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304 pages, Hardcover
First published January 1, 2014
"I would have noticed within fifteen seconds if that man was missing merely a button on a shirt cuff. I would have noticed whether he had hair in the spaces between his knuckles, would have noticed the length of his fingernails and exactly what shape the fingernails were. I would have noticed the color of his eyebrows, the size of his ears, the condition of his teeth, the quality of his hair and skin, and all of this without making a conscious effort to do so. I lone person in a group of ten is missing the tip of his little finger, I will notice it immediately."OMG, she must be so difficult to be friends with. She might not comment on a bit of a stain on a shirt, or a chipped fingernail, or a couple of errant chin or nose hairs, but you would know she saw them!
This opthamologist doesn't smile much, but his mouth is slightly lopsided in a way that makes him look perpetually on the verge of a smile. He looks as though he is privately enjoying a mildly amusing joke, although after spending twenty minutes in his company one suspects there really is no joke, it's just the way his mouth is. He is short and stocky and neckless, and though his eyes are small and set close together, and though he doesn't truly smile, there is warmth in his face. He walks slumped a bit to the right, as if he has too much ballast in his starboard pocket, and moves through his clinic in a dogged way, like a weary commuter trudging through Grand Central Station at rush hour. His pending smile notwithstanding, I got the distinct sense tht the surgeon was bored with his job.and on and and on, and then the operation full of similes "the eyelids looked like desert dunes, the lashes like wind-tossed palms, the creases in the skin like a hundred parched arroyos." etc. Other people might like extended descriptive writing, but it just comes across as self-indulgent and annoys me, get to the story!
I had developed a strong curiosity about blindness and wanted to meet blind people, to spend time with them, to get to know them, to find out how they think, to see how they live in the world, how they navigate, how they talk and eat and dress and write and shave and brush their teeth and learn just about anything else I could about blind people without trespassing too far beyond the limits of decency.I found that paragraph was way beyond the limits of decency. The author seems to think the blind are aliens so different from us that they wouldn't talk, brush their teeth, talk or think just like everyone else. I found that patronising and offensive and together with the writing which I could not stand. I dnf'd it.
