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Brothers Grimm Mystery #1

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Gesternstadt, Bayern, 1776. Katzendame Floribunda, heiß geliebt von ihrer Besitzerin Frau Habsburg, ist verschwunden. In ihrer Verzweiflung engagiert Frau Habsburg eine Detektivin. Ihr Name: Gretel. Ja - DIE Gretel. Da Gretel nicht nur gegen ihr Übergewicht, sondern auch gegen ständige Geldnot kämpfen und ihren alkoholkranken Bruder Hänsel versorgen muss, nimmt sie den Auftrag an, obwohl sie Katzen hasst. Doch bei ihren Ermittlungen stößt sie bald auf eine großangelegte Verschwörung – und eine erste Leiche.

320 pages, Paperback

First published July 15, 2015

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Profile Image for Claire.
149 reviews2 followers
March 30, 2020
Just finished reading this wonderful book from my hospital bed! I absolutely loved it. Gretel (yes that Gretel ) is an absolutely fantastic character along with her brother Hans who tries his best. If you love fairly tales, crime ,mystery and comedy then you'll love this. 5/5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟
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2,143 reviews77 followers
June 28, 2023
The book description says it all, really.  This is a fairly entertaining, mildly humorous, mystery novel set in the fictional, semi-historical-fairytale-ish town of Gesternstadt (and sometimes Bad am Zee) in 18th century Bavaria.  Gretel (yes, that Gretel) has interesting (and often funny) encounters with a princess, a troll, Kapitan Strudel, the cheerful Herr Schmerz the torturer, Uber General Ferdinand von Ferdinand (love this guy!), all in an attempt to find the missing cats and figure out why there are corpses piling up.  I found the characters interesting, and the story itself a fairly entertaining mystery.  A fun little frivolous novel for those days when you don't feel like serious stuff. 
Profile Image for Sarah.
Author 3 books176 followers
August 21, 2015
A fairy tale sequel and crime novel with a light, humorous twist, P. J. Brackston’s Once Upon a Crime is hard to pigeonhole. For her premise, she takes the character of Gretel, first made famous by her childhood appearance with brother Hansel in the witchy Brothers Grimm story, ages her a few decades, and installs her as a private detective in 18th-century Bavaria.

I’ve always gone for novels taking place in historical Germany, but must say up front that the setting here is quasi-historical at best. There are many willful anachronisms – waxing appointments, for example, and vodka martinis – plus a host of imaginary creatures, but the wacky combination of elements is part of its charm. When I heard the name of the place where Gretel hangs her shingle, the sleepy backwater of “Gesternstadt,” I was intrigued enough to read it.

Gretel’s a hefty gal who loves her Weisswurst and a good beer or two, and her perpetually inebriated brother Hans, who has never truly recovered from their childhood trauma, contributes to the household by cooking delicious meals. When Gretel agrees to help Frau Hapsburg locate her three kidnapped cats, she gets drawn into a web of danger involving a treacherous princess, a troll (the lives-under-a-bridge type) who has the hots for voluptuous women, and several unexplained murders. She also discovers that the fiery destruction of a local carriage-maker’s workshop is related to her case.

The storyline took a while to grab me. While I like a well-done spoof, I prefer historical fantasy novels with more actual history than this one offered. However, Gretel’s smart and sarcastic attitude soon won me over. A fashionista who appreciates the finer things in life, Gretel also detests the innate twee-ness of the world she’s forced to live in. I confess to being so distracted by all the amusing whimsy that I neglected to pay attention to the clues in what turned out to be a pretty decent mystery.

Historical purists may want to steer clear, but for those looking for an entertaining diversion from more serious fare, this could be just the ticket.

First reviewed at Reading the Past.
Profile Image for The Lit Bitch.
1,272 reviews403 followers
August 12, 2015
This book combined some of my favorite things….fairy tales and murder mysteries. It was really cute and a fun little escape. It took me a bit to sort some things out since this is the second book in a series, I felt like I was missing a couple of things in the landscape, like how did she become a private investigator in the first place?

