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The Point: The Redemption of Oban Ironbout
Searching for peace and inspiration, Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze travel to the Isle of Estillyen - a distant harbor known for bringing ancient words of worth to the present. Their lives become unexpectedly and inseparably intertwined with the reclusive Oban Ironbout - and a mystery from the past that will transform them all.
It is a tale of pain ... and redemption.
It is a tale of pain ... and redemption.
286 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2013
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About the author
William E. Jefferson
8 books21 followersWilliam Jefferson’s first novel, Messages from Estillyen, is a highly allegorical tale set beyond the Storied Sea on the distant isle of named Estillyen. As Jefferson puts it, “Estillyen is equally far from everywhere, but mystically near.”
BlueInk Review gave Messages from Estillyen a stared review, saying:
The author’s writing is skilled, poetic, and reminiscent of the classical period. This is a book to savor, not to gulp; the pace is leisurely. The style is allegorical in part, reminiscent of John Bunyan and C.S. Lewis. The “readings” hearken to Donne and Milton as well.
Clarion Review followed suit:
The author weaves the threads of his story deftly and often poetically, shaping phrases with a lilting rhythm that evokes the cadences of storytellers of old . . .
Jefferson takes readers on rich allegorical journeys that skillfully embrace modern themes along the way. His latest novel, Presence, the Play, addresses the need of personal presence in a world awash in virtual, mediated matter.
Presence, the Play traces the journey of the main character, Script, to hell and back, as he recites Chaucer and Dante. The work is vibrantly Tolkienesque with C.S. Lewis acuity.
In many respects, Jefferson’s 2018 novel, Divine Choreography of Redemption, sets the stage for Presence, the Play. While not bound by space and time, Jefferson’s work is not divorced from human worth, want, and reality.
Bill Jefferson writes from a Civil War-era cottage in the rural Ozarks and is the owner of Storybook Barn. The original 1880s all-occasion venue welcomes guests from near and far. Bill Jefferson holds an MTh in Theology and Media from the University of Edinburgh and an MA in Communication from the Wheaton Graduate School
BlueInk Review gave Messages from Estillyen a stared review, saying:
The author’s writing is skilled, poetic, and reminiscent of the classical period. This is a book to savor, not to gulp; the pace is leisurely. The style is allegorical in part, reminiscent of John Bunyan and C.S. Lewis. The “readings” hearken to Donne and Milton as well.
Clarion Review followed suit:
The author weaves the threads of his story deftly and often poetically, shaping phrases with a lilting rhythm that evokes the cadences of storytellers of old . . .
Jefferson takes readers on rich allegorical journeys that skillfully embrace modern themes along the way. His latest novel, Presence, the Play, addresses the need of personal presence in a world awash in virtual, mediated matter.
Presence, the Play traces the journey of the main character, Script, to hell and back, as he recites Chaucer and Dante. The work is vibrantly Tolkienesque with C.S. Lewis acuity.
In many respects, Jefferson’s 2018 novel, Divine Choreography of Redemption, sets the stage for Presence, the Play. While not bound by space and time, Jefferson’s work is not divorced from human worth, want, and reality.
Bill Jefferson writes from a Civil War-era cottage in the rural Ozarks and is the owner of Storybook Barn. The original 1880s all-occasion venue welcomes guests from near and far. Bill Jefferson holds an MTh in Theology and Media from the University of Edinburgh and an MA in Communication from the Wheaton Graduate School
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June 13, 2013
The Point’s subtitle on the front cover gives away the plot. The book tells the story of a man’s reconciliation with God and the community through an unlikely source. That’s the what of the story, but the real substance of any book is the way the how of the story is written. Mr. Jefferson’s voice, his style and word choices, fill the pages with elegant descriptions of place and people. He evokes the mood of the island: contemplative and peaceful. When I’d finished, I felt almost as if I had been to the island and experienced its charms.
The beauty of the descriptions was both the book’s strength and its weakness. The dialog seemed stilted and awkward in comparison. At many points, I would reread the descriptions because they were wonderful. When I hit a few pages of dialog, however, I found it easy to lay the book aside.
The plot is really a subplot, almost a proverb of the book’s central idea: “Faith is personal but never private. It’s a life shared in culture.” The experience of a couple as they attend the stories of the monks on the island balances the main plot. The book reminds me of a detailed “what I did on my summer vacation” report.
If you’re looking for a stay-up-late-‘til-it’s-finished book, this is not the one. If, however, you want a summer read for a quiet afternoon, this might just be it.
I received a free copy of this book.
The beauty of the descriptions was both the book’s strength and its weakness. The dialog seemed stilted and awkward in comparison. At many points, I would reread the descriptions because they were wonderful. When I hit a few pages of dialog, however, I found it easy to lay the book aside.
The plot is really a subplot, almost a proverb of the book’s central idea: “Faith is personal but never private. It’s a life shared in culture.” The experience of a couple as they attend the stories of the monks on the island balances the main plot. The book reminds me of a detailed “what I did on my summer vacation” report.
If you’re looking for a stay-up-late-‘til-it’s-finished book, this is not the one. If, however, you want a summer read for a quiet afternoon, this might just be it.
I received a free copy of this book.
May 20, 2013
Words matter.
They have meaning.
"Thoughts linger in the mind, intermixing, twirling 'round, overlapping, changing, and rearranging. There they stay until clothed by words. Words enable thoughts to get dressed, come out, and speak their mind. As a word, a thought is no longer indisposed, undisclosed. It has entered the world. It is a word" (p.239).
