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Hybrid #1
Cat Clan Hybrid. Part 1
This book is no longer available. It had been re-edited and released as
Discovery (Hybrid #1).
Enmeshed in a universe that wants to use her, a rare alien/human hybrid must find her way through political intrigue, lust, violence and ambition to discover who and what she is.
Chesara extraordinary ability means she is coddled, pampered and in high demand from the wealthy of the Universe as she can heal illnesses and injuries far beyond the skills of medical science. Being pursued for herself, rather than her ability is a new experience, and one that thrills her to the core. Unfortunately things that seem too good to be true, usually are.
This book contains graphic scenes, and is intended for a mature audience only.
Discovery (Hybrid #1).
Enmeshed in a universe that wants to use her, a rare alien/human hybrid must find her way through political intrigue, lust, violence and ambition to discover who and what she is.
Chesara extraordinary ability means she is coddled, pampered and in high demand from the wealthy of the Universe as she can heal illnesses and injuries far beyond the skills of medical science. Being pursued for herself, rather than her ability is a new experience, and one that thrills her to the core. Unfortunately things that seem too good to be true, usually are.
This book contains graphic scenes, and is intended for a mature audience only.
184 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 19, 2013
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March 27, 2016
I think it’s important for a potential reader to know that the book is--in my opinion--roughly 70% romance, 20% sci-fi, and 10% erotica. Best way I can think to describe this book; think of a sci-fi TV show and recall an episode where the space travelers quickly leave their futuristic star ship and spend the entire episode on a less developed planet. The sci-fi elements are integral to the story, and well thought out, but I think fans of romance, particularly romance set in the 19th century are going to enjoy this book the most.
Our heroine is Chesara, a half human, half Drakaran born with a psychokinetic healing ability. We are teased with hints at other abilities she may come to possess once she reaches sexual maturity--her full blood mother could render an entire starship insane with lust-- but as a hybrid, Chesara’s abilities are not yet known. Early in the story, this potentially destructive coming-of-age transformation kept me turning pages. About a third the way through, the focus shifts toward romance and political intrigue on the retro-planet. The sci-fi ‘transformation’ continues, but horses, carriages, scheming lords, torture dungeons, and royal lineage commandeer the story.
It’s a well thought out story and professionally written. There are a handful of idioms, but just as many creative passages. I thought the descriptions of Chesara’s psychokinetic healing were very well done. Conceptually, I found the story interesting and it held my attention until the end. The characters were developed and nuanced--even the ‘bad guys’ had a redeeming motive for their misdeeds. There are a several sexually explicit scenes, but they are integral to the story arc. I do think the amount of detail you enjoy in your procreative imagery will likely determine your enjoyment of this book. There’s quite a bit of description during the last third of the novel as Chesara’s abilities mature.
If I remove my feelings about the romance genre from the equation and grade the story on its polish, character development, conceptual integrity, and efficiency in story-telling, I do think ‘Discovery’ grades a success. If you’re looking for hard core sci-fi, you’ll want to look elsewhere, but for fans of romance/erotica novels with a unique heroine, you will likely find what you’re seeking here. Rounding up to 4 stars.
Our heroine is Chesara, a half human, half Drakaran born with a psychokinetic healing ability. We are teased with hints at other abilities she may come to possess once she reaches sexual maturity--her full blood mother could render an entire starship insane with lust-- but as a hybrid, Chesara’s abilities are not yet known. Early in the story, this potentially destructive coming-of-age transformation kept me turning pages. About a third the way through, the focus shifts toward romance and political intrigue on the retro-planet. The sci-fi ‘transformation’ continues, but horses, carriages, scheming lords, torture dungeons, and royal lineage commandeer the story.
It’s a well thought out story and professionally written. There are a handful of idioms, but just as many creative passages. I thought the descriptions of Chesara’s psychokinetic healing were very well done. Conceptually, I found the story interesting and it held my attention until the end. The characters were developed and nuanced--even the ‘bad guys’ had a redeeming motive for their misdeeds. There are a several sexually explicit scenes, but they are integral to the story arc. I do think the amount of detail you enjoy in your procreative imagery will likely determine your enjoyment of this book. There’s quite a bit of description during the last third of the novel as Chesara’s abilities mature.
If I remove my feelings about the romance genre from the equation and grade the story on its polish, character development, conceptual integrity, and efficiency in story-telling, I do think ‘Discovery’ grades a success. If you’re looking for hard core sci-fi, you’ll want to look elsewhere, but for fans of romance/erotica novels with a unique heroine, you will likely find what you’re seeking here. Rounding up to 4 stars.
December 17, 2015
It is not often that a book actively makes me want to stop doing anything else in order to read it but this was one of them, I thoroughly enjoyed it, even though I don't read romance or erotic novels normally. Speaking of which, don't be put off by its possible status as an "erotic" novel, there's almost more sex in a Wilbur Smith or Peter F Hamilton book.
Very enjoyable and very easy to read.
Very enjoyable and very easy to read.
January 29, 2014
Cat Clan Hybrid, Part 1 is the story of Chesara who is part human and part Dakaran, a feline-humanoid alien. She has the ability to heal with a touch, which the Human Federation uses to its advantage, hiring out her talent. But she and her bodyguard Connor Temple run into trouble while on assignment, trapped in the ambitious, political machinations of the planet Kalzir.
I enjoyed the characters and storyline, from Chesara's naïve missteps and Connor's efforts to protect her through their battle with the family plotting to use her for their own ends. Chesara was strong-minded and sensual, growing into her own as the story progresses. Connor strives to keep emotional distance but is hard-pressed when Chesara comes into her Dakaran maturity. A fun, well-told story, Cat Clan Hybrid was a sizzling scifi adventure. Though the frequent shifts in POV were a little disorienting, the interesting storyline and wild sex kept me turning pages!
(Note: My rating is based solely on the story itself - I received a PDF review copy from the author, so I don't know if the kindle version is more polished, but the edition I received would have benefited from intensive proofreading and editing.)
I enjoyed the characters and storyline, from Chesara's naïve missteps and Connor's efforts to protect her through their battle with the family plotting to use her for their own ends. Chesara was strong-minded and sensual, growing into her own as the story progresses. Connor strives to keep emotional distance but is hard-pressed when Chesara comes into her Dakaran maturity. A fun, well-told story, Cat Clan Hybrid was a sizzling scifi adventure. Though the frequent shifts in POV were a little disorienting, the interesting storyline and wild sex kept me turning pages!
(Note: My rating is based solely on the story itself - I received a PDF review copy from the author, so I don't know if the kindle version is more polished, but the edition I received would have benefited from intensive proofreading and editing.)
June 6, 2015
Emma Jaye’s first installment of the Hybrid series is wonderfully inventive, with the right blend of dysfunctional distant future society, intrigue, adventure and sex. I definitely like sexy sci-fi. Chesara, the human dakaran hybrid is a wonderful combination of assertiveness and vulnerability as she comes to terms with the discovery that her life is not everything she thought it was and both her romantic leads (yes she gets two) are appealing alpha males with enough significant differences in personality to make all interesting. I would have like to have seen more of the relationship between Chesara and Connor (romance interest 1) but I’m hoping that will be in the next volume,Experiment.
Note, this is a standalone novel – no nasty cliff-hanger - but it is part of a larger series.
Note, this is a standalone novel – no nasty cliff-hanger - but it is part of a larger series.
October 7, 2017
3.5 'hybrid' stars
First I need to say that I'm not a big fan of sci-fi. I did watch both Star Trek and Star Wars, but I'm not much into aliens and spaceships stuff. However, I was interested in sci-fi romances, and I got Discovery for free when I signed up for author's newsletter. Thanks again Emma Jaye!
At the beginning of the book, I was a little confused what is happening, and I was desperately trying to remember a name of some lizard dude, just to find out a few pages later that he's not gonna show up again. But when we meet Chesara, I started to like the whole concept of the book. She is an amazing main character. I especially liked that she is a healer and not an assassin as I'm kind of tired of them right now. I hope that her hybrid origins will be further explained in following books because I'm really interested in her species. She is also hilarious and likable. I expected a little bit more action in the story, but I rather liked the funniness and lightness.
As for other two main characters. Connor is amazing, and I absolutely adore him. I'm not so sure about Tenset. He can be quite annoying, and he is way too much under his uncle influence (at least at the begging). But he can also be sweet and cute, and he did wear knee-high black boots when he first appeared on the scene (I have a big fetish for them). So, for now, they are pretty much matched. I would rather see Chesara with Connor, but I think they will do just fine as a threesome. If there will be a threesome of course. I wouldn't mind at all. And I think Chesara agrees with me.