As far as the dialogue goes, I struggled a bit with some of the statements. For example, this book is supposed to be set in the 1700s Bavaia…..did they have vodka martinis then? There were lots of little things like this that seemed more like modern dialogue and unlikely in the historic period. Same with some of the hygiene things….people in the 1700s just didn’t care that much about personal hygiene etc.

But once I accepted the fact that this story was a fairy tale and anything could happen in a fairy tale so I just took it at face value and tried to let it not annoy me…it was hard but I tried. Sometimes I just wanted to scream ‘that’s not historically accurate’ but this wasn’t marketed as a historic fiction novel so in the end I just had to let it go and enjoy the story.

Also the constant references to Gretel’s weight was kind of annoying. I don’t know that it added much to the story….it was lighthearted and comical at times but a couple of comments was plenty to get the point across.

All that said, I liked the magical/fantasy elements in the story and the overall premise. The mystery was enough to keep me interested. The book over all was cute and entertaining as well as funny. I liked that Gretel was a more mature heroine and she had a unique and quirky way of looking at things and the mystery. I liked her, I don’t know that I loved her, but I liked her enough to keep reading the book to see what happens next.

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Profile Image for Charlene.
Author 1 book96 followers
July 15, 2015
The premise of this book was very eye-catching - a mystery with characters from the Grimm Brothers' fairy tales, and with Gretel as a detective. Gretel being an interesting choice as a main character because you can see how her past has affected her and made her a stronger, more sarcastic and less trusting woman. It's very entertaining to read about her in this story, but the mystery aspect as well as the inclusion of the fairy tale theme overall seemed very light.

The mystery was the biggest disappointment. There were many odd threads to it, which made it difficult to predict or even comprehend what was the true mystery - it all seemed a bit of a jumble with the connection made much later and unfortunately past the point when I cared very much about the resolution. I was hoping to see more familiar fairy tale characters besides Gretel and Hans, but there weren't many - just characters who would appear in fairy tales, like trolls and giants, and other colorful human characters. It was a more realistic take on the world though, which might appeal to some readers.

The story is humorous, and Gretel has a fun way of looking at things, although the sense of humor was not quite my cup of tea. It drew a lot from crass actions and characters, which probably did fit the setting (people were not as careful of their hygiene in the past) so that might also appeal to some readers and definitely helps to keep the realistic tone of the novel.

The novel has an unpredictable mystery, and a fun, mature heroine in Gretel but unfortunately many aspects of the story did not appeal as much to me. I love the premise though, and if this continues as a series (this is a second adventure for Gretel) it might be fun to see where the author takes it.

(I received this book from the publisher or author for a fair and honest review. I was not compensated for this review.)
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1,831 reviews142 followers
April 2, 2018
Ever been stuck in an airport without a book? There's a bookstore. You have seven minutes. You grab this. After your flight, you go, "eh, that wasn't bad" and you leave it for someone to find. This is that book.

It's pleasant. It passes the time. There are flashes of wit, and a decent plot. Hans is a good character.
I'm OK with the vodka martinis in 1700s Bavaria, we're all friends here.

And you know you wanted to look up "Gesternstadt." I did. It's "yesterday city" - not bad.

Gretel is a heroine of the persistent bungler class, but she does make the occasional reasonable deduction so it's all good.

Not sure why we have to be reminded so often that Gretel is large and several times naked. Doesn't seem to contribute to the plot in any way, and no one else seems to react in the slightest, so why mention it?