The two main characters, Goodwin and Hollie MacBreeze, attend a retreat on the Isle of Estillyen. There, monks conduct interactive readings from the Bible with the small "community". Nearly every chapter invites us to attend these sessions of thoughtful reflection on the very words of God. I took away many weighty thoughts as I "eavesdropped" on the community's conversations, which were all based on a theme about the value of words in various contexts. Jefferson stapled each of these lessons to a close with the phrase, "Words matter..." followed by one reason or another.
REDEMPTION: One stodgy ol' character, Oban Ironbout, lives on the island at The Point. He's unfriendly and unapproachable. But he's lonely, hurting, and broken. Armed with an old sketch of the house on the Point, one character dared to approach Mr. Ironbout against all warnings otherwise. I wondered why Jefferson wrote artistic ability, especially a certain sketch, into the fabric of this particular character. But it dawned on me once I sat to type my review. The sketch was, for Mr. Ironbout, the medium to the message of redemption.
Words matter, but so does the medium.
If you don't think words matter all that much, consider this. Mark Dever, pastor of Capitol Hill Baptist Church, once commented about the impact of the spoken word. "Imagine your reaction if your dog asked you, 'So, how was church today?'" You would be profoundly impacted by such a question largely due to the medium from which the questions was asked.
"Words are the substance on which faith is perched. Words are pegs on which faith hangs its hat" (p.205).
Jesus Christ is the message, and he is also the medium. He is not just the message, nor is he just the medium. He is both.
ALLEGORY: The publisher's description compares this book to the likes of John Bunyan's allegorical tale, "The Pilgrim's Progress." I didn't see it that way. Jefferson didn't name the bulk of his characters "John", or "Lisa", or "Mark", or "Sally", but used esoteric names like "Mr. Story", or "Drama", etc. The names didn't do much for me, and I don't think they added to the overall story. But neither did they detract from the story.
It was also compared to C.S. Lewis's "Screwtape Letters", which featured Satan and demons in conversation behind the scenes as they plot against God and man. Jefferson used that technique, and he pulled it off well. For instance, one lesson studied the transfiguration of Jesus. Satan and his minions were peeking over the edge of the hill, trying to figure out a game-plan in the shadows. I found this technique to be thought-provoking, because I often tend to ignore the presence of Satan's influence in varied sections of scripture.
Ultimately, all of these varied word-pictures worked together to lead to not only Oban Ironbout's redemption, but to the many character's redemption. Each character was impacted one way or another by the readings, and it proved that old saying, "no man is an island".
RECOMMENDATION: I enjoyed "The Point", mostly for its thought provocation. The book is saturated with "lectio divina" and "centering", so anyone interested in the monastic approach to their faith would likely find interest in this book.
RATING: I give "The Point" 4 stars out of 5. I consumed it quickly, but I didn't have that "hang on every detail and every word" feeling.
Disclaimer: I received this book free from Handlebar Publishers in exchange for my unbiased review of it. All opinions are mine. I was not threatened or coerced in any way to provide a positive review.
They have meaning.
"Thoughts linger in the mind, intermixing, twirling 'round, overlapping, changing, and rearranging. There they stay until clothed by words. Words enable thoughts to get dressed, come out, and speak their mind. As a word, a thought is no longer indisposed, undisclosed. It has entered the world. It is a word" (p.239).
The two main characters, Goodwin and Hollie MacBreeze, attend a retreat on the Isle of Estillyen. There, monks conduct interactive readings from the Bible with the small "community". Nearly every chapter invites us to attend these sessions of thoughtful reflection on the very words of God. I took away many weighty thoughts as I "eavesdropped" on the community's conversations, which were all based on a theme about the value of words in various contexts. Jefferson stapled each of these lessons to a close with the phrase, "Words matter..." followed by one reason or another.
REDEMPTION: One stodgy ol' character, Oban Ironbout, lives on the island at The Point. He's unfriendly and unapproachable. But he's lonely, hurting, and broken. Armed with an old sketch of the house on the Point, one character dared to approach Mr. Ironbout against all warnings otherwise. I wondered why Jefferson wrote artistic ability, especially a certain sketch, into the fabric of this particular character. But it dawned on me once I sat to type my review. The sketch was, for Mr. Ironbout, the medium to the message of redemption.
Words matter, but so does the medium.
If you don't think words matter all that much, consider this. Mark Dever, pastor of Capitol Hill Baptist Church, once commented about the impact of the spoken word. "Imagine your reaction if your dog asked you, 'So, how was church today?'" You would be profoundly impacted by such a question largely due to the medium from which the questions was asked.
"Words are the substance on which faith is perched. Words are pegs on which faith hangs its hat" (p.205).
Jesus Christ is the message, and he is also the medium. He is not just the message, nor is he just the medium. He is both.
ALLEGORY: The publisher's description compares this book to the likes of John Bunyan's allegorical tale, "The Pilgrim's Progress." I didn't see it that way. Jefferson didn't name the bulk of his characters "John", or "Lisa", or "Mark", or "Sally", but used esoteric names like "Mr. Story", or "Drama", etc. The names didn't do much for me, and I don't think they added to the overall story. But neither did they detract from the story.
It was also compared to C.S. Lewis's "Screwtape Letters", which featured Satan and demons in conversation behind the scenes as they plot against God and man. Jefferson used that technique, and he pulled it off well. For instance, one lesson studied the transfiguration of Jesus. Satan and his minions were peeking over the edge of the hill, trying to figure out a game-plan in the shadows. I found this technique to be thought-provoking, because I often tend to ignore the presence of Satan's influence in varied sections of scripture.
