Well, after 34% in, I think I'm gonna DNF "The Fallen". Weirdly enough, I don't hate it. I just... don't care.
First off, the whole Synesthesia thing is so, so, SO underplayed and barely even mentioned- which is weird as the blurb makes you believe that Robbie's condition is one of the main is a central theme The reality is far from it. In fact, it's only ever mentioned when it's convenience, and then it's just mostly forgotten. Michael Cordy did a much better job with Synesthesia in his superb psychological thriller "The Colour of Death".
Secondly- on the one hand, there's an attempt to make the reader feel this investigation is really important, because the corruption it might uncover might pretty much ruin the entire city of San Diego. That, in itself, is a great plot. But maybe in the hands of a different author. Becasue this one just misses the mark, as his main character Robbie and his partner, McKenzie, the two detectives who investigate this apparent suicide, are so disinterested. They literally went from: "Oh, this corruption accusation might destroy our city" to both of them shrugging as if it's all nothing and doesn't matter. Robbie keeps thinking about his wife, Gina, who left becasue she needs time for herself for some reason she never explains (at least not where I am), while McKenzie... I don't know.
See, this is another problem this novel has. The characters are so underdeveloped and uninteresting and.. well, boring. Like this whole novel. I'm supposed to care about Robbie's problems with his wife, Gina, yet not once in the 34% I've read was there any dialogue between them, or any description of how they really feel or think. It's Robbie not understanding why Gina left, Gina acting weird, all described in such a cold, clinical, boring way.
One could propose that maybe it's all intentional, that the cold, uncaring vibe of this novel was done in purpose. I mean, F. Scott Fitzgerald did it in "The Great Gatsby", but at least there, it had a purpose- the coolness serves the themes, the emptiness of wealth, the illusion of the American Dream, the inability to truly know another person, so on and so forth.
But in "The Fallen" it's just as if no one cares and everyone is bored. Including the author himself, it seems. The coldness and uncaring and clinical descriptions don't seem to serve any purpose.
Also, this yet another novel I read occurring in San Diego where the author just fails completely to bring this amazing city- that has so much character and vibes and history- to life. It feels completely dead. In fact, you can replace San Diego with every other city, anywhere. That's how unremarkable and lifeless it feels in this novel.
Add the fact that there' absolutely no thrills, no suspense, no interest. Nothing. It really is very dry and boring novel.
So yeah. DNF at 34%. Good premise, abysmal execution.
If the characters and author don't care and are clearly bored, why should I?