Not great lit'rature, not trying to be. If I have three books for a trip and I want a fourth, I might grab another of these.
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170 reviews
October 17, 2017
Das sind eher 2,5 Sterne als 3. An Anfang hab ich überhaupt nicht reingefunden und hatte wenig Anknüpfungspunkte an die Protagonisten. So ab ca 60% hat sich das gelegt und die vielen "Baustellen", die aufgemacht wurden, liefen auch irgendwann zusammen. Ab und zu war es ganz witzig, wenn Gretel versucht hat, ihre Würde und Haltung zu bewahren. Aber so richtig spannend war es leider nicht für mich. Vielleicht bin ich da auch wieder mit anderen Vorstellungen dran, denn in der Nachbemerkung wird erwähnt, dass es Märchen für Erwachsene sein sollen (und daher wohl weniger Krimi, als der Titel vermuten lässt). Es war ok, aber kein Buch, das ich unbedingt nochmal lesen muss/würde.
26 reviews
July 14, 2017
This book was a great mix of humor and 'grim' (pun intended) antics as Gretel (yes, that Gretel) solves her latest crime mystery. Set in a small European country, various fairy tale characters including her brother, Hans, appear when the reader least expects them. This book was such fun to read and was full of unexpected events that lead the reader through many surprises.
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1,706 reviews38 followers
August 5, 2023
So fun and the audiobook narration is excellent! This should be listed as Brothers Grimm Mystery #1 but I listened to it 2nd and it was still great.
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1,070 reviews
October 3, 2021
Oh, my goodness — this book is a hoot! It is a retelling of a Grimm’s Fairytale; although, I think it might be a mashup of several tales blended!?!?!

Funny, quirky, and weirdly engaging, it is a great Halloween romp!
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887 reviews50 followers
July 31, 2023
Audiobook. 3.5ish.

Not sure if I'll continue the series, but I was entertained.
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78 reviews2 followers
March 26, 2024
Read this for my book club. It was delightful and funny and mysterious. I love books like these where they take well known characters from children’s stories and tell more about them. The audiobook was great.
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78 reviews1 follower
May 20, 2024
This was a really fun short listen. I found it because I was looking for other books narrated by Kate Reading.
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160 reviews12 followers
August 19, 2015
Remember Gretel? Yes, THAT Gretel. She of the woods-walk-and-bread-crumb-trail. The girl who survived nearly being eaten by a witch. That one. Did you ever wonder what happened to her? After all, psychotherapy isn’t a big deal in 18th-century Bavaria. You got a smack upside the head and a “well, it’s over now so quit crying about it”.
Did she? Get over it, that is. Well, you be the judge. In this story, Gretel is all grown up and working as a detective. Well, she would if she could get the work. Seems the town’s police force and King’s Guard get all the juicy stuff.
She is left with…cats. More specifically, missing cats. If she had her way, the cats would remain missing, but their owner has more money than sense (to Gretel’s way of thinking). The money for all of Gretel’s fine (undersized) fashions, including her Timmy Chew shoes, has to come from somewhere. Not to mention having to pay the enormous tavern tab and the cigar bills for her brother Hans.
Gretel has no idea what she is getting into when she happily and hastily removes the client’s money from her hand. What follows takes her into and out of prison, endangers her life at the hands of a skanky and amorous troll, and puts her into embarrassing positions – usually in front of one of the dreamiest men she has ever seen.

Ms. Brackston’s first book in her “A Brothers Grimm Mystery” series is certainly a tribute to the genre. Very much like Jasper Fforde’s “Nursery Crimes” series, but with a twist all her own—in hers, the Grimm brothers’ characters come to life and come of age—and not in any fairy-tale way either. I love how Hansel and Gretel have evolved, and how their own particular hang-ups have shaped their lives.
The author’s writing is so much fun! I love how she has put this book together. In one scene, Gretel is hanging from a gargoyle, and she looks down to see handsome Ferdinand. She fervently believes that he has come racing to save her. But as the conversation continues, she is crestfallen at his words. Then “her crest (was) fallen further”. Later, her “crest (was) now completely fallen.” Writing like that—laugh-out-loud humor—really made this book worth every word.
If you’re looking for a fun mystery, this is definitely it.
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944 reviews79 followers
August 24, 2015
Once Upon A Crime is the second in P J Brackston’s new dark comedic crime drama series, a prequel to book one, Gretel and the Case of the Missing Frog Prints. Her twisting, turning, nail-biting storyline is once again a mix of ribald and gallows humor that features idyllic fairytale settings with a definite sinister side, interspersed with a melding of Sherlock and Pink Panther crime solving. Her stars, the irrepressible, über-curvaceous, self-serving Gretel and her humble, addled big brother sidekick rule every page as do her amazing townsfolk and fantastical co-stars.
I have enjoyed all the writings of Paula Brackston and am loving her new incarnation as P.J. where with her unique imagination she once again leaves me in awe.