I can't say that I've become a fan of sci-fi romances. However, I must admit that I totally fell into the Hybrid series' world, and I'm anticipating next book. Also, I love the cover. These green eyes are amazing!
First I need to say that I'm not a big fan of sci-fi. I did watch both Star Trek and Star Wars, but I'm not much into aliens and spaceships stuff. However, I was interested in sci-fi romances, and I got Discovery for free when I signed up for author's newsletter. Thanks again Emma Jaye!
At the beginning of the book, I was a little confused what is happening, and I was desperately trying to remember a name of some lizard dude, just to find out a few pages later that he's not gonna show up again. But when we meet Chesara, I started to like the whole concept of the book. She is an amazing main character. I especially liked that she is a healer and not an assassin as I'm kind of tired of them right now. I hope that her hybrid origins will be further explained in following books because I'm really interested in her species. She is also hilarious and likable. I expected a little bit more action in the story, but I rather liked the funniness and lightness.
As for other two main characters. Connor is amazing, and I absolutely adore him. I'm not so sure about Tenset. He can be quite annoying, and he is way too much under his uncle influence (at least at the begging). But he can also be sweet and cute, and he did wear knee-high black boots when he first appeared on the scene (I have a big fetish for them). So, for now, they are pretty much matched. I would rather see Chesara with Connor, but I think they will do just fine as a threesome. If there will be a threesome of course. I wouldn't mind at all. And I think Chesara agrees with me.
I can't say that I've become a fan of sci-fi romances. However, I must admit that I totally fell into the Hybrid series' world, and I'm anticipating next book. Also, I love the cover. These green eyes are amazing!
January 19, 2016
My Review: (Possible Spoilers*Depends on opinion*)
(I received this book in exchange for an honest review)
To: The Sci-Fi Lovers!
I have so much to say about this book.
Since I do honest reviews, I have to say that the first couple of chapters I was slightly confused. But that was only because those chapters are setting up the story along with the background. It is telling us about where Chesara came from. Key important information that you would want to have. Which is totally fine. It doesn’t harm the story at all, but that was the reason it lost a star.
Mainly because those chapters are very important to a story, some readers base everything on them. It will lead to a reader deciding if they want to read the book. ~ Despite this one thing I thought this story was excellent.
Along with some suggestions to rape that hit me for a sec since their was no warning. That was a little unnerving for me.
On top of having Aliens (or hybrids) in this book, we also have some yummy nookie going down.(willing sex) ~This leads me to say 18+ should be reading this book.
At first I wasn’t sure if I liked Lord Tenset but as the book progressed I started to love this character. Along with loving Conner, I know in their own ways they both care about Chesara. Even if Tenset has a funny way of showing it, specially what has happened between the two of them.
Chesara is an interesting specimen, I would love to read more about her. Not only is she able to heal other, but she also has this pull on Conner and Tenset (Or any male that is interested). It is a refreshing look at things. OH and her colorful language is a hoot.
(You guys should know by now, I love my science fiction. I mean really who doesn’t love it)
So yes, I would recommend this book to my Alien loving friends. But like it says above, this book contains sex and violence. Along with hints towards rape and rape (what I consider). (So possible trigger warnings)
(I received this book in exchange for an honest review)
To: The Sci-Fi Lovers!
I have so much to say about this book.
Since I do honest reviews, I have to say that the first couple of chapters I was slightly confused. But that was only because those chapters are setting up the story along with the background. It is telling us about where Chesara came from. Key important information that you would want to have. Which is totally fine. It doesn’t harm the story at all, but that was the reason it lost a star.
Mainly because those chapters are very important to a story, some readers base everything on them. It will lead to a reader deciding if they want to read the book. ~ Despite this one thing I thought this story was excellent.
Along with some suggestions to rape that hit me for a sec since their was no warning. That was a little unnerving for me.
On top of having Aliens (or hybrids) in this book, we also have some yummy nookie going down.(willing sex) ~This leads me to say 18+ should be reading this book.
At first I wasn’t sure if I liked Lord Tenset but as the book progressed I started to love this character. Along with loving Conner, I know in their own ways they both care about Chesara. Even if Tenset has a funny way of showing it, specially what has happened between the two of them.
Chesara is an interesting specimen, I would love to read more about her. Not only is she able to heal other, but she also has this pull on Conner and Tenset (Or any male that is interested). It is a refreshing look at things. OH and her colorful language is a hoot.
(You guys should know by now, I love my science fiction. I mean really who doesn’t love it)
So yes, I would recommend this book to my Alien loving friends. But like it says above, this book contains sex and violence. Along with hints towards rape and rape (what I consider). (So possible trigger warnings)
June 24, 2015
I loved this book. I came over to the Hybrid series from Emma Jaye's Call Girls books and I'm just as pleased with this one as with her others. I just have to make some comments on some of the other reviews. First of all, the typos and editorial issues that other readers commented on are all completely gone. She has recently updated this series and the books are all edited and read very nicely. Secondly, that one review made it sound as if this book was erotica which it's totally not. I would call it erotic romance in that the love scenes are described in a fair amount of detail - enough to give you a nice zing. (Of course, if you don't like that sort of thing then this book is not for you.) Also, the same reviewer seemed to be complaining that this book wasn't science fiction-y enough. But this is sci fi ROMANCE, which is a romance book in a sci fi setting. If you're looking for hard core science fiction, then yeah, you'd want to look elsewhere, because there's no descriptions of how the delithium crystals work in powering the hyperdrive in this book. Although, I'd say that that's definitely a plus (in my opinion). The book has an interesting premise, a cool storyline, and a great love story where you're not really sure how you want the love triangle to end or if it even should. I'm going on to the next book immediately. Can't wait to see how they get out of the nasty plan that the bad guy has set in motion.
July 25, 2015
Chesara is a healer whose magical abilities are unrivaled. This makes her a prime choice for desire from many, but love (and lust) seem to be what she's really after. She's part-Dakaran, part human, and her Dakaran mother was irresistible to human men, giving Chesara the particular tug toward the more sensual arts. The heat builds in quickly to the writing, as Chesara and her bodyguard Connor are requested to go to Kalzara to work her healing magic. Once there, it's clear some of the more potent players in the kingdom have other plans for her, and she's captured and imprisoned and thoroughly sexed. The writing is fast paced with a only a few snags. I kept getting stopped by a dearth of words sectioned out in 'quotes' rather than finding the 'right' word for what the author meant. For example, 'windows' is in quotes...why not just describe it if it's not exactly a window? Anyway, that was a peeve of mine...and the sci fi elements were a little lazy. But if you're reading this as a romance I don't think you'll be much disappointed. This was a lovely book in all and I'd be interested in reading another in the series.
July 11, 2015
Right... I love me some sy-fy.. especially when its Erotic!
and this does not disappoint.
I am used to my male characters being the alien... but I was sucked in to Chesaras life very quickly.
Imaging being a Hybrid that is owned by the government, but not knowing you are owned. You are kept in a gilded cage and used for your healing abilities with no real freedom whatsoever... whats a girl to do when the blinders are ripped off and she begins to discover herself...
This is a hot read... and you will def. want to know what happens next!
I already have the next book in my reader and getting ready to start it!
if you want a good futuristic erotic romance.. grab this one!
and this does not disappoint.
I am used to my male characters being the alien... but I was sucked in to Chesaras life very quickly.
Imaging being a Hybrid that is owned by the government, but not knowing you are owned. You are kept in a gilded cage and used for your healing abilities with no real freedom whatsoever... whats a girl to do when the blinders are ripped off and she begins to discover herself...
This is a hot read... and you will def. want to know what happens next!
I already have the next book in my reader and getting ready to start it!
if you want a good futuristic erotic romance.. grab this one!
April 5, 2014
This isn't my typical read, but it was enjoyable. Super futuristic, still with a bit of earthly feel.
There are a lot of different species involved, so I did re-read the first two chapters to get the full understanding. A complex read usually takes a second read in the beginning. The underlying tone is similar to humans, in that I mean-survival of the fittest.
My favorite part was probably the card Tenset carries to prove his genetic makeup is superior, and worth a try. I could actually see that happening in the not so distant future:)
There are a lot of different species involved, so I did re-read the first two chapters to get the full understanding. A complex read usually takes a second read in the beginning. The underlying tone is similar to humans, in that I mean-survival of the fittest.
