She Found Them

by Dab10

this is a lunch time reader, quick sample. Oh, my god she found them! I will never hear the end of it what if she wants a divorce. The shame. The ridicule. What if she tells mom? She emailed me Dear tom, I found some interesting files on your computer today. We will talk when you get home. Donna.

7 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 3, 2013

About the author

You can email me I don't bite (unless you ask)
About my writing
My problem is I grew up with a graphomotor skill deficit my brain worked to fast for my hands I had trouble with spelling and writing when I learned to type it open that world to me but I still spell phonically I try to go back and fix these types of errors but I suck at it
I received two emails one day. one from a nice guy named bob who pointed out these errors. (thanks bob)the other from Anonymous calling me an idiot and making disparaging comments about my parentage and since I could not write him back I put my response here .
I don't want to talk to you no more, you empty headed animal food trough wiper. I fart in your general direction. Your mother was a hamster and your father smelt of elderberries.
Thanks for reading
Dab10

Reviews

[Stephanie- The Boyfriend Bookmark · Rating 5 out of 5]

Bwahahaha! This was a funny little read... She found them on his computer while he was at work... Thinking she was going to freak out all over him when he got home for what she found... this was a fun little read and had a great surprise ending after the build up!

[Ebony · Rating 4 out of 5]

This short story was not what I expected...but I was very pleasantly surprised with this story!! It was HOT and a little naughty ;-) I look forward to reading more from this author!!! If you are looking for a very quick read that will set the mood for some fun...this is it!!!

[↜ƈɦǟռ☂ɛℓℓɛ↝ · Rating 1 out of 5]

★She Found Them by Dab10

This is a R2R that was given to me in exchange for my honest review.

WTF is about all that comes to mind.

There's not much to say about this book, as its only 6 pages long. I was interested to learn what she found, but his manic behavior about sent me into a panic attack. Although I was surprised by what she discovered. Not to mention, there is no way in hell, a female would make that comment.

This story needs serious editing. You know it is going to be bad, when the line, Edited by, is wrong.

Thank you to the author, but this book was not for me.

[Christoph Fischer · Rating 5 out of 5]

"She Found Them" by Dab10 is a very quick short that follows a business man in a meeting worried about the fact that his wife 'found them'. We don't know what she found, we can only assume but his fear and anxiety we feel first hand, such is the skill of the author to get us into the mind of the narrator.
Short and poignant this comes quickly to its end. Very enjoyable.

[David B. · Rating 5 out of 5]

got to say this one surprised me in the end and I felt his worry the whole way thru

[Dab10 Dab10 · Rating 5 out of 5]

a great quick suspense story.