Surely a fantasy book by Zelazny, with multiple intricately drawn images of dragon(s) (and scenes from the book) by Judy King Rieniets must be good, right? The art was enthralling!
New to Zelazny, but aware of his literary impact on others I have read (Neil Gaiman, George R.R., etc.) I couldn't let this book slip away. Only to find out that it is the sequel to an earlier book (although not addressed on the title page, so how was I to know?) in the Changeling saga.
Anyway, ever onward, I delved into this brief but all-encompassing fantasy story of many worlds, where the main character, Pol, is recently returned (from non-magic Earth?) to a magical world. Transposed with another young male, who Pol supposedly killed in the previous story, to return to the magic realm of his own birthrite.
I immediately felt bewildered upon reading the opening pages told by an ethereal presence describing his formation and philosophical needs. Highly captivating and thought provoking, if nothing else.
Then introduced to the main, yet adjacent, story, I grasped the young initiate, Pol, and his quest to learn magic, along with his thief and best-friend? Mouseglove who wields a pistol? But I never really connected with the pair, even after a magical duel, which was held for some unexplained reason. (Clearly, there was something to be gleaned in the previous story, about the Castle Rondavol, seven statuettes as keys, a dragon mark on Pol's arm, etc.) Pol could switch to second sight? perform and create various magical weaponry, and there were dragons nearby. Never really felt the magic system was explained to my liking.
Pol's travel to the magic gathering, held every four years, was mildly engaging, with new support characters introduced, expected magical activities as part of the initiation ritual performed, and a subversive plot leading to the final act. And some nameless magician providing needed support along the way because... I don't know why.
The story starts to combine theories and characters, with exposition of magic past, Pol's father and his buddies as part of a triumvirate, and the randomly inserted passages about the mysterious Gate from Pol's dreams. Highly detailed and convoluted, about an alien race waiting for a connection through the portal, that when combined with the present magic world, would place the current world's magic users as gods? Between the visions/traveling beyond the door and the ethereal presence sequences, I began to question my own intelligence as to why I wasn't getting this story.
Not until near the end does the reader find out the identity of the ethereal presence (underwhelming), even then it felt highly WTF. But the good guys prevailed, I guess, because it said so however it felt like there was more to the story, (just not included.)
Nothing about this book (aside from the artwork) generated anticipation, interest, tension, or caring about the characters, for me. I didn't not like it, I just feel like I didn't get it somehow, which sucks. The story felt like a combination of ideas, descriptive sentences-tech versus magic, and philosophical meanderings that came across some magic users in the midst of dueling for supremacy.
I can't in good conscience recommend this one. Perhaps the first in the saga is better? No matter, I am not seeking it out.
Thanks for reading.