My favorite part was probably the card Tenset carries to prove his genetic makeup is superior, and worth a try. I could actually see that happening in the not so distant future:)
August 18, 2016
Hire an editor. That's all I'm saying.
June 17, 2016
To the future readers and writers of this generation and BEYOND,
I have decided to be completely honest in this review. I'm done with rounding up. I'm done with being altogether timid, cautious to shine a light on several issues that I used to pay no mind to with other writers. So...okay. Here we go. I did not like this book. Why, you ask? Because I couldn't. I tried diligently, oh yes I did, but it was difficult for me. As I made my way through Discovery, I tried to forgive the consistent slips in punctuation, typos, and the present and past tense follies circulating the pages with undying loyalty. But I just couldn't bring myself to do so, no matter how hard I tried to. So in that situation, what does one do? Just go all in and leave a scathing review? Eh, that's really not my style, I told myself repeatedly. I'm more of a person who has a conscience, an incessant need to reach out and help in any way that I can. Admittedly, I care about my fellow self-published writers, so I do try to personally voice my concerns with their work ahead of time in a personal message whenever the situation surfaces. So that's exactly what I did. I contacted Emma Jaye, the author of this very book. Full disclosure (this is relevant, I promise), she is/was the moderator of several review groups on Goodreads, and I took part in a few of them. Hi, you ghosters of the group, by the way! I stated how I felt and I gave many examples of things that she should fix. Various things that I willingly took the precious time out of MY time (and yes, it is precious) to assist with. I didn't critique the storytelling, the premise...nothing of the sort. I just got down to the basics. Sentences/things that simply have to be corrected because they're incorrect.
Immersion breakers for demonstrative purposes only:
"The Garian [capped here but not in the previous two instances] ship had larger corridors, higher ambient temperatures and light levels than the human vessel." [?? lighter levels?? more light levels?]
"...we've only had success when we've captured particularly [particular?] specimens."
"Huang gazed at the nude figure as she by-[delete hyphen]passed the ladder...Unfazed by the ten-foot drop, she walked;[change semi-colon to em dash] make that stalked[insert em dash] towards him."
"'Come, let us have some refreshment, and I will tell you what I know about Dakarans.' Ichannat placing [placed] its enormous blue-scaled hand on Huang's shoulder and guiding [guided] him away."
"'Eww, those bloody mice are back!' she exclaimed to the empty room and instinctively raising [raised] her purse as a defensive weapon while she peered around the central block of lockers."
Allow me to interject for a moment here. Up above are just five examples that could truly have been avoided. Easily, mind you. And the book is littered with examples like this. That's why I wasn't immersed while reading. They stop you in your tracks for a second. My immersion was broken one too many times. As well as my patience. Especially since I brought them to the author's attention with a resounding thud. Apparently, grace was not to be in the deck of cards. Instead of thanking me for spotting inconsistencies/errors and caring enough to come to her about it first, she lashed out like a spoiled teenager. Emma was quick to say that she had over twenty (self-)published books and that she's earned a comfortable living with her writing and by taking on paid beta-reads. Oh yeah, and it's merely my prerogative to leave a two-star review for this novel if I "don't agree" with her usage of commas, semi-colons, and hyphens. Even though it's so much more than that. With no exaggeration, this book is inherently plagued with problems. And also, it's not a presidential debate. It's a case of right and wrong. You know, it's always funny when a person flexes their ego instead of accepting inarguable mistakes that were made on their end. Look, we all obviously make mistakes with the projects we create every once in a while, but that doesn't mean a person has to be entirely blinded by their own delusions of grandeur when it comes to somebody kindly—and genuinely—attempting to help them out with it. That's the sign of a human being not wanting to improve, the type of person who's so enamored with a self-inflated literary depiction of themselves that they can't readjust and admit any shred of fault. With that attitude, you can't improve. It's simple science.
More immersion breakers...but this time, for your growing enjoyment, I have opted to randomly hop to any page in an experiment to see if there's a mistake within the manuscript in any given area. By way of making a distinctive point. And guess what? I found something each and every time. Three jumps forward and back inside the book, these were the things that I found:
Location 2858 of 3470:
THE ATTACK OF NO COMMAS!!
"You may go home to your lovely wife and family now Melton."
"Sorry Sir"
Location 1144 of 3470:
:: beginning paragraph of Chapter 12 ::
MALICIOUS MISSPELLINGS!!
"The sharp stab of fear and adrenaline that shot threw [you mean through??] her, [delete comma] changed to outright rage as the two men laughed."
Really quick personal interruption here! If I had bought a physical copy (if one even existed) of this book instead of the digital version, I'd probably tell someone that I THREW it out in disgust. When they'd surely ask me why it had bothered me so much, I'd say that I just couldn't go THROUGH the pain of logically stringing together the badly-worded sentences anymore. See what I did there? Education is fun for all ages!
Location 1781 of 3470:
HURDLE THE WORDS! YOU CAN DO IT!
At Connor's blank stare Tamas continued. "Well in that case shall we get on with things? Hopefully after hearing my tale of woe you'll agree that it's in the best interests of this planet as well as yourselves to render assistance to our cause."
What do you think of those? By the way, I put that massive word hurdle last because there are many passages like that. And it's detrimental for any reader to sift through the swamp of it. It's not smooth. It's not even good.
Moving along!
What I have found interesting is Emma Jaye's strange stance in regards to any perceived problem within her writing. Now, there have actually been errors casually pointed out by not just me, but by several others (albeit with kid gloves). Reviewer Andromeda Bliss stated, "I don't know if the kindle version is more polished, but the edition I received would have benefited from intensive proofreading and editing." It's fascinating that Miss Jaye has gone out of her way to try and explain herself. She even includes a disclaimer in the beginning of one of her books that states:
"Please note that all spelling, grammatical constructions and cultural references derive from the weirdness of British English."
While that is decidedly to be taken into consideration, it doesn't account for the simple rules of punctuation or verb tense inconsistencies that are clearly being thrown under the "it's British English" blanket. Said blanket does not cover blatant disregard of the rules that would obviously make something easier to read and understand.
You may be wondering why I haven't rated this book the dreaded, soul-crushing one-star. Well, I didn't resort to such a low rating because Discovery neither offended me to an extreme, nor is it completely broken. The point here is that I was going to possibly give it three stars if I had just received word or some sort of assurance from the author that she'd improve the distracting errors snapping, crackling, and popping within the manuscript. But I didn't get that, sadly. What I got for my fellow writer sincerity was a person who is very much comfortable living in a bubble of obliviousness. No! Of course she cannot be bothered in her glass house by others trying to make her aware of some glaring issues. No, no!! And by God, she will ignore any and all stones thrown at said glass house. Perhaps it's because a mod hat is firmly on the head. Right?
P.S. As of this writing, there is only one other two-star review left for this book. And it's by a person who just stopped reading altogether. They didn't even finish it. You know why? They said the sentences were too jumbled and that they weren't sure if the author who wrote it speaks English as a second language or if the author is just writing too fast and skipping edits.
Well...
Have no fear, Amazon reviewer J. Mason! Your answer is as follows:
Emma Jaye clings to a crutch of her British upbringing in a dazzling showcase of egomaniacal denial. She cites her many structural mishaps with writing as mere preference instead of actual faults on display, which they are. And furthermore, she doesn't use a dedicated editor, which I suggested—either mine or any editor for that matter. Regardless, there's your pure clarification, whoever you are!
And to you personally, Emma...viewing this incomplete form of a book, I cannot put on the rose-colored glasses any longer. I cannot kiss ass like so many others have done for you in the groups, in fear of being shunned or cast out of what is an inconsequential and pretentious gathering. Yes, you are a writer, but you are a writer who needs to learn how to properly write without making the most commonplace errors. It can—and should—be rectified in all of your work. You owe it to the readers who decide to invest time in your books. Make it easier for them to read. Simple stuff.
And most importantly, to quote the wise words of Dr. Steve Brule...
"It's for your health."