Once upon a time in Bavaria, Gretel (yes that Gretel) lived in a village called Gesternstadt earning her keep as a private detective with her brother Hansel (yes that Hansel) as her befuddled assistant. Her current case of the missing kitties has gotten her once again on the wrong side of the law. She’s trying to avoid all the kingsmen, and the machinations of the royals, all the while hoping to keep her considerable self out of trouble so she can solve the case and fill her quickly emptying coffers. While executing her superior (to her anyway) method of sleuthing she encounters murder and mayhem leaving her with more questions than answers and she must do some quick thinking to keep herself and Hans out of the clutches of the good guys and the bad guys so she can find and return the absconded felines to their grieving owner.
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64 reviews
September 21, 2019
To my surprise, Once Upon a Crime is a great comic-mystery novel with a quirky cast of characters. I began this book expecting a decent mystery set in the Grimm Brothers' fairy tales. Much to my delight, it quickly became apparent Brackston was taking a humorous approach and I was immediately sold.

A mid 30s, overweight Gretel (yes, that Gretel) is now a private detective whose main motivation is to help people, so no one is abandoned like her & her brother were as kids. Just kidding, it's money and looking out for her own neck and appearance. This jaded Gretel who despises the overly cheery outlook of her fellow villagers is hilarious and the rest of the characters we meet aren't any less. It'd be spoiling the mystery to mention the more important characters, but even the minor ones have their quirks. Such as a Kingsmen who must recite his whole spiel uninterrupted or a torture artist with an oddly bright outlook considering his appearance and occupation.

All the absurd situations and oddball characters were reminiscent of Adams' style and is definitely something I'd enjoy watching on TV. Very glad I stumbled across this series.
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166 reviews4 followers
November 21, 2018
I listened to this through Hoopla Digital at 1.25 speed, and the narration was so very good. Some great books suffer with poor narrators, but on the flip side, some good books are enhanced with great narration. In this case, I can see that there's fluff in these books, but Kate Reading's interpretation enhances the stories. I think she shows how good the writing really is and completely nails the humor. I say this, because I've seen numerous reviews from readers that, I think, would "get" the books if they'd listened on audio. I was able to listen to the first two in the series for free with Hoopla, which is available through public libraries (www.hoopladigital.com).
Profile Image for Kyrie.
3,513 reviews
August 28, 2015
I wanted to like the book more, just based on the premise. Unfortunately, Gretel mostly made me think of MC Beaton's Agatha Raisin. Both Gretel and Agatha just aggravate me, instead of being amusing. I felt the story spent a lot more time focusing on Gretel's beauty treatments and her efforts to acquire money than on the original catnapping she was hired to solve. But, I know a lot of people like Agatha, so they'd probably like Gretel.
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85 reviews
September 25, 2015
I'm glad I gave this series another try! Although excited about the concept, I was a bit let down in the first book; HOWEVER, Gretel (Yes, that Gretel!) didn't disappoint this time. More hijinks, murder, Hans(!), and colorful characters (all wildly entertaining and carrying the fairy tale connection) made for a delightful story. Cat lovers beware: not only are felines in mortal danger, but Gretel doesn't shy in her disgust one bit!
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1,086 reviews2 followers
February 23, 2018
I wanted to like this story about a grown up Hans and Gretel (more so the latter), but I ended up disappointed. I know the author tried to be light and funny, but it didn’t have much depth and was just another grocery store detective novel to me. I loved the author’s series of witch books and I’ll stick with those for now.
2 reviews
January 10, 2020
The concept was appealing but unfortunately I felt it was poorly executed. The author spent far too much time focusing on Gretel's weight, outfits and body hair and very little time on any actual detective skills. The ending came together through coincidence and not skill on the characters part.
Overall a disappointment.
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Author 4 books171 followers
May 30, 2021
Reader thoughts: Well, that was certainly a new kind of book.