Ultimately, all of these varied word-pictures worked together to lead to not only Oban Ironbout's redemption, but to the many character's redemption. Each character was impacted one way or another by the readings, and it proved that old saying, "no man is an island".
RECOMMENDATION: I enjoyed "The Point", mostly for its thought provocation. The book is saturated with "lectio divina" and "centering", so anyone interested in the monastic approach to their faith would likely find interest in this book.
RATING: I give "The Point" 4 stars out of 5. I consumed it quickly, but I didn't have that "hang on every detail and every word" feeling.
Disclaimer: I received this book free from Handlebar Publishers in exchange for my unbiased review of it. All opinions are mine. I was not threatened or coerced in any way to provide a positive review.
November 23, 2013
The blurb on the back of this edition claims reminders of Bunyan, Lewis, Donne, and Milton. While it is easy to scoff at such lofty aspirations, as I did, this claim is not far off the mark. One could even argue that there is a bit of Tolkein mixed with the author’s own sense of story-telling. This is truly allegory, it is a quest story, it used Scripture as a basis for relaying truth and conflict, it shows good versus evil. In short, it has all the elements of a classic and only time will tell if it lives up to that aspiration. The protagonists are human – probably, though not certainly – and the interactions are plausible, just as one might expect from Lewis. The use of allegory is more subtle than Bunyan but just as memorable. The Readings are a retelling of important Biblical truth as we might have seen from Donne or Milton. The wordcraft is powerful and reflects the author’s formal education in theology, media, and communications.
The story takes us to Estillyen, the still place where time seems to have returned to a simpler age, though we are not completely certain when that age would have been – or even if it would have been an earthly place. In the best story-telling fashion, not all the elements that the reader needs are revealed immediately. Indeed, some are never revealed. We discover the story as the protagonists do. As the protagonists do, we also want to explore and learn more. We are drawn into the lives of Hollie and Goodwin from the first page. We want to know more about them, what the story is, who are these people they meet, what circumstances really led them to seek refuge on Estillyen. They are likeable and we develop a strong empathy toward them, just as the residents of Estillyen do.
There is also a bit of a morality tale here. Indeed, there is a message that we are to be stewards of what we have been given. The simple place Hollie and Goodwin are visiting shows the young couple what is wrong with much of the world they left behind. The people on Estillyen have adopted a simpler, more spiritual, healthier way of living. Hollie tells us that the “world needs more people like this, focused on the spiritual side of who we are, why we exist. They’re so completely on target about that. Gadgets and stuff can so easily define us, pushing us onto one treadmill after another.” Part of her frustration may be born from the disease she is fighting but there is a perspective for all of us here.
If the reader is looking to pick up a story for superficial reading, this books could serve that purpose. However, there is so much more here that reading without thinking would be a waste. This is a book to be read, savored, enjoyed, and used as a source of meditation and reflection. We can only hope that there will be sequels.
Disclosure of Material Connection: This book was received for free from the publisher for the purpose of review but a positive review was not required. The opinions expressed are those of the reviewer. This disclosure is in accordance with the United States Federal Trade Commission’s “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising” 16 CFR, Part 255.
The story takes us to Estillyen, the still place where time seems to have returned to a simpler age, though we are not completely certain when that age would have been – or even if it would have been an earthly place. In the best story-telling fashion, not all the elements that the reader needs are revealed immediately. Indeed, some are never revealed. We discover the story as the protagonists do. As the protagonists do, we also want to explore and learn more. We are drawn into the lives of Hollie and Goodwin from the first page. We want to know more about them, what the story is, who are these people they meet, what circumstances really led them to seek refuge on Estillyen. They are likeable and we develop a strong empathy toward them, just as the residents of Estillyen do.
There is also a bit of a morality tale here. Indeed, there is a message that we are to be stewards of what we have been given. The simple place Hollie and Goodwin are visiting shows the young couple what is wrong with much of the world they left behind. The people on Estillyen have adopted a simpler, more spiritual, healthier way of living. Hollie tells us that the “world needs more people like this, focused on the spiritual side of who we are, why we exist. They’re so completely on target about that. Gadgets and stuff can so easily define us, pushing us onto one treadmill after another.” Part of her frustration may be born from the disease she is fighting but there is a perspective for all of us here.
If the reader is looking to pick up a story for superficial reading, this books could serve that purpose. However, there is so much more here that reading without thinking would be a waste. This is a book to be read, savored, enjoyed, and used as a source of meditation and reflection. We can only hope that there will be sequels.
Disclosure of Material Connection: This book was received for free from the publisher for the purpose of review but a positive review was not required. The opinions expressed are those of the reviewer. This disclosure is in accordance with the United States Federal Trade Commission’s “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising” 16 CFR, Part 255.
August 12, 2013
A young married couple Hollie and Goodwin (Win) Macbreeze, struggling with Hollie's recent diagnosis of kidney disease, retreat to the remote island of Estillyen, a place Win's grandfather had often visited. In fact, Win has brought along a small painting he (Win) did as a child from a photograph his grandfather had taken of an island spot known as the Point. One of his goals is to visit that spot and see it for himself. Hollie would like to pursue her art while on the island and hopes to gain a perspective on her health condition.