I have decided to be completely honest in this review. I'm done with rounding up. I'm done with being altogether timid, cautious to shine a light on several issues that I used to pay no mind to with other writers. So...okay. Here we go. I did not like this book. Why, you ask? Because I couldn't. I tried diligently, oh yes I did, but it was difficult for me. As I made my way through Discovery, I tried to forgive the consistent slips in punctuation, typos, and the present and past tense follies circulating the pages with undying loyalty. But I just couldn't bring myself to do so, no matter how hard I tried to. So in that situation, what does one do? Just go all in and leave a scathing review? Eh, that's really not my style, I told myself repeatedly. I'm more of a person who has a conscience, an incessant need to reach out and help in any way that I can. Admittedly, I care about my fellow self-published writers, so I do try to personally voice my concerns with their work ahead of time in a personal message whenever the situation surfaces. So that's exactly what I did. I contacted Emma Jaye, the author of this very book. Full disclosure (this is relevant, I promise), she is/was the moderator of several review groups on Goodreads, and I took part in a few of them. Hi, you ghosters of the group, by the way! I stated how I felt and I gave many examples of things that she should fix. Various things that I willingly took the precious time out of MY time (and yes, it is precious) to assist with. I didn't critique the storytelling, the premise...nothing of the sort. I just got down to the basics. Sentences/things that simply have to be corrected because they're incorrect.
Immersion breakers for demonstrative purposes only:
"The Garian [capped here but not in the previous two instances] ship had larger corridors, higher ambient temperatures and light levels than the human vessel." [?? lighter levels?? more light levels?]
"...we've only had success when we've captured particularly [particular?] specimens."
"Huang gazed at the nude figure as she by-[delete hyphen]passed the ladder...Unfazed by the ten-foot drop, she walked;[change semi-colon to em dash] make that stalked[insert em dash] towards him."
"'Come, let us have some refreshment, and I will tell you what I know about Dakarans.' Ichannat placing [placed] its enormous blue-scaled hand on Huang's shoulder and guiding [guided] him away."
"'Eww, those bloody mice are back!' she exclaimed to the empty room and instinctively raising [raised] her purse as a defensive weapon while she peered around the central block of lockers."
Allow me to interject for a moment here. Up above are just five examples that could truly have been avoided. Easily, mind you. And the book is littered with examples like this. That's why I wasn't immersed while reading. They stop you in your tracks for a second. My immersion was broken one too many times. As well as my patience. Especially since I brought them to the author's attention with a resounding thud. Apparently, grace was not to be in the deck of cards. Instead of thanking me for spotting inconsistencies/errors and caring enough to come to her about it first, she lashed out like a spoiled teenager. Emma was quick to say that she had over twenty (self-)published books and that she's earned a comfortable living with her writing and by taking on paid beta-reads. Oh yeah, and it's merely my prerogative to leave a two-star review for this novel if I "don't agree" with her usage of commas, semi-colons, and hyphens. Even though it's so much more than that. With no exaggeration, this book is inherently plagued with problems. And also, it's not a presidential debate. It's a case of right and wrong. You know, it's always funny when a person flexes their ego instead of accepting inarguable mistakes that were made on their end. Look, we all obviously make mistakes with the projects we create every once in a while, but that doesn't mean a person has to be entirely blinded by their own delusions of grandeur when it comes to somebody kindly—and genuinely—attempting to help them out with it. That's the sign of a human being not wanting to improve, the type of person who's so enamored with a self-inflated literary depiction of themselves that they can't readjust and admit any shred of fault. With that attitude, you can't improve. It's simple science.
More immersion breakers...but this time, for your growing enjoyment, I have opted to randomly hop to any page in an experiment to see if there's a mistake within the manuscript in any given area. By way of making a distinctive point. And guess what? I found something each and every time. Three jumps forward and back inside the book, these were the things that I found:
Location 2858 of 3470:
THE ATTACK OF NO COMMAS!!
"You may go home to your lovely wife and family now Melton."
"Sorry Sir"
Location 1144 of 3470:
:: beginning paragraph of Chapter 12 ::
MALICIOUS MISSPELLINGS!!
"The sharp stab of fear and adrenaline that shot threw [you mean through??] her, [delete comma] changed to outright rage as the two men laughed."
Really quick personal interruption here! If I had bought a physical copy (if one even existed) of this book instead of the digital version, I'd probably tell someone that I THREW it out in disgust. When they'd surely ask me why it had bothered me so much, I'd say that I just couldn't go THROUGH the pain of logically stringing together the badly-worded sentences anymore. See what I did there? Education is fun for all ages!
Location 1781 of 3470:
HURDLE THE WORDS! YOU CAN DO IT!
At Connor's blank stare Tamas continued. "Well in that case shall we get on with things? Hopefully after hearing my tale of woe you'll agree that it's in the best interests of this planet as well as yourselves to render assistance to our cause."
What do you think of those? By the way, I put that massive word hurdle last because there are many passages like that. And it's detrimental for any reader to sift through the swamp of it. It's not smooth. It's not even good.
Moving along!
What I have found interesting is Emma Jaye's strange stance in regards to any perceived problem within her writing. Now, there have actually been errors casually pointed out by not just me, but by several others (albeit with kid gloves). Reviewer Andromeda Bliss stated, "I don't know if the kindle version is more polished, but the edition I received would have benefited from intensive proofreading and editing." It's fascinating that Miss Jaye has gone out of her way to try and explain herself. She even includes a disclaimer in the beginning of one of her books that states:
"Please note that all spelling, grammatical constructions and cultural references derive from the weirdness of British English."
While that is decidedly to be taken into consideration, it doesn't account for the simple rules of punctuation or verb tense inconsistencies that are clearly being thrown under the "it's British English" blanket. Said blanket does not cover blatant disregard of the rules that would obviously make something easier to read and understand.
You may be wondering why I haven't rated this book the dreaded, soul-crushing one-star. Well, I didn't resort to such a low rating because Discovery neither offended me to an extreme, nor is it completely broken. The point here is that I was going to possibly give it three stars if I had just received word or some sort of assurance from the author that she'd improve the distracting errors snapping, crackling, and popping within the manuscript. But I didn't get that, sadly. What I got for my fellow writer sincerity was a person who is very much comfortable living in a bubble of obliviousness. No! Of course she cannot be bothered in her glass house by others trying to make her aware of some glaring issues. No, no!! And by God, she will ignore any and all stones thrown at said glass house. Perhaps it's because a mod hat is firmly on the head. Right?
P.S. As of this writing, there is only one other two-star review left for this book. And it's by a person who just stopped reading altogether. They didn't even finish it. You know why? They said the sentences were too jumbled and that they weren't sure if the author who wrote it speaks English as a second language or if the author is just writing too fast and skipping edits.
Well...
Have no fear, Amazon reviewer J. Mason! Your answer is as follows:
Emma Jaye clings to a crutch of her British upbringing in a dazzling showcase of egomaniacal denial. She cites her many structural mishaps with writing as mere preference instead of actual faults on display, which they are. And furthermore, she doesn't use a dedicated editor, which I suggested—either mine or any editor for that matter. Regardless, there's your pure clarification, whoever you are!
And to you personally, Emma...viewing this incomplete form of a book, I cannot put on the rose-colored glasses any longer. I cannot kiss ass like so many others have done for you in the groups, in fear of being shunned or cast out of what is an inconsequential and pretentious gathering. Yes, you are a writer, but you are a writer who needs to learn how to properly write without making the most commonplace errors. It can—and should—be rectified in all of your work. You owe it to the readers who decide to invest time in your books. Make it easier for them to read. Simple stuff.
And most importantly, to quote the wise words of Dr. Steve Brule...
"It's for your health."
January 15, 2018
Slightly confusing start, I wasn’t sure where the story was going, but by the end of the 2nd chapter it clicked and I was greatly rewarded with a rich new universe and interesting characters that weren’t who they seemed at first. A few twists and turns along the way, a very enjoyable and engrossing read!
January 17, 2018
Pretty good
This was an interesting read. Overall I enjoyed it, but didn't love it. There were several errors and I wish there was more to the story instead of it just covering a few days. I'll be reading the next book.
This was an interesting read. Overall I enjoyed it, but didn't love it. There were several errors and I wish there was more to the story instead of it just covering a few days. I'll be reading the next book.
January 19, 2018
Really enjoyed!
The first book in this series is really good. The MC is extremely likable and her men are sexy! There is a big heat factor but it works with the story. I will definitely be continuing the series!
The first book in this series is really good. The MC is extremely likable and her men are sexy! There is a big heat factor but it works with the story. I will definitely be continuing the series!
March 9, 2018
this book snuck in under my radar. I started out unsure in the first few pages. then all of a sudden I can't stop reading. it reminds me of the main character... once you get her going, she HAS to finish!
this was a great read and I am craving the second book. I highly recommend.
this was a great read and I am craving the second book. I highly recommend.
