I admit that I am not the target audience for this type of book, but I still found the premise intriguing. The high society female detective in Melbourne in the 1920’s concept was original & I while knew it would be fluffy, I expected some enjoyment. So wrong.
I DID kind of like it at the start. The setting is definitely promising & the writing, while inexperienced, does have potential. Unfortunately I was eye rolling within the first couple of chapters & it just gets sillier & sillier. By the time the police allow themselves to be strip searched somewhere near the middle of the book (possible the most ridiculous scene in the history of literary scenes) I was actively hostile.
Things wrong with this book:
The setting:
The only reason anyone would know this book was set in the 20’s is because it says so on the cover. Apart from some cursory old fashioned phrases & over the top descriptions of attire there is no backdrop & no sense of time & place! Phryne herself is a modern feminist plonked into a 1920’s setting - she has absolutely no historical sensibilities whatsoever.
Its a confusing mess:
I was on page 11 the first time I checked back a few pages because I thought I had missed some some important information. Nope. No mention of Dr McMillian before then - who is she & what has she got to do with Phryne??! Immediately upon moving to Melbourne Phryne was dining with people from rich social circles like she knew them for years. Again... did I miss something??? It happened numerous times throughout the first half of the book before I realised that no, I hadn’t missed an explanation - there was never one to begin with & by then I didn’t bother any more because I couldn’t care less. Event after event in this book have no explanation, no background & make no sense whatsoever!
Its crude
As an avid reader of true crime, fictional crime & horror, my threshold for gruesomeness is pretty high - I’ve read it all. But that said, there is something really distasteful about this book. Abortions with knitting needles, rape by abortionist, blatant lesbianism & sleazy sex …its all just grubby & unpleasant, especially in a book supposedly set in the 20’s.
The implausible story
The “mystery” doesn't even start until halfway through & then we aren’t even sure which mystery she is solving. There is ZERO suspense because its obvious Phryne is going to save the day without even trying. Phryne is not a superhuman intellectual detective, & does virtually no work - she is simply surrounded by morons! That ending with the ‘asexual’ person & how they were 'foiled' just defies absurdity. Oh yeah, and cocaine was apparently so prominent in the 20’s in Australia that the streets are riddled with it, high society is totally nonchalant about its use & its so common that when 'snow' is mentioned, apparently no one even needs a translation. Uh huh...
Phryne Fisher
Most importantly Phryne Fisher is a smug, obnoxious, know-it-all & I hated her. I get that she is larger life but she is a caricature ridiculous beyond belief. We are supposed to believe that she is an outstanding dancer, detective, race car driver. She is smarter, more fashionable, richer, kinder & more beautiful than anyone else. All men (& even certain women) are utterly irresistible to her charms. And there is absolutely no backstory to her! She moves abroad, & within minutes she knows everyone, everyone knows her, she is invited to the best parties, dinners, she’s smarter than the police & they need her help. And did I mention that scene where Phryne “forces” the police agree to a strip searching just because, well, she’ll complain until they’re demoted if they don’t? This woman has moved to the country just days prior, but yup, she is THAT important. Uh huh…
Yes, I realise its a fiction book & the heroine is over the top. I get that its a tongue -in-cheek & we are supposed to suspend some disbelief. But its not funny or entertaining at all … you have to give me something else! I don’t wanna be a party pooper but this gets boring in 3 seconds flat.
I do acknowledge that sometimes series' do take awhile for characters to develop & the author to get the feel of the books themselves - so its possible that the succeeding books do improve, this one however, is terrible.