What the couple finds is a place like no other, a place that begins to affect their lives from the first day on the island. Each building has a character, design, and history unique to itself. A series of twelve dramatic readings are given at various cabins over several weeks, each one narrated by one or two monks, who bring to light the truth of God's love, the sacrifice of his Son, and the blessed gift of redemption. Lurking in the shadows of each tale of the power of the Word is the insidious jealousy and dark heart of Satan. Win and Hollie feel themselves strengthened and intrigued by the readings, as well as being drawn to the people of the island.
From the very first, I knew this was not an ordinary novel. It is laden with an allegorical and poetic style. The twelve readings or lessons could be read on their own, and I think I would recommend that to anyone who reads the book. Apart from the timeless, powerful lesson of God's love for us, the book's parallel plot is Win's quest to see the Point and his new relationship with the bitter, broken man Oban who resides at the top of the Point.
While some reviews I've read rave about the island itself and the dense prose that describes its buildings, monks, nuns, and even its animals, I found myself bogged down in the detailed descriptions. With powerful reminders in every chapter that WORDS MATTER, I was afraid that I would miss something of spiritual significance in even the narrative sections of such mundane activities as eating breakfast. Nothing was a smooth read for me, and though I occasionally felt myself becoming attached to Win, Hollie, and Oban, I felt their actions and dialogues were too stilted to read as realistic, or even as characters in a fantasy. I'm not sure what relationship author Jefferson wanted to create between readers and his characters, and I can't say whether the failure to connect was mine alone, but suffice to say I never made full connections. I know there is power in Jefferson's telling of the twelve stories (described by one review as illuminating the words of the Bible for a modern audience) and I know that there are readers who will delight in every descriptive detail of the Isle of Estillyen. I hope that such readers find this title and delve into it.
For those who are intrigued by the title, take a short trip to the island by visiting this website.
I want to thank Handlebar and Port Estillyen Productions for providing a copy of the title for review purposes. All opinions are mine.
What the couple finds is a place like no other, a place that begins to affect their lives from the first day on the island. Each building has a character, design, and history unique to itself. A series of twelve dramatic readings are given at various cabins over several weeks, each one narrated by one or two monks, who bring to light the truth of God's love, the sacrifice of his Son, and the blessed gift of redemption. Lurking in the shadows of each tale of the power of the Word is the insidious jealousy and dark heart of Satan. Win and Hollie feel themselves strengthened and intrigued by the readings, as well as being drawn to the people of the island.
From the very first, I knew this was not an ordinary novel. It is laden with an allegorical and poetic style. The twelve readings or lessons could be read on their own, and I think I would recommend that to anyone who reads the book. Apart from the timeless, powerful lesson of God's love for us, the book's parallel plot is Win's quest to see the Point and his new relationship with the bitter, broken man Oban who resides at the top of the Point.
While some reviews I've read rave about the island itself and the dense prose that describes its buildings, monks, nuns, and even its animals, I found myself bogged down in the detailed descriptions. With powerful reminders in every chapter that WORDS MATTER, I was afraid that I would miss something of spiritual significance in even the narrative sections of such mundane activities as eating breakfast. Nothing was a smooth read for me, and though I occasionally felt myself becoming attached to Win, Hollie, and Oban, I felt their actions and dialogues were too stilted to read as realistic, or even as characters in a fantasy. I'm not sure what relationship author Jefferson wanted to create between readers and his characters, and I can't say whether the failure to connect was mine alone, but suffice to say I never made full connections. I know there is power in Jefferson's telling of the twelve stories (described by one review as illuminating the words of the Bible for a modern audience) and I know that there are readers who will delight in every descriptive detail of the Isle of Estillyen. I hope that such readers find this title and delve into it.
For those who are intrigued by the title, take a short trip to the island by visiting this website.
I want to thank Handlebar and Port Estillyen Productions for providing a copy of the title for review purposes. All opinions are mine.
June 11, 2013
Goodwin 'Win' and Hollie Lee Macbreeze are newlywed, recent graduates on "a journey of sourcing. ... acquiring ideas, impressions ..." before they settle into marriage and careers. After several weeks of the usual tourist stops, they are on their way to a month-long retreat.
Driven by Win's fascination with a photograph that his grandfather kept of a cottage at The Point, they arrive on the Isle of Estillyen. It is home to the Old Order of Message Makers, a group of monks who offer a series of readings called Redemption and go by pseudonyms related to storytelling, reading, and writing.
The book intersperses the readings with the story of Win's search for the house his grandfather had remembered so fondly and which he drew when he was 10 years old. A house that is occupied by Oban Ironbout, a cantankerous old man with whom the couple becomes deeply involved.
It is a story of the power of words.
~*~*~
I agreed to read and review this book, based on an excerpt that failed to reflect the heavily religious nature of the story. What seemed quaint and a little quirky in an excerpt, didn't work over the course of an entire novel.
Most of the characters felt flat and rather one-dimensional. They communicated in unbroken, page-long sections of disjointed dialogue that was frequently used in place of descriptive prose. It seemed as though they spoke at each other, rather than to each other.
Outside of the readings, which are incredibly creative and amazingly insightful, the writing was awkward. It tended toward repetitive and tedious details that really slowed everything to a crawl. I found myself digging through pages and pages of information, desperate for a point or a purpose.
Although the premise surrounding the story of Win, Lee, and Oban Ironbout is intriguing, with a lovely twist at the end, the execution fell short for me. Those interested in the readings, which are brilliantly conceived and thoughtfully executed, would be better served by buying the companion book, appropriately titled Redemption.