We have a retelling-esque story mixed with detective mystery, adventure, and a splash of romance. I enjoyed how it all came together except that Brackston writes with raunchier language and dirtier jokes than I usually stomach. So, I won't read more in this series.

Gretel's character was well done. She's always irritated, always hungry, always complaining in her mind, and always thinking that she is owed pampering and expensive clothes. She isn't a likable character by any means, but she is an interesting one.

I didn't like the inappropriate parts. There was nudity (Gretel is arrested while she is bathing and climbs out, naked, to be arrested) and such. I think there were dirty jokes and Gretel lusting after the handsome guard captain guy.

I liked the climax, where they all went to the giant's cave/castle place. I thought Gretel was going to bring the cats' owner to the giant, and she would live with him and keep him company. I disliked that I like cats and need a perfectly happy ending for all of them.

Writer thoughts: Usually authors want their protagonists to be likable. Give them the "pet the dog" scene early in the book so that readers sympathize with them.

Sometimes, and it doesn't always work, authors write an unlikable protagonist filling an unsympathetic role.

Gretel was this kind. To pull this off, Brackston had to make Gretel interesting (she had strong personality, was intelligent, but was willing to chop off her own brother's fingers). The plot was a bit random, which added interest. Gretel accomplished a lot; she just complained her way through all of it. She finds fault with everyone and everything. She's always asking her employer for more money even though she hadn't made much progress yet.
40 reviews
February 1, 2026
Leider nicht wirklich mein Fall.

Die Grundidee finde ich lustig, aber die Umsetzung fand ich eher mässig.
Der Schreibstil ist einfach gehalten und es lässt sich flüssig lesen.
Die Charaktere sind auch eher anspruchslos, was aber in Märchen ja oft der Fall ist, hat mich also nicht gestört.

Der grösste Minuspunkt für mich ist dass es gefühlt ständig um Gretels Aussehen und Auftreten geht, leider auch sehr auf Kosten der Handlung. Es geht auch viel ums Essen und Alkoholkonsum, ich denke das soll eine witzige Anspielung auf Bayern sein. Der einzige Bayernbezug sind eigentlich nur die gewählten Namen von Figuren und Orten, die bayrisch klingen sollen. Ich denke das alles war lustig gemeint, ich fand es aber eher nervig.

In der ersten Hälfte des Buches gibt es kaum eine Story, in der zweiten Hälfte fand ich es etwas besser, da wurde es spannender und auch ein bisschen witziger.
Das Ende fand ich dann etwas gehetzt und einiges wird nur ganz am Rande erklärt. Die Entwicklung der Geschichte ist eher banal und vorhersehbar, da ich aber mit einem Märchen gerechnet habe, fand ich das in Ordnung.
Stellenweise war es dann fand ich es ganz plötzlich etwas zu brutal.

