The story is pretty good but it’s appeal is parochial and the Audible reader has all the local accents wrong; the natives in this area do have a distinct sound, but they don’t sound like people who recently crossed the border. The Pueblo’s accent is completely off.
Anaya’s depiction of the conflicts in this story sound borrowed from John Nichols’, “Milagro Beanfield War,” which, on its face sounds ok, but it is a haggard line.
The sex is gratuitous and I could never imagine a Norteño talking to a future son-in-law about having sex with a “bear.”. moreover, I would never imagine parents condoning - even encouraging their daughter’s premarital sex with her suitor.
Abran and Lucinda’s almost immediate falling in love is incredulous at best and bullshit at worst. Anaya dipped his toe too far into fantasy when he should have developed that part of the storyline.
While this story hints at magical realism, it lacks sufficient depth to make any of the allusions credible.
I absolutely disagree with the portrayal of women in this book. They seemed weak and apologetic. Anaya had an opportunity to develop the characters but instead opted to make females susceptible rather than resourceful. The “strong” female characters came across more as tokens rather than character studies. What a missed opportunity.
Moreover, Anaya completely glazed over New Mexico Latino’s often blatant bigotry toward Mexicans (from Mexico) Anglos, Jews, and Native Americans. Contrary to his descriptions he offered up, we Nuevo Mexicanos can be insular, cruel and bigoted.
And, for that time period, New Mexicans never referred to their communities as “barrios.” Doing so was tantamount to delve-identifying as “Mexican.” Call any Native Latino a Mexican in those days, and you would have a fight on your hands. But this is a story fir another day. suffice it to say that Anaya painted everyone with a slightly too gratuitous paint brush.
Because of that, this story and it’s sloppiness run the risk of being a pastiche; so much more could have developed such that it would have stood as a standard for a new genre, but it went the easy route. and the story paid for it.
Two stars would be generous.