I am giving the book 2 stars, because it didn't work for me. But parts of the book are brilliant and the premise is promising. Other readers may enjoy it far more than I did.
~*~*~
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received a complimentary copy of this book through Handlebar Central. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.
Driven by Win's fascination with a photograph that his grandfather kept of a cottage at The Point, they arrive on the Isle of Estillyen. It is home to the Old Order of Message Makers, a group of monks who offer a series of readings called Redemption and go by pseudonyms related to storytelling, reading, and writing.
The book intersperses the readings with the story of Win's search for the house his grandfather had remembered so fondly and which he drew when he was 10 years old. A house that is occupied by Oban Ironbout, a cantankerous old man with whom the couple becomes deeply involved.
It is a story of the power of words.
~*~*~
I agreed to read and review this book, based on an excerpt that failed to reflect the heavily religious nature of the story. What seemed quaint and a little quirky in an excerpt, didn't work over the course of an entire novel.
Most of the characters felt flat and rather one-dimensional. They communicated in unbroken, page-long sections of disjointed dialogue that was frequently used in place of descriptive prose. It seemed as though they spoke at each other, rather than to each other.
Outside of the readings, which are incredibly creative and amazingly insightful, the writing was awkward. It tended toward repetitive and tedious details that really slowed everything to a crawl. I found myself digging through pages and pages of information, desperate for a point or a purpose.
Although the premise surrounding the story of Win, Lee, and Oban Ironbout is intriguing, with a lovely twist at the end, the execution fell short for me. Those interested in the readings, which are brilliantly conceived and thoughtfully executed, would be better served by buying the companion book, appropriately titled Redemption.
I am giving the book 2 stars, because it didn't work for me. But parts of the book are brilliant and the premise is promising. Other readers may enjoy it far more than I did.
~*~*~
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received a complimentary copy of this book through Handlebar Central. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.
May 30, 2013
About the Book:
Searching for peace and inspiration, Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze travel to the Isle of Estillyen - a distant harbor known for bringing ancient words of worth to the present. Their lives become unexpectedly and inseparably intertwined with the reclusive Oban Ironbout - and a mystery from the past that will transform them all.
It is a tale of pain ... and redemption.
About the Author:
William Jefferson—founder of Port Estillyen Productions and author of the breakthrough new novel, Messages from Estillyen—has spent his professional career advancing Scripture mission programs through diverse forms of media. He holds an M.Th. in Theology and Media from the University of Edinburgh and an M.A. in Communications from Wheaton Graduate School.
With his first novel, Messages from Estillyen, Jefferson shares much of the wisdom that he has gleaned during his career: that words matter, that every human being has innate worth, and that Christ alone is the perfect union of Medium and Message. William Jefferson’s preferred title is simply “Message Maker.” He writes from his rural home in the Ozarks, where he lives with his wife, Lois, and Border collie, Archie.
My Review:
Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze decide to go on a three month pilgrimage to just get away from it all. They decided to go to all the usual tourist destinations. But under the advice and encouragement of Goodwin's grandfather they added the Isle of Estillyen to the last leg of their journey.
While the couple are waiting for the ferry to arrive to take them to their destination they befriend one of the locals by the name of Mr. Kind. And he goes about the task of giving them a little more insight on this island that they are so curious about. Goodwin is in search of a cottage that he was told about as a child.
After reading the book and learning more about the author, I soon realize that this place really does exist. The island sounds very beautiful and intriguing. The book was well written and had good, strong characters to immediately draw you in and take you along for the ride.
**Disclosure** This book was sent to me at no charge for my honest review from Handlebar Publishing.
Searching for peace and inspiration, Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze travel to the Isle of Estillyen - a distant harbor known for bringing ancient words of worth to the present. Their lives become unexpectedly and inseparably intertwined with the reclusive Oban Ironbout - and a mystery from the past that will transform them all.
It is a tale of pain ... and redemption.
About the Author:
William Jefferson—founder of Port Estillyen Productions and author of the breakthrough new novel, Messages from Estillyen—has spent his professional career advancing Scripture mission programs through diverse forms of media. He holds an M.Th. in Theology and Media from the University of Edinburgh and an M.A. in Communications from Wheaton Graduate School.
With his first novel, Messages from Estillyen, Jefferson shares much of the wisdom that he has gleaned during his career: that words matter, that every human being has innate worth, and that Christ alone is the perfect union of Medium and Message. William Jefferson’s preferred title is simply “Message Maker.” He writes from his rural home in the Ozarks, where he lives with his wife, Lois, and Border collie, Archie.
My Review:
Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze decide to go on a three month pilgrimage to just get away from it all. They decided to go to all the usual tourist destinations. But under the advice and encouragement of Goodwin's grandfather they added the Isle of Estillyen to the last leg of their journey.
While the couple are waiting for the ferry to arrive to take them to their destination they befriend one of the locals by the name of Mr. Kind. And he goes about the task of giving them a little more insight on this island that they are so curious about. Goodwin is in search of a cottage that he was told about as a child.
After reading the book and learning more about the author, I soon realize that this place really does exist. The island sounds very beautiful and intriguing. The book was well written and had good, strong characters to immediately draw you in and take you along for the ride.
**Disclosure** This book was sent to me at no charge for my honest review from Handlebar Publishing.
July 3, 2013
If you are in a hurry or have a short-attention span, you will be frustrated by the pace of this book. This is a slow-moving contemplation of deeply eternal things. One that makes you stop and think and reflect on what you just read.
