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311 pages, ebook
First published November 7, 2012
He wished he had a cigarette right now and glanced around to see if anyone was out that he could bum one off, but it was just empty space.I'm not sure how to parse this sentence.
...took a gym bag from the trunk. He filled it with the cokeI don't think thirty kilos of coke would fit in the average gym bag, and certainly would be difficult to carry, since gym bags usually have no support structure.
...sound was bassed and loudWhat? I can't hear you-- there's too much bass.
"Dike,"I think the author meant "dyke" rather than "dike" ...unless the story took place in Holland.
...felt the sheer currents of powerAs opposed to opaque currents of power?
...breaking two of the soldier's backsThe soldier had two backs?
She leaned down and ruffled through his pockets.Gee, which one of them was wearing ruffles?
He's got a bomb. I don't know what it is. It looked like it could be nuclear.If it's a bomb, then he *does* know what it is.
...chickens in a coupOK, so the chickens are going to overthrow the government-- got it.
...vice-like gripTry "vise" instead.
...straight into the air, directly at a ninety-degree angle.If it was at a ninety-degree angle, it would be traveling parallel to the ground
His ribs screamed to him from pain but the pain had subsided greatly since even a few minutes ago.Where do I begin?
The Dragon flung him to his feet but Jack forced himself back to the ground, holding down his legs, straining against himself until the boy was out of sight.Who just did what to whom, and who got paid?