November 14, 2018
Ok.
Well written and interesting. An alien series where the girl is the alien. The chick was not very annoying but the guys left some to be desired.
Well written and interesting. An alien series where the girl is the alien. The chick was not very annoying but the guys left some to be desired.
February 13, 2018
liked it enough to try book 2
February 1, 2016
This book had a wonderfully unique blend of genres which made it very fun to read. The introduction is decidedly SciFi, and I'll admit that even though I do enjoy some Science Fiction movies there was a moment when I wondered if the book would be too SciFi for me. However that fear vanished the moment I met the heroine, Chesara, immediately I was hooked and those first two chapters made perfect sense. The futuristic intergalactic setting had been set and once we were onboard the Apollo I immediately began to appreciate the setup for a wonderful romance.
At this point the book took on the tone of a contemporary romance for me, albeit on a spaceship. Chesara was a fun, witty, charming character who was coming of age and beginning to look at her handsome bodyguard, Connor, in a whole new way. I finished half the book in the first night, falling more in love with the characters with each page. My favorite thing about Chesara was her pastime of collecting as many swear words as she could learn in as many languages as possible. Connor was the ultimate romantic hero, always professional while secretly pining away for his beautiful young charge. The stage was set and I was ready for the romance!
Once they land on the planet Kalzir the book seemed to reflect a historical romance at times. The setting, clothing, and formality of the planet was reminiscent of the 19th century. To my dismay while on this planet Chesara and Connor are separated, enter Tenset. I wanted to hate him, and at times I did. Connor was supposed to be the romantic hero! But the seduction was so artfully written that despite myself I found that I was rooting for something to happen between Chesara and Tenset. Poor Connor!
The final genre shift was definitely more into the realm of erotica, with hints of BDSM and fantasies of ménage. The fact that Chesara was not fully human allowed the author to push the envelope with her "alien urges" making her newly unleashed overt sexuality acceptable. I was thrilled to see Connor come back, and even though I don't typically read m/f/m there were times I was kind of hoping for it! This author definitely took me out of my comfort zone and I enjoyed it! I'll admit the sexual torture was uncomfortable for me and there were some cringe-worthy moments, but once I reached the last page I found myself immediately wanting to read the next book. I loved these characters and want to know what's going to happen next.
For that reason I would highly recommend this book for anyone who is looking for something that is not your "cookie-cutter" romance!
At this point the book took on the tone of a contemporary romance for me, albeit on a spaceship. Chesara was a fun, witty, charming character who was coming of age and beginning to look at her handsome bodyguard, Connor, in a whole new way. I finished half the book in the first night, falling more in love with the characters with each page. My favorite thing about Chesara was her pastime of collecting as many swear words as she could learn in as many languages as possible. Connor was the ultimate romantic hero, always professional while secretly pining away for his beautiful young charge. The stage was set and I was ready for the romance!
Once they land on the planet Kalzir the book seemed to reflect a historical romance at times. The setting, clothing, and formality of the planet was reminiscent of the 19th century. To my dismay while on this planet Chesara and Connor are separated, enter Tenset. I wanted to hate him, and at times I did. Connor was supposed to be the romantic hero! But the seduction was so artfully written that despite myself I found that I was rooting for something to happen between Chesara and Tenset. Poor Connor!
The final genre shift was definitely more into the realm of erotica, with hints of BDSM and fantasies of ménage. The fact that Chesara was not fully human allowed the author to push the envelope with her "alien urges" making her newly unleashed overt sexuality acceptable. I was thrilled to see Connor come back, and even though I don't typically read m/f/m there were times I was kind of hoping for it! This author definitely took me out of my comfort zone and I enjoyed it! I'll admit the sexual torture was uncomfortable for me and there were some cringe-worthy moments, but once I reached the last page I found myself immediately wanting to read the next book. I loved these characters and want to know what's going to happen next.
For that reason I would highly recommend this book for anyone who is looking for something that is not your "cookie-cutter" romance!
January 15, 2016
‘Hybrid I – Discovery’ by Emma Jaye is an erotic romance set in a science fiction universe. Most of the story occurs on a small, Federation planet called Kalzir where Chesara is sent on a mission. A certain Lord Tamas has paid a fortune to the Federation for her services. Chesara believes herself to be human, albeit a human with a talent for healing almost any illness or wound; in fact, she’s only 15% Homo sapiens. The rest of her genetic pool is Dakaran, a humanoid species that no one on Terra Prime knows much about other than her unconscious ability to produce pheromones that attract men like magnets to metal and her healing abilities. Chesara is accompanied by Connor, a Federation agent charged with chaperoning and counseling the young woman, and a man who constantly struggles to remain aloof and unaffected by Chesara’s charms.
The primary characters are Chesara, Connor and Lord Tenset (nephew of Tamas) and each are well developed, empathetic actors. Everything necessary for a romantic triangle is present from jealousy and one-upmanship between the two men to Chesara’s falling in love with both men. The narrator and each of the actors, in their own way, are true to the plot. The author has an excellent sense of how far to carry the sex scenes without becoming crass and/or gratuitous. These scenes are few, don’t start until well past the half-way mark and with one exception, relatively short in duration. There were, for me, two instances that created a lack of verisimilitude. One of these was the endearments used by the two men… ‘sweetheart’ and ‘kitty cat’ being the most frequently used. Language changes and words like these, in use fifty and sixty years ago, are seldom used today much less several centuries from now. The second slip in realism is a pause for sex in the middle of an escape scene where capture would lead to their deaths. I know when the urge hits… but in this case, totally out of place.
My overall rating is three and a half, rounded up to four stars. I liked the story. I liked the characters, Chesara especially. I thought the sex scenes to be on target… not overwhelmingly pornographic nor of the parentally guided thirteen variety. I would recommend for mature readers of romance novels, but not for readers looking for ‘real’ science fiction.
The primary characters are Chesara, Connor and Lord Tenset (nephew of Tamas) and each are well developed, empathetic actors. Everything necessary for a romantic triangle is present from jealousy and one-upmanship between the two men to Chesara’s falling in love with both men. The narrator and each of the actors, in their own way, are true to the plot. The author has an excellent sense of how far to carry the sex scenes without becoming crass and/or gratuitous. These scenes are few, don’t start until well past the half-way mark and with one exception, relatively short in duration. There were, for me, two instances that created a lack of verisimilitude. One of these was the endearments used by the two men… ‘sweetheart’ and ‘kitty cat’ being the most frequently used. Language changes and words like these, in use fifty and sixty years ago, are seldom used today much less several centuries from now. The second slip in realism is a pause for sex in the middle of an escape scene where capture would lead to their deaths. I know when the urge hits… but in this case, totally out of place.
My overall rating is three and a half, rounded up to four stars. I liked the story. I liked the characters, Chesara especially. I thought the sex scenes to be on target… not overwhelmingly pornographic nor of the parentally guided thirteen variety. I would recommend for mature readers of romance novels, but not for readers looking for ‘real’ science fiction.
June 21, 2015
Review of Hybrid Volume 1 – Discovery, by Emma Jaye
Chesara is 85% Dakaran, 15% human, a sex timebomb waiting to explode. Which she does in this first part of the Hybrid series. I have to say, I’m partial to sci-fi so I was looking forward to reviewing this book. However, within the first 50 pages it is evident the plot takes second-stage as the storyline quickly degenerates into ’50 Shades’ territory.
The story? Chesara has unique healing abilities, and has been sent by the Federation as a special envoy to Kalzara along with her bodyguard Connor. Her mission is to help the planet’s ruler conceive a child and heir. All well and good, but unfortunately the evil Lord Tamas has an ulterior motive: he wants her to plant hidden defects in the foetus which become evident as he matures, and thus make the child unfit to rule. The rulership of the planet will then pass to himself as the (to his mind) rightful lord and heir. I must say that for such a valuable asset to the Federation, Chesara is surprisingly easily separated from her bodyguard and kidnapped by the rakishly handsome Lord Tenset – the nephew of Lord Tamas. The whole venture sounds as unlikely as the Queen riding around on the Underground with her crown jewels in a plastic Waitrose bag. When ultimately presented with Tamas’ evil plot Chesara naturally refuses, and spends the next 150 or so pages being repeatedly raped and seduced. Her bodyguard fares no better.