The setting for the book is the Isle of Estillyen--a monastic community known for their "readings." Basically, the monk staff performs dialogues reenacted from Scripture along with some imaginative renderings of dialogues between Lucifer and his demon lackeys. The monks actually take on names that tie into the "story" theme: Epic, Narrative, Writer, Plot, Saga, Story, Drama. They are called Message Makers and you can read their real life biographies here. They bring their audience into the readings by including a "Voice" that usually involves a trio of people expressing questions or observations someone might have when reading the Bible.
The author doesn't skip ahead and gloss over or summarize the events, but carefully describes and allows the reader to partake of the transformation. Jefferson was a master of details--describing people and places like a cinematic experience so the reader can truly visualize the scenes.
This was a truly remarkable, beautiful tale that I look forward to rereading. Many things to contemplate and digest. A completely satisfying read. If you want to be challenged in your faith and your understanding of Christ and his redemptive power I recommend this book.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from Handlebar Marketing as part of their Book Review Blogger program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255: "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising."
The setting for the book is the Isle of Estillyen--a monastic community known for their "readings." Basically, the monk staff performs dialogues reenacted from Scripture along with some imaginative renderings of dialogues between Lucifer and his demon lackeys. The monks actually take on names that tie into the "story" theme: Epic, Narrative, Writer, Plot, Saga, Story, Drama. They are called Message Makers and you can read their real life biographies here. They bring their audience into the readings by including a "Voice" that usually involves a trio of people expressing questions or observations someone might have when reading the Bible.
The author doesn't skip ahead and gloss over or summarize the events, but carefully describes and allows the reader to partake of the transformation. Jefferson was a master of details--describing people and places like a cinematic experience so the reader can truly visualize the scenes.
This was a truly remarkable, beautiful tale that I look forward to rereading. Many things to contemplate and digest. A completely satisfying read. If you want to be challenged in your faith and your understanding of Christ and his redemptive power I recommend this book.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from Handlebar Marketing as part of their Book Review Blogger program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255: "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising."
June 1, 2013
William E. Jefferson in his new book, “The Point” The Redemption of Oban Ironbout published by Port Estillyen Productions brings us into the lives of Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze.
From the Back Cover: SEARCHING for peace and inspiration, Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze travel to the Isle of Estillyen—a distant harbor known for bringing ancient words of worth to the present. Their lives become unexpectedly and inseparably intertwined with the reclusive Oban Ironbout—and a mystery from the past that will transform them all. It is a tale of pain…and redemption.
First off there really is an Estillyen that you have to take a ferry to visit and there really are monks there. “The Point” is a story about pain and how, if it is not resolved, will make us reclusive and bitter and try to keep the world away. “The Point” is a story about love and how it can break down the walls that we use to protect us from that pain and can heal us. I think Mr. Jefferson has done a good job in his handling of the subject. It is an allegory and, sometimes, I have problems with allegories and I think this was one of them. Other than that the story is well done.
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Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from Handlebar. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 : “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
From the Back Cover: SEARCHING for peace and inspiration, Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze travel to the Isle of Estillyen—a distant harbor known for bringing ancient words of worth to the present. Their lives become unexpectedly and inseparably intertwined with the reclusive Oban Ironbout—and a mystery from the past that will transform them all. It is a tale of pain…and redemption.
First off there really is an Estillyen that you have to take a ferry to visit and there really are monks there. “The Point” is a story about pain and how, if it is not resolved, will make us reclusive and bitter and try to keep the world away. “The Point” is a story about love and how it can break down the walls that we use to protect us from that pain and can heal us. I think Mr. Jefferson has done a good job in his handling of the subject. It is an allegory and, sometimes, I have problems with allegories and I think this was one of them. Other than that the story is well done.
If you would like to listen to interviews with other authors and professionals please go to www.kingdomhighlights.org where they are available On Demand.
To listen to 24 hours non-stop, commercial free Christian music please visit our internet radio station www.kingdomairwaves.org
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from Handlebar. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 : “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
July 7, 2013
The Point is an unassuming yet powerful story that both instructs and captivates its audience. This story is mesmerizing in its ability to speak peace and comfort to your heart while opening your mind to the truth of the redemption of mankind. Intricately interwoven throughout is the redemption story which is presented with a freshness and vitality that will attract even the most complacent of heart.
We are introduced to a young couple named Goodwin and Hollie Macbreeze who are taking some time away from their life to find a respite and to gather some wisdom for what is ahead of them. They find themselves at the timeless and enchanting Isle of Estillyen which has more in store for them than just a time of peace and reflection. Hollie and Goodwin stumble upon a hidden treasure while searching for something else. They must decide how to react to the unexpected events that unfold before them.
Life is not always easy and fun, and it is even harder and more complex when we leave out the One who created and loves us. He knows the trouble that we have to deal with, and He quietly implores us to allow Him to come into our heart and help to make things a little easier for us. Only He can impart true peace and equip us for the path that is laid before us.
William Jefferson will delight and entertain you with his unique approach to the telling of the redemption story. His musical and whimsical words will put your head in a tizzy and flood your heart with God’s love and peace. This is one story that will speak volumes to your heart and bring a deeper understanding to God’s love and grace. Jefferson is a brilliant and talented wordsmith, and his story has deeply touched my heart. Anyone who reads this book will never be the same, think the same, or love the same again.
