This book is two novels in one, always a chancy business. Because of the two-for-the-price-of-one business the rating is low for, while I liked the first one 'Tangled Reins', a great deal, the second was downright terrible.
Tangled Reins:
A pair of orphaned sisters are taken under the wing of the grandmother they have never met to 'come out' in a London season. The younger sister, Cecily, undeniably needs a husband, but the elder is unsure if she really needs to marry. As it happens, the elder Dorothea, has met the wickedly good looking, Marquis Hazelmere, and so begins the long pursuit that leads to Dorothea saying 'yes' to Hazelmere and Cecily being scooped up by his best friend.
It was a really enjoyable romp, ticking all the boxes for a historical romance with the season and clothes given their place, manners and mannerisms treated with humour and fun, dashingly handsome men and lovely ladies. In this case it was embellished by the -largely- sensible headstrong character of Dorothea. I do prefer liking the characters and I did like them all, I believed in their attraction and found the sexual tension between them thoroughly believable. There was one small blip in my approval as the cause of the obligatory falling out before the triumphant ending was silly and unlikely, but, well, they often are and we did not dwell upon it, going on with the plot in some haste. All in all, great fun.
Fair Juno
OMG, so bad! so BAD.
It felt a little like fan-fic in that there were no characters aside from the lead male.
Fan Fiction can be really good, written by talented storytellers, often it is not; people loved the world so much they imagined themselves in it and since they already know the characters, no effort goes into description. That is what happens here: All the characters we met in the first story are trotted out, but there is no development or attempt to make them real. The main lady starts out as a strong minded, calm person, who is coping with a bad time as sensibly and rationally as possible (the plot is an abduction from which the lead male saves her). But then of course they meet in town and all of a sudden the sensible woman is a twittering, stammering, characterless idiot. I really resented that.
Also, unlike the first novel, here our lead lady keeps telling the male to go away and he doesn't, anything but. That seems more than a bit rapey I have to say. I loathed the lady for refusing to demand respect, I found the man icky for refusing to listen to a word she said, I couldn't believe any of the characters and the plot was limp.
Only got through this by skim reading. A LOT of skim reading, because the plot was as idiotic as the female lead.
It is a real shame, though, because the first one really was pretty good.