That then is the premise for ‘Discovery’. Okay, so let’s rate the book: 1) if you’re into raunchy, fantasy sex you’ll like this book. 2) The writing is okay, although given that the action takes place perhaps hundreds or thousands of years in the future, the use of contemporary endearments like ‘sweetheart’ and ‘kittycat’ jar. 3) I found the characters one-dimensional, and if the characters aren’t believable it is very difficult to care what happens to them. So we have the ‘good’ Chesara and Connor, the ‘bad’ Lord Tamas and the ‘good/bad/good/bad/good but he’s sexy’ Lord Tenset. 4) If you’re looking for sci-fi (as opposed to a sex romp), you’re out of luck. 5) Although maybe there’s more of a storyline in the next instalment, the fear of getting more of the same is enough to put me off, yet that may be just enough to turn others on.
Chesara is 85% Dakaran, 15% human, a sex timebomb waiting to explode. Which she does in this first part of the Hybrid series. I have to say, I’m partial to sci-fi so I was looking forward to reviewing this book. However, within the first 50 pages it is evident the plot takes second-stage as the storyline quickly degenerates into ’50 Shades’ territory.
The story? Chesara has unique healing abilities, and has been sent by the Federation as a special envoy to Kalzara along with her bodyguard Connor. Her mission is to help the planet’s ruler conceive a child and heir. All well and good, but unfortunately the evil Lord Tamas has an ulterior motive: he wants her to plant hidden defects in the foetus which become evident as he matures, and thus make the child unfit to rule. The rulership of the planet will then pass to himself as the (to his mind) rightful lord and heir. I must say that for such a valuable asset to the Federation, Chesara is surprisingly easily separated from her bodyguard and kidnapped by the rakishly handsome Lord Tenset – the nephew of Lord Tamas. The whole venture sounds as unlikely as the Queen riding around on the Underground with her crown jewels in a plastic Waitrose bag. When ultimately presented with Tamas’ evil plot Chesara naturally refuses, and spends the next 150 or so pages being repeatedly raped and seduced. Her bodyguard fares no better.
That then is the premise for ‘Discovery’. Okay, so let’s rate the book: 1) if you’re into raunchy, fantasy sex you’ll like this book. 2) The writing is okay, although given that the action takes place perhaps hundreds or thousands of years in the future, the use of contemporary endearments like ‘sweetheart’ and ‘kittycat’ jar. 3) I found the characters one-dimensional, and if the characters aren’t believable it is very difficult to care what happens to them. So we have the ‘good’ Chesara and Connor, the ‘bad’ Lord Tamas and the ‘good/bad/good/bad/good but he’s sexy’ Lord Tenset. 4) If you’re looking for sci-fi (as opposed to a sex romp), you’re out of luck. 5) Although maybe there’s more of a storyline in the next instalment, the fear of getting more of the same is enough to put me off, yet that may be just enough to turn others on.
October 26, 2015
Steamily Hot!
When I started reading the first chapters of this book, I originally thought it was one of those books that I will struggle to read to the end but I was pleasantly happy to be wrong.
This book is about a beautiful foul mouthed hybrid named Chesara of both human and alien origin and her powers to heal. A large percentage of her heritage favours her alien mother’s a Dakaran whom at the time she was pregnant with her children, men queued up to satisfy the insatiable and equally irresistible alien. Eighteen years on, and Chesara has grown, however, she is still a virgin. She thinks of sex but because of her heritage and the healing power she possesses, no man is allowed to be with her in that way because she is the high prized property of the federation.
She was sent on a mission to heal in Kazir, with her body guard Connor in toe, whom she had always carried some form of love for but during her visit, she met the handsome Lord Tenset, the man that would eventually make her a woman. Lord Tenset had their own agenda for inviting her over but after spending a day with her, he became mesmerized and he found it difficult to justify his initial reasons for wanting to seduce her. They were both falling in lust and in love fast but all is not well as Lord Tenset’s uncle Tamas decided to put a spanner in the works.
I loved the romance between Chesara and Tenset, however I didn’t like that now that she experienced sleeping with a man, and discovered the wells of pleasure she has been missing that she was fast becoming like her mother and that kind of dampened the romance for me, I guess the Dakaran heritage was holding true. I also wanted her to love Connor as a brother or just as a friend not with the same intensity as Lord Tenset although she was different when she was with him and when she made love to him. I also didn’t like the fact that there was no jealousy between the two men that coveted her . For me it took power away from the romance and made it just about the sex.
I still found the book very hot and steamy, the description of the scenes played before my eyes and at times, I felt like I was living it. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
When I started reading the first chapters of this book, I originally thought it was one of those books that I will struggle to read to the end but I was pleasantly happy to be wrong.
This book is about a beautiful foul mouthed hybrid named Chesara of both human and alien origin and her powers to heal. A large percentage of her heritage favours her alien mother’s a Dakaran whom at the time she was pregnant with her children, men queued up to satisfy the insatiable and equally irresistible alien. Eighteen years on, and Chesara has grown, however, she is still a virgin. She thinks of sex but because of her heritage and the healing power she possesses, no man is allowed to be with her in that way because she is the high prized property of the federation.
She was sent on a mission to heal in Kazir, with her body guard Connor in toe, whom she had always carried some form of love for but during her visit, she met the handsome Lord Tenset, the man that would eventually make her a woman. Lord Tenset had their own agenda for inviting her over but after spending a day with her, he became mesmerized and he found it difficult to justify his initial reasons for wanting to seduce her. They were both falling in lust and in love fast but all is not well as Lord Tenset’s uncle Tamas decided to put a spanner in the works.
I loved the romance between Chesara and Tenset, however I didn’t like that now that she experienced sleeping with a man, and discovered the wells of pleasure she has been missing that she was fast becoming like her mother and that kind of dampened the romance for me, I guess the Dakaran heritage was holding true. I also wanted her to love Connor as a brother or just as a friend not with the same intensity as Lord Tenset although she was different when she was with him and when she made love to him. I also didn’t like the fact that there was no jealousy between the two men that coveted her . For me it took power away from the romance and made it just about the sex.
I still found the book very hot and steamy, the description of the scenes played before my eyes and at times, I felt like I was living it. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
December 18, 2015
Discovery is the first book I have read in the Sci-fi/Erotica genre, so this was something new for me as a reader of more traditional Sci-fi. As a result, I went in with an open mind.
The story starts in a way that will feel more familiar to a Sci-fi fan, with futuristic scenes on-board a spaceship. However, within a relatively short amount of time it began to morph into something more akin to a period drama. This surprised me at first, yet after a while it became clear this was trying to do something slightly different (possible a little too different for the usual Sci-fi fan). The romance elements soon took centre stage, which pushed the Sci-fi part of the plot almost out completely.
Chesara is a feisty character that has one of the most impressive collections of swear words from different cultures I have ever read, which made me smile and even laugh at times. She is a well-established character early on thanks to the highly entertaining writing. She will not take nonsense from anyone and is often the most confident sounding of all the characters in this book – even though she is clearly covering for her own inexperience. I enjoyed the dialogue throughout the book.
As far as the erotic scenes go, I have no doubt those who enjoy Erotica will find this a highly entertaining read, and as a result will be pleased with the descriptive stuff. I personally found them a little difficult to read, but that is entirely down to my own lack of experience with this genre.
There are a few minor editing issues with this book, but none will affect readers’ enjoyment, in my opinion. There are some errors here and there with incorrectly placed commas and some confusion over who is talking at some points, however they will go by easily and without slowing the overall flow of the book. The plot zips along nicely, although may seem a little too light on the Sci-fi elements for some readers. I expect the next instalments will develop Chesara as a character even more, hopefully revealing a little more about her upbringing too.
Overall I would recommend this book to anyone interested in Erotic stories. For someone looking for a Sci-fi story, however, I’m not as certain. It is still well worth considering, though.
The story starts in a way that will feel more familiar to a Sci-fi fan, with futuristic scenes on-board a spaceship. However, within a relatively short amount of time it began to morph into something more akin to a period drama. This surprised me at first, yet after a while it became clear this was trying to do something slightly different (possible a little too different for the usual Sci-fi fan). The romance elements soon took centre stage, which pushed the Sci-fi part of the plot almost out completely.
Chesara is a feisty character that has one of the most impressive collections of swear words from different cultures I have ever read, which made me smile and even laugh at times. She is a well-established character early on thanks to the highly entertaining writing. She will not take nonsense from anyone and is often the most confident sounding of all the characters in this book – even though she is clearly covering for her own inexperience. I enjoyed the dialogue throughout the book.
