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dyingful
"dyingful"
a collection of poems
i have been writing since i was 17
and my heart was broken
i put all my pain and love into this
i love you
thank you for reading
enjoy
a collection of poems
i have been writing since i was 17
and my heart was broken
i put all my pain and love into this
i love you
thank you for reading
enjoy
150 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 16, 2023
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April 8, 2024
Half of the “poems” within this collection were just a singular sentence with awkward or no spacing. If people published their shower thoughts, we’d all be poets.
April 13, 2024
My partner found this abandoned in a bus and picked it up for me to read. Now that I have I know why it was left there.
October 25, 2023
Some of these had me sobbing
“I lost myself in you and then I lost u”
“I hope u miss me sometimes”
“One day you will realise how much I cared”
“You left like I was never a reason to stay.”
“Maybe I’m just hard to love and easy to leave.”
“I showed u all of me too soon.”
“You broke me but I still wait for u.”
“I don’t know what hurts more, missing you or pretending not to.”
“Sometimes I still hope you will wake up one day and miss me.”
“I wish that I was what u wanted.”
“I will wish for u one last time.”
“ I broke my own heart trying to be enough for u”
“U destroyed me and I apologised”
“I miss u, the old you, the one who cared about me.”
“I miss the way I felt when I first met u.”
“I fucking loved you, why wasn’t that enough.”
“I lost myself in you and then I lost u”
“I hope u miss me sometimes”
“One day you will realise how much I cared”
“You left like I was never a reason to stay.”
“Maybe I’m just hard to love and easy to leave.”
“I showed u all of me too soon.”
“You broke me but I still wait for u.”
“I don’t know what hurts more, missing you or pretending not to.”
“Sometimes I still hope you will wake up one day and miss me.”
“I wish that I was what u wanted.”
“I will wish for u one last time.”
“ I broke my own heart trying to be enough for u”
“U destroyed me and I apologised”
“I miss u, the old you, the one who cared about me.”
“I miss the way I felt when I first met u.”
“I fucking loved you, why wasn’t that enough.”
September 9, 2023
Short story: I loved this author’s poetry! I find it so relatable and easy to read!
Long story: After my breakup in December, my TikTok feed went from dancing trends, epic makeup looks, and Disney nerd fantasy to tarot cards, delulu “if-you-see-this-post”, and heartbreak galore… after sifting through the mess of videos feeding my broken heart empty hope, I found poetry…
I’ve always loved poetry, more so me writing it than me reading it. Most poetry I had read were assigned by teachers to overly analyze to the point the poem was ripped apart and just an empty carcass.
I’d find myself on TikTok for hours—reading and hearting poems—most of which belonged to akhira.
If I was relating, crying, and loving every poem on my For You page, it was clear sign I would love the actual physical books.
I love the tone and easiness of the pace, it’s not too wordy in the sense the author is trying to show off a vast vocabulary like other writers do. akhira knew what they wanted to say and said it, there was no games or nonsense. I will be reading the other two books I have purchased as well.
4.5 out of 5 stars ⭐️
Long story: After my breakup in December, my TikTok feed went from dancing trends, epic makeup looks, and Disney nerd fantasy to tarot cards, delulu “if-you-see-this-post”, and heartbreak galore… after sifting through the mess of videos feeding my broken heart empty hope, I found poetry…
I’ve always loved poetry, more so me writing it than me reading it. Most poetry I had read were assigned by teachers to overly analyze to the point the poem was ripped apart and just an empty carcass.
I’d find myself on TikTok for hours—reading and hearting poems—most of which belonged to akhira.
If I was relating, crying, and loving every poem on my For You page, it was clear sign I would love the actual physical books.
I love the tone and easiness of the pace, it’s not too wordy in the sense the author is trying to show off a vast vocabulary like other writers do. akhira knew what they wanted to say and said it, there was no games or nonsense. I will be reading the other two books I have purchased as well.
4.5 out of 5 stars ⭐️
April 30, 2024
Why do I keep doing this to myself?
July 28, 2024
Short "poems" (often more like sentences) which resonated with me. Nice to know that one is not alone with it's feelings.
September 15, 2023
Le doy 4 de 5 estrellas sobre todo porque hay muchos poemas muy parecidos (para ser solo dos líneas xd), pero vamos, que si están en una época dolorosa, pasando por una ruptura complicada donde aún hay sentimientos (tuyos, importante) de por medio, es un libro que te va a destrozar, va a hacer que todo ese dolor salga y llores todo lo que necesites llorar.
Es un libro que me habría encantado leer hace varios años, cuando estaba en ese momento en el que lo habría dado todo por una persona a la que parecía que no le importaba una mierda.
Es un libro que me habría encantado leer hace varios años, cuando estaba en ese momento en el que lo habría dado todo por una persona a la que parecía que no le importaba una mierda.
March 24, 2024
Exactly how I feel. Well done.
June 3, 2024
I love it
September 16, 2024
Sweet poems. It helped me get over my break up
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November 1, 2024Dyingful
November 20, 2025
I want read this book please
February 17, 2026
it feels a bit curated, like it’s trying very hard to look just right, but despite that, the emotions underneath are real and hit hard.
July 7, 2023
Amazing words. Cant even add to this. It helped me accept losing the love of my life. They wrote my thoughts exactly so i dont feel alone anymore.
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