Insgesamt habe ich es schnell durchgelesen und mich schon auch ein bisschen amüsiert aber ich würde es nicht unbedingt nochmals lesen oder weiterempfehlen.
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735 reviews
October 5, 2019
Readers must enter this little humorous mystery with an open mind and a great sense of humor. Ala Fforde, Adams, and Prahchett, Brackston takes Gretel (now a 35 year old rotund hard drinkin’, couture wearin’, day bed sittin’ gal) and makes her a private investigator. She’s not a detective driven by the desire to right wrongs, but rather to bank some cash. Her brother Hansel is a jovial alcoholic, she has issues with witches as a result of her traumatic childhood experience, and don’t even get her started about idyllic little hamlets like the one in which she presently lives where everything is “wonderful”, yet children are allowed to be abandoned by their parents in the woods (childhood scarring, anyone)? Be prepared to meet cat ladies, trolls, highway robbers, evil knights, giants, and dreamy Lancelot types. My only disappointment with this creative little adventure is that sometimes the humor is difficult to sustain and feels a tad forced.
Profile Image for Ƹ̴Ӂ̴Ʒ Jenn Ƹ̴Ӂ̴Ʒ Schu.
872 reviews63 followers
November 18, 2021
Imagine my surprise when I found that one of my favorite witchy authors also wrote a set of mysteries! I was excited to read this mystery series starring Gretel, yes that Gretel, from Hansel und Gretel! Gretel and Hans are adults and are delightfully described by the author with both being connoisseurs of those yummy German treats (brats and brews). Gretel is also a PI and in this particular mystery she's tasked to find missing cats (animals that she really does not like very much). Before this particular case, her town experiences a tragic loss which may or may not (you'll have to read to find out) have to do with her most recent case of the missing cats. I enjoyed the adventures and the mystery. I loved Gretel's spunk and ability to problem solve although I think she sells Hans short at times. A fun read and I look forward to reading more in the series.🍺🍺🍺1/2 beers
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246 reviews7 followers
February 7, 2021
I was intrigued by the premise of Once Upon A Crime; Hansel and Gretel all grown up after surviving the harrowing nightmare of almost being eaten by a terrible witch. What would they be like, how did they live now, what do they do, were they off gingerbread for life? It started out slowly for me, alluding to their history but not going into detail as to what happened that fateful night they were off into the forest.

It was not until I was about 100 pages in that the story really picked up for me and I was pulled into the narrative. Brackston’s premise around Grimm’s fairy tales is interesting and her story construct and conclusion were enough that I want to pick up the second boo in the series.
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325 reviews4 followers
February 19, 2024
Naja, Spannung ist vielleicht doch etwas übertrieben. Die Autorin schafft es zwar, den wahren Täter bis zum letzten drittel geheim zu halten, aber es kommt nicht so wirklich Spannung auf. Es ist recht seicht….Man kann schmunzeln und rätseln, aber es fehlt irgendwie der Pepp…bei mir war es leider so, dass ich froh war, als das Buch fertig gelesen war…..Es war wenig fesselnd….Vielleicht eine Strandlektüre im Urlaub?….Es war das Erste in dieser Serie….vielleicht kann man noch mal eine Chance geben….aber erst sehr viel später…..Aber es soll ja eh erst im Dezember weitergehen…bis dahin habe ich vielleicht vergessen, dass es sich etwas arg gezogen hat….
681 reviews3 followers
January 11, 2026
Although this is the second book in the series, it is the first book I have read. It is an interesting premise for a mystery, but I wish I liked Gretel more; she is not a particularly heart-warming character, and I am not entirely on her side. I don't find the author is very sympathetic in her treatment of Gretel. Because of this, I didn't feel a lot of attachment to or dislike of the other characters, either. I just felt a lot of distance and distrust. Not sure I will pick up another one of the four now in print. I'll let this one settle a bit before I decide if I want to read the first one--or the third, in case the series improves by this time and it might be more to my liking.
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6 reviews1 follower
August 4, 2024
I really wanted to like this book. It gives the true crime feel with fantasy fairytales we know and love. It was incredibly slow and disappointing towards the end. Gretel’s main personality trait was being money hungry instead of solving the case she was hired to solve and Hans was incredibly dense. There were a couple of times I had to re-read a page because it was quoted dialogue and it was hard to keep track of whom was walking to whom. Unfortunately won’t be continuing this series should’ve been a stand alone.
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