As far as the erotic scenes go, I have no doubt those who enjoy Erotica will find this a highly entertaining read, and as a result will be pleased with the descriptive stuff. I personally found them a little difficult to read, but that is entirely down to my own lack of experience with this genre.
There are a few minor editing issues with this book, but none will affect readers’ enjoyment, in my opinion. There are some errors here and there with incorrectly placed commas and some confusion over who is talking at some points, however they will go by easily and without slowing the overall flow of the book. The plot zips along nicely, although may seem a little too light on the Sci-fi elements for some readers. I expect the next instalments will develop Chesara as a character even more, hopefully revealing a little more about her upbringing too.
Overall I would recommend this book to anyone interested in Erotic stories. For someone looking for a Sci-fi story, however, I’m not as certain. It is still well worth considering, though.
May 22, 2016
'Discovery' takes place in a far future in which humanity has begun to colonise planets beyond our own solar system, encountering several alien species along the way. Chesara, the book’s protagonist, is a hybrid: part-human and part-Dakaran. On top of the power she holds over men, she has inherited a unique healing ability that makes her a valuable asset to the Federation, although her true nature is kept under wraps by Connor, her bodyguard, chaperone and best friend. On a paid assignment to cure the infertility of the ruling family, Chesara and Connor travel to Kalzir, a backwater planet with a low-tech society reminiscent of the Victorian era. Once they arrive, however, it quickly becomes apparent that the job is not what it seems, as Chesara is whisked off by suave ladies’ man Lord Tenset. What follows is a fast-paced ride, jam-packed full of seduction, deception, torn loyalties and plenty of steamy action.
In my eyes this is primarily a romance novel, with the Sci-Fi setting playing more of a supporting role as we watch Chesara struggle to come to terms with her developing sexual maturity and complicated feelings for both Connor and Tenset. Although I don’t read much romance, this story has strengths that I think will appeal to a wide audience. Chesara is a good character. Bolshie yet kind-hearted and resourceful, it’s hard not to warm to her and her impressive range of insults. The author a real talent for sex scenes, which are handled well, written in a style that seems natural and explicit without trespassing into overly gratuitous. More than once I found myself blushing on public transport! For the most part the writing is smooth and unobtrusive, however I had a couple of issues around the placement of commas, and what to me was an overuse of quotation marks when different word choices might have worked better. Perhaps the ending could have been a little stronger, as it felt as though the outcome was decided long before the final page but, minor quibbles aside, this is a solid start to the series. Above all, ‘Discovery’ is good fun and well worth a pick up if you enjoy steamy romance with a twist of Science Fiction.
In my eyes this is primarily a romance novel, with the Sci-Fi setting playing more of a supporting role as we watch Chesara struggle to come to terms with her developing sexual maturity and complicated feelings for both Connor and Tenset. Although I don’t read much romance, this story has strengths that I think will appeal to a wide audience. Chesara is a good character. Bolshie yet kind-hearted and resourceful, it’s hard not to warm to her and her impressive range of insults. The author a real talent for sex scenes, which are handled well, written in a style that seems natural and explicit without trespassing into overly gratuitous. More than once I found myself blushing on public transport! For the most part the writing is smooth and unobtrusive, however I had a couple of issues around the placement of commas, and what to me was an overuse of quotation marks when different word choices might have worked better. Perhaps the ending could have been a little stronger, as it felt as though the outcome was decided long before the final page but, minor quibbles aside, this is a solid start to the series. Above all, ‘Discovery’ is good fun and well worth a pick up if you enjoy steamy romance with a twist of Science Fiction.
February 16, 2016
My Review: (Possible Spoilers*Depends on opinion*)
I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
To: The Sci-Fi Lovers!
I have so much to say about this book.
Since I do honest reviews, I have to say that the first couple of chapters I was slightly confused. But that was only because those chapters are setting up the story along with the background. It is telling us about where Chesara came from. Key important information that you would want to have. Which is totally fine. It doesn’t harm the story at all, but that was the reason it lost a star.
Mainly because those chapters are very important to a story, some readers base everything on them. It will lead to a reader deciding if they want to read the book. ~ Despite this one thing I thought this story was excellent.
Along with some suggestions to rape that hit me for a sec since their was no warning. That was a little unnerving for me.
On top of having Aliens (or hybrids) in this book, we also have some yummy nookie going down.(willing sex) ~This leads me to say 18+ should be reading this book.
At first I wasn’t sure if I liked Lord Tenset but as the book progressed I started to love this character. Along with loving Conner, I know in their own ways they both care about Chesara. Even if Tenset has a funny way of showing it, specially what has happened between the two of them.
Chesara is an interesting specimen, I would love to read more about her. Not only is she able to heal other, but she also has this pull on Conner and Tenset (Or any male that is interested). It is a refreshing look at things. OH and her colorful language is a hoot.
(You guys should know by now, I love my science fiction. I mean really who doesn’t love it)
So yes, I would recommend this book to my Alien loving friends. But like it says above, this book contains sex and violence. Along with hints towards rape and rape (what I consider). (So possible trigger warnings)
XOXO
~Zara
P.S I will be reading all 8 Hybrid Series by Emma Jaye~ Be on the look out for those reviews also
I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
To: The Sci-Fi Lovers!
I have so much to say about this book.
Since I do honest reviews, I have to say that the first couple of chapters I was slightly confused. But that was only because those chapters are setting up the story along with the background. It is telling us about where Chesara came from. Key important information that you would want to have. Which is totally fine. It doesn’t harm the story at all, but that was the reason it lost a star.
Mainly because those chapters are very important to a story, some readers base everything on them. It will lead to a reader deciding if they want to read the book. ~ Despite this one thing I thought this story was excellent.
Along with some suggestions to rape that hit me for a sec since their was no warning. That was a little unnerving for me.
On top of having Aliens (or hybrids) in this book, we also have some yummy nookie going down.(willing sex) ~This leads me to say 18+ should be reading this book.
At first I wasn’t sure if I liked Lord Tenset but as the book progressed I started to love this character. Along with loving Conner, I know in their own ways they both care about Chesara. Even if Tenset has a funny way of showing it, specially what has happened between the two of them.
Chesara is an interesting specimen, I would love to read more about her. Not only is she able to heal other, but she also has this pull on Conner and Tenset (Or any male that is interested). It is a refreshing look at things. OH and her colorful language is a hoot.
(You guys should know by now, I love my science fiction. I mean really who doesn’t love it)
So yes, I would recommend this book to my Alien loving friends. But like it says above, this book contains sex and violence. Along with hints towards rape and rape (what I consider). (So possible trigger warnings)
XOXO
~Zara
P.S I will be reading all 8 Hybrid Series by Emma Jaye~ Be on the look out for those reviews also
December 27, 2015
A Science Fiction/Romance Story, with the Emphasis on Romance
It is often said that in books of the science fiction/romance genre, the romance part usually takes priority over the science fiction. Discovery (Hybrid #1) follows this convention.
Chesara, described as a human/alien hybrid, is much valued for her healing skills. Through touch and concentration, she is able to detect and correct injuries by causing torn tissues and bone to realign, and by changing an array of human bodily processes (pain reception, metabolism). Because of the value of these skills, she has been largely isolated and closely monitored most of her life, with her unique services sold to the highest bidder…until the events of this story.
One of foci of the story is Chesara’s waking feelings for two men – Connor, who has been her long time protector/jailor; and Lord Tenset, part of the ruling class of the world she and Connor visit. It is to the author’s credit that she combines the science fiction and romance elements, at least partially, as the emerging relationships with these men deviate substantially from human norms, both in Chesara’s capacity for polygamous arrangements and in the response of her human lovers. Be aware that the sexual encounters are explicit and graphic, as well as scenes of physical torture, making this book adult reading.
On the science fiction side of the book, the plot is somewhat limited. The ploy that has Chesara and Connor isolated on the planet with Tenset is thin. The science is not futuristic or particularly imaginative, as the planet seems to resemble 15th century Medieval Europe in many respects, with occasional nods to limited technology. Additionally, both the storyline and the final resolution seem predicable.
I would recommend this book to readers who enjoy ‘one-off’ romances, with scenes of explicit sex and physical torture. For those looking for imaginative science fiction, however, you may wish to look elsewhere.
It is often said that in books of the science fiction/romance genre, the romance part usually takes priority over the science fiction. Discovery (Hybrid #1) follows this convention.
