The creep factor is high with this book. At first glance this is your average, girl with sorta rich dad goes to school that is the playground of the super duperty rich and is a tad envious. She meets a cute boy, he thinks she's cute too and la di da, they are sipping coffee and swapping spit. The end.
But this story takes secret societies to a weird, crazy place. I was pretty sure this wouldn't go to the places is did, but then again, I was pretty sure that there wouldn't be any deaths in The Hunger Games (sorry, hope I didn't ruin this for anyone!).
I'm just going to throw this out there because I think it has a lot of parallells to this story; Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Season two, episode five, Buffy goes to a fraternity party, gets roofied and ends up tied up in the creepy subbasement. It turns out the fraternity makes a yearly sacrifice to a snake demon and because of it, their brotherhood have unusually good luck at everything.
Naturally, they had no idea that it isn't just some drunk sorority girl they dragged to the basement but the supernaturally badass slayer who kills the demon and then kicks butt all over the place (take THAT evil frat boys!). Damn, I loved this episode.
But this story has no slayers, no satisfying kickassery and this is where my enjoyment ended and my annoyance and boredom started.
This is a list of what I didn't like about this book, in no particular order;
1. Sadie - the main character is hard to understand or relate to. She plays Lacrosse and gets a full scholarship to Keating, a super exclusive prep school. She's embarrassed by her lack of couture clothes and big money - this has always rubbed me the wrong way, girls who have the wherewhithal to play lacrosse and with dads who own their own architectural firms are not poor! Poor little upper middle class diatribe over, it was hard to find anything to really like in Sadie, she's not shy, she jogs a bunch, gets surprised by snotty girls but doesn't seem that bothered by them, she even meets the perfect guy and has a nice little predictable relationship with him.
2. Instalove and instafriends - With all the snooty behaviour happening all over the book it was a bit jarring that she becomes besties right away with one of her teammates. Practically at the same time, she meets a hot guy at the neighboring school Groff Academy and they become a couple without any of the usual 'does he like me? should I kiss him?' wonderings happening. In fact all of their encounters are about as exciting as me trimming my toenails while watching epis of Homeland.
3. The big mysteries are strange and never really make sense. Especially ****** Spoiler Alert******** what was going on at the hospital. The super secret hospital. At first it seemed like they were making people crazy then it turns out they were harvesting eggs and semen from men and women from the Secret Society. Why have a giant hospital as a front? Why was there a crazy woman at the hospital and then the next night she was a bitchy woman in a beautiful dress at a White House party??? No real answers to these questions.
4. Monologueing - or when all the mysteries are solved by the bad guys answering questions (mustache twirling missing, thank goodness). First Finn confesses, then his evil mother adds her dastardly deeds, then his evil grandfather explains what he's done and offers them money (only a million dollars, so there is that, cheap so and so, you call that a payoff!).
5. Clothing descriptions - I'll call this the Fashion Police effect, because it has become endemic in certain YA fiction. The last time I had so many clothing choices described was in a Coldwater Creek catalog, it needs to stop. Can't Sadie just wear a pretty blue dress? Couldn't she just totter around in unfamiliar heels?
6. Things left unsaid - in a book with mysterious suicides and semen and egg gathering, you'd think there wouldn't be much to be squeemish about, but you'd be wrong. MORE***********SPOILERS*********************Now
Sadie's drink is spiked at a party, a party where she just walked in on a drugged out classmate getting raped (this was vague, just a description of her dress being up around her waist while she's sprawled on the couch unconscious, with several guys in the room looking defiant, lusty, drunk or all three). There are so many problems with this scenario, first, why doesn't she call the police or at least alert other partygoers to the situation to try and help the raped/unconscious girl? Why would she then accept a drink, that the potential rapists are staring at her raptly while she drinks it? When she wakes up in her dorm room the next morning with no memory of how she got there, why wasn't her first thought, 'ohmygawd, I might have been raped!' She skirts around this and I guess the reader just has to get there on their own. Sloppy, sloppy writing.
7. The trip to a hospital that never occurred. If you think you were roofied and raped, wouldn't you go to a hospital to get yourself checked out? Sadie seems to want to do this, but then plans a ridiculous visit to the 'possibly-making-people-crazy-hospital' where her friend distracts the receptionist while Sadie runs around peeking into forbidden areas.
8. More hanging out with bad guys. She goes back to the Tower, the site of the infamous gang bang party and officially becomes the stupidest heroine I've ever had the misfortune to read about as she attempts to get to the bottom of things.
Okay, my outrage has officially peaked. I have other things in this book that I could whine about, like how no one seems to attend classes, how people are able to skip off to high society parties and how often Sadie is drugged, but I'm just done with this mess. I'm going to go rewatch Buffy the Vampire Slayer, I need a dose of believable storytelling to cleanse my reading palate.