We are introduced to a young couple named Goodwin and Hollie Macbreeze who are taking some time away from their life to find a respite and to gather some wisdom for what is ahead of them. They find themselves at the timeless and enchanting Isle of Estillyen which has more in store for them than just a time of peace and reflection. Hollie and Goodwin stumble upon a hidden treasure while searching for something else. They must decide how to react to the unexpected events that unfold before them.
Life is not always easy and fun, and it is even harder and more complex when we leave out the One who created and loves us. He knows the trouble that we have to deal with, and He quietly implores us to allow Him to come into our heart and help to make things a little easier for us. Only He can impart true peace and equip us for the path that is laid before us.
William Jefferson will delight and entertain you with his unique approach to the telling of the redemption story. His musical and whimsical words will put your head in a tizzy and flood your heart with God’s love and peace. This is one story that will speak volumes to your heart and bring a deeper understanding to God’s love and grace. Jefferson is a brilliant and talented wordsmith, and his story has deeply touched my heart. Anyone who reads this book will never be the same, think the same, or love the same again.
June 3, 2013
C. S. Lewis meets John Bunyan in this endearing novel by theologian William E. Jefferson.
Words matter. So Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze will learn in their visit to the Isle of Estillyen, an island inhabited by monks who are renowned for their ability to craft unique stories, bringing deeper understanding to scripture. As they explore the island, and its residents, they meet an old man named Oban Ironbout, (who’s cantankerous personality instantly calls to mind Carl Fredricksen from Pixar’s “Up”) to whom they feel inexplicably led to know, and to help. But is it too late for Oban to change his ways, or is he destined to live out the remainder of his days in bitter solitude?
This inspirational story certainly gave me a lot to reflect on, and I found the readings by the monks fascinating. I absolutely loved the spirituality and the message of this book. If I had one complaint, however, it would be that the author was a little too detailed in certain parts, and while it made it very easy to imagine everything that was going on, it did make reading a little bit tedious at times. Still, I think that was probably part of the character of the book itself, as the author explains “The Point is a surprise. As I scribbled and scribed, it appeared. It came to be! A peculiar way to write a book, I admit. Yet words set the will in motion. Thus, no apologies, no regrets do I bear for this form of wordy mix.” Well put, I think!
Check out this review on my blog: EpicBookQuest.wordpress.com
Words matter. So Hollie and Goodwin Macbreeze will learn in their visit to the Isle of Estillyen, an island inhabited by monks who are renowned for their ability to craft unique stories, bringing deeper understanding to scripture. As they explore the island, and its residents, they meet an old man named Oban Ironbout, (who’s cantankerous personality instantly calls to mind Carl Fredricksen from Pixar’s “Up”) to whom they feel inexplicably led to know, and to help. But is it too late for Oban to change his ways, or is he destined to live out the remainder of his days in bitter solitude?
This inspirational story certainly gave me a lot to reflect on, and I found the readings by the monks fascinating. I absolutely loved the spirituality and the message of this book. If I had one complaint, however, it would be that the author was a little too detailed in certain parts, and while it made it very easy to imagine everything that was going on, it did make reading a little bit tedious at times. Still, I think that was probably part of the character of the book itself, as the author explains “The Point is a surprise. As I scribbled and scribed, it appeared. It came to be! A peculiar way to write a book, I admit. Yet words set the will in motion. Thus, no apologies, no regrets do I bear for this form of wordy mix.” Well put, I think!
Check out this review on my blog: EpicBookQuest.wordpress.com
May 7, 2013
A Pilgrimage to Estillyen
The beautiful isle of Estillyen is the home to monks, nuns, a myriad of animals and a cantankerous old man named Oban Ironbout. Hollie and Godwin Macbreeze are on a month long pilgrimage to the island to hear the lectures on redemption and, in Godwin's case, to visit the point where Oban Ironbout has a cottage.
Hollie is facing a difficult diagnosis, and understandably, is more interested in the redemption lectures than Godwin. He is fulfilling a boyhood ambition to see the cottage on the point that he calls My Cottage Rare. He drew a picture of the cottage when he was a child from a photograph taken by his grandfather, and it has haunted him ever since.
The book has two intertwined foci: the redemption lectures and the quest to see the cottage. The plot is very simple, but it supports the redemption focus of the book. I found the writing for the lectures acceptable. It's stilted and somewhat archaic, but it fits the subject. This is not the case with the dialog. I found the dialog, particularly the conversations between Hollie and Godwin, stiff.
One of the treats of the book is the setting. The Isle of Estillyen is beautifully described as are all the buildings. It makes you want spend time in such a special spot.
I recommend this book if you enjoy stories with a religious slant. However, as a novel, it doesn't work well. The plot is too thin and the characters act too much in the service of the plot.
I reviewed this book for Handlebar Publishing Company.
The beautiful isle of Estillyen is the home to monks, nuns, a myriad of animals and a cantankerous old man named Oban Ironbout. Hollie and Godwin Macbreeze are on a month long pilgrimage to the island to hear the lectures on redemption and, in Godwin's case, to visit the point where Oban Ironbout has a cottage.
Hollie is facing a difficult diagnosis, and understandably, is more interested in the redemption lectures than Godwin. He is fulfilling a boyhood ambition to see the cottage on the point that he calls My Cottage Rare. He drew a picture of the cottage when he was a child from a photograph taken by his grandfather, and it has haunted him ever since.
The book has two intertwined foci: the redemption lectures and the quest to see the cottage. The plot is very simple, but it supports the redemption focus of the book. I found the writing for the lectures acceptable. It's stilted and somewhat archaic, but it fits the subject. This is not the case with the dialog. I found the dialog, particularly the conversations between Hollie and Godwin, stiff.
