I find the first few pages to be rather slow and annoying because (Shocker!) the man is Hannah's room is her cat, which if you've been dedicated to the series and read all the books (this is book 16) you'll immediately know. I have no clue why Fluke wrote the first chapter all about panty hose, since it's rather dull and I ended up skimming the chapter. Honestly, describing the ways to put them on? It's as if she needed to reach her quota, so she wrote chapter one.
Hannah (naturally) finds the body and works on finding the killer, by logically following the leads. It's as if the police have no way of solving a crime without her. Realistically they'd make her keep her nose out. Later, when Hannah's a suspect, I'm baffled that she's so upset. She (or a close family member) find bodies all the time and Hannah's food is always there. Did it not occur to anyone that it seemed a little suspicious? This is the first time anyone stopped to think "Huh. The body finder girl fines another body maybe *gasp* her food was poisoned and that's what killed the person." No small town has this many murders, I can't help but wonder what will happen since almost every character that's introduced is killed and she has to keep introducing new character's to keep the story flowing.
And the love triangle is still trudging along. It's getting to the point where it's unrealistic. The books started in 2000-it's 2013, there's been 16 books. Assuming she's having two books (or even three) represent a season, a good 5-8+ years have passed; Hannah's in her late 30's and nearing 40. At this point, she just needs to make a choice before both Mike and Norman leave her. I assumed after the Dr. Bev incident she'd realize that she needs to make a choice, because one day she won't get one. Nope. She's still dating both, even though Norman is clearly more reliable. Mike makes a nice fling, but he isn't Hannah-husband material. There's one point where she's thinking something along the lines of "I bet Mike's out with ___(enter the waitress' name. Misty?)" and she's mad, even though she's doing the exact same thing to him. She isn't exclusive, why does she expect them to be?
Mike was married with a baby on the way, then his wife was shot. You'd think he'd be wanting to start a family again, which obviously won't happen with Hannah. I still don't understand why he likes her in the first place. I'm rooting for Norman, but in this book I honestly wanted her to just pick someone, I didn't care whom. If she doesn't pick one of them, which is plausible, she'll be a real witch (which is a common term in this novel) for wasting almost a decade of both men's lives. Hannah's older and I really don't see her getting any closer to marriage and a family, I see her as an old crazy cat lady.
The dialogue is very blunt and straight forward. There's quite a few conversations that go like this.
"You are wearing make up. You look good in makeup." Mike observed.
or
"Would you like to____?"
"Yes, I would to____"
or
"Ha ha." Hannah laughed.
"What?"
"Well, Lisa, I realized that you used three cliches in a row! Hilarious!" Hannah seems to be a grumpy old English teacher who isn't exactly likable and corrects everyone all the time. I understand that Hannah has a pet peeve concerning the English language and grammar, but she's coming off as annoying.
Second to last, when Dr. Bev is murdered nobody mentions Diana. Nobody. I understand that she was a deadbeat mother, but you'd think that they'd at least be concerned a little for the poor kid; both her parents are dead. Diana gets mentioned very little in the novel, the only time she is goes like this:
"I have to go pick something up from the city." Bev said.
'I bet the something isn't your daughter who you dumped on your mother.' Thought Hannah.
On the subject of children, Tracey is cute, but she almost comes off as a smart alec at sometimes when she says something or it seems like an adult brain trapped in a 7 year old's body. I wish Bethie (who's 2!) would make an appearance, since she hasn't yet. Bethie hasn't contributed a ton to the overall plot and is rarely mentioned at all; I don't expect a baby to be out solving crimes, but maybe having Andrea bring her along to see Hannah one day at the bakery might be nice.
Lastly, how does someone in their 30's not use a cell phone or laptop or computer? I'd understand if this was the early 2000's but it isn't, it's 2013. Every time Hannah wants to use her cell phone-oops! Battery isn't charged, because she uses it so, so often and it takes a lot of power to sit in her purse turned off. The technology aspect seems like it was written from someone who just learned about it a few days ago and is reluctant to give in to the "fad".
Overall: Hannah has some weight/clothing related issue, she goes to some event, someone's murdered, the police are helpless without her instructions (I'm surprised she isn't employed there; she's solved every case they've had), she uses logic to solve the murder, she gets in some confrontation with Mr/Miss. Murderer, Mike/Norman saves her.