Lost Within Many

by Michael Edward

There is an evil within some humans that cannot be controlled. This evil waits and it watches. When it is ready it strikes, so we are never truly safe, especially our children.

Ed Stokes lost his wife three years ago due to complications of diabetes. He has been raising their three kids the best he can. He tries to teach them to be strong, aware and never to give up. However nothing can prepare the Stokes family for what is about to happen.

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First published May 12, 2013

About the author

I am Michael Edward, a husband, a father of six, a friend, and a self-proclaimed storyteller. I say storyteller because to use the word writer would be a misrepresentation, it might imply that I can write. I have always felt that my imagination was my strength and I always see everything as a movie. A lot of times when I write, its like I am sitting in a movie theater watching it on screen and I just write down what I see with the words that I know.

I love to write screenplays and that bleeds into my writing style. Also, I have epilepsy, and my seizures have increased, so if they bleed into the writing I apologize. I just want to tell entertaining stories that give people a chance to escape reality for a bit. I mean no disrespect to writers.

Reviews

[Ann · Rating 3 out of 5]

A short story - a bit rushed I think. In the middle in gets a bit confusing sometimes with whose who of the 3 guys . Missing kid and be strong are the bunt of the story. It was okay but would have been better if a longer story

[Mercurychyld (M.E. · Rating 4 out of 5]

Really interesting, but...

I have to say, I wasn't thrilled with the ending. It leaves too many questions. I can only hope there's more to come, otherwise it just leaves many question marks.