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Totally Tormented
Dangerous. Sexy. Damaged.
These are the words used to describe Justin Brown.
Intelligent. Capable. Responsible.
These are the words used to describe Lindsay Cramer.
Irresistible. Addicting. Passionate.
These are the words used to describe their relationship.
Good girl Lindsay Cramer has her life completely in order, and she keeps her goals on a checklist -- obtain scholarship to Ivy League University, finish undergrad, and move on to med school. She’s worked hard to get where she is, and she’s determined not to let anything – or anyone -- get in her way.
Until she meets Justin Brown. JB is gorgeous, and the kind of guy who is all wrong for Lindsay -- the kind of guy who is all wrong for anyone . He drinks, he fights, and he has a secret past Lindsay’s not so sure she wants to know about.
But when the two of them are together, Lindsay can’t help but lose herself in him. It’s the way his eyes burn when he looks at her. The way his smile makes her dizzy. The way his hands feel on her body.
Soon, Lindsay and Justin are completely addicted to each other. But when their dangerous game culminates with Lindsay having to make a shocking choice, will she be able to keep JB in her life? And if so, will she lose everything in the process?
EXCERPT:
“I would never do anything to hurt you, Lindsay. You know that, right?”
I nodded. But I wasn’t so sure. It wasn’t that I thought he would try to hurt me. It was that I could feel myself starting to get consumed by him. I was giving him the ability to hurt me just by letting him get so close. It was like tying yourself to a train track, just waiting to get run over. It wouldn’t be the train’s fault if it couldn’t stop in time – but you’d get hurt anyway, because you’d be lying there, like a sitting duck.
“Come on,” he said, running his palms down my arms until he got to my hands. He intertwined his fingers with mine and then pulled them up so they were at eye level. It was totally sexy, and yet he made it seem somehow innocent, like we were playing a game of patty-cake or something.
My breathing was accelerating and my heart was pounding. How could he stand there seemingly so cool while we were talking about showering together? Was it because he did this with tons of girls, all the time? No doubt he was more experienced than I was. He had a body that was built for sex, and I was sure girls were throwing themselves at him whenever and wherever they could.
“I can’t.” I shook my head. But my will was starting to crumble.
“Please,” he whispered. He wasn’t joking around anymore. Instead, he sounded intense. I wondered if he was as turned on as I was, not that I could imagine being any more turned on. My body felt like it was going to explode.
These are the words used to describe Justin Brown.
Intelligent. Capable. Responsible.
These are the words used to describe Lindsay Cramer.
Irresistible. Addicting. Passionate.
These are the words used to describe their relationship.
Good girl Lindsay Cramer has her life completely in order, and she keeps her goals on a checklist -- obtain scholarship to Ivy League University, finish undergrad, and move on to med school. She’s worked hard to get where she is, and she’s determined not to let anything – or anyone -- get in her way.
Until she meets Justin Brown. JB is gorgeous, and the kind of guy who is all wrong for Lindsay -- the kind of guy who is all wrong for anyone . He drinks, he fights, and he has a secret past Lindsay’s not so sure she wants to know about.
But when the two of them are together, Lindsay can’t help but lose herself in him. It’s the way his eyes burn when he looks at her. The way his smile makes her dizzy. The way his hands feel on her body.
Soon, Lindsay and Justin are completely addicted to each other. But when their dangerous game culminates with Lindsay having to make a shocking choice, will she be able to keep JB in her life? And if so, will she lose everything in the process?
EXCERPT:
“I would never do anything to hurt you, Lindsay. You know that, right?”
I nodded. But I wasn’t so sure. It wasn’t that I thought he would try to hurt me. It was that I could feel myself starting to get consumed by him. I was giving him the ability to hurt me just by letting him get so close. It was like tying yourself to a train track, just waiting to get run over. It wouldn’t be the train’s fault if it couldn’t stop in time – but you’d get hurt anyway, because you’d be lying there, like a sitting duck.
“Come on,” he said, running his palms down my arms until he got to my hands. He intertwined his fingers with mine and then pulled them up so they were at eye level. It was totally sexy, and yet he made it seem somehow innocent, like we were playing a game of patty-cake or something.
My breathing was accelerating and my heart was pounding. How could he stand there seemingly so cool while we were talking about showering together? Was it because he did this with tons of girls, all the time? No doubt he was more experienced than I was. He had a body that was built for sex, and I was sure girls were throwing themselves at him whenever and wherever they could.
“I can’t.” I shook my head. But my will was starting to crumble.
“Please,” he whispered. He wasn’t joking around anymore. Instead, he sounded intense. I wondered if he was as turned on as I was, not that I could imagine being any more turned on. My body felt like it was going to explode.
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First published May 15, 2013
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May 23, 2013
Loved it. Although I'm really starting to get irritated about having to pay for a chapter at time.
June 9, 2013
Do NOT read if you don't want a short synopsis of the book.
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April 10, 2014I am not going to rate these books. I really like the story so far, but think it is ridiculous that that author is selling 50 pages at a time for 2.99 each "book". I would not have continued to read the story if I didn't have a credit at b & n...
May 24, 2013
This is awesome but I really hope Justin is not walking away from Lindsay. They are right for each other! It is such a sweet love story with rough edges but out of the rubble comes this great love these two have for each other!! I sure hope it turns around! Waiting anxiously for next installment!!!
June 4, 2013
Episode 5, still no kiss. In fact I think it is over. But this was by far the best episode. I am heavily invested now in this soap opera. Justin is hot! Lindsey, oh well she's ok. We are getting to know the characters now and their world. Next!
June 24, 2013
love the story.. just wish there was more pages to these weekly reads. . need to know what's gonna happen already. .
August 31, 2013
Fuck! I'm freaking hooked on this book/chapter whatever! Ahh! I must say though the titles of these little stories are perfect but the covers are pretty lame! Haha just saying! Onto the next one :)
May 25, 2013
When is the next one?
June 9, 2013
Story is starting to drag a bit.
June 19, 2013
Don't start this series because by the time you are done -- it will cost over $15.00 to read. Books are 45 pages -- 29 pages -- 45 pages -- unbelieveable. Don't start it at all.
February 10, 2014
Part 5 of the book:
Theme - my hero
song dedication - "Hot 'n' Cold" by Katy Perry
Theme - my hero
song dedication - "Hot 'n' Cold" by Katy Perry
March 20, 2014
Good quick read:))
Love it...loved being able to read it quickly in my spare time. I can't wait to read th r next installment:))
Love it...loved being able to read it quickly in my spare time. I can't wait to read th r next installment:))
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