Chesara, described as a human/alien hybrid, is much valued for her healing skills. Through touch and concentration, she is able to detect and correct injuries by causing torn tissues and bone to realign, and by changing an array of human bodily processes (pain reception, metabolism). Because of the value of these skills, she has been largely isolated and closely monitored most of her life, with her unique services sold to the highest bidder…until the events of this story.
One of foci of the story is Chesara’s waking feelings for two men – Connor, who has been her long time protector/jailor; and Lord Tenset, part of the ruling class of the world she and Connor visit. It is to the author’s credit that she combines the science fiction and romance elements, at least partially, as the emerging relationships with these men deviate substantially from human norms, both in Chesara’s capacity for polygamous arrangements and in the response of her human lovers. Be aware that the sexual encounters are explicit and graphic, as well as scenes of physical torture, making this book adult reading.
On the science fiction side of the book, the plot is somewhat limited. The ploy that has Chesara and Connor isolated on the planet with Tenset is thin. The science is not futuristic or particularly imaginative, as the planet seems to resemble 15th century Medieval Europe in many respects, with occasional nods to limited technology. Additionally, both the storyline and the final resolution seem predicable.
I would recommend this book to readers who enjoy ‘one-off’ romances, with scenes of explicit sex and physical torture. For those looking for imaginative science fiction, however, you may wish to look elsewhere.
July 28, 2015
I'm in love with this world and I can't wait to see what happens next. Chesara doesn't know it, but she's a hybrid species that's hard-wired to be super sexual. She knows she has a special ability to heal, but the sex part won't be apparent until she's had her first sexual experience. While Chesara works hard to heal the sick and wounded, her hansom charge, Connor, constantly monitors her to assure she doesn't become sexually active. Her adventure begins when Connor takes her to meet some dignitaries and everything that can go wrong, does. In her struggle to break free from the danger, Chelsara discovers sex and realizes her natural sexual abilities that make her unique.
This book was extremely sexy and filled with intrigued. I really loved Chesara's characters. Since she's been sheltered most her life, she acts like a girl, saying cute things that border on being dorky. Her attitude about losing her virginity is very inspiring. Sexual contact had been denied her for so long, that she just wants to know what all the fuss is about. Although her first lover uses some trickery to get her in bed, she comes out on top since her abilities include driving a man crazy after sleeping with her just once. This natural ability also gives her an advantage over any man who tries to force her, since the union will most certainly lead to the man's downfall. Though this book wasn't a romance per say, it had romantic leads that I imagine will play out in the series. I look forward to following Chesara through her journey in the books that follow.
This book was extremely sexy and filled with intrigued. I really loved Chesara's characters. Since she's been sheltered most her life, she acts like a girl, saying cute things that border on being dorky. Her attitude about losing her virginity is very inspiring. Sexual contact had been denied her for so long, that she just wants to know what all the fuss is about. Although her first lover uses some trickery to get her in bed, she comes out on top since her abilities include driving a man crazy after sleeping with her just once. This natural ability also gives her an advantage over any man who tries to force her, since the union will most certainly lead to the man's downfall. Though this book wasn't a romance per say, it had romantic leads that I imagine will play out in the series. I look forward to following Chesara through her journey in the books that follow.
March 6, 2017
I loved this book's premise. A human-looking alien hybrid with magical healing powers in a world far in the future where space travel is a common, every-day occurrence. Sign me up!
I read sci-fi and I read romance. Sometimes I even read sci-fi romance, so the warnings of graphical sex scenes didn't scare me off.
The book starts with a bang. A solid sci-fi bang with aliens and spaceships and knee deep intrigue.
But then...
...and we're thrown into a historical type setting reminiscent of Tudor England.
That's alright. I even read the occasional historical romance, so I'm still on board with the plot.
So, where did it fall apart for me? --- I HATE saying this ---
I read sci-fi and I read romance. Sometimes I even read sci-fi romance, so the warnings of graphical sex scenes didn't scare me off.
The book starts with a bang. A solid sci-fi bang with aliens and spaceships and knee deep intrigue.
But then...
...and we're thrown into a historical type setting reminiscent of Tudor England.
That's alright. I even read the occasional historical romance, so I'm still on board with the plot.
So, where did it fall apart for me? --- I HATE saying this ---
May 11, 2016
I'm a great lover of Sci-fi, but when you add an equal measure of romance, it starts getting interesting. The author has done well to combine both, but.... and there is a but! It sometimes constricts the story. Nevertheless, it kept me reading...turning those pages quicker than a jack rabbit.
Now, to get to the nitty gritty! In amongst the sex scenes, and the ongoing lust between the main set of characters, the plotline was extremely sound and well conceived. The story centres around an alien half bread, Chesara, who has the power to heal. She has been sent on a mission to one of the member planets in the federation, but it is all a ruse for something more sinister....and that's when the fun begins. Sex, mind games and torture ensue, with our unwilling heroine trying everything in her power to find a way out of the situation she has been forced into, with the help of her trusty bodyguard, Conner Temple who becomes an unwilling victim to get Chesara to comply, and Lord Tensett, the nephew of her captor.
The author has definitely left me wanting more as she cleverly left a tantalising titbit at the end of the story...3 chapters of the next stage of the story. I shall definitely read the next segment as she had left it on a rather crafty cliffhanger...so to speak.
I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a good, sexed up Sci-fi. I had great fun reading this story, and I guarantee, you will to.
Now, to get to the nitty gritty! In amongst the sex scenes, and the ongoing lust between the main set of characters, the plotline was extremely sound and well conceived. The story centres around an alien half bread, Chesara, who has the power to heal. She has been sent on a mission to one of the member planets in the federation, but it is all a ruse for something more sinister....and that's when the fun begins. Sex, mind games and torture ensue, with our unwilling heroine trying everything in her power to find a way out of the situation she has been forced into, with the help of her trusty bodyguard, Conner Temple who becomes an unwilling victim to get Chesara to comply, and Lord Tensett, the nephew of her captor.
The author has definitely left me wanting more as she cleverly left a tantalising titbit at the end of the story...3 chapters of the next stage of the story. I shall definitely read the next segment as she had left it on a rather crafty cliffhanger...so to speak.
I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a good, sexed up Sci-fi. I had great fun reading this story, and I guarantee, you will to.
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April 19, 2016A good, sexy Sci-fi to get your heart racing!
I'm a great lover of Sci-fi, but when you add an equal measure of romance, it starts getting interesting. The author has done well to combine both, but.... and there is a but! It sometimes constricts the story. Nevertheless, it kept me reading...turning those pages quicker than a jack rabbit.
Now, to get to the nitty gritty! In amongst the sex scenes, and the ongoing lust between the main set of characters, the plotline was extremely sound and well conceived. The story centres around an alien half bread, Chesara, who has the power to heal. She has been sent on a mission to one of the member planets in the federation, but it is all a ruse for something more sinister....and that's when the fun begins. Sex, mind games and torture ensue, with our unwilling heroine trying everything in her power to find a way out of the situation she has been forced into, with the help of her trusty bodyguard, Conner Temple who becomes an unwilling victim to get Chesara to comply, and Lord Tensett, the nephew of her captor.
The author has definitely left me wanting more as she cleverly left a tantalising titbit at the end of the story...3 chapters of the next stage of the story. I shall definitely read the next segment as she had left it on a rather crafty cliffhanger...so to speak.
I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a good, sexed up Sci-fi. I had great fun reading this story, and I guarantee, you will to.
I'm a great lover of Sci-fi, but when you add an equal measure of romance, it starts getting interesting. The author has done well to combine both, but.... and there is a but! It sometimes constricts the story. Nevertheless, it kept me reading...turning those pages quicker than a jack rabbit.
Now, to get to the nitty gritty! In amongst the sex scenes, and the ongoing lust between the main set of characters, the plotline was extremely sound and well conceived. The story centres around an alien half bread, Chesara, who has the power to heal. She has been sent on a mission to one of the member planets in the federation, but it is all a ruse for something more sinister....and that's when the fun begins. Sex, mind games and torture ensue, with our unwilling heroine trying everything in her power to find a way out of the situation she has been forced into, with the help of her trusty bodyguard, Conner Temple who becomes an unwilling victim to get Chesara to comply, and Lord Tensett, the nephew of her captor.
The author has definitely left me wanting more as she cleverly left a tantalising titbit at the end of the story...3 chapters of the next stage of the story. I shall definitely read the next segment as she had left it on a rather crafty cliffhanger...so to speak.
I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a good, sexed up Sci-fi. I had great fun reading this story, and I guarantee, you will to.
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