTHING about how Cole reacted to him being there.
I REALLY wanted to like this one and I actually enjoyed the story. It was a nice story, there were just some things I think should have been caught by some good beta readers and/or editing. I had some issues, the first being that I felt Ian jumped character a few times. There needed to be more interaction with Cole, other than Ian always swooping in to save the day. Also, at the end of the book, Cole/Coles mother specifically sent Ian a letter to visit him at the recital, then we hear NOTHING about how Cole reacted to him being there.
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October 7, 2013Ok - I really didn't want to finish my challenge with a DNF and I will add another 20 books to it for all the other ones, but I really couldn't read on. On the one hand all these 'accidentally' meetings were rather farfetched and on the other hand Ian's behavior was really stalkerish. Jordan said all the time - go and leave me alone. Why can't Ian accept it? There was no chemistry and nothing besides shallow (sexual) encounters. For me this wasn't a fun read and there are so many books waiting to be read that I have to quit.
December 28, 2014
I didn't really get any connection or chemistry between Jordan and Ian. I would have liked to see more of the relationship building between Cole and Ian though. He was great with Cole, and it would have been nice for him to be more involved with his learning piano.
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