One of the treats of the book is the setting. The Isle of Estillyen is beautifully described as are all the buildings. It makes you want spend time in such a special spot.
I recommend this book if you enjoy stories with a religious slant. However, as a novel, it doesn't work well. The plot is too thin and the characters act too much in the service of the plot.
I reviewed this book for Handlebar Publishing Company.
May 18, 2013
The Point has a lot of potential. Jefferson attempts to "present Scripture’s ancient truths, in a modern context", but I really felt like he tried to hard and his approach didn't contribute to the story.
A couple ventures to Estillyen, an island retreat in which storytellers share the Bible as dramatic readings. Goodwin, or Win, and Leslie or Lee depending upon what kind of mood the author is in both felt drawn, but for different reasons. Goodwin has a picture he drew as a child of a house located on the island based upon a photograph his deceased father had. Leslie is on a spiritual journey attempting to deal with a medical diagnosis.
I found the readings to be out of place in the story, as if the author just wrote the story to be able to include the readings. They didn't seem to flow with the story line and often felt like an intermission of sorts. This could be easily overlooked, but the characters were disappointing also.
None of the characters ever came alive for me. The conversations felt stilted, the author switching between pet names and given names made it difficult to follow. I never connected. Not only that, the reader sees the dramatic connection between some of the characters almost from the get go.
The story has potential, but I feel like the author just wasn't able to make me like the characters. And without liking the characters it was a chore to read.
I was given a copy of this book for review purposes. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
A couple ventures to Estillyen, an island retreat in which storytellers share the Bible as dramatic readings. Goodwin, or Win, and Leslie or Lee depending upon what kind of mood the author is in both felt drawn, but for different reasons. Goodwin has a picture he drew as a child of a house located on the island based upon a photograph his deceased father had. Leslie is on a spiritual journey attempting to deal with a medical diagnosis.
I found the readings to be out of place in the story, as if the author just wrote the story to be able to include the readings. They didn't seem to flow with the story line and often felt like an intermission of sorts. This could be easily overlooked, but the characters were disappointing also.
None of the characters ever came alive for me. The conversations felt stilted, the author switching between pet names and given names made it difficult to follow. I never connected. Not only that, the reader sees the dramatic connection between some of the characters almost from the get go.
The story has potential, but I feel like the author just wasn't able to make me like the characters. And without liking the characters it was a chore to read.
I was given a copy of this book for review purposes. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
August 14, 2013
I've never read many allegories and the few I've tried before have not captured my imagination enough so I could enjoy them. However I was intrigued by the premise of THE POINT by William E. Jefferson and decided to give it a try. The story is of the journey of Hollie and her husband, Goodwin Macbreeze, as they travel to Estylin, a mysterious island that his grandfather talked about. "Win" is an architect and as a child he drew a picture of a house on the point of the island that he is fascinated with and wants to see. The problem is that he owner is very reclusive and doesn't like visitors.
On the island is also a monastery with monks that open up the monastery each day for a reading in which they engage the participants as they share.
There were many captivating moments and much to contemplate as you read the story of their journey with the proprietor of the Point, Oban Ironbout, through grief, bitterness and healing. It is a narrative to read slowly and digest.
I was given THE POINT by Handelbar Publishing and believe it is a book well worth reading, mulling over and chewing on.
On the island is also a monastery with monks that open up the monastery each day for a reading in which they engage the participants as they share.
There were many captivating moments and much to contemplate as you read the story of their journey with the proprietor of the Point, Oban Ironbout, through grief, bitterness and healing. It is a narrative to read slowly and digest.
I was given THE POINT by Handelbar Publishing and believe it is a book well worth reading, mulling over and chewing on.
April 3, 2016
The Point by William E. Jefferson takes us to the gorgeous Isle of Estillyen where Goodwin & his wife, Hollie Macbreeze try to find some respite from her illness. Once there they encounter the bitter Oban Ironbout who has been beat up with life's uncertainties. His soul is tortured. In this Christian Fiction novel we journey with the three through their struggles to find meaning and faith. Surrounded by story telling monks they learn about the very real struggle between the forces of darkness and the light. The monks share pieces of scripture in a poetic way. The story is deep and caused me to spend a lot of time in contemplation. Ordinarily I prefer non-fiction Christian books but there is a lot of charm and sweet reflection throughout it's pages. William E. Jefferson's mode of writing is enchanting and never boring, making it a book you won't want to put down. I was given the honor of reading this book for Handlebar Publishing. I definitely would recommend.
December 26, 2013
This is a hard book to describe. It is about words. Unfortunately, I felt there were too many words. Sometimes the conversations just seemed to go on forever. The plot would have been better served, I think, with fewer words.
This is the kind of book one would want to think over, or discuss with a group. There is much that may be a layer below the actual printed words. Thought or discussion might pull that out.
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This is the kind of book one would want to think over, or discuss with a group. There is much that may be a layer below the actual printed words. Thought or discussion might pull that out.
See my full review at http://bit.ly/Jsj1GJ.
November 14, 2013
I loved this book. It is a poignant story of redemption, and is very heartwarming and inspiring. It reminded me quite a bit of C.S. Lewis' style, and it was refreshing to read something with true literary value. The plot is wonderful, but the truths shared by the monk of Estillyen are what make this book a must-read.
June 7, 2013
While the writing was strong and concise, I found the story to be lacking in that element that pulls me in and makes me want to continue reading. Overall, this wasn't my type of book.
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